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Corrected by: Nhien , 2022-04-30 21:49:10
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He did not react to the sudden appearance and then departure of that group of villagers.
Corrected text:
He did not react to the sudden appearance and the departure of that group of villagers.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-02 04:00:55
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Originally, he heard the sound of gongs and drums in the forest, he initially thought it was someone's daughter who got married in a stormy day, so the bridal party came to Mountain God Temple to avoid the rain.
Corrected text:
Originally, when he heard the sound of gongs and drums in the forest, he initially thought it was someone's daughter who got married on a stormy day. So, in order to avoid the rain, the bridal party came to Mountain God Temple.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-22 02:55:45
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Originally, he heard the sound of gongs and drums in the forest, he initially thought it was someone's daughter who got married in a stormy day, so the bridal party came to Mountain God Temple to avoid the rain.
Corrected text:
Originally, when he heard the sound of gongs and drums in the forest, he initially thought it was someone's daughter who got married in a stormy day, so the bridal party came to Mountain God Temple to avoid the rain.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:33:43
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Originally, he heard the sound of gongs and drums in the forests, he thought it was someone's daughter who got married in a stormy day, so the bridal party came to mountain God temple to avoid the rain.
Corrected text:
Originally, he heard the sound of gongs and drums in the forest, he initially thought it was someone's daughter who got married in a stormy day, so the bridal party came to Mountain God Temple to avoid the rain.
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-25 17:20:04
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Originally heard the sound of gongs and drums in the forests, he thought it was someone's daughter got married in a stormy day, so the bridal party came to mountain God temple to avoid the rain.
Corrected text:
Originally, he heard the sound of gongs and drums in the forests, he thought it was someone's daughter who got married in a stormy day, so the bridal party came to mountain God temple to avoid the rain.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-02 04:02:33
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Lu Heng then disappeared behind the altar and used the power of the mountain God to dive underground so as not to disturb this group of mortals, intending to wait for the mortals to leave before coming out to practice.
Corrected text:
Lu Heng then disappeared behind the altar and used the power of the Mountain God to dive underground, so as not to disturb this group of mortals; intending to wait for the mortals to leave before coming out to practice.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:33:46
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Lu Heng then disappeared into behind the altar and used the power of the mountain God to dive underground for rest so as not to disturb this group of mortals, intending to wait for mortals to leave before coming out to practice.
Corrected text:
Lu Heng then disappeared behind the altar and used the power of the Mountain God to dive underground to rest so as not to disturb this group of mortals, intending to wait for the mortals to leave before coming out to practice.
Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-05-30 22:29:12
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Lu Heng then disappeared into behind the altar and used the power of the mountain God to dive underground for rest so as not to disturb this group of mortals, intending to wait for mortals to leave before coming out to practice.
Corrected text:
Lu Heng then disappeared behind the altar and used the power of the mountain God to dive underground so as not to disturb this group of mortals, intending to wait for the mortals to leave before coming out to practice.
Corrected by: _Lennox_ , 2022-03-25 17:13:32
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Lu Heng then disappeared into the idol and used the power of the mountain God to dive underground for rest so as not to disturb this group of mortals, intending to wait for mortals to leave before coming out to practice.
Corrected text:
Lu Heng then disappeared into behind the altar and used the power of the mountain God to dive underground for rest so as not to disturb this group of mortals, intending to wait for mortals to leave before coming out to practice.
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Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-12-02 07:05:23
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However, after listening for a while underground, he found that the group of villagers arrived and left quickly. They did not stay long at all before they all ran away, and left someone behind in the Mountain God Temple.
Corrected text:
However, after listening underground for a while, he found that the group of villagers arrived and left quickly. They didn't stay long at all before running away, and left someone behind in the Mountain God Temple.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:33:50
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However, after listening for a while underground, he found that the group of villagers came and went quickly. They did not stay long at all before they all ran away, and left someone in the mountain God temple.
Corrected text:
However, after listening for a while underground, he found that the group of villagers arrived and left quickly. They did not stay long at all before they all ran away, and left someone behind in the Mountain God Temple.
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Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-12-02 07:06:07
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Out of caution and curiosity, Lu Heng emerged from the underground to take a look, only to find that a little girl was left inside the Temple.
Corrected text:
Out of caution and curiosity, Lu Heng emerged from the underground to take a look, only to find a little girl left inside the Temple.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:33:55
Original text:
Out of caution and curiosity, Lu Heng emerged from the underground to take a look, only to find that a little girl was left in the mountain God temple.
Corrected text:
Out of caution and curiosity, Lu Heng emerged from the underground to take a look, only to find that a little girl was left inside the Temple.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:33:59
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She wore a big red wedding dress that looked crimson, with her hands and feet tied to the rattan palanquin. She desperately struggled but could not break free, and her mouth was strangled tight by cloth, so she could only make pitiful whimpering sounds. What was this? Human trafficking? Or what?
Corrected text:
She wore an oversized crimson wedding dress, with her hands and feet tied to the palanquin. She desperately struggled but could not break free, and her mouth was strangled tight by cloth, so she could only make pitiful whimpering sounds. What on earth was this? Human trafficking? Or what?
Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:41:12
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She wore a big red wedding dress that looked crimson, with her hands and feet were tied to the rattan palanquin. She desperately struggled but could not break free, and her mouth was strangled tight cloth, so she could only make pitiful whimpering sounds. What was this? Human trafficking? Or what?
Corrected text:
She wore a big red wedding dress that looked crimson, with her hands and feet tied to the rattan palanquin. She desperately struggled but could not break free, and her mouth was strangled tight by cloth, so she could only make pitiful whimpering sounds. What was this? Human trafficking? Or what?
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Corrected by: Choi-Gwapo , 2022-10-14 11:31:42
Original text:
Lu Heng, surprised to see the little girl who had a pale, frightened face in front of him, decided to calm the little girl first.
Corrected text:
Lu Heng was surprised to see a little girl who had a pale, frightened face in front of him, and decided to calm the little girl first.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:34:02
Original text:
Lu Heng, surprised to see this little girl who had a pale frightened face in front of him, decided to calm the little girl first.
Corrected text:
Lu Heng, surprised to see the little girl who had a pale, frightened face in front of him, decided to calm the little girl first.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-08 14:29:19
Original text:
Lu Heng was surprised to look at this little girl who had a frightened pale face in front of him, deciding to calm the little girl first.
Corrected text:
Lu Heng, surprised to see this little girl who had a pale frightened face in front of him, decided to calm the little girl first.
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Corrected by: Choi-Gwapo , 2022-10-14 11:34:55
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He knew how scary his demonic body looked like, and he would give this little girl a fright out of her mind if he didn't speak and pretended to be mysterious.
Corrected text:
He knew his demonic body looked scary, and would frighten the little girl if he didn't speak and pretended to be mysterious.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:34:06
Original text:
He knew how scary this demon body looked like, and he would give this little girl a scare out of mind if he did not talk and pretend to be mysterious.
Corrected text:
He knew how scary his demonic body looked like, and he would give this little girl a fright out of her mind if he didn't speak and pretended to be mysterious.
Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:41:17
Original text:
He knew how scary this demon body looked like, and he would give this little girl a scare out of mind if he did not talk and pretend to be deep.
Corrected text:
He knew how scary this demon body looked like, and he would give this little girl a scare out of mind if he did not talk and pretend to be mysterious.
Corrected by: _Lennox_ , 2022-03-25 17:08:10
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He knew how scary this demon body looked like, and he would give this little girl scared out of mind if he did not talk and pretend to be deep.
Corrected text:
He knew how scary this demon body looked like, and he would give this little girl a scare out of mind if he did not talk and pretend to be deep.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:34:12
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With a low cough, Lu Heng said in a low voice,
Corrected text:
With a harrumph, Lu Heng said in a deep voice,
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:34:09
Original text:
With a low cough, Lu Heng said in a low voice,
Corrected text:
With a harrumph, Lu Heng said in a deep voice,
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:34:16
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The girl who heard the wolf's words twitched and passed out, and the temple was temporarily silenced.
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The little girl who heard the wolf speak twitched and passed out, and the temple became silent.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-04 17:43:23
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"Was this little girl so timid?"
Corrected text:
"Why is this little girl so timid?"
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Corrected by: sweety-boy , 2022-08-10 09:21:30
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Lowering his head, he got close enough to look at the little girl.... Well, it seems she had been scared into unconsciousness.
Corrected text:
Lowering his head, he got close enough to look at the little girl.... Well, it seems she had been scared unconscious.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:34:19
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He lowered his head, got close enough to look at the little girl.... Well, she had been scared into unconsciousness.
Corrected text:
Lowering his head, he got close enough to look at the little girl.... Well, it seems she had been scared into unconsciousness.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-14 08:48:58
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Stretching out his front paws, Lu Heng used his sharp nails to cut open the rope tied to the girl's body, as well as the cloth on her mouth, helping the little girl to regain her freedom.
Corrected text:
Stretching out his front paws, Lu Heng used his sharp nails to cut loose the rope tied to the girl's body, as well as the cloth in her mouth, helping the little girl to regain her freedom.
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-25 17:21:13
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Stretched out his front paws, Lu Heng used his sharp nails to cut open the rope tied to the girl's body, as well as the cloth on her mouth, helping the little girl to regain her freedom.
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Stretching out his front paws, Lu Heng used his sharp nails to cut open the rope tied to the girl's body, as well as the cloth on her mouth, helping the little girl to regain her freedom.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:34:24
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If not for the little girl's strong heartbeat, Lu Heng was close to thinking that this little girl was scared to death by him.
Corrected text:
If not for her heartbeats, Lu Heng would've thought that this little girl was scared to death by him.
Corrected by: _Lennox_ , 2022-03-25 17:08:52
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If not heard the little girl's heartbeat continues, Lu Heng was close to thinking that this little girl was scared to death by him.
Corrected text:
If not for the little girl's strong continues heartbeat, Lu Heng was close to thinking that this little girl was scared to death by him.
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Corrected by: Paxloria , 2022-04-02 13:55:48
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Hey... what kind of sin was this?
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Hey... what kind of situation was this?
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-02 04:09:53
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In this life, he scared a little girl to passing out and becoming unconscious, as if he was a demon who commited all sorts of heinous crimes.
Corrected text:
Yet, in this life, he scared a little girl to such an extent that she passed out unconscious. As if he was a demon who commited all sorts of heinous crimes.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:34:28
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In this life, he scared a little girl to passing out and unconscious, as if he was a demon who commit all manners of crimes.
Corrected text:
In this life, he scared a little girl to passing out and becoming unconscious, as if he was a demon who commited all sorts of heinous crimes.
Corrected by: _Lennox_ , 2022-03-25 17:09:03
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In this life, he scared a little girl to be fainted and incontinence, as if he was a demon who commit all manners of crimes.
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In this life, he scared a little girl to passing out and incontinence, as if he was a demon who commit all manners of crimes.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-02 04:11:31
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The wolf demon's soul completely dissapeared after being heavily struck by the heavenly thunder, and Lu Heng only inherited some of its memory fragments when he crossed over, so he could only speculate about most of the wolf demon's life based on its fragmented memories. But he could not know every single thing about it.
Corrected text:
The wolf demon's soul completely dissapeared after being heavily struck by the heavenly thunder, and Lu Heng only inherited some of its memory fragments when he crossed over, so he could only speculate about most of the wolf demon's life based on its fragmented memories. However, he could not know every single detail about it.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:34:32
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The wolf demon's soul completely dissipated after being badly affected by the heavenly thunder, and Lu Heng only inherited some memory fragments when he crossed over, so he could only speculate about the wolf demon's general life experience based on these fragmented information. But he could not know every single thing specifically.
Corrected text:
The wolf demon's soul completely dissapeared after being heavily struck by the heavenly thunder, and Lu Heng only inherited some of its memory fragments when he crossed over, so he could only speculate about most of the wolf demon's life based on its fragmented memories. But he could not know every single thing about it.
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Corrected by: Choi-Gwapo , 2022-10-21 03:09:41
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But now after he carefully went through these memory fragments, he did find some useful information.
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But now after carefully going through these memory fragments, he did find some useful information.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-02 04:13:04
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Then he looked at the girl who was unconscious in front of him, and then thought of the villager's weird behavior, Lu Heng immediately linked it with a legend - sacrificing a virgin girl to a demon?
Corrected text:
Then he looked at the girl who was unconscious in front of him, and then thought of the villager's weird behavior. Lu Heng immediately linked it with a legend - sacrificing a virgin girl to a demon?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:34:35
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Then he looked at the girl who was fainted in front of him, and thought of the weird behavior of the group of villagers, Lu Heng immediately associated it with a legend - sacrifice a virgin girl to the demon?
Corrected text:
Then he looked at the girl who was unconscious in front of him, and then thought of the villager's weird behavior, Lu Heng immediately linked it with a legend - sacrificing a virgin girl to a demon?
Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:41:21
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Then looked at the girl who was fainted in front of him, and the weird behavior of the group of villagers, Lu Heng immediately associated with a legend - sacrifice a virgin girl to the demon?
Corrected text:
Then he looked at the girl who was fainted in front of him, and thought of the weird behavior of the group of villagers, Lu Heng immediately associated it with a legend - sacrifice a virgin girl to the demon?
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-25 17:21:22
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Then looked at the girl who was sent in front of him, and the weird behavior of the group of villagers, Lu Heng immediately associated with a legend - sacrifice a virgin girl to the demon?
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Then looked at the girl who was fainted in front of him, and the weird behavior of the group of villagers, Lu Heng immediately associated with a legend - sacrifice a virgin girl to the demon?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-10 16:04:28
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This wolf demon had been a mountain God here for eighty years, and it asked the villagers to offer it virgin girls because of it's stagnant cultivation? This practice route was what a real demon would do.
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This wolf demon had been a mountain God here for eighty years, and it asked the villagers to offer it virgin girls because of its stagnant cultivation? This practice route was something a real demon would do.
Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:41:25
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This wolf demon had been a mountain God here for eighty years, and it asked the villagers to offer it virgin girls because of the stagnant cultivation? This practice route was a real demon would do.
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This wolf demon had been a mountain God here for eighty years, and it asked the villagers to offer it virgin girls because of it's stagnant cultivation? This practice route was what a real demon would do.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-02 04:13:53
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A mountain God for decades, and this was the result?
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A Mountain God for decades, and this was the result?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-10 16:04:43
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As a mountain God for decades, this was the result?
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A mountain God for decades, and this was the result?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:34:40
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No wonder it was badly affected by the heavenly thunder, it really deserved to die.
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No wonder it was severely affected by the heavenly thunder, it really deserved to die.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-02 04:14:30
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In the mountain God temple, Lu Heng figured out everything, then once again looked down at the little girl in front of him.
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In the Mountain God Temple, Lu Heng figured out everything, then once again looked down at the little girl in front of him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-20 20:44:34
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In mountain God temple, Lu Heng figured out everything, then once again looked down at the little girl in front of him.
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In the mountain God temple, Lu Heng figured out everything, then once again looked down at the little girl in front of him.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 22:34:43
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What would he do to avoid scaring her into unconsciousness again?
Corrected text:
What should he do to avoid scaring her into unconsciousness again?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-20 20:44:45
Original text:
What would he do to keep from scaring her into unconsciousness again?
Corrected text:
What would he do to avoid scaring her into unconsciousness again?
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Corrected by: Choi-Gwapo , 2022-10-14 11:44:27
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Lu Heng thought about it, and directly jumped on the altar and was inside the clay statue of the God.
Corrected text:
Lu Heng thought about it, and directly jumped on the altar and went inside the clay statue of the God
Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:41:28
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Lu Heng thought about it, and directly jumped on the altar and was into the clay statue of the God.
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Lu Heng thought about it, and directly jumped on the altar and was inside the clay statue of the God.
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Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-12-02 07:11:20
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Was the white wolf she saw before she passed out an illusion? Why else hadn't she been eaten?
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Could the white wolf she saw before passing out an illusion? Why else hadn't she been eaten?
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Corrected by: Choi-Gwapo , 2022-10-14 11:51:06
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Outside the house was still pouring rain, such a stormy day simply can not be traveled, and she could not see any good people outside.
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Rain was still pouring outside the house, one can simply not travel on such a stormy day, and and she could not see any good people outside.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:13:16
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Outside the house was still pouring rain, such a stormy day simply can not travel, and could not see any good people outside.
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Outside the house was still pouring rain, such a stormy day simply can not be traveled, and she could not see any good people outside.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:31:31
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Did... did the Lord of the Mountain God help her untie the rope?
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Did... did the Lord Mountain God help her untie the rope?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:14:05
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With terrified and uneasy thought, the girl carefully surveyed the white wolf clay statue on the divine altar, feeling this white wolf clay statue somehow not quite the same.
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With terrified and uneasy thoughts, the girl carefully surveyed the white wolf clay statue on the divine altar, feeling this white wolf clay statue somehow was not quite the same.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:14:26
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It obviously the same as before, an ordinary clay sculpture. There was no change. But she vaguely felt this clay sculpture seemed to come to life, and the eyes of the clay sculpture was looking at her...
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It obviously looked the same as before, an ordinary clay sculpture. There was no change. But she vaguely felt this clay sculpture seemed to come to life, and the eyes of the clay sculpture was looking at her...
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-02 04:21:14
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This low call sounded like weak mosquitoes, and a little farther away simply could not be heard.
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This low call sounded like weak mosquitoes, and simply could not be heard from a distance.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:14:34
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This low call sounded like weak mosquitoes, and a little farther away simply could not hear.
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This low call sounded like weak mosquitoes, and a little farther away simply could not be heard.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-02 04:22:54
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But perhaps the clay statue did not look as scary as the giant wolf before, or perhaps the mountain God's low laughter did not sound menacing, so the girl did not faint from fear this time.
Corrected text:
But, perhaps the clay statue did not look as scary as the giant wolf before, or perhaps the Mountain God's low laughter did not sound menacing, so the girl did not faint from fear this time.
Corrected by: _Lennox_ , 2022-03-25 17:09:08
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But perhaps the clay idol did not look as scary as the giant wolf before, or perhaps the mountain God's low laughter did not sound menacing, so the girl did not faint from fear this time.
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But perhaps the clay statue did not look as scary as the giant wolf before, or perhaps the mountain God's low laughter did not sound menacing, so the girl did not faint from fear this time.
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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:40:38
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She desperately begging for mercy, and she could not think of more begging words, only keeping repeating such a phrase.
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She desperately begged for mercy, and she could not think of any more begging words, only repeating such a phrase.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-08 14:26:52
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Seeing that the little girl's emotions had returned to calm, Lu Heng then jumped out of the clay statue of the God.
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Seeing that the little girl's emotions had finally calmed down, Lu Heng jumped out of the clay statue of the God.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-27 03:50:56
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"Xiao Ai... I know," Lu Heng nodded, spat out a wooden sign from his mouth and said, "You can go back, go back and tell the people in the village that I no longer need you to sacrifice me young boys and girls."
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"Xiao Ai... I know," Lu Heng nodded, spat out a wooden sign from his mouth and said, "You can go back, go back and tell the people in the village that I no longer need them to sacrifice me young boys and girls."
Corrected by: _Lennox_ , 2022-03-25 17:09:17
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"Xiao Ai... I know," Lu Heng nodded, spat out a wooden sign from his mouth and said, "You can go back, go back and tell the people in the village that I no longer need you to sacrifice me child boys and girls."
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"Xiao Ai... I know," Lu Heng nodded, spat out a wooden sign from his mouth and said, "You can go back, go back and tell the people in the village that I no longer need you to sacrifice me young boys and girls."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-27 03:54:48
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"If you follow the mountain trail with this wooden medal, the beasts of Cold Feather Mountain wouldn't dare to hurt you. You can go back now, if you delay to long it will get dark."
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"If you follow the mountain trail with this wooden medal, the beasts of Cold Feather Mountain wouldn't dare to hurt you. You can go back now, if you delay any longer it will get dark."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-24 22:10:56
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"And if you walk in the mountain with this wooden medal, all the beasts in Cold Feather Mountain will not dare to hurt you. You can go back now, if delayed for a long time the sky will be dark."
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"If you follow the mountain trail with this wooden medal, the beasts of Cold Feather Mountain wouldn't dare to hurt you. You can go back now, if you delay to long it will get dark."
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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-05-30 22:29:16
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Of course, this time the fastest way was actually Lu Heng personally sent the girl back.
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Of course, this time the fastest way was actually for Lu Heng to personally send the girl back.
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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-05-30 22:29:24
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But Lu Heng now still had a strong residual force of heavenly thunder in his body, so he was still in a state of serious injury. Without the dissolution of the body of the thunder force before, he simply could not leave the mountain God temple, and he need to rely on the temple incense accumulated wish power to suppress heavenly thunder in the body.
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But Lu Heng now still had a strong residual force of heavenly thunder in his body, so he was still in a state of serious injury. Without the dissolution of the thunder force in his body, he simply could not leave the mountain God temple, and he needs to rely on the accumulated wish power of the temple incense to suppress the heavenly thunder in his body.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-02 04:32:22
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With the Mountain God order to send the girl away, Lu Heng once again disappeared into the ground and continued to practice, trying to dissolve the thunder force in his body as soon as possible, to restore the ability to move freely.
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With the Mountain God order to send the girl away, Lu Heng once again disappeared into the ground and continued to cultivate. Attempting to dissolve the thunder force in his body as soon as possible, in order to restore his ability to move freely.
Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-05-30 22:29:30
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With the Mountain God order to send the girl away, Lu Heng once again disappeared into the ground and continued to practice, trying to dissolve the body's thunder force as soon as possible, to restore the ability to move freely.
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With the Mountain God order to send the girl away, Lu Heng once again disappeared into the ground and continued to practice, trying to dissolve the thunder force in his body as soon as possible, to restore the ability to move freely.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:14:41
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With the Mountain God order to send the girl away, Lu Heng once again disappeared into the ground and continued to practice, trying to dissolve the body's thunder force as soon as possible, so to restore the ability to move freely.
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With the Mountain God order to send the girl away, Lu Heng once again disappeared into the ground and continued to practice, trying to dissolve the body's thunder force as soon as possible, to restore the ability to move freely.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-07 21:14:49
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It was not a good time to spend all day in the ground practising.
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It was a good time to spend all day in the ground practising.
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