I’ll Quit Being a God – Chapter 1

Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 13:55:55

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Chapter 1 Mountain God

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Chapter 1: Mountain God

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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-05-26 20:40:19

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On the fifth day of March, the day of The Waking of Insects, it rained heavily.

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On the fifth day of March, the day of the waking of insects, it rained heavily.

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Corrected by: arc3 , 2022-04-16 20:41:13

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Lu Heng was lying on the eaves of the mountain god temple, looking out over the mountains and forests in the rain, took a deep breath and tilted his head and let out a long howl.

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Lu Heng, who was lying on the eaves of the mountain god temple, looking out over the mountains and forests in the rain, took a deep breath and tilted his head and let out a long howl.

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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-05-26 20:39:14

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The long wolf howl echoed far into the mountain forest continuously

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The loud wolf howl echoed far into the mountain forest continuously

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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-05-26 20:39:21

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Lu Heng sat in the rainstorm and let the rain wet his fur. He closed his eyes and began to absorb the vitality of the early spring when everything is reviving.

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Lu Heng sat in the rainstorm and let the rain wet his fur. He closed his eyes and began to absorb the energy of the early spring when everything is being filled with vitality.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-26 15:23:51

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This may be a peaceful and calm scene, but if someone were to bump into it, they will definitely be scared to run away screaming on the spot.

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This may be a peaceful and calm scene, but if someone were to bump into it, they will definitely be scared and run away screaming on the spot.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-10 16:03:49

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In the wolf demon's vague and fragmented memory, it was originally an elite monster practicing in this Cold Feather Mountain. And after inadvertently saving the life of a man decades ago, he built a temple and worshiped it.

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In the wolf demon's vague and fragmented memory, it was originally an elite monster practicing in this Cold Feather Mountain. And after inadvertently saving the life of a man decades ago, he built a temple and worshipped it.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:14:06

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But the cultivation of elves and mountain demons is not easy, and this Cold Feather Mountain is not famous mountains and rivers, and the town at the foot of the mountain is remote and barren, so the incense in the temple of the mountain God is not flourishing.

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But the cultivation of elves and mountain demons is not easy, and this Cold Feather Mountain is not famous amongst the mountains and rivers, also the town at the foot of the mountain is remote and barren, so the incense in the temple of the mountain God isn't flourishing.

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:39:02

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In such a slow practice, the increasingly restless white wolf eventually went astray, attracting heavenly thunder to the top and was killed alive.

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In such a slow practice, the increasingly restless white wolf eventually went astray, attracting heavenly thunder to the head and was killed alive.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:14:14

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During these three days, Lu Heng did not leave too far from the Mountain God Temple.

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During these three days, Lu Heng did not travel too far from the Mountain God Temple.

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:39:11

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Because after the white wolf's soul was split by heavenly lightning, its body also suffered heavy damage.

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Because after the white wolf's soul was struck by heavenly lightning, its body also suffered heavy damage.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-12 21:38:40

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In these three days, Lu Heng has been lying in the Mountain God Temple, using the few incense wishes within the temple to repair the body, until today he barely regained the ability to move.

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In these three days, Lu Heng has been lying in the Mountain God Temple, using the few incense wishes within the temple to repair his body, until today he barely regained the ability to move.

Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:14:21

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In these three days, Lu Heng has been lying in the Mountain God Temple, using the few incense wishes within the temple to repair the body, until today barely regained the ability to move.

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In these three days, Lu Heng has been lying in the Mountain God Temple, using the few incense wishes within the temple to repair the body, until today he barely regained the ability to move.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:14:30

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Coincides with the day of The Waking of Insects, also the birth of all things,  this day is a great time to cultivate in the memory of the white wolf.

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Coinciding with the day of The Waking of Insects, also the birth of all things,  this day is a great time to cultivate in the memory of the white wolf.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 13:55:37

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Lu Heng then sat cross-legged on the roof of the Mountain God Temple to absorb the vital energy that drifted during the days, according to the memory of the white wolf.

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Lu Heng then sat on the roof of the Mountain God Temple to absorb the vital energy that drifted during the days, according to the memory of the white wolf.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:14:48

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Although he was a little depressed about the fact that he had crossed over to a different world and to be a demon. But this kind of thing is not something he can resist.

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Although he was a little depressed about the fact that he had crossed over to a different world and had become a demon. Unfrortunatley this kind of thing is not something he can resist.

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Corrected by: krymion , 2022-04-22 19:36:15

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At the very least, this demon's body has the advantage of living long enough, although has various inconveniences.

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At the very least, this demon's body has the advantage of living long enough, although with various inconveniences.

Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:14:57

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At the very least, this demon's body has the advantage of living long enough although has various inconveniences.

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At the very least, this demon's body has the advantage of living long enough, although has various inconveniences.

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Corrected by: krymion , 2022-04-22 19:36:36

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The white wolf in the mountain cultivated for hundreds of years, so it was a standard long-lived species. To Lu Heng who died because of cancer in his early twenties, such a long life is a good thing that could not be gained previously.

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The white wolf in the mountain has cultivated for hundreds of years, so it was a standard long-lived species. To Lu Heng who died because of cancer in his early twenties, such a long life is a good thing that he could not have gained previously.

Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:15:07

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The white wolf in the mountain cultivated for hundreds of years, so it was a standard long-lived species. To Lu Heng who died because of cancer in his early twenties, such a long life is a good thing that could not be enlightened in the past.

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The white wolf in the mountain cultivated for hundreds of years, so it was a standard long-lived species. To Lu Heng who died because of cancer in his early twenties, such a long life is a good thing that could not be gained previously.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:15:12

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"If I practice well, sooner or later I will be able to transform into a human form, and may even ascend in heaven…"

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"If I practice well, sooner or later I will be able to transform into a human form, and may even ascend to heaven…"

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:39:24

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With a bright future in mind, Lu Heng sat on the roof of the Mountain God Temple and practiced, ignoring such high-profile behavior is so eye-catching.

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With a bright future in mind, Lu Heng sat on the roof of the Mountain God Temple and practiced, ignoring such high-profile behavior that is so eye-catching.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:15:18

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Anyway, this mountain temple is too remote, and with the white wolf's fierce reputation, there was no one daring to approach in the past.

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Anyway, this mountain temple is too remote, and with the white wolf's fierce reputation, there was no one whom dared to approach in the past.

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:39:33

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However, Lu Heng heard a noisy voice approaching in the rainstorm in a trance. It seemed that many people were walking towards the mountain temple.

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However, Lu Heng heard a noisy voice approaching in the rainstorm while in a trance. It seemed that many people were walking towards the mountain temple.

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Corrected by: krymion , 2022-04-22 19:36:42

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Girls' cries, men's complaints, and old people's sighs… Those noisy sounds broke the peace in the forests, and made Lu Heng a little curious.

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Girls' cries, men's complaints, and old people's sighs… Those noisy sounds broke the peace of the forests and made Lu Heng a little curious.

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Corrected by: krymion , 2022-04-22 19:36:52

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With such heavy rain, why this group of villagers braved the rain into the mountains? Some people were blowing gongs and drums, is there a girl's wedding passing through here?

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With such heavy rain, why is this group of villagers braving the rain into the mountains? Some people were blowing gongs and drums, is there a girl's wedding passing through here?

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:15:28

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Lu Heng thought so, leaping from the roof of the temple, and disappeared in the mountain god temple so as not to scare the group of mortals with fierce appearance.

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Lu Heng thought so, leaping from the roof of the temple, and disappeared into the mountain god temple so as not to scare the group of mortals with his fierce appearance.

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:40:06

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The elderly old village leader is walking in the front of the team, followed by a group of villagers draped in red. They looked quite festive.

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The elderly old village chief is walking in the front of the procession, followed by a group of villagers draped in red. They looked quite festive.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-24 20:28:00

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In the middle of the procession, there was a young girl sitting on the rattan wood palanquin, with four of the same red-decorated bearers carrying it. The girl was very small, about ten years old. Now she was wearing red wedding clothes, huddled in the rattan wood sedan, with fearfull eyes.

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In the middle of the procession, there was a young girl sitting on the rattan wood palanquin, with four of the same red-decorated bearers carrying it. The girl was very small, about ten years old. Now she was wearing red wedding clothes, huddled in the rattan wood sedan, with fearful eyes.

Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-24 20:27:48

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In the middle of the procession, there was a young girl sitting on the rattan wood palanquin, with four of the same red-decorated bearers carrying it. The girl was very small, about ten years old. Now she was wearing red wedding clothes, huddled in the rattan wood sedan, with fearfull eyes.

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In the middle of the procession, there was a young girl sitting on the rattan wood palanquin, with four of the same red-decorated bearers carrying it. The girl was very small, about ten years old. Now she was wearing red wedding clothes, huddled in the rattan wood sedan, with fearful eyes.

Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:15:37

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In the middle of the procession, there was a young girl sitting on the rattan wood palanquin, with four of the same red-decorated bearers carrying it. The girl was very small, about ten years old. Now she was wearing incestuous red wedding clothes, huddled in the rattan wood sedan, with eyes full of fears.

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In the middle of the procession, there was a young girl sitting on the rattan wood palanquin, with four of the same red-decorated bearers carrying it. The girl was very small, about ten years old. Now she was wearing incestuous red wedding clothes, huddled in the rattan wood sedan, with fearfull eyes.

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:40:10

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Her mouth gagged with cloth, so that she could not even cry out, only able to emit a small sob.

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Her mouth was gagged with cloth, so that she could not even cry out, only able to emit a small sob.

Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:15:51

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Her mouth tied with cloth, so that she can not even cry out but only a small sob.

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Her mouth gagged with cloth, so that she could not even cry out, only able to emit a small sob.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:16:00

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By the girl's side, in addition to an old woman who gave her an umbrella to prevent her from getting wet by the rain, she was not accompanied by any relatives. There was all those nervous-looking young and strong men who are dressed in red.

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By the girl's side, in addition to an old woman who gave her an umbrella to prevent her from getting soaked, she was not accompanied by any relatives. There was only all those nervous-looking young and strong men dressed in red.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:16:08

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Such an incestuous wedding procession came to a halt, before they came in the Mountain God Temple.

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Such an incestuous wedding procession came to a halt, before they entered the Mountain God Temple.

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:40:15

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What appeared in front of the villagers was the mountain God temple located in the surrounding woods . The temple was not tall, and had no outer wall, it did not look dilapidated for the villagers repaired it every year. But even so, it could not dispel the temples eerie and horrifying atmosphere.

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What appeared in front of the villagers was the mountain God temple located in the middle of the woods . The temple was not tall, and had no outer wall, it did not look dilapidated for the villagers repaired it every year. But even so, it could not dispel the temples eerie and horrifying atmosphere.

Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:16:25

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What appeared in front of the villagers was a mountain God temple located in the woods surrounded. The temple was not high, and had no outer wall, it did not look dilapidated for the villagers will be repaired every year. But even so, it can not dispel the temple of that eerie and horrible atmosphere.

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What appeared in front of the villagers was the mountain God temple located in the surrounding woods . The temple was not tall, and had no outer wall, it did not look dilapidated for the villagers repaired it every year. But even so, it could not dispel the temples eerie and horrifying atmosphere.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:16:43

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And then associated it with the ferocious bloodlust of the demon inside… a few youths with slightly weaker guts had begun to panic.

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And associating it with the ferocious bloodlust of the occupying demon… a few youths with slightly weaker guts started to panic.

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:40:21

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In this team, the only one who can probably remain calm is only the aging old village leader.

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In this team, the only one who can probably remain calm is only the aging old village chief.

Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:16:50

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In this team, the only one who can remain calm is probably only the aged old village leader.

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In this team, the only one who can probably remain calm is only the aging old village leader.

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:40:29

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"Move fast! Do not annoy the mountain God lord!"

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"Move fast! Do not annoy the Lord Mountain God!"

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:40:33

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After the old village leader's serious whispered command, the four bearers hurriedly carried the vine palanquin hung with a big red wedding cloth into the open door of the mountain God temple.

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After the old village chief's serious whispered command, the four bearers hurriedly carried the vine palanquin hung with a big red wedding cloth into the open door of the mountain God temple.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:16:56

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The light is slightly dark inside the mountain god temple, facing the door on the altar, the clay statue of the deity is not a human deity, but a wolf, a slightly hideous wolf.

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The light is slightly dark inside the mountain god temple, facing the door on the altar, the clay statue of the deity is not a human deity, but a wolf, a somwhat hideous wolf.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:17:15

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The rainstorm outside the house was more heavy, and the rumbling thunder cuts through the sky. From time to time the miserable white light shines on the altar, more seemingly the clay sculpture of the wolf was fierce and hideous.

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The rainstorm outside the house increased, and the rumbling of thunder cut through the sky. From time to time the miserable white light shone on the altar, more seemingly on the clay sculpture of the wolf, that was fierce and hideous to behold.

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:40:49

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Several bearers simply did not dare to stay any longer, so they put down the vine sedan and then ran directly outside, leaving the vine sedan and the girl together in the mountain God's temple.

Corrected text:

The group of bearers simply did not dare to stay any longer, so they put down the vine sedan and then ran directly outside, leaving the vine sedan and the girl together in the mountain God's temple.

Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:17:24

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Several bearers simply did not dare to stay more, so they put down the vine sedan and then run directly to the outside, left the vine sedan and the girl together in the mountain God temple.

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Several bearers simply did not dare to stay any longer, so they put down the vine sedan and then ran directly outside, leaving the vine sedan and the girl together in the mountain God's temple.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:17:29

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Outside the temple door, the villagers have quickly completed the process of killing the chicken and slaughtering the sheep.

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Outside the temple door, the villagers had quickly completed the process of killing the chickens and slaughtering the sheep.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:17:34

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Fishy red blood gushed in the mud in front of the temple, staining a muddy water.

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Fishy red blood gushed in the mud in front of the temple, staining the muddy water.

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:40:53

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After the old village leader and his party recited the words to the direction of the mountain God temple, they did not dare to stay any longer after seeing the sedan chairs put down.

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After the old village chief and his party recited the words to the direction of the mountain God temple, they did not dare to stay any longer after seeing the sedan chair was put down.

Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:17:39

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After the old village leader and his party recited the words to the direction of the mountain God temple, they did not dare to stay here more when seeing the sedan chairs put down the vine sedan out.

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After the old village leader and his party recited the words to the direction of the mountain God temple, they did not dare to stay any longer after seeing the sedan chairs put down.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:17:51

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This mountain God was unpredictable, nobody did not know what will happen if you stay.

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This mountain God was unpredictable, nobody knew what would happen if you lingered.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:18:02

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Anyway, the virgin girl has been sacrificed, and also slaughtered the chicken and goat sacrifice, the villagers no longer dared to, and did not want to stay more. They dragged the body of the goat that was stabbed through the throat, carrying the body of the rooster that was still convulsing, quickly left the vicinity of the mountain temple, and soon disappeared into the mountains and forests.

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Anyway, the virgin girl had been sacrificed, and they also sacrificed the chicken and goat, the villagers no longer dared to nor wanted to stay any longer. They dragged the body of the goat that was slashed through the throat, carrying the corpse of the rooster that was still convulsing and quickly left the vicinity of the mountain temple, soon disappearing into the surrounding mountains and forests.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:18:11

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With the departure of the villagers, this small temple in the mountains once again felled into the eerie dead silence, only the rainstorm outside the house was still dripping down.

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With the departure of the villagers, the small temple in the mountains once again fell into an eerie dead silence, only the rainstorm outside the house was still ongoing.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-12 21:38:43

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She would like to escape, but her hands and feet are tied to the rattan chair, they simply can not break free.

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She tried to escape, but her hands and feet were tied to the rattan chair, she simply could not break free.

Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:40:58

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She would like to escape, but her hands and feet are tied to the rattan chair, they can not simply break free.

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She would like to escape, but her hands and feet are tied to the rattan chair, they simply can not break free.

Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:18:17

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She would like to escape, but her hands and feet are tied to the rattan chair, it can not simply break free.

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She would like to escape, but her hands and feet are tied to the rattan chair, they can not simply break free.

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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-25 17:19:33

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A cold wind blew, the girl fiercely shivered, feeling in the darkness seemed to have something watching her.

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A cold wind blew, the girl fiercely shivered, feeling that something in the darkness seem to be watching her.

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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-25 17:19:23

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That kind of eerie sight made her scalp tingling and chilled, and her limbs stiffened from fear.

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That kind of eerie sight made her scalp tingle and a chill went down her spine, and her limbs stiffened from fear.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:18:28

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She shook her head desperately, and struggled desperately to escape, but could only shake the rattan sedan creaking.

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She shook her head desperately, struggling desperately to escape, but could only shake the rattan sedan, making it creak.

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Corrected by: _Lennox_ , 2022-03-25 17:07:41

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Instead, this creaking sound seems to have alarmed the temple, even if the rain is pouring outside and thunder roaring, the girl on the rattan chair clearly heard the low breathing sound coming from behind the idol.

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Instead, this creaking sound seems to have alarmed the temple, even if the rain is pouring outside and thunder roaring, the girl on the rattan chair clearly heard the low breathing sound coming from behind the clay statue.

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:41:02

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That low breathing seemed so heavy that could not come from human beings.

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That low breathing seemed so heavy that it could not have come from human beings.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 17:19:16

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The girl kept crying out in her mind, yet the mouth strangled by the cloth could not even make a cry. That frightened and desperate whimpering in this deserted mountain looked so pitiful and helpless, but it was simply impossible for someone to save her.

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The girl kept crying out in her mind, yet her mouth strangled by the gag could only whimper. That frightened and desperate whimpering in this deserted mountain looked so pitiful and helpless, but it was simply impossible for someone to save her.

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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-04-10 17:41:07

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A terrifying black shadow slowly peeked out behind the idol.

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A terrifying black shadow slowly peeked out from behind the idol.

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Corrected by: _Lennox_ , 2022-03-25 17:13:40

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In the gloomy mountain temple, the girl vaguely saw the black shadow's sharp wolf's kiss, and the fierce and overwhelmingly huge fangs…

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In the gloomy mountain temple, the girl vaguely saw the black shadow's sharp wolf's nails, and the fierce and overwhelmingly huge fangs…

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Corrected by: _Lennox_ , 2022-03-25 17:12:55

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The girl struggled harder, desperate tears have wet her chest of wedding clothes.

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The girl struggled harder, desperate tears have wet her chest and wedding clothes.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-10 16:03:55

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The eyes that emitted an eerie ghostly light in the darkness, like a ghostly fire floating in the dead of night, stared straight at her.

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Those eyes that emitted an eerie ghostly light in the darkness, like a ghostly fire floating in the dead of night, stared straight at her.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 13:55:42

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The girl's body twitched in terror, and fishy-smelling urine spilled out from her big red wedding dress.

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The girl's body twitched in terror, and urine spilled out from her big red wedding dress.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-10 16:04:00

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However, the giant wolf behind the statue did not seem to have any compassion, it came out from behind the altar. Although obviously in a normal standing position with all four limbs on the ground, the height of the head from the ground was already more than two meters.

Corrected text:

However, the giant wolf behind the statue did not seem to have any compassion as it came out from behind the altar. Although obviously in a normal standing position with all four limbs on the ground, the height of the head from the ground was already more than two meters.

Corrected by: _Lennox_ , 2022-03-25 17:08:23

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However, the giant wolf behind that idol did not seem to have any compassion, it came out from behind the altar. Although obviously in a normal standing position with all four limbs on the ground, the height of the head from the ground was already more than two meters.

Corrected text:

However, the giant wolf behind the statue did not seem to have any compassion, it came out from behind the altar. Although obviously in a normal standing position with all four limbs on the ground, the height of the head from the ground was already more than two meters.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-10 16:04:12

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When looking at the monster's whole body, in the girl's heart emerged a surprisingly weird thought.

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When looking at the monster's entire body, a surprisingly weird thought emerged in the girl's heart. 

Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-25 17:19:39

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When looking at the monster's whole body, the girl's heart emerged a surprisingly weird thought.

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When looking at the monster's whole body, in the girl's heart emerged a surprisingly weird thought.

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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-25 17:19:45

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Outside the house, there came a booming thunder from the sky.

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Outside the house, there came a booming sound of thunder from the sky.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-10 16:04:19

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The giant white wolf was standing inside the temple, and the lightning reflected his whole body. At this time, he just lowered his head, watching the girl on the vine palanquin, looking at the girl's body with big red wedding dress and that terrified and quivering eyes. Then he tilted his head again and looked in the direction of the villagers.

Corrected text:

The giant white wolf was standing inside the temple, and the lightning reflected the entirety of his body. At this time, he just lowered his head, watching the girl on the vine palanquin: her big red wedding dress and those terrified, quivering eyes. Then he tilted his head again and looked in the direction of the villagers.

Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-25 17:19:55

Original text:

The white giant wolf was standing inside the temple, and the lightning reflected the whole body of him. At this time, he just lowered his head, watching the girl on the vine palanquin, looking at the girl's body with big red wedding dress and that terrified and desperate eyes. Then he tilted his head again and looked in the direction of the villagers.

Corrected text:

The giant white wolf was standing inside the temple, and the lightning reflected his whole body. At this time, he just lowered his head, watching the girl on the vine palanquin, looking at the girl's body with big red wedding dress and that terrified and quivering eyes. Then he tilted his head again and looked in the direction of the villagers.

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