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Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-12-02 07:17:22
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The girl named Xiao Ai felt a slightly cold touch after receiving the small palm-sized wooden medal.
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Xiao Ai felt a slight cold touch after receiving the small palm-sized wooden medal.
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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-05-30 22:29:33
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Although this voice was still low and serious, and there seemed to be an faint echo in it, the girl was not so afraid anymore.
Corrected text:
Although this voice was still low and serious, and there seemed to be a faint echo in it, the girl was not so afraid anymore.
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:31:56
Original text:
Although this voice was still low and serious, and there seemed to be an echo in the faint, the girl was not so afraid anymore.
Corrected text:
Although this voice was still low and serious, and there seemed to be an faint echo in it, the girl was not so afraid anymore.
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Corrected by: Itza-TommyGun , 2022-12-02 04:37:23
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The girl wearing small red embroidered shoes did not go far, embroidered shoes had become muddy and wet, and even the skirt of the big red wedding dress was dirty.
Corrected text:
The girl wearing small red embroidered shoes did not go far, before her embroidered shoes had become muddy and wet; even the skirt of the big red wedding dress was dirty.
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:32:25
Original text:
The girl wearing small red embroidered shoes did not go far, embroidered shoes have been muddy and wet, and even the skirt of the big red wedding dress was dirty.
Corrected text:
The girl wearing small red embroidered shoes did not go far, embroidered shoes had become muddy and wet, and even the skirt of the big red wedding dress was dirty.
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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-05-30 22:29:37
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After walking some distance away, the girl turned back to look at the direction of the mountain God temple.
Corrected text:
After walking some distance away, the girl turned back to look in the direction of the mountain God temple.
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Corrected by: Choi-Gwapo , 2022-10-21 03:15:10
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In the gloomy light of day the mountain God temple surrounded by dense forest was slightly eerie, and the white wolf inside the temple had disappeared.
Corrected text:
In the gloomy light of day, the mountain God temple surrounded by dense forest was slightly eerie. And the white wolf inside the temple had also disappeared.
Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-05-30 22:29:42
Original text:
In the gloomy light of day, the mountain God temple, surrounded by dense forest, was slightly eerie, and the white wolf inside the temple had disappeared.
Corrected text:
In the gloomy light of day the mountain God temple surrounded by dense forest was slightly eerie, and the white wolf inside the temple had disappeared.
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Corrected by: Choi-Gwapo , 2022-10-21 03:16:18
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If she hadn't seen it with her own eyes, she simply couldn't imagine that there would be such a big wolf in this mountain.
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If she hadn't seen it with her own eyes, she simply wouldn't have imagined that there would be such a big wolf in this mountain.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:32:31
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And even a little... cordial?
Corrected text:
And even a little... friendly?
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Corrected by: kyoshijiro , 2022-05-30 22:29:45
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How could Lord Mountain God be described friendly? She should be in awe of such a majestic and powerful mountain God.
Corrected text:
How could Lord Mountain God be described as friendly? She should be in awe of such a majestic and powerful mountain God.
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:32:37
Original text:
How could Lord Mountain God be described as cordial? She should be in awe of such a majestic and powerful mountain God.
Corrected text:
How could Lord Mountain God be described friendly? She should be in awe of such a majestic and powerful mountain God.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:32:43
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Thinking about this, the girl gripped the wooden metel in her hand again.
Corrected text:
Thinking about this, the girl gripped the wooden medal in her hand again.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:32:50
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The small wooden sign was made of some kind of mysterious material and was cold to the touch, making her feel light and airy when she held it. She should have been very tired after walking so far up the muddy mountain road.
Corrected text:
The small wooden sign was made of some kind of mysterious material and was cold to the touch, making her feel very light and refreshed when she held it. Even though she should have been very tired after walking so far up the muddy mountain road.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-08 14:29:05
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But now she do not feel tired, still feeling light on her feet.
Corrected text:
But now she did not feel tired, still feeling light on her feet.
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:33:00
Original text:
But now she do not feel tired, still light on their feet.
Corrected text:
But now she do not feel tired, still feeling light on her feet.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-27 04:45:05
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Perceiving the change in the sky, the girl was a little anxious. If she couldn't get out of the mountains before dark, she wouldn't be able to walk in the dark without a lantern or torch when it got dark.
Corrected text:
Perceiving the change in the sky, the girl was a little anxious. If she couldn't get out of the mountains before dark, she wouldn't be able to walk in the dark without a lantern or a torch.
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:33:05
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Perceived the change in the sky, the girl was a little anxious. If she couldn't get out of the mountains before dark, she wouldn't be able to walk in the dark without a lantern and torch when it got dark.
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Perceiving the change in the sky, the girl was a little anxious. If she couldn't get out of the mountains before dark, she wouldn't be able to walk in the dark without a lantern or torch when it got dark.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-24 22:11:02
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"Purr -"
Corrected text:
~~Growl~~
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:33:09
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In the gradually dim mountain, the girl covered her hungry and cramped stomach, and her eyes filled with tears.
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In the gradually dimming mountain, the girl covered her hungry and cramped stomach, and her eyes filled with tears.
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Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-12-02 07:22:54
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Although she would not get tired of walking in the mountain with the Mountain God sign, her stomach was so hungry that she was already weak in her feet.
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Although she wouldn't get tired from walking with the Mountain God sign in her hands, she still felt hungry and weak on her feet.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:33:16
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But since she grew up in the mountain village, she also understood that this time of year was not any fruits and vegetables ripe, and she could not find any wild fruits to eat in this mountain.
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But since she grew up in the mountain village, she also understood that during this time of the year there weren't any ripe fruits and vegetables that she could find and eat in this mountain.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:33:23
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But something suddenly fell on her head, hitting her head with some pain.
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But something suddenly fell on her head, hitting her head and causing some pain.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:33:29
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"You guys... send walnuts to me to eat?"
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"You guys... are you giving walnuts to me to eat?"
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:33:34
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The girl was confused, because these monkeys in the past days perched in the Cold Feather Mountain. Once the crops in the fields came ripe, they would come down in groups to steal fruits and vegetables, so that the villagers hate them.
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The girl was confused, because these monkeys in the past days perched in the Cold Feather Mountain. Once the crops in the fields became ripe, they would come down in groups to steal fruits and vegetables, so the villagers hate them.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:33:38
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Watching the monkeys disappear into the woods, the girl couldn't help but sigh. Yeah, these monkeys even could not talk, so how could they possibly answer her questions.
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Watching the monkeys disappear into the woods, the girl couldn't help but sigh. Yeah, these monkeys could not even talk, so how could they possibly answer her questions.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:33:41
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Although the pulp in these walnuts was not much, after eating more than twenty walnuts in one breath, the girl's hunger finally eased some.
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Although the pulp in these walnuts was not much, after eating more than twenty walnuts in one breath, the girl's hunger finally eased to some degree.
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Corrected by: tinyEdit , 2023-03-31 01:41:38
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At this time, the sky had been gray, almost out of the light of day. The mountain was so bleak that it was almost impossible to see the road in the distance.
Corrected text:
At this time, the sky had become gray, the light of day almost gone. The mountain was so bleak that it was almost impossible to see the road in the distance.
Corrected by: tinyEdit , 2023-03-31 01:41:38
Original text:
At this time, the sky had been gray, almost out of the light of day. The mountain was so bleak that it was almost impossible to see the road in the distance.
Corrected text:
At this time, the sky had become gray, the light of day almost gone. The mountain was so bleak that it was almost impossible to see the road in the distance.
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Corrected by: tinyEdit , 2023-03-31 01:44:26
Original text:
With the hunger being relieved, the girl finally had the strength to continue walking.
Corrected text:
With her hunger relieved, the girl finally had the strength to continue walking.
Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:33:45
Original text:
Wit the hunger was relieved, the girl finally had the strength to continue to walk.
Corrected text:
With the hunger being relieved, the girl finally had the strength to continue walking.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:33:49
Original text:
She walked in the dark for a short time, and the vision of the mountain road gradually became familiar with up. The girl was a little excited, because she knew she was almost home.
Corrected text:
She walked in the dark for a short time, and the vision of the mountain road gradually became familiar with her memory. The girl was a little excited, because she knew she was almost home.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:33:53
Original text:
But the girl walking on the familiar mountain path was no longer afraid. Even though walking in the dark at night, she has not deviated from the right direction.
Corrected text:
But the girl walking on the familiar mountain path was no longer afraid. Even though she was walking in the dark at night, she has not deviated from the right direction.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:34:14
Original text:
Just step over this river and cross the bridge, it won't take long to get back to the village!
Corrected text:
Just step over this bridge and cross the river, it won't take long to get back to the village!
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:34:50
Original text:
The girl was exciting. Even though the darkness could not see the outline of Shuisheng Village, her mood was still leaping up.
Corrected text:
The girl was excited. Even though due to the she darkness could not see the outline of Shuisheng Village, her mood was still very good.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:34:56
Original text:
Soon, the girl found the stone bridge across the river and saw the lights of Shuisheng Village in the distance in the darkness.
Corrected text:
Soon, the girl found the stone bridge leading across the river and saw the lights of Shuisheng Village in the distance in the darkness.
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Corrected by: Gursewak-Singh , 2022-03-27 20:35:06
Original text:
Behind the girl in the mountain, followed her all the way to the monkeys at this time also turned away, and entered the densely wooded Cold Feather Mountain, no longer following.
Corrected text:
Behind the girl in the mountain, monkeys who had followed her all the way to the village, at this time also turned around, and entered the densely forested Cold Feather Mountain, no longer following.
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