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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:09:39

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Right Prime Minister Angelina was arranged to coordinate the triumphal celebration of nobles and had a grand banquet and dance.

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Right Prime Minister Angelina was arranged to coordinate the triumphal celebration of nobles with a grand banquet and dance.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:09:55

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And this time, the Eternal Night Queen will attend in person.

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And this time, the Queen of Eternal Night will attend in person.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:10:55

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Everyone was surprised but they were choked by the unusual announcement that they would be participating in the dance.

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Everyone was surprised but they were choked by the unusual announcement that she would be participating in the dance.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:11:10

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Don't ask, asking is self-indulgent. With His Majesty's character, it's normal to have fun with everyone!

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Don't ask, asking is self-indulgent. With Her Majesty's character, it's normal to have fun with everyone!

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:14:51

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Holding back for three years is a big victory at the speed of light. She pretended to be a wave with everyone...

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The fact that she held back for three years is a big victory. And, at the speed of light, she's now pretending to be united with everyone...

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:13:14

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On the civilian side, the city-wide buffet is impossible and the supplies of the empire are not that extravagant.

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On the civilian side, a city-wide buffet is impossible and the supplies of the empire are not that extravagant.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:14:09

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In addition, there will be a grand magic fireworks show in the world and the wonderful scene of this war against the orc tribe will be broadcast over the palace, which is enough to shield the lack of entertainment in this era, and I also look forward to the arrival of the triumphal celebration.

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In addition, there will be a grand magic fireworks show and the wonderful scene of this war against the orc tribe will be broadcast over the palace, which is enough to shield the lack of entertainment in this era, and people also look forward to the arrival of the triumphal celebration.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:14:36

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And the news that the Queen is going to personally participate in the celebration dance came. Many nobles and wealthy businessmen outside the secret capital, and some citizens with spare capacity, also chose to bring their families and children to the imperial capital and waited for the opportunity to see it with their own eyes.

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And the news that the Queen is going to personally participate in the celebration dance came. Many nobles and wealthy businessmen outside the secret capital, and some citizens with spare capacity, also chose to bring their families and children to the imperial capital and waited for the opportunity to see her with their own eyes.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:15:08

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After all, Asifford City still has trouble with the Tianming Army!

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After all, Afford City still has trouble with the Tianming Army!

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:15:32

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If something goes wrong on such a big day as the Triumph Celebration, they will have to start from scratch with their reputation just raised by Lord Dior and all kinds of extra subsidies.

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If something goes wrong on such a big day as the Triumph Celebration, they will have to start from scratch with their reputation just raised by Lord Dio and all kinds of extra subsidies.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:15:44

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But unlike in the past, when the rumor was passed to her like a rock sinking into the sea, the queen didn't respond.

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But unlike in the past, when the rumor was passed on to her like it was a rock sinking into the sea, the queen didn't respond.

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But unlike in the past, when the rumor was passed on it was like a rock sinking into the sea, the queen didn't respond.

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But unlike in the past, when the rumor was passed to her like a rock sinking into the sea, the queen didn't respond.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:17:06

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The Queen of Eternal Night no longer cares about the opinions of the nobles. Naturally, it will not be the same as before. She used to change the strategy she had set to earn back their praises when they were chattering in her ears.

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The Queen of Eternal Night no longer cares about the opinions of the nobles. Naturally, it will not be the same as before. Because they were chattering in her ears, she used to change the strategy she had set to earn back their praises.

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The Queen of Eternal Night no longer cares about the opinions of the nobles. Naturally, it will not be the same as before. Because they are chattering in their ears, to restore their praise, they will change the strategy they have set.

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The Queen of Eternal Night no longer cares about the opinions of the nobles. Naturally, it will not be the same as before. She used to change the strategy she had set to earn back their praises when they were chattering in her ears.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:16:18

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With different butts, the perspective and vision of looking at the problem are naturally different.

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Now that she has changed, the perspective and vision with which she's looking at the problem are naturally different.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:17:53

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In the past, she wanted to build "Everyone's ideal country", but now she just wants to build her own ideal country.

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In the past, she wanted to build "everyone's ideal country", but now she just wants to build her own ideal country.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:18:05

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This is also the embodiment of the ultimate self.

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This is also the embodiment of her ultimate self.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:18:54

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And understanding to strive to build an ideal world, her motivation to go to court has greatly increased, instead of being pushed by responsibility as in the past.

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And after understanding that she should strive to build her ideal world, her motivation to go to court has greatly increased, instead of being pushed by responsibility as in the past.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:19:52

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Every time she faces a problem in the empire, every time she thinks about the balance between the various forces, and every time the distribution after a fair victory is a headache for her.

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Every time she faced a problem in the empire, she would think about the balance between the various forces and, every time, the distribution after a fair victory had been a headache for her.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:20:35

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How to issue a decree that makes all parties satisfied and happy is top-level torture that is protracted and painstaking.

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How to issue a decree that makes all parties satisfied and happy is a protracted and painstaking top-level torture.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:09:29

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If Roger's standard was used, the Queen of Eternal Night would be as flat as herself.

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If Roger's standard was used, the Queen of Eternal Night would be as flat as him.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:21:55

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She used to be surrounded by the demands of the nobles and the people. She looked strong, but as Margaret said in a rage, she lived herself as a powerful thug for the nobles.

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She used to be surrounded by the demands of the nobles and the people. She looked strong, but as Margaret said in a rage, she was living as a powerful thug working for the nobles.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:30:55

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It wasn't until she understood the way of the ultimate self that she realized that she could make this empire serve her, become an extension of her own will, and become her ideal appearance.

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It wasn't until she understood the way of the ultimate self that she realized that she could make this empire serve her, become an extension of her own will, and take her ideal shape.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:31:12

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No matter how much she pays, the queen is willing.

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No matter how much she has to pay, the queen is willing.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:32:20

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Of course, the Queen of Eternal Night has only just realized the second day of My Way. There is still a huge gap between ideals and reality. She has not yet found a specific way to realize her dream.

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Of course, the Queen of Eternal Night has only just realized the second step of doing things her way. There is still a huge gap between ideals and reality. She has not yet found a specific way to realize her dream.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:33:15

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If the child is disobedient, it is enough to discipline him properly.

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If the child is disobedient, it is enough to discipline her properly.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:34:06

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It has to be said that these nobles of the empire live a comfortable life of lying down and winning, but they are not greedy enough. They stretch their hands longer and longer, and they still think that the queen is a remote control speaker for them to exploit the empire.

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It has to be said that these nobles of the empire live a comfortable life of lying down and winning, but they are way too greedy. They stretch their hands longer and longer, and they still think that the queen is a remote control speaker for them to exploit the empire.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:34:46

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They saw their situation, but they didn't see their situation.

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They saw their situation, but they didn't understand it.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:36:15

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A single person is terrifying when she goes out of her way. If an unparalleled empress doesn't care about other people's evaluations and how the history books are written, what kind of energy will burst out?

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A single person can be terrifying when they give it their all. If an unparalleled empress doesn't care about other people's evaluations and what will be written in history books, what kind of energy will burst out?

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:40:18

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Maybe some people just want to use possible options as a bargaining chip to threaten the queen, hoping that she will not always stand in the thoughts of those pariahs, and please be a thug who protects the interests of the nobles.

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Maybe some people just want to use possible options as a bargaining chip to threaten the queen, hoping that she will not keep on thinking about those pariahs and become once again a thug who protects the interests of the nobles.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:42:10

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For example, what kind of Mokela, what kind of state farm, for example, killing the nobles of the Seventeen Nations, the recovered territories were not divided into imperial nobles, but they were nationalized.

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For example, what's with this growth spell, these state farms; for example, what's with her killing the nobles of the Seventeen Nations and nationalizing the recovered territories rather than dividing them between the imperial nobles?

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:42:48

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On the eve of the celebration, the people were lively, carnival, and joyful, igniting their emotions.

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On the eve of the celebration, the people were lively and joyful, the carnival igniting their emotions.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:43:33

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The news came from Nightingale. It is expected that there will be major events before and after the triumphal celebration. Please, Your Majesty, please deal with it in advance. The emotions of the nobles

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The news came from Nightingale. It is expected that there will be major events before and after the triumphal celebration. Please, Your Majesty, please deal with the emotions of the nobles in advance.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:43:56

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But the Queen of Eternal Night didn't seem to have received the news, and she still went her way, leading the Secret Law Society to do new experiments in alchemy, and perfecting the field of inner demons as a "Magician's camp".

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But the Queen of Eternal Night didn't seem to have received the news, and she still went her way, leading the Secret Law Society to do new experiments in alchemy, and perfecting the field of inner demons as a "magician's camp".

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:44:50

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God block is still killing God, let alone some nobles.

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God block can still kill gods, let alone some nobles.

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Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-08 12:30:30

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Those cabinets closest to her didn't see this determination too much. Under His Majesty's smiling appearance, there is a more ruthless and hard heart than before.

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Those cabinets closest to her didn't see this determination too much. Under Her Majesty's smiling appearance, there is a more ruthless and hard heart than before.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:45:42

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Because I have ideals in my heart, I will not hesitate, and I am prepared to pay the price.

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Because she has ideals in her heart, she will not hesitate, and she is prepared to pay the price.

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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-06 17:35:00

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Only Angelina, who grew up with the Queen of Eternal Night, vaguely sensed that Xiao Ao, who had returned from the front line, was different.

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Only Angelina, who grew up with the Queen of Eternal Night, vaguely sensed that the queen, who had returned from the front line, was different.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:47:10

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Although the Charles family is one of the oldest nobles in the empire, Angelina sympathizes with the bottom, and she also thinks that it is a good thing to properly restrain the rights and interests of the nobles...

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Although the Charles is one of the oldest noble family in the Empire, Angelina sympathizes with the bottom, and she also thinks that it is a good thing to properly restrain the rights and interests of the nobles...

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:47:23

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But she never imagined that what the Queen of Eternal Night would do next would not necessarily be a "Restraint".

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But she never imagined that what the Queen of Eternal Night would do next would not necessarily be a "restraint".

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:17:34

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Some meat is completely sick, rotten, and spoilt. If you can't find a way to cure it, you might as well just cut it off.

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Some flesh is completely sick, rotten, and spoilt. If you can't find a way to cure it, you might as well just cut it off.

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Some meat is completely sick, rotten, and rotten. If you can find a way to cure it, you might as well just cut it off.

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Some meat is completely sick, rotten, and spoilt. If you can't find a way to cure it, you might as well just cut it off.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:48:51

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The Queen of Eternal Night didn't reserve the position of a revolutionary in the court, because she already had an idea in her heart, and she would lead the empire to make drastic changes unimaginable by contemporary rulers.

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The Queen of Eternal Night didn't reserve the position of a revolutionary in the court, because she already had an idea in her heart, and she would lead the Empire to make drastic changes unimaginable by contemporary rulers.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:49:33

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Some of these thoughts were what she had been thinking all along, and some were fragments that Roger heard from the bottom of his heart.

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Some of these thoughts were what she had been thinking all along, and some were fragments that she heard from Roger's inner dialogue.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:50:29

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"Your Majesty, the dress for the celebration is ready." Mrs. Mosconi came to the underground laboratory and bowed to ask the Queen of Eternal Night.

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"Your Majesty, the dress for the celebration is ready." Mrs. Mosconi came to the underground laboratory and bowed to inform the Queen of Eternal Night.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:52:27

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In the middle, several sets of dresses were inspired by Roger and arranged for the Queen's special tailoring team to rush to make them, which are suitable for prom.

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In the middle were several sets of dresses suitable for a ball inspired by Roger and made in a rush by the Queen's special tailoring team.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:09:10

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"That's it. There's this one and this one. I'll make another set for Anjie and Mary according to the style."

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"That's it. I'll take this one and this one. I'll make another set for Anjie and Mary according to this style."

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:52:59

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"As ordered, Your Majesty."

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"As you wish, Your Majesty."

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:53:52

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The queen took off the clothes she had chosen, touched the soft and smooth fabrics, and suddenly looked forward to the moment when she wore this outfit and appeared in the public eye.

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The queen took off the clothes she had chosen, touched the soft and smooth fabrics, and suddenly looked forward to the moment when she would wear this outfit and appear in the public eye.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:54:19

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And, when she appeared in front of that guy.

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And, when she would appear in front of that guy.

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And, when he appeared in front of that guy.

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And, when she appeared in front of that guy.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:09:01

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She deliberately made changes that were different from the pictures in the guy's mind. For example, the slits up to the crotch were corrected by her, which is shameful.

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She deliberately made changes to the pictures in the guy's mind. For example, the slits up to the crotch were corrected by her, because it was shameful.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:56:24

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Although this canary cheongsam looks good, it is her last stubbornness when she reaches the foot of her thigh.

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Although this canary cheongsam looks good, it is her last stubbornness to make it reach the foot of her thigh.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:56:50

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The Eternal Night Queen is worried, but also curious and looking forward to it.

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The Queen of Eternal Night is worried, but also curious and looking forward to it.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:58:24

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The worry is naturally that she will not be able to hear his voice in the future, that she will have to pay extra for copying the homework, and even that guy refuses to copy it for himself!

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She is naturally worried that she will not be able to hear his voice in the future, that she will have to pay extra for copying his homework, and that that guy might even refuse to let her copy it!

Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-08 12:32:56

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The worry is naturally that he will not be able to hear his voice in the future, that he will have to pay extra for copying the homework, and even that guy refuses to copy it for himself!

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The worry is naturally that she will not be able to hear his voice in the future, that she will have to pay extra for copying the homework, and even that guy refuses to copy it for himself!

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:59:15

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Curiosity is to know what kind of expression he will have when he discovers those unscrupulous brain supplements, all of which have a silent observer...

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She is curious to know what kind of expression he will have when he discovers that all his unscrupulous brain supplements have a silent observer...

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 02:59:32

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Must be very fun, right?

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It will definitely be very fun, right?

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:00:25

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The Queen of Eternal Night felt that there was always a solution to the problem of not copying homework. After all, Ms. Tybella had a say, and men are like toothpaste, there is always a squeeze.

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The Queen of Eternal Night felt that there was always a solution to the problem of not copying homework. After all, Ms. Tybella said that men are like toothpaste, there is always a way to squeeze them.

Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-08 12:33:22

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The Queen of Eternal Night felt that there was always a solution to the problem of not copying homework. After all, Mr. Tybella had a say, and men are like toothpaste, there is always a squeeze.

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The Queen of Eternal Night felt that there was always a solution to the problem of not copying homework. After all, Ms. Tybella had a say, and men are like toothpaste, there is always a squeeze.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:01:25

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But there is one and only one chance to appreciate Yan Yi, and it must not be missed...

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But there is only one chance to appreciate the show, and it must not be missed...

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:01:47

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So, I suddenly look forward to this triumphal celebration~

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So, she suddenly looks forward to this triumphal celebration~

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Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-08 12:33:48

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"Be careful Margaret"!

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"Be careful of Margaret"!

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:02:17

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At the cabinet meeting, I heard that Margaret had proposed to execute her brother. No matter how busy Angelina was, she had to take time to remind Roger.

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At the cabinet meeting, she heard that Margaret had proposed to execute her brother. No matter how busy Angelina was, she had to take time to remind Roger.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:02:47

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Roger heard that Margaret's way of playing was so wild, and she went to the Queen to execute him. It was a bit of a surprise, but it wasn't a complete surprise.

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Roger heard that Margaret's way of playing was so wild that she went to the Queen to have him executed. It was a bit of a surprise, but it wasn't a complete surprise.

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Roger heard that Margaret's way of playing was so wild, and she went to the Queen to execute herself. It was a bit of a surprise, but it wasn't a complete surprise.

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Roger heard that Margaret's way of playing was so wild, and she went to the Queen to execute him. It was a bit of a surprise, but it wasn't a complete surprise.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:05:28

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Thinking of what the military had seen today, Roger's expression was a little strange, a little fortunate.

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Thinking of what he had seen at the military today, Roger's expression was a little strange, a little glad.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:06:43

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I thought it was my own anti-pressure game, maybe it was a banquet, and I would encounter unlimited military training.

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He thought she would play a pressure game with him, maybe he would encounter unlimited military training at the banquet.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:03:47

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In the end, what happened to him was "Ignorance".

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In the end, what happened to him was "ignorance".

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:04:40

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Margaret's attention was focused on Tasika. Occasionally, she glanced at him, but she didn't know why she was so arrogant and proud. Her small breasts were tall and high, and then there was no more.

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Margaret's attention was focused on Tasika. Occasionally, she glanced at him, but he didn't know why she was so arrogant and proud. Her small breasts were tall and high, but she didn't pay any more attention to him afterwards.

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:07:23

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But she still warned, "She didn't directly target you, but there must be other plans, you have to be careful."

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But she still warned him, "She didn't directly target you, but there must be other plans, you have to be careful."

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:07:41

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"I know, sister, you have to be careful, this celebration is not peaceful."

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"I know, sister, you have to be careful too, this celebration will not be peaceful."

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:08:20

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"Ding, the lying flat system detected that the host was emotionally stable yesterday, and obtained a random treasure chest (100% guaranteed), is it open?"

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"Ding, the lying flat system detected that the host was emotionally stable yesterday, and obtained a random treasure chest (100% guaranteed), do you want to open it?"

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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-09-09 03:08:46

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Roger looked at the shining 100%, and he was the first to guarantee the bottom line. "Mind" + "Defense" was not crossed out. What big treasure could he get?

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Roger looked at the shining 100%, and he was the first to guarantee the bottom line. "Mind" + "Defense" were not crossed out. What big treasure could he get?

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The Queen Villainess Eavesdrops on My Heart and Won’t Let Me Slack Off – Chapter 96