Translated by: Ben-Jackson
Edited by: anonymous, Abiyyu-Harly, Brandon-Pittman, YACATECT, Oedon, Yozakura-_, booho-hahaha, Snow-Cat, rip-qi, Hyuang-Hung, Nhien, tyranoic, trek-backs, jordan-rebera, Kuro-Usagi, Jex89, Person-West, Quantum-Videos, Jorge-Luis-Alvarado, nassief, Junaavicii, Wayne-Gurit
Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2023-05-17 12:10:07
Original text:
Chapter 5 Celebration blessed by the Queen
Corrected text:
Chapter 5: Celebration blessed by the Queen
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-13 15:28:38
Original text:
Chapter 5 Celebration blessed by the Queen
Corrected text:
Chapter 5: Celebration blessed by the Queen
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Corrected by: Wayne-Gurit , 2023-07-25 12:48:11
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Angelina didn’t know she was considered a hypocrite.
Corrected text:
Angelina didn’t know she was now considered a hypocrite.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-17 19:52:35
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But even as she knew, she didn’t care about it.
Corrected text:
But even if she knew, she wouldn't care about it.
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Corrected by: booho-hahaha , 2022-03-31 12:23:31
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She has a good relationship with everyone, except Margaret, who can quarrel in less than three words.
Corrected text:
She has a good relationship with everyone, except Margaret, who can start to quarrel in less than three words.
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Corrected by: Nhien , 2022-05-01 12:14:52
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Up to now, even if she has a good temper, she has completely given up on repairing her relationship with this little devil.
Corrected text:
Up till now, even if she has a good temper, she has completely given up on repairing her relationship with this little devil.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-09 11:49:53
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In the Charles House, the nobles of the entire imperial capital can come.
Corrected text:
In the Charles House, the nobles of the entire imperial capital were invited.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-12 10:47:03
Original text:
In the Charles House, all the nobles of the entire imperial capital can come.
Corrected text:
In the Charles House, the nobles of the entire imperial capital can come.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-12 10:47:12
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Angelina is a righteous minister, but now her younger brother has been named the Marquis of La Capas before he has even made any achievements. What does this mean?
Corrected text:
Angelina is a righteous minister, but now her younger brother has been named the Marquis of La Capas before he even made any achievements. What does this mean?
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Corrected by: rip-qi , 2022-04-05 09:27:34
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Inflammation is a must-have skill for nobles.
Corrected text:
Boot licking is a must-have skill for nobles.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:46
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The guests who come and go are either rich or noble people.
Corrected text:
The guests who come and go are either rich people or nobles.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-09 11:49:55
Original text:
Countless eldest young ladies of proper marriageable age, dressed in fancy dresses in a variety of styles, hoping to have an "unexpected encounter" with Lord Roger.
Corrected text:
Countless eldest young ladies of proper marriageable age, dressed in fancy dresses in a variety of styles, hoped to have an "unexpected encounter" with Lord Roger.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-06 11:08:42
Original text:
Countless eldest young ladies of proper marriable age, dressed in fancy dresses in a variety of styles, hoping to have an "unexpected encounter" with Lord Roger.
Corrected text:
Countless eldest young ladies of proper marriageable age, dressed in fancy dresses in a variety of styles, hoping to have an "unexpected encounter" with Lord Roger.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:41
Original text:
Countless eldest young ladies of proper marriage age, dressed in fancy dresses and a variety of styles, hoping to have an "unexpected encounter" with Lord Roger.
Corrected text:
Countless eldest young ladies of proper marriable age, dressed in fancy dresses in a variety of styles, hoping to have an "unexpected encounter" with Lord Roger.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:37
Original text:
Countless eldest young ladies of proper marriage age, dressed in fancy dresses and a variety of styles, hoping to have an "unexpected encounter" with Lord Roger.
Corrected text:
Countless eldest young ladies of proper marriable age, dressed in fancy dresses in a variety of styles, hoping to have an "unexpected encounter" with Lord Roger.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:11:19
Original text:
Countless eldest young ladies are of proper marriage age, dressed in fancy dresses and a variety of styles, hoping to have an "unexpected encounter" with Lord Roger.
Corrected text:
Countless eldest young ladies of proper marriage age, dressed in fancy dresses and a variety of styles, hoping to have an "unexpected encounter" with Lord Roger.
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Corrected by: Brandon-Pittman , 2022-03-25 09:31:35
Original text:
But why does Roger still have the slightest mood to pick up girls now?
Corrected text:
But why would Roger still have the slightest mood to pick up girls now?
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:11:22
Original text:
Looking at this crowded scene, he knew that his system reward today was going to go to waste again!
Corrected text:
Looking at this crowded scene, he knew that his system reward today was going to waste again!
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:27
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Are there too many people?
Corrected text:
Isn't there too many people?
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Corrected by: YACATECT , 2022-03-26 16:46:16
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Yesterday was the queen, today is the sister.
Corrected text:
Yesterday was the queen, today is his sister.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-17 11:26:43
Original text:
He had only went along with the flow previous three days, and he has already lost two treasure chests!
Corrected text:
He had only went along with the flow the last three days, and he has already lost two treasure chests!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-09 11:49:57
Original text:
He had only went along the flow previous three days, and he has already lost two treasure chests!
Corrected text:
He had only went along with the flow previous three days, and he has already lost two treasure chests!
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-16 09:42:56
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He has only had the system for three days, and he has already lost two treasure chests!
Corrected text:
He had only went along the flow previous three days, and he has already lost two treasure chests!
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:50
Original text:
He has only traveled for three days, and he has already lost two treasure chests!
Corrected text:
He has only had the system for three days, and he has already lost two treasure chests!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-09 11:49:58
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Roger had a heavy heart, but he had to always greet the guests with a smile from the heart and look extremely happy.
Corrected text:
Roger had a heavy heart, but he had to greet the guests with a smile from the heart and look extremely happy.
Corrected by: Brandon-Pittman , 2022-03-25 09:31:39
Original text:
But Roger had a heavy heart, but he had to always greet the guests with a smile from the heart and look extremely happy.
Corrected text:
Roger had a heavy heart, but he had to always greet the guests with a smile from the heart and look extremely happy.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:47
Original text:
The entire imperial capital is a fan of the Eternal Night Queen.
Corrected text:
Everyone in the imperial capital is a fan of the Eternal Night Queen.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:44
Original text:
The entire imperial capital is a fan of the Eternal Night Queen.
Corrected text:
Everyone in the imperial capital is a fan of the Eternal Night Queen.
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Corrected by: Hyuang-Hung , 2022-04-18 18:38:30
Original text:
If someone who cares about her saw him standing with a heavy heart, it must be said that he was greedy for more and that he is not satisfied that Her Majesty has only named him a small marquis…
Corrected text:
If someone who adored the empress knew he had a heavy heart, they would think that he was greedy for more and that he is not satisfied that Her Majesty has only named him a small marquis…
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:41:54
Original text:
If someone who cares about him saw him they would know he had a heavy heart, it must be said that he was not greedy enough and that he is not satisfied that His Majesty has only named him a small marquis…
Corrected text:
If someone who cares about her saw him standing with a heavy heart, it must be said that he was greedy for more and that he is not satisfied that Her Majesty has only named him a small marquis…
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Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:41:57
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Alas, I am so difficult!
Corrected text:
Alas, life can be difficult!
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:38:58
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"Report, Her Majesty's special envoy is here!"
Corrected text:
"Report, her majesty's special envoy is here!"
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:42:01
Original text:
"Report, His Majesty's special envoy is here!"
Corrected text:
"Report, Her Majesty's special envoy is here!"
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:39:00
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When the young master was awarded a title, Her Majesty sent a special envoy in person. This is a big deal!
Corrected text:
When the young master was awarded a title, her majesty sent a special envoy in person. This is a big deal!
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:50
Original text:
When the young master was awarded a title, Her Majesty sent special envoys in person. This is a big occasions!
Corrected text:
When the young master was awarded a title, Her Majesty sent a special envoy in person. This is a big deal!
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:42:09
Original text:
When the young master was awarded a title, His Majesty sent special envoys in person. This is a big deal!
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When the young master was awarded a title, Her Majesty sent special envoys in person. This is a big occasions!
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Corrected by: Hyuang-Hung , 2022-04-18 18:38:33
Original text:
My queen, you aren't a ghosts, are you?
Corrected text:
My queen, you aren't a ghost, are you?
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:42:19
Original text:
The queen, you are still like ghosts, aren't you?
Corrected text:
My queen, you aren't a ghosts, are you?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 17:34:57
Original text:
But he was helpless, because the Queen's envoy had already in the palace.
Corrected text:
But he was helpless, because the Queen's envoy had already entered the palace.
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:42:21
Original text:
But he couldn't do anything, because the Queen's envoy had already entered the palace.
Corrected text:
But he was helpless, because the Queen's envoy had already in the palace.
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Corrected by: nassief , 2023-02-26 09:16:58
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Like Moses dividing the sea, the mass of people automatically parted way for the queen.
Corrected text:
Like Moses parting the sea, the mass of people automatically made way for the queen's envoy.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:28
Original text:
Like Moses dividing the sea, the mass of people automatically part way for the queen.
Corrected text:
Like Moses dividing the sea, the mass of people automatically parted way for the queen.
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:42:25
Original text:
Like Moses dividing the sea, the flow of people automatically made way.
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Like Moses dividing the sea, the mass of people automatically part way for the queen.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:56
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Immediately, the audience cheered, screamed, and frantically toasted Roger.
Corrected text:
Immediately, the audience cheered, screamed, and frantically toasted at Roger.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:53
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Immediately, the audience cheered, screamed, and frantically toasted Roger.
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Immediately, the audience cheered, screamed, and frantically toasted at Roger.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-04 19:51:20
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"My people! Blessed be you, and enjoy the banquet"
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"My people! Blessings be upon you, and enjoy the banquet!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-04 19:51:19
Original text:
"My people! Blessed be you, and enjoy the banquet"
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"My people! Blessings be upon you, and enjoy the banquet!"
Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:39:02
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"My people! Bless you, enjoy the banquet"
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"My people! Blessed be you, and enjoy the banquet"
Corrected by: Kuro-Usagi , 2022-05-25 16:00:58
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"Bless you, enjoy the banquet, my people!"
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"My people! Bless you, enjoy the banquet"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-14 13:03:55
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The Queen of Eternal Night is not at the celebration, but the celebration also has her legend?
Corrected text:
The Queen of Eternal Night is not at the celebration, and yet the celebration is completely about her.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-14 13:03:54
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The Queen of Eternal Night is not at the celebration, but the celebration also has her legend?
Corrected text:
The Queen of Eternal Night is not at the celebration, and yet the celebration is completely about her.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-21 09:50:59
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You don't come here!
Corrected text:
Don't come here, you!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-18 11:55:31
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Angelina has the honor and grabbed Roger's hand and was so excited that she was about to cry.
Corrected text:
Angelina was honored and grabbed Roger's hand, she was so excited that she was about to cry.
Corrected by: YACATECT , 2022-03-26 16:46:24
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Angelina has the honor and grabbed Roger Bing's hand and was so excited that she was about to cry:
Corrected text:
Angelina has the honor and grabbed Roger's hand and was so excited that she was about to cry.
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Corrected by: Brandon-Pittman , 2022-03-25 09:31:41
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"Brother, Your Majesty has been so kind to us!"
Corrected text:
"Brother, her Majesty has been so kind to us!"
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:39:03
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"Thank you, Your Majesty, thank you, Your Majesty, I thank you so much..."
Corrected text:
"Thank you, your majesty. Thank you, your majesty. I thank you so much..."
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:39:04
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Roger could only kneel helplessly, and with his trembling hands, took the sapphire amulet from the Adamantine Golem.
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Roger could only kneel helplessly. And with his trembling hands, he took the sapphire amulet from the Adamantine Golem.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-18 11:55:34
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At the urging of Angelina, Roger wore a sapphire amulet to meet the review of the nobles.
Corrected text:
At the urging of Angelina, Roger wore a sapphire amulet to greet the nobles.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:00
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On the surface, the smile is like a flower posing, but the heart is irritated and furious:
Corrected text:
On the surface, his smile looked like a flower, but inside his heart he was irritated and furious:
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-28 11:19:36
Original text:
On the surface, the smile is like a flower posing, but the heart is incompetent and furious:
Corrected text:
On the surface, the smile is like a flower posing, but the heart is irritated and furious:
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:03
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"Elder sister and the queen! I will pay you back someday... Forget it, I won't take revenge!"
Corrected text:
"Sister... and the Queen! I will pay you back someday... Forget it, I won't take revenge!"
Corrected by: YACATECT , 2022-03-26 16:46:29
Original text:
"One elder sister and two queens! Sooner or later I will take all of you... Forget it, I won't take revenge!"
Corrected text:
"Elder sister and the queen! I will pay you back someday... Forget it, I won't take revenge!"
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:31
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I'm just a waste brother; what can I do?
Corrected text:
I'm just a waste of a brother; what can I do?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-21 14:58:05
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Although she was laughing, she was constantly emitting cold air around him, keeping strangers away.
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Although she was laughing, she was constantly emitting cold air around her, keeping strangers away.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:06
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Fortunately, there is also a small ceiling fan that is not happy!
Corrected text:
Fortunately, there was also the small ceiling fan that wasn't in a good mood!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-18 11:55:40
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In the middle of the story, after Margaret made a mistake, she will be hung up and spanked by the queen, spinning like a ceiling fan on the roof.
Corrected text:
In the middle of the story, after Margaret made a mistake, she was hung up and spanked by the queen, spinning like a ceiling fan on the roof.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-18 11:55:37
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In the middle of the story, after Margaret made a mistake, she will be hung up and spanked by the queen, spinning like a ceiling fan on the roof.
Corrected text:
In the middle of the story, after Margaret made a mistake, she was hung up and spanked by the queen, spinning like a ceiling fan on the roof.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:10
Original text:
In the middle of the plot, after Margaret makes a mistake, she will be hung up and spanked by the queen, spinning like a ceiling fan on the roof.
Corrected text:
In the middle of the story, after Margaret made a mistake, she will be hung up and spanked by the queen, spinning like a ceiling fan on the roof.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:12
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That is a famous scene that countless players love to see.
Corrected text:
This was a famous scene that countless players loved to see.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-21 09:52:53
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She's a bit of a bitch, but she's very innocent. She's petite and extraordinarily hot, with a small expression that dares others to be angry but she doesn't dare to speak when she is bullied, and a small waist big enough that it bounces and bounces…
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She's a bit of a bitch, but she's very innocent. She's petite and extraordinarily hot, with a small expression that dares others to be angry but she doesn't dare to speak when she is bullied, a small waist, and a chest big enough that it bounces and bounces…
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-16 09:43:03
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She's a bit of a bitch, but she's very innocent. She's petite and extraordinarily hot, with a small expression that dares to be angry but doesn't dare to speak when she is bullied, and a small butt that bounces and bounces…
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She's a bit of a bitch, but she's very innocent. She's petite and extraordinarily hot, with a small expression that dares others to be angry but she doesn't dare to speak when she is bullied, and a small waist big enough that it bounces and bounces…
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Corrected by: YACATECT , 2022-03-26 16:46:32
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It has been popular all over the Internet for a while.
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She has been popular all over the Internet for a while.
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Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-28 12:35:24
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Roger thought to himself, I can't be alone this night.
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Roger thought to himself, this night, I can't be the only one suffering.
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Corrected by: Wayne-Gurit , 2023-07-25 12:59:08
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This Roger is stupid, don't you know that your sister and I hate each other
Corrected text:
This Roger is stupid, don't you know that your sister and I hate each other?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-17 19:53:06
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This Roger is stupid, don't you know that your sister and I have hatred?
Corrected text:
This Roger is stupid, don't you know that your sister and I hate each other
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Corrected by: Wayne-Gurit , 2023-07-25 01:00:23
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I was beaten by Your Majesty just yesterday because of you. Now you ask me what your Majesty gave you as a gift?
Corrected text:
I was beaten by Your Majesty just yesterday because of you. Now you ask me what did your Majesty gave you as a gift?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-17 19:52:46
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I was beaten by Your Majesty just yesterday because of you. Now you ask me what your Majesty gave me as a gift?
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I was beaten by Your Majesty just yesterday because of you. Now you ask me what your Majesty gave you as a gift?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-17 18:52:32
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Oz Oz Oz.
Corrected text:
Orz Orz Orz.
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Corrected by: Wayne-Gurit , 2023-07-25 01:01:33
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The little ceiling fan stood on tiptoe and leaned into Roger's ear, sighing like an orchid: "The divine amulet of the heart of the deep sea, its function is to save you from death... Crack it!"
Corrected text:
The little ceiling fan stood on tiptoe and leaned into Roger's ear, sighing like an orchid: "This is the divine amulet of the heart of the deep sea, its function is to save you from death... Crack it!"
Corrected by: YACATECT , 2022-03-26 16:46:35
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The little ceiling fan stood on tiptoe and leaned into Roger's ear, sighing like an orchid: "The divine amulet of the heart of the deep sea, its function is to make you beg for death... Crack it!"
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The little ceiling fan stood on tiptoe and leaned into Roger's ear, sighing like an orchid: "The divine amulet of the heart of the deep sea, its function is to save you from death... Crack it!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-28 11:19:41
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"That's it, thank you, Minister, of the Left, you are indeed far superior to my sister in terms of mysterious knowledge!"
Corrected text:
"That's it, thank you Minister of the Left, you are indeed far superior to my sister in terms of mysterious knowledge!"
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:39:06
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Roger was also surprised. His Majesty gave him an artifact?
Corrected text:
Roger was also surprised. Her majesty gave him an artifact?
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:11:30
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Sounds like it's used to save lives?
Corrected text:
And it's used to save lives?
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:11:32
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It seems that there is no loss at this time, and there is even a real profit?
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It seems that there is no loss this time, and even earned profit?
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Corrected by: Wayne-Gurit , 2023-07-25 01:04:15
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Your sister can see through the real relationship of the gods and in terms of mysterious knowledge, who would dare to say that the current empire is deeper than her?
Corrected text:
Your sister can see through the real relationship of the gods and in terms of mysterious knowledge, who would dare to say that anyone in the current empire is deeper than her?
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Corrected by: Wayne-Gurit , 2023-07-25 01:04:59
Original text:
His sister made me lose face in front of His Majesty yesterday!
Corrected text:
His sister made me lose face in front of Her Majesty yesterday!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-16 20:28:45
Original text:
Sister only made me lose in front of His Majesty yesterday!
Corrected text:
His sister made me lose face in front of His Majesty yesterday!
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Corrected by: Wayne-Gurit , 2023-07-25 01:05:34
Original text:
Now her brother is revealing his shortcomings in person...
Corrected text:
Now her brother is revealing my shortcomings in person...
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Corrected by: Wayne-Gurit , 2023-07-25 01:06:33
Original text:
Your siblings are not good people, so they bullied me together!
Corrected text:
You siblings are not good people, so they bullied me together!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:19
Original text:
woo woo woo woo!
Corrected text:
Sniff!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:15
Original text:
The whole world bullies me!
Corrected text:
The whole world is bullying me
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:29
Original text:
Can't fight back!
Corrected text:
And I cant even fight back?
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:24
Original text:
Can't fight back!
Corrected text:
And I cant even fight back?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-19 10:50:41
Original text:
Damn all of you!
Corrected text:
Damn you all!
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:34
Original text:
Fall!
Corrected text:
Damn all of you!
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-16 09:43:08
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The queen reclined lazily on the bed with bare feet, holding up a magic mirror until her stomach hurt from laughing:
Corrected text:
The queen reclined lazily with her backside on the bed with bare feet, holding up a magic mirror until her stomach hurt from laughing:
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:12:50
Original text:
The queen leaned lazily on the bed with bare feet, holding up a magic mirror until her stomach hurt from laughing:
Corrected text:
The queen reclined lazily on the bed with bare feet, holding up a magic mirror until her stomach hurt from laughing:
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:12:45
Original text:
The queen leaned lazily on the bed with bare feet, holding up a magic mirror until her stomach hurt from laughing:
Corrected text:
The queen reclined lazily on the bed with bare feet, holding up a magic mirror until her stomach hurt from laughing:
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Corrected by: Wayne-Gurit , 2023-07-25 01:07:32
Original text:
"Hahaha Roger, do you want to keep a low profile during the celebration? I won't let you!"
Corrected text:
"Hahaha Roger, you want to keep a low profile during the celebration? I won't let you!"
Corrected by: jordan-rebera , 2022-05-16 20:02:00
Original text:
"Hahaha Roger, do you want to keep a low profile in the celebration? I won't let it!"
Corrected text:
"Hahaha Roger, do you want to keep a low profile in the celebration? I won't let you!"
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:41
Original text:
"Oh, little Roger, if you ask that, are you trying to piss off my Margaret?"
Corrected text:
"Oh, little Roger, why are you asking that, are you trying to piss off my Margaret?"
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:47
Original text:
"It's a pity that the Adamantine Golem can only capture sounds and pictures. If this passage is seen with the voice of Little Roger, it must be more interesting..."
Corrected text:
"It's a pity that the Adamantine Golem can only capture sounds and pictures. It would be more interesting if it could read his inner voice."
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:44
Original text:
"It's a pity that the Adamantine Golem can only capture sounds and pictures. If this passage is seen with the voice of Little Roger, it must be more interesting..."
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"It's a pity that the Adamantine Golem can only capture sounds and pictures. It would be more interesting if it could read his inner voice."
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-21 09:55:12
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She was thinking about what reason she was looking for to go to Charles House someday!
Corrected text:
She was looking for a reason to go to Charles House someday!
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Corrected by: Person-West , 2022-06-24 17:53:17
Original text:
(come here! read the book faster at https://www.patreon.com/jacksonben?fan_landing=true)
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