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Edited by: Abiyyu-Harly, Brandon-Pittman, Yozakura-_, booho-hahaha, Snow-Cat, anonymous, Hyuang-Hung, tyranoic, Darin-Stephen, richard-busta, Jorge-Luis-Alvarado, Junaavicii
Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2023-05-17 12:10:41
Original text:
Chapter 6 The rise of an empire
Corrected text:
Chapter 6: The rise of an empire
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:50
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It's past midnight, but the celebration hasn't ended yet.
Corrected text:
It was past midnight, but the celebration was still ongoing.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-08 10:24:14
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“Ding, Acedia System checks that your action was not eligible for the reward. Please arrange the host's work and life reasonably.”
Corrected text:
“Ding, Acedia System checks that your action was not eligible for the reward. Please arrange the host's work and life leisurely.”
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:52
Original text:
“Ding, acedia system checks that your action was not eligible for the award. Please arrange the host's work and life reasonably.”
Corrected text:
“Ding, Acedia System checks that your action was not eligible for the reward. Please arrange the host's work and life reasonably.”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 13:54:00
Original text:
Whatever, its not like there was any loss.
Corrected text:
Whatever, it’s not like there was any loss.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:55
Original text:
There is no loss.
Corrected text:
Whatever, its not like there was any loss.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:11:37
Original text:
There is no gain.
Corrected text:
There is no loss.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:11:58
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The artifacts are good.
Corrected text:
This artifact is really good.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:01
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This Deep-Sea Heart Talisman only had an effect, increasing health and mana regeneration.
Corrected text:
This Deep-Sea Heart Talisman only had one effect, increasing health and mana regeneration.
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Corrected by: richard-busta , 2022-06-06 11:09:43
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Basically, if you couldnt kill him fast enough, he would recover.
Corrected text:
Basically, if you couldn't kill him fast enough, he would recover.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:04
Original text:
The effect is basically; unless you can kill him in a few seconds, he will recover.
Corrected text:
Basically, if you couldnt kill him fast enough, he would recover.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-28 11:19:44
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The effect is basically; unless you can kill him in seconds, you can't kill him.
Corrected text:
The effect is basically; unless you can kill him in a few seconds, he will recover.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-22 16:27:59
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“Although you are not smart enough, and got no magic talent, there are many jobs that only require you to work hard.”
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“Although you are not smart enough, and have no magic talent, there are many jobs that only require you to work hard.”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-19 18:20:13
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“I think you have a workout, and also can do it well, because your heart is willing to help Your Majesty, right?”
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“I think you have the ability, and also can do it well, because your heart is willing to help Your Majesty, right?”
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:12
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“And don’t worry; even if you make the occasional mistake, you can be an excellent minister as long as you keep trying. Commit yourself to Her Majesty's service!”
Corrected text:
“And don’t worry; even if you make a mistake, you can be an excellent minister as long as you keep trying. Commit yourself to Her Majesty the Empress!”
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:07
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Her voice was seductive
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Her voice was gentle.
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Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:42:36
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Sister, you are hurting me!
Corrected text:
Sister, why must you do this to me!
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Corrected by: Brandon-Pittman , 2022-03-25 09:31:45
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His sister was good, just too loyal to His Majesty.
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His sister was good, just too loyal to her Majesty.
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Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:42:39
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With her character, she will keep persuading until he agrees.
Corrected text:
With her character, she will keep nagging until he agrees.
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Corrected by: Darin-Stephen , 2022-05-29 18:22:31
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She's not annoying, she is really annoying !
Corrected text:
She's not just annoying, she is really annoying !
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-19 10:52:20
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She's not annoying, I'm annoying!
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She's not annoying, she is really annoying !
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Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:42:51
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So he must think about a very subtle reason for her to accept not letting herself be an official.
Corrected text:
So he must think of a very subtle reason for her to accept not letting himself be an official.
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Corrected by: Darin-Stephen , 2022-05-29 18:22:34
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“Sister, you know me, I have not been very capable from childhood.”
Corrected text:
“Sister, you know me, I have not been very capable since childhood.”
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:42:56
Original text:
“Sister, you know me, I have not been patient from my childhood.”
Corrected text:
“Sister, you know me, I have not been very capable from childhood.”
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Corrected by: Darin-Stephen , 2022-05-29 18:22:37
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“Becoming an official, any wrong move will bring loss to the empire, I dont want to damage our glorious empire, and disappoint the queen.”
Corrected text:
“After Becoming an official, any wrong move will bring loss to the empire, I don't want to damage our glorious empire, and disappoint the queen.”
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:14
Original text:
“Becoming an official, any wrong move will bring loss to the empire, I didn’t want to damage the huge empire, and disappoint the queen.”
Corrected text:
“Becoming an official, any wrong move will bring loss to the empire, I dont want to damage our glorious empire, and disappoint the queen.”
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:42:58
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“Become an official, any wrong will bring loss to the empire, I didn’t want to hurt the huge empire, disappoint the queen.”
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“Becoming an official, any wrong move will bring loss to the empire, I didn’t want to damage the huge empire, and disappoint the queen.”
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Corrected by: Darin-Stephen , 2022-05-29 18:23:04
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“Now that the great library of the empire has been built, it has collected books from various countries, I will head there and read for the sake of the empire!”
Corrected text:
“Now that the great library of the empire was built and had collected books from various countries. I will head there and read for the sake of the empire!”
Corrected by: Darin-Stephen , 2022-05-29 18:22:41
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“Now that the great library of the empire has been built, it has collected books from various countries, I will head there and read for the sake of the empire!”
Corrected text:
“Now that the great library of the empire has been built and collected books from various countries, I will head there and read for the sake of the empire!”
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:19
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“Now that the great library of the empire has been built, it has collected books from various countries, I will go there and read for the rise of the empire!”
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“Now that the great library of the empire has been built, it has collected books from various countries, I will head there and read for the sake of the empire!”
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:22
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Especially when he said: “read for the rise of the empire!” That was so moving!
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Especially when he said: “For the sake of the empire!” That was so moving!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-18 11:55:43
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What he was thinking was so great than what on her mind.
Corrected text:
What he was thinking was so much greater than what was on her mind.
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:43:01
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What he was thinking was so greater than her.
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What he was thinking was so great than what on her mind.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:41
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The smile on Angelina's face was always there, leaning on Roger, reaching out and poking his face, jokingly said:
Corrected text:
The smile on Angelina's face was beaming. Leaning on Roger, she reached out and poked his face, she jokingly said:
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:37
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The smile on Angelina's face was always there, leaning on Roger, reaching out and poking his face, jokingly said:
Corrected text:
The smile on Angelina's face was beaming. Leaning on Roger, she reached out and poked his face, she jokingly said:
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:25
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The smile on Angelina's face was always there, leaning on Roger, reaching out and poking his face, jokingly said:
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The smile on Angelina's face was beaming. Leaning on Roger, she reached out and poked his face, she jokingly said:
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:44
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“has my brother grown up? Do you want to protect your sister in the future?”
Corrected text:
“Has my little brother grown up? Do you want to protect your sister in the future?”
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:43:05
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“My man has grown up? Do you want to protect your sister in the future?”
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“has my brother grown up? Do you want to protect your sister in the future?”
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:47
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As long as you don't interrupt my acedia, isn't it easy to protect you?
Corrected text:
As long as you don't interrupt with me being lazy, isn't it easy to protect you?
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:49
Original text:
It works!
Corrected text:
It is!
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:43:09
Original text:
The plan works!
Corrected text:
It works!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:52
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The way of acedia was so tortuous but we finally have a bright future!
Corrected text:
The way of laziness was so torturous but we can finally have a bright future!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:56
Original text:
Angelina is just a character that wouldn't give up until she reaches her goal.
Corrected text:
Angelina is a person that won't give up until she reaches her goal.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:12:58
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The simple reason is that can't let her give up.
Corrected text:
The simple reason is that she can't let herself give up.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:01
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Learning is the only thing. In the eyes of elders in any era, it's always right to read more books, isn't it?
Corrected text:
Learning is a good thing. In the eyes of elders in any era, it's always right to read more books, isn't it?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:12:56
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Smart as Angelina, but also fooled by Roger.
Corrected text:
Angelina was smart but Roger still fooled her.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:05
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The standard of the complete study is formulated by him!
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His study time would be completely made by himself!
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:11:41
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The only question is, the way to the library is an hour, maybe dangerous.
Corrected text:
The only problem is, the one hour way to the library , can be dangerous.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:08
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But he has thought about it.
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But he already had a plan about that.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:13
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As for the transmission array, it is expensive.
Corrected text:
As for the transmission array, it was expensive.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:16
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Study hard, the transmission array is necessary, that's no problem?
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To 'study hard', the transmission array is necessary so that's no problem.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:12:59
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Well, acedia is a flex thing.
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Well, acedia is a flexible thing.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:19
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The mystery capital‘s noble group, they were talking about La caps marquis: Roger Charles.
Corrected text:
The hot topic every noble in the capital was talking about, they were talking about the Marquis of La Capas, Roger Charles.
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Corrected by: Hyuang-Hung , 2022-04-18 18:38:36
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He was believed by the queen.
Corrected text:
He was trusted by the queen.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:22
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He got the artifact for a guard.
Corrected text:
He obtained a life-saving artifact.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:27
Original text:
He has a talent that nobody can see.
Corrected text:
And he had a talent nobody could see.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-25 19:17:31
Original text:
He has a talent that nobody can't see.
Corrected text:
He has a talent that nobody can see.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:29
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Necessarily, at the center of the discussion, he didn't get the treasure chest.
Corrected text:
The man at the center of this discussion was still lamenting about the loss of his daily reward.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-04 19:51:24
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As Roger was finished lamenting over his lost daily reward. Suddenly the Empress announced that the Seven Gods were banned from preaching in the Empire.
Corrected text:
As Roger was finished lamenting over his lost daily reward. Suddenly the Empress announced that the Seven Gods were banned from being preached in the Empire.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:40
Original text:
As the heat of Roger was going down, suddenly the queen announced that The seven gods were banned from preaching in the Empire.
Corrected text:
As Roger was finished lamenting over his lost daily reward. Suddenly the Empress announced that the Seven Gods were banned from preaching in the Empire.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:43
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Suddenly, everybody had many guesses.
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Everyone had their own guesses.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:50
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don't forget their analysis from time to time, Roger's success may be related to it.
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Many of them thought that the recent celebration with Roger Charles was related to it.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:13:56
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But what he considered also gave him so much heat.
Corrected text:
But what he was thinking also gave him a lot of stress.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:14:05
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The people of the empire love to listen to the rumor, what can he say?
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The citizens of the Empire love listening to rumors, what can he say?
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:11:45
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In the morning, in the palace, the political hall.
Corrected text:
In the morning, at the political hall in the palace.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:11:48
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The queen called all the ministers discussed an important matter.
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The queen called all the ministers to discuss an important matter.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:14:09
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After being forbidden from preaching the seven gods, the seventeen countries will rebel.
Corrected text:
After forbidding the preaching of the Seven Gods in the Empire, the seventeen countries will rebel.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-28 11:19:51
Original text:
After being forbidden from the seven gods, the seventeen countries will rebel.
Corrected text:
After being forbidden from preaching the seven gods, the seventeen countries will rebel.
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:43:12
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After being forbidden from the seven gods, the seventeen countries still rebel.
Corrected text:
After being forbidden from the seven gods, the seventeen countries will rebel.
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Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:43:18
Original text:
Do you have any plans? Let the seventeen countries completely submit to the Empire?
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Is there any plans? For the seventeen countries to completely submit to the Empire?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-28 11:19:48
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After what she said, the left minister spoke against:
Corrected text:
After what she said, the left minister spoke again:
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:43:21
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After she said, the left minister against:
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After what she said, the left minister spoke against:
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Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:43:29
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“The empire has internal and external troubles, how can there be time for you to slowly change? I think it should be severely punished, the people of the empire should be the first class, the obedient people of the Seventeen Kingdoms should be the second class, and the rebellious people should be classified as slaves, and I also have a plan, that is to have them shave their heads if they do not obey orders, all shaved!”
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“The empire has internal and external troubles, how can there be time for them to slowly change? I think they should be severely punished, the people of the empire should be the first class, the obedient people of the Seventeen Kingdoms should be the second class, and the rebellious people should be classified as slaves, and I also have a plan, that is to have them shave their heads if they do not obey orders, all shaved!”
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-21 09:58:21
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But three years have passed. The remnants of the Seventeen Kingdoms have been opposing to her rule, and the seven leaders encouraged them, she's afraid that people who want to surrender are very few.
Corrected text:
But three years have passed. The remnants of the Seventeen Kingdoms have been opposing to her rule, and the seven churches encouraged them, she's afraid that people who want to surrender are very few.
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:43:40
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But three years have passed. The remnants of the Seventeen Kingdoms have been opposed to her rule, and the seven leaders encouraged them, she's only afraid that people who want to surrender are very few.
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But three years have passed. The remnants of the Seventeen Kingdoms have been opposing to her rule, and the seven leaders encouraged them, she's afraid that people who want to surrender are very few.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-18 11:55:47
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If going with what Margeret saying, she's afraid that there would be much more rebel in the Seventeen Kingdoms.
Corrected text:
If going with what Margeret saying, she's afraid that there would be more rebelling in the Seventeen Kingdoms.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-18 11:55:27
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If going with what Margeret saying, she's afraid that there would be much more rebel in the Seventeen Kingdoms.
Corrected text:
If she went with what Margeret was saying, she was afraid that there would be much more rebellion in the Seventeen Kingdoms.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-18 11:55:23
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If going with what Margeret saying, she's afraid that there would be much more rebel in the Seventeen Kingdoms.
Corrected text:
If she went with what Margeret was saying, she was afraid that there would be much more rebellion in the Seventeen Kingdoms.
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:43:44
Original text:
Just obey Margert saying, she's afraid that there are no people in the Seventeen Kingdoms.
Corrected text:
If going with what Margeret saying, she's afraid that there would be much more rebel in the Seventeen Kingdoms.
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Corrected by: booho-hahaha , 2022-03-31 12:23:38
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Angelina’s thoughts are like imagination and hard to achieve.
Corrected text:
Angelina’s thoughts are like dreams and is hard to achieve.
Corrected by: booho-hahaha , 2022-03-31 12:23:35
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Angelina’s thoughts are like imagination and hard to achieve.
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Angelina’s thoughts are like dreams and is hard to achieve.
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Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:43:47
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They quarreled and didn’t have a plan.
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They quarreled and ended with no working plan.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-18 11:55:51
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The queen felt her scalp go numb. Seeing that they gradually calm down, she could only say: "Let's end it here for now, let's continue tomorrow."
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The queen felt her scalp go numb. Seeing that they gradually calmed down, she could only say: "Let's end it here for now, let's continue tomorrow."
Corrected by: Abiyyu-Harly , 2022-03-22 19:43:49
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The queen felt her scalp go numb. Seeing that they were tired, she could only say: "Let's go, let's talk about it tomorrow."
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The queen felt her scalp go numb. Seeing that they gradually calm down, she could only say: "Let's end it here for now, let's continue tomorrow."
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:35
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All the people go expect Angelina.
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All the people go except Angelina.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-28 11:19:54
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the queen asked her about some internal affairs.
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The queen asked her about some internal affairs.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-04 19:51:26
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Your Majesty likes Angelina more and more!
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Her Majesty is liking Angelina more and more!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 09:26:53
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But His Majesty didn't call her, she could only leave.
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But Her Majesty didn't call her, she could only leave.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-25 19:17:34
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“He's reading the rise of the empire, so he should be in the library.”
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“He's reading for the rise of the empire, so he should be in the library.”
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:38
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“He just read for the rise of the empire, so now he is in the library.”
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“He's reading the rise of the empire, so he should be in the library.”
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:41
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“Studied for the rise of the empire? It's rare to have this decision.”
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“Studying for the rise of the empire? It's rare to have this sort of ambition.”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-06 11:08:44
Original text:
Suddenly she threw the pan.
Corrected text:
Suddenly she threw the pen.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-25 20:23:41
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She suddenly remember what was Angelina said.
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She suddenly remember what Angelina said.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:44
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It's not too much to look up the information by yourself and bump into Roger by chance?
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It wouldn't be bad to look up some information and accidentally bump into Roger by chance, right?
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