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Edited by: anonymous, Austin-Tan, Yozakura-_, meihu-xiao, Snow-Cat, rip-qi, hossain-mohammad, TertiumX, Green-Thing, Erick-Garza, tyranoic, trek-backs, Jex89, Person-West, Stars, Quantum-Videos, Wayne-Gurit, Jorge-Luis-Alvarado, Jose-Resendiz, Junaavicii
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Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2023-05-17 12:09:48
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Chapter 4 who has such talent?
Corrected text:
Chapter 4: Who has such talent?
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:16
Original text:
"Ding, the acedia system detected that the host's words and deeds did not meet the reward conditions yesterday. Please arrange the host's work and life reasonably."
Corrected text:
"Ding, the Acedia System detected that the host's words and actions did not meet the reward conditions yesterday. Please arrange the host's work and life reasonably."
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:21
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Roger immediately grinded his teeth and felt heavy in his chest feeling rage that was about to explode. He wished he could challenge and beat the Queen of Eternal Night right now.
Corrected text:
Roger immediately grinded his teeth and felt heavy in his chest. He wished he could challenge Queen of Eternal Night right now.
Corrected by: Green-Thing , 2022-04-24 15:05:54
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Roger immediately grinded his teeth and felt heavy in his chest feeling range that about to explode. He wished he could challenge and beat the Queen of Eternal Night right now.
Corrected text:
Roger immediately grinded his teeth and felt heavy in his chest feeling rage that was about to explode. He wished he could challenge and beat the Queen of Eternal Night right now.
Corrected by: meihu-xiao , 2022-04-01 16:35:01
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Roger immediately clenched his teeth and beat his chest. He wished he could challenge the queen of eternal night.
Corrected text:
Roger immediately grinded his teeth and felt heavy in his chest feeling range that about to explode. He wished he could challenge and beat the Queen of Eternal Night right now.
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Corrected by: meihu-xiao , 2022-04-01 16:35:06
Original text:
"No, sure enough, my system reward was lost by the queen!"
Corrected text:
"No!!! Su-sure enough.... my system reward has been lost because of the queen's action!!!"
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-21 09:44:02
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I once spent entire three days doing various tasks just to find ways to keep you alive.
Corrected text:
I once spent entire three days doing various tasks just to find ways to keep you happy.
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-16 09:42:13
Original text:
I once spent an entire three days doing various tasks just to find ways to keep you alive.
Corrected text:
I once spent entire three days doing various tasks just to find ways to keep you alive.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:30
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I once spent an entire whole three days with all my strength doing various tasks just to find ways to keep you alive.
Corrected text:
I once spent an entire three days doing various tasks just to find ways to keep you alive.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:27
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I once spent an entire whole three days with all my strength doing various tasks just to find ways to keep you alive.
Corrected text:
I once spent an entire three days doing various tasks just to find ways to keep you alive.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:25
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I once spent an entire whole three days with all my strength doing various tasks just to find ways to keep you alive.
Corrected text:
I once spent an entire three days doing various tasks just to find ways to keep you alive.
Corrected by: meihu-xiao , 2022-04-01 16:35:10
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I once spent three days doing various tasks to find ways to keep you alive.
Corrected text:
I once spent an entire whole three days with all my strength doing various tasks just to find ways to keep you alive.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-21 09:44:15
Original text:
I have not failed to keep you alive, but now you're doing this to me?
Corrected text:
I have not failed to keep you happy, but now you're doing this to me?
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-16 09:42:19
Original text:
I failed to keep you alive, but now you're doing this to me?
Corrected text:
I have not failed to keep you alive, but now you're doing this to me?
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:10:53
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What a good man!
Corrected text:
What a good fellow!
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:10:59
Original text:
Roger laid flat on the bed with expressionless eyes, feeling weak, pitiful, and helpless.
Corrected text:
Roger lay flat on the bed with expressionless eyes, feeling weak, pitiful, and helpless.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-07-23 06:22:21
Original text:
I've been doing nothing, but the Queen of the Eternal Night sent a group to sneak attack on this waste of a brother, I can't handle it!
Corrected text:
I've been just lazing around, but if the Queen of the Eternal Night sent a group to sneak attack on this waste of a brother, I can't handle it!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-07-23 06:22:19
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I've been doing nothing, but the Queen of the Eternal Night sent a group to sneak attack on this waste of a brother, I can't handle it!
Corrected text:
I've been just lazing around, but if the Queen of the Eternal Night sent a group to sneak attack on this waste of a brother, I can't handle it!
Corrected by: Stars , 2022-08-20 20:21:28
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I've been doing nothing, but the Queen of the Eternal Night, sent a group to sneak attack on this waste of a brother, I cant handle it!
Corrected text:
I've been doing nothing, but the Queen of the Eternal Night sent a group to sneak attack on this waste of a brother, I can't handle it!
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:32
Original text:
I've been lazy, but the queen of the eternal night, sent a group to sneak attack on my waste brother, I can't carry it!
Corrected text:
I've been doing nothing, but the Queen of the Eternal Night, sent a group to sneak attack on this waste of a brother, I cant handle it!
Corrected by: hossain-mohammad , 2022-04-09 15:33:25
Original text:
I've been acedia, but the queen of the eternal night, sent a group to sneak attack on my waste brother, I can't carry it!
Corrected text:
I've been lazy, but the queen of the eternal night, sent a group to sneak attack on my waste brother, I can't carry it!
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Corrected by: TertiumX , 2022-04-15 19:13:39
Original text:
Forget it, that's it. Think for the best.
Corrected text:
Forget it. I should be optimistic.
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Corrected by: Wayne-Gurit , 2022-09-24 12:27:33
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This time she came to see the son of an old minister. After this visit... I'm sure I won't see her again?
Corrected text:
This time she came to see the son of an old minister. After this visit... I'm sure I won't see her again right?
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:11:02
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This time I came to see the son of an old minister. After watching it... I'm sure I won't see it again?
Corrected text:
This time she came to see the son of an old minister. After this visit... I'm sure I won't see her again?
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:28:29
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After that, he laid down deciding to sleep his day away, So what he didn't get the treasure chest for one day?
Corrected text:
After that, he laid down deciding to sleep his day away, So what if he didn't get the treasure chest for one day?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-30 17:18:00
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After that, he lay down and slept well at home, so he didn't get the treasure chest for one day.
Corrected text:
After that, he laid down deciding to sleep his day away, So what he didn't get the treasure chest for one day?
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:35
Original text:
Yes, it's just a treasure chest of the day!
Corrected text:
Yes, it's just a day!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-23 20:02:54
Original text:
Roger's state of mind gradually calmed down. Angelina saw that the light in his room was still on and pushed the door in.
Corrected text:
Roger's state of mind gradually calmed down. Angelina saw that the light in his room was still on and pushed the door open.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:11:06
Original text:
Roger's state of mind gradually calmed down here. Angelina saw that the light in his room was still on and pushed the door in.
Corrected text:
Roger's state of mind gradually calmed down. Angelina saw that the light in his room was still on and pushed the door in.
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Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:10:34
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The girl with blue hair could not help smiling helplessly when she saw her brother lying flat on the bed in his familiar posture, showing the eyes of a man who loses his dream.
Corrected text:
The girl with blue hair could not help but smile helplessly when she saw her brother lying flat on the bed in his familiar posture, showing the eyes of a man who was lost in his dreams.
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Corrected by: Jose-Resendiz , 2023-01-16 03:13:05
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This smelly brother is still so lazy even after becoming a Marquis.
Corrected text:
This smelly brother was still so lazy even after becoming a Marquis.
Corrected by: Jose-Resendiz , 2023-01-16 03:13:03
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This smelly brother is still so lazy even after becoming a Marquis.
Corrected text:
This smelly brother was still so lazy even after becoming a Marquis.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:38
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This smelly brother is still so lazy after becoming a marquis.
Corrected text:
This smelly brother is still so lazy even after becoming a Marquis.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:40:11
Original text:
This smelly brother is still so lazy after being marquis.
Corrected text:
This smelly brother is still so lazy after becoming a marquis.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:41
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"Have an early rest. Tomorrow we will hold a knighthood celebration for you. We have to get busy early in the morning!"
Corrected text:
"Have a good rest. Tomorrow we will hold a celebration of knighthood for you. We have to get ready early in the morning!"
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:11:11
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Roger's good attitude exploded again as soon as he heard it.
Corrected text:
Roger's mind exploded again as soon as he heard it.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:48
Original text:
What ceremony to celebrate, the ceremony to celebrate the loss of my treasure chest?
Corrected text:
What ceremony to celebrate, the ceremony to celebrate the loss of my daily treasure chest?
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:44
Original text:
What ceremony to celebrate, the ceremony to celebrate the loss of my treasure chest?
Corrected text:
What ceremony to celebrate, the ceremony to celebrate the loss of my daily treasure chest?
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-21 09:45:06
Original text:
Sister, why do you want to kill people‘s hearts?
Corrected text:
Sister, why do you want to kill people‘s hope?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:28:45
Original text:
He disdained to say, "it's just a celebration, let's not held it!"
Corrected text:
He disdained to say, "it's just a celebration, let's not hold it!"
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Corrected by: TertiumX , 2022-04-15 19:13:42
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He disdained to say, "it's just a celebration, let's not hold it!"
Corrected text:
He disdainfully said, "It's just a celebration, let's not hold it!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-07-24 09:30:41
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Angelina thought, "It's alright not to do it. But just in case someone says you're disrespectful to her majesty, I'm afraid she'll intervene..."
Corrected text:
Angelina said, "It's alright not to do it. But just in case someone says you're disrespectful to her majesty, I'm afraid she'll intervene..."
Corrected by: TertiumX , 2022-04-15 19:13:45
Original text:
Angelina thought, "it's OK to not do it. Just in case someone says you're disrespectful to your majesty, I'm afraid she'll intervene..."
Corrected text:
Angelina thought, "It's alright not to do it. But just in case someone says you're disrespectful to her majesty, I'm afraid she'll intervene..."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-14 11:30:53
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If someone saw Roger's smile now, they would sau it was uglier than his sister's cry
Corrected text:
If someone saw Roger's smile now, they would say it was uglier than his sister's cry.
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:19
Original text:
When anyone saw Roger's smile, it was uglier than his sister's cry
Corrected text:
If someone saw Roger's smile now, they would sau it was uglier than his sister's cry
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-28 11:19:30
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At the same time, at the palace.
Corrected text:
At the same time, in the palace.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:24
Original text:
The queen of eternal night summoned the left Prime Minister Margaret, the dean of the school of magic, the Grand Admiral of the Empire, the foreign affairs adviser, and other military ministers to jointly discuss how to deal with the affairs of the Church of the gods.
Corrected text:
The queen of eternal night summoned the left Prime Minister Margaret, the dean of the school of magic, the Grand Admiral of the Empire, the foreign affairs adviser, and other military ministers to jointly discuss how to deal with the affairs of the Church.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:09:16
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There are seven main gods in this world, each having a church.
Corrected text:
There are seven main gods in this world, each with their own church.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-21 14:58:01
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The gods were indifferent factions and groups and fought against each other endlessly.
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The gods were in different factions and groups and fought against each other endlessly.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 15:35:09
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Now, three years after the completion of the unification war, the seven God Church has successfully negotiated with the queen of eternal night, made various promises, and issued various threats. All so they could preach with-in the empire.
Corrected text:
Now, three years after the completion of the unification war, the churches of the seven Gods have successfully negotiated with the queen of eternal night, made various promises, and issued various threats. All so they could preach within the empire.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:37:57
Original text:
Now, three years after the completion of the unification war, the seven God Church has successfully found the queen of eternal night, made various promises, and various threats, just to preach of their gods in the Empire.
Corrected text:
Now, three years after the completion of the unification war, the seven God Church has successfully negotiated with the queen of eternal night, made various promises, and issued various threats. All so they could preach with-in the empire.
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:28
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Now, three years after the completion of the unification war, the seven God Church has successively found the queen of eternal night, made various promises, and made various threats, just to preach in the Empire.
Corrected text:
Now, three years after the completion of the unification war, the seven God Church has successfully found the queen of eternal night, made various promises, and various threats, just to preach of their gods in the Empire.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 10:47:19
Original text:
The queen of the eternal night did not like the gods from the depths of her heart.
Corrected text:
The Queen of the Eternal Night hated the Gods from the depths of her heart.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:09:19
Original text:
But the Church of the Seven Gods is also powerful.
Corrected text:
But the Church of the Seven Gods were too powerful.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:38:01
Original text:
But the Church of the seven gods is also powerful.
Corrected text:
But the Church of the Seven Gods is also powerful.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-28 13:53:48
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At the same time, offending them, more so than an Empire, will be a headache.
Corrected text:
It is too much trouble, to offend all of them at once, even for the Empire.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:26
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At the same time, offending them, moreso than an Empire, will be a headache.
Corrected text:
At the same time, offending them, more so than an Empire, will be a headache.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:28:32
Original text:
At the same time, offending them, more than Empire, will also be a headache.
Corrected text:
At the same time, offending them, moreso than an Empire, will be a headache.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-17 11:25:43
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She was small, her silver hair flowing down like a waterfall. She looked like some kind of demon. Her red horns and red eyes made her look beautiful, evil, and threatening.
Corrected text:
She was petite with her silver hair flowing down like a waterfall. She looked like some kind of demon. Her red horns and red eyes made her look beautiful, evil, and threatening.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:09:24
Original text:
She was a petite, silver-haired, waterfall-like hybrid devil. Her drooping red horns and red eyes made her look beautiful, evil, and threatening.
Corrected text:
She was small, her silver hair flowing down like a waterfall. She looked like some kind of demon. Her red horns and red eyes made her look beautiful, evil, and threatening.
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:32
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This is a petite, silver-haired, waterfall-like hybrid devil. Her drooping red horns and red eyes make her look beautiful, evil, and threatening.
Corrected text:
She was a petite, silver-haired, waterfall-like hybrid devil. Her drooping red horns and red eyes made her look beautiful, evil, and threatening.
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:38:55
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Margaret always liked to wear black dresses, showing off her proud figure without affection. Her eyes were wild and proud, and her mouth seemed to have a faint smile on it. There was always an indescribable temptation to her.
Corrected text:
Margaret always liked to wear black dresses, showing off her proud figure without affection. Her eyes were wild and proud. And her mouth always seemed to have a faint smile on it. There was always an indescribable temptation to her.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-04 09:53:01
Original text:
Marguerite always liked to wear black dresses, showing off her proud figure without affection. Her eyes were wild and proud, and her mouth seemed to have a faint smile on it. There was always an indescribable temptation to her.
Corrected text:
Margaret always liked to wear black dresses, showing off her proud figure without affection. Her eyes were wild and proud, and her mouth seemed to have a faint smile on it. There was always an indescribable temptation to her.
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:35
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Marguerite always liked to wear black dresses, showing her proud figure without affectation. Her eyes were wild and proud, and her mouth seemed to have a faint smile on it. There was always an indescribable temptation to her.
Corrected text:
Marguerite always liked to wear black dresses, showing off her proud figure without affection. Her eyes were wild and proud, and her mouth seemed to have a faint smile on it. There was always an indescribable temptation to her.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-31 13:12:02
Original text:
Just listen to her:
Corrected text:
Listening to her:
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:38
Original text:
"Your Majesty, I have come up with a perfect plan, that is to use the hatred among the gods to win over and resist one group. This way the Empire will allow only the three gods to preach!"
Corrected text:
"Your Majesty, I have come up with a perfect plan, that is to use the hatred of the gods against each other to win over and resist one group. This way the Empire will allow only three gods to preach!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-07-13 02:38:41
Original text:
"In this way, we take all the benefits, drive the tiger to swallow the wolf, and let the seven gods fight against eachother first then let the victorious three church regiments to resist against a foreign invasion. The Empire will concentrate on destroying the survivors of the seventeen countries!"
Corrected text:
"In this way, we take all the benefits, drive the tiger to swallow the wolf, and let the seven gods fight against each other first then let the victorious three church regiments to resist against a foreign invasion. The Empire will concentrate on destroying the survivors of the seventeen countries!"
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:09:26
Original text:
"In this way, accept the benefits, drive the tiger and swallow the wolf, and let the seven gods fight first then release the victorious three priests regiments to resist foreign invasion. The Empire will concentrate on destroying the survivors of the seventeen countries!"
Corrected text:
"In this way, we take all the benefits, drive the tiger to swallow the wolf, and let the seven gods fight against eachother first then let the victorious three church regiments to resist against a foreign invasion. The Empire will concentrate on destroying the survivors of the seventeen countries!"
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:41
Original text:
"In this way, accept the benefits, drive the tiger and swallow the wolf, and let the seven gods teach themselves to fight first, and then release the victorious three priests regiments to resist foreign invasion, and the Empire will concentrate on destroying the survivors of the seventeen countries!"
Corrected text:
"In this way, accept the benefits, drive the tiger and swallow the wolf, and let the seven gods fight first then release the victorious three priests regiments to resist foreign invasion. The Empire will concentrate on destroying the survivors of the seventeen countries!"
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:09:31
Original text:
"This is also a delaying measure. When the Empire gathers the territory of 17 countries and doubles its strength, the submission or expulsion of the Seven Gods church will be between your Majesty's thoughts!"
Corrected text:
"This is also a delaying measure. When the Empire gathers the territory of 17 countries and doubles its strength, the submission or expulsion of the Seven Gods church will be in your Majesty's hands!"
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:47
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After she finished speaking, all the ministers praised and convinced:
Corrected text:
After she finished speaking, all the ministers praised her and were convinced:
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:09:35
Original text:
What a move, to drive the tiger and swallow the wolf!
Corrected text:
What a move, driving the tiger to swallow the wolf!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:09:38
Original text:
What a slow plan!
Corrected text:
What an amazing plan!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:09:42
Original text:
Very subtle and very spicy!
Corrected text:
Very subtle and very scheming!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-28 11:19:33
Original text:
This is the variant of two peaches killing three people!
Corrected text:
This is the equivalent of killing two birds with one stone!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:12:40
Original text:
Only three places are needed, but the Church of seven countries can fight in a dogfight, and the Empire will benefit!
Corrected text:
Only three places are needed, but the Church of Seven Gods can fight in a dogfight, and the Empire will benefit!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:09:46
Original text:
This, Margaret, is worthy of being "the first poison of the Empire"!
Corrected text:
Margaret truly is worthy of being "The First Poison of the Empire"!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:28:50
Original text:
Orphaned, half-demon blood, but able to ascend to the position of& nbsp; left minister, relying on his clever little brain!
Corrected text:
Orphaned with half-demon blood, but able to ascend to the position of left minister, relying on her clever little brain!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:09:52
Original text:
Orphaned with half-demon blood, but able to ascend to the position of left minister, relying on her clever little brain!
Corrected text:
Orphaned with half-demon blood, but able to ascend to the position of the Left Minister, relying on her scheming little mind!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:28:59
Original text:
However, the queen of the eternal night did not hesitate to speak.
Corrected text:
However, the queen of the eternal night hesitated to speak.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 10:47:22
Original text:
However, the queen of the eternal night hesitated to speak.
Corrected text:
However, the Queen of the Eternal Night hesitated to speak.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:29:02
Original text:
People began to wonder. the left minister’s plan has been so perfect. Isn't your majesty satisfied?
Corrected text:
People began to wonder. the left minister’s plan seemed so perfect. Isn't your majesty satisfied?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 10:47:25
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People began to wonder. the left minister’s plan seemed so perfect. Isn't your majesty satisfied?
Corrected text:
People began to wonder. the Left Minister’s plan seemed so perfect. Isn't your Majesty satisfied?
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:51
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Margaret was puzzled, wagging her tail and looking forward to her majesty, hoping only for her praise.
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Margaret was also puzzled, wagging her tail and looking forward to her majesty, only hoping for her praise.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:54
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"Margaret, your plan was very good, but there are some things I just know."
Corrected text:
"Margaret, your plan was very good, but there are some things I just came to know of."
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:09:57
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"I just got some clues. I accidentally connected the ancient scrolls we got in the early ruins of Veronica Dynasty to spell out a creation myth completely different from the current seven God doctrine."
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"I just got some clues. I accidentally connected the ancient scrolls we found in the ruins of the Veronica Dynasty to spell out a creation myth completely different from the current seven God doctrine."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:38:03
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"The divine king... Is a guest from the ectopic side, not an indigenous God generated in our world?"
Corrected text:
"The divine king... Is a guest from the ectopic side, not an indigenous God born from our world?"
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:09:59
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"The secret Dharma association has found the birthplace of the God-King, which is a dead world swallowed into ruins. We have got some debris, which reacts to the sacred emblem of the seven gods."
Corrected text:
"The secret Dharma association had found the birthplace of the God-King, which was a dead world turned into ruins. We have collected some debris, which reacted to the sacred emblem of the seven gods."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:38:07
Original text:
"This is enough to show that the gods are indeed homologous, and their struggle is just a play, to make our world such a dead ruin!"
Corrected text:
"This is enough to show that the gods are indeed united, and their struggle is just a play in order to make our world into a dead ruin!"
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:38:57
Original text:
The dean of the school of magic suddenly realized: "the true goal among the gods is that they are acting to facilitate a harvest of faith?"
Corrected text:
The dean of the school of magic suddenly realized: "The true goal among the gods is that they are acting to facilitate a harvest of faith?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:38:09
Original text:
The dean of the school of magic suddenly realized: "the original victory among the gods is that they are acting to facilitate the harvest of faith?"
Corrected text:
The dean of the school of magic suddenly realized: "the true goal among the gods is that they are acting to facilitate a harvest of faith?"
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:03
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Margaret was also shocked: "shit, the gods deliberately let us play to drive away tigers and swallow wolves. They calculated on the tenth floor... Damn, damn, damn!"
Corrected text:
Margaret was also shocked: "Shit, the gods deliberately let us play driving the tigers to swallow the wolves. They calculated on a whole different level... Damnit, damnit, damnit!"
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:07
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If these gods are a nest of snakes and mice, treat all the nations of the world as the lamb of their faith, feed on that faith and siphons the life out of the world, where should the Empire go?
Corrected text:
If these gods were cunning snakes, treating all the nations of the world as the source of their faith, feeding on that faith and siphoning the life out of the world, what should the Empire do?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:38:12
Original text:
If these gods are a nest of snakes and mice, treat all the nations of the world as the lamb of their faith, suck blood badly and become a dead world, where should the Empire go?
Corrected text:
If these gods are a nest of snakes and mice, treat all the nations of the world as the lamb of their faith, feed on that faith and siphons the life out of the world, where should the Empire go?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 10:47:28
Original text:
Everyone looked at the queen of eternal night.
Corrected text:
Everyone looked at the Queen of Eternal Night.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 19:02:39
Original text:
Such a big event, only the queen can make a decision.
Corrected text:
For such a big event, only the queen can make a decision.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 10:47:31
Original text:
The queen of eternal night's eyes was very firm:
Corrected text:
The Queen of Eternal Night's eyes was very firm:
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 19:02:44
Original text:
"Now, there is only one path the Empire can take. That is to fight the Seven Gods Church to the end and not allowing any church to preach, to avoid us providing nourishment for the enemy!"
Corrected text:
"Now, there is only one path the Empire can take. That is to fight the Seven Gods Church to the end and not allow any church to preach. We must avoid providing nourishment for the enemy!"
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:18
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"Now, there is only one way for the Empire to go, that is to fight the Seven God church to the end and not allow church to preach, to avoid us providing nourishment for the enemy!"
Corrected text:
"Now, there is only one path the Empire can take. That is to fight the Seven Gods Church to the end and not allowing any church to preach, to avoid us providing nourishment for the enemy!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:38:15
Original text:
"Now, there is only one way for the Empire to go, that is to fight the seven God church to the end and not allow any family to preach, to avoid us providing nourishment for the enemy!"
Corrected text:
"Now, there is only one way for the Empire to go, that is to fight the Seven God church to the end and not allow church to preach, to avoid us providing nourishment for the enemy!"
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:11:14
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Her eyes were shining and burning with war.
Corrected text:
Her eyes were shining and burning with hatred.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:22
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Even if the gods want her country to do whatever they want, they have to ask her if she will allow it!
Corrected text:
If the gods wanted her country to do whatever they want, they would have to go through to her!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:25
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All the ministers said in unison, "Your Majesty is holy and bright. I am willing to follow your majesty to the end of the bloody battle!"
Corrected text:
All the ministers said in unison, "Your Majesty is holy and bright. I am willing to follow your majesty to the end."
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 20:10:28
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Dean hall sighed: "Fortunately, your majesty is superior in the strategy, otherwise we would all fall into the evil scheme of the gods."
Corrected text:
Dean Hall sighed: "Fortunately, your majesty is superior in strategy, otherwise we would all have fallen into the evil scheme of the gods."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:38:17
Original text:
Dean hall sighed: "Fortunately, your majesty is superior in the art chess, otherwise we would all fall into the evil scheme of the gods."
Corrected text:
Dean hall sighed: "Fortunately, your majesty is superior in the strategy, otherwise we would all fall into the evil scheme of the gods."
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:58
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Dean hall sighed: "fortunately, your majesty is superior to the chess, otherwise we will fall into the scheme of the gods."
Corrected text:
Dean hall sighed: "Fortunately, your majesty is superior in the art chess, otherwise we would all fall into the evil scheme of the gods."
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:00
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Unexpectedly, the queen of eternal night shook her head: "this time, I can't see through..."
Corrected text:
Unexpectedly, the queen of eternal night shook her head: "This time, it wasn't me who saw through them..."
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:06
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The ministers immediately became curious: "Your Majesty, who has such a great talent? He should be taken as a think tank!"
Corrected text:
The ministers immediately became curious: "Your Majesty, who is it that has such a great talent? He should be taken in as a strategist!"
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:09
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The queen of the eternal night couldn't help laughing when she saw each person's exploration.
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The queen of the eternal night couldn't help laughing when she saw each persons' exppresions.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-04 09:53:05
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Marguerite immediately cried out in horror, "It's impossible. That virgin with blue hair can't even use magic. How can she see through the real relationship between the gods?"
Corrected text:
Margaret immediately cried out in horror, "It's impossible. That virgin with blue hair can't even use magic. How can she see through the real relationship between the gods?"
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:13
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Marguerite immediately cried out in horror, "it's impossible. The virgin of blue hair can't even use magic. How can she see through the real relationship between the gods?"
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Marguerite immediately cried out in horror, "It's impossible. That virgin with blue hair can't even use magic. How can she see through the real relationship between the gods?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:38:21
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On the right, Angelina is in charge of internal affairs, money, and food, and on the left, Margaret is in charge of military intelligence.
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On the right, Angelina is in charge of internal affairs, finance, and agriculture, and on the left, Margaret is in charge of military intelligence.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:38:24
Original text:
The two people should never cross the river.
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The two people would never cross the river and betray the empress.
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:18
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Two people don't offend the river.
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The two people should never cross the river.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:38:27
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She was like a little tiger whose territory had been invaded and roared in her heart.
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Margaret was like a little tiger whose territory had been invaded and roared in her heart.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:21
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Now I find that you are not only the virgin, you are also a bitch!
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Now I find that you are not only a virgin, but also a bitch!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-17 11:26:42
Original text:
Did I tell you anything about the gods earlier?
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Didn't I tell you about the gods earlier?
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:35:24
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Did I talk to you about the gods earlier?
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Did I tell you anything about the gods earlier?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-17 11:26:41
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You know the relationship between the gods, but you don't remind me.
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You knew the relationship between the gods, but you didn't tell me.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 20:44:09
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Angelina, Angelina, you pretend to be gentle and kind, but you have a snake and scorpion heart inside?
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Angelina, Angelina, you pretended to be gentle and kind, but you had a snake and scorpion of a heart inside?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 20:44:13
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Hate!
Corrected text:
Hateful!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 20:44:17
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Especially hate!
Corrected text:
Especially hateful!
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Corrected by: rip-qi , 2022-04-05 09:27:29
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I lost to the lady of blue hair!
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I lost to the lady with blue hair!
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Corrected by: Person-West , 2022-06-24 17:53:16
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