Translated by: Ben-Jackson
Edited by: anonymous, Snow-Cat, Miguel-Almeida-Gomes, agung-mustafid, Xxsafirex, Phillip-Taylor, Pulse, Junaavicii
Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2023-05-20 03:47:25
Original text:
Chapter 26 Enjoying what the Queen gives
Corrected text:
Chapter 26: Enjoying What the Queen Gives
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:47:25
Original text:
Chapter 26 What the Queen gives, I enjoy what
Corrected text:
Chapter 26 Enjoying what the Queen gives
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-04 17:34:38
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Sufficient sleep finally made the feeling of being hollowed out of the body disappear.
Corrected text:
Sufficient sleep finally made the feeling of being hollowed out disappear.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:47:29
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Sufficient sleep finally made the feeling of being hollowed out of the body.
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Sufficient sleep finally made the feeling of being hollowed out of the body disappear.
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Corrected by: Pulse , 2023-05-06 08:33:37
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"The Queen is harmful... The good news is that the history of the empire is finally done, and I won't be urged to change it again!"
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"The Queen is harmful... The good news is that the history of the empire is finally done, and I won't be asked to change it again!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-06 10:42:24
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He rolled around on the bed, enjoying the comfort of his big bed.
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He rolled around on the bed, enjoying the comfort of it's soft embrace.
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Corrected by: agung-mustafid , 2022-04-23 16:08:40
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Roger spread out on the bed without a dream, staring at the ceiling in a daze.
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Roger spread out on the bed and staring at the ceiling in a daze.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:47:32
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He had already thought about several immersive short-term loafing around plans, which he could experiment with selectively.
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He had already thought about several immersive short-term loafing around plans, which he could experiment with.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-06 10:42:27
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What he need to think now is how to loaf around in the long term.
Corrected text:
What I need to think about now is how to loaf around for the long term.
Corrected by: agung-mustafid , 2022-04-23 16:08:43
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What I need to think about now is how to loaf around for the long term.
Corrected text:
What he need to think now is how to loaf around in the long term.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:47:37
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What I need to think about now is the great cause of longer-term loafing around.
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What I need to think about now is how to loaf around for the long term.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:47:40
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It turned out that only the wrong name was called, and there was no wrong nickname.
Corrected text:
It turned out that his name is the only one that changed and his nickname still remains the same.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:47:43
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This body is worthy of the name of was thee, the talent is worrying, and the training efficiency of the top-level exercises is also terrible.
Corrected text:
This body is worthy of the name waste, the talent is bad and even the training efficiency of the top-level exercises is terrible.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:47:46
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After meditating for eight hours a day and accumulating countless treasures, he can become an intermediate-level magician in about fifty years...
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He can only become an intermediate-level magician in about fifty years even if he meditated for eight hours a day and accumulated countless treasures
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Corrected by: Miguel-Almeida-Gomes , 2022-04-19 11:03:01
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Not to mention the use of an intermediate magician's strength against the gods, how could he have fifty years for the Qingteng Empire?
Corrected text:
Not to mention the use of an intermediate magician's strength against the gods, how could he sacrifice fifty years of his life for the Qingteng Empire?
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Corrected by: agung-mustafid , 2022-04-23 16:08:46
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Therefore it is impossible to cultivate in this life.
Corrected text:
Therefore it is impossible to cultivate normaly in this life.
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Corrected by: Pulse , 2023-05-06 08:37:39
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Besides, as a person who has experienced system's instant increase in spiritual power would find it difficult to accept the backward method of strengthening himself through cultivation.
Corrected text:
Besides, as a person who has experienced system's instant increase in spiritual power he found it difficult to accept the backward method of strengthening himself through cultivation.
Corrected by: agung-mustafid , 2022-04-23 16:08:49
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Besides, a person who has experienced the system's instant increase in spiritual power would find it difficult to accept the backward method of strengthening himself through cultivation.
Corrected text:
Besides, as a person who has experienced system's instant increase in spiritual power would find it difficult to accept the backward method of strengthening himself through cultivation.
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Corrected by: Pulse , 2023-05-06 08:38:13
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So the general direction is to stick to the acedia road without wavering.
Corrected text:
So the plan is to stick to the acedia road without wavering.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-04 20:23:49
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The Butterfly Effect because of that Queen, the harmful spirit, has become more and more impactful. The Empire in this world has greatly changed compared to the Empire in the game plot.
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The Butterfly Effect because of that Queen, that harmful spirit, has become more and more impactful. The Empire in this world has greatly changed compared to the Empire in the game plot.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-04 20:23:44
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The Butterfly Effect because of that Queen, the harmful spirit, has become more and more impactful. The Empire in this world has greatly changed compared to the Empire in the game plot.
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The Butterfly Effect because of that Queen, that harmful spirit, has become more and more impactful. The Empire in this world has greatly changed compared to the Empire in the game plot.
Corrected by: agung-mustafid , 2022-04-23 16:08:54
Original text:
The Butterfly Effect of the Queen, the harmful spirit, has become more and more impactful. The Empire in this world has greatly changed compared to the Empire in the game plot.
Corrected text:
The Butterfly Effect because of that Queen, the harmful spirit, has become more and more impactful. The Empire in this world has greatly changed compared to the Empire in the game plot.
Corrected by: Miguel-Almeida-Gomes , 2022-04-11 10:04:29
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The Butterfly Effect of the Queen, the harmful spirit, has become more and more impactful. The Empire in this world of this world has greatly changed compared to the Empire in the game plot.
Corrected text:
The Butterfly Effect of the Queen, the harmful spirit, has become more and more impactful. The Empire in this world has greatly changed compared to the Empire in the game plot.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:47:49
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The Butterfly Effect of the Queen, a harmful spirit, has become more and more huge. At this time, compared with the villains in the game plot, the Qingteng Empire has not changed at all.
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The Butterfly Effect of the Queen, the harmful spirit, has become more and more impactful. The Empire in this world of this world has greatly changed compared to the Empire in the game plot.
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Corrected by: Pulse , 2023-05-06 08:39:30
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But the follow-up effects can last for years to come.
Corrected text:
But the consequences could be felt for years to come.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:47:55
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But the follow-up effects, if not careful, will last for several years.
Corrected text:
But the follow-up effects can last for years to come.
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Corrected by: Phillip-Taylor , 2022-05-14 14:34:50
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The efect because releasing "History of the Green Vines Empire" to the civilian are also not small.
Corrected text:
The effect of releasing "History of the Green Vines Empire" to the civilian is also not small.
Corrected by: agung-mustafid , 2022-04-23 16:08:57
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The effects of civilians entering the dynasty and releasing "History of the Green Vines Empire" are also not small.
Corrected text:
The efect because releasing "History of the Green Vines Empire" to the civilian are also not small.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:47:57
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The effects of civilians entering the dynasty and the release of "History of the Green Vines Empire" were not small.
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The effects of civilians entering the dynasty and releasing "History of the Green Vines Empire" are also not small.
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Corrected by: Miguel-Almeida-Gomes , 2022-04-11 10:04:32
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Compared with the real world, no matter how high the degree of freedom of the game is, in the end, it is just a box with a well-designed rule.
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Compared with the real world, no matter how high the degree of freedom of the game is, in the end, it is just a well-designed code inside of a box.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:48:00
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Compared with the real world, no matter how high the degree of freedom of the game is, it is just a box with well-designed rules.
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Compared with the real world, no matter how high the degree of freedom of the game is, in the end, it is just a box with a well-designed rule.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:48:02
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All the ways to get out in the short term, the price to pay is unacceptable to Roger.
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All the ways to escape quickly have a huge price and is unacceptable to Roger.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-17 11:27:28
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He afraid that the Queen might become suspicious, and she just need to make a few legends of the Prophecy School and exposed his disguise.
Corrected text:
He's afraid that the Queen might become suspicious, and she just need to make a few legends of the Prophecy School and expose his disguise.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-17 11:27:27
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He afraid that the Queen might become suspicious, and she just need to make a few legends of the Prophecy School and exposed his disguise.
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He's afraid that the Queen might become suspicious, and she just need to make a few legends of the Prophecy School and expose his disguise.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-17 11:27:25
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He afraid that the Queen might become suspicious, and she just need to make a few legends of the Prophecy School and exposed his disguise.
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He's afraid that the Queen might become suspicious, and she just need to make a few legends of the Prophecy School and expose his disguise.
Corrected by: agung-mustafid , 2022-04-23 16:09:00
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Afraid that the Queen might become suspicious, she just found a few legends of the Prophecy School and exposed his disguise.
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He afraid that the Queen might become suspicious, and she just need to make a few legends of the Prophecy School and exposed his disguise.
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Corrected by: agung-mustafid , 2022-04-23 16:09:03
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Escaping the mystery City?
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Escape imperial City?
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Corrected by: Miguel-Almeida-Gomes , 2022-04-11 10:04:35
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Don't make a fuss, it's a chaotic world outside, and the imperial people are still fighting hatred all over the world.
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Don't make a fuss, it's a chaotic world outside, and the imperial people are still hated all over the world.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:48:19
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The kind of people who don't know how to die, only a small introduction is left in Angelina's belongings.
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He is the kind of people you don't know how they died and only a small introduction was left in Angelina's belongings.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:48:14
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Before his legend, those who dared to run around were fools!
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With his fate, those who dared to run around were fools!
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Corrected by: agung-mustafid , 2022-04-23 16:09:07
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As long as the change is what Roger wishes, he can get a random treasure chest every day.
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As long as the change is on what Roger wishes, he can get a random treasure chest every day.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-08 12:39:24
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Now the Queen and her sister have joined forces to destroy Roger's passive loafing around, waiting for the system to issue interest.
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Now the Queen and his sister have joined forces to destroy Roger's passive loafing around, waiting for the system to issue interest.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:48:22
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For example, if you struggle happily on the road you aspire to, how can you know the joy of a fish if you are not a fish?
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For example, if you struggle happily on the road you aspire to, how can you know the feeling of those who don't?
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:48:24
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For example, you women can imprison my body and trap me in that gorgeous palace, but I am still the king of the spiritual world!
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You can imprison me and trap me in that gorgeous palace, but I am still the king of my mind!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-29 20:11:03
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For example, what the Queen gives, I enjoy!
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That is to say, what the Queen gives, I enjoy!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 11:08:17
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Wait until the last line is crossed out, it sounds too much like a waste.
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Waiting until the last line is crossed out sounds too much like a waste.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 11:08:23
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Roger's next goal is to find a job that interests him in front of this cabinet minister.
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Roger's next goal is to find a job that interests him in front of the cabinet minister.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 11:08:29
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Or enter a sustainable mode of only receiving money and not working.
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Or enter a sustainable mode of only receiving money while not working.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 10:40:27
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If it fails, stop the loss and retreat back to being a waste brother.
Corrected text:
If it fails, cut your losses on time and return to being a wastrel brother.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:48:27
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If it fails, stop the loss in time and arrange a retreat to be a waste brother.
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If it fails, stop the loss and retreat back to being a waste brother.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 11:08:36
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Resolutely separated himself from the bed with difficult, get up and do something!
Corrected text:
Resolutely separated himself from the bed with difficulty, got up and left to do something!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 11:08:32
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Resolutely separated himself from the bed with difficult, get up and do something!
Corrected text:
Resolutely separated himself from the bed with difficulty, got up and left to do something!
Corrected by: agung-mustafid , 2022-04-23 18:45:48
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Resolutely separated from the bedboard successfully, get up and do something!
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Resolutely separated himself from the bed with difficult, get up and do something!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 11:08:46
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Roger was full of food and drink, the storage ring contained fifty thousand gold coins from the Queen, and he left two letters for his sister, and left the Charles House.
Corrected text:
Roger filled the storage ring, which contained fifty thousand gold coins from the Queen, with food and water, then left two letters for his sister, and left the Charles House.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 11:08:50
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He was about to start his first active loafing around as an experiment.
Corrected text:
He was about to start his first active loafing around experiment.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:48:32
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He was about to start his first active loafing around an experiment.
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He was about to start his first active loafing around as an experiment.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 11:08:54
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One of the most important points is not to be disturbed by my sister.
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One of the most important points is not to be disturbed by his sister.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 11:09:50
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Every day she asked about my score of studying, which affects my mood.
Corrected text:
Every day she asks about my score of studying, which affects my mood.
Corrected by: agung-mustafid , 2022-04-23 18:45:50
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Every day I am asked about my score of studying, which affects my mood.
Corrected text:
Every day she asked about my score of studying, which affects my mood.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 11:09:55
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My sister has been the big housekeeper for a long time, and she has already understood the mother mode early.
Corrected text:
My sister has been the big housekeeper for a long time so she understood mother mode early.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:48:35
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My sister has been the big housekeeper for a long time, and she has already understood the mother mode in advance.
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My sister has been the big housekeeper for a long time, and she has already understood the mother mode early.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-08 15:48:40
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At this time, the convenience of having two identities is reflected.
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At times like this, it's convenient having two identities.
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Corrected by: Miguel-Almeida-Gomes , 2022-04-11 10:04:44
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A letter in the name of Dior confirms that he has invited Master Charles to do some research and so on.
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A letter in the name of Dio confirms that he has invited Master Charles to do some research and so on.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 11:09:58
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The two have a great conversation about history and have a lot of common ideas.
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The two had great conversation about history and share a lot of common ideas.
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Corrected by: Miguel-Almeida-Gomes , 2022-04-11 10:04:38
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Angelina was quite relieved after hearing about it and sent someone to give Dior a generous gift.
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Angelina was quite relieved after hearing about it and sent someone to give Dio a generous gift.
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Corrected by: Pulse , 2023-05-06 08:44:26
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In his last life, for various reasons, he had been wandering without a fixed place.
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In his last life, for various reasons, he had been wandering without a home.
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Corrected by: agung-mustafid , 2022-04-23 18:45:53
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No matter how much she pampers herself, she will get married sooner or later.
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No matter how much she pampers him, she will get married sooner or later.
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Corrected by: Xxsafirex , 2022-05-01 12:13:56
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At that time, did he still need to see his brother-in-law's face?
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At that time, would he still need to see his brother-in-law's face?
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