Translated by: Ben-Jackson
Edited by: Snow-Cat, Miguel-Almeida-Gomes, Yozakura-_, YACATECT, IV_4014_ARUMUGA-DEVA-S, anonymous, trek-backs, Top-Kek, Wayne-Gurit, Junaavicii
Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2023-05-17 12:17:09
Original text:
Chapter 25 I Wouldn't Fall In Love With That Kind of Bastard
Corrected text:
Chapter 25: I Wouldn't Fall In Love With That Kind of Bastard
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:09
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"Your Majesty, if you have any dissatisfaction with Lord Brando, you can tell me."
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"Your Majesty, if you have any dissatisfaction with Lord Brando, please tell me."
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:12
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The queen changed from curiosity to doubt, she wanted to tell her a little grievance.
Corrected text:
The queen changed from curiosity to doubt, she wanted to tell Angeline, her grievance.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-01 16:52:06
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Angelina didn't explain impatiently: "Your Majesty can tell me any complain, so that if you lose your temper, you won't get angry with him again. This is conducive to the healthy development of your relationship."
Corrected text:
Angelina didn't explain impatiently: "Your Majesty can tell me any complaints, so that if you lose your temper, you won't get angry with him again. This is conducive to the healthy development of your relationship."
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:17
Original text:
Angelina didn't explain impatiently: "You and I are done complaining, and if you lose your temper, you won't get angry with him again. This is conducive to the healthy development of your relationship."
Corrected text:
Angelina didn't explain impatiently: "Your Majesty can tell me any complain, so that if you lose your temper, you won't get angry with him again. This is conducive to the healthy development of your relationship."
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:17
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The queen was said to be thinking, and turned her face away: "I'm not angry with him."
Corrected text:
The queen was thinking, and then turned her face away: "I'm not angry with him."
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:22
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"Your Majesty, we grew up together, don't pretend, you beat him out of the palace yesterday, right?"
Corrected text:
"Your Majesty don't pretend, we grew up together. I know Your Majesty chased him out of the palace yesterday right?"
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:22
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The Queen remembered that the guy was looking for a concubine and a maid, her face flushed, and she said softly, "It's not because... he made some very outrageous requests last night!"
Corrected text:
The Queen remembered that the guy was looking for a concubine and a maid, her face flushed, and she said softly, "It's not that... he just made some outrageous requests last night!"
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:25
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"Wait, Angelina, I am not understanding more and more of your words."
Corrected text:
"Wait, Angelina, I don't understand what you're talking about."
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:25
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"Please translate it first. What do you understand the transcendence requirement?"
Corrected text:
"Please tell me first. What do you think the outrageous requests is?"
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:32
Original text:
Don't look at Angelina's attitude of understanding the king. She has never practiced it, and her voice suddenly became smaller:
Corrected text:
Don't be fooled by Angelina's attitude of understanding the king. She has never experienced it too, and her voice suddenly became smaller:
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:28
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"Why did I do this with that bastard... Oh!"
Corrected text:
"Why do I have to do those kinds of things with that bastard... Oh!"
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:31
Original text:
The queen suddenly spread her hands, "Angelina, you have misunderstood, I and Ro ... and Dio are not the kind of relationship you imagined."
Corrected text:
The queen suddenly spread her hands, "Angelina, you have misunderstood, I and Ro ... and Dio are not in the kind of relationship you imagined."
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Corrected by: IV_4014_ARUMUGA-DEVA-S , 2022-04-17 10:13:12
Original text:
That's she it said.
Corrected text:
That's what she said.
Corrected by: IV_4014_ARUMUGA-DEVA-S , 2022-04-17 10:13:09
Original text:
That's she it said.
Corrected text:
That's what she said.
Corrected by: IV_4014_ARUMUGA-DEVA-S , 2022-04-17 10:13:07
Original text:
That's she it said.
Corrected text:
That's what she said.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:34
Original text:
That's what it says.
Corrected text:
That's she it said.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:38
Original text:
But thinking that Angelina is that bastard's sister, the Queen of Eternal Night is inexplicably feeling a little guilty.
Corrected text:
But thinking that Angelina is that bastard's sister, the Queen of Eternal Night inexplicably feel a little guilty.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:34
Original text:
But thinking that Angelina's real identity is that bastard's sister, the Queen of Eternal Night is inexplicably a little guilty.
Corrected text:
But thinking that Angelina is that bastard's sister, the Queen of Eternal Night is inexplicably feeling a little guilty.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:43
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Feeling guilty, she almost said the wrong name.
Corrected text:
Because of that, she almost said the wrong name.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:41
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Did I fail the prediction?
Corrected text:
Is my guess wrong?
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:38
Original text:
Angelina said earnestly: "Your Majesty, you clearly watched him distracted during the meeting, and you stayed with him in the palace so late. The book says that this is all an expression of liking."
Corrected text:
Angelina said earnestly: "Your Majesty, you were clearly distracted during the meeting busy watching him, and you stayed with him in the palace until so late. According to the book, these are all signs of love."
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:43
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"Well, you don't understand it!"
Corrected text:
"Well, you won't understand it!"
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Corrected by: Wayne-Gurit , 2022-09-25 01:25:45
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That guy was a kind of a bad person, and I got angry after staying with him for a long time. I was so angry that I blew up the big library.
Corrected text:
That guy was kind of a bad person, and I got angry after staying with him for a long time. I was so angry that I blew up the big library.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:46
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You see that such an outrageous thing happened, it only shows that I hate him very much.
Corrected text:
You see that I did such an outrageous thing, it shows that I hate him very much.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:52
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There is no liking factor.
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There is no love.
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Corrected by: Top-Kek , 2022-07-21 20:46:06
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Angelina said suspiciously: "Your Majesty, you can tell me what you have in mind, Lord Brando's talent and character are mediocre, it is the identity of a civilian, as long as you insist, the imperial people will support him to do it. The prince's..."
Corrected text:
Angelina said suspiciously: "Your Majesty, you can tell me what you have in mind, Lord Brando's talent and character are mediocre, it is the identity of a civilian, as long as you insist, the imperial people will support him. The prince's..."
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-04-08 19:04:26
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"He? The Prince? He also deserves it?" The Queen of Evernight sneered and said helplessly, "Angelina, you know what you know, but if you know something else, you will understand my difficulties."
Corrected text:
"Him? The Prince? Does he deserves it?" The Queen of Evernight sneered and said helplessly, "Angelina, you only know what you yourself know, but if you could discern my difficulties, you would understand why I'm like this."
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:55
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The Queen of Eternal Night can't say, I've been eavesdropping on your brother's thoughts, and he often scolds us both in turn.
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The Queen of Eternal Night can't say that she has been eavesdropping on your brother's thoughts, and he often scolds us both.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-13 14:14:19
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"The minister is dedicated to the country, and will not consider those things until the Green Vines Empire has been completely stabilized."
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"This minister is dedicated to the country, and will not consider those things until the Green Vines Empire has been completely stabilized."
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:01:58
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"So, you don't understand feelings like love, right? So why are you seeking advice from me in this regard?"
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"So, you don't understand feelings like love, right? So why are you advising me in this matter?"
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-04-08 19:04:29
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His Majesty's words are asking: why are you embarrassing me?
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Her Majesty is basically asking: why are you trying to embarrass me?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-05 16:02:06
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He is the war priest Joestar from the orc King.
Corrected text:
He is the war priest Darga from the orc King.
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Corrected by: IV_4014_ARUMUGA-DEVA-S , 2022-04-17 10:13:15
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I saw that he threw a torch, cut his wrist with a silver knife, and poured red blood into the magic circle.
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He then threw a torch, cut his wrist with a silver knife, and poured red blood into the magic circle.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-13 14:14:22
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"Goddess, your follower Joestar have sent you a loyal sacrifice!"
Corrected text:
"Goddess, your follower Joestar have sent you a sacrifice!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-13 14:14:21
Original text:
"Goddess, your follower Joestar have sent you a loyal sacrifice!"
Corrected text:
"Goddess, your follower Joestar have sent you a sacrifice!"
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:46
Original text:
"Goddess, your follower Joestar, I have sent you a loyal sacrifice!"
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"Goddess, your follower Joestar have sent you a loyal sacrifice!"
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Corrected by: Miguel-Almeida-Gomes , 2022-04-08 10:36:27
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The beautiful and majestic, goddess of war Tibera in golden armor, holding a gun in one hand and a shield in the other, cast a phantom in the air.
Corrected text:
The beautiful and majestic, goddess of war Tibera in golden armor, holding a spear in one hand and a shield in the other, cast a phantom in the air.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:48
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"Jetstar, I have felt your loyalty, it is worth commending!"
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"Joestar, I have felt your loyalty, it is worth commending!"
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:52
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In this world, priests have also considered a type of magician, who can cast powerful magic.
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In this world, priests are also considered a type of magician, who can cast powerful magic.
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Corrected by: Miguel-Almeida-Gomes , 2022-04-08 10:36:30
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Just correspondingly, if they one day abandon their belief, their end will be very miserable.
Corrected text:
On the other hand, if they one day abandon their belief, their end will be very miserable.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:02:01
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Just correspondingly, if one day one abandons their belief, their end will be very miserable.
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Just correspondingly, if they one day abandon their belief, their end will be very miserable.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:54
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"Goddess, your lamb has important news to report, about the evil empire in the east!"
Corrected text:
"Goddess, your lamb has important news to report about the evil empire in the east!"
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 16:02:04
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"Allow."
Corrected text:
"Speak."
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:48:57
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Hearing this name, a look of anger appeared on the Goddess of War's face.
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Hearing about the empire brought a look of anger on the Goddess of War's face.
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-16 20:02:48
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However, they are all foreign gods, and they also have enemies to fight against.
Corrected text:
However, they are all foreign gods out of this world, and so they also have enemies to fight against.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:49:01
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Every time you make a move in this world, it is a huge price.
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Every time they make a move in this world, they paid a huge price.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:49:06
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Currently relying only on believers, none of them are qualified to be the evil queen's opponents.
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Currently they can only rely on the believers, but none of them are qualified to be the evil queen's opponents.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:49:09
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"It's rough." The goddess of war said slowly, "Growing up in the Restoration Army and cutting leeks, this is not the level that a woman should have."
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"It's strange." The goddess of war said slowly, "Growing up the Restoration Army and cutting leeks, is not something that woman would do."
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:49:12
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"I want you to use those spies to sneak into the mysterious city, find the person who offered advice to the Evil God Queen and eradicate him... By the way, make a few more explosions, the kind that makes her flesh hurt."
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"I want you to use those spies to sneak into the mysterious city, find the person who offered advice to the Evil God Queen and kill him... By the way, make a few more explosions, the kind that makes her flesh hurt."
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:49:18
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"Follow your orders!"
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"By your orders!"
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-07 20:49:20
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"I can give you more power."
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"I will give you more power."
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Corrected by: YACATECT , 2022-04-16 17:55:28
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I, Joestar, want to donate myself to the goddess...
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I, Joestar, want to sacrifice myself to the goddess...
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