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Edited by: anonymous, GX-9900A, MoonSerenity, Otaku-046, Jito-Mitsuhide, Jorge-Luis-Alvarado, QuadraticAmoeba
Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-08-28 08:56:10
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Chapter 21: My One Wish for You Is Long Life
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Chapter 21: My One Wish for You Is A Long Life
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Corrected by: Otaku-046 , 2022-07-24 13:28:45
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Now she began to think that the description of "Ethics: none" was a little appropriate.
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Now she began to think that the description of "Ethics: none" was a little inappropriate.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-08-28 08:58:12
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[Self-analysis is a long process. Please continue to work hard to realize your life value]
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[Self-analysis is a long process. Please continue to work hard to understand yourself]
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-25 08:27:29
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[Music theory 2, Chess 3, Medicine 2, Painting 1, Calligraphy 3, Flower Arrangement 2, Tea Ceremony 3, Alchemy 2, Cooking 1, Forbidden Array 3, Tailsman Making 1, Magic Tool Refining 1]
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[Music theory 2, Chess 3, Medicine 2, Painting 1, Calligraphy 3, Flower Arrangement 2, Tea Ceremony 3, Alchemy 2, Cooking 1, Forbidden Array 3, Talisman Making 1, Magic Tool Refining 1]
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:44:20
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Leaving the system alone, the worlds will [Game plot] is the most terrible thing she would face.
Corrected text:
Leaving the system alone, the world's will [Game plot] is the most terrible thing she will face.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-25 08:27:32
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Leave the system alone, the world will [Game plot] is the most terrible thing she would face.
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Leaving the system alone, the worlds will [Game plot] is the most terrible thing she would face.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:45:02
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After all, without conflict, the story of the game can't be processed, can it?
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After all, without conflict, the story of the game can't progress, can it?
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Corrected by: QuadraticAmoeba , 2022-12-10 04:55:00
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The game creators of "The Battle of the Gods" were almost fanatic in adding a lot of crisis events.
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The game creators of "The Battle of the Gods" were almost fanatical in adding a lot of crisis events.
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Corrected by: QuadraticAmoeba , 2022-12-10 04:55:24
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In the most frightening bad ending, the Supreme Master who killed An Lan in her previous life popped for a visit and sank the whole East Divine Land with a slap.
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In the most frightening bad ending, the Supreme Master who killed An Lan in her previous life popped in for a visit and sank the whole East Divine Land with a slap.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-02 08:31:30
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She had wanted to give up treatment and wait to die. Now she saw the dawn of survival, and she felt she could struggle for her life again.
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She had wanted to give up treatment and wait to die. Now she saw a glimpse of survival and she felt she could struggle for her life again.
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Corrected by: GX-9900A , 2022-07-24 13:28:08
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[Task 2, "I think of something happy." (Reward: Light Skill+2)]
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[Task 2, "I thought of something happy." (Reward: Light Skill+2)]
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Corrected by: GX-9900A , 2022-07-24 13:28:06
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Bai Lian turned around, smiled, and said to Xiao Jinse, "Younger Martial Sister, I think of something happy."
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Bai Lian turned around, smiled, and said to Xiao Jinse, "Younger Martial Sister, I thought of something happy."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-11 00:04:52
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There was a light in her eyes. She thought it was the light from the start at the corner of Martial Sister Bai Lian's eye reaching into her heart.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-31 14:38:55
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There was an obstinacy in her eyes.
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There was no obstinacy in her eyes.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-18 22:07:31
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"Let's start!", Bai Lian slowly reaches out to Xiao Jinse.
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"Let's begin!" Bai Lian slowly reaches out to Xiao Jinse.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-24 13:27:57
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Bai Lian slowly reaches out to Xiao Jin.
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Bai Lian slowly reaches out to Xiao Jinse.
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Corrected by: Jito-Mitsuhide , 2022-07-27 08:37:32
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Looking at Xiao Jinse, who was lying on the wooden bed after exhaustion, Bai Lian smiled with relief.
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Looking at Xiao Jinse, who was lying on the wooden bed from exhaustion, Bai Lian smiled with relief.
Corrected by: Jito-Mitsuhide , 2022-07-27 08:37:30
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Looking at Xiao Jinse, who was lying on the wooden bed after exhaustion, Bai Lian smiled with relief.
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Looking at Xiao Jinse, who was lying on the wooden bed from exhaustion, Bai Lian smiled with relief.
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Corrected by: Otaku-046 , 2022-07-24 13:28:52
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Finally, Xiao Jinse's Spiritual Root grew into a fire-type middle-class Spiritual Root, and her cultivation base was promoted to the third floor of the Qi Refining Period.
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Finally, Xiao Jinse's Spiritual Root grew into a fire-type middle-class Spiritual Root, and her cultivation base was promoted to the third stage of the Qi Refining Period.
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