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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-23 14:26:09
Original text:
Bai Lian is too good!
Corrected text:
Bai Lian was too good!
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:17
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She likes Bai Lian even more now. She can't wait to snatch her from An Lan.
Corrected text:
She liked Bai Lian even more now. She couldn’t wait to snatch her from An Lan.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:20
Original text:
Yan Yue glanced at Xiao Jinse, who stood beside her and clenched her fists excitedly. This beautiful girl was An Lan's second disciple.
Corrected text:
Yan Yue glanced at Xiao Jinse, who stood beside her, and clenched her fists excitedly. This beautiful girl was An Lan's second disciple.
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Corrected by: Justin-Dobler , 2022-07-18 08:37:35
Original text:
An Lan, be a human!
Corrected text:
An Lan, don't be greedy!
Corrected by: Otaku-046 , 2022-07-15 09:37:07
Original text:
Ann Lan, be a human!
Corrected text:
An Lan, be a human!
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Corrected by: Justin-Dobler , 2022-07-22 08:08:10
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It was clearly An Lan who wanted to take a new disciple. As a result, she disappeared at the beginning of the Immortality Promotion Meeting, and she entrusted all the work to her eldest disciple, Bai Lian.
Corrected text:
It was clear An Lan wanted to take in a new disciple. As a result, she disappeared at the beginning of the Immortality Promotion Meeting, and entrusted all the work to her eldest disciple, Bai Lian.
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Corrected by: Justin-Dobler , 2022-07-24 13:28:19
Original text:
Picking up Xiao Jinse, repairing her Obsolete Spiritual Root, guiding her to cultivate…
Corrected text:
Picking up Xiao Jinse, repairing her Obsolete Spiritual Root, guiding her cultivation…
Corrected by: Justin-Dobler , 2022-07-18 08:37:39
Original text:
Pick up Xiao Jinse, repair her Obsolete Spiritual Root, guide her to cultivate…
Corrected text:
Picking up Xiao Jinse, repairing her Obsolete Spiritual Root, guiding her to cultivate…
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:22
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Where is there such an irresponsible master?
Corrected text:
Was there ever such an irresponsible master?
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:23
Original text:
Is Xiao Jinse An Lan's disciple or Bai Lian's disciple?
Corrected text:
Was Xiao Jinse An Lan's disciple or Bai Lian's disciple?
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:25
Original text:
This woman is a typical example of scum!
Corrected text:
This woman was a typical example of scum!
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Corrected by: Justin-Dobler , 2022-07-25 08:27:50
Original text:
Yan Yue wanted to punch An Lan's two face to vent her anger.
Corrected text:
Yan Yue wanted to punch An Lan's face to vent her anger.
Corrected by: MoonSerenity , 2022-07-24 13:28:23
Original text:
Yan Yue wanted to punch An Lan's two fists to vent her anger.
Corrected text:
Yan Yue wanted to punch An Lan's two face to vent her anger.
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Corrected by: Justin-Dobler , 2022-07-24 13:28:21
Original text:
The child…
Corrected text:
This child…
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:44:09
Original text:
At a young age, her Shifu was "Gone". Although she looked adamant, she secretly suffered a lot in order to support the Qiongming peak alone.
Corrected text:
At a young age, her Shifu was "gone." Although she looked adamant, she secretly suffered a lot in order to support the Qiongming peak alone.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-13 18:56:13
Original text:
At a young age, her Shifu was "Gone". Although she looked adamant, he secretly suffered a lot in order to support the Qiongming peak alone.
Corrected text:
At a young age, her Shifu was "Gone". Although she looked adamant, she secretly suffered a lot in order to support the Qiongming peak alone.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:27
Original text:
It's too cruel!
Corrected text:
This was too cruel!
Corrected by: Justin-Dobler , 2022-07-22 08:08:12
Original text:
It's too hard!
Corrected text:
It's too cruel!
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Corrected by: Justin-Dobler , 2022-07-22 08:08:15
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This was all forced onto her by An Lan!
Corrected text:
This was because everything was forced onto her by An Lan!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-16 19:56:53
Original text:
This was all forced by An Lan!
Corrected text:
This was all forced onto her by An Lan!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-16 19:56:56
Original text:
Yan Yue suddenly had the impulse to hold Bai Lian in her arms and told her gently——
Corrected text:
Yan Yue suddenly had the impulse to hold Bai Lian in her arms and tell her gently——
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Corrected by: MoonSerenity , 2022-07-24 13:28:30
Original text:
"Bai Lian, you don't have to work so hard. Come to me. I will treat you well."
Corrected text:
"Bai Lian, you don't have to work so hard. Come with me. I will treat you well."
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:32
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But she can't.
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But she couldn’t.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:35
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Yan Yue knows that Bai Lian is very self-sufficient and independent. If she rashly says that, Bai Lian will certainly refuse her.
Corrected text:
Yan Yue knew that Bai Lian was very self-sufficient and independent. If she rashly said that, Bai Lian will certainly refuse her.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:38
Original text:
But Yan Yue has other methods.
Corrected text:
But Yan Yue had other methods.
Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:37
Original text:
But Yan Yue has other methods.
Corrected text:
But Yan Yue had other methods.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:40
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Alas, it would be great if the Blood Tree Patriarch was here. Unfortunately, the Blood Tree Patriarch is just a tree. It can't walk.
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Alas, it would be great if the Blood Tree Patriarch was here. Unfortunately, the Blood Tree Patriarch was just a tree. It couldn’t walk.
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Corrected by: MoonSerenity , 2022-07-24 13:28:32
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Too bad.
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This is bad.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-24 13:28:02
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"Once it is not handled properly, the Duxian sect will have only four main peaks left!"
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"If it is not handled properly, the Duxian sect will have only four main peaks left!"
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:43
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If An Lan is provoked, it is absolutely possible that she'll destroy the Zhuyan Peak.
Corrected text:
If An Lan is provoked, it was possible that she would destroy the entire Zhuyan Peak.
Corrected by: Otaku-046 , 2022-07-15 09:37:15
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If An Lan is provoked, she is absolutely possible to destroy the Zhuyan mountain.
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If An Lan is provoked, it is absolutely possible that she'll destroy the Zhuyan mountain.
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Corrected by: Justin-Dobler , 2022-07-22 08:11:06
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Jue Yunzi rushed out of the hall before he even had time to wear his shoes. When he was going down the mountain, he suddenly remembered that he alone might not be able to stop his younger Martial Sister Yan Yue. He had no choice but turned to call Gaoyi and others.
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Jue Yunzi rushed out of the hall before he even had time to wear his shoes. When he was going down the mountain, he suddenly remembered that he alone might not be able to stop his younger Martial Sister Yan Yue. He had no choice but turned to call Gaoyi and the others.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-17 21:43:39
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"Sect leader, is something happened?"
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"Sect leader, did something happen?"
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:45
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From the day the former sect leader of the Duxian sect picked up An Lan from the outside, the Duxian sect has not been quiet for a year!
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From the day the former sect leader of the Duxian sect picked up An Lan from the outside, the Duxian sect had not been quiet for a year!
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-08-28 08:52:54
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The doorkeeper replied, "Master has gone to the mediation tree."
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The doorkeeper replied, "Master has gone to the meditation tree."
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:48
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That is a place for punishing disciples who make mistakes.
Corrected text:
That was a place for punishing disciples who make mistakes.
Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:46
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That is a place for punishing disciples who make mistakes.
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That was a place for punishing disciples who make mistakes.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-16 19:57:00
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He was afraid that Yan Yue would hang Bai Lian up in a rage and beat her with blood all over her body.
Corrected text:
He was afraid that Yan Yue would hang Bai Lian up in a rage and beat her until her body was bloodied.
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Corrected by: QuadraticAmoeba , 2022-12-10 04:52:10
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Jue Yunzi' felt a headache as soon as he thought of this picture. If there were no forbidden arrays everywhere in the Zhuyan Peak, he would be able to go to the mediation tree in one step to stop Yan Yue.
Corrected text:
Jue Yunzi felt a headache coming on as soon as he thought of this picture. If not for there being forbidden arrays everywhere in the Zhuyan Peak, he would have been able to go to the mediation tree in one step to stop Yan Yue.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-16 19:57:03
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However, it didn't take Jue Yunzi a few minutes to climb the mountain.
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However, it didn't take Jue Yunzi more than a few minutes to climb the mountain.
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Corrected by: Justin-Dobler , 2022-07-22 08:11:08
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The sound was loud and clear.
Corrected text:
The shout was loud and clear.
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Corrected by: Justin-Dobler , 2022-07-22 08:11:11
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"The sect leader?"
Corrected text:
"Sect leader?"
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Corrected by: Otaku-046 , 2022-07-15 09:37:24
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Yan Yue, who was quietly watching Bai Lian and Wen Ren Ya Le "Close the relationship", turned slowly, and saw Jue Yunzi and others run over to her.
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Yan Yue, who was quietly watching Bai Lian and Wen Ren Ya Le "close the distance", slowly turned, and saw Jue Yunzi and others run over to her.
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Corrected by: Justin-Dobler , 2022-07-22 08:11:17
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Yan Yue snorted, "Elder Martial Brother, do you think I will punish Bai Lian?"
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Yan Yue snorted, "Elder Martial Brother, did you think I would punish Bai Lian?"
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:54
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Jue Yunzi and others looked embarrassed at her, "Well…"
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Jue Yunzi and others looked embarrassedly at her, "Well…"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-09 14:28:13
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Yanyue said, "It's not because I'm afraid of An Lan, but I really like Bai Lian. I can't bear to punish her."
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Yan Yue said, "It's not because I'm afraid of An Lan, but I really like Bai Lian. I can't bear to punish her."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-16 19:57:06
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Jue Yunzi said solemnly, "I believe younger Martial Sister Yan Yue. You will not spread this secret, right?"
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Jue Yunzi said solemnly, "I believe Younger Martial Sister Yan Yue will not spread this secret, right?"
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:58
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I won't tell anyone.
Corrected text:
She wouldn’t tell anyone.
Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:27:55
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I won't tell anyone.
Corrected text:
She wouldn’t tell anyone.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:28:00
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She is planning to turn Bai Lian into her own disciple. How could she do such a thing?
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She was planning to turn Bai Lian into her own disciple. How could she do such a thing?
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:28:02
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Congratulations, the Duxian sect has weathered a crisis!
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Congratulations, the Duxian sect had weathered this crisis!
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:28:05
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The three options were confessing, encouraging Wen Ren Ya Le, and fooling around. The most important thing is that the task rewards for the three options are all skill points!
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The three options were confessing, encouraging Wen Ren Ya Le, and fooling around. The most important thing was that the task rewards for the three options were all skill points!
Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:28:04
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The three options were confessing, encouraging Wen Ren Ya Le, and fooling around. The most important thing is that the task rewards for the three options are all skill points!
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The three options were confessing, encouraging Wen Ren Ya Le, and fooling around. The most important thing was that the task rewards for the three options were all skill points!
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:28:10
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The system has played a new trick.
Corrected text:
The system was playing a new trick.
Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:28:07
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The system has played a new trick.
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The system was playing a new trick.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:28:13
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From an optimistic point of view, in this dangerous game world, this system is a crisis alarm in a sense. Doing tasks is equivalent to solving problems. The more difficult the problems are, the more benefits will be obtained after solving them.
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From an optimistic point of view, in this dangerous game world, this system was a crisis alarm in a sense. Doing tasks was equivalent to solving problems. The more difficult the problems, the more benefits could be obtained after solving them.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:28:19
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From this point of view, it is easy to understand that the rewards for the three tasks are all skill points—
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From this point of view, it was easy to understand that the rewards for the three tasks were all skill points—
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:28:25
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Wen Ren Ya Le is no longer a direct threat to her.
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Wen Ren Ya Le was no longer a direct threat to her.
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The reason why it is limited to direct threats is that this is a world based on an R18 gal game. In gal games, beautiful female characters are equal to troubles!
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The reason why it was limited to direct threats was that this was a world based on an R18 gal game. In gal games, beautiful female characters were always equal to trouble!
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:29:17
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Of course, she dares not confess.
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Of course, she didn’t dare to confess.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:29:48
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The variety of death endings made Bai Lian wary.
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The various death endings made Bai Lian wary.
Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:29:23
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The variety of death endings made Bai Lian wary.
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The various death endings made Bai Lian wary.
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-07-20 12:30:08
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"Younger Martial Sister Wen Ren Ya Le, the so-called cultivation is finding the truth. The truth is the true self. Constantly surpassing oneself is the essence of cultivation…"
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"Younger Martial Sister Wen Ren Ya Le, the so-called cultivation is finding the truth. The truth is the true itself. Constantly surpassing oneself is the essence of cultivation…"
Corrected by: Otaku-046 , 2022-07-15 09:37:30
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"Younger Martial Sister Wen Ren Ya Le, the so-called cultivation is finding the truth. The truth is the true self. Constantly surpaschant oneself is the essence of cultivation…"
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"Younger Martial Sister Wen Ren Ya Le, the so-called cultivation is finding the truth. The truth is the true self. Constantly surpassing oneself is the essence of cultivation…"
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:29:48
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But she was so cruel to Martial Sister Bai Lian. She is really a bad woman!
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But she was so cruel to Martial Sister Bai Lian. She was really a bad woman!
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:29:48
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She is not worthy of Martial Sister Bai Lian.
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She was not worthy of Martial Sister Bai Lian.
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Wen Ren Ya Le decided to improve herself. One day, she will have the courage to say what she wants.
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Wen Ren Ya Le decided to improve herself. One day, she would have the courage to say what she wanted to her.
Corrected by: Otaku-046 , 2022-07-15 09:37:34
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Wen Ren Ya Le decides to improve herself. One day, she will have the courage to say what she wants.
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Wen Ren Ya Le decided to improve herself. One day, she will have the courage to say what she wants.
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Corrected by: Otaku-046 , 2022-07-15 09:37:36
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"Shifu, Martial Sister Bai Lian has gone far." Wen Ren Ya Le said.
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"Shifu, Martial Sister Bai Lian has gone away." Wen Ren Ya Le said.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:29:48
Original text:
This is strange.
Corrected text:
This was strange.
Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-11-23 14:29:48
Original text:
This is strange.
Corrected text:
This was strange.
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