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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:17:51
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The Queen of Eternal Night listened to his heart carefully and found that her heart was the same...
Corrected text:
The Queen of Eternal Night listened to his heart carefully and found that he truly meant it...
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:17:54
Original text:
I couldn't get used to it.
Corrected text:
She couldn't get used to it.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:17:57
Original text:
Although "New Arcane" was announced to the public, she followed Roger's suggestion and didn't introduce too much, but said that it was a platform specially prepared for magicians to explore more possibilities for magic.
Corrected text:
Although "New Arcane" was announced to the public, she followed Roger's suggestion and didn't introduce it too much, and just said that it was a platform specially prepared for magicians to explore more possibilities for magic.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:18:01
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Then there is the unique subscription method developed by the Queen of Eternal Night for "New Arcane".
Corrected text:
Then she talked about the unique subscription method developed by the Queen of Eternal Night for "New Arcane".
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:18:06
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Then it was gone.
Corrected text:
And that's about it.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:18:16
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Before and after they paid so much for this magazine, but they couldn't explain it well (pretend in public), which made the Queen of Eternal Night a little blue and thin.
Corrected text:
They have been and still are working so hard on this magazine, but she couldn't properly promote it (show off in public), this made the Queen of Eternal Night a little frustrated.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:18:41
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For the "New Arcane" press conference in her imagination, even if there was no friend to diss, she has to make a magic projection and tell all the advantages of the magazine.
Corrected text:
Even if there was no competition to beat, she thought she should have cast a magic projection during the "New Arcane" press conference and explain all the advantages of the magazine.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:18:44
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Then you can do some promotions and lottery activities to stimulate sales enthusiasm. Is this foolproof?
Corrected text:
Then they could have hosted some promotional events and lottery activities to stimulate sales enthusiasm. Wasn't this the perfect plan?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:18:47
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But Roger gave him a mysterious line called "Frigid style", and passed it around with a super vague introduction. She was very worried that even if she had her appeal, it would not be enough to boost sales.
Corrected text:
But Roger threw her a mysterious line called "Frigid style", and made her introduce it in a super vague way. She was very worried that despite her appeal, it would not be enough to boost sales.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:18:51
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What if the magicians don't pay the bill? What if they oppose me? What if my attempt fails in the end?
Corrected text:
What if the magicians don't adhere to it? What if they oppose me? What if my attempt fails in the end?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:23:17
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Even if the king of the world is not the king, when the whole army is on the line, there is still an element of gambling.
Corrected text:
Even if she doesn't rule the entire world, when the whole army is on the line, there is still an element of gambling.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:23:14
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Also because she is a king, she has worries and hesitations, and her heart is full of unease, so she can't talk to her courtiers, right?
Corrected text:
Also because she is a king, she has worries and hesitations, and her heart is full of unease, but she can't talk about it to her courtiers, right?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:18:59
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She just saw that there were only a few hundred magazines piled up like a hill in the center of the hall, and only half of them were lost after a long time, and she couldn't help showing a worried look.
Corrected text:
She just saw that there were only a few hundred magazines piled up like a hill in the center of the hall, and only half of them were gone after a long time, and she couldn't help showing a worried look.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:04
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Just thanks to the existence of the item transfer array, the timeliness far exceeds the logistics of the earth.
Corrected text:
Thanks to the existence of the item transfer array, the timeliness far exceeds the logistics of the Earth.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:07
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According to the original idea of the Queen of Eternal Night, anyway, the empire is not short of money now, and you can also give away the first issue for free.
Corrected text:
According to the original idea of the Queen of Eternal Night, anyway, the empire is not short of money now, and they could have given away the first issue for free too.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 10:16:51
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He is very confident in the "New Arcane" and insists that there is no need to attract users by giving it away for free. After the follow-up arrangements are launched, the Imperial Magician will definitely absolutely see the charm of this magazine.
Corrected text:
He is very confident in the "New Arcane" and insists that there is no need to attract users by giving it away for free. After the follow-up arrangements are launched, the Imperial Magicians will definitely see the charm of this magazine.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:12
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He is very confident in the "New Arcane" and insists that there is no need to promote users for free. After the follow-up arrangements are launched, the Imperial Magician absolutely cannot refuse the charm of this magazine.
Corrected text:
He is very confident in the "New Arcane" and insists that there is no need to attract users by giving it away for free. After the follow-up arrangements are launched, the Imperial Magician will definitely absolutely see the charm of this magazine.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:16
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They must be accustomed to the value of knowledge and develop the habit of paying to support some of their subsequent ideas.
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They must get accustomed to the value of knowledge and develop the habit of paying for the ideas it subsequently give them.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:19
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The most fanatical magician with good money, after he bought the "New Arcane" promoted by the Queen of Eternal Night, there are fewer and fewer magicians who are willing to buy it.
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After the most fanatical magicians with good money, had bought the "New Arcane" promoted by the Queen of Eternal Night, there had been fewer and fewer magicians willing to buy it.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:23
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I'm not cute, I'm a domineering female president, ok?
Corrected text:
I'm not cute, I'm a domineering female boss ok?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:26
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The queen said irritably, "If "New Arcane" doesn't sell and doesn't attract the attention of the magicians, I will throw you into a thin wax nest and bake for a month!"
Corrected text:
The queen said irritably, "If "New Arcane" doesn't sell and doesn't attract the attention of the magicians, I will throw you into a thin wax nest and bake you for a month!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:30
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That night, the Queen of Eternal Night only thought about how to separate Roger from little Joey without violating her principles. As a result, she forgot her original purpose of going to the Ice Cream Store.
Corrected text:
That night, the Queen of Eternal Night only thought about how to separate Roger from little Joey without violating her principles. As a result, she forgot her original purpose of going to the Ice Room.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:34
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After turning around, the Queen of Tianyongye changed her mind. Instead of placing the thin wax nest in Yinbing Zhuang, she installed it in Charles House.
Corrected text:
After she left, the Queen of Eternal Night had changed her mind. Instead of placing the thin wax nest in the Ice Room, she installed it in Charles House.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:37
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Her thinking at that time was infinitely optimistic: if the "New Arcane" developed smoothly, the scale of the magazine would expand, and the president would stay in the office every day to practice...
Corrected text:
Her thinking at that time was infinitely optimistic: if the "New Arcane" developed smoothly, the scale of the magazine would expand, and the boss would stay in the office every day to work...
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:40
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What if there is a female employee who can't think of it and wants to take a shortcut? How about an appointment to read the manuscript for one night?
Corrected text:
What if there were a female employee who couldn't wait and wanted to take a shortcut? How about an appointment to read the manuscript overnight?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:43
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Of course, the Queen of Eternal Night explained to herself that when the empire was fighting against the gods, how could you be distracted by those messy things?
Corrected text:
Of course, the Queen of Eternal Night explained to herself that, when the empire was fighting against the gods, how could he be distracted by those messy things?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:47
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The empire has only been ten years, and I have only ten years. You have to serve me wholeheartedly for the benefit of the country and the people!
Corrected text:
The empire and I only have ten more years. You have to serve me wholeheartedly for the benefit of the country and the people!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:50
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So I urge my subjects to be self-improvement, there is nothing wrong with it, this is what a good emperor with positive energy should do~
Corrected text:
So I urge my subjects to focus on self-improvement, there is nothing wrong with it, this is what a good emperor with positive energy should do~
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:23:11
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Where did Roger think of the dignified queen, and this kind of thought was hidden when giving a gift, he was naturally very grateful for the effect of the thin wax nest.
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This kind of thoughts were hidden behind her gift, but Roger was naturally very grateful to the dignified queen for the effect of the thin wax nest.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 10:16:55
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Just like the diced watermelon in the dog days, the small hot pot in the three-nine days, the pixie returned to the Pokeball (not).
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Just like the diced watermelon in the hot summer, the small hot pot in the cold winter, the pixie had returned to its Pokeball (not).
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:53
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Although Roger won't be roasted to death because of high-level fire immunity, the comfortable temperature range is also different from ordinary people.
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Roger won't be roasted to death because of his high-level fire immunity, and his comfortable temperature range is also different from ordinary people.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 10:16:58
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But Roger felt that such punishment was more merciful than those emperors who always "Raised their heads to see me"?
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But Roger felt that such punishment was more merciful than those emperors who are always deamining people.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:19:56
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So he also said half-jokingly, "So, if the sales are good, then Your Majesty will not be stingy with rewards?"
Corrected text:
So he also said half-jokingly, "So, if the sales are good, Your Majesty will not be stingy with the rewards?"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:00
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The worries of the Eternal Night Queen were unknowingly swept away by Roger's harassment.
Corrected text:
Before she knew it, the worries of the Queen of Eternal Night were swept away by Roger's harassment.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:03
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She snorted in disapproval, "When have I ever been stingy with awards? If the sales satisfy me, you can make any conditions."
Corrected text:
She snorted in disapproval, "When have I ever been stingy with awards? If the sales satisfy me, you can make any requests."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:06
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"You don't have any jokes, that minister can write it down." Roger smiled.
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"Don't make jokes, that minister can write it down." Roger smiled.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:09
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Because of the excellent modeling, many players in later generations have played the game deep into the night, and the queen is the well-deserved first heroine.
Corrected text:
Because of the excellent modeling, many players in later generations have played the game deep into the night, and the queen was the well-deserved first heroine.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 10:17:02
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The pictures have formed a massive wave of information.
Corrected text:
The pictures formed a massive wave of information.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:12
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The pictures have formed a massive impact on the information.
Corrected text:
The pictures have formed a massive wave of information.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:16
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The Queen of Eternal Night was rushed to the point where her brain was a little shaken...
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The Queen of Eternal Night was flooded to the point where her brain was a little shaken...
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:19
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Why do I still post with Angelina and Margaret?
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Why do I still pose with Angelina and Margaret?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:23
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The Queen of Eternal Night almost gnawed her silver teeth when she received the picture of the revolving lanterns flowing through Roger's head at the moment.
Corrected text:
The Queen of Eternal Night almost gnawed her silver teeth when she received the pictures of the revolving lanterns flowing through Roger's head at the moment.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 10:17:05
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This bastard's brain is like squeezing toothpaste, and colored waste thoughts are like a flood attack!!!
Corrected text:
This bastard's brain is like squeezing toothpaste, and his colored waste thoughts are like a flood attack!!!
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:28
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This bastard's brain is like squeezing toothpaste, and the thought of colored waste is like a flood attack! !!
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This bastard's brain is like squeezing toothpaste, and colored waste thoughts are like a flood attack!!!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:31
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What do I want you to do?
Corrected text:
What do you want me to do?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:35
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Give you some sunshine and it will be too bright, right?
Corrected text:
Give someone an inch and they take a mile, right?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:39
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The Queen of Eternal Night looked at Roger, who tended to be silly and distracted, and there was an inexplicable smile on the corner of his mouth, "By the way, Mrs. Mosconi will help me make the court clothes and regular clothes for the next season. Anyway, I have to wait for the efficiency results. Can Roger Aiqing help me with the style and design?"
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The Queen of Eternal Night looked at Roger, who tended to be silly and distracted, and there was an inexplicable smile on the corner of her mouth, "By the way, Mrs. Mosconi will help me make the court clothes and regular clothes for the next season. Anyway, we have to wait for the performance results. Can Roger help me with the style and design?"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:42
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[Help the Queen of Eternal Night to advise on styles and designs? That rounding up, isn't that just dressing your majesty as my thought? 】
Corrected text:
[Advise the Queen of Eternal Night on styles and designs? In summary, isn't that just dressing up Your Majesty based on my fantasies? 】
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[And during this process, can you still see His Majesty changing his clothes, wearing only close-fitting clothes in the middle, or accidentally walking away... Good! 】
Corrected text:
[And during this process, won't I be able to see Her Majesty changing her clothes, wearing only close-fitting clothes in-between, or accidentally walking out... Good! 】
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"I must share my worries with Your Majesty!" Roger agreed with a righteous face.
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"I must share Your Majesty's worries!" Roger agreed with a righteous face.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:53
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I, a boy, accompany the queen to try on clothes, and I was found out by the traditional Mrs. Mosconi. She wouldn't be angry, would she? Wouldn't she disagree?
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I, a boy, will accompany the queen to try on clothes, and it was found out by the traditional Mrs. Mosconi. She wouldn't be angry, would she? Wouldn't she disagree?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:20:56
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Although the Eternal Night Queen is not the kind of empress who is extravagant and pursues personal enjoyment, she still represents the face of the empire.
Corrected text:
Although the Queen of Eternal Night is not the kind of empress who is extravagant and pursues personal enjoyment, she still is the face of the empire.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:21:00
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Limited to the textile level of this era, even if there is magic protection, many clothes cannot be searched.
Corrected text:
Limited to the textile level of this era, even if there is magic protection, many clothes cannot be developed.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:21:04
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This has led to many luxurious dresses. The Queen of Eternal Night wears them once and then throws them away to look bright.
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This has led to many luxurious dresses. The Queen of Eternal Night wears them once and then throws them away to look smart.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:21:07
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Although Roger is a straight male aesthetic, after all, he has been nurtured by cos and cos in the Internet era, and his vision is ahead of this era.
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Although Roger has the aesthetic sense of a straight male, after all, he has been nurtured by tons of cosplays in the Internet era, and his vision is ahead of this era.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:21:10
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He recalled the classic outfits in his mind, and he came up with a lot of outfits that made Mrs. Mosconi feel amazing.
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He recalled the classic outfits in his mind, and he came up with a lot of outfits that made Mrs. Mosconi feel impressed.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 10:17:08
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"Madam, isn't Your Majesty coming to try on the clothes? No matter how good the design is, it will only be fitting if you wear it."
Corrected text:
"Madam, isn't Her Majesty coming to try on the clothes? No matter how good the design is, it can only be properly altered if she wears it."
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:21:14
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"Madam, isn't Your Majesty coming to try on the clothes? No matter how good the design is, it will only be effective if you wear it."
Corrected text:
"Madam, isn't Your Majesty coming to try on the clothes? No matter how good the design is, it will only be fitting if you wear it."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:21:21
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After waiting like this for a long time, Roger didn't see the Queen of Evernight come in to try on clothes. He couldn't wait to see the picture he was looking forward to.
Corrected text:
After waiting like this for a long time, Roger still didn't see the Queen of Eternal Night come in to try on clothes. He couldn't wait to see the picture he had in mind.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 10:17:15
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"What Lord Charles said is right, but Her Majesty has gone to the mysterious law meeting to deal with important matters. She has other arrangements here."
Corrected text:
"What Lord Charles said is right, but Her Majesty has gone to the mysterious law meeting to deal with important matters. She made other arrangements here."
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:21:29
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"Lord Charles said exactly what he said, but your Majesty has gone to the mysterious law meeting to deal with important matters. She has other arrangements here."
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"What Lord Charles said is right, but Her Majesty has gone to the mysterious law meeting to deal with important matters. She has other arrangements here."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:21:25
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The five old maids, who were about the same height as the Eternal Night Empress, but clearly in their 60s, entered the side hall and began to dress in front of Roger's interview.
Corrected text:
Five old maids, who were about the same height as the Queen of Eternal Night, but clearly in their 60s, entered the side hall and began to dress in front of Roger's eyes.
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Roger felt that his eyes were almost blind.
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Roger felt like he was about to go blind.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:21:36
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Mrs. Mosconi's habitually tense face also revealed a helpless smile, "Your Majesty said, as long as the maids dress well, she will look even better, so please continue to work hard, Sir Charles!"
Corrected text:
Mrs. Mosconi's habitually tense face also revealed a helpless smile, "Her Majesty said, as long as it looks good on the maids, she will look even better, so please continue to work hard, Sir Charles!"
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Roger felt that both the body and the spirit were greatly injured.
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Roger felt that both his body and spirit were greatly injured.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 10:17:18
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So the queen didn't try on the clothes for him to see, but let him dress up the five maids so she could look good?
Corrected text:
So the queen didn't try on the clothes for him to see, but let him dress up the five maids beautifully?
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:21:43
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So the queen didn't change her clothes to show her, and let herself dress up the five maids to look good?
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So the queen didn't try on the clothes for him to see, but let him dress up the five maids so she could look good?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:21:48
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At this moment, he suspects that the Eternal Night Queen is playing with him, however, no evidence says so!
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At this moment, he suspects that the Queen of Eternal Night is playing with him, however, he can't prove it!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:21:52
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The Queen of Eternal Night was lying on the bed, tasting the frozen fruit peeled by the maid, and after listening to Rommel's report on the situation on the front line, she saw Roger's collapsed expression.
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The Queen of Eternal Night was lying on her bed, tasting the frozen fruit peeled by the maid, and after listening to Rommel's report on the situation on the front line, she saw Roger's collapsed expression.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 10:16:47
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She snorted, "That's it? That's it? Children also want to show off in front of their superior. Who gave you the courage?"
Corrected text:
She snorted, "That's it? That's it? Children also want to show off in front of adults. Who gave you the courage?"
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She snorted, "That's it? That's it? Children also want to show off with the old lady. Who gave you the courage?"
Corrected text:
She snorted, "That's it? That's it? Children also want to show off in front of their superior. Who gave you the courage?"
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Roger was complaining nonstop, and she unconsciously learned the tone of the guy's inner little theater.
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Roger was complaining nonstop, and she subconsciously listened in on the guy's inner little theater.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:00
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Roger made a lot of complaints, and she unconsciously learned the tone of the guy's inner little theater.
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Roger was complaining nonstop, and she unconsciously learned the tone of the guy's inner little theater.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:04
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It was so much fun to see Azi, who he was reluctant and unable to refuse!
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It was so much fun to see Roger, who was reluctant but unable to refuse!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:07
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Not only LSPs like to buy skins for their wives.
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Not only LSPs like to buy clothes for their wives.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:11
Original text:
It's both eye-catching and good-looking. Thank you, Treasure Boy Roger, for the picture, I just smiled and accepted it!
Corrected text:
They're both eye-catching and good-looking. Thank you, Treasure Boy Roger, for the pictures, I'll just happily accept it!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:14
Original text:
The Queen of Eternal Night said that this wave of prostitution was successful, and she was delighted!
Corrected text:
The Queen of Eternal Night considered this wave of plunder successful, and she was delighted!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 10:17:27
Original text:
She suddenly lowered her head and ran her fingers across her long legs from her chest, proud of her curves, and whispered:
Corrected text:
She suddenly lowered her head and ran her fingers across her long legs to her chest, proud of her curves, and whispered:
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 10:17:32
Original text:
"If "New Arcane" can achieve the expected effect, it's not impossible for me to try on one or two sets of those clothes you like... I also like some of them!"
Corrected text:
"If "New Arcane" can achieve the expected results, it's not impossible for me to try on one or two sets of those clothes you like... I also like some of them!"
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:18
Original text:
"If "New Arcane" can achieve the expected effect, it's not impossible to try on one or two sets of those clothes you like... I also like some of them!"
Corrected text:
"If "New Arcane" can achieve the expected effect, it's not impossible for me to try on one or two sets of those clothes you like... I also like some of them!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:24
Original text:
Heart of beauty in everyone.
Corrected text:
Everyone like beauty.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:28
Original text:
After all, there are two stations, one is all contraband, but the other has many works that are normal and girls will like.
Corrected text:
After all, there are two categories, one is all crooked, but the other has many works that are normal and girls will like.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 10:17:36
Original text:
The old ladies were so beautiful that this wave is bubbling, so beautiful that it surpasses the times!
Corrected text:
The old ladies are so beautiful that she's getting excited, so beautiful that it surpasses the times!
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:44
Original text:
The old lady is so beautiful that this wave is bubbling, so beautiful that it surpasses the times!
Corrected text:
The old ladies were so beautiful that this wave is bubbling, so beautiful that it surpasses the times!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:47
Original text:
Her eyes flashed and flashed, revealing a hint of anger when she saw your demo.
Corrected text:
Her eyes flashed tremendously, revealing a hint of anger when she saw his demo.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:50
Original text:
She didn't realize that this is what a woman looks like to please herself.
Corrected text:
She didn't realize that this is what a woman had to look like to please him.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:53
Original text:
Someone has more and more weight in his heart, he cares about his feelings very much, and doesn't want to attract his attention all the time.
Corrected text:
Someone has more and more weight in her heart, she cares about his feelings very much, and wants to attract his attention all the time.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:22:57
Original text:
If this is not called liking?
Corrected text:
Is this not what is called liking?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:23:01
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By the blue lake, a young girl with brown curly hair and a pale complexion who looked a little unhealthy and thin was sitting under an apple tree, eagerly taking out five gold coins and lining up in front of her.
Corrected text:
By the blue lake, a young girl with brown curly hair and a pale complexion who looked a little unhealthy and thin was sitting under an apple tree, eagerly taking out five gold coins and lining them up in front of her.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-08 10:24:07
Original text:
Looking at her white-washed magic robe, the girl knew that, even though her grades were perfect and she was adnitted to Trinity College, after devoting grants, scholarships, and even most of her living expenses to those magical experiments she liked, life would still be pretty tight.
Corrected text:
Looking at her white-washed magic robe, the girl knew that, even though her grades were perfect and she was admitted to Trinity College, after devoting grants, scholarships, and even most of her living expenses to those magical experiments she liked, life would still be pretty tight.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-08 10:24:05
Original text:
Looking at her white-washed magic robe, the girl knew that, even though her grades were perfect and she was adnitted to Trinity College, after devoting grants, scholarships, and even most of her living expenses to those magical experiments she liked, life would still be pretty tight.
Corrected text:
Looking at her white-washed magic robe, the girl knew that, even though her grades were perfect and she was admitted to Trinity College, after devoting grants, scholarships, and even most of her living expenses to those magical experiments she liked, life would still be pretty tight.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-29 18:23:08
Original text:
Looking at the girl's white-washed magic robe, she knew that even though her grades were perfect, she was admitted to Trinity College. After devoting grants, scholarships, and even most of his living expenses to those magical experiments he liked, life was still pretty tight.
Corrected text:
Looking at her white-washed magic robe, the girl knew that, even though her grades were perfect and she was adnitted to Trinity College, after devoting grants, scholarships, and even most of her living expenses to those magical experiments she liked, life would still be pretty tight.
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