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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:03:01
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She holds a golden helmet, gun, and shield in her hand.
Corrected text:
She wears a golden helmet, with spear, and shield in her hand.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 11:21:51
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If the believers saw the majestic goddess of war taking off her armor, she will look so cute and delicate, probably...
Corrected text:
If the believers saw the majestic Goddess of War taking off her armor, she will look so cute and delicate, probably...
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:01:56
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If the believers saw the majestic goddess of war taking off her armor, she will look so cute and unmanned, probably...
Corrected text:
If the believers saw the majestic goddess of war taking off her armor, she will look so cute and delicate, probably...
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 11:21:48
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The goddess of war Tibera suddenly raised her eyebrows.
Corrected text:
The Goddess of War Tibera suddenly raised her eyebrows.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:01:59
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She stretched out her hand to hold the Nine Dragons Chariot and saw that the space in front of the only way ahead was distorted, and a tree man nearly three meters high appeared.
Corrected text:
She stretched out her hand to hold the Nine Dragons Chariot and saw that the space in her path was distorted, and a tree man nearly three meters high appeared.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 11:21:58
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When the tree man saw Tierra, he roared.
Corrected text:
When the tree man saw Tybella, he roared.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:02
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On its shoulders sat a beautiful and noble elf, wearing a moon-white sacrificial robe, and said coldly: "Lord Orsya asks you, why did you pretend to be her to provoke the Queen of Eternal Night?"
Corrected text:
On its shoulders sat a beautiful and noble elf, wearing a moon-white sacrificial robe, who said coldly: "Lord Orsya asks you, why did you pretend to be her to provoke the Queen of Eternal Night?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:07
Original text:
Bella showed a grieved and confused expression: "The Lord God said that we want to unite, so I invite you to fight against the Green Vines Empire together... My bad, I forgot to send you the letter I wrote."
Corrected text:
Bella showed an agrieved and confused expression: "The Lord God said that we ought to unite, so I invited you to fight against the Green Vines Empire together... My bad, I forgot to send you the letter I wrote."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:16
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The elf priest translated again: "Sir said, please don't despise her intellect Lord Taibella. You deliberately blamed him and plotted against her. She was attacked by the Queen of Eternal Night and destroyed a clone."
Corrected text:
The elf priest translated again: "Sir said, please don't despise his intellect Lady Taibella. You deliberately blamed him and plotted against her. He was attacked by the Queen of Eternal Night and lost a clone."
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 11:21:54
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Tierra snapped her fingers to stop the chariot from falling. She pretended to be surprised and asked:
Corrected text:
Tybella snapped her fingers to stop the chariot from falling. She pretended to be surprised and asked:
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 11:22:03
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The elf priest's pretty face was blushing: "Sir said, Lord Taibella, it's your win bitch, she can ignore the matter of the avatar. But since it is a united battle, as you say, then please hand over the life essence you harvested from the empire -half of it."
Corrected text:
The elf priest's pretty face was blushing: "Sir said, Lord Tybella, it's your win bitch, she can ignore the matter of the avatar. But since it is a united battle, as you say, then please hand over the life essence you harvested from the empire -half of it."
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-04-26 19:01:34
Original text:
The elf priest's pretty face was blushing: "Sir said, Lord Taibella, your bitch won, she can ignore the matter of avatars. But since it is a united battle, then please hand over the life essence you harvested from the empire -half."
Corrected text:
The elf priest's pretty face was blushing: "Sir said, Lord Taibella, it's your win bitch, she can ignore the matter of the avatar. But since it is a united battle, as you say, then please hand over the life essence you harvested from the empire -half of it."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:19
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Tybee suddenly shouted: "Orsea, don't be such a robber, why should I give you half of the life essence I harvested by myself?"
Corrected text:
Tybella suddenly shouted: "Orsy, don't be so greedy, why should I give you half of the life essence I harvested by myself?"
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 11:22:06
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But among the seven gods, Tierra ranks third in combat power, and she ranks fourth, and she really can't beat it.
Corrected text:
But among the seven gods, Tybella ranks third in combat power, and she ranks fourth, and she really can't beat it.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 11:22:09
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The tree man stared at Tierra for a long time, then turned around abruptly, and only said, "Emnetcher!"
Corrected text:
The tree man stared at Tybella for a long time, then turned around abruptly, and only said, "Emnetcher!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-19 20:02:59
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The elf priest quickly translated: "My lord said, when the day you turn into a bitch arrives, My lord will come to the scene and laugh at you!"
Corrected text:
The elf priest quickly translated: "My lord said, when the day you turn into the bitch arrives, My lord will come to the scene and laugh at you!"
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-04-26 19:01:36
Original text:
The elf priest quickly translated: "My lord said, when the day you turn into a bitch, she will come to the scene and laugh at it!"
Corrected text:
The elf priest quickly translated: "My lord said, when the day you turn into a bitch arrives, My lord will come to the scene and laugh at you!"
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 11:22:12
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"Is he this incompetent and mad?" Taibeira covered her mouth and chuckled, "I also gave Lord Olsen a message to remind your sharp ears to prepare for war. That little queen is very vengeful, woolen cloth."
Corrected text:
"Is he this incompetent and mad?" Tybella covered her mouth and chuckled, "I also gave Lord Olsen a message to remind your sharp ears to prepare for war. That little queen is very vengeful, woolen cloth."
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 11:22:15
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Tierra whistled, and the golden carriage continued on its way.
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Tybella whistled, and the golden carriage continued on its way.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 17:45:19
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The mystery capital - The North camp.
Corrected text:
The Mysterious Capital - The North camp.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:24
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The statistical work was soon completed.
Corrected text:
The statistics were soon compiled.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-20 20:13:45
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The North City Camp had a total of 5,000 city defense troops, 470 officers on temporary recuperation, and more than 1,200 staff members.
Corrected text:
The North City Camp had lost a total of 5,000 city defense troops, 470 officers on temporary recuperation, and more than 1,200 staff members.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:21
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The believers of the unknown church chose to launch a self-destruction attack at the celebration banquet, where many military leaders were present.
Corrected text:
The believers of the unknown church chose to launch a kamikaze attack at the celebration banquet, where many military leaders were present.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-26 19:01:51
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The city defense army only survived with less than 300 people.
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The city defense army survivor is less than 300 people.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:26
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The officers were stronger, and one-third of them died on the spot. Later, more than 40 wounded were compensated by believers.
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The officers were stronger, and one-third of them died on the spot. Later, more than 40 wounded were attacked by believers.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 17:45:21
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The military boss was protected by his soldiers and guards, and three people died.
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The military general was protected by his soldiers and guards, and three people died.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:29
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The military boss was protected by his soldiers and guards, and only three people died.
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The military leaders were protected by their soldiers and guards, and only three of them died.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-26 19:01:54
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The military boss was protected by his soldiers and guards, and only three people died.
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The military boss was protected by his soldiers and guards, and three people died.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:34
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Nearly half of the officers who have been trained hard have died, which can be said to be severely damaged, and the pace of military expansion will be greatly hindered.
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Nearly half of the officers who have been trained hard have died, which can be said to be severely damaging, and the pace of military expansion will be greatly hindered.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:36
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Coupled with the results of the other two self-destructions in the city, the Queen of Eternal Night was so angry that she directly smashed the place of the God of Nature, which is understandable...
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Coupled with the results of the other two attacks in the city, the Queen of Eternal Night was so angry that she directly smashed the place of the God of Nature, which is understandable...
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Corrected by: krymion , 2022-04-26 19:03:30
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Because of faith, he can kill Rozawa, who is fighting side by side, without hesitation?
Corrected text:
Because of faith, can he kill Rozawa, who is fighting side by side, without hesitation?
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 17:45:24
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The gods are disgusting and twisted things, turning people into emotionless tools.
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The gods are disgusting twisted things, turning people into emotionless tools.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-04-26 19:01:45
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Now living in the empire, he gets along with all flesh and blood, full of dreams, and living empire people. Seeing them being slaughtered by the gods like ants, he is really upset.
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Now that he is living in the empire, he gets along with all the living flesh and blood, each and everyone full of dreams. Seeing them being slaughtered by the gods like ants, he's really upset.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:40
Original text:
In confusion, time quietly passed zero.
Corrected text:
While he dealt with his conflicted thoughts, time quietly passed midnight.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-26 19:02:11
Original text:
In confusion, time quietly passed zero.
Corrected text:
In confusion, time quietly passed by.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:43
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After a long day of loafing around, he was directly shattered by the last divine power storm.
Corrected text:
After a long day of relaxedly loafing around, he was shaken by the last divine power storm.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 17:45:26
Original text:
From trying to survive to being confused about the way forward, it goes against the original intention of lying flat.
Corrected text:
From trying to survive, to being confused about the way forward, it goes against the original intention of lying flat.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:45
Original text:
From trying to survive to being confused about the way forward, goes against the original intention of lying flat.
Corrected text:
From trying to survive to being confused about the way forward, it goes against the original intention of lying flat.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:48
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As if she was expecting it, Roger's heart was very chaotic at this moment.
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As she was expected, Roger's heart was very chaotic at this moment.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:50
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Forget it, I'm very kind, so please comfort him.
Corrected text:
Forget it, I'm very kind, so let's comfort him.
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 17:45:29
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"Your Majesty, my apologies. I was lost in my mind!"
Corrected text:
"Your Majesty, my apologies. I was lost in my thoughts!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:53
Original text:
"Your Majesty, I'm sorry, I've lost my mind!"
Corrected text:
"Your Majesty, my apologies. I was lost in my mind!"
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Corrected by: wumbocombo , 2022-04-28 17:45:33
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"It doesn't matter. After all, what happened today is too terrifying. You can even throw artifacts around, and it's normal to ignore little footsteps."
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"It doesn't matter. After all, what happened today was too terrifying. You can even throw artifacts around, and it's normal to ignore little footsteps."
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Corrected by: Wayne-Gurit , 2022-09-26 01:21:13
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[What should I do, Her Majesty, she knows, won't she be angry with me? Her Majesty, she knows, won't she punish me for deceiving my ruler? Her Majesty, she knows, will she send me to the outer planes and execute me quietly? 】
Corrected text:
[What should I do, Her Majesty, she knows, won't she be angry with me? Won't she punish me for deceiving my ruler? Will she send me to the outer planes and execute me quietly? 】
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 19:02:56
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[What should I do, Your Majesty, she knows, won't she be angry with me? Your Majesty, she knows, won't you punish me for deceiving the king? Your Majesty, she knows, will not pass me to the outer plane and execute me quietly? 】
Corrected text:
[What should I do, Her Majesty, she knows, won't she be angry with me? Her Majesty, she knows, won't she punish me for deceiving my ruler? Her Majesty, she knows, will she send me to the outer planes and execute me quietly? 】
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