Translated by: Ben-Jackson
Edited by: Kastle, anonymous, Austin-Tan, sabj00, Brandon-Pittman, Yozakura-_, Snow-Cat, Daniel-Richard-Ababa, rip-qi, Supriyo-Pal, TertiumX, Byul-Kang, Erick-Garza, tyranoic, trek-backs, Jex89, Josh-Naidoo, Quantum-Videos, Junaavicii, Jose-Resendiz
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Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2022-11-10 11:23:07
Original text:
Chapter 3 I have to play with him for a while
Corrected text:
Chapter 3: I have to play with him for a while
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 09:14:47
Original text:
The most surprised was not Roger, was Angelina.
Corrected text:
The most surprised was not Roger, but Angelina.
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Corrected by: Jose-Resendiz , 2023-01-16 03:02:29
Original text:
The most surprised was not Roger but his sister, Angelina.
Corrected text:
The one who was the most surprised was not Roger but his sister, Angelina.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:10:39
Original text:
The most surprised was not Roger but was Angelina.
Corrected text:
The most surprised was not Roger but his sister, Angelina.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-05-19 12:33:25
Original text:
She knew her brother the best. Hearing that he became a marquis, was unbelievable. She was very surprised. Angelina wanted to feel happy for her brother bgut it was simply too shocking!
Corrected text:
She knew her brother the best. Hearing that he became a marquis, was unbelievable. She was very surprised. Angelina wanted to feel happy for her brother but it was simply too shocking!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-05-07 20:15:21
Original text:
She knew her brother the best. Hearing that he became a marquis, was unbelievable. She was very surprised. Angelina wanted to feel happy for her brother but it was simply too shocking!
Corrected text:
She knew her brother the best. Hearing that he became a marquis, was unbelievable. She was very surprised. Angelina wanted to feel happy for her brother bgut it was simply too shocking!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 18:05:42
Original text:
She knew her brother the most. Hearing that he became a marquis, she felt very surprised, moved, and it was very shocking.
Corrected text:
She knew her brother the best. Hearing that he became a marquis, was unbelievable. She was very surprised. Angelina wanted to feel happy for her brother but it was simply too shocking!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 14:11:58
Original text:
She was known as her brother. Hearing that he became a marquis, she felt very surprised, moved, and that it was unbelievable.
Corrected text:
She known the brother the mosy. Hearing that he became a marquis, she felt very surprised, moved, and it was very shocking
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Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:09:59
Original text:
He answers like this and your majesty said great?
Corrected text:
He answered like this and her majesty said it was great?
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:45
Original text:
It is to give my Charles family some face, give face to my dead father, and give me face!
Corrected text:
Give my Charles family some face, give face to my dead father, and give me face!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:37:54
Original text:
It is to give my Charles's family face, give a face to my dead father, give me face!
Corrected text:
It is to give my Charles family some face, give face to my dead father, and give me face!
Corrected by: sabj00 , 2022-03-24 10:57:38
Original text:
It is to give me Charles's family face, give a face to my dead father, give me face!
Corrected text:
It is to give my Charles's family face, give a face to my dead father, give me face!
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:15
Original text:
The title of marquis, she must think about it.
Corrected text:
The title of marquis, she must think about the motive behind this.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:28:24
Original text:
Your majesty treated to our family was too wonderful!
Corrected text:
Your majesty treatment of our family is too wonderful!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 18:05:46
Original text:
She thought "Her majesty treatment is treating our family too kindly!"
Corrected text:
She thought "Her majesty is treating our family too kindly!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-03 20:02:32
Original text:
Your majesty treatment of our family is too wonderful!
Corrected text:
She thought "Her majesty treatment is treating our family too kindly!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 18:05:51
Original text:
"Your majesty, I will be loyal to your country forever!"
Corrected text:
"Your majesty, I will be forever loyal to your Empire!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:28:31
Original text:
She watched the queen and kneeled, the beautiful forehead touched the ground heavily, and the back of her eyes turned red.
Corrected text:
She watched the queen and kneeled, her beautiful forehead touched the ground heavily, and her eyes turned red.
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Corrected by: Jose-Resendiz , 2023-01-16 03:05:06
Original text:
She kneeled as she watches the queen and lowered her head so low that her beautiful forehead touches the ground heavily with her eyes turning red.
Corrected text:
She kneeled as she watched the queen, lowering her head so low that her beautiful forehead touched the ground with her eyes turning red.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:25
Original text:
She kneeled as she watches the queen and lower her head so low that her beautiful forehead touches the ground heavily with her eyes turning red.
Corrected text:
She kneeled as she watches the queen and lowered her head so low that her beautiful forehead touches the ground heavily with her eyes turning red.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-01 16:34:59
Original text:
She watched the queen and kneeled, her beautiful forehead touched the ground heavily, and her eyes turned red.
Corrected text:
She kneeled as she watches the queen and lower her head so low that her beautiful forehead touches the ground heavily with her eyes turning red.
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Corrected by: Byul-Kang , 2022-04-20 18:59:25
Original text:
Her brother couldn't repay the queen, so I will do what he should do and repay the queen.
Corrected text:
Her brother couldn't repay the queen, so she will do what he should do and repay the queen.
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:27:59
Original text:
The queen came back and found his expression was to vein pain and his gratitude is not sincere at all.
Corrected text:
The queen came back from her thoughts and found Roger's expression subtly pained and his gratitude is not sincere at all.
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:28:06
Original text:
On contrary, Angelina who kneeled seemed to cry.
Corrected text:
On the contrary, it was Angelina who kneeled gratefully, seemingly on the verge of tears.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 10:50:45
Original text:
Angelina who kneeled contrary seemed to cry.
Corrected text:
On contrary , Angelina who kneeled, seemed to cry.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:18
Original text:
That's right?
Corrected text:
Is there something wrong?
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Corrected by: Josh-Naidoo , 2022-09-06 02:06:03
Original text:
Did I instead of Roger addressed my words wrong, towards your name Angelina?
Corrected text:
Did I address Angelina, instead of Roger?
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-16 09:41:48
Original text:
Did you say the wrong name, Angelina?
Corrected text:
Did I instead of Roger addressed my words wrong, towards your name Angelina?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-02 18:17:26
Original text:
Did I say the wrong name, Angelina?
Corrected text:
Did you say the wrong name, Angelina?
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:21
Original text:
No, I wouldn't make mistake, I'm talking about making Roger Marquis!
Corrected text:
No, I didn't make a mistake. I'm talking about making Roger a Marquis!
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:38:49
Original text:
Angelina, you scared me.
Corrected text:
Angelina, you're scaring me.
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:23
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Because only she can listen to Roger's heart, others never listen to the explanation of the relationship of gods and empire.
Corrected text:
Because only she can listen to Roger's heart, others can't listen to the explanation of the relationship between the gods and the empire.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-21 19:37:35
Original text:
Smart like Angelina, also unknown this.
Corrected text:
Smart people like Angelina, also don't know about this.
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:38:50
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She hopes to reveal his talent, train him carefully and then entrust him with important tasks.
Corrected text:
She hopes to reveal his talent, train him carefully, and then entrust him with important tasks.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:26
Original text:
She hopes to reveal his talent, train him carefully and then entrust him with an important task.
Corrected text:
She hopes to reveal his talent, train him carefully and then entrust him with important tasks.
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-16 09:41:54
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Maybe in a few years, the chief of her secret law meeting will be replaced.
Corrected text:
Maybe in a few years, the head of her secret agency meeting will be replaced.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 18:05:57
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Roger was so clever, but he'd rather be ridiculed as a rubbish brother, he had hidden his strength, so he had thought about that.
Corrected text:
Roger was so clever, but he'd rather be ridiculed as a rubbish brother, he had hidden his strength, so he probably had his reasons.
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Corrected by: sabj00 , 2022-03-24 10:57:41
Original text:
Maybe his strong spiritual power, not his talent, is another reason?
Corrected text:
Maybe his strong spiritual power, not his talent, has another reason?
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Corrected by: sabj00 , 2022-03-24 10:57:44
Original text:
Maybe he held the secret that would bring him so much trouble?
Corrected text:
Maybe he held a secret that would bring him so much trouble?
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:29
Original text:
Maybe he was brought up by other strong people, to keep him low-key on purpose?
Corrected text:
Maybe he was nurtured by other strong people and was kept low-key on purpose?
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Corrected by: sabj00 , 2022-03-24 10:57:49
Original text:
She faced much trouble, from weak to strong, every step walked so difficultly.
Corrected text:
She faced so much trouble, from weak to strong, every step walked was so difficult.
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Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:10:02
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As she thought, she had many reasons why he hid.
Corrected text:
As she thought, she had come to realize many reasons for why he hid.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 10:02:49
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But now, their emery were gods!
Corrected text:
But now, their enemies are gods!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-06 17:34:43
Original text:
But now, their enemies were gods!
Corrected text:
But now, their enemies were the gods!
Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:10:05
Original text:
But now, their enemies are gods!
Corrected text:
But now, their enemies were gods!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-15 19:13:26
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The queen was the strongest on earth, but facing the gods, she still felt difficulty breathing.
Corrected text:
The queen was the strongest on earth, but facing the gods, she still found it difficult to breathe.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-17 10:37:24
Original text:
The queen was the strongest on earth, but facing the gods, she still felt difficulty breathing.
Corrected text:
The queen was the strongest on earth, but facing the gods, she still felt difficult breathing.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:33:41
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Thinking about it many times, she decided not to expose his identity.
Corrected text:
Thinking about it more, she decided not to expose his identity.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-15 19:13:31
Original text:
Because she faces the gods, she should be stable.
Corrected text:
Because she has to face the gods, she needed to be firm.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 10:02:55
Original text:
The empire looked so strong, it swops many countries.
Corrected text:
The empire looked so strong, it sweeps many countries.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-17 11:27:02
Original text:
The empire was very powerful, and had swept away many countries.
Corrected text:
The empire's powerful, and it's strength has swept away many countries.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-15 19:13:29
Original text:
The empire looked very strong, it had swept away many countries.
Corrected text:
The empire was very powerful, and had swept away many countries.
Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:10:09
Original text:
The empire looked so strong, it sweeps many countries.
Corrected text:
The empire looked very strong, it had sweeped away many countries.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-06 17:34:45
Original text:
She was the queen for 3 years, but even under her strength, there were many dangers.
Corrected text:
She was the queen for 3 years, there were still many dangers even with her strength.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:28:09
Original text:
She was the queen for 3 years, even under her strength, there were many dangers.
Corrected text:
She was the queen for 3 years, but even under her strength, there were many dangers.
Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:10:13
Original text:
But as she becomes the queen for 3 years, under her strength, there were so many dangers.
Corrected text:
She was the queen for 3 years, even under her strength, there were many dangers.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-06 17:34:46
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These are the worries that kept her up at night.
Corrected text:
These worries are what kept her up at night.
Corrected by: Daniel-Richard-Ababa , 2022-04-04 10:12:53
Original text:
These are the worries that keep her up at night.
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These are the worries that kept her up at night.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 18:06:01
Original text:
But kept Roger alive, he would be the last hope of the empire!
Corrected text:
But if she kept Roger alive, he would be the last hope of the empire!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:28:36
Original text:
He should think of this as me?
Corrected text:
He should think the same as me?
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:33
Original text:
He should think the same as me?
Corrected text:
Did he come to the same conclusion as me?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-06 17:34:49
Original text:
This guy was so clever!
Corrected text:
This guy is so clever!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-06 17:34:48
Original text:
This guy was so clever!
Corrected text:
This guy is clever.
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:28:13
Original text:
So at last, she didn't explain, else a misunderstanding would happen.
Corrected text:
So at last, she didn't explain, letting the misunderstanding be.
Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:10:20
Original text:
So at last, she didn't explain, let misunderstandings happen.
Corrected text:
So at last, she didn't explain, else a misunderstanding would happen.
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:28:16
Original text:
Keeping the tacit agreement between them, one of light and one of dark, as empires' twin stars, they would solve the troubles of the empire!
Corrected text:
Keeping the tacit agreement between them, one of light and one of dark, as the empires' twin stars, they would solve the troubles of the empire!
Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:10:22
Original text:
Just keep the tacit agreement of them, one at the light and one at the dark, as empires' twin stars, solve the trouble of the empire!
Corrected text:
Keeping the tacit agreement between them, one of light and one of dark, as empires' twin stars, they would solve the troubles of the empire!
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:36
Original text:
Roger didn't know that he became the hope of the empire.
Corrected text:
Roger didn't know that he had become the hope of the empire.
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-04-09 15:33:15
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He only saw that the extremely beautiful queen suddenly blinked her eyes with deep meaning.
Corrected text:
He only saw that the extremely beautiful queen suddenly winked her eyes with deep meaning.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:33:50
Original text:
It seems she says to deal like that.
Corrected text:
Her eyes seemed to say 'deal with it'.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:33:54
Original text:
A woman who has always been high above suddenly has such a playful expression, is making him feel surprised.
Corrected text:
A woman who has always been high above suddenly has such a playful expression. Roger couldn't help but to feel surprised.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-15 19:13:34
Original text:
The pervert was very happy.
Corrected text:
The pervert was elated.
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-04-09 15:33:18
Original text:
He also blinked his eyes.
Corrected text:
He also winked his eyes.
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:33:57
Original text:
He also blinks his eyes.
Corrected text:
He also blinked his eyes.
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:28:19
Original text:
[Wait, you look like you understand me, but I don't! What deal!?]
Corrected text:
[Wait, you look like you understand me, but I don't! What's the deal!?]
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:00
Original text:
[Wait, you look so understand me, what we have a deal?]
Corrected text:
[Wait, you look like you understand me, but I don't! What deal!?]
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:40
Original text:
[I know nothing! You just give me some tips, this makes me feel unsafe…]
Corrected text:
[I know nothing and yet, you just give me some tips, this makes me feel unsafe…]
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:16:41
Original text:
Suddenly she laughs.
Corrected text:
She suddenly laughed.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:16:50
Original text:
It turns out that there is another benefit to not breaking his secret.
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It turned out that there was another benefit for not breaking his secret.
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Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:10:26
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Now he knows the contrary of the empire and gods, but only she knows about it, he didn't necessarily know what she knows, his sister also didn't know what she knows…
Corrected text:
He knew the strife betweem the empire and the gods which only she knew, but he didn't necessarily know that she knew, his sister also didn't know what she knew…
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-16 09:42:01
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This kind of complicated logic made her dance in joy, bringing a little bit of color into her life.
Corrected text:
This kind of complicated situation made her dance in joy, bringing a little bit of color into her life.
Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:10:29
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This kind of complicated logic makes her dance in joy, brings a little bit of color to her life.
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This kind of complicated logic made her dance in joy, bringing a little bit of color into her life.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:04
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She didn't talk about politics but talked about a lot of things back then.
Corrected text:
She didn't talk about politics but talked about a lot of what happened in the past.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:08
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At that time she was still a little princess, Angelina was still the eldest daughter of Duke Charles.
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At that time she was still an imature little princess and Angelina the eldest daughter of Duke Charles.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:28:41
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But the invasion of a neighboring country brings disaster to the Green Vines Empire.
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But the invasion of a neighboring country brought disaster to the Green Vines Empire.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:47
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Now they have the empire, but they couldn't turn back the time to the good days.
Corrected text:
Now, they had the empire. But they couldn't turn back time.
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:13
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Now they have the empire, but not they're not happy about it anymore.
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Now they have the empire, but they couldn't turn back the time to the good days.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-18 11:55:17
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[Sigh, i already know about these old things. Can't we talk about something new?]
Corrected text:
[Can I, as a scholar, not already know about these old things. Can't we talk about something new?]
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:50
Original text:
[Can I, as a scholar, know these old things? Can't we talk about something new? ]
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[Sigh, i already know about these old things. Can't we talk about something new?]
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Corrected by: sabj00 , 2022-03-24 10:57:52
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But she also confused what was the "scholar"?
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But she was also confused, what was a "scholar"?
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:28:23
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In addition, all the members of the Secret Law Society will stop working and investigate the relevant information of the "scholar"!
Corrected text:
In addition, all the members of the Secret Law Society will stop their current work and investigate the relevant information of the "scholar"!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:02
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Roger, who was a waste, had become Marquis of La Caps!
Corrected text:
Roger, who was a waste, had become the Marquis of Lacapas!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 10:46:59
Original text:
Roger, who was a waste, now became Marquis of La Caps!
Corrected text:
Roger, who was a waste, had become Marquis of La Caps!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 10:47:02
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Many people did not believe it!
Corrected text:
Many people could not believe it!
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 19:34:16
Original text:
Many people do not believe it!
Corrected text:
Many people did not believe it!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:53
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The Queen's name is Eternal Night, she likes the night and the stars in the sky.
Corrected text:
The Queen's name is Eternal Night, she who is like the night and the stars in the sky.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:44
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The Queen's name is Eternal Night, she who likes the night and the stars in the sky.
Corrected text:
The Queen's name is Eternal Night, she likes the night and the stars in the sky.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 10:47:11
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For example, Angelina, the right minister, is the Duke of Farah Dawn.
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For example, Angelina, the right minister, the Duke of Farah Dawn.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 10:47:08
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The left minister, Margaret, is the Marquis of Germati.
Corrected text:
The left minister, Margaret, the Marquis of Germati.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 10:47:14
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Delia, the chief of the Secret Law Society, is Viscount Moharto.
Corrected text:
The chief of the Secret Law Society, Delia the Viscount of Moharto.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-18 11:55:20
Original text:
All of which are bright stars in the sky
Corrected text:
All of which are bright stars in the sky.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 10:47:05
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These are all very bright stars in the sky.
Corrected text:
All of which are bright stars in the sky
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:56
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Bright, beautiful, and unchangeable, it is called the pearl of summer nights.
Corrected text:
Bright, beautiful, and everlasting, it was referred to as The Pearl of Summer Nights.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:33:16
Original text:
Bright, beautiful, and changeable, it is called the pearl of summer nights.
Corrected text:
Bright, beautiful, and unchangeable, it is called the pearl of summer nights.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 10:47:17
Original text:
Now, a well-known trash younger brother in the imperial capital was named Lacapas by the queen?
Corrected text:
Now, the well-known trash younger brother in the imperial capital was crowned Lacapas by the queen?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 18:04:08
Original text:
Was he deserved the name Lacapas?
Corrected text:
Did he deserve the name Lacapas?
Corrected by: TertiumX , 2022-04-15 19:13:36
Original text:
Is he also worthy of the name Lacapas?
Corrected text:
Was he deserved the name Lacapas?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-05 21:13:51
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Pigs are better!
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Pigs would be better suited!
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Corrected by: Brandon-Pittman , 2022-03-25 09:31:25
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"What, His Majesty went to Charles's house to see Sister Angelina?"
Corrected text:
"What, Her Majesty went to Charles's house to see Sister Angelina?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-04 10:13:13
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"I burst into tears. I have made countless contributions, and I am only an earl. In the end, that guy has to be named a marquis because of his sister?"
Corrected text:
"I burst into tears. I have made countless contributions, and yet I am only an Earl. In the end, that guy is named a Marquis because of his sister?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-04 10:13:04
Original text:
"I burst into tears. I have made countless contributions, and I am only an earl. In the end, that guy has to be named a marquis because of his sister?"
Corrected text:
"I burst into tears. I have made countless contributions, and yet I am only an Earl. In the end, that guy is named a Marquis because of his sister?"
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Corrected by: sabj00 , 2022-03-23 23:42:35
Original text:
"Why wasn't I born in Charles? Why wasn't my sister Angelina?"
Corrected text:
"Why wasn't I born as Charles? Why wasn't my sister Angelina?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-16 10:06:54
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"It's a showdown, and I want to rely on sister too!"
Corrected text:
"It's a showdown, and I want to rely on my sister too!"
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:38:52
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"Sister, you have to stand up, your own brother depends on you for a title..."
Corrected text:
"Sister, you have to stand up. Your own brother depends on you for a title..."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 20:42:02
Original text:
"Sister, you have to stand up, your brother depends on you for my title..."
Corrected text:
"Sister, you have to stand up, your own brother depends on you for a title..."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 20:41:58
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"Sister, you have to stand up, your brother depends on you for my title..."
Corrected text:
"Sister, you have to stand up, your own brother depends on you for a title..."
Corrected by: Brandon-Pittman , 2022-03-25 09:31:31
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"Sister, you have to stand up, my brother depends on you for my title..."
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"Sister, you have to stand up, your brother depends on you for my title..."
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:38:53
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Roger tossed and turned on his bed, he was distracted, and couldn't sleep.
Corrected text:
Roger tossed and turned on his bed. He was distracted, and couldn't sleep.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:07
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Roger tossed and turned, distracted, and couldn't sleep.
Corrected text:
Roger tossed and turned on his bed, he was distracted, and couldn't sleep.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:05
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Roger tossed and turned, distracted, and couldn't sleep.
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Roger tossed and turned on his bed, he was distracted, and couldn't sleep.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:10
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Until midnight, a new day begins.
Corrected text:
Staying awake until midnight, a new day began.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:12:13
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"System, settlement!"
Corrected text:
"System, my reward!"
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:28:26
Original text:
He just wanted to know if he was still successful to loaf around yesterday.
Corrected text:
He just wanted to know if he was still successful in loafing around yesterday.
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Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-03-13 09:14:14
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The most surprised was not Roger, was Angelina.
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The most surprised was not Roger, but was Angelina.
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Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-03-13 09:14:34
Original text:
She was known as her brother. Hearing that he became a marquis, she felt very surprised, moved, and unbelievable.
Corrected text:
She was known as her brother. Hearing that he became a marquis, she felt very surprised, moved, and that it was unbelievable.
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