Login with GoogleTranslated by: Ben-Jackson
Edited by: anonymous, Naveen-B, Austin-Tan, mondruppen, Snow-Cat, rip-qi, Erick-Garza, tyranoic, trek-backs, Soybeans-The-First, richard-busta, Jex89, Person-West, Quantum-Videos, the-Hellhound, Junaavicii, Jose-Resendiz
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-12 21:07:17
Original text:
Chapter 2 your answer was so great
Corrected text:
Chapter 2 Your answer was so great
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Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2022-11-09 01:35:00
Original text:
Chapter 2 Your answer was so great
Corrected text:
Chapter 2: Your answer was so great
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 17:10:38
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In front of Charles House.
Corrected text:
At the front of the House of Charles.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-08 10:59:26
Original text:
The Queen of eternal night teleported in, and the crowd knelt to greet her.
Corrected text:
As the Queen moved closer, everyone knelt before her.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 02:45:35
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And she was about to enter the house as a guest.
Corrected text:
As she was about to enter the house as a guest.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:40:04
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And next she was to enter the house as a guest.
Corrected text:
And she was about to enter the house as a guest.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:06:26
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And next was to enter the house as a guest.
Corrected text:
And next she was to enter the house as a guest.
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Corrected by: Jose-Resendiz , 2023-01-16 02:50:51
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She suddenly stood still in the air and didn’t move!
Corrected text:
But then she suddenly stood still in the air and didn’t move!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 03:00:23
Original text:
She suddenly stood still in the air and didn’t move!
Corrected text:
She suddenly stood stiff in the air and was on guard
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:17
Original text:
she suddenly stood still in the air and didn’t move!
Corrected text:
She suddenly stood still in the air and didn’t move!
Corrected by: richard-busta , 2022-06-06 11:09:41
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But now, she suddenly stood still in the air and didn’t move!
Corrected text:
she suddenly stood still in the air and didn’t move!
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:37
Original text:
But now, she suddenly stood in the air and didn’t move!
Corrected text:
But now, she suddenly stood still in the air and didn’t move!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 03:49:46
Original text:
Not only did she keep quiet but she also activated hundreds of protective magic sequences. Surrounded by a galaxy, her expression was quite serious.
Corrected text:
She quitely activated hundreds of protective magic barriers. Surrounded by galaxies, her expression turn quite serious.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 03:00:49
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Not only did she keep quiet but she also activated hundreds of protective magic sequences. Surrounded by a galaxy, her expression was quite serious.
Corrected text:
She quitely activated hundreds of protective magic sequences. Surrounded by the galaxies her expression turn quite serious.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:20:43
Original text:
Not only did she keep quiet but she also activated hundreds of protective magic sequences. Surrounded by a galaxy, the expression was also quite serious.
Corrected text:
Not only did she keep quiet but she also activated hundreds of protective magic sequences. Surrounded by a galaxy, her expression was quite serious.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-04 10:12:56
Original text:
Not only keep quiet but also active hundreds of protective magic sequences. Surrounded by a galaxy, the expression was also quite serious.
Corrected text:
Not only did she keep quiet but she also activated hundreds of protective magic sequences. Surrounded by a galaxy, the expression was also quite serious.
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Corrected by: Soybeans-The-First , 2022-05-16 12:00:59
Original text:
Angelina asked nervously:” What happened my queen?”
Corrected text:
Angelina asked nervously:” What happened? My queen?”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-14 11:30:39
Original text:
Angelina asked nervously:” What happened? My queen?”
Corrected text:
Angelina asked nervously:” What happened my queen?”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 03:03:01
Original text:
“You, return to the house!”
Corrected text:
“All of you, return to the house!”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-19 10:50:45
Original text:
“You return inside the house!”
Corrected text:
“You, return to the house!”
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:44:33
Original text:
“You go back to the house!”
Corrected text:
“You return inside the house!”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:26:38
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The Queen of the eternal night said in a low road. This is the first time she had encountered such a situation.
Corrected text:
The Queen of the eternal night said in a low voice. This is the first time she had encountered such a situation.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 03:51:36
Original text:
Did this world have people that could break through her spiritual barriers and send thoughts into her mind?
Corrected text:
Are there people in this world that could break through her spiritual barriers and send thoughts into her mind?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 03:10:47
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Did this world have people that could break through her spiritual barriers and send thoughts into her mind?
Corrected text:
Are there people in this world that could break through my spiritual barriers and send thoughts into my mind?
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:44:45
Original text:
Did the world have people that could break through her spiritual barriers and send sound into her mind?
Corrected text:
Did this world have people that could break through her spiritual barriers and send thoughts into her mind?
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:44:38
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Did the world have people that could break through her spiritual barriers and send sound into her mind?
Corrected text:
Did this world have people that could break through her spiritual barriers and send thoughts into her mind?
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:39
Original text:
Did the world have the people that could break through her spiritual sequences and send sound into her mind?
Corrected text:
Did the world have people that could break through her spiritual barriers and send sound into her mind?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 15:33:22
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Did the world have the people that could break through her spiritual sequences and send sound to her mind?
Corrected text:
Did the world have the people that could break through her spiritual sequences and send sound into her mind?
Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:09:47
Original text:
The world had the people that can break through her spiritual sequences and send the sound to her mind?
Corrected text:
Did the world have the people that could break through her spiritual sequences and send sound to her mind?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 03:56:21
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This powerful man didn’t appear, but quietly speaks, why?
Corrected text:
This strong expert didn’t show up, but speaking into my mind, why?
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:44:53
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This powerful man didn’t appear, but quietly spoke, why?
Corrected text:
This powerful man didn’t appear, but quietly speaks, why?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:20:45
Original text:
This strong man didn’t appear, but quietly speaking, why?
Corrected text:
This powerful man didn’t appear, but quietly spoke, why?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:20:48
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She used magic to find every movement in every place.
Corrected text:
She used magic to scan every movement in her vicinity.
Corrected by: Naveen-B , 2022-03-13 17:26:42
Original text:
Angelina also brought these people to the house, the expression was serious too.
Corrected text:
Angelina also brought these people to the house, her expression was serious too.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:20:52
Original text:
Angelina also brought these people to the house, her expression was serious too.
Corrected text:
Angelina also brought her people back to the house, her expression serious too.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 03:59:37
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The Queen of the Eternal Night was the strongest in the empire. Her strength was beyond legendary. Standing shoulder to shoulder with the gods, an invincible existence on the earthly plane, she proudly meandered with her head held up high.
Corrected text:
The Queen of the Eternal Night is the strongest in the empire. Her strength was beyond legendary. Standing shoulder to shoulder with the gods, an invincible existence on the planet, she proudly meandered with her head held up high.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 17:08:29
Original text:
The Queen of the eternal night was the strongest in the empire, her strength was beyond legend level, shoulder to shoulder with the gods, it can be called an invincible existence on earth.
Corrected text:
The Queen of the Eternal Night was the strongest in the empire. Her strength was beyond legendary. Standing shoulder to shoulder with the gods, an invincible existence on the earthly plane, she proudly meandered with her head held up high.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:05
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I hadn't seen her Majesty's guarded posture in years.
Corrected text:
She had not seen Her Majesty being on guard for years.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:02
Original text:
I hadn't seen her Majesty's guarded posture in years.
Corrected text:
She had not seen Her Majesty being on guard for years.
Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:09:49
Original text:
I hadn't seen His Majesty's guarded posture in years
Corrected text:
I hadn't seen her Majesty's guarded posture in years.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-10 17:03:12
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Teen minutes passed.
Corrected text:
Ten minutes passed.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:20:55
Original text:
It had passed ten minutes.
Corrected text:
Teen minutes passed.
Corrected by: Naveen-B , 2022-03-13 17:27:01
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Her guard was gone, and the emery didn’t appear.
Corrected text:
Her guard was gone, and the enemy didn’t appear.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:20:58
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Her guard was gone, and the enemy still hasn’t appeared.
Corrected text:
She lowered her guard, yet the enemy still hadn't appeared.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-03 21:12:16
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Her guard was gone, and the enemy didn’t appear.
Corrected text:
Her guard was gone, and the enemy still hasn’t appeared.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-14 13:44:11
Original text:
Everybody looked at her, they didn’t know anything but were also curious and confused. But they don’t show that in the face.
Corrected text:
Everybody looked at her, they were not aware of any hostile presence nor know anything but were curious and confused despite their deadpan faces.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 10:49:46
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Everybody looked at her, they were not aware of any hostile presence nor know anything but were curious and confused despite their deadpan faces.
Corrected text:
Everybody looked at her, they were not aware of any hostile presence nor knew anything but were curious and confused despite their deadpan faces.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-14 13:43:54
Original text:
[It’s no way that who can challenge the queen in the capital?]
Corrected text:
[There’s no way there is anyone who can challenge the queen in the capital?]
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:27:39
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[Majesty, you do not pay welfare in the air, and everyone who is harmed by arthritis is committed]
Corrected text:
[Your Majesty, if you remain in the air without minding other's welfare, everyone will develop neck pain.]
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:40:08
Original text:
[Majesty, you do not pay welfare in the air, and everyone who is harmed by cervical spondylosis is committed]
Corrected text:
[Majesty, you do not pay welfare in the air, and everyone who is harmed by arthritis is committed]
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 04:14:00
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She constantly switched between magic, holy, and the spiritual power of different attributes to explore the surrounding environment.
Corrected text:
She constantly switched between magic, holy, and the spiritual power of different attributes to scan the surrounding environment.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 15:35:12
Original text:
She constantly switched between magic, saint power, and the spiritual power of different attributes to explore the surrounding environment.
Corrected text:
She constantly switched between magic, holy, and the spiritual power of different attributes to explore the surrounding environment.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 04:16:11
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Finally, she caught a strong afterglow of spiritual power.
Corrected text:
Finally, she caught a strong wisp of spiritual power.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-03 21:12:19
Original text:
She caught a strong afterglow of spiritual power finally.
Corrected text:
Finally, she caught a strong afterglow of spiritual power.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:01
Original text:
And kept on hunting the spiritual power, her gaze was on the boy who was standing beside Angelina.
Corrected text:
She kept searching with spiritual power, finally her gaze fell on the boy who was standing beside Angelina.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 10:50:54
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Compare to mine…
Corrected text:
Compared to mine…
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:04:51
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Maybe 1% as mine?
Corrected text:
Maybe 1% of mine?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 04:23:31
Original text:
She suddenly found her mistake
Corrected text:
She suddenly knew, she was wrong
Corrected by: rip-qi , 2022-04-05 09:27:10
Original text:
She suddenly found her wrong.
Corrected text:
She suddenly found her mistake
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 04:30:42
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He wasn't intentionally doing it. He just couldn’t control his spiritual power and as a result a special phenomenon of broadcasting has emerged.
Corrected text:
He wasn't intentionally doing it. He just couldn’t control his spiritual power and as a result he unknowingly cause a broadcasting effect.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:09
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That’s not penetrating the spiritual barrier, he just couldn’t control his spiritual power and a special phenomenon of broadcasting has emerged.
Corrected text:
He wasn't intentionally doing it. He just couldn’t control his spiritual power and as a result a special phenomenon of broadcasting has emerged.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:04
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That’s not penetrating the spiritual barrier, that’s he couldn’t control his spiritual and a special phenomenon of broadcasting has emerged.
Corrected text:
That’s not penetrating the spiritual barrier, he just couldn’t control his spiritual power and a special phenomenon of broadcasting has emerged.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-05 09:53:52
Original text:
This broadcast reception was obtained from a special troll.
Corrected text:
This broadcast reception was obtained from a special source.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:08
Original text:
This broadcast can catch by some special troll.
Corrected text:
This broadcast reception was obtained from a special troll.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 04:38:18
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When she went to hell, she killed such a spiritual troll, bathed in its blood, and gained this talent.
Corrected text:
When she went to hell, she killed a spiritual troll, soaked in its blood, and gained this talent.
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:45:00
Original text:
When she used to go to hell, she killed a troll, bathed in its blood, and gained this talent.
Corrected text:
When she went to hell, she killed such a spiritual troll, bathed in its blood, and gained this talent.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-05 20:48:09
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When she used to go to hell, she killed such a troll, bathed in its blood, and gained this talent.
Corrected text:
When she used to go to hell, she killed a troll, bathed in its blood, and gained this talent.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:11
Original text:
And she used to go to hell and killed such a troll, bathed in its blood, and had this talent.
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When she used to go to hell, she killed such a troll, bathed in its blood, and gained this talent.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:12
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So what was she listening to was the inner voice of this boy？
Corrected text:
So what she was listening to was the inner voice of this boy?
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:42
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So why was she listening to was the inner voice of this boy？
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So what was she listening to was the inner voice of this boy？
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-12 17:50:56
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So what she was listening to was the inner voice of this boy？
Corrected text:
So why was she listening to was the inner voice of this boy？
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:18
Original text:
So what she listening to was the real voice of this boy？
Corrected text:
So what she was listening to was the inner voice of this boy？
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-03 21:12:03
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So what she listened to was the real voice of this boy？
Corrected text:
So what she listening to was the real voice of this boy？
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 04:42:41
Original text:
But for some reason she felt that it was funny.
Corrected text:
But for unknown reason she felt that it was funny.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:44
Original text:
But for some reason she felt that that it was funny.
Corrected text:
But for some reason she felt that it was funny.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-03 20:02:14
Original text:
But some information she didn’t know, but she felt it was funny.
Corrected text:
But for some reason she felt that that it was funny.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 10:49:48
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More importantly, he even knew the secret of her and gods.
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More importantly, he even knew the secret about her and the gods.
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Corrected by: Jose-Resendiz , 2023-01-16 02:56:06
Original text:
Even Angelina didn’t know about these things, how can her brother know?
Corrected text:
Even Angelina didn’t know about these things, so how can her brother know?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 10:49:57
Original text:
These things even Angelina didn’t know, how can her brother know it?
Corrected text:
Even Angelina didn’t know about these things, how can her brother know?
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:45:08
Original text:
This person has some secrets, she would probe him.
Corrected text:
This person has some secrets, that she needs to probe.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:21
Original text:
This person has some secrets, she would provoke him.
Corrected text:
This person has some secrets, she would probe him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 18:05:14
Original text:
This person has some secrets, she would tempt him.
Corrected text:
This person has some secrets, she would provoke him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:10:18
Original text:
This person had some problems, she would tempt him.
Corrected text:
This person has some secrets, she would tempt him.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 04:53:29
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The queen thought and scattered all protection, descending to the ground.
Corrected text:
The queen thought and scattered all the protection, and descended to the ground.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:25
Original text:
The queen thought and scattered all protection, descended to the ground.
Corrected text:
The queen thought and scattered all protection, descending to the ground.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-03 21:12:06
Original text:
The queen thought and scattered all protection, fell to the ground.
Corrected text:
The queen thought and scattered all protection, descended to the ground.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:28
Original text:
She recovered her elegant and calm, along with a smile went into Charles's house.
Corrected text:
She recovered her elegance and calm, with a smile she went into Charles's house.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-03 20:02:17
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She recovered her elegant and calm, with a smile went into Charles's house.
Corrected text:
She recovered her elegant and calm, along with a smile went into Charles's house.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 04:55:26
Original text:
After all, he was just a "waste", he shouldn't be able to harm the queen
Corrected text:
After all, he was just a "trash", he shouldn't be able to harm the queen.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-20 18:59:47
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After all, he was just a "waste", he wouldn't be able to harm the queen
Corrected text:
After all, he was just a "waste", he shouldn't be able to harm the queen
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-03 20:02:21
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Just a waste, he can’t hurt the queen.
Corrected text:
After all, he was just a "waste", he wouldn't be able to harm the queen
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-14 11:30:41
Original text:
Angelina saw the queen looking at her brother and she said:” Your Majesty, this is my brother Roger, whose qualifications are mediocre.”
Corrected text:
Angelina saw the queen looking at her brother and she said: “Your Majesty, this is my brother Roger, whose qualifications are mediocre.”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-03 20:02:24
Original text:
Angelina saw the queen look at her brother, she said:” your Majesty, this is my brother Roger, whose qualifications are mediocre and lazy, which makes you smile.”
Corrected text:
Angelina saw the queen looking at her brother and she said:” Your Majesty, this is my brother Roger, whose qualifications are mediocre.”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 04:56:28
Original text:
She laughed as she thought this.
Corrected text:
She laughed as she thought of this.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:10:24
Original text:
She laughed and thought this.
Corrected text:
She laughed as she thought this.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 04:58:38
Original text:
His spiritual power is comparable to that of a legendary mage. Is that considered to be mediocre in qualifications?
Corrected text:
His spiritual power is comparable to that of a legendary mage. Is this still considered to be mediocre in qualifications?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 15:35:05
Original text:
His spiritual powers are comparable to that of a legendary mage. Is that considered to be mediocre in qualifications?
Corrected text:
His spiritual power is comparable to that of a legendary mage. Is that considered to be mediocre in qualifications?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 15:35:03
Original text:
His spiritual powers are comparable to that of a legendary mage. Is that considered to be mediocre in qualifications?
Corrected text:
His spiritual power is comparable to that of a legendary mage. Is that considered to be mediocre in qualifications?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:31
Original text:
His spiritual power's is comparable to that's of a legendary mage and that is considered to be mediocre in qualifications?
Corrected text:
His spiritual powers are comparable to that of a legendary mage. Is that considered to be mediocre in qualifications?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-03 20:02:27
Original text:
This is comparable to the spiritual power of a legendary mage, and it is said to be mediocre in qualifications?
Corrected text:
His spiritual power's is comparable to that's of a legendary mage and that is considered to be mediocre in qualifications?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 05:04:40
Original text:
This person has hidden it so deep and hasn't even told his sister.
Corrected text:
This person has hidden himself so deep, and hasn't even told his sister.
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:45:12
Original text:
This person has hidden so deep and hasn't even told his sister.
Corrected text:
This person has hidden it so deep and hasn't even told his sister.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:10:28
Original text:
This person hid so deep and didn’t speak to his sister.
Corrected text:
This person has hidden so deep and hasn't even told his sister.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 05:06:23
Original text:
But spiritual power isn't obvious like magic.
Corrected text:
But spiritual power isn't as obvious like magic.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:35
Original text:
But spiritual didn’t appear like magic.
Corrected text:
But spiritual power isn't obvious like magic.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:27:13
Original text:
If she didn’t have the talent of the troll, she would not find it.
Corrected text:
If she didn’t have the talent of the troll, she would not have found out.
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:18
Original text:
She was not a genius, so she would have been unable to found out.
Corrected text:
She was not a genius, so she would have been unable to find out.
Corrected by: Person-West , 2022-06-24 17:53:11
Original text:
If she was not such a genius, she would not have found out.
Corrected text:
She was not a genius, so she would have been unable to found out.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-08 10:59:39
Original text:
If she is not such a genius, she would not have found out.
Corrected text:
If she was not such a genius, she would not have found out.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-08 10:59:36
Original text:
If she is not such a genius, she would not have found out.
Corrected text:
If she was not such a genius, she would not have found out.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-05 09:53:49
Original text:
If she didn’t have unimaginable talent, she would not have found out.
Corrected text:
If she is not such a genius, she would not have found out.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 18:05:25
Original text:
If she didn’t have the talent of the troll, she would not have found out.
Corrected text:
If she didn’t have unimaginable talent, she would not have found out.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 18:05:34
Original text:
The queen suddenly moved forward and looked at Roger like a knife, as if seeing through this soul.
Corrected text:
The queen suddenly moved forward, her gaze cutting Roger like a knife, as if seeing through his soul.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-04 10:13:02
Original text:
The queen suddenly moved forward and looked at Roger like a knife, seeming to see through the soul.
Corrected text:
The queen suddenly moved forward and looked at Roger like a knife, as if seeing through this soul.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-04 10:12:59
Original text:
The queen suddenly moved forward and looked at Roger like a knife, seeming to see through the soul.
Corrected text:
The queen suddenly moved forward and looked at Roger like a knife, as if seeing through this soul.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 10:02:45
Original text:
[Her expressions look so scared, why does she look so fierce?]
Corrected text:
[Her expressions look so strange, why does she look so fierce?]
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:45:16
Original text:
[Her expressions look so strange, why does she look so fierce?]
Corrected text:
[Her expressions looks strange, why is she looking so fierce?]
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:27:23
Original text:
[Could it be that she has come to menstruate? So moody?]
Corrected text:
[Could it be that she is menstruating? So moody?]
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:19
Original text:
[Could it be that she is having her period ? So she's moody?]
Corrected text:
[Could it be that she is having her period? So she's moody?]
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:45:20
Original text:
[Could it be that she is having her period ? So moody?]
Corrected text:
[Could it be that she is having her period ? So she's moody?]
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-23 11:57:57
Original text:
[Could it be that she is having a period ? So moody?]
Corrected text:
[Could it be that she is having her period ? So moody?]
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-15 19:13:22
Original text:
[Could it be that she is menstruating? So moody?]
Corrected text:
[Could it be that she is having a period ? So moody?]
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-14 11:30:45
Original text:
The queen couldn't hold her expression and said:” you are so rude!”
Corrected text:
The queen couldn't hold her expression and said: “You are so rude!”
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-03 21:12:10
Original text:
This little guy is bold and ignorant.
Corrected text:
This little guy is so bold and ignorant.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 05:08:34
Original text:
You are so moody! Your entire family is so moody!
Corrected text:
You are moody! Your entire family are moody!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-29 18:21:17
Original text:
You are so moody! Your family is moody!
Corrected text:
You are so moody! Your entire family is so moody!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:27:34
Original text:
He didn't know that strong people can control menstrual time, and when they don't need it, they can naturally not ovulate!
Corrected text:
He didn't know that strong people can control menstrual time, and when they don't need it, they can naturally stop ovulating!
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Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:09:52
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Even because of the menstrual, it didn't affect my state of mind at all!
Corrected text:
Even if it was because of menstruation, it wouldn't affect my state of mind at all!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:27:40
Original text:
As she become queen, with an iron fist in power, no one dared to ridicule her like this.
Corrected text:
Since she become queen, with an iron fist of power, no one had dared to ridicule her like this.
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:47
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Since she became queen, and ruled with an iron fist of power, no one had dared to ridicule her like this.
Corrected text:
Since she became queen, and ruled with a powerful iron fist, no one had dared to ridicule her like this.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:37
Original text:
Since she become queen, with an iron fist of power, no one had dared to ridicule her like this.
Corrected text:
Since she became queen, and ruled with an iron fist of power, no one had dared to ridicule her like this.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:27:47
Original text:
Who ridicule her like this, the ashes had disappeared.
Corrected text:
Those who ridiculed her like this, their ashes have disappeared.
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:45:24
Original text:
Those who ridiculed her like this, their ashes have disappeared.
Corrected text:
Those who ridiculed her like this, she didnt let even their ashes remain.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:27:51
Original text:
Maybe, because of his daring, she felt fresh and calmed down, not killed him.
Corrected text:
Maybe, because of his daring, she felt refreshed and calmed down, not killed him.
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:50
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Maybe, because of how daring he was, she felt refreshed and calmed down, not killing him.
Corrected text:
Maybe because of how daring he was, she felt refreshed, so she calmed down, deciding not to kill him.
Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:09:56
Original text:
Maybe, because of his daring, she felt refreshed and calmed down, not killed him.
Corrected text:
Maybe, because of how daring he was, she felt refreshed and calmed down, not killing him.
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:58
Original text:
Angelina misunderstood that it was because the etiquette was not good, and she was immediately gave a look to Roger.
Corrected text:
Angelina misunderstood that it was because his etiquette was not good, and she immediately gave a look to Roger.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 10:50:42
Original text:
Angelina misunderstood was because the etiquette was not good, and she was immediately given a look to Roger.
Corrected text:
Angelina misunderstood that it was because the etiquette was not good, and she was immediately gave a look to Roger.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:40
Original text:
Roger knew it and said so reverently, ”I see the Queen, Roger is willing to be loyal to her Majesty forever and defend the Green Vines Empire!”
Corrected text:
Roger recognized it and said reverently, ”I see the Queen, I Roger am willing to be loyal to her Majesty forever and defend the Green Vines Empire!”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:10:32
Original text:
Roger knew it and said so reverent:” see the queen, Roger is willing to be loyal to His Majesty forever and defend the Green vines Empire!”
Corrected text:
Roger knew it and said so reverently, ”I see the Queen, Roger is willing to be loyal to her Majesty forever and defend the Green Vines Empire!”
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:21
Original text:
Rogers, born to the lowest rank of the nobility, the knight, was a vassal of the Queen of the Eternal Night, and naturally, he had to be loyal to her.
Corrected text:
Roger, born to the lowest rank of the nobility, the knight, was a vassal of the Queen of the Eternal Night, and naturally, he had to be loyal to her.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-06 11:08:45
Original text:
Charles, born to the lowest rank of the nobility, the knight, was a vassal of the Queen of the Eternal Night, and naturally, he had to be loyal to her.
Corrected text:
Rogers, born to the lowest rank of the nobility, the knight, was a vassal of the Queen of the Eternal Night, and naturally, he had to be loyal to her.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:15:00
Original text:
Charles's family’s child, born to be the lowest rank of the nobility, the knight, was a vassal of the Queen of the Eternal Night, and naturally, he had to be loyal to her.
Corrected text:
Charles, born to the lowest rank of the nobility, the knight, was a vassal of the Queen of the Eternal Night, and naturally, he had to be loyal to her.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:43
Original text:
Roger’s attitude and saying we're so loyal, everybody felt it.
Corrected text:
Roger’s attitude and speech were so loyal, everybody felt it.
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Corrected by: the-Hellhound , 2022-10-27 07:53:19
Original text:
[I want to use the lazy acedia system forever, but the gods live and if she can't defend against them?]
Corrected text:
[I want to use the lazy acedia system forever, but the gods are still alive. What would we do if she wasn't able to defend against them?]
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:22
Original text:
[I want to use the lazy acedia system forever, but the gods live and if she can't defend against them !]
Corrected text:
[I want to use the lazy acedia system forever, but the gods live and if she can't defend against them?]
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:45:28
Original text:
[I want to be lazy forever, but she can't defeat the gods!]
Corrected text:
[I want to use the lazy acedia system forever, but the gods live and if she can't defend against them !]
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:15
Original text:
[I want to be in acedia forever, but she can't defeat the gods!]
Corrected text:
[I want to be lazy forever, but she can't defeat the gods!]
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 18:05:09
Original text:
[I want to be acedia forever, but gods alive, she can’t defend them!]
Corrected text:
[I want to be in acedia forever, but she can't defeat the gods!]
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:26:16
Original text:
[The Green vines empire should keep it alive, but it can’t, just bring my sister run!]
Corrected text:
[The Green vines empire should keep it alive, but it can’t, just bring my sister and run!]
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:17
Original text:
[If The Green Vines Empire couldn't survive, I will just take my sister and run!]
Corrected text:
[If The Green Vines Empire can't survive, I'll just take my sister and run!]
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:15:05
Original text:
[If The Green vines empire couldn't survive, I will just bring my sister and run!]
Corrected text:
[If The Green Vines Empire couldn't survive, I will just take my sister and run!]
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-03 21:12:13
Original text:
[The Green vines empire should keep it alive, but it can’t, just bring my sister and run!]
Corrected text:
[If The Green vines empire couldn't survive, I will just bring my sister and run!]
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-21 14:58:09
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His loyal was not real!
Corrected text:
His loyalty was not real!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-14 11:30:49
Original text:
“Roger ,my knight, how do you know about the gods?”
Corrected text:
“Roger, my knight, how do you know about the gods?”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:45
Original text:
“Roger knight, how do you know about the gods?”
Corrected text:
“Roger ,my knight, how do you know about the gods?”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:49
Original text:
This question let him freeze.
Corrected text:
This question left him frozen.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-21 14:58:13
Original text:
Why does she ask this question?
Corrected text:
Why did she ask this question?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-19 20:02:51
Original text:
Because he was the creator of the game, he understood the gods deeply, he could talk about it for hours.
Corrected text:
Because he was a fan of the game, he understood the gods deeply, he even made a video talking about it for hours.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:20
Original text:
Because he was the creator of the game, he understood the gods deeply, if he makes a video he could talk for hours.
Corrected text:
Because he was the creator of the game, he understood the gods deeply, he could talk about it for hours.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:52
Original text:
Because he was the creator of the game, he must know the gods in deep, and if he should make a video about the Gods, it would last an hour.
Corrected text:
Because he was the creator of the game, he understood the gods deeply, if he makes a video he could talk for hours.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:10:36
Original text:
Because he was the scholar of the game, he must know the gods in deep, and if he makes video, he could say an hour.
Corrected text:
Because he was the creator of the game, he must know the gods in deep, and if he should make a video about the Gods, it would last an hour.
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:45:32
Original text:
But many things didn’t happen, it was different from what most people in the Empire knew, he couldn’t speak randomly!
Corrected text:
But many things are yet to happen, it was different from what most people in the Empire knew, he couldn’t speak randomly!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:55
Original text:
But many things didn’t happen, it was different from what most people in the Empire knew, he couldn’t say randomly!
Corrected text:
But many things didn’t happen, it was different from what most people in the Empire knew, he couldn’t speak randomly!
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:27:43
Original text:
And his task was to acedia rather than show him.
Corrected text:
And his system incentivized laying low, rather than being high profile.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:28:02
Original text:
Just look at Roger frowning and thinking for a long time before scratching his head:” queen, I just a people who didn’t know anything, how can I understand gods?”
Corrected text:
Just look at Roger frowning and thinking for a long time before scratching his head:” queen, I just a person who doesn't know anything, how can I understand the gods?”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 15:35:07
Original text:
So Roger just frowned and pretended to think for a long time before scratching his head. ”Queen, I'm just a person who doesn't know anything. How can I know about the gods?”
Corrected text:
So Roger just frowned and pretended to think for a long time before scratching his head. ”Your Majesty, I'm just a person who doesn't know anything. How can I know about the gods?”
Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:38:40
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So Roger just frowned and pretended to think for a long time before scratching his head:” queen, I'm just a person who doesn't know anything, how can I know about the gods?”
Corrected text:
So Roger just frowned and pretended to think for a long time before scratching his head. ”Queen, I'm just a person who doesn't know anything. How can I know about the gods?”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-09 21:21:59
Original text:
Just look at Roger frowning and thinking for a long time before scratching his head:” queen, I'm just a person who doesn't know anything, how can I know about the gods?”
Corrected text:
So Roger just frowned and pretended to think for a long time before scratching his head:” queen, I'm just a person who doesn't know anything, how can I know about the gods?”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-17 10:37:37
Original text:
Just look at Roger frowning and thinking for a long time before scratching his head:” queen, I just a person who doesn't know anything, how can I understand the gods?”
Corrected text:
Just look at Roger frowning and thinking for a long time before scratching his head:” queen, I'm just a person who doesn't know anything, how can I know about the gods?”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-17 10:37:45
Original text:
Angelina was an urge to sigh.
Corrected text:
Angelina had an urge to sigh.
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:27:46
Original text:
The queen ask questions, obviously wanted to test him, and decided on a title for him.
Corrected text:
The queen asked questions, obviously wanting to test him, and decide on a title for him.
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:38:42
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While other people try to promote themselves to the queen, he just said he didn’t know anything so straightforwardly, he’s too much.
Corrected text:
While other people try to promote themselves to the queen, he just said he didn’t know anything so straightforwardly. He’s too much.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:27:48
Original text:
Other people show themselves to the queen, he just said he didn’t know anything so straightforward, he’s so excessively.
Corrected text:
While other people try to promote themselves to the queen, he just said he didn’t know anything so straightforwardly, he’s too much.
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:45:36
Original text:
Look at the queen's expression, she’s shocked by Roger?
Corrected text:
Looking at the queen's expression, she’s shocked by Roger?
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-16 09:41:28
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People's minds can't be fully controlled, even if you don't say it the mind will talk about it. Roger was still sorting out the plot thinking about the gods, and couldn't help but think about the whole night copywriting, making him want to spit and sigh at the same time, all of which entered the head of the Queen of the Eternal Night making her feel overwhelmed.
Corrected text:
People's minds can't be fully controlled, even if you don't say it the mind will think about it. Roger was still sorting out the plot thinking about the gods, and couldn't help but think about the whole Enternal night copywriting, making him want to spit a sigh at the same time, all of which entered the head of the Queen of the Eternal Night making her feel overwhelmed.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:24
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People's minds can't be controlled, even if you don't say it the mind will produce a lot of associations. Roger was still sorting out the plot before, thinking about the gods, and couldn't help but think about the whole night copywriting, making him want to spit, and sigh at the same time, all of which entered the head of the Queen of the eternal night making her overwhelmed.
Corrected text:
People's minds can't be fully controlled, even if you don't say it the mind will talk about it. Roger was still sorting out the plot thinking about the gods, and couldn't help but think about the whole night copywriting, making him want to spit and sigh at the same time, all of which entered the head of the Queen of the Eternal Night making her feel overwhelmed.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:27:51
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People's minds can't be controlled, even if you don't say it the mind will produce a lot of associations. Roger was still sorting out the plot before, thinking about the gods, and can't help but think about the whole night copywriting, spitting, and sighing at the same time, all of these entered the head of the Queen of the eternal night making her overwhelmed.
Corrected text:
People's minds can't be controlled, even if you don't say it the mind will produce a lot of associations. Roger was still sorting out the plot before, thinking about the gods, and couldn't help but think about the whole night copywriting, making him want to spit, and sigh at the same time, all of which entered the head of the Queen of the eternal night making her overwhelmed.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:11:58
Original text:
People's thinking is chaotic, not to want to speak like that, but will produce a lot of associations, Roger was still sorting out the plot before, thinking of the gods, can't help but think about the whole night copywriting, spitting, sighing, at the same time, these all entered the head of the Queen of eternal night, making her overwhelmed.
Corrected text:
People's minds can't be controlled, even if you don't say it the mind will produce a lot of associations. Roger was still sorting out the plot before, thinking about the gods, and can't help but think about the whole night copywriting, spitting, and sighing at the same time, all of these entered the head of the Queen of the eternal night making her overwhelmed.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:27
Original text:
[Gods? The wolves who treats mortals as lambs?]
Corrected text:
[Gods? The wolves who treat mortals like sheep?]
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 10:50:50
Original text:
[Gods? That’s a wolf who treats mortals as lambs?]
Corrected text:
[Gods? The wolves who treats mortals as lambs?]
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:27:54
Original text:
[All the strife in this world is a chess piece played by the gods, except for the empress.]
Corrected text:
[All the strife in this world is a game of chess controlled by the gods, except for the empress.]
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:30
Original text:
[But the empress got noticed by the gods, and the gods want to kill her.]
Corrected text:
[But the empress was noticed by the gods, and the gods wanted to kill her.]
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:00
Original text:
[But the empress got the notice of the gods, what to do next is to kill her.]
Corrected text:
[But the empress got noticed by the gods, and the gods want to kill her.]
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:33
Original text:
[A strong and unified civilization will increase the Lamb's strength and happiness, which will inevitably reduce the Lamb's dependence on the gods and contribute to less faith.]
Corrected text:
[A strong and unified civilization will increase the strength and happiness of the sheep, which will inevitably reduce their dependence on the gods and contribute to less faith.]
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:04
Original text:
[A strong, unified civilization will lead to the Lamb's strength and happiness, which will inevitably reduce the Lamb's dependence on the gods and contribute less faith.]
Corrected text:
[A strong and unified civilization will increase the Lamb's strength and happiness, which will inevitably reduce the Lamb's dependence on the gods and contribute to less faith.]
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Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:08
Original text:
[Therefore, this is the core contradiction between the empire and the gods, and even if missionary missions are allowed, future wars cannot be avoided!]
Corrected text:
[Therefore, this is the core contradiction between the empire and the gods, even if missionary missions are allowed, future wars still cannot be avoided!]
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:35
Original text:
In the countless chaotic inner thoughts, the Eternal Night Empress "heard" a lot of information for the first time, like a series of thunderclaps, shocking her!
Corrected text:
Inside the boys countless chaotic inner thoughts, the Eternal Night Empress "heard" a series of shocking information for the first time, like thunderclaps, stunning her!
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 19:27:56
Original text:
In the countless chaotic inner thoughts, the Eternal Night Empress "heard" a lot of information she knew for the first time, like a series of thunderclaps, shocking her!
Corrected text:
In the countless chaotic inner thoughts, the Eternal Night Empress "heard" a lot of information for the first time, like a series of thunderclaps, shocking her!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-01 09:58:18
Original text:
“Allowed the missionary missions, can even have war?”
Corrected text:
“Even if missionary missions are allowed, future wars cannot be avoided?”
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:39
Original text:
“Such deep Insights, coinciding with the recent discoveries of the Arcane Society, there are even many unsolved points...”
Corrected text:
“Such deep insights, coinciding with the recent discoveries of the Arcane Society, he even cleared many unsolved points...”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-01 09:58:26
Original text:
“So deep thinking, so Insights, coinciding with the recent discoveries of the Arcane Society, there are even many unsolved points...”
Corrected text:
“Such deep Insights, coinciding with the recent discoveries of the Arcane Society, there are even many unsolved points...”
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Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:38:44
Original text:
“Even though he can see through the real face of the gods, he still chooses to stay in the empire. he is loyal, after all, the ignorant are fearless.”
Corrected text:
“Even though he can see through the real face of the gods, he still chooses to stay in the empire. He is loyal. After all, the ignorant are fearless.”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-01 09:58:13
Original text:
“Look through the real face of the gods, and stay in the empire, he was so loyal, after all, the ignorant are fearless.”
Corrected text:
“Even though he can see through the real face of the gods, he still chooses to stay in the empire. he is loyal, after all, the ignorant are fearless.”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-01 09:58:30
Original text:
"It turns out that I am not alone on the road against the gods, and those who understand me have always been around! I know how to do it!”
Corrected text:
"It turns out that I am not alone on the road against the gods, and those who understand me have always been around!”
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:24
Original text:
She thought so excitedly and said:” your answer was great! Pass on this message, make Roger the Marquis of La Capas!”
Corrected text:
She thought so excitedly and said:” Your answer was great! Pass on this message, make Roger the Marquis of La Capas!”
Corrected by: Jex89 , 2022-06-22 17:38:45
Original text:
She thought so excitedly and said:” your answer was great! pass on the message, make Roger the Marquis of La Capas!”
Corrected text:
She thought so excitedly and said:” your answer was great! Pass on this message, make Roger the Marquis of La Capas!”
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-04 10:12:11
Original text:
She thought so excited and said:” your answer was so great! pass on the message, make Roger the Marquis of La Capas!”
Corrected text:
She thought so excitedly and said:” your answer was great! pass on the message, make Roger the Marquis of La Capas!”
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:11:42
Original text:
Roger tremble and said:” thank you empress…”
Corrected text:
Roger trembled and said:” Thank you Empress…”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-01 09:58:37
Original text:
Roger tremble and said:” thank empress…”
Corrected text:
Roger tremble and said:” thank you empress…”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-10 17:03:14
Original text:
Why she so vigorously?
Corrected text:
Why is she so vigorous?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:28:06
Original text:
I said I unknown anything, why she said my answer was so great?
Corrected text:
I said I don't known anything, why did she say my answer was so great?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-15 19:13:48
Original text:
I just wanted to be acedia, you gave me a Marquis title…
Corrected text:
I just wanted to be lazy, you gave me a Marquis title…
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:28:16
Original text:
I'm afraid I'm going to make big news!
Corrected text:
I'm afraid this is going to become big news!
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Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2022-11-07 11:31:56
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（come here！ read the book faster at https://www.patreon.com/jacksonben?fan_landing=true）
Corrected text:
（come here! Read the book faster at https://www.patreon.com/jacksonben?fan_landing=true）
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