Login with GoogleTranslated by: Ben-Jackson
Edited by: anonymous, Kastle, Caasi-Oiuqatsue, Gaebudge, shreyash, Austin-Tan, mondruppen, Oedon, Mazino-Mercante, Yozakura-_, Snow-Cat, Erick-Garza, tyranoic, LC-Shin-Senpai, trek-backs, Soybeans-The-First, Person-West, Night, Quantum-Videos, Junaavicii, Jorge-Luis-Alvarado, nassief, Sebastian-Merce
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-12 11:16:39
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Chapter 1tI justtwant totloaf aroundtfor tentyears
Corrected text:
Chapter 1I just twant to loaf around for ten years
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Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2023-05-17 12:04:23
Original text:
Chapter 1: I just want to loaf around for ten years!
Corrected text:
Chapter 1: I Just Want to Loaf Around for Ten Years!
Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2022-11-09 01:34:45
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Chapter 1 I just want to loaf around for ten years!
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Chapter 1: I just want to loaf around for ten years!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-16 18:41:17
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Chapter 1 I just want to loaf around for ten years
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Chapter 1 I just want to loaf around for ten years!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 14:34:57
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During the third year of the Eternal Night Calendar in the capitol of the Green Vines Empire.
Corrected text:
During the third year of the Eternal Night Calendar in the capital of the Green Vines Empire.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:15:02
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During the third year of the Eternal Night Calendar in the capitol of the Green vines empire.
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During the third year of the Eternal Night Calendar in the capitol of the Green Vines Empire.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:04:54
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The Eternal Night Calendar of three years, Green vines empire, mystery capital.
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During the third year of the Eternal Night Calendar in the capitol of the Green vines empire.
Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-03-12 18:00:12
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A single unremarkable morning. A luxury estate in the Upper Town, many maids were working.
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In a single unremarkable morning, many maids are working at a luxurious estate in the upper district.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:03:10
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On a regular morning, plenty of maids can be seen working at a luxurious estate located in the upper district.
Corrected text:
On a regular morning, plenty of maids can be seen working at a luxurious estate located in the Noble District.
Corrected by: LC-Shin-Senpai , 2022-05-08 20:13:32
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On an unremarkable morning, lots of maids are working at a luxurious estate in the upper district.
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On a regular morning, plenty of maids can be seen working at a luxurious estate located in the upper district.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:07
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On a unremarkable morning, many maids are working at a luxurious estate in the upper district.
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On an unremarkable morning, lots of maids are working at a luxurious estate in the upper district.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:04:57
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In a single unremarkable morning, many maids are working at a luxurious estate in the upper district.
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On a unremarkable morning, many maids are working at a luxurious estate in the upper district.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-11 11:15:20
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Only in a luxury bedroom, A man called Roger who has black hair and black eyes laid on the bed very relaxed. A smile spread across her handsome face.
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Only in a luxury bedroom, A man called Roger who has black hair and black eyes laid on the bed very relaxed. A smile spread across his handsome face.
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Corrected by: Sebastian-Merce , 2023-04-17 16:02:35
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Meanwhile a man with black eyes and hair, Roger, relaxed on the bed of a luxurious bedroom with a smile across his handsome face.
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Meanwhile a man with black eyes and hair, Roger, relaxes on the bed of a luxurious bedroom with a smile across his handsome face.
Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:03:31
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Meanwhile a man with black eyes and hair, Roger relaxed on the bed of a luxurious bedroom with a smile across his handsome face.
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Meanwhile a man with black eyes and hair, Roger, relaxed on the bed of a luxurious bedroom with a smile across his handsome face.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-21 20:33:43
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Meanwhile a man with black eyes and hair, Roger relaxed on the bed of a luxurious bedroom with a smile across his handsome face.
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Meanwhile a man with black eyes and hair, Roger relaxed on the bed of a luxurious bedroom with a smile across his handsome face.
Corrected by: Soybeans-The-First , 2022-05-16 09:47:00
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While a man with black eyes and hair, Roger was relaxing on his bed in a luxurious bedroom, as a smile lay across his handsome face.
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Meanwhile a man with black eyes and hair, Roger relaxed on the bed of a luxurious bedroom with a smile across his handsome face.
Corrected by: LC-Shin-Senpai , 2022-05-09 10:15:55
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While a man with black eyes and hair called Roger was relaxing on his bed in a luxurious bedroom. A smile lay across his handsome face.
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While a man with black eyes and hair, Roger was relaxing on his bed in a luxurious bedroom, while a smile lay across his handsome face.
Corrected by: LC-Shin-Senpai , 2022-05-09 10:15:34
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While a man with black eyes and hair called Roger was relaxing on his bed in a luxurious bedroom. A smile lay across his handsome face.
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While a man with black eyes and hair, Roger was relaxing on his bed in a luxurious bedroom, as a smile lay across his handsome face.
Corrected by: LC-Shin-Senpai , 2022-05-08 20:13:53
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But in a luxury bedroom, a man with black eyes and hair called Roger laid on his bed relaxing. A smile spread across his handsome face.
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While a man with black eyes and hair called Roger was relaxing on his bed in a luxurious bedroom. A smile lay across his handsome face.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:10
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But in a luxury bedroom a man with black eyes and hair called Roger laid on his bed relaxing. A smile spread across his handsome face.
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But in a luxury bedroom, a man with black eyes and hair called Roger laid on his bed relaxing. A smile spread across his handsome face.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:02
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Only in a luxury bedroom, A man called Roger who has black hair and black eyes laid on the bed very relaxed. A smile spread across his handsome face.
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But in a luxury bedroom a man with black eyes and hair called Roger laid on his bed relaxing. A smile spread across his handsome face.
Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-03-12 18:00:18
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He should have a good dream.
Corrected text:
He should be having a good dream.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-17 18:52:33
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Like he is having a good dream.
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Like he was having a good dream.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-06 11:08:35
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He should've had a good dream.
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Like he is having a good dream.
Corrected by: Soybeans-The-First , 2022-05-16 09:47:08
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He should've been having a good dream.
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He should've had a good dream.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:13
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He should be having a good dream.
Corrected text:
He should've been having a good dream.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-29 10:49:17
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Hetshould bethaving atgood dream.
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He should be having a good dream.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-17 18:52:35
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It has been a long time after the sun has risen. He seems to have gotten enough rest and woke up.
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It had been a long time since the sun had risen. He seemed to have gotten enough rest and had woken up.
Corrected by: Soybeans-The-First , 2022-05-16 09:47:20
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After a long time, the sun has risen. He seems to have gotten enough rest and woke up.
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It has been a long time after the sun has risen. He seems to have gotten enough rest and woke up.
Corrected by: LC-Shin-Senpai , 2022-05-08 20:14:15
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After a long time had passed , when the sun rose, he got enough sleep and woke up.
Corrected text:
After a long time, the sun has risen. He seems to have gotten enough rest and woke up.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:04
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A long time had passed , as the sun rose, he slept enough and woke up.
Corrected text:
After a long time had passed , when the sun rose, he got enough sleep and woke up.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-24 10:58:12
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It had passed a long time, as the sun rose, he slept enough and woke up.
Corrected text:
A long time had passed , as the sun rose, he slept enough and woke up.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:08:41
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“Ding! Acedia system has detected your emotional stability, you've obtained a random chest, would you like to open it?”
Corrected text:
“Ding! Indolence system has detected your emotional stability, you've obtained a random treasure chest, would you like to open it?”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-05 20:22:31
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“Ding! Acedia system has detected your emotional stability, you've obtaied a random chest, would you like to open it?”
Corrected text:
“Ding! Acedia system has detected your emotional stability, you've obtained a random chest, would you like to open it?”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-02 18:45:54
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“Ding! Acedia system has detected your emotional stability, you've obtained a random chest, would you like to open it?”
Corrected text:
“Ding! Acedia system has detected your emotional stability, you've obtaied a random chest, would you like to open it?”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:16
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“Ding, Acedia system has detected your emotional stability, you've obtained a random chest, would you like to open it?”
Corrected text:
“Ding! Acedia system has detected your emotional stability, you've obtained a random chest, would you like to open it?”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-10 11:08:07
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“Ding, Acedia system detected your emotional stability, obtain a random chest, would you open it?”
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“Ding, Acedia system has detected your emotional stability, you've obtained a random chest, would you like to open it?”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-31 20:57:43
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“Ding, acedia system detected your emotional stability, obtain a random chest, would you open it?”
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“Ding, Acedia system detected your emotional stability, obtain a random chest, would you open it?”
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Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-03-11 11:15:32
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“Open successfully, you get the 100 units Origin Spiritual Power.”
Corrected text:
“Open successfully, you got 100 units of Origin Spiritual Power.”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:08
Original text:
“Open successfully, you got 100 units of Origin Spiritual Power.”
Corrected text:
“Opened successfully, you got 100 units of Origin Spiritual Power.”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-21 20:33:45
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Roger felt heat flow into his head as the world became clearer.
Corrected text:
Roger felt the heat flow into his head as the world became clearer.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-08 10:59:43
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Roger felt heat flow into his head and he sees the world clearer.
Corrected text:
Roger felt heat flow into his head as the world became clearer.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:19
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Roger felt heat flow into his head and he saw the world clearer.
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Roger felt heat flow into his head and he sees the world clearer.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:11
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Roger felt a heat flux that flows into his head, after that, he saw the world clearer.
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Roger felt heat flow into his head and he saw the world clearer.
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Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-03-21 14:55:30
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“Can this also be strengthened? Worthy of you, system!”
Corrected text:
“Even this can be strengthened? As expected of you, system!”
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Corrected by: LC-Shin-Senpai , 2022-05-09 10:15:58
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Roger was very happy.
Corrected text:
Roger was ecstatic.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-08 10:59:46
Original text:
Roger was very happy
Corrected text:
Roger was very happy.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-05-07 20:15:26
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Spiritual and Magic power are the basis of the strength of a magician.
Corrected text:
Spiritual and Magic power are the basis of a magician's strength.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-04-05 20:01:24
Original text:
Spiritual and Magic power are the basis of the strength of a magician.
Corrected text:
Spiritual and Magic power are the basis of the strength of a magician.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:06:52
Original text:
Spiritual and Magic power are the basis of the strenght of a magician.
Corrected text:
Spiritual and Magic power are the basis of the strength of a magician.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-20 19:06:50
Original text:
Spiritual and Magic power are the basis of the strenght of a magician.
Corrected text:
Spiritual and Magic power are the basis of the strength of a magician.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-12 19:26:02
Original text:
Spiritual and Magic power is the source of a magician's strength.
Corrected text:
Spiritual and Magic power are the basis of the strenght of a magician.
Corrected by: LC-Shin-Senpai , 2022-05-08 20:13:36
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Spiritual power and magic power are the basis of a magician's strength.
Corrected text:
Spiritual and Magic power is the source of a magician's strength.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 10:59:49
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Spiritual power and magic power are the judgment of the magician's strength.
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Spiritual power and magic power are the basis of a magician's strength.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-11 19:39:15
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Magic power decide the blue amount and spell strength. Spiritual decide the spell piercing and the speed of spell recovery.
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Magic power decide the spell amount and spell strength. Spiritual decide the spell piercing and the speed of spell recovery.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-21 20:33:49
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Magic power decides the amount of spells you can cast and spell's strength. Spiritual power decides the spell's power and the speed of magic recovery.
Corrected text:
Magic power decides the amount of spells you can cast and the spell's strength. Spiritual power decides the spell's power and the speed of magic recovery.
Corrected by: Night , 2022-07-08 17:21:46
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Magic power decides the amount of spells you can cast and spell's strength. Spiritual power decides the spell's penetration and the speed of magic recovery.
Corrected text:
Magic power decides the amount of spells you can cast and spell's strength. Spiritual power decides the spell's power and the speed of magic recovery.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-08 17:21:18
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Magic power decides the amount of spells you can cast and spell's strength. Spiritual power decides the spell's penetration and the speed of magic recovery.
Corrected text:
Magic power decides the amount of spells you can cast and spell's strength. Spiritual power decides the spell's power and the speed of magic recovery.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:22
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Magic power decides the amount of spells you can cast and spell strength. Spiritual power decides the spell piercing and the speed of magic recovery.
Corrected text:
Magic power decides the amount of spells you can cast and spell's strength. Spiritual power decides the spell's penetration and the speed of magic recovery.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:14
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Magic power decide the spell amount and spell strength. Spiritual decide the spell piercing and the speed of spell recovery.
Corrected text:
Magic power decides the amount of spells you can cast and spell strength. Spiritual power decides the spell piercing and the speed of magic recovery.
Corrected by: Caasi-Oiuqatsue , 2022-03-11 19:39:31
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Those things can practice through meditation, but spiritual powers improve is difficult, and he didn’t hear of any drug reinforcement, a means of awareness strengthening.
Corrected text:
Those things can be practiced through meditation, but improving spiritual powers is difficult, and he didn’t hear of any drug reinforcement, a means of awareness strengthening.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:18
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Those things can be practiced through meditation, but doing that takes a lot of time without the help of pills, a method of strengthening.
Corrected text:
Those things can be improved through meditation, but doing that takes a lot of time without the help of pills or other methods of strengthening.
Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-03-21 14:55:49
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Those things can be practiced through meditation, but improving spiritual powers is difficult, and he didn’t hear of any drug reinforcement, a means of awareness strengthening.
Corrected text:
Those things can be practiced through meditation, but doing that takes a lot of time without the help of pills, a method of strengthening.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:09:35
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So spiritual power often becomes a bottleneck of improvement.
Corrected text:
So spiritual power often becomes a bottleneck for improvement.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:25
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So the spiritual power often becomes the bottleneck of the upgrade.
Corrected text:
So spiritual power often becomes a bottleneck of improvement.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:27
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But now, the system can directly strengthen the spiritual power?
Corrected text:
But the system can directly strengthen spiritual power?
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Corrected by: LC-Shin-Senpai , 2022-05-09 10:16:01
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It is simply omnipotent!
Corrected text:
Its power is simply immeasurable.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:32
Original text:
“It’s comfortable to acedia!”
Corrected text:
“Doing nothing is so comfortable!”
Corrected by: Caasi-Oiuqatsue , 2022-03-11 19:39:35
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Roger Charles, 18 years old now, has known a waste in the empire.
Corrected text:
Roger Charles, 18 years old now, has been known as a waste in the empire.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:09:59
Original text:
Roger Charles, 18 years of age, has been known as a waste in the empire.
Corrected text:
Roger Charles, 18 years of age, is known as a waste in the empire.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:35
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Roger Charles, 18 years old now, has been known as a waste in the empire.
Corrected text:
Roger Charles, 18 years of age, has been known as a waste in the empire.
Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-03-12 18:00:37
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But yesterday, he had another identity, game video maker from Earth.
Corrected text:
But he has another identity. In his previous life, he was a video game developer.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-06 11:08:38
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But he has another identity. In his previous life, he was a video game developer.
Corrected text:
But he has another identity. In his previous life, he was a game developer.
Corrected by: Caasi-Oiuqatsue , 2022-03-11 19:39:39
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The game everybody waiting for five years which named was “Eternal Night forever” was finally published.
Corrected text:
"Eternal Night Forever" a game which everybody has waited for five years was finally published.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 10:59:52
Original text:
"Eternal Night,” a game which took five years to develop before it was finally published.
Corrected text:
"Eternal Night,” a game which took five years to develop before it was finally released
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:44
Original text:
"Eternal Night" a game which everybody has waited for five years was finally published. (Eternal has a similar meaning to forever so it can be removed, also sounds better)
Corrected text:
"Eternal Night,” a game which took five years to develop before it was finally published.
Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-03-21 14:56:16
Original text:
"Eternal Night Forever" a game which everybody has waited for five years was finally published.
Corrected text:
"Eternal Night" a game which everybody has waited for five years was finally published. (Eternal has a similar meaning to forever so it can be removed, also sounds better)
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Corrected by: LC-Shin-Senpai , 2022-05-09 10:15:32
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Gamers worked hard to take advantage of the game's ultra-high degree of freedom, developing strategies for many famous game roles.
Corrected text:
Gamers worked hard to take advantage of the game's extremely high degree of freedom and have developed many strategies for many prominent game roles.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:48
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As simple gamer worked hard to take advantage of the game's ultra-high degree of freedom, try to strategy many famous game roles, force the car to be built in the game…
Corrected text:
Gamers worked hard to take advantage of the game's ultra-high degree of freedom, developing strategies for many famous game roles.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:51
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As a veteran of the game, Roger had already experience what the game had to offer, including the horrors and malices of the gods...
Corrected text:
As a veteran of the game, Roger had already experienced what the game had to offer, including the horrors and malice of the gods.
Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-03-21 14:56:30
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Roger as a scholar of the game, had parsed the worldview, felt the horrors of the gods and desperate malice…
Corrected text:
As a veteran of the game, Roger had already experience what the game had to offer, including the horrors and malices of the gods...
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:54
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And the truth that is the exact opposite of the mainline of the game!
Corrected text:
And the truth hidden behind the main storyline of the game!
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Corrected by: Soybeans-The-First , 2022-05-16 09:47:28
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That night, he prepared to have a rest, and make some videos to earn money and shock the netizens.
Corrected text:
That night, he had prepared to have a rest, and make some videos to earn money and shock the netizens.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:05:57
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That night, he prepared to have a rest, and make some videos to earn money and shocked the netizen.
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That night, he prepared to have a rest, and make some videos to earn money and shock the netizens.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:06:01
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But as he woke up, Roger was surprised!
Corrected text:
But when he woke up, Roger was surprised!
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Corrected by: LC-Shin-Senpai , 2022-05-08 20:14:12
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He crossed into the game world, ten years before the main story began!
Corrected text:
He transmigrated into the game world, ten years before the main story.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-14 21:06:21
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He crossed into the game world, ten years after the main story began!
Corrected text:
He crossed into the game world, ten years before the main story began!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:06:04
Original text:
He crossed into the game world, the main story began ten years ago!
Corrected text:
He crossed into the game world, ten years after the main story began!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-13 19:09:38
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He wasn’t the main role.
Corrected text:
He wasn’t the main character.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:06:06
Original text:
He’s not the main role.
Corrected text:
He wasn’t the main role.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 20:05:29
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Even not the ultimate villain.
Corrected text:
Not even the ultimate villain.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:06:09
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Not even the ultimate villain.
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Nor the ultimate villain.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-31 20:57:54
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He is just under the leadership of the ultimate villain “Eternal Night Queen”, the right prime minister of Green vines empire, brother of Duchess Angelina.
Corrected text:
He was the brother of the Right Prime Minister, Duchess Angelina, under the leadership of the ultimate villain “Eternal Night Queen.”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-06 17:34:58
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He had no impact on the storyline whatsoever, just appearing as an extra.
Corrected text:
He had no impact on the storyline whatsoever, appearing as just an extra.
Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:12:11
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He had no impact on the storyline what so ever, just appearing as an extra.
Corrected text:
He had no impact on the storyline whatsoever, just appearing as an extra.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-20 19:06:46
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He couldn’t even live until the game started, just appearing as an extra.
Corrected text:
He had no impact on the storyline what so ever, just appearing as an extra.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 10:59:55
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He couldn’t even live until the game started, just appear as a backdrop.
Corrected text:
He couldn’t even live until the game started, just appearing as an extra.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:04
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He couldn’t even live until the game started, just appears as a backdrop.
Corrected text:
He couldn’t even live until the game started, just appear as a backdrop.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-17 10:37:30
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He even couldn’t live until the game started, just appears as a backdrop.
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He couldn’t even live until the game started, just appears as a backdrop.
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:06:53
Original text:
Just a small mob by the roadside.
Corrected text:
Just a small mob character by the roadside.
Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-03-21 14:56:33
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A small role on the edge.
Corrected text:
Just a small mob by the roadside.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:12:46
Original text:
Fortunately, after he crossed into the game, he received the "Acedia System".
Corrected text:
Fortunately, after he crossed into the game, he received the "Indolence System".
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 10:59:58
Original text:
Fortunately, after he crossed into the game, he received the "Arcedia System".
Corrected text:
Fortunately, after he crossed into the game, he received the "Acedia System".
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:27
Original text:
Fortunately, after he crossed into the game, he received the "acedia System".
Corrected text:
Fortunately, after he crossed into the game, he received the "Arcedia System".
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:24
Original text:
Fortunately, after he crossed into the game, he received the "acedia System".
Corrected text:
Fortunately, after he crossed into the game, he received the "Arcedia System".
Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-03-21 14:57:47
Original text:
Luckily, as he crossed into the game world, the world gave him an “acedia system”.
Corrected text:
Fortunately, after he crossed into the game, he received "Arcedia System".
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-21 20:33:50
Original text:
Just by living comfortably and being a wasterel the system would award him a chest with random rewards everyday.
Corrected text:
Just by living comfortably and being a wastrel the system would award him with a chest consisting of random rewards everyday.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-24 21:13:21
Original text:
Just by living comfortably and pretending to be a wasterel the system would award him a chest with random rewards everyday.
Corrected text:
Just by living comfortably and being a wasterel the system would award him a chest with random rewards everyday.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-20 19:06:48
Original text:
Just by living a comfortable life and pretending to be a waste, the system will award him a chest with random rewards everyday.
Corrected text:
Just by living comfortably and pretending to be a wasterel the system would award him a chest with random rewards everyday.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:01
Original text:
Just by living a comfortable life and pretending to be a waste, the system will award him a chest with randomized rewards everyday.
Corrected text:
Just by living a comfortable life and pretending to be a waste, the system will award him a chest with random rewards everyday.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-13 19:09:41
Original text:
Just by living a confortable life and pretending to be a waste, the system will award him a chest with randomized rewards everyday.
Corrected text:
Just by living a comfortable life and pretending to be a waste, the system will award him a chest with randomized rewards everyday.
Corrected by: Gaebudge , 2022-03-21 14:57:57
Original text:
Just acedia kept the comfortable life, and always be a wasted bother, the system will send him a random chest every day.
Corrected text:
Just by living a confortable life and pretending to be a waste, the system will award him a chest with randomized rewards everyday.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-05-24 07:48:53
Original text:
The first time the chest awarded him a direct increase in spiritual power, he was overjoyed at the thought that just by lazing about and opening chests he could get much more powerful.
Corrected text:
The first time he opened the chest it awarded him a direct increase in spiritual power, he was overjoyed at the thought that just by lazing about and opening chests he could get much more powerful.
Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:13:33
Original text:
The first day the chest awarded him a direct increase in spiritual power, he was overjoyed at the thought that just by lazing about and opening chests he could get much more powerful.
Corrected text:
The first time the chest awarded him a direct increase in spiritual power, he was overjoyed at the thought that just by lazing about and opening chests he could get much more powerful.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-20 19:06:49
Original text:
The first day when his spiritual power strengthened, he thought that just by lazing about and opening chests, he could get much more powerful equipment and so on.
Corrected text:
The first day the chest awarded him a direct increase in spiritual power, he was overjoyed at the thought that just by lazing about and opening chests he could get much more powerful.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:06:13
Original text:
The first day he got the spiritual power to strengthen, he thought that to keep acedia and open the chest, he could get much more powerful equipment and so on.
Corrected text:
The first day when his spiritual power strengthened, he thought that just by lazing about and opening chests, he could get much more powerful equipment and so on.
Corrected by: shreyash , 2022-03-12 21:06:36
Original text:
But even he had this system, he was very stable, not decided to go outside to wander.
Corrected text:
But even if he had this system, he was very stable and decided not to go outside to wander.
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:06
Original text:
Since he had the system, he feel secured and decided not to wander outside.
Corrected text:
Since he had the system, he felt secure and decided not to wander outside.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:33
Original text:
Since he had the system he was secure and decided not to wander outside.
Corrected text:
Since he had the system, he feel secured and decided not to wander outside.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:06:17
Original text:
But even if he had this system, he was very stable and decided not to go outside to wander.
Corrected text:
Since he had the system he was secure and decided not to wander outside.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-05-24 07:49:47
Original text:
He was ready to lie in the Ducal Palace for ten years, and only then check the situation to see whether he should go out or not.
Corrected text:
He was ready to lie down in the Ducal Palace for ten years, and only then check the situation to see whether he should go out or not.
Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:14:28
Original text:
He was ready to lie in the Ducal Palace for ten years, and then check the situation to see whether he would go out or not.
Corrected text:
He was ready to lie in the Ducal Palace for ten years, and only then check the situation to see whether he should go out or not.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:06:20
Original text:
He was ready to lie flat in the Ducal Palace for ten years, and then see the situation whether he would go out of the mountain.
Corrected text:
He was ready to lie in the Ducal Palace for ten years, and then check the situation to see whether he would go out or not.
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Corrected by: Soybeans-The-First , 2022-05-16 09:47:36
Original text:
First, his empire was the villain camp, and depending on the direction of the game, they will lose.
Corrected text:
First, his empire was a villain camp, depending on the direction of the game, they will lose.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-11 10:06:23
Original text:
First, his empire was the villain camp, depending on the direction of the game, there is no doubt that they will lose.
Corrected text:
First, his empire was the villain camp, and depending on the direction of the game, they will lose.
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Corrected by: nassief , 2023-03-06 17:35:06
Original text:
And Roger did not even live until the game started, this means that in the next ten years he had a deadly crisis, so he should be careful.
Corrected text:
And Roger did not even live until the game started, this meant that in the next ten years he would face a deadly crisis, so he should be careful.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:04
Original text:
And Roger did not even stay alive until the game started, so in ten years he will face a deadly predicament, he should be careful.
Corrected text:
And Roger did not even live until the game started, this means that in the next ten years he had a deadly crisis, so he should be careful.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:09
Original text:
And Roger did not even stay alive until the game started, so in ten years he had a deadly predicament, he should be careful.
Corrected text:
And Roger did not even stay alive until the game started, so in ten years he will face a deadly predicament, he should be careful.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:36
Original text:
And Roger did even not live until the game started, so in ten years he had a deadly crisis, he should be careful.
Corrected text:
And Roger did not even stay alive until the game started, so in ten years he had a deadly predicament, he should be careful.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:46:59
Original text:
This game’s task was to kill the queen and overthrow the tyranny of the Empire.
Corrected text:
This game’s task was to kill the Queen and overthrow the tyranny of the Empire.
Corrected by: Soybeans-The-First , 2022-05-16 12:00:44
Original text:
The goal of this game was to kill the queen and overthrow the tyranny of the Empire.
Corrected text:
This game’s task was to kill the queen and overthrow the tyranny of the Empire.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:08
Original text:
This game’s task was to kill the queen and overthrow the tyranny of the Empire.
Corrected text:
The goal of this game was to kill the queen and overthrow the tyranny of the Empire.
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Corrected by: Soybeans-The-First , 2022-05-16 12:00:48
Original text:
Roger knows every game plot, blending in with the protagonist group is simple.
Corrected text:
To Roger, who knows every game plot, blending in with the protagonist's group is simple.
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:06:54
Original text:
If he had the Protagonist's Halo and a god's help, and opening a system plug-in, achieving a perfect ending would be easy!
Corrected text:
If he had the Protagonist's Halo and a god's help, and a system from the beginning , achieving a perfect ending would be easy!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 20:41:54
Original text:
He had the Protagonist's Halo and a god's help, and opening a system plug-in, achieving a perfect ending would be easy!
Corrected text:
If he had the Protagonist's Halo and a god's help, and opening a system plug-in, achieving a perfect ending would be easy!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-11 10:16:06
Original text:
He had the Protagonist's Halo and a god's help, and opening a prophet plug-in, achieving a perfect ending would be easy!
Corrected text:
He had the Protagonist's Halo and a god's help, and opening a system plug-in, achieving a perfect ending would be easy!
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:15
Original text:
He had the protagonist's halos and the god's help, and open a prophet plug-in, playing a perfect ending is so easy!
Corrected text:
He had the Protagonist's Halo and a god's help, and opening a prophet plug-in, achieving a perfect ending would be easy!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:18
Original text:
But as he knew the secrets of the world, he admired the Queen who showed the gods her sword.
Corrected text:
But as he knew the secrets of the world, he admired the Queen who went against the gods with her sword.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-20 11:29:57
Original text:
But as he knew the world deeply, he appreciated the queen who show the sword to gods, more inclined to heroic empires.
Corrected text:
But as he knew the secrets of the world, he admired the Queen who showed the gods her sword.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 10:51:04
Original text:
Buttas hetknew thetworld deeply,the appreciatedtthe queentwho showtthe swordtto gods,tmore inclinedtto heroictempires.
Corrected text:
Buttas hetknew thetworld deeply,the appreciatedtthe queentwho showedtthe swordtto gods,tmore inclinedtto heroictempires.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:48:05
Original text:
Because the gods were bastards, the protagonist's group was tricked.
Corrected text:
Because the gods were bastards, the protagonist's group was deceived.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-05 20:22:34
Original text:
Because the gods were bastards, the protagonist's group was robbed.
Corrected text:
Because the gods were bastards, the protagonist's group was tricked.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:23
Original text:
Because the gods are bastards, and the protagonist group was robbed.
Corrected text:
Because the gods were bastards, the protagonist's group was robbed.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-20 11:29:52
Original text:
Because the gods are bastards, and the protagonist group is robbed.
Corrected text:
Because the gods are bastards, and the protagonist group was robbed.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 10:51:00
Original text:
Because thetgods aretbastards, andtthe protagonisttgroup istrobbed.
Corrected text:
Because thetgods aretbastards, andtthe protagonist'stgroup wastrobbed.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:48:26
Original text:
Despite knowing this, he had been given a chance to live again. The destiny of the empire was not easy to change, and he didn’t want to give his life to the gods.
Corrected text:
Despite knowing this, he had been given a chance to live again. The destiny of the Empire was not easy to change, and he didn’t want to lose his life to the gods.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:06:56
Original text:
Despite knowing this, he had been given chance to live again. The destiny of the empire was not easy to change, and he didn’t want to give his life to the gods.
Corrected text:
Despite knowing this, he had been given a chance to live again. The destiny of the empire was not easy to change, and he didn’t want to give his life to the gods.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:26
Original text:
Despite respecting this, he had been given the chance to live again, the destiny of the empire was not easy to change, and he didn’t want to give his life to the gods.
Corrected text:
Despite knowing this, he had been given chance to live again. The destiny of the empire was not easy to change, and he didn’t want to give his life to the gods.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:13
Original text:
Despite respecting this, he had been given chance to live again, the destiny of the empire was not easy to change, and he didn’t want to give his life to gods.
Corrected text:
Despite respecting this, he had been given the chance to live again, the destiny of the empire was not easy to change, and he didn’t want to give his life to the gods.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:39
Original text:
Despite appreciating this, he had been given chance to live again, the destiny of the empire was not easy to change, and he didn’t want to give his life to gods.
Corrected text:
Despite respecting this, he had been given chance to live again, the destiny of the empire was not easy to change, and he didn’t want to give his life to gods.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 17:07:54
Original text:
Despite appreciated. He had a chance to live again, the destiny of the empire was not easy to change, he didn’t want to give his life to gods.
Corrected text:
Despite appreciating this, he had been given chance to live again, the destiny of the empire was not easy to change, and he didn’t want to give his life to gods.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:13
Original text:
So just laid in this place, reduces presence, don't let the protagonists and the gods notice about him.
Corrected text:
So he just laid in this place, reducing his presence, not letting the protagonists and the gods notice him.
Corrected by: shreyash , 2022-03-12 21:06:46
Original text:
As the plot started, if he had a chance, he would help the empire.
Corrected text:
As the plot starts, if he has a chance, he would help the empire.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:48:38
Original text:
If the main story starts, if he had a chance, he would help the empire.
Corrected text:
If the main story starts, if he had a chance, he would help the Empire.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:29
Original text:
As the plot starts, if he has a chance, he would help the empire.
Corrected text:
If the main story starts, if he had a chance, he would help the empire.
Corrected by: shreyash , 2022-03-12 21:06:50
Original text:
If he had no chance, he brought his sister to another place and go on acedia.
Corrected text:
If he has no chance, he will bring his sister to another place and go on acedia.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:48:55
Original text:
If he had no other choice, he would bring his sister to another place and rely on the Acedia System.
Corrected text:
If he had no other choice, he would bring his sister to another place and rely on the Indolence System.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:32
Original text:
If he has no chance, he will bring his sister to another place and rely on acedia.
Corrected text:
If he had no other choice, he would bring his sister to another place and rely on the Acedia System.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-18 18:37:48
Original text:
If he has no chance, he will bring his sister to another place and go on acedia.
Corrected text:
If he has no chance, he will bring his sister to another place and rely on acedia.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 14:35:38
Original text:
Squeak sound.
Corrected text:
Squeak~.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:36
Original text:
His bedroom door was pushed opened.
Corrected text:
His bedroom door was pushed open.
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 14:35:41
Original text:
His bedroom door was pushed.
Corrected text:
His bedroom door was pushed opened.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 14:35:44
Original text:
A blue hair girl walked into his room.
Corrected text:
A blue haired girl walked into his room.
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Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-28 12:34:56
Original text:
She had 165cm, the eyes were so clear.
Corrected text:
She was 165 centimeters tall, and her blue eyes were crystal clear.
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:06:57
Original text:
Her bright and beautiful face could even make the coldest land blows spring breeze.
Corrected text:
Her bright and beautiful face could even make the coldest land thaw with a fresh spring breeze.
Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-28 12:35:01
Original text:
Her face was so beautiful.
Corrected text:
Her bright and beautiful face could even make the coldest land blows spring breeze.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 17:07:57
Original text:
Angelina Charles, the right prime minister of Green vines empire, Roger’s sister.
Corrected text:
Angelina Charles, the prime minister of Green Vines Empire, Roger’s sister.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:50:30
Original text:
At the side of the Queen of Eternal Night, the only great maid who could suppress her murderous spirit.
Corrected text:
By the side of the Queen of Eternal Night, the only maiden who could suppress the Queen's murderous spirit.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:41
Original text:
At the side of the Queen of Eternal Night, the only great butler who could suppress her murderous spirit.
Corrected text:
At the side of the Queen of Eternal Night, the only great maid who could suppress her murderous spirit.
Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-03-11 11:15:41
Original text:
She’s the person who has saved countless times, including the protagonist group that has been released several times.
Corrected text:
She’s the person who has saved many people countless times, including the protagonist group that has been released several times.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:50:57
Original text:
Many people had been saved due to her efforts countless times including the protagonist's party.
Corrected text:
Many people had been saved due to her tireless efforts, including the protagonist's party.
Corrected by: LC-Shin-Senpai , 2022-05-09 10:15:48
Original text:
She is the person that had saved many people countless times, including the protagonist's party that had been saved several times thanks to her efforts.
Corrected text:
Many people had been saved due to her efforts countless times including the protagonist's party.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:40
Original text:
She’s the person who has saved many people countless times, including the protagonist's party that has been saved several times thanks to her efforts.
Corrected text:
She is the person that had saved many people countless times, including the protagonist's party that had been saved several times thanks to her efforts.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:45
Original text:
She’s the person who has saved many people countless times, including the protagonist's party that has been released several times thanks to her efforts.
Corrected text:
She’s the person who has saved many people countless times, including the protagonist's party that has been saved several times thanks to her efforts.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 17:08:00
Original text:
She’s the person who has saved many people countless times, including the protagonist group that has been released several times.
Corrected text:
She’s the person who has saved many people countless times, including the protagonist's party that has been released several times thanks to her efforts.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:51:15
Original text:
So the players called her “Saint Angelina”, the image of the blue-haired maid is also very flattering.
Corrected text:
So the players called her “Saint Angelina”, the image of the blue-haired maiden is also very flattering.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:18
Original text:
So the gamer called her “Sage Angelina”, the image of the blue-haired maid is also very much flattering.
Corrected text:
So the players called her “Saint Angelina”, the image of the blue-haired maid is also very flattering.
Corrected by: shreyash , 2022-03-12 21:06:54
Original text:
Now Angelina was pout, went to the bed, and said:
Corrected text:
Now Angelina was pouting, she went near the bed, and said:
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:51:24
Original text:
Now Angelina was pouting, she went near the bed, and said:
Corrected text:
Now that Angelina was pouting, she went near the bed, and said:
Corrected by: shreyash , 2022-03-12 21:06:57
Original text:
“Roger, why do you still sleep?”
Corrected text:
“Roger, why are you still sleep?”
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:44:00
Original text:
“Sister, why did you suddenly come in?”
Corrected text:
“Sister, why did you suddenly barge in?”
Corrected by: shreyash , 2022-03-12 21:07:01
Original text:
Roger hurriedly pulled the cup over and covered the body wearing only panties.
Corrected text:
Roger hurriedly pulled the blanket over and covered the body wearing only underwear.
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Corrected by: Soybeans-The-First , 2022-05-16 12:00:52
Original text:
Roger hurriedly pulled his blanket over himself, covering his body wearing only underwear.
Corrected text:
Roger hurriedly pulled his blanket over himself, covering his body that was only wearing underwear.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-28 17:46:17
Original text:
Roger hurriedly pulled the blanket over and covered the body wearing only underwear.
Corrected text:
Roger hurriedly pulled his blanket over himself, covering his body wearing only underwear.
Corrected by: shreyash , 2022-03-12 21:07:04
Original text:
“Queen will go to our home, you hurriedly wear your clothes!”
Corrected text:
“Queen is coming to our home, you hurry up and wear your clothes!”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-05-24 07:51:42
Original text:
“The Queen is coming to our home, you better hurry up and put some clothes on!”
Corrected text:
“The Queen is coming over to our house, you better hurry up and put some clothes on!”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:18
Original text:
“Queen is coming to our home, you hurry up and wear your clothes!”
Corrected text:
“The Queen is coming to our home, you better hurry up and put some clothes on!”
Corrected by: shreyash , 2022-03-12 21:07:13
Original text:
“She comes here, I don’t go outside, that’s ok?”
Corrected text:
“When she comes here, I won't go outside,is that ok?”
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:51:41
Original text:
“ I won't go outside when she's here, is that ok?”
Corrected text:
“ I won't go outside while she's here, is that ok?”
Corrected by: Soybeans-The-First , 2022-05-16 12:00:56
Original text:
“When she comes here, I won't go outside, is that ok?”
Corrected text:
“ I won't go outside when she's here, is that ok?”
Corrected by: shreyash , 2022-03-12 21:07:22
Original text:
“Your Majesty wants to see you by name, and she wants to knight you, will you go?”
Corrected text:
“Her Majesty wants to see you and wants to name you as her knight ,will you come?”
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:52:04
Original text:
“Her Majesty wants to see you and wants to name you as her knight, will you come?”
Corrected text:
“Her Majesty wants to see you and name you as her Knight, will you come?”
Corrected by: Person-West , 2022-06-24 17:53:04
Original text:
“Her Majesty wants to see you and wants to name you as her knight, will you come?”
Corrected text:
“You realise Her Majesty wants to see you and wants to name you as her knight, are you not still not going to come down?”
Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-03-11 11:15:46
Original text:
“of course go!”
Corrected text:
“Of course I will go!”
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Corrected by: shreyash , 2022-03-12 21:07:25
Original text:
Roger only gets up and gets dressed.
Corrected text:
Roger then gets up and gets dressed.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-24 21:13:22
Original text:
Roger then got up and get dressed.
Corrected text:
Roger, then got up and got dressed.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:00
Original text:
Roger then gets up and gets dressed.
Corrected text:
Roger then got up and get dressed.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-24 21:13:23
Original text:
The Queen of Eternal Night is ruthless and strict with her subordinates.
Corrected text:
The Queen of Eternal Night was ruthless and strict with her subordinates.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:01
Original text:
The Queen of Eternal Nights is ruthless and is strict with her subordinates.
Corrected text:
The Queen of Eternal Night is ruthless and strict with her subordinates.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:44
Original text:
The Queen of Eternal Nights is ruthless and is still strict with her subordinates.
Corrected text:
The Queen of Eternal Nights is ruthless and is strict with her subordinates.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 17:08:02
Original text:
The Queen of eternal nights hates her enemies and is strict with her opponents.
Corrected text:
The Queen of Eternal Nights is ruthless and is still strict with her subordinates.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:52:26
Original text:
Betraying her orders, then your best ending would be death.
Corrected text:
If you ignored her orders, then your best ending would be death.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:03
Original text:
Betray her orders, and the best ending would be death.
Corrected text:
Betraying her orders, then your best ending would be death.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 17:09:40
Original text:
Betray her order, the best ending was death.
Corrected text:
Betray her orders, and the best ending would be death.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:49
Original text:
Roger was an otaku, so how could he be get close to such a beautiful girl like her in his previous life?
Corrected text:
Roger was an otaku, so how could he get close to such a beautiful girl like her in his previous life?
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 17:08:06
Original text:
Roger was an otaku, where can he be so close to such a beautiful girl in reality?
Corrected text:
Roger was an otaku, so how could he be get close to such a beautiful girl like her in his previous life?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-05-24 07:53:40
Original text:
Obviously, as the Queen's Grand Chancellor of the Right, Angelina rarely tends to others.
Corrected text:
Obviously, as the Queen's Grand Chancellor and Prime minister of the empire, Angelina rarely tends to others.
Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:53:34
Original text:
Obviously, as the Grand Chancellor of the Queen's Right seat, Angelina rarely tends to others.
Corrected text:
Obviously, as the Queen's Grand Chancellor of the Right, Angelina rarely tends to others.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:06
Original text:
Obviously, as the Grand Chancellor of the Queen's Right seat, Angelina rarely does tend to others.
Corrected text:
Obviously, as the Grand Chancellor of the Queen's Right seat, Angelina rarely tends to others.
Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:44:05
Original text:
Obviously, as the Grand Chancellor of the Right, Angelina rarely does tend to others.
Corrected text:
Obviously, as the Grand Chancellor of the Queen's Right seat, Angelina rarely does tend to others.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:48
Original text:
Obviously, as the Grand Chancellor of the Right, Angelina rarely helps people with this kind of thing.
Corrected text:
Obviously, as the Grand Chancellor of the Right, Angelina rarely does tend to others.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:22
Original text:
Obviously, as the Grand Chancellor of the Right, Angelina rarely does tend to others.
Corrected text:
Obviously, as the Grand Chancellor of the Right, Angelina rarely helps people with this kind of thing.
Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-28 12:35:05
Original text:
And Angelina was the right prime minister, obviously rare to do this kind of service to people.
Corrected text:
Obviously, as the Grand Chancellor of the Right, Angelina rarely does tend to others.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:50
Original text:
Roger keep dodging, while Angelina was untrained.
Corrected text:
Roger kept dodging, while Angelina was obviously inexperienced.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:52
Original text:
Roger keep dodging, while Angelina was inexperienced.
Corrected text:
Roger keep dodging, while Angelina was untrained.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:24
Original text:
One keep dodging, while the other was inexperienced.
Corrected text:
Roger keep dodging, while Angelina was inexperienced.
Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-28 12:35:16
Original text:
One dodge and one rare to do this.
Corrected text:
One keep dodging, while the other was inexperienced.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:28
Original text:
The clothes soon became a mess, and they lost their balance as they fell into the soft, huge bed together.
Corrected text:
The clothes soon became a mess, they lost their balance and they fell into the soft, huge bed together.
Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-28 12:35:21
Original text:
The clothes were a mess, and they fell into the soft bed together.
Corrected text:
The clothes soon became a mess, and they lost their balance as they fell into the soft, huge bed together.
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:21
Original text:
His arms were wrapped around sister's body, and there was a delicate fragrance of orchids floating into his nose
Corrected text:
His arms were wrapped around his sister's body, and there was a delicate fragrance of orchids floating into his nose
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:31
Original text:
His arms were attached to his sister's body. There was a delicate fragrance of orchids he let into his nose.
Corrected text:
His arms were wrapped around sister's body, and there was a delicate fragrance of orchids floating into his nose
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 17:08:09
Original text:
His arms were his sister's body. There is a delicate fragrance of orchid in the nose.
Corrected text:
His arms were attached to his sister's body. There was a delicate fragrance of orchids he let into his nose.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-05-24 07:55:59
Original text:
Roger’s mind was blank for some time before he pushed her away in embarassment.
Corrected text:
Roger’s mind went was blank for a moment before he pushed her away in embarrassment.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 11:00:54
Original text:
Roger’s mind was blank for some time before he pushed her away in shame.
Corrected text:
Roger’s mind was blank for some time before he pushed her away in embarassment.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 17:08:12
Original text:
Roger’s mind was white for some time before he pushed her away in shame.
Corrected text:
Roger’s mind was blank for some time before he pushed her away in shame.
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Corrected by: LC-Shin-Senpai , 2022-05-09 10:15:53
Original text:
“Sister, I know how to put on clothes! Don’t start making trouble!”
Corrected text:
“Sister, I know how to put on clothes! Stop embarrassing me!”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:34
Original text:
“Sister, I know how to wear clothes! Don’t start making trouble!”
Corrected text:
“Sister, I know how to put on clothes! Don’t start making trouble!”
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 14:35:49
Original text:
“Sister, I know how to wear clothes! You don’t make trouble!”
Corrected text:
“Sister, I know how to wear clothes! Don’t start making trouble!”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:37
Original text:
Angelina was stunned, though isn't it she who should be ashamed at this time?
Corrected text:
Angelina was stunned, isn't it her who should be ashamed at this time?
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 14:35:53
Original text:
This guy preempted it!
Corrected text:
This guy started it!
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:55:22
Original text:
She struggled to prop herself up and said in disgust: ”Brother, you are stupid like a child, don't move, I'll help you get it done.”
Corrected text:
She struggled to prop herself up and said in disgust: “Brother, you are like a child, don't move, I'll help you get dressed.”
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:10:14
Original text:
She struggled to prop herself up and said in disgust: ”brother, you are stupid like a child, don't move, I'll help you get it done.”
Corrected text:
She struggled to prop herself up and said in disgust: ”Brother, you are stupid like a child, don't move, I'll help you get it done.”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:39
Original text:
She struggled to prop herself up and said in disgust: ”my brother, you are so stupid like a child, Well, don't move, I'll help you get it done.”
Corrected text:
She struggled to prop herself up and said in disgust: ”brother, you are stupid like a child, don't move, I'll help you get it done.”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:42
Original text:
The gentle face radiated a holy glow.
Corrected text:
Her gentle face radiated a holy glow.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:32:55
Original text:
Roger was also recruited.
Corrected text:
Roger was also impressed.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-21 20:33:53
Original text:
That's a lot better than CG!
Corrected text:
That's a lot better than CGI!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:45
Original text:
He was like a wooden puppet, letting his sister help him wear clothes.
Corrected text:
He was like a wooden puppet, letting his sister help him get dressed.
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:07
Original text:
Get dressed and get his hair done.
Corrected text:
After getting dressed Angelina helped him with his hair.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:55:44
Original text:
Although her brother was a waste, he looked so handsome!
Corrected text:
Although her brother was a waste, he looked handsome!
Corrected by: Austin-Tan , 2022-03-23 17:09:44
Original text:
Her brother although was a waste, looked so handsome!
Corrected text:
Although her brother was a waste, he looked so handsome!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-21 20:34:08
Original text:
Roger has been raised with hard work. Angelina dose not know which little fairy will be lucky enough to marry him.
Corrected text:
Roger has been raised with hard work. Angelina does not know which little fairy will be lucky enough to marry him.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:08
Original text:
The cubs that have been raised with hard work do not know which little fairy will marry him.
Corrected text:
Roger has been raised with hard work. Angelina dose not know which little fairy will be lucky enough to marry him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 14:35:06
Original text:
The cubs that have been raised with hard work do not know which little goblin will marry him.
Corrected text:
The cubs that have been raised with hard work do not know which little fairy will marry him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 14:35:02
Original text:
The cubs that have been raised with hard work do not know which little goblin will marry him.
Corrected text:
The cubs that have been raised with hard work do not know which little fairy will marry him.
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 17:27:57
Original text:
The cubs that have been raised with hard work do not know which little goblin married him.
Corrected text:
The cubs that have been raised with hard work do not know which little goblin will marry him.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:10:19
Original text:
“I am your sister, I'll pinch if I want to, I am the biggest in this house!”
Corrected text:
“I'm your sister, I'll pinch you if I want to, I'm the biggest in this house!”
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:24
Original text:
“I am your sister, i pinch if i want, I am the biggest in this house!”
Corrected text:
“I am your sister, I'll pinch if I want to, I am the biggest in this house!”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:33:00
Original text:
“I am your sister, pinch if you want, I am the biggest in this house!”
Corrected text:
“I am your sister, i pinch if i want, I am the biggest in this house!”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:27:04
Original text:
She said without any reason, seemed not happy.
Corrected text:
She said without any reason, seemingly unhappy.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:48
Original text:
Roger was inexplicable.
Corrected text:
Roger was confused.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:52
Original text:
From the second dimension to the third dimension, the goddess also became neurotic!
Corrected text:
When she went from 2D to 3D this goddess also became neurotic!
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:10:22
Original text:
But the sister is a duchess, which is big.
Corrected text:
But as expected of the duchess, they are big.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:33:05
Original text:
Was is that her cup size was a D?
Corrected text:
Was her cup size a D?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:33:02
Original text:
Was is that her cup size was a D?
Corrected text:
Was her cup size a D?
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 17:08:20
Original text:
Does it seem the bra was D?
Corrected text:
Was is that her cup size was a D?
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:56:54
Original text:
When he thought about it, only he could see that even the right chancellor of the empire had a girlish side.
Corrected text:
When he thought about it, only he could see that even the Chancellor of the right also had a girlish side.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:10:24
Original text:
When he thinks about it, only he can see that even the right chancellor of the empire has a girlish side.
Corrected text:
When he thought about it, only he could see that even the right chancellor of the empire had a girlish side.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:55
Original text:
When he thinks about it, only he can see that the right chancellor of the powerful empire even has a little woman's side.
Corrected text:
When he thinks about it, only he can see that even the right chancellor of the empire has a girlish side.
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Corrected by: Person-West , 2022-06-24 17:53:06
Original text:
Seemed quite cool?
Corrected text:
She seemed quite cool?
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:10:27
Original text:
Seems quite cool?
Corrected text:
Seemed quite cool?
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:57:58
Original text:
Beside Charles's room.
Corrected text:
In the Charles's manor reception room.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:58:25
Original text:
Angelina, Roger and the many other waiters and maids, were still waiting for the empress to arrive.
Corrected text:
Angelina, Roger and the many other butlers and maids, were waiting for the empress to arrive.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:10
Original text:
Angelina, Roger and the many other waiters and maids, were still waiting for the queen to arrive.
Corrected text:
Angelina, Roger and the many other waiters and maids, were still waiting for the empress to arrive.
Corrected by: Person-West , 2022-06-24 17:53:08
Original text:
Angelina, Roger and many other waiters and maids were waiting for the queen to arrive.
Corrected text:
Angelina, Roger and the many other waiters and maids, were still waiting for the queen to arrive.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:10:30
Original text:
Angelina and Roger and many waiters and maids are waiting for the queen to come.
Corrected text:
Angelina, Roger and many other waiters and maids were waiting for the queen to arrive.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:27
Original text:
Angelina and Roger and many waiters and maids waiting for the queen to come.
Corrected text:
Angelina and Roger and many waiters and maids are waiting for the queen to come.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:33:08
Original text:
Angelina and Roger and many waiters and maids waiting for the queen coming.
Corrected text:
Angelina and Roger and many waiters and maids waiting for the queen to come.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:10:33
Original text:
There shone a slight light, and a woman who was 175cm tall and wearing a gorgeous robe with gold and red characters teleported directly to the house.
Corrected text:
There was a slight flash of light, and a woman who was 175cm tall wearing a gorgeous robe with gold and red characters teleported directly to the house.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:29
Original text:
There shone a slight light, and the woman who was 175cm tall wore a gorgeous robe with gold and red characters teleported directly to the house.
Corrected text:
There shone a slight light, and a woman who was 175cm tall and wearing a gorgeous robe with gold and red characters teleported directly to the house.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-22 11:33:14
Original text:
The light shone slightly, and the woman who was 175cm tall wore a gorgeous robe with gold and red characters and was directly teleported to the house.
Corrected text:
There shone a slight light, and the woman who was 175cm tall wore a gorgeous robe with gold and red characters teleported directly to the house.
Corrected by: Mazino-Mercante , 2022-03-28 12:35:09
Original text:
The light shone slightly, and the woman who was one 175cm tall wore a gorgeous robe with gold and red characters and was directly teleported to it.
Corrected text:
The light shone slightly, and the woman who was 175cm tall wore a gorgeous robe with gold and red characters and was directly teleported to the house.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:58:54
Original text:
Because she was so strong, she didn't need any guards to escort her.
Corrected text:
She was so strong that she didn't need any guards to escort her.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:11
Original text:
Because she was too strong, she didn't need any guards to escort her.
Corrected text:
Because she was so strong, she didn't need any guards to escort her.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:10:37
Original text:
Because she was too strong, she didn't need any guards to travel, nor did she need any pomp and circumstance.
Corrected text:
Because she was too strong, she didn't need any guards to escort her.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:59:13
Original text:
She had gold hair which shone like the sun, her face was radiantly beautiful, and her skin is fairer than any girl he had seen.
Corrected text:
She had gold hair which shone like the sun, her face was radiantly beautiful, and her skin was fairer than any girl he had ever seen.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:13
Original text:
She had gold hair which shone like the sun, her face was radiantly beautiful, and her skin were fairer than any girl he had seen.
Corrected text:
She had gold hair which shone like the sun, her face was radiantly beautiful, and her skin is fairer than any girl he had seen.
Corrected by: Person-West , 2022-06-24 17:53:09
Original text:
She had gold hair which shone like the sun, her face was radiantly beautiful, and her skin were fairer than a girl's.
Corrected text:
She had gold hair which shone like the sun, her face was radiantly beautiful, and her skin were fairer than any girl he had seen.
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:10:40
Original text:
She has gold hair which is like the sun, her face is beautiful, and her skin is pinker than a girl's.
Corrected text:
She had gold hair which shone like the sun, her face was radiantly beautiful, and her skin were fairer than a girl's.
Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:31
Original text:
She had gold hair which was like the sun, the face was beautiful and the skin is pinker than a girl's.
Corrected text:
She has gold hair which is like the sun, her face is beautiful, and her skin is pinker than a girl's.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-17 11:26:55
Original text:
A pity that her aura was powerful and sharp, akin to a sword, suppressing all blasphemous thoughts one might have about her.
Corrected text:
It's a pity that her aura was powerful and sharp, akin to a sword, suppressing all blasphemous thoughts one might have about her.
Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 05:59:29
Original text:
A pity that her aura was so powerful and sharp, akin to a sword, suppressing all blasphemous thoughts one might have about her.
Corrected text:
A pity that her aura was powerful and sharp, akin to a sword, suppressing all blasphemous thoughts one might have about her.
Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:14
Original text:
A pity that her aura was ever powerful and sharp, akin to a sword, suppressing all blasphemous thoughts one might have.
Corrected text:
A pity that her aura was so powerful and sharp, akin to a sword, suppressing all blasphemous thoughts one might have about her.
Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-27 20:47:36
Original text:
But the aura was powerful and sharp as a knife, and people could not afford a trace of blasphemy.
Corrected text:
A pity that her aura was ever powerful and sharp, akin to a sword, suppressing all blasphemous thoughts one might have.
Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-27 20:47:33
Original text:
But the aura was powerful and sharp as a knife, and people could not afford a trace of blasphemy.
Corrected text:
A pity that her aura was ever powerful and sharp, akin to a sword, suppressing all blasphemous thoughts one might have.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 06:00:06
Original text:
By pure magic alone, she could stand in the air and look down on everyone.
Corrected text:
By might alone, she could stand high above and look down on everyone.
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-09-20 19:07:16
Original text:
At this moment, he finally understood the so-called majesty of a queen.
Corrected text:
At this moment, he finally understood the so-called majesty of a empress.
Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-27 20:47:42
Original text:
At this moment, he knew the majesty of the queen.
Corrected text:
At this moment, he finally understood the so-called majesty of a queen.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 06:00:54
Original text:
In the game, one can also look at her dreamlike character portrait.
Corrected text:
In the game, one could also look at her dreamlike character portrait.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-12 22:37:34
Original text:
In the game, you can also face the portrait reverie.
Corrected text:
In the game, one can also look at her dreamlike character portrait.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-13 17:27:08
Original text:
But now, face the queen, you can feel her power and horror.
Corrected text:
But now, facing the queen, you can feel her power and horror.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 06:02:08
Original text:
But now, facing her directly with her aura's momentum beyond that of a legendary powerhouse, only one word came to mind — terrifying!
Corrected text:
But now, facing her directly with her pressure that is beyond that of a Legendary powerhouse, only one word came to mind — terrifying!
Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-27 20:47:47
Original text:
But now, facing the queen, you can feel her power and horror.
Corrected text:
But now, facing her directly with her aura's momentum beyond that of a legendary powerhouse, only one word came to mind — terrifying!
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Corrected by: nassief , 2023-03-06 17:35:08
Original text:
Although it was only one woman, her presence alone can caused everyone to kneel. “Greetings, Your Majesty!”
Corrected text:
Although she was only one woman, her presence alone caused everyone to kneel. “Greetings, Your Majesty!”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-06 17:34:36
Original text:
Although it was only one woman, her presence alone can caused everyone to kneel. “Greetings, Your Majesty!”
Corrected text:
Although it was only one woman, her presence alone caused everyone to kneel. “Greetings, Your Majesty!”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-17 11:25:49
Original text:
Although it was only one woman, her presence alone caused everyone to kneel. “Greetings, Your Majesty!”
Corrected text:
Although it was only one woman, her presence alone can caused everyone to kneel. “Greetings, Your Majesty!”
Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2022-11-22 06:03:15
Original text:
Although it’s only one woman, her presence alone caused everyone to kneel."Greetings, Your Majesty!"
Corrected text:
Although it was only one woman, her presence alone caused everyone to kneel. “Greetings, Your Majesty!”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:39:58
Original text:
Though only one woman, her presence alone caused everyone to kneel."Greetings, Your Majesty!"
Corrected text:
Although it’s only one woman, her presence alone caused everyone to kneel."Greetings, Your Majesty!"
Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-27 20:47:50
Original text:
“See the Majesty the Empress!”
Corrected text:
Though only one woman, her presence alone caused everyone to kneel."Greetings, Your Majesty!"
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:44:22
Original text:
This is the Lord of the Empire, the world's top powerhouse, the Queen of the Eternal Night!
Corrected text:
This is the Ruler of the Empire, the world's top powerhouse, the Queen of the Eternal Night!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-01 09:58:04
Original text:
“Standtup.”
Corrected text:
“Stand up.”
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-06 17:34:39
Original text:
She gently waved her hand, with a bearing befitting that of a leader.
Corrected text:
She waved her hand, with a bearing befitting that of a leader.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-06 17:34:37
Original text:
She gently waved her hand, with a bearing befitting that of a leader.
Corrected text:
She waved her hand, with a bearing befitting that of a leader.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-11 21:10:00
Original text:
She waved her hand gently.
Corrected text:
She gently waved her hand, with a bearing befitting that of a leader.
Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-27 20:47:55
Original text:
She waved her hand.
Corrected text:
She waved her hand gently.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 10:40:02
Original text:
[Oh my god! She’s so powerful! I think she's awesome!]
Corrected text:
[Oh my god! She’s so powerful! She’s awesome!]
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Corrected by: trek-backs , 2022-05-15 20:44:28
Original text:
[But why is she wearing leggings? Does she not have any dignity and self respect?]
Corrected text:
[But why is she wearing leggings? Does she not have any care for her dignity and self respect?]
Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-05-08 16:10:42
Original text:
[But how could she wear leggings? The most basic dignity and self-respect has gone.]
Corrected text:
[But why is she wearing leggings? Does she not have any dignity and self respect?]
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 17:08:24
Original text:
[But how could she wear leggings? The most basic trust of people and people is gone.]
Corrected text:
[But how could she wear leggings? The most basic dignity and self-respect has gone.]
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Corrected by: Erick-Garza , 2022-05-01 12:14:34
Original text:
“Who knows the secret of me and gods?”
Corrected text:
“Who knows the secret of me and the gods?”
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-21 14:55:18
Original text:
“Who known the secret of me and gods?”
Corrected text:
“Who knows the secret of me and gods?”
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Corrected by: Oedon , 2022-03-27 20:47:58
Original text:
The Queen of eternal night set off terrifying waves in her heart and stood directly in the air.
Corrected text:
Storms were set off in the Queen's heart as she stood directly in the air.
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Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2022-11-07 11:31:04
Original text:
（come here！ read the book faster at https://www.patreon.com/jacksonben?fan_landing=true）
Corrected text:
(come here! Read the book faster at https://www.patreon.com/jacksonben?fan_landing=true）
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