Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 01:47:56
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Chapter 19: Who is the greatest queen?
Corrected text:
Chapter 19: Who Is The Greatest Queen?
Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2023-05-17 12:15:12
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Chapter 19 Who is the greatest queen?
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Chapter 19: Who is the greatest queen?
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-04-02 17:28:00
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Those who were curiously looking in the direction of the source of the magic storm, wanting to know what friction happened between the Queen of Eternal Night and the new historian Dio, suddenly felt a sudden pain in their eyes.
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Everyone was curiously looking in the direction of the source of the magic storm, wanting to know what happened between the Queen of Eternal Night and the new historian Dio. But now everyone suddenly felt a sudden pain in their eyes.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 01:49:10
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The magician also has healing powers.
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These magicians actually also had defensive powers.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 01:50:04
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But the Queen of Eternal Night was even better, using continuous effects to suppress their spells.
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But the Queen of Eternal Night was too strong. Her continuous release of aura suppressed their spells.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 01:51:33
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Curator Rodney was not spared either, crying and annoyed at the same time.
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Even Curator Rodney was not spared, his eyes turning red. Internally, he was feeling very annoyed.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-17 18:53:30
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The historian wrote something to make His Majesty so angry.
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The historian wrote something to make Her Majesty so angry.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 01:52:06
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It is estimated that there will be no chance to see it in the future!
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He estimated that there would be no chance to see it in the future!
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 01:57:17
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"You said, why didn't I dare to kill you? Can't kill you?"
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"You said I don't dare to kill you? You really think I can't kill you?"
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 01:56:01
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"I'm no one, I'm just a commoner, a little commoner who buys the bones of Her Majesty's money. Her Majesty used me to set a precedent for a commoner to be an official, and I was killed in ten days. What would the commoners who were extremely grateful and looking forward to Her Majesty think? Do you think that Her Majesty is afraid of the nobles of the Congress?"
Corrected text:
"I'm a nobody. Just a commoner. A little commoner who earned a bit of Her Majesty's money. However, Her Majesty used me to set a precedent that a commoner could become an official. But then I was killed ten days later? What would the commoners who were extremely grateful and looking forward to Her Majesty's new precedent think? Won't they think that Her Majesty is afraid of the nobles in Congress?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-08 10:24:11
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"I'm no one, I'm just a commoner, a little commoner who buys the bones of His Majesty's money. His Majesty used me to set a precedent for a commoner to be an official, and I was killed in ten days. What would the commoners who were extremely grateful and looking forward to Her Majesty think? Do you think that Her Majesty is afraid of the nobles of the Congress?"
Corrected text:
"I'm no one, I'm just a commoner, a little commoner who buys the bones of Her Majesty's money. Her Majesty used me to set a precedent for a commoner to be an official, and I was killed in ten days. What would the commoners who were extremely grateful and looking forward to Her Majesty think? Do you think that Her Majesty is afraid of the nobles of the Congress?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 17:27:40
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"I'm no one, I'm just a commoner, a little commoner who buys the bones of His Majesty's money. His Majesty used me to set a precedent for a commoner to be an official, and I was killed in ten days. What would the commoners who were extremely grateful and looking forward to His Majesty think? Do you think that His Majesty is afraid of the nobles of the Congress?"
Corrected text:
"I'm no one, I'm just a commoner, a little commoner who buys the bones of His Majesty's money. His Majesty used me to set a precedent for a commoner to be an official, and I was killed in ten days. What would the commoners who were extremely grateful and looking forward to Her Majesty think? Do you think that Her Majesty is afraid of the nobles of the Congress?"
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 01:56:27
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"I, am, also, not, afraid!"
Corrected text:
"I. Am. Not. Afraid!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:10:04
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"I, am, also, no, afraid!"
Corrected text:
"I, am, also, not, afraid!"
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:01:56
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She just thinks that this logical statement is more abhorrent than his previous complaints about her that have no respect for her.
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She just felt that this sudden logical Roger was much more abhorrent than the previous Roger who was merely full of disrespectful complaints in his heart.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:00:51
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She was so angry that her eyes were on fire, her hands lit up with terrifying magic energy, and she could turn into a human-shaped fort in the next second, blasting Roger into a scumbag.
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She was so angry that her eyes were on fire, her hands lit up with terrifying magic energy, and she could turn into a human-shaped artillery platform in the next second, blasting Roger into dust.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:02:31
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After all, the queen is afraid.
Corrected text:
After all, the queen was afraid.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:03:10
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She is afraid of the long mouths of all the people in the world, afraid that her hard work will be ruined, and that she will betray the trust of her followers...
Corrected text:
She was afraid of the mouths of all the people in the world, afraid that her hard work would be ruined, and afraid that she would betray the trust of her followers...
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:03:49
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The Queen of Eternal Night speaks the truth in the empire and can force anything.
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The Queen of Eternal Night was the monarch. Within the empire, her words were the law, and she could force anything she wanted.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:05:06
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The congressmen who are loyal to her are arguing with those traditional aristocrats. It seems that important results have been achieved.
Corrected text:
The congressmen who were loyal to her were arguing with those traditional aristocrats within congress, and it seemed that important results had been achieved.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-04-02 17:28:06
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At this time, if she kills the civilian, who she has sealed, ...
Corrected text:
At this time, if she kills the civilian, who she has picked...
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:07:05
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As I said before, "No matter where you are from, descend to talent", the efforts to create a new era of the empire, but all turned into a mirror.
Corrected text:
Then her words from before, "No matter where you are from, I will take in those who are able", all of her efforts to create a new era of the empire, it would all shatter like glass.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:07:27
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The commoners will only be farther away from her.
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The commoners would only grow more distant from her.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:08:03
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Not only can she not kill him, but she also wants to protect him from being killed by others.
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Not only can she not kill him, but she also needs to protect him from being killed by others.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:08:56
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To avoid giving people the illusion that the traditional aristocracy is powerful, and the queen is powerless to protect her people.
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She can't give people the illusion that the traditional aristocracy was very powerful, and that even queen was powerless to protect her people from them.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:09:25
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Wanting to kill a person, yet unable to kill. This is the first time since ascending to the throne that the queen fell into such a stalemate .
Corrected text:
Wanting to kill a person, yet unable to kill. This was the first time since ascending to the throne that the queen fell into such a stalemate.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-17 11:25:47
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Wanting to kill a person but unable to kill, this is the first time since the queen felt a stale after ascended to the throne.
Corrected text:
Wanting to kill a person, yet unable to kill. This is the first time since ascending to the throne that the queen fell into such a stalemate .
Corrected by: wild-shots , 2022-05-17 21:44:34
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Wanting to kill a person but unable to kill, this is the first time since the Empress Eternal Night (title) ascended to the throne.
Corrected text:
Wanting to kill a person but unable to kill, this is the first time since the queen felt a stale after ascended to the throne.
Corrected by: wild-shots , 2022-05-17 21:44:30
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Wanting to kill a person but unable to kill, this is the first time since the Empress Eternal Night (title) ascended to the throne.
Corrected text:
Wanting to kill a person but unable to kill, this is the first time since the queen felt a stale after ascended to the throne.
Corrected by: wild-shots , 2022-05-17 21:44:28
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Wanting to kill a person but unable to kill, this is the first time since the Empress Eternal Night (title) ascended to the throne.
Corrected text:
Wanting to kill a person but unable to kill, this is the first time since the queen felt a stale after ascended to the throne.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-04-02 17:28:08
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"I don't hate it, I'm proud of Your Majesty's achievements."
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"No. I don't hate you and I'm proud of Your Majesty's achievements."
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-04-02 17:28:12
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"Then you wrote my negative history planning to smear my image?"
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"Then why did you write about my dark history, were you planning to smear my image?"
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:10:06
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"I didn't mean to discredit it, but..."
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"I didn't mean to smear you, but..."
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:10:46
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This time, he turned out to be the same as never before.
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This time, his words aligned with his inner thoughts as never before.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:11:07
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What you say is what you think.
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What he said was also what he was thinking.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:11:30
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Isn't this the lazy and inconsistent bastard she knew?
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Was this still the lazy and inconsistent bastard she knew?
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:13:12
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Why did you change your identity, and you are so rigid as if you have a bit of a famous official?
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When did you change your identity? You are now rigid like an upright official who would rather die than be dishonored?
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:13:58
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Knowing that it can't be done and doing it, everything I do and say is my wish.
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Knowing that it can't be done yet doing it anyway? Everything you do and say will follow your heart?
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:14:26
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The queen seemed to see the hero's flash on Roger!
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The queen suddenly seemed to see a light of righteousness on Roger!
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Corrected by: paelpael987 , 2022-05-02 09:52:31
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Shocked the queen!
Corrected text:
This shocked the queen!
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:14:42
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Even a little gratified.
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She even felt a little gratified.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:15:00
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Although such a person is not suitable to serve as her historian, he may be entrusted with greater responsibilities!
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Although such a person was not suitable to serve as her historian, he may be entrusted with greater responsibilities!
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:15:37
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Just at this moment, the familiar voice echoed in the heart of the Queen of Eternal Night.
Corrected text:
But just at this moment, a familiar voice echoed in the heart of the Queen of Eternal Night.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:19:31
Original text:
[I was almost scared to death. I thought that the queen would kill me if she couldn't control her emotions. Finally, I was better than myself, and fooled me! 】
Corrected text:
[I was almost scared to death. I thought that the queen wouldn't be able to control her emotions and directly kill me for a moment there. Fortunately, she managed to control herself, and was even fooled by me!]
Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-04-02 17:28:15
Original text:
[I was scared to death. I thought that the queen would kill me if she couldn't control her emotions. Finally, I was better than myself, and fooled me! 】
Corrected text:
[I was almost scared to death. I thought that the queen would kill me if she couldn't control her emotions. Finally, I was better than myself, and fooled me! 】
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:19:50
Original text:
[It is important to spread the truth, but it is more important to say goodbye to this boring post of historian and unlock my new position of loafing around! 】
Corrected text:
[It is important to spread the truth, but it is more important to say goodbye to this boring post of historian and unlock my new position of loafing around!]
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Corrected by: wild-shots , 2022-05-17 21:44:51
Original text:
[It's really hard not to laugh. The queen cares so much about a history book, about her reputation, this is a bit... naive and cute!]
Corrected text:
[It's really hard not to laugh. The queen cares so much about a history book, about her reputation, this is a bit a naive and cute!]
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:10:09
Original text:
It's really hard not to laugh. The queen cares so much about a history book, about her reputation, this is a bit... naive and cute!
Corrected text:
[It's really hard not to laugh. The queen cares so much about a history book, about her reputation, this is a bit... naive and cute!]
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:20:33
Original text:
The Queen of Eternal Night just calmed down, and she immediately appeared in the stormy seas.
Corrected text:
The Queen of Eternal Night had just calmed down, but her mood was immediately thrust back into stormy seas.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:21:28
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She has been crowned with countless negative comments, such as cruelty, murderousness, evil, depravity, madness, and debauchery.
Corrected text:
She had been bestowed with countless negative labels, such as cruel, murderous, evil, depraved, insane, and debauched.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 16:10:12
Original text:
But this was the first time that someone called him cute.
Corrected text:
But this was the first time that someone called her cute.
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:22:24
Original text:
In these two words, the effect is outstanding!
Corrected text:
However, this simple word, the effect was outstanding!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 21:46:13
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How dares this bastard call me cute?
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How dare this bastard call me cute?
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:23:11
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"Dio, do you know how many people in this world regard me as an idol? You announced the truth, but have you considered the impact of this on them, causing their faith to collapse? Bringing shame to the empire?"
Corrected text:
"Dio, do you know how many people in this world regard me as an idol? You want to announce the truth, but have you considered the impact of this on them? Won't this cause their faith to collapse? Won't it bring shame to the empire?"
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:23:49
Original text:
This is to say, you are the most naive, you are the cutest!
Corrected text:
Reading between the lines: You are the naive one! You are the cute one!
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Corrected by: IV_4014_ARUMUGA-DEVA-S , 2022-04-17 10:12:53
Original text:
Roger replied in a deep voice: "Of course, I know, but I still believe that everyone in the world has the right to know the truth. His Majesty's attempt to cover up the truth isn't what the monarch do, but... a thief with a guilty conscience!"
Corrected text:
Roger replied in a deep voice: "Of course, I know, but I still believe that everyone in the world has the right to know the truth. Your Majesty's attempt to cover up the truth isn't what the monarch do, but... a thief with a guilty conscience!"
Corrected by: Snow-Cat , 2022-04-02 16:13:10
Original text:
Roger replied in a deep voice: "Of course, I know, but I still believe that everyone in the world has the right to know the truth. His Majesty's attempt to cover up the truth is what the monarch did, but... a thief with a guilty conscience!"
Corrected text:
Roger replied in a deep voice: "Of course, I know, but I still believe that everyone in the world has the right to know the truth. His Majesty's attempt to cover up the truth isn't what the monarch do, but... a thief with a guilty conscience!"
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:24:48
Original text:
[No, isn't this queen angry enough? Get rid of me now! 】
Corrected text:
[What's going on? Is this queen not angry enough? Get rid of me now!]
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:26:26
Original text:
[Look at me continuing to hold fire! Scold her face to face! Those who have won the country's wrongdoing are most afraid of being called thieves of the country, right? 】
Corrected text:
[Then I can only continue to fire! Scold her face to face! Anyway, those who have won and established a country are most afraid of being called thieves of the country, right?]
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:28:41
Original text:
[Women like to think too much. If the empire is to last forever, the executioner will not hesitate to be infamous for her people; if the empire is destroyed by the gods, no matter how perfect you are, you will be sprayed like a dog and put on countless black spots...]
Corrected text:
[Women like to think too much. If the empire is to last forever, the queen can't hesitate to bear some infamy for her people. After all, if the empire is destroyed by the gods, no matter how perfect you are, they will definitely treat you like a dog and throw countless mud on your image...]
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-23 20:02:52
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[Women like to think too much. If the empire is to last forever, the executioner will not hesitate to be infamy for her people; if the empire is destroyed by the gods, no matter how perfect you are, you will be sprayed like a dog and put on countless black spots...]
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[Women like to think too much. If the empire is to last forever, the executioner will not hesitate to be infamous for her people; if the empire is destroyed by the gods, no matter how perfect you are, you will be sprayed like a dog and put on countless black spots...]
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:29:08
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[Because victory in this world is justice, and the loser is not qualified to make history! 】
Corrected text:
[Because, in this world, victory is justice. The loser is not qualified to make history!]
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Corrected by: sinking-ship , 2023-09-07 02:30:10
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[You little girl don't dare, just let me go back quickly and don't delay the great cause of the young master's time here! 】
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[You little girl don't dare, so just let me go back quickly. Don't delay this young master's great cause here!]
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Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-04-02 16:11:27
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(Today's victory or defeat: The queen accepted the history of the empire that she didn't like, and Roger continued to serve as the historian due to his talkativeness, and both lost.)
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(Today's victory or defeat: The queen accepted the history of the empire that she didn't like, and Roger continued to serve as the historian due to his talkativeness. They both lost.)
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