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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 04:12:07
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Insufficient strength, and now he is in a situation where he can't help himself. If he spends more time thinking about it, he can accept it.
Corrected text:
His strength is insufficient and, right now, he is helpless. If he spends more time thinking about it, he can accept it.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 04:30:42
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Anyway, it is to go to prison in one place or prison in another.
Corrected text:
Anyway, here or there, he would be in prison either way.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 04:53:28
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But the Queen of Eternal Night jumped her face and mocked, but she was so inappropriate...
Corrected text:
But the Queen of Eternal Night had no respect for him and mocked him, and she was so inappropriate...
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:00:13
Original text:
Don't say it, don't say it, I know that your Roger is strong, and he will still be punished if you expose it again!
Corrected text:
Don't say it, don't say it, I know that your Roger is strong, and I will be punished once more if I doubt him again!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:00:01
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If there is no preparation of this level, the Queen of Eternal Night will not be able to be hated by the goddess of war and let her go.
Corrected text:
If they are not properly prepared, the Queen of Eternal Night will not be able to confront the Goddess of War and let him go.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 04:58:55
Original text:
Change your mentality, let's just make the magician's camp more interesting!
Corrected text:
I'll change my mentality; let's just make the magician's camp more interesting!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 04:59:16
Original text:
Even if the final winner is the goddess of war, his behavior of "Fighting with all his strength" can also be explained:
Corrected text:
Even if the final winner is the Goddess of War, his behavior of "fighting with all his strength" can also be explained:
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:00:44
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"Because I don't want to give in, let the imperial people feel the power of God!"
Corrected text:
"Because I didn't want to give in, I let the imperial people feel the power of God!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:01:13
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So it's not a loss inside or outside, and I can still appreciate the shocking expressions of those magicians and heavy-armed priests fighting to the end, and then slamming their crossbow faces...
Corrected text:
So it's not a loss either way, and I can still appreciate the shocking expressions of those magicians and heavy-armed priests fighting to the end, and then slamming their crossbow faces...
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:01:29
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Of course, the Queen of Eternal Night was enthusiastic about the old Joestar and expressed her admiration. There is no reason not to agree.
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Of course, the Queen of Eternal Night was enthusiastic about old Joestar and expressed her admiration. There is no reason not to agree.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:02:08
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The old Joestar was taken back to the magician's camp, and the Queen of Eternal Night returned to the palace to continue playing in my world.
Corrected text:
The old Joestar was taken back to the magician's camp, and the Queen of Eternal Night returned to the palace to continue playing in her world.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:03:43
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Before the talk, I felt that the empire was at a loss. After the talk, I found that it seemed to be quite profitable.
Corrected text:
Before the talk, they felt that the Empire was making a loss. After the talk, they found that it seemed to be quite profitable.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:04:32
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And the big thing is done, and in the entertainment time later, Margaret is of course ready to continue to draw closer to Princess Tasika.
Corrected text:
Now the main thing is done, and during their leisure time later, Margaret is of course ready to continue to draw closer to Princess Tasika.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:04:47
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When she reports to His Majesty, she has to speak and kick that Roger guy out!
Corrected text:
When she reports to Her Majesty, she has to speak and kick that Roger guy out!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:05:07
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"His Royal Highness Tasika, the military has prepared a celebration banquet for you tonight, please be sure to attend." Margaret invited politely.
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"Your Royal Highness Tasika, the military has prepared a celebration banquet for you tonight, please be sure to attend." Margaret invited her politely.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:05:44
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Tasika blushed a little and said in a thin voice, "Left minister, you misunderstood, I asked Lord Charles on my initiative..."
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Tasika blushed a little and said in a thin voice, "Left minister, you misunderstood, I asked Lord Charles myself..."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:06:07
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Did you ask him about your initiative?
Corrected text:
Did you ask him out yourself?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:06:23
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You want to visit the capital, can't you ask me, will I stop you?
Corrected text:
If you want to visit the capital, can't you ask me, will I stop you?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:07:46
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Tasika found that Margaret's expression was a little ugly, and bowed and apologized, "I'm sorry, Mr. Zuo Xiang, I have caused you trouble these days, and tonight's celebration banquet should be canceled. After all, the affairs of the two countries still need to be kept secret. Yes, it should not be extravagant..."
Corrected text:
Tasika found that Margaret's expression was a little ugly, and bowed and apologized, "I'm sorry, Miss Margaret, I have caused you trouble these days but tonight's celebration banquet should be canceled. After all, the affairs between our two countries still need to be kept secret. Yes, we should not be extravagant..."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:08:46
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The tone is high-sounding, and there are good reasons, but to Margaret's ears, Tasika always said one thing:
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Her tone is high-sounding and her reasons are good but, to Margaret's ears, Tasika is just saying one thing:
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:09:03
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It turns out that in His Royal Highness Tasika's heart, I am the one who has been harassing and pestering her.
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It turns out that in Her Royal Highness Tasika's heart, I am the one who has been harassing and pestering her.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:09:56
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He felt that the cooperation with the small ceiling fan in the past two days was excellent, and he took the initiative to extend his hand, "The matter of the orc kingdom can be negotiated so smoothly, thanks to Lord Margaret for her excellent mind, and the cooperation these two days has been pleasant."
Corrected text:
He felt that the cooperation with the small ceiling fan in the past two days was excellent, and he took the initiative to extend his hand, "The matter of the orc kingdom could be negotiated so smoothly thanks to Lord Margaret and her excellent mind; the cooperation these two days has been pleasant."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:10:36
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Margaret flicked her tail and left, but Tashica was by her side, and she could only squeeze out between her teeth in the end, "Happy, that's quite a pleasure!"
Corrected text:
Margaret flicked her tail and wanted to leave, but Tasika was by her side and she could only squeeze out between her teeth in the end, "I'm glad, that's quite a pleasure!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:11:06
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It's a beautiful word, but why are your eyes sore and filled with the urge to shed tears?
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Your words are beautiful, but why are your eyes sore and filled with the urge to shed tears?
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Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-26 02:40:10
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"Let me take care of Tasika tonight, and bring it back later—"
Corrected text:
"Let me take care of Tasika tonight, and deal with it later—"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:12:28
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Roger said goodbye politely, and Tashica followed excitedly.
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Roger said goodbye politely, and Tasika followed excitedly.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:12:49
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Margaret stood on the spot, watching the backs of the two who left...
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Margaret stood on the spot, watching the backs of the two leaving...
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:14:01
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The store was dedicated to listing the latest and coolest in the capital, and the professionals also wanted to take advantage of the crowd to earn an extra silver coin or two.
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The stores were dedicated to listing the latest and coolest things in the capital, and the professionals also wanted to take advantage of the crowd to earn an extra silver coin or two.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:14:15
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Roger covered Tashica's face a little. After all, her racial characteristics and charm were noticeable, and standing on the street would cause riots.
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Roger covered Tasika's face a little. After all, her racial characteristics and charm were noticeable, and standing on the street would cause riots.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:14:48
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And she didn't feel it herself, she regarded herself as a tourist, and seemed to be in high spirits about everything.
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But she didn't sense it herself; she regarded herself as a tourist, and seemed to be in high spirits about everything.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:17:45
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"Ah, sir, you are so naughty..." Tasika always felt ashamed to be called by their nickname, and explained in a low voice, "Actually, only orcs with certain assets can drink. With our limited grain, we can't afford to drink wine. It is the majority, but their voices, no one will listen to them."
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"Ah, sir, you are so naughty..." Tasika always felt ashamed to be called by her nickname, and explained in a low voice, "Actually, only orcs with certain assets can drink. With our limited grain, the majority of our people can't afford to drink wine, but no one will listen to their voices."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:19:20
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"Because at this time, you still remember the people who couldn't eat or drink meat." Roger couldn't help but touch her head.
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"Because at this time, you still remember the people who couldn't drink or eat meat." Roger couldn't help but touch her head.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:20:42
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What the hell even is the reason to know oneself- this kind of thing still depends on the person on the throne, and where his heart is.
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What the hell does it change that she's met him... This kind of thing still depends on the person on the throne, and where her heart is.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:21:03
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Being praised by him!
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She's been praised by him!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:21:35
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Seeing Tasika lying beside the railing with her starry eyes twinkling, Roger suddenly thought he had never enjoyed such a "Date" with his little fox.
Corrected text:
Seeing Tasika lying beside the railing with her starry eyes twinkling, Roger suddenly thought he had never enjoyed such a "date" with his little fox.
Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-26 02:42:15
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Seeing Tashica lying beside the railing with her starry eyes twinkling, Roger suddenly thought he had never enjoyed such a "Date" with his little fox.
Corrected text:
Seeing Tasika lying beside the railing with her starry eyes twinkling, Roger suddenly thought he had never enjoyed such a "Date" with his little fox.
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Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-26 02:42:48
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I have to find a chance to make it up quickly.
Corrected text:
I have to find a chance to make up for it soon.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:22:37
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"Okay, don't look at it. You can't move this back or there will be no rivers in your desert." Roger reminded her.
Corrected text:
"Okay, don't look at it. You can't copy this back home or there will be no rivers left in your desert." Roger reminded her.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:22:48
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"I don't want to move everything either..." Tasika said with a blush.
Corrected text:
"I don't want to copy everything either..." Tasika said with a blush.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:24:16
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It seems that when I walked all the way when I saw something good, they all said that they wanted to move to the Orc Kingdom.
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It seems that, when they walked around, everytime she saw something good, she kept saying that she wanted to do this in the Orc Kingdom.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:26:24
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The leader was a tall, heroic, middle-aged man. He was dragged so he didn't know his mother when he walked. He drank a lot.
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The leader was a tall, heroic, middle-aged man. He was dragged and was walking in a daze. He drank a lot.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:27:01
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"The adults don't seem to like him. Then that must be a big bad guy!" Tasika also remembered this person.
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"The Lord doesn't seem to like him. Then that must be a big bad guy!" Tasika also remembered this person.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:27:21
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"Maybe it's not bad. It's just being loyal to one's class..."
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"Maybe he's not bad. He's just being loyal to his own class..."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:28:00
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The Duke of South Carleton is the leader of the southern grain nobility, a legendary mage, and the first group of nobles to follow the Queen of Eternal Night during the Great Patriotic War with outstanding military exploits.
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The Duke of South Carleton is the leader of the southern grain nobility, a legendary mage, and among the first group of nobles to have followed the Queen of Eternal Night during the Great Patriotic War with outstanding military exploits.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:28:45
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There is no shortage of strength, status, and military merit. He often likes to say "I can save Your Majesty's life", and it seems that it is not difficult to understand.
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He has no shortage of strength, status, and military merits. He often likes to say "I can save Her Majesty's life", and it's actually not hard to understand.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:29:14
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Roger didn't want to cause trouble, so he pulled Tasika back to the side of the road in a low-key way and wanted the team to go there first.
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Roger didn't want to cause trouble, so he pulled Tasika back to the side of the road in a low-key way and wanted the team to pass first.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:29:33
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In his blue left eye, the complex and subtle patterns of the magic circle appeared slightly.
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In his blue left eye, the complex and subtle patterns of a magic circle appeared slightly.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:30:15
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The next second, he couldn't help showing a stunning, greedy, longing smile, staring at Tasika, "What a beautiful orc slave, how much did you buy it, I'll pay double, give it to me!"
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The next second, he couldn't help showing a stunning, greedy, longing smile, staring at Tasika, "What a beautiful orc slave, how much did it cost you, I'll pay double, give it to me!"
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Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-26 02:44:16
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His body was solidified with spells such as Hidden Breaking and Delusion Breaking. Roger had used the scroll to cast an obscure spell on Tashica and avoid discovery so that people wouldn't pay attention to her appearance.
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His body was solidified with spells such as Hidden Breaking and Delusion Breaking. Roger had used the scroll to cast an obscuration spell on Tasika and avoid discovery so that people wouldn't pay attention to her appearance.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:31:11
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Roger felt the oppressive gaze of the Duke of South Carleton, his entourage was already paying, and deep anger flashed in his heart.
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Roger felt the oppressive gaze of the Duke of South Carleton, his entourage was already giving out money, and deep anger flashed in his heart.
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Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-26 02:44:43
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"I'm sorry, this is my friend, not a slave." He pulled Tashica down and prepared to leave.
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"I'm sorry, this is my friend, not a slave." He pulled Tasika down and prepared to leave.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:32:23
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"If you say no, it's no, am I very shameless?" The Duke of South Carleton stopped Roger, showing a very interesting expression, "Tell me, young man, how much money is needed to turn your friends to slaves ."
Corrected text:
"If you say no, it's no, am I that shameless?" The Duke of South Carleton stopped Roger, showing a very interested expression, "Tell me, young man, how much money is needed to turn your friend into a slave."
Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-26 02:45:30
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"If you say no, it's no, am I very shameless?" The Duke of South Carleton stopped Roger, showing a very interesting expression, "Tell me, young man, how much money can make your friends become slaves ."
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"If you say no, it's no, am I very shameless?" The Duke of South Carleton stopped Roger, showing a very interesting expression, "Tell me, young man, how much money is needed to turn your friends to slaves ."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:33:21
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The implication is that you don't sell your friends, only because your interests are not enough. Let me see your measure!
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The implication is that the only reason he's not selling his friend is because he doesn't have enough to gain from it. Let me see your measure!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:35:45
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"Maybe your criteria for friends is related to money, but mine is not. Lord Carleton, if you leave now, the Charles family can act as if nothing has happened, otherwise, you will be responsible for your insulting words and deeds." Roger, I regret not taking anyone out today.
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"Maybe you associate friendship with money, but I don't. Lord Carleton, if you leave now, the Charles family can act as if nothing has happened, otherwise you will be responsible for your insulting words and deeds." Roger was regretting taking her out today.
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Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-26 02:46:07
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Am I a friend who doesn't exchange money?
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Am I a friend who can't be exchanged for money?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:36:20
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The Duke of South Carleton looked suspiciously, and a housekeeper whispered a few words in his ear.
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The Duke of South Carleton looked at him suspiciously, and a housekeeper whispered a few words in his ear.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:38:42
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With a flash of magic in his hand, he prepared to use spiritual magic to force Roger to sell Tasika to himself.
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With a flash of magic in his hand, he prepared to use spiritual magic to force Roger to sell Tasika to him.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:40:21
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"Escort!" a group of followers shouted.
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"Protect him!" a group of followers shouted.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:40:03
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My thorns in my mind can't cure the queen, and it can't cure you, an ordinary legend?
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The thorns in my mind can't stop the queen, but it can stop you, an ordinary legend?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:40:49
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"You guess?"
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"You think so?"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:41:06
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"Come on, let's end today's affairs."
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"Very well, let's end today's affair here."
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Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-26 02:47:01
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Roger pointed to Tashica and removed the haze spell from her.
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Roger pointed to Tasika and removed the haze spell from her.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:41:37
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Everyone also understands that their master who has seen countless beauties, would be tempted by her.
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Everyone also understands why their master, who has seen countless beauties, would be tempted by her.
Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-26 02:47:33
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Everyone also understands that their master has seen countless beauties, and will be tempted by her.
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Everyone also understands that their master who has seen countless beauties, would be tempted by her.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:42:23
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The Charles family has only one pair of siblings. If they have no strength, but only have Her Majesty's favor, then he is not afraid to fight.
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The Charles family has only one pair of siblings. If they had no strength but only Her Majesty's favor, he would not be afraid to fight.
Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-26 02:47:55
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The Charles family has only one pair of siblings. If they have no strength, but only have His Majesty's favor, then he is not afraid to fight.
Corrected text:
The Charles family has only one pair of siblings. If they have no strength, but only have Her Majesty's favor, then he is not afraid to fight.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:42:51
Original text:
But if this Roger is not weaker than himself, and he has Her Majesty's trust; then it will be difficult.
Corrected text:
But if this Roger is not weaker than him and has Her Majesty's trust, it will be difficult.
Corrected by: Fotsvamp , 2022-09-26 02:48:09
Original text:
But if this Roger is not weaker than himself, and he has His Majesty's trust; then it will be difficult.
Corrected text:
But if this Roger is not weaker than himself, and he has Her Majesty's trust; then it will be difficult.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:44:20
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When the Duke of South Carleton returned to the study, he couldn't see the arrogance of the riverside. His eyes were sober and he didn't even feel the slightest bit of alcohol.
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When the Duke of South Carleton returned to his study, the arrogance he showed by the riverside couldn't be seen. His eyes were sober and he didn't even feel the slightest bit of alcohol.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:44:36
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The Duke of South Carleton said solemnly, "I tested it. That Roger is indeed legendary."
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The Duke of South Carleton said solemnly, "I tested him. That Roger is indeed legendary."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:44:49
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"Impossible. His performance in the field of my inner demon is that of a junior magician."
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"Impossible. His performance in the field of my inner demon was that of a junior magician."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:45:05
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"I'm embarrassed in public, what do you want from me? Pick a fight with him?"
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"He embarrassed me in public, what do you want from me? Pick a fight with him?"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-10-04 05:45:34
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The woman handed over a space ring, "Promise me your gold coins."
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The woman handed over a space ring, "As promised, here's your gold coins."
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