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Edited by: Supriyo-Pal, TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia, anonymous, Henry, tyranoic, Lea-Lin
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:30:15
Original text:
"Unlock the villain's achievement: Smash Your Dog Head (small)
Corrected text:
"Unlocked achievement: Smash Your Dog Head (small)
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:30:12
Original text:
Gain the skill — Fire Raven V2.0: Congratulations! From now on, your Fire Raven will be replaced by a skill that looks like the Fire Raven magic, except is actually a Throwing Skill called Smash Your Dog Head.
Corrected text:
Gained the skill — Fire Raven V2.0: Congratulations! From now on, your Fire Raven will be replaced by a skill that looks like the Fire Raven magic spell, except it is actually a Throwing Skill called Smash Your Dog Head.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:36
Original text:
Gain the skill — Fire Raven V2.0: Congratulations! From now on, your Fire Raven will be replaced by a skill that looks like the Fire Raven magic but is actually a Throwing Skill called Smash Your Dog Head.
Corrected text:
Gain the skill — Fire Raven V2.0: Congratulations! From now on, your Fire Raven will be replaced by a skill that looks like the Fire Raven magic, except is actually a Throwing Skill called Smash Your Dog Head.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:34:41
Original text:
Gain the skill — Fire Raven V2.0: Congratulations! From now on, your Fire Raven will be replaced by a skill that looks like the Fire Raven magic but is actually the Throwing Skill called Smash Your Dog Head.
Corrected text:
Gain the skill — Fire Raven V2.0: Congratulations! From now on, your Fire Raven will be replaced by a skill that looks like the Fire Raven magic but is actually a Throwing Skill called Smash Your Dog Head.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-22 11:45:48
Original text:
With this Throwing skill, your weapon will have the attack power and physical force of an axe of the same level.
Corrected text:
With this Throwing skill, your weapon will have the attack power and physical force of an axe.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:36
Original text:
With this Throwing skill, your weapon will have the attack power and punching power of an axe of the same level.
Corrected text:
With this Throwing skill, your weapon will have the attack power and physical force of an axe of the same level.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:34:56
Original text:
My dear master, please keep up the good work, think out of the box and do more active provocative attacks and bad things!"
Corrected text:
My dear master, please keep up the good work, think outside the box and do more dynamic provocative attacks and bad acts!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:34:47
Original text:
My dear master, please keep up the good work, think out of the box and do more active provocative attacks and bad things!"
Corrected text:
My dear master, please keep up the good work, think outside the box and do more dynamic provocative attacks and bad acts!"
Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 14:18:25
Original text:
My dear master, please keep up the good work, step out of the box and do more active provocative attacks and bad things!"
Corrected text:
My dear master, please keep up the good work, think out of the box and do more active provocative attacks and bad things!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-29 22:47:41
Original text:
What important supporting character was smashed to the head?
Corrected text:
What important supporting character was smashed in the head?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:09
Original text:
Ah, so much information all of a sudden, where should I start to think?
Corrected text:
Ah, there is so much information all of a sudden, where should I start to think?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:09
Original text:
No! Right now, there is someone that has been smashed by me!
Corrected text:
Oh no! Right now, there was someone has been smashed by me!
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:08
Original text:
No! Right now, there is someone that has been smashed by me!
Corrected text:
Oh no! Right now, there is someone who has been smashed by me!
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:35:18
Original text:
No! Right now, there is someone who has been smashed by me!
Corrected text:
No! Right now, there is someone that has been smashed by me!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:44:39
Original text:
No! Right now, there is someone who will be smashed by me!
Corrected text:
No! Right now, there is someone who has been smashed by me!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:08
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And at this time, that person held his forehead in a dizzy state, sat up, with blood dripping from his forehead, and there were even traces of energy burns.
Corrected text:
At this time, that person held his forehead in a dizzy state, sat up with blood dripping from his forehead; there were even traces of energy burns.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:35:40
Original text:
And at this time, that person also held his forehead dizzy, sitting up, dripping blood from his forehead, and there were even some traces of energy burns.
Corrected text:
And at this time, that person held his forehead in a dizzy state, sat up, with blood dripping from his forehead, and there were even traces of energy burns.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:44:54
Original text:
And at this time, that person also held the forehead dizzy, sitting up, dripping blood from his forehead, and there were even some traces of energy burns.
Corrected text:
And at this time, that person also held his forehead dizzy, sitting up, dripping blood from his forehead, and there were even some traces of energy burns.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:08
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Only before he could get close, the system's threatening voice rang out.
Corrected text:
Only before he could get close, the system's domineering voice rang out.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:08
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Rin only feel that his conscience was strongly torturing his heart.
Corrected text:
Rin felt that his conscience was strongly torturing his heart.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:08
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The supporting character finally regained his consciousness. Looking at the Rin standing in front of him, he was scared and shivered, stood up and turned his head to run.
Corrected text:
The support character finally regained his consciousness. Looking at Rin standing in front of him, he was terrified, while shivering he stood up and turned his body to run.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:07
Original text:
Rin reprimanded, but the thin, short boy actually did not turn his head back, scurrying away as if seeing a ghost.
Corrected text:
Rin reprimanded the thin short boy. He did not turn his body back, scurrying away as if seeing a ghost.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:08
Original text:
No, I can't let him run away! Otherwise, I will really become a scum!
Corrected text:
No, I can't let him run away! Otherwise, I really will become a bastard!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:09
Original text:
Rin thought so and he scolded, "Christo! If you continue to run, I will find you and break your legs!"
Corrected text:
Rin thought and said, "Christo! If you continue to run, I will find you and break your legs!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:12
Original text:
Being clearly called out by name, and under such a threat, the thin boy then stood still.
Corrected text:
Being audibly called out by name with such an intimidating threat, the thin boy quickly stopped.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:16
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Even so, he trembled with fear.
Corrected text:
Even so he trembled with fear.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:36:09
Original text:
Rin didn't remember that he had any intersections with this thin boy. His fear could only be explained by how notorious the original Gur Fenix was.
Corrected text:
Rin didn't remember that he had any interactions with this thin boy. His fear could only be explained by how notorious the original Gur Fenix was.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:35:56
Original text:
Rin didn't remember that he had any intersections with this thin boy. His fear could only be explained by how notorious the original Gur Fenix was.
Corrected text:
Rin didn't remember that he had any interactions with this thin boy. His fear could only be explained by how notorious the original Gur Fenix was.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 21:16:08
Original text:
Rin didn't remember that he had any intersections with this think boy. His fear could only be explained by how notorious the original Gur Fenix was.
Corrected text:
Rin didn't remember that he had any intersections with this thin boy. His fear could only be explained by how notorious the original Gur Fenix was.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:16
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Finally, Rin got a good look at his wound, it was not bloody, but still pretty bad.
Corrected text:
Finally, Rin had a good look at his wound, it was not bloody, but still pretty bad.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:36:18
Original text:
Finally, Rin got a good look at his wound, not bloody, but pretty bad.
Corrected text:
Finally, Rin got a good look at his wound, it was not bloody, but still pretty bad.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:16
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Of course, if he just healed him, it would go against his cold-blooded persona.
Corrected text:
Of course if he just healed him, it would go against his cold-blooded persona.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:36:30
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Rin's eyes rolled around, and soon he had an idea.
Corrected text:
Rin's eyes wandered around, and soon he had an idea.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:45:04
Original text:
"Seeing the disgraceful scene of my failed spell casting, and you actually wanted to run away?"
Corrected text:
"You saw the disgraceful scene of my failed spell casting, and you actually wanted to run away?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:16
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He seems to be too young or may have slight developmental issues, his voice does not sound like a teenager, but androgynous or even partially feminine.
Corrected text:
He seems to be too young or may have slight developmental issues, his voice did not sound like a teenager, but androgynous or even partially feminine.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:36:56
Original text:
He seems to be too young or have slight developmental disabilities, his voice does not sound like a teenager, but some neutral or even partial feminine.
Corrected text:
He seems to be too young or may have slight developmental issues, his voice does not sound like a teenager, but androgynous or even partially feminine.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:36:43
Original text:
He seems to be too young or have slight developmental disabilities, his voice does not sound like a teenager, but some neutral or even partial feminine.
Corrected text:
He seems to be too young or may have slight developmental issues, his voice does not sound like a teenager, but androgynous or even partially feminine.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 21:16:17
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He seems to be too young or have slight developmental disabilities, his voice does not sound like a teenager, but some neutral or even partial feminize.
Corrected text:
He seems to be too young or have slight developmental disabilities, his voice does not sound like a teenager, but some neutral or even partial feminine.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:37:11
Original text:
Rin didn't bother to listen to his sophistry, "You said you wouldn't? How do I know if you're not lying? Do I look like such a nice person?"
Corrected text:
Rin didn't bother to listen to his sophistry, "You said you wouldn't? How do I know if you're not lying? Do I look like such a naive person?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:37:24
Original text:
He took out a small healing potion from his bag, opened the lid, pinched the thin boy's chin and poured it directly into his mouth, while saying viciously, "This is the Fenix family's unique curse bottle, others can't check it out and can't cure you, but you'll be cursed if you dare to disobey me, with heart colic pain!"
Corrected text:
He took out a small healing potion from his bag, opened the lid, pinched the thin boy's chin and poured it directly into his mouth, while saying viciously, "This is the Fenix family's unique curse bottle, other people can't analyse it and can't cure you. You'll be cursed if you dare to disobey me, with heart rendering pain!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:16
Original text:
He coughed while begging for mercy, looking like a timid supporting character.
Corrected text:
He coughed while begging for mercy, looking like a timid support character.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:37:37
Original text:
Rin was relieved to see that the thin boy stopped bleeding, and even the burn marks were slowly receding.
Corrected text:
Rin was relieved to see that the thin boy had stopped bleeding, and even the burn marks were slowly receding.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:37:57
Original text:
However, the healing potion can help heal the wound, but is of not much use for scar removal.
Corrected text:
However, even though the healing potion can help heal the wound, it is of not much use for scar removal.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:45:18
Original text:
However, the healing potion can help heal the wound, but not much use for scar removal.
Corrected text:
However, the healing potion can help heal the wound, but is of not much use for scar removal.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-31 14:39:11
Original text:
The magic book hit the thin boy so violently that a scar was left on his skull.
Corrected text:
The magic book hit the thin boy so violently that a scar was left on his head.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-17 08:40:23
Original text:
The magic book smashed the thin boy so violently, that there would be a scar left on his skull.
Corrected text:
The magic book hit the thin boy so violently that a scar was left on his skull.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 15:12:00
Original text:
The magic book smashed the thin boy so hard, there would be a scar left on his brain shell.
Corrected text:
The magic book smashed the thin boy so violently, that there would be a scar left on his skull.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:45:25
Original text:
The magic book smashed the thin boy so hard, there would be ascar leaving on his brain shell.
Corrected text:
The magic book smashed the thin boy so hard, there would be a scar left on his brain shell.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:16
Original text:
Sigh, no matter what I say it, it was because of me. If I don't help him, it would be shameful in having so many years of education.
Corrected text:
Sigh, no matter what I say it was because of me. If I don't help him, it would be shameful in having so many years of education.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:38:11
Original text:
Sigh, no matter I say it, it was because of me. If I don't help him, it would be a shame to have so many years of education.
Corrected text:
Sigh, no matter what I say it, it was because of me. If I don't help him, it would be shameful in having so many years of education.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 15:11:49
Original text:
Sigh, no matter I say it, it was because of me. If I don't help him, it would be a shame to have so many years of education.
Corrected text:
Sigh, no matter what I say it, it was because of me. If I don't help him, it would be shameful in having so many years of education.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:45:31
Original text:
Sigh, no matter how to say it, it was because of me. If I don't help him, it would be a shame to have so many years of education.
Corrected text:
Sigh, no matter I say it, it was because of me. If I don't help him, it would be a shame to have so many years of education.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:15
Original text:
So he grunted, grabbed the boy's hair, but did not use force. Just because the other party was very short, he needed him to lift his head.
Corrected text:
That being the case, Rin while grunting, grabbed the boy's hair without being forceful; because the other party was very short, he needed to lift his head.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:16
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Then, Rin took out a cloth towel, dipped it in water to wipe the blood stain off his forehead. After that, Rin looked closely at that thin boy's face.
Corrected text:
Then, Rin took out a cloth towel, dipped it in water to wipe the blood stains off his forehead. After that, Rin looked closely at that thin boy's face.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:38:21
Original text:
Then, Rin took out a cloth towel, dipped in water to wipe the blood stain off his forehead. After that, Rin looked closely at that thin boy's face.
Corrected text:
Then, Rin took out a cloth towel, dipped it in water to wipe the blood stain off his forehead. After that, Rin looked closely at that thin boy's face.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:38:30
Original text:
Wow, he looks very suitable to be a cross-dresser!
Corrected text:
Wow, he is very suitable to become a cross-dresser!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:38:48
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His small white face actually looked cuter than the girls.
Corrected text:
His small white face actually looked cuter than the other girls.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:16
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His distinctive features were his silver-gray hair and silver-gray eyes, and a pretty face written full of pitifulness.
Corrected text:
His distinctive features were his silver-gray hair and silver-gray eyes, and a pretty face oozing with pitifulness.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:39:01
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His distinctive features were his silver-gray hair and silver-gray eyes, and a pretty face written full of weakness.
Corrected text:
His distinctive features were his silver-gray hair and silver-gray eyes, and a pretty face written full of pitifulness.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:16
Original text:
Rin had a bad chill in his heart and hurriedly took out the ointment and applied it to the wound.
Corrected text:
Rin had a bad chill in his heart, then hurriedly took out the ointment and applied it to the wound.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:16
Original text:
Christo stared at Rin's impatient but serious look with his silver-gray eyes wide open, seemingly a little confused as to why Rin would do this.
Corrected text:
Christo stared at Rin's impatient but serious look, with his silver-gray eyes wide open, seemingly a little confused as to why Rin would do this.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:16
Original text:
"If others saw the wound, they would definitely ask about it. I don't believe a timid person like you can keep it a secret. Now it's healed the scar will disappear after a while."
Corrected text:
"If others saw the wound, they would definitely ask about it. I don't believe a timid person like you can keep it a secret. Now it's healed, the scar will disappear after a while."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:39:10
Original text:
"If others saw the wound, they would definitely ask about it. I don't believe a timid person like you can keep it a secret. Now it's good, the scar will disappear after a while."
Corrected text:
"If others saw the wound, they would definitely ask about it. I don't believe a timid person like you can keep it a secret. Now it's healed the scar will disappear after a while."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:45:51
Original text:
"If others saw the wound, they must ask about it. I don't believe a timid person like you can keep it a secret. Now it's good, the scar will disappear after a while."
Corrected text:
"If others saw the wound, they would definitely ask about it. I don't believe a timid person like you can keep it a secret. Now it's good, the scar will disappear after a while."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:15
Original text:
Rin said, and continued to demean Christo, "Otherwise, with your lowly status, do you really think that you are worthy of this expensive ointment? What are you looking at, why don't you get away? If I find out that you dare to leak any words of this, you’ll know of the consequences."
Corrected text:
Rin said, and continued to demean Christo, "Otherwise, with your lowly status, do you really think that you are worthy of this expensive ointment? What are you looking at, why don't you go away? If I find out that you dare to leak any words of this, you’ll know of the consequences."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:39:38
Original text:
Rin said, and continued to mock Christo, "Otherwise, with your lowly status, do you really think that you are worthy of this expensive ointment? What are you looking at, why don't you get away? If I know you dare to leak a word, you know the consequence."
Corrected text:
Rin said, and continued to demean Christo, "Otherwise, with your lowly status, do you really think that you are worthy of this expensive ointment? What are you looking at, why don't you get away? If I find out that you dare to leak any words of this, you’ll know of the consequences."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:16
Original text:
Seeing that Christo still covered his head and stood there dumbfounded, Rin could not help but aggravate his tone, "Crawl away from me!"
Corrected text:
Seeing that Christo was still covering his head and stood there dumbfounded, Rin could not help but aggravate his tone, "Crawl away from me!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:39:49
Original text:
Sure enough, Christo was scared with tears on his face, turned and ran away, and actually fell halfway.
Corrected text:
Sure enough this caused Christo to become scared, with tears pooling on his face, he turned and ran away, and actually fell down halfway.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:09:49
Original text:
"What a shame! This cross-dresser is a little too timid, but fortunately, this situation is settled."
Corrected text:
"What a shame! This cross-dresser is a little too timid, but fortunately this situation is settled."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:39:54
Original text:
"What a shame! This cross-dresser is a little too timid, but fortunately, this thing is settled."
Corrected text:
"What a shame! This cross-dresser is a little too timid, but fortunately, this situation is settled."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:20
Original text:
Rin touched his chin, recalled the skill description, and suddenly became upset like a deflated ball.
Corrected text:
Rin while touching his chin, recalled the skill description, suddenly became upset like a deflated ball.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:20
Original text:
The cool Fire Raven magic… was just replaced by the so-called Smash Your Dog Head skill… it just disappeared from his acquired skills before he could successfully cast it.
Corrected text:
The cool Fire Raven magic… was just replaced by the so-called Smash Your Dog Head skill… it disappeared from his acquired skills before he could successfully cast it.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:40:03
Original text:
The cool Fire Raven magic… was just replaced by the so-called Smash Your Dog Head skill… it just disappeared from his life before he could successfully cast it.
Corrected text:
The cool Fire Raven magic… was just replaced by the so-called Smash Your Dog Head skill… it just disappeared from his acquired skills before he could successfully cast it.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:20
Original text:
Sigh, forget it. As long as I don't use it, no one will know that I can't use it.
Corrected text:
Sigh, forget it. As long as I don't cast it, no one will know that I can't use it.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:20
Original text:
Christo grew up as an orphan in his uncle's house. Because of the merits of his parents, the Queen especially let him join the Royal Academy.
Corrected text:
Christo grew up as an orphan in his uncle's house, because of the merits of his parents, the Queen let him join the Royal Academy.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:40:14
Original text:
After that, he developed a talent for business, setting up a very powerful chamber of commerce for the protagonist, selling the protagonist's magic cards and rare products made of alchemy, earned a lot of money.
Corrected text:
After that, he developed a talent for business, setting up a very powerful chamber of commerce for the protagonist, selling the protagonist's magic cards and rare products made of alchemy, earning a lot of money.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:21
Original text:
Moreover, his face was at the top-class even compared to the beautiful girls in the novel.
Corrected text:
Moreover, his face was top-class even compared to the other beautiful girls in the novel.
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:49:58
Original text:
Of course, Lin Wuyue was half a fujoshi, and it was normal that such a character appeared in the novel she wrote. (fujoshi: women with gay affection)
Corrected text:
Of course, Lin Wuyue was half a fujoshi, and it was normal that such a character appeared in the novel she wrote. (Fujoshi: women who like Boys Love)
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:20
Original text:
In the novel, this guy would conduct the combat training against him tomorrow!
Corrected text:
In the novel, this guy would conduct combat training against him tomorrow!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:20
Original text:
Well, Christo's head was smashed by him today, and tomorrow, he would have to beat him up again…
Corrected text:
Well, Christo's head was smashed by him today, and tomorrow he would have to beat him up again…
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:40:24
Original text:
Well, Christo's head was smashed by him today, and tomorrow, he would beat him up again…
Corrected text:
Well, Christo's head was smashed by him today, and tomorrow, he would have to beat him up again…
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