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Edited by: Supriyo-Pal, TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia, anonymous, Kastle, Henry, Lea-Lin, Jorge-Luis-Alvarado
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-16 15:48:23
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Chapter 8: I, the Genius Magician, Smash Your Dog Head
Corrected text:
Chapter 8: I, the Genius Magician, Will smash Your Dog Head
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:19
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Then, Rin felt a little uncomfortable being stared at.
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Rin felt a little uncomfortable being stared at.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:18
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He felt that this woman was either bewildered by him or had some strange feelings because of his "comfort".
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He felt that this woman was either bewildered by him or had some strange feelings because of him comforting her.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:40:35
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He felt that this woman was either confused by him or had some strange feelings because of his "comfort".
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He felt that this woman was either bewildered by him or had some strange feelings because of his "comfort".
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:19
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As a villain who is determined to bum around and wait to be stabbed to death with a sword, he will not allow himself to have too many encounters with other characters.
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As a villain who is determined to bum around until he's stabbed to death with a sword, he will not allow himself to have too many encounters with other characters.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:41:28
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As a villain who is determined to laze away and wait to be stabbed to death with a sword, he will not allow himself to have too many encounters with other characters.
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As a villain who is determined to bum around and wait to be stabbed to death with a sword, he will not allow himself to have too many encounters with other characters.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-29 21:50:07
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The lightest punishment will be electrotherapy, and the heavy punishment will let him feel the pain of broken limbs.
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The lightest punishment would be electrotherapy, while the heaviest punishment would let him feel the pain of having broken limbs.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:19
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These "NPCs" may do things that do not conform to the plot, they have their own ideas and behavior.
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These "NPCs" may do things that do not conform to the plot, they have their own thoughts and personality.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:41:50
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These "NPCs" may do things that do not conform to the plot, it is their own ideas and behavior.
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These "NPCs" may do things that do not conform to the plot, they have their own ideas and behavior.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:19
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But if he directly influences the main plot too much.
Corrected text:
However, if he directly influences the main plot too much.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:42:01
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But if he directly affected the important plot.
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But if he directly influences the main plot too much.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:09:05
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Not even the chance to revenge.
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Not even given the chance for vengeance
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:42:17
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He doesn't have the slightest idea how to get close to any girls, not to mention to be in a relationship!
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He doesn't have the slightest idea of how to get close to any girls, not to mention, how to engage in a relationship!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:09:18
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He doesn't have the slightest idea to get close to any girls, not to mention to be in love!
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He doesn't have the slightest idea how to get close to any girls, not to mention to be in a relationship!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:42:34
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Rin came to the front desk and registered his borrowing information.
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Rin came to the front desk and registered his borrowing credentials .
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:42:55
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He was thinking of asking the librarian who had come in so far after the girl left the last time.
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He was thinking of asking the librarian who had come in, after the girl left the last time.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:18
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But after his reminiscence he saw that the girl also came out.
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Except after his reminiscence he saw that the girl also came out.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:43:09
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But his afterglow saw that the girl actually also came out.
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But after his reminiscence he saw that the girl also came out.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-04 19:57:48
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Lin Rin immediately dismissed the idea, leaving without looking back.
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Rin immediately dismissed the idea, leaving without looking back.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:18
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And, again, it was an important episode of his debut.
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Once more, it was an important episode of his debut.
Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 14:18:15
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And, again, there was an important episode of his debut.
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And, again, it was an important episode of his debut.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:19
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He read the book very quickly at the time and could only remember some general details. He didn't remember the full details, but only remembered that he had hurt someone and had a fight with the protagonist.
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He read the book very quickly in the past and could only remember some general details. He didn't remember the full details, but only remembered that he had hurt someone and had a fight with the protagonist.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:43:27
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He read the book very fast at that time and could only remember some general. He didn't remember the details, but only remembered that he had hurt someone and had a fight with the protagonist.
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He read the book very quickly at the time and could only remember some general details. He didn't remember the full details, but only remembered that he had hurt someone and had a fight with the protagonist.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 21:15:46
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He read the book very fast at that time and could only remember some general. He didn't remember the details, but only remember that he hurt someone and had a fight with the protagonist.
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He read the book very fast at that time and could only remember some general. He didn't remember the details, but only remembered that he had hurt someone and had a fight with the protagonist.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:18
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Oh, garbage, useless system.
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Oh, garbage useless system.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:43:45
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Only when the main events and important side plots would happen, it would remind him in advance.
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Only when the main events and important side plots that occur, would it then remind him in advance.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:43:52
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However, he didn't expect his evil sister to give him any good system.
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However, he didn't expect his evil sister to give him a good system.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:44:03
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It's a good thing that it didn't let him die directly.
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It's already a good thing that it didn't let him die directly.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:18
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Although he has begun to slowly learn the theory of magic, an actual battle is real battle, and he has not yet properly practiced the magic skills he has.
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While he has begun to slowly learn the theory of magic, an actual battle is real battle, and he has not yet properly practiced the magic skills he has.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:44:13
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Although he has begun to slowly learn the theory of magic, an actual battle is an actual battle, and he has not properly practiced the magic skills he already has.
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Although he has begun to slowly learn the theory of magic, an actual battle is real battle, and he has not yet properly practiced the magic skills he has.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-06 10:06:39
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Although he has begun to slowly familiar with the theory of magic, an actual battle is an actual battle, and he has not properly practiced the magic skills he already has.
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Although he has begun to slowly learn the theory of magic, an actual battle is an actual battle, and he has not properly practiced the magic skills he already has.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:18
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This is an abandoned training ground of the academy, currently, there is no building plan for this land. Although it has fallen into disrepair, it can still be used.
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This is an abandoned training ground of the academy, currently there is no building plan for this land. Although it has fallen into disrepair, it can still be used.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-29 21:50:20
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Rin specially picked such a place, is afraid that his first release of magic would be seen by others and affect his reputation as a genius magician.
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Rin specially picked such a place, as he is afraid that his first release of magic would be seen by others and affect his reputation as a genius magician.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:44:36
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The sun was setting, and as far as his eye could see, there were only a few traces of the former students left in the dust.
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The sun was setting, and as far as his eye could see, there were only a few traces of the former students left in the dusk.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:41:42
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The distance was very far. Rin took a look at this person and thought that this person didn't constitute to be a threat.
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The distance was very far. Rin took a look at this person and thought that they didn't seem to be a threat.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:44:45
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The distance was very far. Rin took a look at this person and thought that this person didn't constitute a threat.
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The distance was very far. Rin took a look at this person and thought that this person didn't constitute to be a threat.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-29 18:24:35
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Finding a place, about ten meters away from a target, Rin took his equipment out.
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Finding a place, about ten meters away from the target, Rin took his equipment out.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:42:51
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As a mage or warlock, the weapons are normally long-handled or short-stemmed staff, magic dagger, single-handed sword, magic crystal, or magic book.
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For a mage or warlock, their weapons are normally long or short staves, a magic dagger, a single-handed sword, a magic crystal, or magic book.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:46:31
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Rin's weapon was a magic book. Because his level had reached ten, he was using a special refined fire magic book of the first rank, which gave the highest increase for fire magic.
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Rin's weapon was a magic book. Because his level had reached ten, he was using a special fire magic book of the first rank, which gave the highest increase for fire magic.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:42:41
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Rin's weapon was a magic book. Because his level had reached ten, so he was using a special refined fire magic book of the first rank, which gave the highest increase for fire magic.
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Rin's weapon was a magic book. Because his level had reached ten, he was using a special refined fire magic book of the first rank, which gave the highest increase for fire magic.
Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-03-26 18:07:16
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Rin's weapon was a magic book. Because his level had reached ten, so he was using a special refined fire magic book of the first rank, which had the highest increase in fire magic.
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Rin's weapon was a magic book. Because his level had reached ten, so he was using a special refined fire magic book of the first rank, which gave the highest increase for fire magic.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:47:01
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It's amazing that there seems to be an invisible magic line that connects one end to the book to one end to him. With just a little manipulation, the orientation of the magic book will change around him.
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It's amazing that there seems to be an invisible magic line that connects one end of the book to him. With just a little manipulation, the orientation of the magic book will change around him.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:18
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It's amazing that there seems to be an invisible magic line that connects one end to the book and one end to him, and with just a little manipulation, the orientation of the magic book will change around him.
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It's amazing that there seems to be an invisible magic line that connects one end to the book to one end to him. With just a little manipulation, the orientation of the magic book will change around him.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:47:15
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Rin's face looked calm, stretched out his palm towards the target in front of him. According to the method remembered, he casted the magic spell, chanting in a small voice.
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Rin's face looked calm, stretched out his palm towards the target in front of him. According to the method remembered, he cast the magic spell, chanting in a small voice.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:44:55
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Rin's face looked calm, stretched out his palm towards the target in front of him. According to the method remembered, he cast the magic building art, chanting in a small voice.
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Rin's face looked calm, stretched out his palm towards the target in front of him. According to the method remembered, he casted the magic spell, chanting in a small voice.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:22:30
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In front of his palm, out of thin air, a palm-sized red double triangle pattern appeared. Rin could feel the increasingly hot temperature and a ball of flame that was quickly composed.
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In front of his palm out of thin air, a palm-sized red double triangle pattern appeared. Rin could feel the increasingly hot temperature and a ball of flame that was quickly generated.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:42:57
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In front of his palm, out of thin air, a palm-sized red double triangle pattern appeared. Rin could feel the increasingly hot temperature and a ball of flame that was quickly composed of.
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In front of his palm, out of thin air, a palm-sized red double triangle pattern appeared. Rin could feel the increasingly hot temperature and a ball of flame that was quickly composed.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:45:03
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A mysterious power from the magic book also surged into the pattern and began to increase the fireball spell.
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A mysterious power from the magic book also surged into the pattern and began to increase the magnitude of the fireball spell.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:22:30
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But before the fireball could be launched, it suddenly disappeared in front of Rin like an extinguished candle.
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Except before the fireball could be launched, it suddenly disappeared in front of Rin like an extinguished candle.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 15:39:28
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He was not much discouraged.
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He was not discouraged much.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:45:14
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This was the first time he tried to cast a spell. It's normal that it's not stable.
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This was the first time he tried to cast a spell. It's normal that it's was not stable.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 15:39:46
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He only needs a few more practices, and the consumption of his magic power was not much.
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He only needs a to practice a few more times, and the consumption of his magic power was not much.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:47:51
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Fortunately, the second time it worked. A fireball shot sharply at the target, leaving a few scorch marks, but the target soon recovered as before.
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Fortunately, the second time it worked. A fireball shot sharply at the target, leaving a few scorch marks, but the target soon recovered as it was before.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:22:30
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Feeling his magic power had been consumed to less than 20%, he took out one of the Light Magic Potion and drank it. Feeling the slowly recovering magic power in his body, he prepared for the next stage of practice.
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Feeling his magic power had been consumed to less than 20%, he took out one "Light Magic Potion" and drank it. Feeling the slowly recovering magic power in his body, he prepared for the next stage of practice.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:45:24
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Feeling his magic power had been consumed less than 20%, he took out one of the Light Magic Potion and drank it. Feeling the slowly recovering magic power in his body, he prepared for the next stage of practice.
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Feeling his magic power had been consumed to less than 20%, he took out one of the Light Magic Potion and drank it. Feeling the slowly recovering magic power in his body, he prepared for the next stage of practice.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:31:03
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If a magician drank too many potions within a short period of time, his body will produce resistance.
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If a magician drank too many potions within a short period of time, his body will become resistant.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:22:30
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And the potion resistance time is about twenty minutes.
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The potion resistance time is about twenty minutes.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:22:30
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Explosive Art is an extension of the Fireball spell. It was a ball of fire that would then burst open, and the explosion power would be equal to three or four firecrackers bursting at the same time.
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Explosive Art is an extension of the Fireball spell. It was a ball of fire that would burst open; the explosion power would be equal to three or four firecrackers bursting at the same time.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 15:39:55
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Explosive Art is an extension of the Fireball spell. It was first a ball of fire and would eventually burst open, and the explosion power would be equal to three or four firecrackers bursting at the same time.
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Explosive Art is an extension of the Fireball spell. It was a ball of fire that would then burst open, and the explosion power would be equal to three or four firecrackers bursting at the same time.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:48:30
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After that, Rin casted a few more low-level spells.
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After that, Rin cast a few more low-level spells.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:22:30
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After that, Rin cast a few low-level spells to do the practice.
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After that, Rin casted a few more low-level spells.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:22:30
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After that, Rin cast a few low-level spells to do the practice.
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After that, Rin casted a few more low-level spells.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:22:30
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The first time to use magic, Rin was a little self-satisfied.
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It was his first time using magic; Rin was a little satisfied.
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His heart could not supress the desire. After slightly testing other low-level magic, he immediately aimed at the middle-level magic — Fire Raven.
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His brain could not supress his greed. After slightly testing other low-level magic, he immediately aimed at the middle-level magic — Fire Raven.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:48:46
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This was the coolest magic he could master at the moment.
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This was the coolest magic he could use at the moment.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:31:17
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After using it, the fireball will extend a pair of flaming wings and turn into a fire raven, rushing straight towards the enemy. It's far better than the lower-level skills both in power and speed.
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After using it, the fireball will extend a pair of flaming wings and turn into a fire raven, rushing straight towards the enemy. It's far better than lower-level skills in both power and speed.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:31:26
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The searing flames finally turned into a fire raven more than a meter wide, and then impacted towards the front.
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The searing flames finally turned into a fire raven more than a meter wide, and then headed towards the front.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:22:31
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At first glance, it was clear powerful magic.
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At first glance, it was clearly powerful magic.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:30:08
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Unlock the villain's achievement: Smash Your Dog Head (small).
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Unlocked achievement: Smash Your Dog Head (small).
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:49:30
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