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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:20
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As the candle's little light swayed amongst the darkness, the romantic classical music played like a spring, slowly flowing with silvery sounds.
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As the candle's light swayed amongst the darkness, the romantic classical music played like a spring, slowly flowing with silvery sounds.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 15:00:49
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As the candle's little light swayed amongst the darkness, the romantic classical music played like a spring, slowly flowing with tinkling sounds.
Corrected text:
As the candle's little light swayed amongst the darkness, the romantic classical music played like a spring, slowly flowing with silvery sounds.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:27
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Rin's mind was as peaceful as in the water, enjoying the steak in front of him.
Corrected text:
Rin's mind was as tranquil as flowing water, enjoying the steak in front of him.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:26
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He was the only student left in the dining hall. Except for the sound of water coming from the back kitchen, it was so silent here.
Corrected text:
He was the only student left in the dining hall. Except for the sound of water coming from the back kitchen, it was silent here.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:26
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Only at this time could he throw the so-called villain's mission away from his mind and his soul slowly flow away from this world.
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Only at this time, could he throw the so-called villain's mission away from his mind; his soul felt like it could fly away from this world.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:29
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However, after Rin saw the young girl who entered through the door, this peace of mind completely disappeared.
Corrected text:
However, after Rin saw a young girl who entered through the door, his peace of mind completely disappeared.
Corrected by: cupcake-ninja , 2022-04-29 16:42:18
Original text:
However, after Rin's afterglow saw the young girl who entered through the door, this peace of mind completely disappeared.
Corrected text:
However, after Rin saw the young girl who entered through the door, this peace of mind completely disappeared.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-24 20:48:26
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However, after Rin's afterglow saw the young girl who entered through the door, this peace of mind had gone no way.
Corrected text:
However, after Rin's afterglow saw the young girl who entered through the door, this peace of mind completely disappeared.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:29
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The good thing is that when Emilia crossed into the dining hall, her empty eyes only stared at the kitchen, not even noticing Rin, who was eating at the corner of the dining hall.
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The good thing is that when Emilia crossed into the dining hall, her deadpan eyes only stared at the kitchen, not even noticing Rin, who was eating at the corner of the dining hall.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:29
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Rin's instinct warned aloud in his heart. He hastily ate a piece of meat, then stuff the remaining into his mouth, chewing desperately with his cheeks bulging.
Corrected text:
Rin's instincts warned out loud in his mind. He hastily ate a piece of meat, stuffing the remainders into his mouth, chewing desperately with his cheeks bulging.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:30
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Humph, hero, you want me to be in more plays and also want to steal my dinner? No way!
Corrected text:
Humph, hero, you want me to be in more plays and want to steal my dinner? No way!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:28
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Back to the dormitory, Rin continued to study hard, mainly for the various skill descriptions of the Wind Archer career.
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Back in the dormitory, Rin continued to study hard, mainly for the various skill descriptions of the Wind Archer career.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:28
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The first heroine, Emilia not only had the "Hero" career but also had the cheat-like Observation Eye. She could see through the target's talents and skills, and even the enemy's level and all kinds of attributes.
Corrected text:
The first heroine, Emilia not only had the "Hero" career but also had the cheat-like Observation Eye. She could see through the target's talents, skills, attributes and even the enemy's level.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:28
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The second heroine, the Demon King, although it wasn't explained clearly in the novel, she obviously had a gift like "Foresight", which gave her the ability to predict the enemy's next attack.
Corrected text:
The second heroine, the Demon King, although it wasn't explained clearly in the novel, she had a gift called "Foresight", which gave her the ability to predict the enemy's next attack.
Corrected by: senpaikazi , 2022-03-27 17:10:16
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The second heroine, the Lord of the Demon King, although it wasn't explained clearly in the novel, she obviously had a gift like "Foresight", which gave her the ability to predict the enemy's next attack.
Corrected text:
The second heroine, the Lord of the Demon King(Lord of the demons/demon king/Lord of the demon kings, pick one), although it wasn't explained clearly in the novel, she obviously had a gift like "Foresight", which gave her the ability to predict the enemy's next attack.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:47:44
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Only the Hero's "Elusive" was immune to the Lord of the Demon King's "Foresight".
Corrected text:
Only the Hero's "Elusive" was immune to the Demon King's "Foresight".
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:29
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The third heroine, Elise, with the guardianship of the goddess of light, would have various natural buffs on her body in battles. Even if the enemy sprinting towards her, the enemy may somehow fall and have a fracture.
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The third heroine, Elise, with the blessing of the goddess of light, would have various natural buffs on her body in battles. Even if the enemy sprinting towards her, the enemy may somehow fall and have a fracture.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:25
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The fourth heroine, Rin's sister in this world, whose career was "Sword Master", was the strongest human except for the Hero. Because there would only be one Hero, the Sword Master could be considered as a backup Hero, a Valkyrie with very powerful combat instincts.
Corrected text:
The fourth heroine, Rin's sister in this world, whose career was "Sword Master", was the strongest human except for the Hero. There would only be one Hero, the Sword Master could be considered as a backup Hero. She was a Valkyrie with very powerful combat instincts.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 21:16:30
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The fourth heroine, Rin's sister in this world, whose career was "Sword Master", was the strongest human except for the Hero. Because there would only be only Hero, the Sword Master could be considered as a backup Hero, a Valkyrie with very powerful combat instincts.
Corrected text:
The fourth heroine, Rin's sister in this world, whose career was "Sword Master", was the strongest human except for the Hero. Because there would only be one Hero, the Sword Master could be considered as a backup Hero, a Valkyrie with very powerful combat instincts.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:25
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Hey, so I'm just a villain who doesn't have any special abilities, how dare I do bad things to them? Any of them could be the protagonist if they were in another world.
Corrected text:
Hey, I'm just a villain who doesn't have any special abilities, how can I dare to do bad things to them? Any of them could be the protagonist if they were in another world.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:25
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There were two methods to upgrade a character’s level. The first was by increasing your magic power, and the second was by gaining experience by killing enemies in battle.
Corrected text:
There were two methods to upgrade a character’s level. The first was increasing your magic power, and the second was gaining experience by killing enemies in battle.
Corrected by: Bot19274 , 2022-05-09 09:26:33
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There were two methods to upgrade a character’s level. The first was by increasing magic power, and the second was the experience of killing enemies in battle.
Corrected text:
There were two methods to upgrade a character’s level. The first was by increasing your magic power, and the second was by gaining experience by killing enemies in battle.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 15:40:41
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There were two factors of the upgrade of the career level. The first was the increase in magic power, and the second was the increase in experience in killing enemies in battle.
Corrected text:
There were two methods to upgrade a character’s level. The first was by increasing magic power, and the second was the experience from killing enemies in battle.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:26
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In addition, there was also strict judgment about obtaining battle experience. Only real battle can let a person obtain experience, there is no other way around.
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In addition, there is strict judgment about obtaining battle experience. Only a real battle can let a person obtain experience, there is no other way around.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:48:01
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In addition, there was also strict judgment about obtaining battle experience. Only real a battle can let a person obtain experiences, there is no other way to fool around.
Corrected text:
In addition, there was also strict judgment about obtaining battle experience. Only real battle can let a person obtain experience, there is no other way around.
Corrected by: Bot19274 , 2022-05-09 16:03:18
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In addition, there was also a strict judgment about obtaining battle experience. Only real battles can let a person obtain experiences, there is no way to fool around.
Corrected text:
In addition, there was also strict judgment about obtaining battle experience. Only real a battle can let a person obtain experiences, there is no other way to fool around.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 15:40:16
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In addition, there was also a strict judgment about the obtain of the battle experience. Only the real battles can let a person obtain experiences, there is no way to fool around.
Corrected text:
In addition, there was also a strict judgment about the obtainIng battle experience. Only real battles can let a person obtain experiences, there is no way to fool around.
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Corrected by: Bot19274 , 2022-05-09 16:03:56
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In the student period, because ordinary people couldn't battle at this period, they could only increase their magic power through practice, including the Hero. That's why even the Hero's level wasn't too much than Rin's, because the Hero hadn't had experienced many battles at present.
Corrected text:
In the student period, because ordinary people couldn't battle at this period, they could only increase their magic power through practice, including the Hero. That's why even the Hero's level wasn't much higher than Rin's, because the Hero hadn't experienced many battles at the present.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 15:40:49
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In the student period, because ordinary people couldn't battle at this period, they could only increase their magic power through practice, including the Hero. That's why even the Hero's level wasn't too higher than Rin's, because the Hero hadn't had experienced many battles at present.
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In the student period, because ordinary people couldn't battle at this period, they could only increase their magic power through practice, including the Hero. That's why even the Hero's level wasn't too much than Rin's, because the Hero hadn't had experienced many battles at present.
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Corrected by: Bot19274 , 2022-05-09 16:04:08
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Meditating until middle night, Rin felt that his spirit could no longer support him to continue, so he was ready to go to bed.
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Meditating until the middle of the night, Rin felt that his spirit could no longer support him to continue, so he was ready to go to bed.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:25
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Today, the Hero actually came late, and her state was very wrong.
Corrected text:
Today the hero actually came late, and her state was very improper.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:25
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Today, the Hero actually came late, and her state was very wrong.
Corrected text:
Today the hero actually came late, and her state was very improper.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-03 10:51:58
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Today's Hero actually came late, and her state was very wrong.
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Today the Hero actually came late, and her state was very wrong.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:25
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She was just a kuudere before, but now, she looked like a ghost whose soul was also emptied, lying motionless on the table.
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She was just a kuudere before, but now she looked like a ghost whose soul was drained, lying motionless on the table.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:25
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Out of curiosity, Rin even reached out to probe her nose.
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Out of curiosity, Rin even reached out to prod her nose.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:26
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Elise was so startled that she almost stood up straight away to cast magic on Miss Hero.
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Elise was so startled that she almost was going to stand up straight to cast magic on Miss Hero.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:33
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And at this very moment, Emilia suddenly sat up like a vampire arising from its coffin. Her eyes were completely out of focus, and her pupils dilated, looked not much different from a reanimated corpse.
Corrected text:
At this very moment, Emilia suddenly sat up like a vampire arising from its coffin. Her eyes were completely out of focus, and her pupils dilated, looked not much different from a reanimated corpse.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 14:59:44
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And at this very moment, Emilia suddenly sat up like a zombie in a coffin. Her eyes were completely out of focus, and her pupils dilated, looked not much different from a dead corpse.
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And at this very moment, Emilia suddenly sat up like a vampire arising from its coffin. Her eyes were completely out of focus, and her pupils dilated, looked not much different from a reanimated corpse.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-03 10:50:17
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Rin confiscated the cupcake Elise was going to hand over to Emilia and said decisively.
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Rin decisively said as he confiscated the cupcake Elise was going to hand over to Emilia.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:36
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The Hero fell on the table. The Hero stopped moving. The Hero refused to get up!
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The hero fell on the table. The hero stopped moving. The hero refused to get up!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:36
Original text:
Rin viciously grabbed her ahoge hair with his index and middle fingers, "It's class time, don't do any extra things."
Corrected text:
Rin viciously grabbed her ahoge hair with his index and middle fingers, "It's class time, don't do anything unnecessary."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-04 19:57:59
Original text:
Her Highness stiffened. Her Highness had steam rising from her head. Her Highness couldn't insist anymore.
Corrected text:
Elise stiffened, and steam started rising from her head. She couldn't insist anymore.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-29 18:24:38
Original text:
After successfully doing two evil things, Rin felt happy in his heart, but he didn't receive the beep to unlock the villain achievement, which made him feel displeased later.
Corrected text:
After successfully doing two evil things, Rin felt happy in his heart, but he didn't receive the beep to unlock the villain achievement, which made him feel displeased.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 15:01:02
Original text:
After successfully doing two evil things, Rin felt happy in his heart, but he didn't receive the beep to unlock the villain achievement, which made him feel unreconciled later.
Corrected text:
After successfully doing two evil things, Rin felt happy in his heart, but he didn't receive the beep to unlock the villain achievement, which made him feel displeased later.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:48:59
Original text:
Successfully did two evil things, Rin felt happy in his heart, but he didn't receive the beep to unlock the villain achievement, which made him feel unreconciled later.
Corrected text:
After successfully doing two evil things, Rin felt happy in his heart, but he didn't receive the beep to unlock the villain achievement, which made him feel unreconciled later.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:38
Original text:
Practical training class, one-on-one battle.
Corrected text:
Practical training class time one-on-one battle.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-05 09:52:41
Original text:
The villain’s task this time: defeat the wounded Christo and refuse to admit defeat. After the protagonist comes out to reprimand you, mock the protagonist and fight with the protagonist. In the end, you need to be defeated by the protagonist and apologize to him in public.
Corrected text:
The villain’s task this time: defeat the wounded Christo and refuse to accept his defeat. After the protagonist comes out to reprimand you, mock the protagonist and fight with the protagonist. In the end, you need to be defeated by the protagonist and apologize to him in public.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 15:12:58
Original text:
The villain task this time: defeat the wounded Christo and refuse to admit fault. After the protagonist came out to blame you, mock the protagonist and fight with the protagonist. In the end, you need to be defeated by the protagonist and apologize to him in public.
Corrected text:
The villain’s task this time: defeat the wounded Christo and refuse to admit defeat. After the protagonist comes out to reprimand you, mock the protagonist and fight with the protagonist. In the end, you need to be defeated by the protagonist and apologize to him in public.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:49:25
Original text:
The villain task this time: defeat the wounded Christo and refused to admit fault. After the protagonist came out to blame, mock the protagonist and fight with the protagonist. In the end, you need to be defeated by the protagonist and apologize to him in public.
Corrected text:
The villain task this time: defeat the wounded Christo and refuse to admit fault. After the protagonist came out to blame you, mock the protagonist and fight with the protagonist. In the end, you need to be defeated by the protagonist and apologize to him in public.
Corrected by: Relaire , 2022-03-27 17:07:13
Original text:
The villain task this time: defeat and wounded Christo and refused to admit fault. After the protagonist came out to blame, mocking the protagonist and fighting with the protagonist. In the end, you need to be defeated by the protagonist and apologize to him in public.
Corrected text:
The villain task this time: defeat the wounded Christo and refused to admit fault. After the protagonist came out to blame, mock the protagonist and fight with the protagonist. In the end, you need to be defeated by the protagonist and apologize to him in public.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:37
Original text:
Rin's palm held the magic book, turned it upside down, looking at Christo who showed a fearful look on his face in front of him.
Corrected text:
Rin's palm held a magic book, turning it upside down, looking at Christo who showed a fearful look on his face, standing opposite of him.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-01 21:19:22
Original text:
"I didn't expect the opponent to be you, Christo, I admire you, as a lowly viscount descendant, to have the courage to in front of me."
Corrected text:
"I didn't expect the opponent to be you, Christo, I admire you, as a lowly viscount descendant, to have the courage to stand in front of me."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:38
Original text:
"I didn't expect the opponent to be you, Christo, I admire you, as a lowly viscount descendant, to have the courage to stand opposite me."
Corrected text:
"I didn't expect the opponent to be you, Christo, I admire you, as a lowly viscount descendant, to have the courage to in front of me."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:37
Original text:
Hearing his mockery, many people glared at it.
Corrected text:
Hearing his mockery, many people glared at him.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:37
Original text:
He stood in place, looking scared, and that sorrowful expression actually gathered more pity than a girl.
Corrected text:
He stood in place, looking scared, with a sorrowful expression which gathered more pity than a girl.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 15:13:06
Original text:
He stood in place, looking scared, and that poor look actually gathered more pity than a girl.
Corrected text:
He stood in place, looking scared, and that sorrowful expression actually gathered more pity than a girl.
Corrected by: senpaikazi , 2022-03-27 17:15:06
Original text:
He stood in place, looking scared, and that poor look actually more pity than the girl.
Corrected text:
He stood in place, looking scared, and that poor look actually gathered more pity than a girl.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:36
Original text:
'Didn't you notice that many boys are staring at you with a strange look?'
Corrected text:
'Don't you realize many boys are staring at you with a strange look?'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:36
Original text:
Christo widened his eyes, recalling the fear of being hit in the head yesterday, then crouched down, holding his head on the spot, with his back towards Rin.
Corrected text:
Christo widened his eyes, recalling the fear of being hit in the head yesterday, crouched down holding his head on the spot, with his back towards Rin.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:31:18
Original text:
Christo widened his eyes, recalling the fear of being hit in the head yesterday, then crouched down, holding his head on the spot, and with his back to Rin.
Corrected text:
Christo widened his eyes, recalling the fear of being hit in the head yesterday, then crouched down, holding his head on the spot, with his back towards Rin.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:36
Original text:
Rin was shocked by Christo's speech. He was going to throw the Explosive Art at Christo at this time, however, because of Christos sudden declaration, his hand shivered and the Explosive Art missed the target, flying towards a totally different direction.
Corrected text:
Rin was shocked by Christo's speech. He was going to throw the Explosive Art at Christo at this time, however, because of Christos sudden declaration, his hand shivered causing the Explosive Art to misfire and fly towards a totally different direction.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:31:44
Original text:
Rin was shocked by Christo's speech. He was going to throw the Explosive Art at Christo at this time, because of this, his hand shivered and the Explosive Art missed the target, flying towards a totally different direction.
Corrected text:
Rin was shocked by Christo's speech. He was going to throw the Explosive Art at Christo at this time, however, because of Christos sudden declaration, his hand shivered and the Explosive Art missed the target, flying towards a totally different direction.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:37
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At this time, Rayne, the protagonist, was watching the show, but was tapped on the shoulder by his friend, causing him to turn around.
Corrected text:
At this time, the protagonist "Rayne", was watching the show, but was tapped on the shoulder by his friend, causing him to turn around.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:32:06
Original text:
At this time, Rayne, the protagonist, was watching the show, but was tapped on the shoulder by his friend and turned around.
Corrected text:
At this time, Rayne, the protagonist, was watching the show, but was tapped on the shoulder by his friend, causing him to turn around.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:31:49
Original text:
At this time, Rayne, the protagonist, was watching the show, but was tapped on the shoulder by his friend and turned around.
Corrected text:
At this time, Rayne, the protagonist, was watching the show, but was tapped on the shoulder by his friend, causing him to turn around.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:42
Original text:
Then he heard a loud explosive sound that was behind him, which pushed him forward, causing him to stumble forward. He tried to regain his balance by grabbing his friend's arms, but as a result, the action caused the duo fall to the ground together.
Corrected text:
Then he heard a loud explosive sound that was behind him, which forced him forward, causing him to stumble. He tried to regain his balance by grabbing his friend's arms, however, as a result, the action caused the duo fall to the ground together.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:34:05
Original text:
Then he only heard a loud explosive sound behind him, with a force pushing him forward, he stumbled forward, trying to stand still by grabbing his friend's arms, but as a result, the duo fell to the ground together.
Corrected text:
Then he heard a loud explosive sound that was behind him, which pushed him forward, causing him to stumble forward. He tried to regain his balance by grabbing his friend's arms, but as a result, the action caused the duo fall to the ground together.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:34:21
Original text:
And, the distance between them was so close.
Corrected text:
The distance between them was very close .
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:08:36
Original text:
Surprisingly, Rayne tasted the feeling that was his first kiss.
Corrected text:
Surprisingly, Rayne tasted the feeling that was his very first kiss.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 20:34:31
Original text:
Surprisingly, he tasted the feeling of a first kiss.
Corrected text:
Surprisingly, Rayne tasted the feeling that was his first kiss.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:49:33
Original text:
Surprisingly, he tasted the feeling of the first kiss.
Corrected text:
Surprisingly, he tasted the feeling of a first kiss.
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