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Edited by: Supriyo-Pal, anonymous, Bot19274, Henry, Ian-Villareal, Jorge-Luis-Alvarado
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:17:38
Original text:
Chapter 7: She, Is So Bitchy
Corrected text:
Chapter 7: She Is So Bitchy
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:39
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Rin was already standing in front of the bookshelf at this time.
Corrected text:
Rin was now currently standing in front of the bookshelf.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:39
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He first found the "Alchemy — Fusion Agent Classification Discourse" he needed and took it out, and then his peripheral vision swept to a book named "Rare Magic Card Index", and he couldn't help but be curious and take it out as well.
Corrected text:
He first found the "Alchemy — Fusion Agent Classification Discourse" he needed and took it out, and then from his peripheral vision he saw a book named "Rare Magic Card Index". He couldn't help but be curious and take it out as well.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:31:36
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He first found the "Alchemy — Fusion Agent Classification Discourse" he needed and took it out, and then his afterglow swept to a book named "Rare Magic Card Index", and he couldn't help but be curious and take it out as well.
Corrected text:
He first found the "Alchemy — Fusion Agent Classification Discourse" he needed and took it out, and then his peripheral vision swept to a book named "Rare Magic Card Index", and he couldn't help but be curious and take it out as well.
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Corrected by: Bot19274 , 2022-05-09 09:26:02
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The library was very quiet at this time, no one came to disturb.
Corrected text:
The library was very quiet at this time, so no one came to disturb him.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:31:44
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Rin found a desk in the most remote corner and sat down, flipping open the "Alchemy — Fusion Agent Classification Discourse".
Corrected text:
Rin found a desk in the most remote corner and sat down, flipping open the book called "Alchemy — Fusion Agent Classification Discourse".
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:40
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But …
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Although …
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:32:04
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After all, he suddenly replaced the villain's position, and the villain's memory was stored in his mind like a flash drive.
Corrected text:
After all, he suddenly took over the villain's position, and the villain's memory was stored in his mind like a temporary drive.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:32:18
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When he needs to use them, he will remember them; and if he didn't use them, they would gradually fade away in his memory.
Corrected text:
When he needs to access the information, he will remember it; and if he doesn’t manage to use it at all, the information would gradually fade away from his memory.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:40
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So he needs to seize the time to copy the knowledge to a notebook.
Corrected text:
So he needs to seize the time to copy his knowledge to a notebook.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:48:09
Original text:
So he needs to seize the time to copy the knowledge to the notebook.
Corrected text:
So he needs to seize the time to copy the knowledge to a notebook.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:12:55
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Closing a notebook and putting it aside, Rin flipped open the book called "Rare Magic Card Index" and read it with anticipation.
Corrected text:
Closing his notebook and putting it aside, Rin flipped open the book called "Rare Magic Card Index" and read it with anticipation.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:39
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Closing a notebook and putting it aside, Rin flipped open the book called "Rare Magic Card Index" and read it curiously.
Corrected text:
Closing a notebook and putting it aside, Rin flipped open the book called "Rare Magic Card Index" and read it with anticipation.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:48:19
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Closing the notebook and putting it aside, Rin flipped open the "Rare Magic Card Index" and read it curiously.
Corrected text:
Closing a notebook and putting it aside, Rin flipped open the book called "Rare Magic Card Index" and read it curiously.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:13:17
Original text:
"The lines on the back of a rare magic card is at least thirteen; a mutated magic card would produce an extra mutation line compared to the original version."
Corrected text:
"The lines on the back of a rare magic card are at least thirteen; a mutated magic card will produce an extra mutation line compared to the original version."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:39
Original text:
"The lines on the back of a rare magic card can be at least thirteen, if it was a mutated magic card, it would produce an extra mutation line compared to the original version."
Corrected text:
"The lines on the back of a rare magic card is at least thirteen; a mutated magic card would produce an extra mutation line compared to the original version."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 15:39:19
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"The lines on the back of a rare magic card can be at least thirteen, if it was a mutated magic card, it would produce a mutation line compared to the original version."
Corrected text:
"The lines on the back of a rare magic card can be at least thirteen, if it was a mutated magic card, it would produce an extra mutation line compared to the original version."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:39
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Rin was curious about it. From the space ring, he took out a dozen magic cards, and then compared them with the mutated magic card pattern on the book.
Corrected text:
Rin was curious about this. From the space ring, he took out a dozen magic cards, and then compared them with the mutated magic card pattern on the book.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:39
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Sure enough, he found that behind the magic card, there would be an additional purple stripe that was entwined with the other lines.
Corrected text:
Sure enough, he found that behind the magic card, was an additional purple stripe that was entwined with the other lines.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:39
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With that in mind, Rin picked up the book and quickly flipped through it without noticing a dark, unfamiliar card that slipped into his scattered pile of magic cards.
Corrected text:
With that in mind, Rin picked up the book and quickly flipped through it, without noticing a dark unfamiliar card that slipped into his scattered pile of magic cards.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:39
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Rin was so excited to find the chapter he wanted to read. He was ready to excerpt it, but he thought the cards on the table were too messy and stuffed them all into his space ring.
Corrected text:
Rin was so excited to find the chapter he wanted to read. He was about to read it, but he thought the cards on the table were too messy and stuffed them all into his space ring.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-08 15:43:43
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Not long after he was copying the text, a thin young girl who looked virtuous, passed through the rows of bookshelves. Finally, her eyes fell on the "Rare Magic Card Index" in Rin's hand causing her to frown.
Corrected text:
Not long after he was copying the text, a thin young girl who looked virtuous, passed through the rows of bookshelves. Finally, her eyes fell on the "Rare Magic Card Index" in Rin's hand, causing her to frown.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:41
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Not long after he was copying, a young girl, who looked pure and thin, passed through the rows of bookshelves, and finally, her eyes fell on the "Rare Magic Card Index" in Rin's hand and she frowned.
Corrected text:
Not long after he was copying the text, a thin young girl who looked virtuous, passed through the rows of bookshelves. Finally, her eyes fell on the "Rare Magic Card Index" in Rin's hand causing her to frown.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:08:42
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Not long after he was copying, a young girl, who looked pure and thin, passed through the rows of bookshelves, and finally, her eyes fell on the "Rare Magic Card Index" in Rin's hand and she frown.
Corrected text:
Not long after he was copying, a young girl, who looked pure and thin, passed through the rows of bookshelves, and finally, her eyes fell on the "Rare Magic Card Index" in Rin's hand and she frowned.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-08 15:43:46
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The young girl stared at him for a moment, then walked towards his heels, sat down across him, and stared at the book he was flipping through.
Corrected text:
The young girl stared at him for a moment, then walked towards his heels, sat down across from him, and stared at the book he was flipping through.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:43
Original text:
The young girl stared at him for a moment, gently walked to his heels, sat down across from him, and stared at the book he was flipping through.
Corrected text:
The young girl stared at him for a moment, then walked towards his heels, sat down across him, and stared at the book he was flipping through.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 16:28:08
Original text:
She was careless!
Corrected text:
She had been careless!
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-08 15:43:54
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Because she couldn't temporarily find a bookmark, she used a dark magic card as a bookmark, and then forgot about it and returned the book to the library!
Corrected text:
Because she couldn't find a suitable bookmark, she substituted her dark magic card as one, and then forgot about it and returned the book to the library!
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:43
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Because she couldn't find a bookmark temporarily, so she used a dark magic card as a bookmark before, and then forgot about this and returned the book to the library!
Corrected text:
Because she couldn't temporarily find a bookmark, she used a dark magic card as a bookmark, and then forgot about it and returned the book to the library!
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-08 15:44:00
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That was a magic that could only be used by demons, the dependents and apostles of demons.
Corrected text:
That was a magic that could only be used by demons and the dependents and apostles of demons.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:44
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That was a magic that could only be used by demons and the dependents and apostles of demons.
Corrected text:
That was a magic that could only be used by demons, the dependents and apostles of demons.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:44
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The same goes for magic card making.
Corrected text:
The same goes for the magic card.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:48:46
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If this teenager in front of her had found it, then… she could only eliminate the problem forever.
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If this teenager in front of her had found it, then… she could only eliminate his existence.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:44
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A soft and somewhat introverted voice raised.
Corrected text:
A soft and somewhat introverted voice sounded.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:44
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Being disturbed, Rin raised his head and looked at the person sitting across from him.
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Being disturbed, Rin raised his head and looked at the person sitting across him.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:45
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A young girl who was a little older than him, who had a clear and pretty face, with timid, soft-looking eyes and an unhealthy pallor on her cheeks.
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A young girl who was a little older than him, who had a clear and pretty face, with timid soft-looking eyes and an unhealthy complexion on her cheeks.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:45
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The girl said, but her eyes stared tightly at him.
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The girl said, her eyes piercing through him.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:45
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He was unaware that at this moment, his inner thoughts had been stolen.
Corrected text:
Rin was unaware that at this moment, his inner thoughts had been stolen.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:45
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'Oh this young lady is so introverted and timid, as she actually took the initiative to talk to me, then it must be something very important.'
Corrected text:
"Oh this young lady looked so introverted and timid, since she actually took the initiative to talk to me, then it must be something very important."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-05 08:43:03
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'Oh the young lady is so introverted and timid, she actually took the initiative to talk to me. It must be something very important.'
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'Oh this young lady is so introverted and timid, as she actually took the initiative to talk to me, then it must be something very important.'
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 21:13:53
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No one can lie in her gift of "Mind Reading".
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No one can lie to her gift of "Mind Reading".
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:45
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'Well, this cute-looking little girl got away with it.'
Corrected text:
"Well this cute-looking little girl got away with it."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 08:40:10
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'Well, this cute-looking little boy got away with it.'
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'Well, this cute-looking little girl got away with it.'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:45
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Her fingers crossed the book, and her face was a little stiff.
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Her fingers crossed the book, with her face looking stiff.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:42:01
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Looking at her anxiously movements, Rin could not help but ask, "Didn't find it?"
Corrected text:
Looking at her anxious movements, Rin could not help but ask, "Didn't find it?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:48:30
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Would someone else have opened it before me and then taken the young lady's bookmark away?
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Would someone else have opened it before me and then choose to take the young lady's bookmark away?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:45
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After that, as long as she followed the scent of the magic card, she could find the person and kill him/her.
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After that, as long as she followed the scent of the magic card, she could find the person and kill him or her.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:18:45
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'Oh no, the lady looks sad, no no no, I am a villain, I can't sympathize with her! Think something else! %^^^$#'
Corrected text:
"Oh no, the lady looks sad, no no no, I am a villain, I can't sympathize with her! Think something else! %^^^$#."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-05 08:43:31
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'Oh no, the lady looks sad, no no no, I am a villain, I can't sympathize her! Thinking of something else! %^^^$#'
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'Oh no, the lady looks sad, no no no, I am a villain, I can't sympathize her! Think something else! %^^^$#'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:11
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Seriously, the girl's appearance was not too beautiful, she could only be counted as lovely.
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Seriously, this girl's appearance was not too beautiful, she could only be described as adorable.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:11
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But, he usually had nothing to do with this kind of girl.
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Even so, he usually had nothing to do with this kind of girl.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:14:44
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"That was a gift left to me by my mother… I'm sorry, mother, I didn't keep it."
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"That was a gift left to me by my mother… I'm sorry, mother, I couldn't keep it.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:11
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I'm just thinking that she is pathetic. Even if a villain sees a small dog or cat on the side of the road, he will give something, right?
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I'm just thinking that she is pitiful. Even if a villain sees a small dog or cat on the side of the road, he will give something, right?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:10
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But I'm a villain, how can I comfort her directly?
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Except I'm a villain, how can I comfort her directly?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-05 09:51:47
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"Shut up! It was your mother's gift, but why should I care?! It's not like I took it. Since you lost it, just go to find it!"
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"Shut up! It was your mother's gift, but why should I care?! It's not like I took it. Since you lost it, just go find it!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:11
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Rin put a small unicorn bookmark on the table. This was also from his space ring.
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Rin put a small unicorn bookmark on the table. This was also his space ring.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:42:17
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"Use this one first! Don't be like a pussy who just know's how to cry!"
Corrected text:
"Use this one first! Don't be like a pussy who just knows how to cry!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-29 21:49:51
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"Use this one first! Don't be like a pussy and just know to cry!"
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"Use this one first! Don't be like a pussy who just know's how to cry!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-29 18:24:40
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"I scolded her so much. Will she become more upset?"
Corrected text:
'I scolded her so much. Will she become more upset?'
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:10
Original text:
'I scolded her so much. Will she become more upset?'
Corrected text:
"I scolded her so much. Will she become more upset?"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:00:49
Original text:
'I scolded her so much. Will she be sadder?'
Corrected text:
'I scolded her so much. Will she become more upset?'
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 21:34:38
Original text:
'I was so much. Will she be sadder?'
Corrected text:
'I scolded her so much. Will she be sadder?'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:11
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'I couldn't do anything else and had to scold her. After all, it can't solve anything to keep crying, right?'
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'I couldn't do anything else and had to scold her. After all, crying doesn't solve anything, right?'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:11
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'I'd like to find out who took it later.'
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"I'd like to find out who took it later."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:11
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'It's not that I care, I just don't want her to annoy me with her crying.'
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"It's not that I care, I just don't want her to annoy me with her crying."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:11
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'Ah ah ah, this damn world , and that , don't add more to me!'
Corrected text:
"Ah ah ah, this damn world and the drama. Don't add more to me!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:14
Original text:
But Rin did not notice, under the girl's tears, she showed a trace of an inexplicable smile.
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Nevertheless, Rin did not notice under the girl's tears, she showed a trace of an inexplicable smile.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-05 09:51:55
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What is the secret are you hiding that caused my mind reading to be blocked?
Corrected text:
What is the secret you are hiding that caused my mind reading to be blocked?
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:00:59
Original text:
What is the secret in you that actually blocked my mind reading?
Corrected text:
What is the secret are you hiding that caused my mind reading to be blocked?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:19
Original text:
Do you like being the bad guy so much? And always comparing yourself to a villain.
Corrected text:
Do you like being the bad guy so much to put an act to be a villain?
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:49:11
Original text:
Do you like being the bad guy so much? And always comparing yourself to the villain.
Corrected text:
Do you like being the bad guy so much? And always comparing yourself to a villain.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:49:01
Original text:
Do you like being the bad guy so much? And always comparing yourself to the villain.
Corrected text:
Do you like being the bad guy so much? And always comparing yourself to a villain.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-08 15:44:03
Original text:
In fact I the one sitting in front of you, am the real villain of this world!
Corrected text:
In fact I, the one sitting in front of you, am the real villain of this world!
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:21:19
Original text:
In fact, I, the one sitting in front of you, am the real villain of this world!
Corrected text:
In fact I the one sitting in front of you, am the real villain of this world!
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:16:13
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