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Edited by: Supriyo-Pal, TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia, mondruppen, anonymous, hao-farah, Henry, Koppany-Budai, Lea-Lin, Abhinav-Balasubramaniyan, Jorge-Luis-Alvarado
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:43
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Chapter 6: This Lucky Ahoge Hair
Corrected text:
Chapter 6: The Lucky Ahoge Hair
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-09 09:26:42
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Early the next morning, Rin yawned and walked out of the dormitory building.
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Early the next morning, Rin yawned as he walked out of the dormitory building.
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Corrected by: Koppany-Budai , 2022-07-04 09:30:11
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'Today is our first day of class. I really shouldn't have slept so late last night.'
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'Today is our first day of class. I really shouldn't have been awake so late last night.'
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:14:16
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'Today was the first day of class, so I shouldn't have slept so late last night.'
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'Today is our first day of class. I really shouldn't have slept so late last night.'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:43
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The good thing is, today's class is not too busy. Because it is the first day, and the main purpose is to understand the students' mastery of their skills and level of knowldge, so there will be no direct lectures.
Corrected text:
The good thing is, today's class is not too busy. Because it is the first day, the main purpose is to understand the students' mastery of their skills and level of knowledge, so there will be no direct lectures.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-24 20:49:21
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The good thing is, today's class is not too busy. Because it is the first day, and the main purpose is to understand the students' mastery of the primary knowledge, so there will be no direct lectures.
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The good thing is, today's class is not too busy. Because it is the first day, and the main purpose is to understand the students' mastery of their skills and level of knowldge, so there will be no direct lectures.
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Corrected by: Abhinav-Balasubramaniyan , 2022-11-19 01:50:00
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It has to be explained here.
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Some details need to be explained.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:44
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Although people in this world can have only one or two classes, it does not mean that they can only learn class-related knowledge.
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Although people in this world can have only one or two classes, it does not mean that they can only learn specific class-related knowledge.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:44
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Having a class just means that a person has the highest growth in this class and its relevant talents.
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Having a class just means that a person has greater growth in the class and its relevant talents.
Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 14:17:42
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The class just means that a person has the highest growth in this class and the relevant talents.
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Having a class just means that a person has the highest growth in this class and its relevant talents.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:44
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For example, Rin, as a Fire Mage, has the highest growth rate in fire magic, but he can also use other types of magic.
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For example, Rin as a Fire Mage, has the highest growth rate in fire magic, but he can also use other types of magic.
Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 14:17:54
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For example, Rin, as a Fire Mage, his fire magic growth is the highest, but he can also use other types of magic.
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For example, Rin, as a Fire Mage, has the highest growth rate in fire magic, but he can also use other types of magic.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-09 16:04:17
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It was just that he didn't have a high growth level and proficiency of other sorts of magic.
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It was just that he didn't have a high growth level and proficiency with other sorts of magic.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 14:58:35
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It was just that he didn't have a high growth level and manipulating level of the other magic.
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It was just that he didn't have a high growth level and proficiency of other sorts of magic.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-09 16:04:29
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Incidentally, in addition to the inherent class such as "Demon King" and "Hero", many classes can be advanced.
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Incidentally, in addition to inherent classes such as "Demon King" and "Hero", many other classes can be advanced.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:05:13
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Because only after understanding this knowledge, they can improve their magic and martial arts, and learn the use of potions and magic cards. After they graduate, this knowledge would be useful in fighting against magical monsters.
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Because only after understanding this knowledge, can they improve their magic and martial arts, and learn the uses of potions and magic cards. After they graduate, this knowledge will be useful in fighting against magical monsters.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-09 14:26:22
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Because only after understanding this knowledge, can they improve their magic and martial arts, and learn the use of potions and magic cards. After they graduate, this knowledge would be useful in fighting against magical monsters.
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Because only after understanding this knowledge, they can improve their magic and martial arts, and learn the use of potions and magic cards. After they graduate, this knowledge would be useful in fighting against magical monsters.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 21:15:37
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Because only after understanding this knowledge, they can improve their magic and martial arts, and learn the use of potions and magic cards. After they were graduated, this knowledge was useful in fighting magical monsters.
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Because only after understanding this knowledge, can they improve their magic and martial arts, and learn the use of potions and magic cards. After they graduate, this knowledge would be useful in fighting against magical monsters.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:49:33
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These are the general education courses, and coming up next are the intensive specialized courses.
Corrected text:
These are the general education courses, and coming up next are intensive specialized courses.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 14:58:57
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These are the public courses, and the next is the intensive courses.
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These are the general education courses, and coming up next are the intensive specialized courses.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 14:59:08
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The intensive courses are the relevant courses for each class.
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The specialized courses are the most relevant courses for each student.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-09 16:03:27
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The cultivation course and the actual combat course are the real top priority.
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The cultivation course and the actual combat course are the real top priorities.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:06:38
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Early in the morning, of course, it was time to go to the dining room to eat breakfast.
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Indeed, it's early in the morning, it was time to go to the dining room to eat breakfast.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-09 23:35:12
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Each grade's building, dining room, and even dormitory are separate, and it's rare to see seniors from other grades along the way.
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Each grade's building, dining room, and even dormitory are separate, so it's rare to see seniors from other grades along the way.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:06:28
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Entering the dining room, Rin didn't have to do it himself, naturally, there was a henchman there to find an empty table; wiping the table, the stool and picking up his meal.
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Entering the dining room, Rin didn't have to do it himself, naturally, there was a henchman there to find and wipe the table, the stool and pick up his meal.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:06:51
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Entering the dining room, Rin didn't have to do it himself, naturally, there was a henchman to find an empty table, and wipe the table and the stool and go to pick up the meal.
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Entering the dining room, Rin didn't have to do it himself, naturally, there was a henchman there to find an empty table; wiping the table, the stool and picking up his meal.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:49:45
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Speaking of which, he hasn't remembered the names of the two henchmen at the head.
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Speaking of which, he hasn't remembered the names of the two henchmen in his head.
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Corrected by: Abhinav-Balasubramaniyan , 2022-11-19 01:50:49
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That fool hero seems to have not come yet, otherwise, all the students in the dining room would surround her and make a lot of noise.
Corrected text:
That foolish hero doesn't seem to have arrived yet, otherwise, all the students in the dining room would surround her and make a lot of noise.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:06:51
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That fool Hero seems to have not come yet, otherwise, all the students in the dining room would surround her and make a lot of noise.
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That fool hero seems to have not come yet, otherwise, all the students in the dining room would surround her and make a lot of noise.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:07:03
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Then, he saw a familiar pink-haired fiancée at the entrance of the restaurant, walking in a princessly bearing.
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Then, he saw his familiar pink-haired fiancée at the entrance of the restaurant, walking with a princessly bearing.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:07:54
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And then, he saw the familiar pink-haired fiancée at the entrance of the restaurant, walking in with a princess pose.
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Then, he saw a familiar pink-haired fiancée at the entrance of the restaurant, walking in a princessly bearing.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:30:06
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Around her, there were four or five women gathered.
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Around her, four or five women were gathered.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-24 20:49:12
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Her lake-colored eyes instantly fell on the Rin who was eating.
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Her lake-colored eyes instantly fell on Rin who was eating.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-04 19:59:14
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She apologized to the girls around her, then fetched a breakfast and rushed to Rin's side with quickened steps.
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She apologized to the girls around her, fetched her breakfast and rushed to Rin's side with quickened steps.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 21:10:19
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She apologized to the girls around her, then fetched a breakfast and rushed to Rin's heels with quickened steps.
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She apologized to the girls around her, then fetched a breakfast and rushed to Rin's side with quickened steps.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:16:05
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As she got closer and closer, the princess's aura disappeared and instantly turned into a ditzy and clingy cutie.
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As she got closer and closer, the princess's bearing disappeared and instantly turned into a ditzy and clingy cutie.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:09:25
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As she got closer and closer, the princess's aura disappeared and instantly turned into a dumb and clingy cutie.
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As she got closer and closer, the princess's aura disappeared and instantly turned into a ditzy and clingy cutie.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-26 12:30:26
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At least, that was her look in the eyes of others.
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At least, that's the impression of her in the eyes of others.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:16:08
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And Rin, with a frown on his face, tried to retreat behind the crowd.
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Rin with a frown on his face, tried to retreat behind the crowd.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:16:22
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"Ding! My dear master, although there is no plot about you today, still try to maintain a good villain persona! Please do your best to scoff at the heroine!"
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"Ding! My dear master, although there is no plot about you today; try to maintain a good villain persona! Please do your best to scoff at the heroine!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:09:34
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"Ding! My dear master, although there is no plot about you today, still maintain a good villain persona! Please do your best to scoff at the heroine!"
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"Ding! My dear master, although there is no plot about you today, still try to maintain a good villain persona! Please do your best to scoff at the heroine!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:16:29
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And how heartless is it to scoff at a kind and lovely girl in the morning?
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How heartless is it to scoff at a kind and lovely girl in the morning?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:16:33
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Thinking about it, Rin looked Elise up and down, who was sitting in front of him, and finally, his eyes focused on a strand of pink ahoge hair above her head.
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Thinking about it, Rin looked at Elise up and down, who was sitting in front of him, and finally, his eyes focused on a strand of pink ahoge hair above her head.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:14
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"As a royal highness, you can't even take care of your image, it's really a shame to go out with such an undignified ahoge hair, Elise!"
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"As a royal highness, you can't even take care of your appearance, it's really a shame to go out with such an undignified ahoge hair, Elise!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:36:12
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"As a royal highness, you can't even take care of your disguise well. It's really a shame to go out with such an undignified ahoge hair, Elise!"
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"As a royal highness, you can't even take care of your image, it's really a shame to go out with such an undignified ahoge hair, Elise!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:18
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Rin blushed, he almost forgot that his hair was naturally a little curly.
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Rin blushed, he forgot that his hair was naturally a little curly.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:08:07
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Looking at the pink-haired girl that was smugly in front of him, who seemed to be mocking his naturally curly hair.
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Looking at the pink-haired girl that was smug in front of him, she seemed to be mocking his naturally curly hair.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:23
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Rin reached out his fingers and grabbed her ahoge hair that was waving left and right and flaunting at him.
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Rin reached out his fingers and grabbed her ahoge hair that was waving left and right, dangling at him.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:36
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But the feeling was only for a moment. Rin just dismissed it as an illusion.
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The feeling was only for a moment. Rin just dismissed it as an illusion.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:38
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And Elise stiffened and trembled slightly at this time. Her face had turned red and her lips shivered and could not say anything.
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Elise stiffened and trembled slightly at this time. Her face had turned red with her lips shivering, she could not say anything.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:41
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My villain persona is also very stable today!
Corrected text:
My villainous persona is very stable today!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:44
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Actually, Elise, whose back was turned to him, flushed all over her body.
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Coincidentally, Elise whose back was turned to him, flushed all over.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:49:54
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'The most important place was touched.'
Corrected text:
'My most important place was touched.'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:46
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'Little Rin is so annoying! That is my lucky hair, I will be shy if you touch it!'
Corrected text:
'Little Rin is so annoying! That is my lucky hair, I will be embarrassed if you touch it!'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:49
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'And there is really a lucky protection!'
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'Also there really is a lucky protection!'
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:09:12
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The heroine is too dangerous! Stay a second more and there may be more messy plot generated.
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The heroine is too dangerous! If he stays a second more there may be a more messy plot generated.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:09:46
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The heroine is too dangerous! Stay a second more and there may be messy additional plot generated.
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The heroine is too dangerous! Stay a second more and there may be more messy plot generated.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:11:19
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The idea was to act in his best interests when the plot starts, and to get as far away as possible when he doesn't need to appear.
Corrected text:
The idea was to act to the best of his ability when the plot starts, and to get as far away as possible when he doesn't need to appear.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:51
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With the idea to act in his best interests when the plot starts, and get as far away as possible when he doesn't need to appear.
Corrected text:
The idea was to act in his best interests when the plot starts, and to get as far away as possible when he doesn't need to appear.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:09:59
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With the idea to act at his best when the plot starts and get as far away as possible when he doesn't need to appear.
Corrected text:
With the idea to act in his best interests when the plot starts, and get as far away as possible when he doesn't need to appear.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:53
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Rin finally finished the courses on the first day.
Corrected text:
Rin finally finished the classes on the first day.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:56
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The protagonist's revealed class is Alchemist, he has the best talent in alchemy; plus his rare talent as a Magic Card Master allows him to directly analyze the various equations of magic cards. He is also good at magic card analysis.
Corrected text:
The protagonist's revealed class is Alchemist, he has the best talent in alchemy; plus his rare talent as a Magic Card Master allows him to directly analyze the various formula of magic cards. He is also good at magic card analysis.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 16:05:47
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The protagonist's revealed class is Alchemist, he has the best talent in alchemy; plus his rare talent as a Magic Card Master, allowing him to directly analyze the various equations of magic cards, he is also good at magic card analysis.
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The protagonist's revealed class is Alchemist, he has the best talent in alchemy; plus his rare talent as a Magic Card Master allows him to directly analyze the various equations of magic cards. He is also good at magic card analysis.
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 21:13:35
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In these two disciplines, no one can compare to him.
Corrected text:
In these two disciplines, no one can compete with him.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:39:58
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But he was not so good in the other disciplines.
Corrected text:
Even so he was not so good in the other disciplines.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 21:13:45
Original text:
But his study was not so good in the other disciplines.
Corrected text:
But he was not so good in the other disciplines.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:40:01
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Because of his protagonist's aura and personal charm, he often got the praise of classmates and teachers, which made Gur Fenix very perplexed.
Corrected text:
Because of his protagonist's aura and personal charm, he often had the praise of classmates and teachers, which made Gur Fenix very perplexed.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:50:07
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Because of his protagonist's aura and personal charm, he often got the praise of classmates and teachers, which made Gur Fenix very unconvinced.
Corrected text:
Because of his protagonist's aura and personal charm, he often got the praise of classmates and teachers, which made Gur Fenix very perplexed.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:40:03
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So, Rin needs to show his displeasure with the protagonist today. He can then express his dissatisfaction of the situation in private.
Corrected text:
Thus, Rin needs to show his displeasure with the protagonist today. He can then express his dissatisfaction of the situation in private.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:10:11
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So, Rin only needs to show his displeasure with the protagonist today. He can even only express his dissatisfaction in private.
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So, Rin needs to show his displeasure with the protagonist today. He can then express his dissatisfaction of the situation in private.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:50:18
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Then he could freely allocate the rest of the time.
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Then he could freely allocate what he wants to do the rest of the time.
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Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 14:18:06
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It just so happened that he didn't have the relevant books with him, so in order to finish his homework, he had to get up and go to the library to look through them.
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It just so happened that he didn't have the relevant books with him, so in order to finish his homework, he had to get up and go to the library to look for them.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 17:40:05
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On the other hand, a dark-haired girl who had already left the library suddenly remembered that she left a very important item in the library and hurriedly turned back.
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Meanwhile, a dark-haired girl who had already left the library suddenly remembered that she left a very important item in the library and hurriedly turned back.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:50:25
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On the other hand, the dark-haired girl who had already left the library suddenly remembered that she left a very important item in the library and hurriedly turned back.
Corrected text:
On the other hand, a dark-haired girl who had already left the library suddenly remembered that she left a very important item in the library and hurriedly turned back.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 06:11:56
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