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Edited by: anonymous, TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia, mondruppen, hao-farah, FlyingPirateCat-X, Henry, Reader-1, Abhinav-Balasubramaniyan, tyranoic, Sangam-Shrestha, GrowArmyGt-Vo, Lea-Lin, shaheer20062006@gmail.com, Unknown-Man, Jorge-Luis-Alvarado
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:19
Original text:
"Hey, system, tell me what to do now."
Corrected text:
"Hey system, tell me what is happening right now.”
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Corrected by: tyranoic , 2022-06-14 08:49:49
Original text:
"Well … noisy … why do I have to… hmm? Why is the heroine in my dear master's room? Hey hey, my dear master, have you changed your class to 'Mount' now?"
Corrected text:
"So noisy … why do I have to- Hmm? Why is the heroine in my dear master's room? Hey hey, my dear master, have you changed your class to 'bottom' now?"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:15
Original text:
"Well … noisy … why do I have to… hum? Why is the heroine in my dear master's room? Hey hey, my dear master, you changed your class to 'Mount' now?"
Corrected text:
"Well … noisy … why do I have to… hmm? Why is the heroine in my dear master's room? Hey hey, my dear master, have you changed your class to 'Mount' now?"
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Corrected by: shaheer20062006@gmail.com , 2022-09-06 16:28:33
Original text:
"Stop the nonsense, you are really a…"
Corrected text:
"Stop the nonsense, you are a really…"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:14
Original text:
"I'll remind my dear master that insulting the system will also be punished."
Corrected text:
"I'll remind my dear master that insulting the system will be punishable."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-29 22:47:54
Original text:
"Remind my dear master that insulting the system will also be punished."
Corrected text:
"I'll remind my dear master that insulting the system will also be punished."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:14
Original text:
Rin skimmed his mouth and looked at the dumb (literally) Hero above him.
Corrected text:
Rin skimmed his mouth and looked at the dumb hero (literally) above him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 08:08:43
Original text:
Rin skimmed his mouth and looked at the dumb (literally) Hero above himself.
Corrected text:
Rin skimmed his mouth and looked at the dumb (literally) Hero above him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-04 19:57:36
Original text:
Lin Rin skimmed his mouth and looked at the dumb (literally) Hero above himself.
Corrected text:
Rin skimmed his mouth and looked at the dumb (literally) Hero above himself.
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Corrected by: GrowArmyGt-Vo , 2022-07-11 08:35:24
Original text:
His mood was conflicted.
Corrected text:
He was conflicted.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:02:54
Original text:
His mood was complicated.
Corrected text:
His mood was conflicted.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:13:13
Original text:
Should he throw her out at this time, or should he throw her out at this time, or should he throw her out at this time?
Corrected text:
Should he throw her out at this time?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 00:09:41
Original text:
Damn! I can't fight her.
Corrected text:
Damn it! I can't beat her.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:13:29
Original text:
"Hey, the extra plot is so annoying. My dear master, do whatever you want to do yourself. Just don't beyond your villain persona."
Corrected text:
"Hey, the extra plot is so annoying. My dear master, do whatever you want to do yourself. Just don't go beyond your villain persona."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-24 20:48:39
Original text:
"Isn't this a novel world? Why there will be extra plot?!"
Corrected text:
"Isn't this a novel world? Why would there be extra plot?!"
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-04 19:58:42
Original text:
"Ding, my dear master, although this world is based on a novel, it is still a constantly evolving and imperfect world, and the male and female characters are not just scripted AI, they have their own behavior patterns. But in general, they will still follow the script.
Corrected text:
"Ding, my dear master, although this world is based on a novel, it is still a constantly evolving and imperfect world, and characters are not just scripted NPC. They have their own will. Though, they still follow the novel's plot.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-24 20:49:03
Original text:
"Ding, my dear master, although this world is created based on a novel, itself is a constantly evolving and perfect world, and the male and female characters are not artificial AI, they have their own behavior patterns. But in general, they will still follow the script.
Corrected text:
"Ding, my dear master, although this world is based on a novel, it is still a constantly evolving and imperfect world, and the male and female characters are not just scripted AI, they have their own behavior patterns. But in general, they will still follow the script.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:14
Original text:
Anyway, solve it yourself."
Corrected text:
Anyway, proceed to solve the plot yourself."
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:22
Original text:
In that case, he was afraid that he would encounter many extra plots in the future.
Corrected text:
In any case, he was afraid that he would encounter more side plots in the future.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:36:25
Original text:
In that case, he was afraid that he would have to encounter many extra plots in the future.
Corrected text:
In that case, he was afraid that he would encounter many extra plots in the future.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:25
Original text:
Then he had to act on the spot again?
Corrected text:
Would he have to act on the spot again?
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:41
Original text:
And then, he had to act on the spot again?
Corrected text:
Then he had to act on the spot again?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:41
Original text:
The good thing is, it does not affect the plot direction.
Corrected text:
The good thing is, the situation does not affect the plot's direction.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:28
Original text:
"Ding, by the way, congratulations! You were knocked to the ground by the heroine.
Corrected text:
"Ding, congratulations! You were knocked to the ground by the heroine.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:31
Original text:
Unlock the villain achievement: Under the Crotch (Minor).
Corrected text:
Unlocked achievement: Under the Crotch (Minor).
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:36
Original text:
Get the rewarded item: Silver Traveler Saddle. If you put the saddle on magic beasts, it will be easier to tame them.
Corrected text:
Rewarded item: Silver Traveler’s Saddle. Putting the saddle on a magic beast, will make it easier to tame them.
Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:34
Original text:
Get the rewarded item: Silver Traveler Saddle. If you put the saddle on magic beasts, it will be easier to tame them.
Corrected text:
Rewarded item: Silver Traveler’s Saddle. Putting the saddle on a magic beast, will make it easier to tame them.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-01 21:19:05
Original text:
Get the rewarded item: Silver Traveler Saddle. If you put the saddle on magic beasts, they will be easier to be tamed.
Corrected text:
Get the rewarded item: Silver Traveler Saddle. If you put the saddle on magic beasts, it will be easier to tame them.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:41
Original text:
Get the rewarded prop: Silver Traveler Saddle. If you put the saddle on magic beasts, they will be easier to be tamed.
Corrected text:
Get the rewarded item: Silver Traveler Saddle. If you put the saddle on magic beasts, they will be easier to be tamed.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:12:11
Original text:
Get the rewarded prop: Silver Traveler Daddle. If you put the daddle on mount-class magic beasts, they will be easier to be tamed.
Corrected text:
Get the rewarded prop: Silver Traveler Saddle. If you put the saddle on magic beasts, they will be easier to be tamed.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:41
Original text:
Please continue to make more efforts to be humiliated by the protagonist and heroines."
Corrected text:
Please continue to work hard to be humiliated by the protagonist and heroines."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:41
Original text:
Rin annoyed, struggled, but didn't get rid of the Hero.
Corrected text:
Rin was annoyed and struggled, but didn't get rid of the Hero.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:41
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The student next door just grumbled and soon stopped his complaint.
Corrected text:
The student next door grumbled and soon stopped his complaint.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:01:15
Original text:
He was a weak wizard, and the Hero was a "kairiki" girl with double the strength and growth of ordinary people.
Corrected text:
He was a weak wizard, and the Hero was a "superhuman" girl with double the strength and growth of ordinary people.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-12 21:54:03
Original text:
He wasn't a weak wizard, and the Hero was a "kairiki" girl with double the strength and growth of ordinary people.
Corrected text:
He was a weak wizard, and the Hero was a "kairiki" girl with double the strength and growth of ordinary people.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 10:17:15
Original text:
If he wasn't a weak wizard and the Hero was a "kairiki" girl with double strength and growth than ordinary people.
Corrected text:
He wasn't a weak wizard, and the Hero was a "kairiki" girl with double the strength and growth of ordinary people.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:44
Original text:
Emilia's look remained unchanged as she slowly stood up and walked to the window.
Corrected text:
Emilia's face remained unchanged as she slowly stood up and walked to the window.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 00:09:43
Original text:
Rin rubbed the back of his head and asked helplessly, "So, what the hell are you doing climbing the rooftop in the middle of the night?"
Corrected text:
Rin rubbed the back of his head and asked helplessly, "So, what the hell were you doing climbing the rooftop in the middle of the night?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-05-09 09:03:39
Original text:
It's a Habit, watching the moon with a midnight snack."
Corrected text:
"It's a Habit, watching the moon with a midnight snack."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 00:10:09
Original text:
"Habit, watching the moon with a midnight snack."
Corrected text:
It's a Habit, watching the moon with a midnight snack."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:01:20
Original text:
"Habit, watching the moon for a midnight snack."
Corrected text:
"Habit, watching the moon with a midnight snack."
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Corrected by: Unknown-Man , 2023-02-27 06:06:03
Original text:
"…Don't you know to take the stairs of the girl's dormitory?"
Corrected text:
"…Don't you know how to use the stairs in the girl's dormitory like a normal person?"
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:55
Original text:
Emilia turned around. Her blue eyes clearly looked at Rin, but were empty, as if looking through his body to somewhere behind him.
Corrected text:
Emilia turned around. Her blue eyes were clear yet empty as she looked at Rin. It’s as if she is looking through his body to somewhere behind him.
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Corrected by: Unknown-Man , 2023-02-27 06:13:42
Original text:
"Today, God told me that upstairs in this building, the food would be scrumptious."
Corrected text:
"I was informed by God that food eaten on the rooftop of this building, on this particular day, would be more delectable."
Corrected by: Unknown-Man , 2023-02-27 06:13:40
Original text:
"Today, God told me that upstairs in this building, the food would be scrumptious."
Corrected text:
"I was informed by God that food eaten on the rooftop of this building, on this particular day, would be more delectable."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:41
Original text:
"Today, God told me that upstairs in this building, the food would be extra delicious."
Corrected text:
"Today, God told me that upstairs in this building, the food would be scrumptious."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:01:29
Original text:
"Are you fooling … eh?"
Corrected text:
"Who are you fooling … eh?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:41
Original text:
Rin suddenly remembered that the Hero also had a talent called "God's Whisper", which allowed her to receive guidance from the gods.
Corrected text:
Rin suddenly remembered that the hero also had a talent called "God's Whisper", which allowed her to receive guidance from the gods.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-10 18:49:54
Original text:
So she probably wasn't fooling anyone.
Corrected text:
So she probably wasn't joking around.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:40
Original text:
But would a god be that bored to tell her this kind of crap?
Corrected text:
Except would a God be that bored to tell her this kind of crap?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:10:18
Original text:
Rin felt that he needed to maintain the majesty of the villain.
Corrected text:
Rin felt that he needed to maintain the reputation of a villain.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:01:36
Original text:
Sweeping a glance at her cat pajamas, he had an idea.
Corrected text:
Sweeping a glance at her cat like pajamas, he had an idea.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 05:44:11
Original text:
"Stupid girl, hurry up and get out of here. Heh, don't think that just because you're the hero, I'll let you just go into my room and rummage through my possessions. I'll call the warden if you don't leave."
Corrected text:
"Stupid girl, hurry up and get out of here. Heh, don't think that just because you're the hero, I'll let you just go into my room and rummage through my possessions. I'll call the dorm supervisor if you don't leave."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:41
Original text:
"Stupid girl, hurry up and get out of here. Heh, don't think that just because you're the Hero, I'll let you just go into my room and rummage through my possessions. I'll call the warden if you don't leave."
Corrected text:
"Stupid girl, hurry up and get out of here. Heh, don't think that just because you're the hero, I'll let you just go into my room and rummage through my possessions. I'll call the warden if you don't leave."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:10:40
Original text:
"Stupid girl, hurry up and get out of here. Heh, don't think that just because you're the Hero, I'll let you just go into my room and rummage through my locker. I'll call the mistress if you don't leave."
Corrected text:
"Stupid girl, hurry up and get out of here. Heh, don't think that just because you're the Hero, I'll let you just go into my room and rummage through my possessions. I'll call the warden if you don't leave."
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 21:37:13
Original text:
"Stupid cat, hurry up and get out of here. Heh, don't think that just because you're the Hero, I'll let you just go into my room and rummage through my locker. I'll call the hostess if you don't get out."
Corrected text:
"Stupid girl, hurry up and get out of here. Heh, don't think that just because you're the Hero, I'll let you just go into my room and rummage through my locker. I'll call the mistress if you don't leave."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:41
Original text:
Emilia stared at his face, which was full of loathing for a while, turned around, and climbed out of the window again by using the table.
Corrected text:
Emilia stared at his face, which was full of loathing for a while. She then turned around, and climbed out of the window by using the table.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:01:50
Original text:
Emilia stared at his face, which was full of disgust, for a while, turned around, and climbed out of the window again by using the table.
Corrected text:
Emilia stared at his face, which was full of loathing for a while, turned around, and climbed out of the window again by using the table.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:42
Original text:
The good thing is that she was driven away, otherwise, he really does not know how to continue acting.
Corrected text:
It's good that she was driven away, otherwise, he really does not know how to continue acting.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:01:55
Original text:
Thinking of the fact that the woman will climb back down the hooked rope again, Rin had a headache.
Corrected text:
Thinking of the fact that the woman will climb back down the attached rope again, Rin had a headache.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:58
Original text:
Who can tell him what kind of creature this is?
Corrected text:
Can someone tell him what kind of person is like this?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 00:10:15
Original text:
'Forget it, I'm not in the mood to read now, just go to bed.'
Corrected text:
'Forget it, I'm not in the mood to read now, I'll go to bed.'
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 08:08:49
Original text:
'Forget it, I'm not in the mood to read now, just go to the bed.'
Corrected text:
'Forget it, I'm not in the mood to read now, just go to bed.'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:10:53
Original text:
Thinking so, Rin packed up the books and notebooks. He was about to turn off the lights, when a person fell down from the window and scared him.
Corrected text:
Thinking so, Rin packed up his books and notebooks. He was about to turn off the lights, when a person fell down from the window and scared him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-04 19:57:40
Original text:
Thinking so, Lin Rin packed up the books and notebooks. He was about to turn off the lights, when a person fell down from the window and scared him.
Corrected text:
Thinking so, Rin packed up the books and notebooks. He was about to turn off the lights, when a person fell down from the window and scared him.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:02:06
Original text:
Emilia, in some indefinable position, hung upside down, with a chicken leg from the student cafeteria in her hand.
Corrected text:
Emilia, in a ridiculous position, hung upside down, with a chicken leg from the student cafeteria in her hand.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-31 15:04:05
Original text:
"Wanna to eat?"
Corrected text:
"Wanna eat?"
Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:30:01
Original text:
"Want to eat?"
Corrected text:
"Wanna to eat?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:11:05
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She was answered by the crisp sound of the window closing, and then the curtains were pulled shut.
Corrected text:
She was answered by the crisp sound of the window closing, followed by the curtains being pulled shut.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:30:04
Original text:
Emilia blinked and sat on the edge of the rooftop, wiggling her two feet around while she ate the chicken leg.
Corrected text:
Emilia blinked and sat on the edge of the rooftop, wiggling her two feet as she ate her chicken leg.
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Corrected by: Unknown-Man , 2023-02-27 06:15:15
Original text:
Nobody knew what she was thinking.
Corrected text:
Nobody knew what was going through her mind.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:13:38
Original text:
Nobody knows what she's thinking.
Corrected text:
Nobody knew what she was thinking.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:43
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In the gloomy room, the doors and windows were locked and the curtains were covered shut.
Corrected text:
In a gloomy room, the doors, windows and the curtains were locked and covered shut.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:11:15
Original text:
In the gloomy room, the doors and windows locked and the curtains covered airtight.
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In the gloomy room, the doors and windows were locked and the curtains were covered shut.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 05:45:11
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In front of the desk, a pair of polished jade-like slender legs lazily crossed to the table.
Corrected text:
Sitting in front of the desk, a pair of polished jade-like slender legs lazily crossed beneath the table.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-09 17:14:13
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Wearing cartoon illustrated pajamas, the girl about 18-year-old stretched out, revealing her waist with no hint of fat.
Corrected text:
Wearing cartoon illustrated pajamas, A girl about 18-year-old stretched out, revealing her waist with no hint of fat.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:02:17
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Wearing cartoon pajamas, the girl about 18-year-old stretched out, revealing her waist with no hint of fat.
Corrected text:
Wearing cartoon illustrated pajamas, the girl about 18-year-old stretched out, revealing her waist with no hint of fat.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:02:23
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Removing the glasses, the girl lay next to the keyboard. Her messy long brown hair covered her snow-white cheeks.
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Removing her glasses, the girl lay next to the keyboard. Her messy long brown hair covered her snow-white cheeks.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:36:01
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Half a long time, her cherry-colored curled lips finally opened.
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After a long time, her cherry-colored curled lips finally opened.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:11:25
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On the screen, there appeared the teenager who was about to scamper out of the carriage and ended up being electrocuted and sprawled in the carriage.
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On the screen, there appeared the teenager who was about to scamper out of the carriage, but ended up being electrocuted and sprawled in the carriage.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 05:46:09
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Lin Wuyue lazily stretched out her fingers and intertwined a handful of long hair, moving elegantly and lovingly.
Corrected text:
Lin Wuyue lazily stretched out her fingers and intertwined a handful of her long hair, moving elegantly and lovingly.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:02:29
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Lin Wuyue lazily stretched out her fingers and curled a handful of long hair, moving elegantly and lovingly.
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Lin Wuyue lazily stretched out her fingers and intertwined a handful of long hair, moving elegantly and lovingly.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 05:46:30
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"So that it can be a profound lesson… to that not-well-behaved, not at all frank, and poisonous tongued brother."
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"So that it can be a profound lesson… to that not-well-behaved, not at all frank, and poison-tongue brother."
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 05:46:50
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"Look at the little brothers from other families, they play with their big sisters every day, do anything their big sister told them to do, just adorable!"
Corrected text:
"Look at the little brothers from other families, they play with their big sisters every day, do anything their big sister tells them to do, just adorable!"
Corrected by: Unknown-Man , 2023-02-27 06:21:20
Original text:
"Look at the other family's brother, he pesters his sisters every day, listening to his sister on everything, how adorable!"
Corrected text:
"Look at the little brothers from other families, they play with their big sisters every day, do anything their big sister told them to do, just adorable!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:43
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"Look at the other family's brother, he pesters his sisters every day, listening to his sister on everything, how cute!"
Corrected text:
"Look at the other family's brother, he pesters his sisters every day, listening to his sister on everything, how adorable!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 08:09:01
Original text:
"Look at the other family's brother, he pesters to his sisters every day, listening to his sister on everything, how cute!"
Corrected text:
"Look at the other family's brother, he pesters his sisters every day, listening to his sister on everything, how cute!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:13:53
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"What about my brother! He's been lecturing me every chance he gets since I was little! He treats me like I'm three years old! Do he want his sister to lose face?"
Corrected text:
"What about my brother! He's been lecturing me every chance he gets since I was little! He treats me like I'm three years old! Does he want his sister to lose face?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:11:36
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"Other sisters' younger brothers will share their most valuable things with their sisters and let their sisters feed them!"
Corrected text:
"Other sisters' younger brothers will share their most valuable possessions with their sisters and let their sisters feed them!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:01:10
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"What about the one in our family? Even if he didn't want to feed me, he didn't need to put food on the table like treating wild cats and dogs, right? And when he was angry, he would deliberately give me a plate of carrots! You know I hate carrots!"
Corrected text:
"What about the one in our family? Even if he didn't want to feed me, he didn't need to serve food on the table like feeding wild cats and dogs, right? When he was angry, he would deliberately give me a plate of carrots! You know I hate carrots!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:01:21
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"The one in our family, oh, he would blow up as soon as I use his cup. The last time I sneaked into his bed, he actually kicked me to the floor!"
Corrected text:
"Where as the one in our family, oh, he would throw a tantrum as soon as I used his cup. Not to mention, the last time I sneaked into his bed, he actually kicked me out to the floor!"
Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-04 19:58:50
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"The one in our family, oh, he would blow up as long as I use his cup. The last time I sneaked into his bed, he actually kicked me to the floor!"
Corrected text:
"The one in our family, oh, he would blow up as soon as I use his cup. The last time I sneaked into his bed, he actually kicked me to the floor!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-22 14:28:23
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"The one in our family, oh, he would blow up as long as I use his cup. The last time I sneaked into his next, he actually kicked me to the floor!"
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"The one in our family, oh, he would blow up as long as I use his cup. The last time I sneaked into his bed, he actually kicked me to the floor!"
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Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 14:17:32
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"Who's brother has such a bad attitude towards his sister?"
Corrected text:
"What kind of brother has such a bad attitude towards his sister?"
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Corrected by: FlyingPirateCat-X , 2022-05-17 08:42:10
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"The worst thing is that he always threatens me with my r18 manga collections, not allowing me to enter his room!"
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"The worst thing is that he always threatens me with my R-18 manga collection, and he won't let me enter his room!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:02:42
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"Does he really think his sister, an Evil God, only knows to write novels and play games every day?
Corrected text:
"Does he really think his sister, an Evil God; only knows how to write novels, and play games every day?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:14:04
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"I worked hard to write that masterpiece! It's ok if he did not praise me, but he actually dared say that he preferred the villain to the protagonist! What a bullshit!"
Corrected text:
"I worked hard to write that masterpiece! It's ok if he did not praise me, but he actually dared say that he preferred the villain to the protagonist! What bullshit!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 15:42:02
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"I only reluctantly forgave him when he was bullied enough and came back, swearing allegiance to his best, prettiest, and cutest sister-sama!"
Corrected text:
"I’ll only reluctantly forgive him when he has been bullied enough and comes back, swearing allegiance to his best, prettiest, and cutest sister-sama!"
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Corrected by: Sangam-Shrestha , 2022-06-19 13:05:17
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How do I feel that there is something wrong with the two girls?
Corrected text:
Why do I feel that there is something wrong with those two girls?
Corrected by: Sangam-Shrestha , 2022-06-19 13:05:14
Original text:
How do I feel that there is something wrong with the two girls?
Corrected text:
Why do I feel that there is something wrong with those two girls?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-05 09:51:43
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Then she looked at the kuudere girl who was sitting on top of Lin, she was instantly grew pissed.
Corrected text:
Then she looked at the kuudere girl who was sitting on top of Lin, she was instantly pissed off.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:37:54
Original text:
Then she looked at the kuudere girl who was riding on top of Lin, she was instantly pissed off.
Corrected text:
Then she looked at the kuudere girl who was sitting on top of Lin, she was instantly grew pissed.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 21:38:03
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Then she looked at the kuudere girl who was ridding on Lin, she was instantly pissed off.
Corrected text:
Then she looked at the kuudere girl who was riding on top of Lin, she was instantly pissed off.
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Corrected by: Abhinav-Balasubramaniyan , 2022-06-05 09:51:22
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"This bitch! I'm going to destroy the world!"
Corrected text:
"This bitch! I'm going to destroy that world!"
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 21:38:13
Original text:
"Master, master, please be calm! Master, you can't violate the rules and meddle in this world again!"
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"Master, master, please keep your calm! Master, you can't violate the rules and meddle in this world's affairs again!"
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Corrected by: Abhinav-Balasubramaniyan , 2022-11-19 01:44:25
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It was the eighteenth minute of her brother's absence, but she already missed him. (In the original text, it is "minute" but not "hour". The speed of time in the two worlds is different.)
Corrected text:
For her, it was the eighteenth minute of her brother's absence, but she already missed him. (In the original text, it is "minute" but not "hour". The speed of time in the two worlds is different.)(1 hour of MC time = 1 minute for MC's sister, straightforward ratio)
Corrected by: FlyingPirateCat-X , 2022-05-17 08:42:29
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It was the eighteenth minute of her brother's absence, she missed him. (In the original text, it is "minute" but not "hour". The speed of time in the two worlds is different.)
Corrected text:
It was the eighteenth minute of her brother's absence, but she already missed him. (In the original text, it is "minute" but not "hour". The speed of time in the two worlds is different.)
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 08:39:07
Original text:
It was the eighteenth minute of her brother's absence, she missed him.
Corrected text:
It was the eighteenth hour of her brother's absence, she missed him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:33:07
Original text:
It was the eighteenth minute of her brother's absence, missing him.
Corrected text:
It was the eighteenth hour of her brother's absence, she missed him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-22 14:28:33
Original text:
It was the eighteen minutes of her brother's absence, missing him.
Corrected text:
It was the eighteenth minute of her brother's absence, missing him.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 05:48:05
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