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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
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"The waiter brought the wine by mistake. Little Rin must be drunk."
Corrected text:
"The waiter brought wine by mistake. Little Rin must be drunk."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
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Yuki and Emilia naturally could see that. They just didn't expect Rin to be like this when he was drunk. They could only hold him from left and right, and they were a little overwhelmed.
Corrected text:
Yuki and Emilia naturally could see that. They just didn't expect Rin to be like this when drunk. They could only hold him from left and right, and they were a little overwhelmed.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
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However, before she implemented it, she saw Emilia release her hand and take the opportunity to stand in front of Rin.
Corrected text:
However, before she could implement it, she saw Emilia release her hand and take the opportunity to stand in front of Rin.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
Original text:
Miss Hero looked expressionless, opened her hand, and her tone remained unchanged, "Come on, it doesn't matter. Come to me."
Corrected text:
Miss Hero, looking expressionless, opened her hand and, with her usual flat tone, "Come on, it doesn't matter. Come to me."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
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Elise stamped her feet in a hurry. She didn't care so much and hugged Rin directly from behind.
Corrected text:
Elise stamped her feet in a hurry. She didn't care as much and hugged Rin directly from behind.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
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"Emilia is so cunning! What should be concerned about now is what to do to help Little Rin wake up!"
Corrected text:
"Emilia is so cunning! What we should be concerned about right now is how we can help Little Rin wake up!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
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Yuki didn't think too much. She thought about it and directly picked up her brother.
Corrected text:
Yuki didn't dwell on it too much. She thought about it and directly picked up her brother.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
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"Go back to the hotel first."
Corrected text:
"Let's go back to the hotel first."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
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Elise and Emilia showed disappointed expressions together.
Corrected text:
Both Elise and Emilia showed disappointed expressions.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
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After taking Rin back to the room and putting him on the bed, the three waited around and saw Rin lying on the bed motionless and his eyes closed, as if he fell into a deep sleep.
Corrected text:
After taking Rin back to the room and putting him on the bed, the three waited around and saw Rin lying on the bed motionless and his eyes closed, as if he had fallen into a deep sleep.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
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Yuki looked at them seriously. Even in the face of the princess and the hero, her tone was still tough, "My brother needs a rest. Your highness and Miss Hero, please don't disturb."
Corrected text:
Yuki looked at them seriously. Even if they were the princess and the hero, her tone was still tough, "My brother needs rest. Your highness and Miss Hero, please don't disturb him."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-22 08:47:06
Original text:
What she was worried about was that Rin has finally fallen asleep, but what if he accidentally woke up and began to toss again? What if he hit himself?
Corrected text:
What she was worried about was that, after finally falling asleep, what if Rin accidentally woke up and began to toss again? What if he hit himself?
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:13
Original text:
What she worried about was that Rin finally fell asleep. What if he accidentally woke up and began to toss again? What if he hit himself?
Corrected text:
What she was worried about was that Rin has finally fallen asleep, but what if he accidentally woke up and began to toss again? What if he hit himself?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:13
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The silly elk and waste Hero looked at Rin together and then left reluctantly.
Corrected text:
The silly elk and waste Hero both looked at Rin and then left reluctantly.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-01 09:47:59
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Well, Yuki's words were particularly relevent to them.
Corrected text:
Well, Yuki's words were particularly relevant to them.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:13
Original text:
Well, Yuki's words were particularly useful to them.
Corrected text:
Well, Yuki's words were particularly relevent to them.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:15
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After seeing them off, Yuki stood in front of Rin's window and looked at the outside for a while. Then her face became red. Her trembling hand stretched out and pinched Rin's face. After shrinking back quickly, she couldn't help pinching it again.
Corrected text:
After seeing them off, Yuki stood in front of Rin's window and looked outside for a while. Then her face became red. Her trembling hand stretched out and pinched Rin's face. After shrinking back quickly, she couldn't help pinching it again.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:13
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Although Yuki was not very good at taking care of other, she'd heard that drunk people would be very uncomfortable. They would be more comfortable if someone could wipe them with a wet towel.
Corrected text:
Although Yuki was not very good at taking care of others, she'd heard that drunk people would be very uncomfortable. They would be more comfortable if someone could wipe them with a wet towel.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:15
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She wanted to untie Rin's button, but hesitated for a long time and still didn't do it. She was worried that her brother would be unhappy if she made any unusual behavior.
Corrected text:
She wanted to untie Rin's button, but hesitated for a long time and still didn't do it. She was worried that her brother would be unhappy if she did anything unusual.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:15
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After keeping silent for half an hour, she felt that Rin should have fallen asleep. Although Yuki wanted to stay all the time, for fear of disturbing him, she went back to her room to have a rest.
Corrected text:
After keeping silent for half an hour, she felt that Rin should have fallen asleep. Although Yuki wanted to keep staying here, for fear of disturbing him, she went back to her room to rest.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:15
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After keeping silent for half an hour, she felt that Rin should have fallen asleep. Although Yuki wanted to stay all the time, for fear of disturbing him, she went back to her room to have a rest.
Corrected text:
After keeping silent for half an hour, she felt that Rin should have fallen asleep. Although Yuki wanted to keep staying here, for fear of disturbing him, she went back to her room to rest.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:14
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Yuki stayed for two seconds, reacted and returned to her room. Seeing that Rin was going to hit the wall again, she stretched out her hand and hugged him in a hurry.
Corrected text:
Yuki stayed still for two seconds, reacted and returned to her room. Seeing that Rin was going to hit the wall again, she stretched out her hand and hugged him in a hurry.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:20
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Strange to say, Rin, who was hugged, was obediently motionless immediately.
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Strangely, Rin, after being hugged, immediately became obediently motionless.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:20
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Ling Wuyue's tone was even more unwilling, "In the second stage, well, I didn't know. I just saw my brother as good as a deer. My parents took him back to the room and didn't let me in. I knew that when my parents came out of the room, they laughed very silly and then I cherished him more."
Corrected text:
Ling Wuyue's tone was even more unwilling, "In the second stage, well, I don't know. I just saw my brother being as gentle as a deer. My parents took him back to his room and didn't let me in. All I know is that, when my parents came out of the room, they were laughing in a very silly manner and then they cherished him more."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:21
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After that, she retook a deep drink.
Corrected text:
After that, she retook a big mouthful.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:21
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On Yuki's side, she found that Rin became quiet, so she blushed and touched his head.
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On Yuki's side, she found that Rin had become quiet, so she blushed and touched his head.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-22 08:47:08
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Rin skillfully rubbed Yuki and showed the same expression as the silly elk Elise, which melted Yuki's heart race instantly.
Corrected text:
Rin skillfully rubbed Yuki and showed the same expression as the silly elk Elise, which melted Yuki's heart instantly.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-11 21:52:25
Original text:
Rin skillfully rubbed Yuki and showed the same expression as the silly elk Elise, which melted Yuki's heart instantly.
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Rin skillfully rubbed Yuki and showed the same expression as the silly elk Elise, which melted Yuki's heart race instantly.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:21
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Yuki looked down and saw that Rin's eyes had recovered color, but he was still very shy.
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Yuki looked down and saw that Rin's eyes had recovered their color, but he was still very red.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:24
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Rin looked at Yuki with a silly look and rubbed her again.
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Rin looked at Yuki with a silly look and rubbed against her again.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:21
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And Rin, who was obviously shy, still didn't hesitate to continue talking.
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And Rin, who was obviously flushed, still didn't hesitate to continue talking.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:23
Original text:
"Why do I hate you?" Rin asked back and then said, "Well, actually, I have something I particularly want to say to you."
Corrected text:
"Why would I hate you?" Rin asked back and then said, "Well, actually, I have something I particularly want to say to you."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:24
Original text:
"You treat duties meticulously, protect the weak without asking for return, be tough and courageous, and never show weakness even if you bear the great pain."
Corrected text:
"You treat your duties meticulously, protect the weak without asking for anything in return, you are tough and courageous, and never show weaknesses even if you're bearing great pain."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:25
Original text:
"You gave me so many studies, in fact, it was just your way of clumsily caring about me."
Corrected text:
"You gave me so many thing to study, in fact, it was just your way of clumsily caring about me."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:21
Original text:
"And you take care of me secretly like a real sister. In fact, I saw you help me scold and teach those guys who scold me behind my back and do bad things in my name…"
Corrected text:
"And you take care of me secretly like a real sister. In fact, I saw you help me scold and teach a lesson to those guys who insult me behind my back and do bad things in my name…"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-22 08:07:45
Original text:
"I also heard the TA says that you insisted on assigning Elise and Emilia to my team under the pressure of the senior management in order to protect me."
Corrected text:
"I also heard the TA say that you insisted on assigning Elise and Emilia to my team under the pressure of the senior management in order to protect me."
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:24
Original text:
"I also heard the TA says that you insisted on assigning Elise and Emilia to my team under the pressure of senior management in order to protect me."
Corrected text:
"I also heard the TA says that you insisted on assigning Elise and Emilia to my team under the pressure of the senior management in order to protect me."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:22
Original text:
"I found that Yuki is no longer a role in my past impression and can be described by the so-called words."
Corrected text:
"I found that Yuki is no longer the character I thought she was based on her description."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:22
Original text:
"So I often think, if Yuki is really my sister, it would be too great."
Corrected text:
"So I often think, if Yuki was really my sister, it would be absolutely wonderful."
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