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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-05 09:52:12
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As a man without friends, Rin had not eaten hot pot for a long time since his mother and father went abroad. After all, his sister is an indoors woman and never wants to go out of the door.
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As a man without friends, Rin had not eaten hot pot for a long time since his mother and father went abroad. After all, his sister is an indoors woman and never wants to go out.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-30 21:12:56
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Hot pot… If you eat alone, won't you feel a little too down?
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Hot pot… If you eat it alone, won't you feel depressed?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:43
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While hesitating, Rin suddenly stood up, took a piece and put it into her bowl, then sat down and pretended to be calm, "Poor swordmaster, since we have dinner together, we should eat well. Don't stay there in a daze. It's so stupid."
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While hesitating, Rin suddenly stood up, took a piece and put it into her bowl, then sat down and pretended to be calm, "Poor swordmaster, since we're having dinner together, you should eat well. Don't stay there in a daze. It's so stupid."
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Corrected by: Karma-Kinsmen , 2022-05-28 18:17:42
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Elise and Emilia issued modal particles, which made Rin wonder whether they were surprised or envious.
Corrected text:
Elise and Emilia exclaimed, which made Rin wonder whether they were surprised or envious.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-30 21:12:56
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Rin's face turned a little red, probably because of the hot pot. He glared at them, "Don't make an inexplicable sound! It was just… the host's etiquette!"
Corrected text:
Rin's face turned a little red, probably because of the hot pot. He glared at them, "Don't make a sound! It was just… the host's etiquette!"
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:43
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Rin's face turned a little red, probably because of the hot pot. He glared at them, "Don't make an inexplicable sound! I was just… in the host's etiquette!"
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Rin's face turned a little red, probably because of the hot pot. He glared at them, "Don't make an inexplicable sound! It was just… the host's etiquette!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:45
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Yuki looked at him a little distracted, pursed her lips, still didn't say anything. But the action of picking up the beef was as careful as it was a treasure.
Corrected text:
Yuki looked at him a little dazzed, pursed her lips, still not saying anything. But the way she picked up the beef was as careful as if it were a treasure.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:45
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Obviously, for others, it is only a very ordinary and insignificant thing, but in her eyes, it is an unreachable treatment for real family members.
Corrected text:
Obviously, for others, it is only a very ordinary and insignificant thing, but in her eyes, it is an unreachable treatment reserved for real family members.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:45
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It seemed that Elise didn't want to embarrass Rin, she took the initiative to assume an active atmosphere. Yuki and Emilia were not good at talk, but they still worked hard to cooperate with Elise.
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It seemed that Elise didn't want to embarrass Rin, she took the initiative to liven up the atmosphere. Yuki and Emilia were not good at talking, but they still worked hard to cooperate with Elise.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:45
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Rin was really worried. He had to face the things he deliberately didn't think about when he started to accept and face up to friendship.
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Rin was really worried. He had to face the things he deliberately avoided thinking about when he started to accept and face this friendship.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:45
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At this time, she found an excuse, left the box, and leaned against the wall in the corridor. Her arms and legs were shaking, her face was full of irritability and impatience, and her previous lively and naive look disappeared nowhere.
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At this time, she found an excuse, left the box, and leaned against the wall in the corridor. Her arms and legs were shaking, her face was full of irritability and impatience, and her previous lively and naive look was nowhere to be seen.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:45
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According to the intelligence network, a secret association near the town somehow obtained an extremely rare Magical Core of ancient civilization and developed it. They urgently need this core to make an artificial body to revive someone.
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According to the intelligence network, a secret association near the town had somehow obtained an extremely rare Magical Core of an ancient civilization and developed it. They urgently need this core to make an artificial body to revive someone.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:45
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The Scarlet Leaf's most anxious thing now was to find that demon.
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The Scarlet Leaf's most stressful mission now was to find that demon.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-22 08:45:45
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In her team, Rayne helps those civilians every day, which leave her no opportunity to leave.
Corrected text:
In her team, Rayne helps those civilians every day, which leaves her no opportunity to leave.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:45
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Rayne in the team helped those civilians every day, which made her have no chance to leave.
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In her team, Rayne helps those civilians every day, which leave her no opportunity to leave.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:19
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If it weren't for her other task, she needed to get close to Wick, the greatest alchemist of the century, from Rayne, she would have given up!
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If it weren't for her other task, which was to get close to Wick, the greatest alchemist of the century, through Rayne, she would have given up!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:20
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Sha Ye immediately looked at the waiter very ferocious. Well, different types of ferocity from Rin.
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Sha Ye immediately looked at the waiter very ferociously. Well, it was a different type of ferocity than Rin's.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:19
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"What are you looking at? Haven't you seen a woman, scum?"
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"What are you looking at? Have you never seen a woman, scum?"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:19
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Sha Ye looked left and right. She was about to take a few drunks when she suddenly saw Christo trotting here. He blushed in panic and was looking for the bathroom.
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Sha Ye looked left and right. She was about to take a few mouthfuls when she suddenly saw Christo trotting in her direction. He had a red face, looking for the bathroom in a panic.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-22 08:45:47
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Sha Ye didn't want anyone to find that she, a good girl, was actually drinking. She looked around and saw another waiter passing by. She quickly switched a bottle of beverage on the cart with the wine in her hand.
Corrected text:
Sha Ye didn't want anyone to find out that she, a good girl, was actually drinking. She looked around and saw another waiter passing by. She quickly switched a bottle of beverage on the cart with the wine in her hand.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:20
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Sha Ye didn't want to be found that she, a good girl, was actually drinking. She looked around and saw another waiter passing by. She quickly replaced the bottle of beverage on the cart with the wine in her hand.
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Sha Ye didn't want anyone to find that she, a good girl, was actually drinking. She looked around and saw another waiter passing by. She quickly switched a bottle of beverage on the cart with the wine in her hand.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:20
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The waiter was just an ordinary person, unaware of her movements, came to a private room, knocked on the door, and pushed the cart in.
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The waiter was just an ordinary person, unaware of her movements, he went to a private room, knocked on the door, and pushed the cart in.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:20
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Rin looked at the drink he ordered, picked it up, and opened the lid. The smell from the mouth of the bottle made him realize that something was wrong.
Corrected text:
Rin looked at the drink he ordered, picked it up, and opened the lid. The smell coming from the mouth of the bottle made him realize that something was wrong.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:19
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After looking at the label on the drink bottle, he found that it was tequila. He looked around guilty and poured the wine into the glass.
Corrected text:
After looking at the label on the bottle, he found that it was tequila. He looked around guiltily and poured the wine into his glass.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:19
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He remembered someone saying that if you were worried, drinking could solve all of your worries.
Corrected text:
He remembered someone saying that when you are worried, drinking could solve all your worries.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:21
Original text:
Ling Wuyue also mentioned that drinking could help her spread her thinking.
Corrected text:
Ling Wuyue also mentioned that drinking could help her think more freely.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:24
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Now… he thought that he needed to press his worry with wine. By the way, think of a good way to solve the current situation.
Corrected text:
Now… he thought that he needed to supress his worries with wine. And, in the process, think of a good way to solve the current situation.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:24
Original text:
Rin tried to take a drink. Although it was strong, it was acceptable, so he learned the adult's appearance he had seen, pouring all the liquor into his mouth.
Corrected text:
Rin tried to take a drink. Although it was strong, it was acceptable, so he imitated the adults he had observed, pouring all the liquor into his mouth in one go.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
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The three girls smelt and immediately caught the smell of wine hidden in the smell of hot pot.
Corrected text:
The three girls sniffed and immediately caught the smell of wine hidden amongst the flagrance of hot pot.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:08:25
Original text:
"Hey… speaking of it, my brother has drunk before and is super cute. Let me think, the first stage after drinking… the second stage…"
Corrected text:
"Hey… by the way, my brother has drunk before and was super cute. Let me think, the first stage after drinking… the second stage…"
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