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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:22
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Mixed with sadness and joy, Yuki couldn't tell what she really felt after hearing Rin's words.
Corrected text:
Feeling both sadness and joy, Yuki couldn't tell what she really felt after hearing Rin's words.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:09:22
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There was one sentence that she can't understand, but it didn't prevent her from understanding that Rin had an unexpected understanding of her.
Corrected text:
There was one sentence that she couldn't understand, but it didn't prevent her from understanding that Rin had an unexpected understanding of her.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:09
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For a moment, she suddenly asked, "So, do you know everything?"
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At this moment, she suddenly asked, "So, do you know everything?"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-22 08:47:11
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When she was forced to take the medicine, she felt pain, cried and wailed, but no one ever would helped her. They just coldly observed her as an experimental object.
Corrected text:
When she was forced to take the medicine, she felt pain, cried and wailed, but no one ever helped her. They just coldly observed her as an experimental object.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:09
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When she was forced to take the medicine, she felt pain, crying and wailing, but no one would help her at all. They just coldly observed her as an experimental object.
Corrected text:
When she was forced to take the medicine, she felt pain, cried and wailed, but no one ever would helped her. They just coldly observed her as an experimental object.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:09
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Gradually, she knew that begging for mercy and crying were useless,
Corrected text:
Gradually, she understood that begging for mercy and crying were useless.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:10
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Because of the medicine, her whole body began to seep blood, the bones were tingling, and she endured great pain. Even so, she would grind her teeth and train desperately the next day, fighting with those magical beasts.
Corrected text:
Because of the medicine, her whole body began to seep blood, her bones were tingling, and she endured great pain. Even so, she would grind her teeth and train desperately the next day, fighting with those magical beasts.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:09
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She always remembered that those people told her that having bloodline power and the "swordmaster" class was the best gift of God and the proof of survival.
Corrected text:
She always kept in mind that those people told her that having bloodline power and the "swordmaster" class was the best gift from God and the proof of her survival abilities.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:09
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Excellent performance will be the only way for her to prove her value. Otherwise, she will be discarded and turned into a beast.
Corrected text:
Excellent performance was the only way for her to prove her value. Otherwise, she would be discarded and turned into a beast.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:09
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She still remembered her several rebellions only bring her the outbreak of curse on her body, losing all her rationality and only knowing to kill with a knife.
Corrected text:
She still remembered that her several rebellions only brought about an outbreak of the curse within her body, making her lose all rationality and only able to kill with a knife.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:10
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She couldn't resist. The curse would hurt countless innocent people and turn herself into a terrible monster. Moreover, if she obeyed, at least the family would not assign her excessive tasks because of fear.
Corrected text:
She couldn't resist. The curse would hurt countless innocent people and turn her into a terrible monster. Moreover, if she obeyed, at least the family would not assign her excessive tasks out of fear.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-22 08:47:14
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At the same time, she also regards saving others as a trivial salvation.
Corrected text:
At the same time, she also regards saving others as a small salvation.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:10
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When you understand her background and come into contact with her, the strong contrast will really make you have sympathy and compassion.
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When you understand her background and come into contact with her, the strong contrast will really make you have sympathy and compassion for her.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:10
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In the beginning, Rin, who was not familiar with her, only showed little goodwill to her, and she would have a willingness to approach him, and was satisfied with his little goodwill revealed.
Corrected text:
In the beginning, Rin, who was not familiar with her, only showed little goodwill to her, and she would willingly approach him, and was satisfied with the little goodwill he showed her.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:13
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She wants family affection too much, and Rin is her brother, which is her best choice.
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She wants family affection too much, and Rin is her brother, so he is her best choice.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:16
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"But you can't ask my way, because I can't say. In short, just wait and see! I can save you!"
Corrected text:
"But you can't ask about my way, because I can't say it. In short, just wait and see! I can save you!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:13
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Yuki immediately felt that her chest had been knocked several times. Shee grabbed Rin's clothes and bit her lips, trying not to show weakness or wet her eyes.
Corrected text:
Yuki immediately felt that her chest had been knocked several times. She grabbed Rin's clothes and bit her lips, trying not to show any weaknesses or wet her eyes.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-05 09:52:16
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"But… Why? I'm just a dirty sword, and we… don't really have a deep bound as siblings."
Corrected text:
"But… Why? I'm just a dirty sword, and we… don't really have a deep bond as siblings."
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:16
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"But… Why? I'm just a dirty sword, and we… don't really have deep feelings between siblings."
Corrected text:
"But… Why? I'm just a dirty sword, and we… don't really have a deep bound as siblings."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:16
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Yes, no matter how she felt now, but in fact, they had only been together for less than a month, how could they have deep feelings?
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Yes, no matter how she felt now, in fact, they had only been together for less than a month, how could they have deep feelings for each other?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:16
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"Probably, it's just because I don't want you, who should be noble, to fall into hell, lose yourself, and degenerate. Well, that's it. In fact, I didn't think too much."
Corrected text:
"Probably, it's just because I don't want you, who should be noble, to fall into hell, lose yourself, and degenerate. Well, that's it. In fact, I didn't think too much about it."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:16
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But it was this sentence that made Yuki's heart move for a long time. The strong feeling could no longer be restrained. It surged and flourished, ran directly through her heart, and built a new harbor for her.
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But it was this sentence that made Yuki's heart move the most. The strong feeling could no longer be restrained. It surged and flourished, ran directly through her heart, and built a new harbor for her.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:16
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She took a deep breath, pressed Rin's shoulder, and said solemnly, "While redeeming, please let me become a sword in your hand and cut through thorns and overcome difficulties with you together."
Corrected text:
She took a deep breath, pressed on Rin's shoulder, and said solemnly, "While redeeming myself, please let me become a sword in your hand and cut through thorns and overcome difficulties together with you."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:16
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However, before he finished, he suddenly felt a wave of uncontrollable dizziness sweeping over, and he fell back on his back.
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However, before he finished, he suddenly felt a wave of uncontrollable dizziness sweeping over him, and he fell back on his back.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-30 21:12:56
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When Rin got up the next day, as usual, for a while he was confused because of his hypoglycemia, and then barely woke up.
Corrected text:
When Rin got up the next day, as usual, for a while he was confused because of his low blood sugar, and then barely woke up.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:16
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When Rin got up the next day, he was confused with hypoglycemia as usual for a while, and then barely woke up.
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When Rin got up the next day, as usual, for a while he was confused because of his hypoglycemia, and then barely woke up.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:16
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He hammered the forehead and felt like a thimble in his head. It was still tingling.
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He hammered his forehead and felt like there was a thimble in his head. It was still tingling.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-22 08:47:16
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Rin grabbed his hair, looked around first, saw that he was in his room, reluctantly felt relieved, and then tried to recall what happened last night.
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Rin grabbed his hair, looked around first, saw that he was in a room, felt more or less relieved, and then tried to recall what happened last night.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:16
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Rin grabbed his hair, first looked around, saw that he was in his room, reluctantly relieved, and then tried to recall what happened last night.
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Rin grabbed his hair, looked around first, saw that he was in his room, reluctantly felt relieved, and then tried to recall what happened last night.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:15
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First of all, they ate hot pot together. After that, the waiter mistakenly brought the wine. He took a sip and then… then he didn't remember anything…
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First of all, they ate hot pot together. After that, the waiter mistakenly brought wine. He took a sip and then… then he didn't remember anything…
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:16
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The same was when he was drunk at home last time. He took his parents and pouted prettily at them for a long time. Just because this memory was too shameful, he was unwilling to recall it and deliberately forgot it.
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It was the same when he got drunk at home last time. He took his parents and pouted prettily at them for a long time. Just because this memory was too shameful, he was unwilling to recall it and deliberately forgot it.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:10:15
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Then because he was worried about how to deal with the contradiction between task and friendship, he unsealed that unforgettable memory for the moment.
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Then, because he was worried about how to deal with the contradiction between his task and his friendships, he unsealed that unforgettable memory for a moment.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:14:54
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He hammered his head several times and rolled 360 ° on the bed several times. He couldn't persuade himself at all.
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He hammered his head a few times and rolled 360 ° on the bed several times. He couldn't persuade himself at all.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:14:54
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"Ah! How to do, how to do… I seem to have said something I shouldn't have said."
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"Ah! What to do, what to do… I seem to have said something I shouldn't have said."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:14:54
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So far, the system had punished him twice… To be precise, there might be only one time, that was the initial warning.
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So far, the system had punished him twice… To be precise, there might have been only one time, that was the initial warning.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:14:54
Original text:
Seriously, Rin had now regarded Elise, Emilia, and Yuki as his best friends. It's impossible for him to hurt them for the villain's mission.
Corrected text:
Seriously, Rin was now regarding Elise, Emilia, and Yuki as his best friends. It's impossible for him to hurt them for the villain's mission.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-22 08:47:20
Original text:
Therefore, I can't avoid it anymore and pray that the plot will develop in a different direction itself.
Corrected text:
Therefore, I can't avoid it anymore and pray that the plot will develop in a different direction by itself.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 18:14:54
Original text:
But, my waste sister, Ling Wuyue, what did she think?
Corrected text:
But, my waste sister, Ling Wuyue, what is she thinking?
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