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Edited by: anonymous, TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia, mondruppen, Karma-Kinsmen, hao-farah, Henry, Reader-1, Koppany-Budai, Ian-Villareal, Lea-Lin, shaheer20062006@gmail.com, Janricz-Corona, bryan., Jorge-Luis-Alvarado
Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 05:30:58
Original text:
Chapter 4: Midnight, the Hero visits to the Window.
Corrected text:
Chapter 4: At midnight, the Hero visits the window.
Corrected by: Janricz-Corona , 2022-12-27 21:15:11
Original text:
Chapter 4: Midnight, the Hero Comes to the Window
Corrected text:
Chapter 4: Midnight, the Hero visits to the Window.
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Corrected by: Janricz-Corona , 2022-12-27 21:15:16
Original text:
Elise took small bites of the cake while staring at Rin's face from the side.
Corrected text:
Elise took small bites of the cake while stealing a few glances at Rin's face from the side.
Corrected by: Janricz-Corona , 2022-12-27 21:15:13
Original text:
Elise took small bites of the cake while staring at Rin's face from the side.
Corrected text:
Elise took small bites of the cake while stealing a few glances at Rin's face from the side.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 21:36:55
Original text:
Elise took small bites of the cake while staring at Rin's side face.
Corrected text:
Elise took small bites of the cake while staring at Rin's face from the side.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-22 08:44:47
Original text:
Before she only had some fantasies about her childhood friend and fiancé, but now, she was really interested in him.
Corrected text:
Before she only had some fantasies about her childhood friend and fiancé, but now, she became interested in him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:34:54
Original text:
Before she only had some fantasies about her childhood friend and fiancé, and now, she was really interested in him.
Corrected text:
Before she only had some fantasies about her childhood friend and fiancé, but now, she was really interested in him.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:44:22
Original text:
Rin looked at her silly smile, the cream on her mouth, and the cake that was nibbled. The corners of his mouth twitched.
Corrected text:
Rin looked at her goofy smile, the cream on her mouth, and the cake that was nibbled. The corners of his mouth twitched.
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Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 14:16:58
Original text:
Give back the dignified and elegant looking Princess at first glance!
Corrected text:
Give back the dignified and elegant looking Princess!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-02-11 22:57:52
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Rin also did not care, he lied on the table and intending to sleep.
Corrected text:
Rin also did not care, he lied on the table intending to sleep.
Corrected by: shaheer20062006@gmail.com , 2022-09-06 16:28:28
Original text:
Rin also does not care, lying on the table and intending to sleep.
Corrected text:
Rin also did not care, he lied on the table and intending to sleep.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:35:07
Original text:
Rin also do not care, lying on the table and intend to sleep.
Corrected text:
Rin also do not care, lying on the table and intending to sleep.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 05:33:20
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Yes, no more acting, he doesn't need to perform anymore!
Corrected text:
Yes, no more acting, he doesn't need to perform today!
Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 14:17:11
Original text:
Yes, no more acting he needs to perform!
Corrected text:
Yes, no more acting, he doesn't need to perform anymore!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:08:48
Original text:
He didn't know how long he had slept, in a daze, someone was pushing him.
Corrected text:
He didn't know how long he had slept, in a daze someone was pushing him.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:15:39
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Bewildered, Rin opened his eyes and stretched his body, his head was still dizzy.
Corrected text:
Bewildered, Rin opened his eyes and stretched his body, still feeling groggy.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:44:06
Original text:
Dazed and confused, Rin opened his eyes, stretched, and his head was still dizzy.
Corrected text:
Bewildered, Rin opened his eyes and stretched his body, his head was still dizzy.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 05:33:45
Original text:
He had relatively severe hypoglycemia, which actually didn't change even after transmigrated into another world.
Corrected text:
He had relatively severe hypoglycemia, which actually didn't change even after transmigrating into another world.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:28:42
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"What Hero… don't be so naive, we don't live in a fantasy world."
Corrected text:
"What Hero… what are you talking about? This isn’t a fantasy world."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:08:51
Original text:
He vaguely murmured, and his mind gradually recovered.
Corrected text:
He vaguely murmured, until his mind gradually recovered.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 08:07:52
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Vaguely murmured, and his mind gradually recovered.
Corrected text:
He vaguely murmured, and his mind gradually recovered.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:08:55
Original text:
Class: Hero. Level: 11.
Corrected text:
Class: Hero; Level: 11.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:11:22
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Her talent and skills didn't appear, because only extremely rare props could detect them. This crystal ball was just a simple testing prop.
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Her talent and skills didn't appear, because only extremely rare items could detect them. This crystal ball was just a simple testing item.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 08:47:38
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With the "Hero" class, she can obtain more exps, her strength and agility are enhanced in all aspects, and she can learn any type of magic and martial arts that she wants to learn.
Corrected text:
With the "Hero" class, she can obtain more EXP, all of her stats are enhanced, and she can learn any type of magic and martial arts that she wants to learn.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 08:47:48
Original text:
"Hero sama!"
Corrected text:
"Hero-sama!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:43:45
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Soon, cheers broke the silence, and the entire room boiled with them.
Corrected text:
Soon, cheers broke the silence, and the entire room was invigorated.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:35:21
Original text:
Soon, cheers broke the silence, and the entire room boiled with it.
Corrected text:
Soon, cheers broke the silence, and the entire room boiled with them.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 08:07:59
Original text:
"I didn't expect that the Hero came to our academy too!"
Corrected text:
"I didn't expect that the Hero would come to our academy too!"
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Corrected by: bryan. , 2023-03-31 03:55:56
Original text:
"What? Haha! Our kingdom truely is very prestigious! Even the Hero has come to study here!"
Corrected text:
"What? Haha! Our kingdom truly is very prestigious! Even the Hero has come to study here!"
Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:28:51
Original text:
"What? Haha, our kingdom really is very prestigious! Even the Hero has come to study here!"
Corrected text:
"What? Haha!, our kingdom truely is very prestigious! Even the Hero has come to study here!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:09:08
Original text:
"What? Haha, our kingdom really is very dignified! Even the Hero has come to study here!"
Corrected text:
"What? Haha, our kingdom really is very prestigious! Even the Hero has come to study here!"
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 08:48:04
Original text:
"What? Haha, our kingdom really is very dignified! Even the Hero comes to study here!"
Corrected text:
"What? Haha, our kingdom really is very dignified! Even the Hero has come to study here!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:35:30
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"The news is really tightly covered. I never heard of any rumors before."
Corrected text:
"The news was really tightly covered. I never heard any rumors before this."
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:37:20
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Her somewhat dulled eyes fell on Rin's body.
Corrected text:
Her somewhat dull eyes fell on Rin.
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Corrected by: Janricz-Corona , 2022-12-27 21:15:20
Original text:
'Why is this kuudere girl looking at me?'
Corrected text:
'Why is the Hero looking at me?'
Corrected by: Janricz-Corona , 2022-12-27 21:15:18
Original text:
'Why is this kuudere girl looking at me?'
Corrected text:
'Why is the Hero looking at me?'
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-11 22:31:33
Original text:
'Why does this kuudere girl look at me?'
Corrected text:
'Why is this kuudere girl looking at me?'
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-04 19:58:25
Original text:
'Is she so begrudging?'
Corrected text:
'Is she holding a grudge?'
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 16:08:11
Original text:
'Is she so vindictive?'
Corrected text:
'Is she so begrudging?'
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:37:29
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Rin ringed his arms, hummed in a disdainful manner, and turned his head.
Corrected text:
Rin crossed his arms, hummed in a disdainful manner, then turned his head away.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 08:08:06
Original text:
"Students, Lady Emilia is a valued guest of the kingdom. Please don't make her in any trouble in the future."
Corrected text:
"Students, Lady Emilia is a valued guest of the kingdom. Please don't make any trouble for her in the future."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-06 08:25:15
Original text:
"Students, Lord Emilia is a valued guest of the kingdom. Please don't make her in any trouble in the future."
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"Students, Lady Emilia is a valued guest of the kingdom. Please don't make her in any trouble in the future."
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:37:44
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Emilia sat back in her seat and looked dumbfounded, no one knew what she was thinking.
Corrected text:
Emilia sat back in her seat and while looking stoic, no one knew what she was thinking.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-24 08:44:47
Original text:
Emilia sat back in her seat and sat dumbfounded, no one knew what she was thinking.
Corrected text:
Emilia sat back in her seat and looked dumbfounded, no one knew what she was thinking.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:28:54
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After that, it was Elise's turn, her class was the rare Holy Healer, which also drew warm applauses.
Corrected text:
After that, it was Elise's turn, her class was a rare Holy Healer, which also drew warm applauses.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:37:46
Original text:
After that, it was Elise's turn, her class was the rare Holy Healer, which also drew a warm welcome.
Corrected text:
After that, it was Elise's turn, her class was the rare Holy Healer, which also drew warm applauses.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 05:37:12
Original text:
In comparison, Rin was just a simple Fire Mage, nothing as remarkable.
Corrected text:
In comparison, Rin was just a simple Fire Mage, nothing remarkable.
Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:28:56
Original text:
In comparison, Rin was just a simple Fire Mage, nothing remarkable to others.
Corrected text:
In comparison, Rin was just a simple Fire Mage, nothing as remarkable.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-08 15:43:35
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It's just that his surname Fenix, and his family's "phoenix" talent were still very noble. No one dares to underestimate him.
Corrected text:
It's just that his surname Fenix, and his family's "phoenix" talent were still very noble. No one dared to underestimate him.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:28:59
Original text:
But there were more rejection and strange looks when people looked at him.
Corrected text:
But there were more rejection and strange looks than admiration when people looked at him.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:43:23
Original text:
But there were more rejections and strange looks when people looked at him.
Corrected text:
But there were more rejection and strange looks when people looked at him.
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Corrected by: shaheer20062006@gmail.com , 2022-09-06 16:28:32
Original text:
At least, not many people would applaud him or welcome him …
Corrected text:
At least, not many people had applauded or welcomed him …
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-08 15:43:32
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Well, except for that "silly pink hair" below, and a few flatterers who want to cling to the Grand Duke.
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Well, except for that "silly pink hair" below, and a few flatterers who wanted to cling to the Grand Duke.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 05:37:44
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Rin kept up his high and proud attitude, went down, and sat back in his seat.
Corrected text:
Rin kept up his high and mighty attitude, went down, and sat back in his seat.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 08:08:14
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Rin remained his high and proud attitude, went down, and sat back in his seat.
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Rin kept up his high and proud attitude, went down, and sat back in his seat.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-04 19:58:33
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He just often felt jealous of the people who were more excellent than him.
Corrected text:
He just felt jealous of the people who were better than him.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-06 16:27:43
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He always didn't put others in his eyes and often challenged the protagonist, but failed. So he gradually became an ignoramus in the eyes of others.
Corrected text:
He never put others in his eyes and often challenged the protagonist, but failed. So he gradually became an ignoramus in the eyes of others.
Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:02
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He always didn't put others into his eyes and often failed to challenge the protagonist, so he gradually became an ignoramus in other people's eyes.
Corrected text:
He always didn't put others in his eyes and often challenged the protagonist, but failed. So he gradually became an ignoramus in the eyes of others.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:05
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In any case, in order to maintain character, Rin should study hard.
Corrected text:
In any case, in order to stay in character, Rin should study hard.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:09:14
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In any case, in order to maintain the persona, Rin should also learn well.
Corrected text:
In any case, in order to maintain character, Rin should study hard.
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Corrected by: Koppany-Budai , 2022-07-04 09:30:08
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Returning to his dormitory, Rin strolled back and forth the room very satisfied.
Corrected text:
Returning to his dormitory, Rin strolled back and forth in his room very satisfied.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:09:23
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Returning to his dormitory, Rin strolled back and forth and was very satisfied.
Corrected text:
Returning to his dormitory, Rin strolled back and forth the room very satisfied.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-24 08:44:58
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After all, it is the top academy in the kingdom. The dormitory is simply a luxury foreign pavilion.
Corrected text:
After all, it is the top academy in the kingdom. The dormitory is simply a luxurious foreign pavilion.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:13
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Each dormitory, although they are smaller than a hotel’s luxury room, there were no other flaws.
Corrected text:
Though each dormitory is smaller than a luxury hotel room. It is still a very good room with no other problems.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:43:17
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Each dormitory, although they are smaller than a hotel luxury room, there were no other flaws.
Corrected text:
Each dormitory, although they are smaller than a hotel’s luxury room, there were no other flaws.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-21 21:01:35
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Each dormitory, in addition to being smaller than the hotel luxury room, there was no flaw at all.
Corrected text:
Each dormitory, although they are smaller than a hotel luxury room, there were no other flaws.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:09:28
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Opening a magic card introduction book, he took out a pen and carefully annotated it.
Corrected text:
Opening a magic card introduction book, he took out a pen and carefully added notes to it.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:35:41
Original text:
Opening a magic card introduction book, he took out a pen and carefully excerpted it.
Corrected text:
Opening a magic card introduction book, he took out a pen and carefully annotated it.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:09:36
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He has two major hobbies. The first is to read books, and the second is to practice writing, which helps calm his mind.
Corrected text:
He has two main hobbies. The first is to read books, and the second is to practice writing, which helps calm his mind.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:35:49
Original text:
He has two major hobbies. The first is to read books, and the second is to practice writing, which will make his mind calm.
Corrected text:
He has two major hobbies. The first is to read books, and the second is to practice writing, which helps calm his mind.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:09:50
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While writing, he can also review the previously learned knowledge in his memory.
Corrected text:
While writing, he can also review the previously learned knowledge in his mind.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:43:05
Original text:
While writing, he can also revise the previously learned knowledge in his memory.
Corrected text:
While writing, he can also review the previously learned knowledge in his memory.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-27 11:08:00
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Before he knew it, the sky was already completely dark.
Corrected text:
Before he knew it, the sky was completely dark.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 10:17:57
Original text:
Unknowingly, it was already completely dark.
Corrected text:
Before he knew it, the sky was already completely dark.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:10:01
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At this point, it was long past bedtime, but indulging in the sea of knowledge, Rin had lost the concept of time.
Corrected text:
At this point, it was long past bedtime, indulging in the sea of knowledge, Rin had lost the concept of time.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 16:05:34
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At this point, it was long past the time of sleep, but indulging in the sea of knowledge, Rin had forgotten the matter of time.
Corrected text:
At this point, it was long past bedtime, but indulging in the sea of knowledge, Rin had lost the concept of time.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:10:10
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"Deconstruct the third to the fourth types of magic styles, which can be found in the medium…"
Corrected text:
"Deconstruct the third to fourth types of magic styles, which can be found in the medium…"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:43:56
Original text:
"Deconstruct three to the fourth type of magic style, which can be found in the medium…"
Corrected text:
"Deconstruct the third to the fourth types of magic styles, which can be found in the medium…"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-31 15:22:20
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A wave of unknown anger suddenly rose to his heart. Forcing himself to ignore what was out of his room, he continued transcribing.
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A wave of unknown anger suddenly rose to his heart. Forcing himself to ignore what was going on outside of his room, he continued transcribing.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-22 08:45:00
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"Hero! Is there fluid in your brain? What are you doing in the middle of the night?!"
Corrected text:
"Hero! Does your brain not function properly? What are you doing in the middle of the night?!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:10:18
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"Hero! Is there water in your head? What are you doing in the middle of the night?!"
Corrected text:
"Hero! Is there fluid in your brain? What are you doing in the middle of the night?!"
Corrected by: Karma-Kinsmen , 2022-04-15 10:15:48
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"Hero! Are there waters in your head? What are you doing in the middle of the night?!"
Corrected text:
"Hero! Is there water in your head? What are you doing in the middle of the night?!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:42:47
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Rin pointed his finger to the hooked rope outside his window.
Corrected text:
Rin pointed his finger to the attached rope outside his window.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:10:28
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The attached rope, one end of which was tied on the rooftop fence above the edge of his own window, and the other end of was tied in one of the rooms of the girls' dormitory.
Corrected text:
The attached rope, one end was tied on the rooftop fence above the edge of his own window, and the other end was tied in one of the rooms of the girls' dormitory.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:42:55
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The hooked rope, one end of which was on the rooftop fence above the edge of his own window, and the other end of which was in one of the rooms of the girls' dormitory.
Corrected text:
The attached rope, one end of which was tied on the rooftop fence above the edge of his own window, and the other end of was tied in one of the rooms of the girls' dormitory.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:10:33
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And now, the kuudere girl, who had just climbed over from that rope, was now stepping on his own windowsill, preparing to climb up to the rooftop.
Corrected text:
Just now, the kuudere girl had just used the rope to jump over and was now stepping on his own window sill, preparing to climb onto the rooftop.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:42:37
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Emilia's eyes swept from Rin's fingers, down to the rope in her hand.
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Emilia's eyes moved from Rin's fingers, down to the rope in her hand.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:42:31
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"Because I can't jump that high in one breath."
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"Because I can't jump that high in one motion."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 08:08:26
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Rin was dumbfounded for a moment, and it took him several seconds to comprehend his thinking.
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Rin was dumbfounded for a moment, and it took him several seconds to comprehend her thinking.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:10:37
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Rin almost passed away in anger.
Corrected text:
Rin almost passed out in anger.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-08 15:43:39
Original text:
Has this woman's brain cells been dug out with a hoe?
Corrected text:
Had this woman's brain cells been dug out with a hoe?
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:10:42
Original text:
Has this woman's brain circuit been dug out with a hoe?
Corrected text:
Has this woman's brain cells been dug out with a hoe?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:11:26
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Has this woman's brain circuit been drained with a hoe?
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Has this woman's brain circuit been dug out with a hoe?
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:29:15
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Rin immediately was driven down by her, making the back of his head hit the ground forcefully.
Corrected text:
Rin was immediately pushed down by her, making the back of his head hit the ground.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:10:53
Original text:
Rin immediately dove down after her and the back of his head fiercely hit the ground.
Corrected text:
Rin immediately was driven down by her, making the back of his head hit the ground forcefully.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-13 14:13:45
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Rin was directly ridden down by her to the ground, and the back of his head heavily hit the ground.
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Rin was immediately dove down after her and the back of his head fiercely hit the ground.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:11:00
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Looking at Emilia, who was sitting on top of him, with no expression on her face.
Corrected text:
Looking at Emilia who was sitting on top of him, with no expression on her face.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 08:08:35
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Looking at Emilia, who was sitting on top of himself, with no expression on her face.
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Looking at Emilia, who was sitting on top of him, with no expression on her face.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:11:05
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'This damn heroine, forcing me to play an extra drama with her in the middle of the night?!'
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'This damn heroine, forcing me to play an extra act with her in the middle of the night?!'
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 05:39:35
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--END-- field separation characters:If you are reading on a pirate site, you will see this. Welcome to read our novels on xianxiaengine.com, where you can read more chapters in advance. 1,leIzlfzllqzt-
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