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Edited by: anonymous, krymion, crisiscore38, Henry, hao-farah
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-01 09:47:21
Original text:
Emilia rubbed and muttered, purring like a kitten.
Corrected text:
Emilia rubbed herself on him and muttered, purring like a kitten.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:57
Original text:
Emilia rubbed and muttered, grunting like a kitten.
Corrected text:
Emilia rubbed and muttered, purring like a kitten.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:56
Original text:
Rin's whole body froze. An indescribable warm, happy, soft, and shy mood was intertwined in his heart. For a moment, he didn't know whether to push her away.
Corrected text:
Rin's whole body froze. An indescribable happy, warm, shy, and mushy mood was intertwined in his heart. For a moment, he didn't know whether to push her away.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-30 21:12:51
Original text:
So close, so close, so close!
Corrected text:
Too close, too close, too close!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:57
Original text:
Damn, is this the so-called good friend?
Corrected text:
Damn, is this the so called "friends with benefits"?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:53
Original text:
Damn, he didn't have friends before. He didn't know! But it must not be right for men and women to do this!
Corrected text:
Damn, he didn't have friends before so he didn't know! However, it must not be right for friends to do this!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:44:36
Original text:
Damn, he didn't have friends before. He didn't know! But it must be not right for men and women to do this!
Corrected text:
Damn, he didn't have friends before. He didn't know! But it must not be right for men and women to do this!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:53
Original text:
Finally, Rin chose to follow his heart. He had a feeling in his heart that if he pushed the stupid Hero away at this time, he might regret it.
Corrected text:
Finally, Rin chose to follow his instincts. He had a feeling that if he pushed the stupid hero away this time, he might regret it.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:15:26
Original text:
Finally, Rin chose to follow his heart. He had an instinct in his heart. If he pushed the stupid Hero away at this time, he might regret it.
Corrected text:
Finally, Rin chose to follow his heart. He had a feeling in his heart that if he pushed the stupid Hero away at this time, he might regret it.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-30 21:12:51
Original text:
"First… First of all, I'm pitying you, so… one time, I will only do this for you one time. Besides, your smell stinks."
Corrected text:
"First… First of all, I'm pitying you, so… just this once, I will do this for you. Besides, you stink."
Corrected by: krymion , 2022-05-26 08:55:30
Original text:
"First… First of all, I'm pitying you, so… one time, I will only do this for one time. Besides, your smell stinks."
Corrected text:
"First… First of all, I'm pitying you, so… one time, I will only do this for you one time. Besides, your smell stinks."
Corrected by: krymion , 2022-05-26 08:55:16
Original text:
"First… First of all, I'm pitying you, so… one time, I will only do this for one time. Besides, your smell stinks."
Corrected text:
"First… First of all, I'm pitying you, so… one time, I will only do this for you one time. Besides, your smell stinks."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:54
Original text:
The night should be his best cover, which could prevent her from seeing his look clearly, but Miss Hero's vision at night is as good as during the day.
Corrected text:
The night should be his best cover, which could prevent her from seeing his look clearly, except Miss Hero's vision at night is as good as during the day.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:15:43
Original text:
The night should be his best cover, which could make her couldn't see his look clearly, but Miss Hero's vision at night is also like that of day.
Corrected text:
The night should be his best cover, which could prevent her from seeing his look clearly, but Miss Hero's vision at night is as good as during the day.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:15:54
Original text:
She raised her head and looked at Rin's red face. Her blue eyes seemed to ripple on the lake and were blown by the breeze.
Corrected text:
She raised her head and looked at Rin's red face. Her blue eyes seemed like ripples on a lake blown by the breeze.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:57
Original text:
"OK."
Corrected text:
"Ok."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:59
Original text:
Emilia whispered, but she didn't think so. It was just to appease this "tsundere", a kind lie.
Corrected text:
Emilia whispered, but she didn't believe him. It was just to appease this "tsundere", a kind lie.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:03
Original text:
To be honest, Miss Hero couldn't tell if it was friendship or anything else. She just followed her instinct and felt that it would be very comfortable.
Corrected text:
To be honest, Miss Hero couldn't tell if it was friendship or anything else. She just followed her instincts and felt that it would be very fulfilling.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:03
Original text:
At least, this tsundere never regards her just as a hero.
Corrected text:
At least, this tsundere never only sees her as just a hero.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:16:01
Original text:
At least, this tsundere never regard her just as a hero.
Corrected text:
At least, this tsundere never regards her just as a hero.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-30 21:12:53
Original text:
She can bully him, eat and drink with him at night, and play like those normal girls. Even if Rin is easily provoked and shows a look of dislike… he will never alienate and exclude her.
Corrected text:
She can bully him, eat and drink with him at night, and play like those normal girls. Even if Rin is easily provoked and shows a look of dislike… he would never alienate and exclude her.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:16:09
Original text:
She can bully him, eat and drink with him at night, and play like those normal girls. Even if Rin is easy to get provoked and shows a look of dislike… he will never alienate and exclude her.
Corrected text:
She can bully him, eat and drink with him at night, and play like those normal girls. Even if Rin is easily provoked and shows a look of dislike… he will never alienate and exclude her.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:02
Original text:
That's enough. I'm relieved.
Corrected text:
That's enough, I'm relieved.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-01 21:20:59
Original text:
Oh, and also the silly elk's sound of "goo hee hee" in her dream.
Corrected text:
Oh, and also the silly elk making "goo hee hee" sounds while dreaming.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:16:16
Original text:
Oh, by the way, and the silly elk's sound of "goo hee hee" in her dream.
Corrected text:
Oh, and also the silly elk's sound of "goo hee hee" in her dream.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:01
Original text:
Emilia rubbed her chin and apparently wasn't asleep.
Corrected text:
Emilia rubbed her chin agaisnt him and apparently wasn't asleep.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-28 17:41:28
Original text:
Emilia rubbed his chin and apparently wasn't asleep.
Corrected text:
Emilia rubbed her chin and apparently wasn't asleep.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:16:22
Original text:
Emilia rubbed his chin and apparently didn't fall asleep.
Corrected text:
Emilia rubbed his chin and apparently wasn't asleep.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:02
Original text:
"Waste Hero, if in the future… Well, I mean, if we have to fight each other and you must kill me… can you, can you take it easy and change your way… It's best to let me die without feeling any pain…"
Corrected text:
"Waste Hero, if in the future… Well, I mean, if we have to fight each other and you must kill me… can you, can you take it easy and not be too ruthless… It's best to let me die without feeling any pain…"
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:16:33
Original text:
"Waste Hero, if in the future… Well, I mean, if we have to fight each other and you must kill me… can you, can you take it easy and change another way… It's best to let me die without feeling any pain…"
Corrected text:
"Waste Hero, if in the future… Well, I mean, if we have to fight each other and you must kill me… can you, can you take it easy and change your way… It's best to let me die without feeling any pain…"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:02
Original text:
Rin paused. In fact, he also wanted to say that it's best not to stab him face to face, otherwise, he might be very sad, but it's a little difficult.
Corrected text:
Rin paused and thought. In fact, he also wanted to say that it's best not to stab him while they were confronting, otherwise, he might be heartbroken, although it may not be realistic.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:02
Original text:
She just said in a serious tone she had never had before, "I will never, point a weapon at you, absolutely."
Corrected text:
She just said in a serious tone she had never had before, "I will never point a weapon at you... definitely."
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-30 21:12:51
Original text:
Rin was a little moved, but… he blew his hair when he thought of what had happened before.
Corrected text:
Rin was a little moved, but… he blew his head when he thought of what had happened before.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-05 09:52:35
Original text:
"Lies! Just yesterday! In order to kill a moth, you didn't care about me at all and threw a weapon directly at me! I even had to apology to the hotel."
Corrected text:
"Lies! Just yesterday! In order to kill a moth, you didn't care about me at all and threw a weapon directly at me! I even had to apologize to the hotel."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-05 09:52:03
Original text:
"Lies! Just yesterday! In order to kill a moth, you didn't care about me at all and threw a weapon directly at me! I even had to apology to the hotel."
Corrected text:
"Lies! Just yesterday! In order to kill a moth, you didn't care about me at all and threw a weapon directly at me! I even had to apologize to the hotel."
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-02 08:39:44
Original text:
"Lies! Just yesterday! In order to kill a moth, you didn't care about me at all and threw a weapon directly at me! I even had to make amends at the hotel."
Corrected text:
"Lies! Just yesterday! In order to kill a moth, you didn't care about me at all and threw a weapon directly at me! I even had to apology to the hotel."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:01
Original text:
"Lie! Just yesterday! In order to kill a moth, you didn't care about me at all and threw a weapon at me directly! I had to make amends to the hotel."
Corrected text:
"Lies! Just yesterday! In order to kill a moth, you didn't care about me at all and threw a weapon directly at me! I even had to make amends at the hotel."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:02
Original text:
He was a little excited, so he couldn't control the volume.
Corrected text:
He was a little excited, so he couldn't control his volume.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-02 08:39:49
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The Royal Highness Princess turned her eyes around and turned to look at Rin. She didn't see it clearly, but the ahoge hair on her head had become a lightning bolt.
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Her Royal Highness the Princess turned her eyes around and turned to look at Rin. She didn't see it clearly, but the ahoge hair on her head had become a lightning bolt.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:44:47
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For a time, Rin just felt that his eyes were going to be flashed blind, so he covered his eyes quickly.
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For a time, Rin just felt that his eyes were going to go blind, so he covered his eyes quickly.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 08:43:56
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"Whoaaa! It's clear that I'm the fiancee. I met Little Rin first and he hugged me first!"
Corrected text:
"Waaa! It's clear that I'm the fiancee. I met Little Rin first and he hugged me first!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 08:44:07
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"Whoa, whoa, I don't want it, I don't want it, I don't want it!"
Corrected text:
"Waa, waa, I don't want it, I don't want it, I don't want it!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:02
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The silly elk was usually easy to cry, but it was really the first time that she cried so sadly.
Corrected text:
The silly elk usually easily cried, but it was genuinely the first time that she cried so bitterly.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:44:55
Original text:
The silly elk was usually easy to cry, but it was really the first time that she cried so sad.
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The silly elk was usually easy to cry, but it was really the first time that she cried so sadly.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:01
Original text:
Seeing her crying out of breath, Rin hurriedly approached her to show a look of disgust but failed. He had to reach out and touch her head.
Corrected text:
Seeing her crying and hiccupping, Rin hurriedly approached her to show a look of disgust but failed to follow through. Instead, he reached out and touched her head.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:16:40
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Elise felt the hand on her head and was even more wronged. She threw herself directly into Rin's arms and rubbed her tears on his shirt.
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Elise felt the hand on her head and felt even more wronged. She threw herself directly into Rin's arms and rubbed her tears on his shirt.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-02 08:39:52
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There's no way. If he doesn't calm her down quickly, the silly elk will cry to death.
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There's no other way. If he doesn't calm her down quickly, the silly elk will cry to death.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:01
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Elise was patted on the back and felt better, but she was still very sad and accidentally had a runny nose bubble.
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Elise was patted on the back and felt better, she was still very sad and coincidentally had a runny nose bubble.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:16:48
Original text:
She reached for Rin's button and sobbed, "Why did little Rin hold Emilia together!"
Corrected text:
She reached for Rin's button and sobbed, "Why did little Rin hold Emilia!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:01
Original text:
"That's … that's to comfort the poor and stupid waste Hero."
Corrected text:
"That's … that's to comfort the poor and stupid waste hero."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:56
Original text:
"Wow, liar, can friendship be like this?"
Corrected text:
"Wow liar, can friendship be like this?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:57
Original text:
"Hey, hey." Rin's scalp was a little numb, but he still said in a disgusted tone. "Why not? Look, I'm still holding you now. Damn it, your sloppy elk, the snot and tears you rubbed on me are everywhere. It's disgusting!"
Corrected text:
"Hey, hey." Rin's scalp turned a little numb and said in a disgusted tone. "Why not? Look, I'm still holding you now. Damn it, you sloppy elk, the snot and tears you rubbed on me are everywhere. It's disgusting!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:56
Original text:
Elise felt it necessary to let the two know what friendship is.
Corrected text:
Elise felt it is necessary to let the two know what friendship is.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:57
Original text:
But… She hasn't had a good friend before, and she doesn't know how to explain it, but she knows it's definitely wrong!
Corrected text:
However… She hasn't had a good friend before, and she doesn't know how to explain it, but she knows it's definitely wrong!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 08:42:46
Original text:
"Little Rin is my fiance! We will get married and have a baby and live together in the future!"
Corrected text:
"Little Rin is my fiance! We will get married and have 10 babies and live together in the future!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:16:57
Original text:
This time, it was not Emilia who reacted, but Rin who blushed at the same time.
Corrected text:
This time, it was not Emilia who reacted, but Rin who blushed instantly.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:17:12
Original text:
He pushed away from the silly elk directly and stood up, but his head knocked on the tent. He couldn't help squatting with his teeth grinning.
Corrected text:
He pushed away the silly elk directly and stood up, but his head knocked on the tent. He couldn't help squatting with his teeth grinding.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:57
Original text:
"What… What! Marriage?! No, why should I marry a silly elk! And little baby! I… I'm human. How can an elk and I have a baby? WOW! Impossible! It's impossible! Mushrooms will grow out!"
Corrected text:
"What… What! Marriage?! No, why should I marry a silly elk! And having babies! I… I'm human. How can an elk and I have a baby? WOW! Impossible! It's impossible! Mushrooms will grow out!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:45:10
Original text:
Elise wiped away her tears, pursed her lips, and puffed up her cheeks, "But we are unmarried couples and are destined to get married in the future! I even have figured out all our babies names!"
Corrected text:
Elise wiped away her tears, pursed her lips, and puffed up her cheeks, "But we are an engaged couple and are destined to get married in the future! I even have figured out all our babies names!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 08:42:59
Original text:
Elise wiped away her tears, pursed her lips, and puffed up her cheeks, "But we are unmarried couples and are destined to get married in the future! I even have figured out our baby's name!"
Corrected text:
Elise wiped away her tears, pursed her lips, and puffed up her cheeks, "But we are unmarried couples and are destined to get married in the future! I even have figured out all our babies names!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:11:57
Original text:
"Ahhhh! I'm so tired of you. If you don't want to sleep, get out!"
Corrected text:
"Ahhhh! I'm so tired of this. If you don't want to sleep, get out!"
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