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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:51:21
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Elise's ahoge hair spun around happily and then she was going to crawl into the tent.
Corrected text:
Elise's ahoge hair spun around happily and then she started to crawl into the tent.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:28
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Emilia also uttered a happy cat cry and followed Elise into the tent.
Corrected text:
Emilia also let out a happy cat like cry and followed Elise into the tent.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:45
Original text:
Emilia also uttered a happy "cat cry" and followed Elise into the tent.
Corrected text:
Emilia also uttered a happy cat cry and followed Elise into the tent.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:45
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Rin didn't like sleeping bags very much, so he also paved a mattress in the tent with a floor berth one meter and five meters wide in the middle.
Corrected text:
Rin didn't like sleeping bags very much, so he prepared a mattress in the tent with a floor area of about one by five meters wide in the middle.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:51:33
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Elise's ahoge hair shook and thought she might have forgotten her sleeping bag too.
Corrected text:
Elise's ahoge hair shook and she thought she might have forgotten her sleeping bag too.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:45
Original text:
But on second thought, she just bought the sleeping bag before departure, and she even showed off how lovely her pink sleeping bag was in front of little Rin...
Corrected text:
Although on second thought, she just bought a sleeping bag before departure, and she even showed off how lovely her pink sleeping bag was in front of little Rin...
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-31 14:03:07
Original text:
Woo woo, if I knew this would happen earlier, I wouldn't have bought it!
Corrected text:
Boohoo, had I known this would happen earlier, I wouldn't have bought it!
Corrected by: YACATECT , 2022-05-23 09:12:32
Original text:
Woo woo, if I knew it early, I wouldn't buy it!
Corrected text:
Woo woo, if I knew this would happen earlier, I wouldn't have bought it!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:45
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"Hero Emilia, you should have brought a tent!"
Corrected text:
"Hero Emilia, you should have brought a tent right!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:46
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Unfortunately, the kuudere hero who lacked common sense didn't take this seriously.
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Unfortunately, the kuudere hero who lacked common sense didn't take this remark seriously.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-31 14:03:11
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The silly elk immediately blushed and then twisted her hands, "Emilia is really, really too cunning! You actually say such words... Woo woo."
Corrected text:
The silly elk immediately blushed and then twisted her hands, "Emilia is really, really too cunning! You actually say such words... Boohoo."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-31 14:03:13
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Woo woo, when I go back, I must talk to my elder sister about countermeasures.
Corrected text:
Boohoo, when I go back, I must talk to my elder sister about countermeasures.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:08
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Rin had put out the cooking pot. In the wild, you don't have to pay so much attention. All the prepared foods were cooked food, and he only needed to heat them.
Corrected text:
Rin brought out the cooking pot. In the wild, he didn’t need to pay too much attention towards the process of cooking. The food is already prepared and cooked and only requires to be reheated.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-31 14:03:19
Original text:
As soon as he was ready, the two girls came out. Emilia was still like usual, but Elise was a little angry.
Corrected text:
As soon as he was ready, the two girls came out. Emilia was as usual, but Elise was a little angry.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:09
Original text:
As soon as he was ready, the two girls come out. Emilia was still the same, but Elise was a little angry.
Corrected text:
As soon as he was ready, the two girls came out. Emilia was still like usual, but Elise was a little angry.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:51:41
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Rin felt funny and couldn't help poking Elise's face with his finger.
Corrected text:
Rin found it funny and couldn't help poking Elise's face with his finger.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:09
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The three sat together. After dinner, Rin walked around the tent and checked the small warning device arranged more than ten meters away.
Corrected text:
The three sat and ate together. After dinner, Rin walked around the tent and checked the small warning device arranged more than ten meters away.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:09
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When he came back, he sat down and asked, "It's not safe in the wild. We have to work shifts at night. Who's first?"
Corrected text:
When he came back, he sat down and asked, "It's not safe in the wilderness. We have to work shifts at night. Who's first?"
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:51:48
Original text:
When he came back, he sat down and asked, "It's not safe in the wild. We have to work shifts at night. Who's the first?"
Corrected text:
When he came back, he sat down and asked, "It's not safe in the wild. We have to work shifts at night. Who's first?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:42:40
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Elise held her face and said proudly, "No need! Let me show you something!"
Corrected text:
Elise raised her hand and said proudly, "No need! Let me show you something!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:10
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With that, she stood up and touched her spatial ring. With a flash of white light, a white knight in steel armor appeared in front of the three.
Corrected text:
Following her remark, she stood up and touched her spatial ring. With a flash of white light, a white knight in steel armor appeared in front of the three.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:28
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"This magic puppet was given to me by my sister for self-defense. Its magical formation has recorded my information and it can be used directly!"
Corrected text:
"This magic puppet was given to me by my sister for self-defense. It's magical formation has recorded my information and it can be used directly!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:09
Original text:
"This magic puppet was given to me by my sister for self-defense. Its magic spell has recorded my information and it can be used directly!"
Corrected text:
"This magic puppet was given to me by my sister for self-defense. Its magical formation has recorded my information and it can be used directly!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:28
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Puppet Master is a rare class. It belongs to an advanced branch class of alchemists. Magic puppets is a product they can make. Fuelled by magic, it needs a cooldown time after consuming their energy.
Corrected text:
Puppet Master is a rare class. It belongs to an advanced branch class of alchemists. Magic puppets is a product they can make. Fuelled by magic, it needs a cooldown time after consuming their energy.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:09
Original text:
Puppet Master is a rare class. It belongs to an advanced branch class of alchemists. Magic puppet is the product they can refine. Driven by magic, it only needs a cooling time after exceeding the load.
Corrected text:
Puppet Master is a rare class. It belongs to an advanced branch class of alchemists. Magic puppets is a product they can make. Fuelled by magic, it needs a cooldown time after consuming their energy.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:28
Original text:
Judging from its appearance, this puppet should not be of high rank, but it's more than enough to protect them at night.
Corrected text:
Judging from its appearance, this puppet should not be of high rank, even so it's more than enough to protect them at night.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-31 14:03:23
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After chatting, Rin asked the two girls to have a rest.
Corrected text:
After chatting, Rin asked the two girls to get some rest.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 19:37:16
Original text:
"Won't little Rin rest together?" Elise was puzzled.
Corrected text:
"Won't little Rin rest with us?" Elise was puzzled.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:42:48
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Rin suddenly gnashed his teeth and turned out a heavy book.
Corrected text:
Rin suddenly gnashed his teeth and pulled out a heavy book.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:09
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"Fool! I said it before! That stupid fake swordmaster has assigned a lot of homework to me! Damn, I have to make up my homework at night!"
Corrected text:
"Fool! I said it before! That stupid fake swordmaster has assigned a lot of homework to me! Damn, I have to do my homework at night!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-31 14:03:34
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Rin scratched his head, "I’m not the same as you? I never skip classes and homework, okay?"
Corrected text:
Rin scratched his head, "I’m not the same as you! I never skip classes and homework, okay?"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:08
Original text:
Rin scratched his head, "Who is the same as you? I never skip classes and homework, okay?"
Corrected text:
Rin scratched his head, "I’m not the same as you? I never skip classes and homework, okay?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:43:38
Original text:
Rin scratched his hair, "Who is the same as you? I never skip classes and homework, okay?"
Corrected text:
Rin scratched his head, "Who is the same as you? I never skip classes and homework, okay?"
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-28 17:40:08
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"Even so, it's also homework!"
Corrected text:
"Even so, it's homework!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-31 19:06:28
Original text:
Elise gave Rin a spoiled look and could not help but touch his head, "Good boy, little Rin is really good."
Corrected text:
Elise gave Rin a doting look and could not help but pat his head, "Good boy, little Rin is really good."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:53
Original text:
Elise gave Rin a spoiled look and could not help touching his head, "Good boy, little Rin is really good."
Corrected text:
Elise gave Rin a spoiled look and could not help but touch his head, "Good boy, little Rin is really good."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:10
Original text:
Elise gave Rin a spoiled look and could not help touching his head, "Good boy. Little Rin is really good."
Corrected text:
Elise gave Rin a spoiled look and could not help touching his head, "Good boy, little Rin is really good."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:53
Original text:
Rin was so ashamed that he bared his teeth, "Stop talking nonsense, silly elk. Also, waste hero, get in quickly and don't disturb my studies!"
Corrected text:
Rin was so ashamed that he bared his teeth, "Stop talking nonsense silly elk. Also, waste hero, get in quickly and don't disturb my studies!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:12
Original text:
Rin was so ashamed that he bared his teeth, "Stop talking nonsense, silly elk. And that waste Hero, get in quickly and don't disturb my study!"
Corrected text:
Rin was so ashamed that he bared his teeth, "Stop talking nonsense, silly elk. Also, waste hero, get in quickly and don't disturb my studies!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:13
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Finally, he drove the two fools away. With a bitter look on his face, Rin sat at the mouth of the tent, put the book on the small stool by the light of the portable magic lamp, prepared the infinite ink pen and notebook, and opened the first Adventure Guide.
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Finally, he drove the two fools away. With a bitter look on his face, Rin sat at the mouth of his tent, put the book on the small stool by the light of the portable magic lamp, prepared the infinite ink pen and notebook, and opened the first Adventure Guide.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:13
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Rin yawned, took the book back, was satisfied with the progress of his study today, and then went to wash his feet.
Corrected text:
Rin yawned, took the book back, was satisfied with the progress of his studies today, and then went to wash his feet.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:14
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He didn't have some strange skills like those two fools that could keep themselves clean all the time.
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He didn't have strange skills like those two fools that could keep themselves clean all the time.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-31 19:06:28
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Looking around in the moonlight, Elise on the left was sleeping, and Emilia on the right was silent, but she didn't move. It seemed that she had fallen asleep too.
Corrected text:
Looking around in the moonlight, Elise on the left was sleeping, and Emilia on the right was silent and wasn't moving. It seemed that she had fallen asleep too.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:31:06
Original text:
Looking around in the moonlight, Elise on the left was sleeping, and Emilia on the right was silent, but she didn't move. It seemed that she fallen asleep too.
Corrected text:
Looking around in the moonlight, Elise on the left was sleeping, and Emilia on the right was silent, but she didn't move. It seemed that she had fallen asleep too.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:51:58
Original text:
Looking around in the moonlight, Elise on the left was sleeping, and Emilia on the right was silent, but she didn't move. It seemed that she had slept too.
Corrected text:
Looking around in the moonlight, Elise on the left was sleeping, and Emilia on the right was silent, but she didn't move. It seemed that she fallen asleep too.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-31 19:06:28
Original text:
Carefully closing the tent, Rin got into the quilt and was ready to sleep. The two girls at a considerable distance from his body and should not be disturbed.
Corrected text:
Carefully closing the tent, Rin got into the quilt and was ready to sleep. The two girls were at a considerable distance from his body and should not be disturbed.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:56
Original text:
Carefully closing the tent, Rin got into the quilt and was ready to sleep. The two girls were far away from his body and should not be disturbed.
Corrected text:
Carefully closing the tent, Rin got into the quilt and was ready to sleep. The two girls at a considerable distance from his body and should not be disturbed.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:13
Original text:
Carefully closing the tent, Rin got into the quilt and was ready to sleep. The two girls were far away from his arms and should not be disturbed.
Corrected text:
Carefully closing the tent, Rin got into the quilt and was ready to sleep. The two girls were far away from his body and should not be disturbed.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:59
Original text:
However, a few minutes later, the mattress moved, and then Rin looked gape-mouthed at Emilia, who kicked open her sleeping bag and rolled into his quilt.
Corrected text:
However, a few minutes later the mattress moved, and then Rin looked gape-mouthed at Emilia, who kicked open her sleeping bag and rolled into his quilt.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:14
Original text:
However, a few minutes later, the mattress moved, and then Rin looked gape-mouthed at Emilia, who kicked open her sleeping bag and rolled into the quilt.
Corrected text:
However, a few minutes later, the mattress moved, and then Rin looked gape-mouthed at Emilia, who kicked open her sleeping bag and rolled into his quilt.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:13
Original text:
Emilia still looked at him directly until his face turned hot red then she whispered, "For the thing before. Thank you."
Corrected text:
Emilia still looked at him directly until his face turned red hot, she then whispered, "For the thing before. Thank you."
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:52:08
Original text:
Emilia still looked at him directly until his face turned hot red that she whispered, "For the thing before. Thank you."
Corrected text:
Emilia still looked at him directly until his face turned hot red then she whispered, "For the thing before. Thank you."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-31 19:06:28
Original text:
"Ha? You unscrupulous Hero would know how to say thank you?"
Corrected text:
"Ha? You unscrupulous Hero, you know how to say thank you?"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-30 21:10:54
Original text:
"Ha? You unscrupulous Hero would know to say thank you?"
Corrected text:
"Ha? You unscrupulous Hero would know how to say thank you?"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:15
Original text:
"Ha? You unscrupulous Hero will also say thank you?"
Corrected text:
"Ha? You unscrupulous Hero can also say thank you?"
Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-28 17:40:13
Original text:
"Ha? You unscrupulous Hero will also say thank you?"
Corrected text:
"Ha? You unscrupulous Hero would know to say thank you?"
Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-28 17:40:11
Original text:
"Ha? You unscrupulous Hero will also say thank you?"
Corrected text:
"Ha? You unscrupulous Hero would know to say thank you?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:15
Original text:
Rin thought for a moment. What she said should be about his action of driving people away from her in the morning.
Corrected text:
Rin thought for a moment. What she said before should be about his action of driving the crowd away from her in the morning.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:52:17
Original text:
Rin thought for a moment. What she said should be his action of driving people away from her in the morning.
Corrected text:
Rin thought for a moment. What she said should be about his action of driving people away from her in the morning.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-31 19:06:28
Original text:
"Hmm, you think too much. I have made it very clear. I just didn’t want to delay any time to take the tasks. Moreover, you will be my slave if you haven't paid off the money that I borrowed to you. You can only be ordered by me!"
Corrected text:
"Hmm, you think too much. I have made it very clear. I just wanted to take the tasks without any delays. Moreover, as long as you haven't paid back the money you owe me, you are my slave. I'm the only one who can order you around!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:15
Original text:
"Hum, you think too much. I have made it very clear. I just don't want to delay our time to take the tasks. Moreover, if you haven't paid my money back for one day, you will be my slave one day. You can only be ordered by me!"
Corrected text:
"Hmm, you think too much. I have made it very clear. I just didn’t want to delay any time to take the tasks. Moreover, you will be my slave if you haven't paid off the money that I borrowed to you. You can only be ordered by me!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:05:15
Original text:
Emilia ignored his balderdash, but suddenly put her hand around him and moved her face close.
Corrected text:
Emilia ignored his nonsense, suddenly put her hand around him and moved her face close.
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