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Edited by: anonymous, krymion, crisiscore38, hao-farah, Henry, Rishabh-Dafouty, Lea-Lin
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 04:06:13
Original text:
"Silly elk stay there honestly and don't look at me with that woeful look!"
Corrected text:
"Stupid elk stay there and don't look at me with that woeful face!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:20
Original text:
"Silly elk, stay there honestly. Don't look at me with that kind of look!"
Corrected text:
"Silly elk stay there honestly and don't look at me with that woeful look!"
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 04:06:30
Original text:
"Shut up and go to sleep, or I'll pull out your ahoge hair!"
Corrected text:
"Shut up and go to sleep, or I'll pull out your ahoge!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:20
Original text:
The vicious threat made Elise calm down, and Rin looked at Emilia, who was lying next to him, pretending to sleep.
Corrected text:
The vicious threat made Elise calm down. Next Rin looked at Emilia, who was lying next to him, pretending to sleep.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 08:45:48
Original text:
The vicious success made Elise calm down, and Rin looked at Emilia, who was lying next to him, pretending to sleep.
Corrected text:
The vicious threat made Elise calm down, and Rin looked at Emilia, who was lying next to him, pretending to sleep.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 08:44:29
Original text:
The vicious success made Elise calm down, and Rin looked at Emilia, who was lying next to him, pretending to sleep.
Corrected text:
The vicious threat made Elise calm down, and Rin looked at Emilia, who was lying next to him, pretending to sleep.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:19
Original text:
Rin stretched out his foot and pushed her a few times, but the kuudere Hero still didn't move.
Corrected text:
Rin stretched out his foot and prodded her a few times, nevertheless the kuudere Hero didn't move.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:17:23
Original text:
Rin stretched out his foot and pulled her a few times, but the kuudere Hero still didn't move.
Corrected text:
Rin stretched out his foot and pushed her a few times, but the kuudere Hero still didn't move.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:01
Original text:
"Don't pretend to sleep! Get back into your sleeping bag, or I won't allow you to come here to eat and drink anymore."
Corrected text:
"Don't pretend to sleep! Get back into your sleeping bag, or I won't allow you to come to me to eat and drink anymore."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:20
Original text:
The waste Hero's body trembled slightly. Yet, she still pretended to be dead.
Corrected text:
The waste Hero's body trembled slightly. Even so, she still pretended to be fast asleep.
Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-30 21:12:53
Original text:
The waste Hero's body trembled slightly. Finally, she still chose to pretend to be dead.
Corrected text:
The waste Hero's body trembled slightly. Yet, she still pretended to be dead.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:20
Original text:
Seeing this, Rin had to use his ace.
Corrected text:
Seeing her resisting, Rin decided to use his trump card.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-28 18:26:14
Original text:
Seeing this, Rin had to use his mace.
Corrected text:
Seeing this, Rin had to use his ace.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:01
Original text:
"Tomorrow's breakfast will be small plate of fish, the midday meal will be grilled fish, and the dinner will be pickled fish."
Corrected text:
"Tomorrow's breakfast will be a small plate of fish, the midday meal will be grilled fish, and the dinner will be pickled fish."
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:01
Original text:
"Tomorrow's breakfast will be small plate of fish, the midday meal will be grilled fish, and the dinner will be pickled fish."
Corrected text:
"Tomorrow's breakfast will be a small plate of fish, the midday meal will be grilled fish, and the dinner will be pickled fish."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:19
Original text:
"Tomorrow's breakfast will be small fish, the midday meal will be grilled fish, and the dinner will be pickled fish."
Corrected text:
"Tomorrow's breakfast will be small plate of fish, the midday meal will be grilled fish, and the dinner will be pickled fish."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:01
Original text:
Emilia trembled again, stirred around for a bit, before resolutely settling down back in her sleeping bag.
Corrected text:
Emilia trembled again, stirred around for a bit, before resolutely settling back down in her sleeping bag.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:19
Original text:
Emilia trembled again, rolled in place and resolutely returned to her sleeping bag.
Corrected text:
Emilia trembled again, stirred around for a bit, before resolutely settling down back in her sleeping bag.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:18
Original text:
Rin looked at the two who were pretending to be sleeping and heaved a long sigh of relief. He covered himself with the quilt, grabbed it with both hands, and stared at the tent top.
Corrected text:
Rin looked at the two who were pretending to be sleeping and heaved a long sigh of relief. He covered himself with the quilt, grabbed it with both hands, and stared at the tent's top.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:31:33
Original text:
Rin looked at the two who pretended to be sleeping and took a long sigh of relief. He covered himself with the quilt, grabbed it with both hands, and stared at the tent top.
Corrected text:
Rin looked at the two who were pretending to be sleeping and heaved a long sigh of relief. He covered himself with the quilt, grabbed it with both hands, and stared at the tent top.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:17:39
Original text:
Rin looked at the two who pretended to be sleeping and took a long sigh of relief. He covered the quilt, grabbed the quilt with both hands, and stared at the tent top.
Corrected text:
Rin looked at the two who pretended to be sleeping and took a long sigh of relief. He covered himself with the quilt, grabbed it with both hands, and stared at the tent top.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:20
Original text:
Fortunately, there is a way to control them. Otherwise, how could I live the days!
Corrected text:
Fortunately, there is a way to control them. Otherwise, how could he survive the mission!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:00
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However, he felt doing so would be very troublesome. Nevertheless, their friendship is getting better and better, and their companionship was deeper and deeper. Then what about his villain's task? How could he complete with the way their relationship is heading?
Corrected text:
However, he couldn't help but feel that doing so would be very troublesome. Nevertheless, their friendship is deepening, and their companionship is growing by the day. Then what about his villain's task? How could he complete it with the way their relationship is heading?
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:20
Original text:
However, he always felt that it would be very troublesome. In this way, their friendship was getting deeper and deeper, and their relationship was getting better and better. Then, what about his villain's task? How could he complete it in this way?
Corrected text:
However, he felt doing so would be very troublesome. Nevertheless, their friendship is getting better and better, and their companionship was deeper and deeper. Then what about his villain's task? How could he complete with the way their relationship is heading?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:21
Original text:
By the way, speaking of the villain's task, isn't the garbage system too quiet recently?
Corrected text:
By the way, speaking of the villain's task, isn't this garbage system being too quiet recently?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:25
Original text:
When I encounter this situation at ordinary times, doesn't the system either give me an achievement, ridicule me, or punish me? Is it sleeping?
Corrected text:
When I normally encounter this situation, doesn't the system either give me an achievement, ridicule me, or punish me? Is it sleeping?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:02
Original text:
Tsk, it's better if this trashy system sleeps to death!
Corrected text:
Tsk, it's better if this trashy system sleeps itself to death!
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:25
Original text:
Tsk, it's better if the garbage system sleeps to death!
Corrected text:
Tsk, it's better if this trashy system sleeps to death!
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:17:47
Original text:
Tsk, the garbage system is better to sleep to death!
Corrected text:
Tsk, it's better if the garbage system sleeps to death!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:02
Original text:
What Rin didn't know was that the "garbage system" really wanted to die suddenly on the spot.
Corrected text:
What Rin didn't know was that the "garbage system" really wanted to die on the spot.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:28
Original text:
At this time, Qiuqiu really wanted to squat in a corner holding her knees, as weak and helpless as a real little girl.
Corrected text:
At this time, Qiuqiu really wanted to squat in a corner holding her knees. She felt weak and helpless like a little girl.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:17:55
Original text:
At this time, Qiuqiu really wanted to squat in a corner with her knees, as weak and helpless as a real little girl.
Corrected text:
At this time, Qiuqiu really wanted to squat in a corner holding her knees, as weak and helpless as a real little girl.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-05 09:52:09
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She still remembered when she was first chosen to be the supervisor, she still innocent and only wanted to bully her little master.
Corrected text:
She still remembered when she was first chosen to be the supervisor, she was still innocent and only wanted to bully her little master.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:28
Original text:
She still remembered when she first came to be the supervisor, she was so innocent and wanted to bully the little master.
Corrected text:
She still remembered when she was first chosen to be the supervisor, she still innocent and only wanted to bully her little master.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:28
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At the beginning of that day, she understood how terrible the original sin of jealousy was for both humans and gods.
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At the beginning of that day, she understood how terrible the sin of jealousy was for both humans and gods.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-27 08:31:41
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If my master knows what happened tonight, she will certainly yell about destroying the world again.
Corrected text:
If my master comes to know what happened tonight, she will certainly yell about destroying the world again.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:28
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And according to the current development speed of their "friendship", "kiss" and "push down" are not far away!
Corrected text:
According to the current development speed of their "friendship", "kiss" and "push down" are not far away!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:28
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At that time, the master will certainly go crazy and no one can stop her!
Corrected text:
At that time, master will certainly go crazy and no one will be able to stop her!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:28
Original text:
I'm just an AI. Why should I undertake such a heavy mission…
Corrected text:
I'm just an AI. Why should I undertake such a difficult mission…
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:32
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Anyway, this villain plot is already hopeless. What am I still struggling with?
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Anyway, this villain's plot is already hopeless. Why do I bother having internal struggles?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:00
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"Ding, Congratulations, my dear master becomes even more insane. You use heinous means to break the heart of the third heroine, Elise. You're really a scum."
Corrected text:
"Ding, Congratulations, my dear master is becoming even more insane. You used heinous means to break the heart of the third heroine, Elise. You're really a scum."
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 04:08:19
Original text:
Unlock A new villain's achievement: Deflower (middle).
Corrected text:
Unlocked achievement: Deflower (middle).
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:01
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The achievement award: Universal Tear Gas Bottle * 10. Within ten meters of the diameter after throwing, any enemy will be forced to tear reducing the field of vision, denying any Stealth related skills. The effectiveness depends on the level of the other party.
Corrected text:
The achievement award: Universal Tear Gas Bottle * 10. Within ten meters of the diameter after throwing it, any enemy will be forced to tear up, reducing their field of vision, denying any Stealth related skills. The effectiveness depends on the level of the other party.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:28
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The achievement award: Universal Tear Gas Bottle * 10. Within ten meters of the diameter after throwing, any race will be forced to tear, reduce the field of vision, and can't use any Stealth skills. The effect depends on the level of the other party.
Corrected text:
The achievement award: Universal Tear Gas Bottle * 10. Within ten meters of the diameter after throwing, any enemy will be forced to tear reducing the field of vision, denying any Stealth related skills. The effectiveness depends on the level of the other party.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:03
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Rin, who was already in a daze and fell asleep, was startled by the sudden sound, and then broke into a cold sweat by the gloomy cold laughter.
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Rin, who was already in a daze and had fallen asleep, was startled by the sudden sound, and then broke into a cold sweat by the gloomy cold laughter.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-31 14:38:29
Original text:
Rin kept his eyes closed and continued to fall asleep.
Corrected text:
Rin closed his eyes and fell asleep again.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:05
Original text:
Rin continued to fall asleep with his eyes closed.
Corrected text:
Rin kept his eyes closed and continued to fall asleep.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:18:02
Original text:
Rin continued to fall and sleep with his eyes closed.
Corrected text:
Rin continued to fall asleep with his eyes closed.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:29
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Early the next morning, after he woke up the waste Hero, and ate bread and milk for breakfast, the three continued to set out.
Corrected text:
Early the next morning, he woke up the waste Hero, then ate bread and milk for breakfast. Afterwards, the three proceeded to set out.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:18:10
Original text:
Early the next morning, woke up the waste Hero, and ate bread and milk for breakfast, the three continued to set out.
Corrected text:
Early the next morning, after he woke up the waste Hero, and ate bread and milk for breakfast, the three continued to set out.
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Corrected by: krymion , 2022-05-26 08:55:52
Original text:
Incidentally, a glass of milk every morning is a habit that her highness Elise has never stopped. Recently, it has also slightly affected Emilia.
Corrected text:
Incidentally, having a glass of milk every morning is a habit that her highness Elise has never stopped. Recently, it has also slightly affected Emilia.
Corrected by: krymion , 2022-05-26 08:55:44
Original text:
Incidentally, a glass of milk every morning is a habit that her highness Elise has never stopped. Recently, it has also slightly affected Emilia.
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Incidentally, having a glass of milk every morning is a habit that her highness Elise has never stopped. Recently, it has also slightly affected Emilia.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:30
Original text:
At least, they didn't keep talking about the baby, which made Rin much more relaxed.
Corrected text:
At least, they didn't keep talking about making babies, which made Rin much more relaxed.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:29
Original text:
After cleaning up the body of the Burst Rabbit, Wagging Tail Carp, and collecting a White Calendula on the way, it was already late. In addition, they were in the forest, so it was easier to feel the sky become dim.
Corrected text:
After cleaning up the body of the Burst Rabbit, Wagging Tail Carp, and collecting a White Calendula on the way, it was already late. In addition, they were in the forest, so it was easier to feel the upcoming sunset.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:18:18
Original text:
After cleaning up the body of the Burst Rabbit, Wagging Tail Carp, and collecting a White Calendula on the way, it was already late. In addition that they were in the forest, so it was easier to feel the sky become dim.
Corrected text:
After cleaning up the body of the Burst Rabbit, Wagging Tail Carp, and collecting a White Calendula on the way, it was already late. In addition, they were in the forest, so it was easier to feel the sky become dim.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:29
Original text:
Rin counted the spoils while walking, and estimated the time in that way.
Corrected text:
Rin counted the spoils while walking, and estimated the time from how dim it was becoming.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:18:24
Original text:
Rin counted the spoils while walking, and estimated the time by the way.
Corrected text:
Rin counted the spoils while walking, and estimated the time in that way.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-06-03 16:10:05
Original text:
Everything is going well. It is expected that the task will be completed tomorrow. After resting for one night, they would be able to return to the town. Naturally, the return journey would be much faster than when they came here, Therefore, the originally planned time could also be shortened.
Corrected text:
Everything is going well. It is expected that the task will be completed by tomorrow. After resting for one night, they would be able to return to the town. Naturally, the return journey would be much faster than when they came here. Therefore, the originally planned time could also be shortened.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:29
Original text:
Everything is going well. It is expected that the task will be completed tomorrow. After resting for one night, they would be able to return to the town. Naturally, the return journey would be much faster than when they came here, and the originally planned time could also be shortened.
Corrected text:
Everything is going well. It is expected that the task will be completed tomorrow. After resting for one night, they would be able to return to the town. Naturally, the return journey would be much faster than when they came here, Therefore, the originally planned time could also be shortened.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:18:32
Original text:
Everything is going well. It is expected that the task will be completed tomorrow. After resting for one night, and then they could return to the town. Naturally, the return journey would be much faster than when they came here, and the originally planned time could also be shortened.
Corrected text:
Everything is going well. It is expected that the task will be completed tomorrow. After resting for one night, they would be able to return to the town. Naturally, the return journey would be much faster than when they came here, and the originally planned time could also be shortened.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:27
Original text:
It was all the fault of the waste Hero! She refused to go to the lake for the fear of "fish". If it wasn't because of his "persuasion", they may haven't set up a tent by 12 o'clock.
Corrected text:
It was all the fault of the waste Hero! She refused to go to the lake for the fear of "fish". If it wasn't because of his "persuasion", they may not have been able to set up a tent by 12 o'clock.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 08:44:20
Original text:
It was all the fault of the waste Hero! She refused to go to the lake for the fear of "fish". If it wasn't because of his "persuade", they may haven't set up a tent by 12 o'clock.
Corrected text:
It was all the fault of the waste Hero! She refused to go to the lake for the fear of "fish". If it wasn't because of his "persuasion", they may haven't set up a tent by 12 o'clock.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:30
Original text:
At this time, they were shuttling through the dense forest.
Corrected text:
At this time, they were rapidly crossing through the dense forest.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:45:20
Original text:
Elise immediately said angrily, "Emilia! You don't need a hug for friendship! Only unmarried couples can hug each other!"
Corrected text:
Elise immediately said angrily, "Emilia! You don't need a hug for friendship! Only engaged couples can hug each other!"
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Corrected by: Rishabh-Dafouty , 2022-06-09 08:26:42
Original text:
"But, the tsundere let me kill the fish. As compensation…"
Corrected text:
"But, the tsundere made me kill the fish. As compensation…"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:45:35
Original text:
"Don't dream! No hug! No sleep together!"
Corrected text:
"Dream on! No hugging! No sleeping together!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:28
Original text:
Rin knocked hard on their heads and scolded, "Can't you two idiots fill your heads with useful things? Have a good reflection on today's battle! Especially you, waste Hero! If you hate fish, just use your sword to kill them! Why were you hiding?! Can you call yourself 'hero' if you don't even have courage?"
Corrected text:
Rin knocked hard on their heads and scolded, "Can't you two idiots fill your heads with useful things? Have a good reflection on today's battle! Especially you waste Hero! If you hate fish, just use your sword to kill them! Why were you hiding?! Can you call yourself 'hero' if you don't even have courage?"
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 15:18:46
Original text:
Rin knocked hard on their heads and scolded, "Can't you two idiots decorate useful things in your heads? Have a good reflection on today's battle! Especially you, waste Hero! If you hate fish, just use your sword to kill them! Why were you hiding?! Can you call yourself 'hero' if you don't even have courage?"
Corrected text:
Rin knocked hard on their heads and scolded, "Can't you two idiots fill your heads with useful things? Have a good reflection on today's battle! Especially you, waste Hero! If you hate fish, just use your sword to kill them! Why were you hiding?! Can you call yourself 'hero' if you don't even have courage?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-31 19:14:30
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"You're in no position to talk here, stupid elk. Can your Holy Light Shield not be as late as your IQ? I was splashed with water, and then you remember to use your wand? I should press your ahoge hair in the water to wash your brain!"
Corrected text:
"You're in no position to talk here, stupid elk. Can the execution of your Holy Light Shield not be as low as your IQ? I was splashed with water, and then you remember to use your wand? I should rub your ahoge hair in water to cleanse your brain!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:45:46
Original text:
"You're in no position to say her, stupid elk. Can your Holy Light Shield not be as late as your IQ? I was splashed with water, and then you remember to use your wand? I should press your ahoge hair in the water to wash your brain!"
Corrected text:
"You're in no position to talk here, stupid elk. Can your Holy Light Shield not be as late as your IQ? I was splashed with water, and then you remember to use your wand? I should press your ahoge hair in the water to wash your brain!"
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