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Edited by: anonymous, jemst.o, Kastle, Henry, crisiscore38, VVLX, Lea-Lin
Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-05-21 21:27:28
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Chapter 39: Fortunately, My Tent Is Big Enough to Sleep Together
Corrected text:
Chapter 39: Fortunately, My Tent Is Big Enough To Sleep Together
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:52:10
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His face looked both wronged and angry.
Corrected text:
His face looked angry and wronged.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:52:46
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Although he didn't look like he was hurt, just looking at his face, people believed that he must have been scolded hard by his swordmaster sister.
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Although he didn't look like he was hurt, just by looking at his face, many people believed that he must have been scolded harshly by his elder sister.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:10:09
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Rin rolled his eyes at her and patted her dainty hand away, "Nothing, just a lot of homework was suddenly assigned."
Corrected text:
Rin rolled his eyes at her and patted her dainty hand away, "Nothing, I waw just suddenly assigned a lot of homework."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:35:21
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Rin rolled his eyes at her and patted her little paw away, "Nothing, just a lot of homework was suddenly assigned."
Corrected text:
Rin rolled his eyes at her and patted her dainty hand away, "Nothing, just a lot of homework was suddenly assigned."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:32:32
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Rin grounded his teeth, "It's really a stupid swordmaster."
Corrected text:
Rin grounded his teeth, "she's really a stupid swordmaster."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:35:33
Original text:
Rin ground his teeth, "It's really a stupid swordmaster."
Corrected text:
Rin grounded his teeth, "It's really a stupid swordmaster."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:35:50
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Elise thought for a while. Well, it seemed nothing, so she patted her chest, "It's OK. What shall we do now?"
Corrected text:
Elise thought for a while. Well, it seems like nothing special happened, so she patted her chest and said "Ok, what shall we do now?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:29
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Rin turned his head and looked at Emilia, who was still in a daze, "The waste Hero over there, what are you doing? Go and pick up a task with us!"
Corrected text:
Rin turned his head and looked at Emilia, who was still in a daze, "The useless Hero over there, what are you doing? Go and pick up a task with us!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:35:58
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Rin turned his head and looked at Emilia, who was still in a daze, "The waste Hero over there, what are you doing? Go to pick up the task with us!"
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Rin turned his head and looked at Emilia, who was still in a daze, "The waste Hero over there, what are you doing? Go and pick up a task with us!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 21:07:29
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At this time, Rayne in his team covered his arms and felt a little hurt.
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At this time, Rayne was with his team rubbing his arms and felt a bit hurt.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:49:13
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Although he understood that Miss Hero was just angry with Fenix and didn't control her power. The sudden outburst of her power caused him to be affected.
Corrected text:
Although he understood that Miss Hero was just angry with Fenix and lost control of her power. The sudden outburst of her power had hurt him.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:36:08
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Although he understood that Miss Hero was just angry with Fenix and didn't control her power. The sudden outbreak of her power caused him to be affected.
Corrected text:
Although he understood that Miss Hero was just angry with Fenix and didn't control her power. The sudden outburst of her power caused him to be affected.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 21:07:29
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However, he still felt aggrieved.
Corrected text:
So, he still felt aggrieved.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:49:22
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It was Fenix who blackened the hero's reputation. How could it be himself who was injured?
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It was Fenix who blackened the hero's reputation. Why was he the one to be injured?
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:49:30
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What's more aggrieving was that he wanted to help Miss Hero fulfill everyone's wishes together and make everyone happy. Why didn't Miss Emilia understand it?
Corrected text:
What's more aggrieving was that he wanted to help Miss Hero fulfill everyone's wishes and make everyone happy. Why didn't Miss Emilia understand it?
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:37:29
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What's more aggrieved was that he wanted to help Miss Hero fulfill everyone's wishes together and make everyone happy. Why didn't Miss Emilia understand it?
Corrected text:
What's more aggrieving was that he wanted to help Miss Hero fulfill everyone's wishes together and make everyone happy. Why didn't Miss Emilia understand it?
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Corrected by: jemst.o , 2022-05-21 21:26:18
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Blame Fenix!
Corrected text:
It's all Fenix's fault!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:49:38
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Victor was a little perplexed, "Come on, everyone knows that this hero is elusive. I'm not surprised that you are affected."
Corrected text:
Victor was a little perplexed, "Come on, everyone knows that this hero is elusive. I'm not surprised that you were affected."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:37:45
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Victor was a little gloating, "Come on, everyone knows that this hero is elusive. I'm not surprised that you are affected."
Corrected text:
Victor was a little perplexed, "Come on, everyone knows that this hero is elusive. I'm not surprised that you are affected."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:37:54
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Sha Ye glared at Victor, "Hero Emilia shouldn't have intended it, okay, okay, let's go to pick up the task quickly. Don't let others take the lead."
Corrected text:
Sha Ye glared at Victor, "Hero Emilia shouldn't have intended it, okay, okay, let's go to pick up a task quickly. Don’t let the others take the lead."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:49:51
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Rayne took a deep breath, pushed back his anger, and said faintly, "Let's go and pick up the requests of those people just now. We can also help Hero Emilia share the burden."
Corrected text:
Rayne took a deep breath, pushed back his anger, and said faintly, "Let's go and pick up the requests of those people just now. We can also help Hero Emilia by sharing the burden."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:38:08
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Rayne took a deep breath, pressed back his anger and said faintly, "Let's go and pick up the entrustment of those people just now. We can also help Hero Emilia share the pressure."
Corrected text:
Rayne took a deep breath, pushed back his anger and said faintly, "Let's go and pick up the requests of those people just now. We can also help Hero Emilia share the burden."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:38:13
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In his opinion, Emilia will certainly accept the entrustment to help the civilians. She was just interrupted by the evil villain.
Corrected text:
In his opinion, Emilia will certainly accept the requests to help the civilians. She was just interrupted by the evil villain.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:45
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He had marked out the scope on the map and it wouldn't take a long time to complete them. If everything went smoothly, it may take five days to complete these tasks and get 20 points. After that, he only needed to concentrate on finding the protagonist to complete the main plot line.
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He had marked out the various tasks on the map, it wouldn't take a long time to complete them. If everything went smoothly, it may take five days to complete these tasks to get 20 points. After that, he only needed to concentrate on finding the protagonist to complete the main plot line.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-22 12:34:58
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He had marked out the scope on the map and it wouldn't take a long time to complete them. If everything went smoothly, it may take five days to complete these tasks and get 20 points. After that, he only needed to concentrate on finding the protagonist to complete the mainline plot.
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He had marked out the scope on the map and it wouldn't take a long time to complete them. If everything went smoothly, it may take five days to complete these tasks and get 20 points. After that, he only needed to concentrate on finding the protagonist to complete the main plot line.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:44
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Before that, he also needed to prepare food and daily necessities for adventure.
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Before departure, he needed to prepare food and daily necessities for adventure.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 21:07:29
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Elise's magic space was a mess, but it was very large that could be filled with more things.
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Elise's magic space was a mess, but it was very large so it could be filled with more things.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:45
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Elise's magic space was a mess, but it was very large and could be filled with more things.
Corrected text:
Elise's magic space was a mess, but it was very large that could be filled with more things.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:45
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When he was about to leave the adventure guild, the silly elk hesitated and pulled Rin's sleeve.
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When he was about to leave the adventure guild, the silly elk hesitantly pulled Rin's sleeve.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 21:07:29
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"It's all right I know her origin. Let's try not to provoke her."
Corrected text:
"It's all right I know who she is. Let's try not to provoke her."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:45
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"It's all right. I know her origin. Let's try not to provoke her."
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"It's all right I know her origin. Let's try not to provoke her."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:38:28
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Rin touched her ahoge hair, "Don't you trust me? And I have a finger man on her side!"
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Rin touched her ahoge hair, "Don't you trust me? I have an informer on her side!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:50:02
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Emilia, who remained silent, immediately made a confused voice, "Wasn't it Christine…"
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Emilia, who remained silent, immediately let out a confused voice, "Wasn't it Christine…"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:50:12
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"How did you stupid elk know that I called that guy yesterday?! Well, this stupid crossdresser, he betrayed me as expected!"
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"How did you stupid elk know that I called that guy over yesterday?! Well, this stupid crossdresser, he betrayed me as expected!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:39:56
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When they finished buying supplies, they rented a carriage to the entrance of the forest and officially began their adventure.
Corrected text:
When they finished buying supplies, they rented a carriage at the entrance of the forest and officially began their adventure.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:46:02
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Since most of the tasks selected by Rin were tasks that needed to fight, they didn't delay at the outermost part of the forest, and went all the way along with the road signs and map lines.
Corrected text:
Since most of the tasks selected by Rin were tasks that needed them to fight, they didn't stop at the outermost part of the forest, and went all the way along with the road signs and map lines.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:40:17
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Since most of the tasks selected by Rin were tasks that needed to fight, they didn't delay at the outermost part of the forest, and went all the way along with the road signs and map lines.
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Since most of the tasks selected by Rin were tasks that needed them to fight, they didn't stop at the outermost part of the forest, and went all the way along with the road signs and map lines.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 08:43:41
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They easily killed several Unicorn Wolves on the way, which gave Rin a preliminary judgment on the combat effectiveness of the team.
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They easily killed several Horned Wolves on the way, which gave Rin a preliminary judgment on the combat effectiveness of the team.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 21:07:29
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The Kuudere hero is really too strong. To be honest, with her various super strong skills, she could even defeat an opponent whose level was ten levels higher than her.
Corrected text:
The Kuudere hero is really too strong. To be honest, with her various super strong skills, she could even defeat an opponent ten levels higher than her.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-22 12:34:52
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The Kuudere hero is really too strong. To be honest, with her various super strong skills, she could even defeat an opponent whose level was ten-level higher than her.
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The Kuudere hero is really too strong. To be honest, with her various super strong skills, she could even defeat an opponent whose level was ten levels higher than her.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:50:24
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Of course, he also contributed, mainly to use his magic to limit the abilities of the magical beasts or to give them the final blow.
Corrected text:
Of course, he also contributed, mainly by using his magic to limit the abilities of the magical beasts or to give them the final blow.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:46:58
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Of course, he also contributed, mainly to use his magic to limit the scope of the magical beasts or give them the last hit.
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Of course, he also contributed, mainly to use his magic to limit the abilities of the magical beasts or to give them the final blow.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:47:11
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Elise's task was the simplest. She only needed to throw Purification, Holy Light, or Light Shield on them. If they were injured, she would throw a ball of Healing Light at them.
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Elise's task was the simplest. She only needed to cast Purification, Holy Light, or Light Shield on them. If they were injured, she would throw a ball of Healing Light at them.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 21:07:29
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For the first time, the three felt quite tacit.
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For the first time, the three felt quite in sync.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:50:33
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Unknowingly, it was evening. Rin chose a flat terrain that was dry and ventilated according to the recommendations of the guidebook.
Corrected text:
Before they knew it, it was evening. Rin chose a flat terrain that was dry and ventilated according to the recommendations of the guidebook.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:48:24
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Unknowingly, it was evening. Rin chose a flat place that was dry and ventilated according to the recommendations of the guidebook.
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Unknowingly, it was evening. Rin chose a flat terrain that was dry and ventilated according to the recommendations of the guidebook.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:50:43
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Even with the instructions, it still took them a lot of effort to set the tents up. Rin wiped his sweat and looked at the gray, medium-sized tent in front of him. He felt satisfied.
Corrected text:
Even with the instructions, it still took him a lot of effort to set the tent up. Rin wiped his sweat and looked at the gray, medium-sized tent in front of him. He felt satisfied.
Corrected by: jemst.o , 2022-05-21 21:26:27
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According to the instructions, it took them a lot of effort to set the tents up. Rin wiped his sweat and looked at the gray medium-sized tent in front of him. He felt good.
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Even with the instructions, it still took them a lot of effort to set the tents up. Rin wiped his sweat and looked at the gray, medium-sized tent in front of him. He felt satisfied.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:48:39
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Naturally, the tent was enhanced by magic. As long as it was not a magical beast, even the rainstorm couldn't shake the tent a bit.
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Naturally, the tent was enhanced by magic. As long as it was not a magical beast, even a thunderstorm couldn't shake the tent in the slightest .
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:50:54
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"Why don't you two fools set up a tent quickly? If you won't, I will help you!"
Corrected text:
"Why don't you two fools set up a tent quickly? If you need, I will help you!"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 21:07:30
Original text:
Elise's face was a little red, her fingers crossed together, her attitude was very good, and her fawn-like eyes were pure and lovable.
Corrected text:
Elise's face was a little red, her fingers intertwined, her attitude was very docile, and her fawn-like eyes were pure and lovable.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 21:07:29
Original text:
Although she wanted to imitate Elise's expression, it was a pity that it was extremely difficult for the kuudere girl, so she had to use her unique skill.
Corrected text:
Although she wanted to imitate Elise's expression, sadly, it was extremely difficult for the kuudere girl, so she had to resort to her unique skill.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:51:08
Original text:
Although she wanted to learn Elise's expression, it was a pity that it was extremely difficult for the kuudere girl, so she had to use her unique skill.
Corrected text:
Although she wanted to imitate Elise's expression, it was a pity that it was extremely difficult for the kuudere girl, so she had to use her unique skill.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:32:51
Original text:
Although she wanted to learn Elise's expression, it was a pity that it was extremely difficult for the kuudere girl, so so had to use her unique skill.
Corrected text:
Although she wanted to learn Elise's expression, it was a pity that it was extremely difficult for the kuudere girl, so she had to use her unique skill.
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Corrected by: jemst.o , 2022-05-21 21:26:56
Original text:
"I forget it. Meow… Meow."
Corrected text:
"I forgot it. Meow… Meow."
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 21:07:29
Original text:
"It's no use to play cute! What's the matter with you two fools? You really treat me as your nurse?!"
Corrected text:
"It's no use playing cute! What's the matter with you two fools? You really treat me as your caretaker?!"
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Corrected by: VVLX , 2022-07-13 09:56:44
Original text:
"However, I warn you to sleep properly. If you dare come to my side, I'll throw you out right away!"
Corrected text:
"However, I’m warning you. If you dare try anything strange, I'll throw you out right away!"
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-30 21:07:29
Original text:
"However, I warn you to sleep honestly. If you dare to take my position, I'll throw you out right away!"
Corrected text:
"However, I warn you to sleep properly. If you dare come to my side, I'll throw you out right away!"
Corrected by: jemst.o , 2022-05-21 21:27:05
Original text:
"But I warn you to sleep honestly. If you dare to grab my position, I'll throw you out immediately!"
Corrected text:
"However, I warn you to sleep honestly. If you dare to take my position, I'll throw you out right away!"
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