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Edited by: anonymous, TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia, mondruppen, Aedon-Sneddon, Henry, Reader-1, TheLonelyPerson, Cyan-Eversnow, Koppany-Budai, Lea-Lin, sweety-boy, Abhinav-Balasubramaniyan, Janricz-Corona, David-Nkwo, Jorge-Luis-Alvarado
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-29 00:59:04
Original text:
Chapter 3: Ah, Lovely Girl, I Must Scold Her to Cry!
Corrected text:
Chapter 3: Ah, Lovely Girl, I Must Scold Her to Tears!
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:28:19
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In the previous second she was a noble and elegant princess, and the next moment she had her previous temperament swept away.
Corrected text:
A second ago, she was a noble and elegant princess, and the next, she had her previous temperament swept away.
Corrected by: TheLonelyPerson , 2022-06-21 08:45:39
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The previous second she was a noble and elegant princess, and the next moment she had her previous temperament swept away.
Corrected text:
In the previous second she was a noble and elegant princess, and the next moment she had her previous temperament swept away.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:42:23
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The previous second she was a noble and elegant princess, and the next moment she had her old temperament swept away.
Corrected text:
The previous second she was a noble and elegant princess, and the next moment she had her previous temperament swept away.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:33:41
Original text:
The previous second heroine was a noble and elegant princess, and the new one had her old temperament swept away.
Corrected text:
The previous second she was a noble and elegant princess, and the next moment she had her old temperament swept away.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 08:45:46
Original text:
The previous second, she was a noble and elegant princess, and the next second, her temperament swept away.
Corrected text:
The previous second heroine was a noble and elegant princess, and the new one had her old temperament swept away.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 08:42:10
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While being tripped, the young girl looked at the corner of the knocked table that was falling on to her face and subconsciously closed her eyes.
Corrected text:
While falling over, the young girl looked at the corner of the knocked table that was heading to her face and subconsciously closed her eyes.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 16:07:22
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While being tripped, the young girl looked at the corner of the table that was flying close to her face and subconsciously closed her eyes.
Corrected text:
While being tripped, the young girl looked at the corner of the knocked table that was falling on to her face and subconsciously closed her eyes.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-27 21:14:47
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It will hurt to be hit by the corner of the table like this, right?
Corrected text:
It would hurt to be hit by the corner of the table like this, right?
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:03:11
Original text:
It will hurt to be knocked by the corner of the table like this, right?
Corrected text:
It will hurt to be hit by the corner of the table like this, right?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-27 21:14:49
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But the next second, she was planted in a somewhat warm embrace.
Corrected text:
But the next second, she felt someone catch her.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 04:10:28
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She quietly opened her eyes, seeing the sight of a boys' school uniform, mainly blue and white, with a faint sweet and pleasant smell.
Corrected text:
She quietly opened her eyes, seeing the sight of a boys' school uniform, mainly blue and white, with a faint pleasant smell.
Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-06-30 19:24:40
Original text:
She quietly opened her eyes, seeing the sight of a boys' school uniform, mainly blue and white, with a faint fresh and with a pleasant smell.
Corrected text:
She quietly opened her eyes, seeing the sight of a boys' school uniform, mainly blue and white, with a faint sweet and pleasant smell.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 21:13:46
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She quietly opened her eyes, seeing the sight of a boys' school uniform, mainly blue and white, with a faint fresh and pleasant smell.
Corrected text:
She quietly opened her eyes, seeing the sight of a boys' school uniform, mainly blue and white, with a faint fresh and with a pleasant smell.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:03:22
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She quietly opened her eyes, seeing the sight of a boys' school uniform, mainly blue and white, with a faint but fresh and good smell.
Corrected text:
She quietly opened her eyes, seeing the sight of a boys' school uniform, mainly blue and white, with a faint fresh and pleasant smell.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 21:35:22
Original text:
She quietly opened her eyes, into the eyes was the boys' school uniform, mainly blue and white, but also with a faint fresh and good smell.
Corrected text:
She quietly opened her eyes, seeing the sight of a boys' school uniform, mainly blue and white, with a faint but fresh and good smell.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-27 21:14:53
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At this time, Rin didn't feel comfortable at all, because this damn woman, who looked quite thin, was actually rather heavy.
Corrected text:
At this time, Rin didn't feel comfortable at all, because this damn woman, who looked rather thin, was actually quite heavy.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:03:31
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At this time, Rin didn't feel warm and soft at all, because this damn woman, who looked quite thin, was actually rather heavy.
Corrected text:
At this time, Rin didn't feel comfortable at all, because this damn woman, who looked quite thin, was actually rather heavy.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:44:30
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At this time, Rin didn't feel warm and soft at all, because this damn woman and the table, who looked quite thin, had actually so much inertial force.
Corrected text:
At this time, Rin didn't feel warm and soft at all, because this damn woman, who looked quite thin, was actually rather heavy.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 16:07:38
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At this time, Rin didn't feel warm and soft at all, because this damn woman, who looked quite thin, had actually so much inertial force.
Corrected text:
At this time, Rin didn't feel warm and soft at all, because this damn woman and the table, who looked quite thin, had actually so much inertial force.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 04:48:24
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At that time, he subconsciously stood in front of Elise, and his waist heavily hit the side of the table
Corrected text:
At that time, he subconsciously stood in front of Elise, and hit his waist on the side of the table.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:13:51
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At that time, he subconsciously stood in front of Elise, and his waist hit the side of the table heavily.
Corrected text:
At that time, he subconsciously stood in front of Elise, and his waist heavily hit the side of the table
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:44:42
Original text:
At that time, he subconsciously stood in front of Elise, and then his waist came into close contact with the sides of the table heavily.
Corrected text:
At that time, he subconsciously stood in front of Elise, and his waist hit the side of the table heavily.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 16:07:48
Original text:
At that time, he subconsciously stood in front of Elise, and then his waist came into close contact with the corner of the table heavily.
Corrected text:
At that time, he subconsciously stood in front of Elise, and then his waist came into close contact with the sides of the table heavily.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 21:35:33
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At that time, he subconsciously blocked in front of Elise, and then his waist came into close contact with the corner of the table heavily.
Corrected text:
At that time, he subconsciously stood in front of Elise, and then his waist came into close contact with the corner of the table heavily.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:44:48
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This time, he sucked in a breath of cold air and grimaced.
Corrected text:
He sucked in a breath of cold air and grimaced.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:13:58
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Elise did not pay attention to his demeanor, and she was still happy in her heart at this time.
Corrected text:
Elise did not pay attention to his demeanor, and was currently, happily thinking inside her heart.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:03:43
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'This is like the meeting scene in a novel!' The girl's heart was bubbling with pink.
Corrected text:
'This is like a destined meeting scene in a novel!' The girl's heart was bubbling with pink.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 21:35:43
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'This is like the meeting scene in the novel!' The girl's heart was bubbling with pink.
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'This is like the meeting scene in a novel!' The girl's heart was bubbling with pink.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 21:36:16
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"Hey! Elise, what are you doing? Are you a pig? Why are you so anxious? No one is grabbing feed with you! You can just fall to the ground at another place, you almost broke my waist!"
Corrected text:
"Hey! Elise, what are you doing? Are you a pig? Why are you so anxious? No one is giving fodder out! You can't just fall to the ground like that, you almost broke my waist!"
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 04:49:47
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Her hands were suddenly misplaced and she was filled with the guilt of having made a mistake.
Corrected text:
Her fingers were suddenly interlaced and she was filled with the guilt of having made a mistake.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 04:50:48
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"Oooh, little Rin, I didn't mean to do it, does it hurt?"
Corrected text:
"Oooh, little Rin, I didn't mean to, does it hurt?"
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:44:59
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Saying that, her hand was about to support Rin.
Corrected text:
Saying that, she moved to support Rin.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:45:04
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Rin slapped her paws away and bared his teeth at her with a fierce gaze.
Corrected text:
Rin slapped her hands away and bared his teeth at her with a fierce gaze.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:45:21
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Being stared at by him, Elise said with a little sheepish, "Eh, little Rin, your canine teeth have grown! There's no need to show it to me on purpose."
Corrected text:
Being stared at by him, Elise said sheepishly: "Eh, little Rin, your canine teeth have grown! There's no need to show it to me on purpose."
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-06-30 19:25:16
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Rin almost couldn't hold his exasperation and spit out.
Corrected text:
Rin almost couldn't hold his exasperation and nearly spat out.(Spat out? I thing staggered would be better cause boi spat out seems kinda gross)
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:04:04
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Rin almost couldn't hold his breath and spit out.
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Rin almost couldn't hold his exasperation and spit out.
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-06-30 19:25:52
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Canine teeth? If I didn't know my body well, I was almost cheated by you.
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Canine teeth? If I didn't know my body well, I would be cheated by you. (EN:Considering the use of 'didn't', 'was almost' seems out of place)
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 04:51:59
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So cute.
Corrected text:
Too cute.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:14:03
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Although there was a text introduction in the book, when he really looked into her eyes, there was a different feeling.
Corrected text:
Although there was a text introduction in the book, when he looked into her eyes, there was a different feeling.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 08:10:59
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Although there was a text introduction in the book, really looked into her eyes, there was a different feeling.
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Although there was a text introduction in the book, when he really looked into her eyes, there was a different feeling.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:14:29
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Her pink hair contrasted with her skin, and she always had a hint of pink on her face, giving Rin a pleasant feeling.
Corrected text:
Her pink hair contrasted with her skin, and she always had a hint of a blush on her face, giving Rin a pleasant feeling.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:04:13
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Her pink hair was unusually lined with her skin, and she always had a hint of pink on her face, giving Rin a sweet feeling.
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Her pink hair contrasted with her skin, and she always had a hint of pink on her face, giving Rin a pleasant feeling.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:15:01
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Her lake-colored eyes were clear and simple like a deer, exuding excessive goodwill. That gentle and kind temperament was like that of a little angel instead of a human.
Corrected text:
Her lake-colored eyes were clear and doe shaped, exuding excessive goodwill. That gentle and kind temperament was akin to that of a little angel instead of a human.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:33:48
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Her lake-colored eyes were clear and simple like a deer, exuding excessive goodwill. That gentle and kind temperament was like from a little angel but not a human.
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Her lake-colored eyes were clear and simple like a deer, exuding excessive goodwill. That gentle and kind temperament was like that of a little angel instead of a human.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-04 19:57:27
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Lin Lin can't help but incline his head. Is this the third heroine who he expressed his dislike of to Lin Wuyue?
Corrected text:
Rin couldn’t help but incline his head. Is this the third heroine who he expressed his dislike of to his sister?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:33:57
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Lin Lin can't help but incline his head. Is this the third heroine he expressed his dislike to Lin Wuyue?
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Lin Lin can't help but incline his head. Is this the third heroine who he expressed his dislike of to Lin Wuyue?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-09 09:25:52
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Because she conveys kindness no matter how good or bad others are. Even to the big villain like Gur Fenix, she indulged him in the name of tenderness.
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Because she conveys kindness no matter how good or bad others are. Even to a big villain like Gur Fenix, she indulged him in the name of tenderness.
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Corrected by: Koppany-Budai , 2022-07-04 09:30:06
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But really standing in front of her, enveloped by her angel-like aura, Rin felt as if his heart was purified.
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Yet standing in front of her, enveloped by her angel-like aura, Rin felt as if his heart was purified.
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-06-30 19:25:58
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Facing her extremely pure appearance, it is difficult to have any evil thoughts about her.
Corrected text:
Facing her extremely pure appearance, it was/would be difficult to have any evil thoughts about her.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:15:15
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Facing her extremely pure persona, it is difficult to have evil thoughts about her.
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Facing her extremely pure appearance, it is difficult to have any evil thoughts about her.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:04:21
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Facing her extremely pure goodness, it is difficult to produce evil thoughts about her.
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Facing her extremely pure persona, it is difficult to have evil thoughts about her.
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-06-30 19:26:02
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Honestly, except for the fact that his appearance was somewhat similar to Rin's as a child, This Rin gave her a different feeling.
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Honestly, except for the fact that his appearance was somewhat similar to Rin's as a child, this Rin gave her a different feeling.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:15:19
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Honestly, except for the fact that his appearance was somewhat similar to Rin's as a child, Rin gave her a strange feeling.
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Honestly, except for the fact that his appearance was somewhat similar to Rin's as a child, This Rin gave her a different feeling.
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-06-30 19:26:05
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As a Holy Healer, Elise has a talent called Holiness, which can detect the good and evil in others, and can continuously purify other people's evil thoughts, when they are near her.
Corrected text:
As a Holy Healer, Elise has a talent called Holiness, which can detect the good and evil in others, and can continuously purify other people's evil thoughts when they are near her.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:01:35
Original text:
As a Holy Healer, Elise has a talent called Holiness, which can detect good and evil in others, and continue to purify other people's evil thoughts when they are staying with her.
Corrected text:
As a Holy Healer, Elise has a talent called Holiness, which can detect the good and evil in others, and can continuously purify other people's evil thoughts, when they are near her.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-31 15:21:09
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In the novel, it is for her "Holiness" talent that Gur would reject and stay away from her.
Corrected text:
In the novel, it is her "Holiness" talent that rejected Gur and caused her to stay away from him.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-27 21:14:55
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"Hey, what are you staring at me for!"
Corrected text:
"Hey, why are you staring at me!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-04 19:58:13
Original text:
Rin felt a little uncomfortable being stared at by her and yelled, like an ass in a lion's skin.
Corrected text:
Rin felt a little uncomfortable being stared at by her and yelled, like a sheep in a lion's skin.
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Corrected by: David-Nkwo , 2023-01-31 18:47:56
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"Get out of the way! I want to sit down! I really not sure if your brain is okay, why are you so dumb?"
Corrected text:
"Get out of the way! I want to sit down! I’m really not sure your brain is okay, why are you so dumb?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-27 21:14:58
Original text:
"Get out of the way! I want to sit down! I really don't know if your brain is not getting enough nutrients, why are you so dumb?"
Corrected text:
"Get out of the way! I want to sit down! I really not sure if your brain is okay, why are you so dumb?"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:11:54
Original text:
"Get out of the way! I want to sit down! I really don't know if your brain is not keeping up with a nutrition, why are you so dumb?"
Corrected text:
"Get out of the way! I want to sit down! I really don't know if your brain is not getting enough nutrients, why are you so dumb?"
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Corrected by: sweety-boy , 2022-09-02 14:30:45
Original text:
Rin muttered, then glanced at Elise's "cumbersome" peaks, "Well, I probably know why your brain isn't well nourished and why you possess much momentum even though you are so thin."
Corrected text:
Rin muttered, then glanced at Elise's "cumbersome" peaks, "Well, I probably know why your brain isn't well nourished and why you are so heavy even though you are so thin."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:04:29
Original text:
Rin muttered, then glanced at Elise's "cumbersome" peaks, "Well, I probably know why your brain isn't well nourished and why you possess much inertia even though you are so thin."
Corrected text:
Rin muttered, then glanced at Elise's "cumbersome" peaks, "Well, I probably know why your brain isn't well nourished and why you possess much momentum even though you are so thin."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-11 08:29:17
Original text:
Lin muttered, then glanced at Elise's "cumbersome" peaks, "Well, I probably know why your brain isn't well nourished and why you possess much inertia even though you are so thin."
Corrected text:
Rin muttered, then glanced at Elise's "cumbersome" peaks, "Well, I probably know why your brain isn't well nourished and why you possess much inertia even though you are so thin."
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 08:46:28
Original text:
Lin muttered, then glanced at Elise's "over-nourished" parts, "Well, I probably know why your brain can't keep up with nutrition, and I also know why you have a large inertia even though you are so thin."
Corrected text:
Lin muttered, then glanced at Elise's "cumbersome" peaks, "Well, I probably know why your brain isn't well nourished and why you possess much inertia even though you are so thin."
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 04:55:36
Original text:
The innocent Elise couldn't understand, but she knew she was making trouble, and hurriedly moved out of the way, then followed Rin and sat down.
Corrected text:
The innocent Elise didn't understand, but she knew she was being a hindrance, and hurriedly moved out of the way, then followed Rin and sat down.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 08:46:52
Original text:
The innocent Elise couldn't understand, but she knew she was giving trouble, and hurriedly moved out of the way, then followed Rin and sat down.
Corrected text:
The innocent Elise couldn't understand, but she knew she was making trouble, and hurriedly moved out of the way, then followed Rin and sat down.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-26 12:28:25
Original text:
Lin grimaced and gently rubbed the back of his waist.
Corrected text:
Rin grimaced and gently rubbed the back of his waist.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-30 21:15:24
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Elise directly reached out and lifted his shirt, staring at the bruise on his back, causing her heart to die with guilt.
Corrected text:
Elise directly reached out and lifted his shirt, staring at the bruise on his back, causing her heart to bleed with guilt.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:12:02
Original text:
Elise directly reached out and lifted his shirt, staring at the bruise on his back, and her heart was dying with guilt.
Corrected text:
Elise directly reached out and lifted his shirt, staring at the bruise on his back, causing her heart to die with guilt.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:34:05
Original text:
"Whoa! What are you … doing, are you crazy!"
Corrected text:
"Whoa! What are you doing?! Are you crazy?!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-22 09:41:38
Original text:
"Wow! What are you … doing, are you crazy!"
Corrected text:
"Whoa! What are you … doing, are you crazy!"
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 04:56:40
Original text:
In public, being stripped of his clothes, Rin felt his self-pride was about to be disgraced, and he hastily pulled down the hem of his shirt in a hurried manner.
Corrected text:
In public, being stripped of his clothes, Rin felt his self-respect was about to be disgraced, and he hastily pulled down the hem of his shirt in a hurried manner.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-27 17:07:33
Original text:
In public, being stripped of his clothes, Rin felt his self-pride was about to be disgraced, and he hastily pulled down the hem of his shirt in a deadly manner.
Corrected text:
In public, being stripped of his clothes, Rin felt his self-pride was about to be disgraced, and he hastily pulled down the hem of his shirt in a hurried manner.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:04:36
Original text:
"I … I want to give little Rin a treatment."
Corrected text:
"I … I want to give little Rin treatment."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:47:05
Original text:
Elise's eyes misted up like a bullied kitty.
Corrected text:
Elise's eyes misted up like a bullied kitten.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:04:41
Original text:
Reaching out to Rin's injured area, she silently recited the incantation, and a soft glow appeared in her palm and seeped inward from Rin's injury.
Corrected text:
Reaching out to Rin's injured area, she silently recited the incantation, and a soft glow appeared in her palm and seeped inward to Rin's injury.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 04:56:57
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It was a good magic.
Corrected text:
It was light magic.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:12:12
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Rin muttered in his heart, then pulled his clothes down and slammed his face up.
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Rin muttered in his heart, then pulled his clothes down and brought his face up.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-22 08:44:27
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"Get a dodge bonus of twenty percent."
Corrected text:
"Get a dodge chance bonus of twenty percent."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-22 08:44:44
Original text:
Rin breathed a long sigh of relief, knowing that this plot is finally over, and for a period of time later, there wouldn't be plots about him.
Corrected text:
Rin breathed a long sigh of relief, knowing that the scene was finally over, and for some time, there wouldn't be any other scenes.
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Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 14:20:52
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However… reprimand such a kind and simple girl…
Corrected text:
However… to reprimand such a kind and simple girl…
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 16:15:02
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Rin felt his conscience was aching.
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Rin felt his conscience aching.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:04:55
Original text:
Subconsciously, he wanted to make up for her on the other side.
Corrected text:
Subconsciously, he wanted to make it up for her being wronged.
Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 14:16:50
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Subconsciously, he wanted to make up for the other side.
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Subconsciously, he wanted to make up for her on the other side.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 04:57:41
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After thinking about it, he took out a cupcake from his spatial ring and put it in Elise's arms.
Corrected text:
After thinking about it, he took out a cupcake from his spatial ring and put it in Elise's hands.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 08:47:06
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After thinking about it, he took out a cupcake from his Space Ring and put it in Elise's arms.
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After thinking about it, he took out a cupcake from his spatial ring and put it in Elise's arms.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 04:57:56
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"Seeing how stupid you are, I can't help but want to give it to you to replenish your brain. Consider it as a handout from your fiance, hahaha."
Corrected text:
"Seeing how stupid you are, I can't help but want to give it to you to replenish your brain power. Consider it as a handout from your fiance, hahaha."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-29 09:16:32
Original text:
"Seeing how stupid you are, I can't help but want to give you it to replenish your brain. Consider it as a handout from your fiance, hahaha."
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"Seeing how stupid you are, I can't help but want to give it to you to replenish your brain. Consider it as a handout from your fiance, hahaha."
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Corrected by: Janricz-Corona , 2022-12-27 21:15:09
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In other words, as long as he acted like a wicked young man, even giving something to the other party, was not considered as a penalty.
Corrected text:
In other words, as long as he acted like a villain, even giving something to the other party, was not considered a violation.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:08:27
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In other words, as long as he acted like a wicked young man, even giving something to the other party, it was not considered as a penalty.
Corrected text:
In other words, as long as he acted like a wicked young man, even giving something to the other party, was not considered as a penalty.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:05:04
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In other words, as long as he acted like a wicked young man, even giving something to the other party, it was not considered a foul.
Corrected text:
In other words, as long as he acted like a wicked young man, even giving something to the other party, it was not considered as a penalty.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:05:14
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Instead, Elise looked foolishly at the cupcake in her hand, and then at Rin who looked tense at this time.
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Instead, Elise looked foolishly at the cupcake in her hand, and then at Rin who looked tense all this time.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-11 21:52:30
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Hehehe, he must have secretly inquired about my preferences to others.
Corrected text:
Hehehe, he must have secretly inquired about my preferences from others.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:05:24
Original text:
Oh, how cute little Rin is. Obviously, he wanted to give me a gift, but had to pretend that look.
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Oh, how cute little Rin is. Obviously, he wanted to give me a gift, but had to pretend to be a tsundere.
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Corrected by: Abhinav-Balasubramaniyan , 2022-11-19 01:32:10
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Don't think I didn't see what you did before. You obviously tried to brake my fall by staying in front of me. Why do you have to pretend to be fierce after that?
Corrected text:
Don't think I didn't see what you did before. You obviously tried to break my fall by standing in front of me. Why did you pretend to be fierce after doing that?
Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-09-02 14:28:32
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Just before, don't think I didn't see it. You obviously immediately tried to brake my fall staying in front of me. Why did you pretend to be fierce after that?
Corrected text:
Don’t think I didn't see what you did before. You obviously tried to brake my fall by staying in front of me. Why do you have to pretend to be fierce after that?
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:08:41
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And before, don't think I didn't see it. You obviously immediately tried to brake my fall staying in front of me. Why did you pretend to be fierce after that?
Corrected text:
Just before, don't think I didn't see it. You obviously immediately tried to brake my fall staying in front of me. Why did you pretend to be fierce after that?
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:12:20
Original text:
And before, don't think I didn't see it. You were obviously immediately blocked in front of me. Why did you pretend to be fierce after that?
Corrected text:
And before, don't think I didn't see it. You obviously immediately tried to brake my fall staying in front of me. Why did you pretend to be fierce after that?
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 04:58:40
Original text:
Hmm, tsundere.
Corrected text:
Hmph, tsundere.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 11:08:33
Original text:
Hum, tsundere.
Corrected text:
Hmm, tsundere.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-03 04:09:19
Original text:
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