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Edited by: anonymous, crisiscore38, Henry, hao-farah, Ian-Villareal, Lea-Lin, Abhinav-Balasubramaniyan
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-27 11:08:05
Original text:
Fine lets duel again.
Corrected text:
Fine, let's duel again.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 15:24:18
Original text:
Well, duel again.
Corrected text:
Fine lets duel again.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 16:40:03
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Rin was about to continue to mock Rayne, but a very cold voice suddenly sounded in his ear.
Corrected text:
Rin was about to continue to mock Rayne, but a very firm voice suddenly sounded in his ear.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 15:24:26
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Yuki was still appreciating her brother's overbearing appearance, but she had to stand out at this time.
Corrected text:
Yuki was fascinated by her brother's overbearing appearance, but she had to speak out at this time.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:47:16
Original text:
Rayne quickly stood up straight, "Ms. Yuki, his attitude towards civilians is very bad."
Corrected text:
Rayne quickly stood up straight, "Ms. Yuki, his attitude towards civilians is very rude."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 19:08:29
Original text:
Rayne quickly stood up straight, "Ms. Yuki, his attitude towards civilians is too bad."
Corrected text:
Rayne quickly stood up straight, "Ms. Yuki, his attitude towards civilians is very bad."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 19:08:38
Original text:
"Hum."
Corrected text:
"Hmph."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:03:37
Original text:
Rin remained unmoved and turned his head away with disdain.
Corrected text:
Rin remained unperturbed and turned his head away with disdain.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:47:50
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"Why should go with you? Just because you asked…"
Corrected text:
"Why should I go with you? Just because you asked…"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 19:09:06
Original text:
Rin tilted his head and wanted to resist. However, Yuki's aura was too cold which made him tremble instinctively, so he had to lower his head and follow up.
Corrected text:
Rin tilted his head and wanted to resist. However, Yuki's aura was too intimidating which made him tremble instinctively, so he had to lower his head and follow her.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 19:08:56
Original text:
Rin tilted his head and wanted to resist. However, Yuki's aura was too cold which made him tremble instinctively, so he had to lower his head and follow up.
Corrected text:
Rin tilted his head and wanted to resist. However, Yuki's aura was too intimidating which made him tremble instinctively, so he had to lower his head and follow her.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:31:54
Original text:
Rin tilted his lips and wanted to resist. However, Yuki's aura was too cold which made him tremble instinctively, so he had to lower his head and follow up.
Corrected text:
Rin tilted his head and wanted to resist. However, Yuki's aura was too cold which made him tremble instinctively, so he had to lower his head and follow up.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:31:41
Original text:
"You deserve it, little evil!"
Corrected text:
"You deserve it, little devil!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-02 08:31:26
Original text:
Rayne also breathed a long sigh of relief. Then he eagerly came up to Emilia and said, "Hero Emilia, don't worry. No matter what means he uses, the swordmaster "Yuki" and I will help you."
Corrected text:
Rayne also breathed a long sigh of relief. Then he eagerly came up to Emilia and said, "Hero Emilia, don't worry. No matter what means he uses, the swordmaster Yuki and I will help you."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:03:40
Original text:
Rayne also breathed a long sigh of relief. Then he eagerly came up to Emilia and said, "Hero Emilia, don't worry. No matter what means he uses, the swordmaster and I will help you."
Corrected text:
Rayne also breathed a long sigh of relief. Then he eagerly came up to Emilia and said, "Hero Emilia, don't worry. No matter what means he uses, the swordmaster "Yuki" and I will help you."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 19:09:25
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Emilia's sight was blocked, which made her a little angry. Without saying a word, she pulled out her sword. A small tornado suddenly rose from her feet and broke out along the edge of the sword, lifting away Rayne and several others in front of her.
Corrected text:
Emilia's sight was blocked, which made her a little angry. Without saying a word, she pulled out her sword. A small whirlwind suddenly rose from her feet and broke out along the edge of the sword, lifting away Rayne and several others in front of her.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:06:55
Original text:
Emilia's sight was blocked, which made her a little angry. Without saying a word, she pulled out her sword. A small tornado suddenly rose from her feet and broke out along the edge of the sword, lifting Rayne and several others out in front of her.
Corrected text:
Emilia's sight was blocked, which made her a little angry. Without saying a word, she pulled out her sword. A small tornado suddenly rose from her feet and broke out along the edge of the sword, lifting away Rayne and several others in front of her.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:41
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Finally, her field of vision became spacious again, but she couldn't see Rin anymore. Emilia had to focus on Elise.
Corrected text:
Finally, her field of vision became spacious again, however she couldn't see Rin anymore. Emilia had to focus on Elise.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:03:43
Original text:
Finally, her field of vision became spacious again, but she couldn't see Rin anymore. Emilia had to focus on Elise.
Corrected text:
Finally, her field of vision became spacious again, however she couldn't see Rin anymore. Emilia had to focus on Elise.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:07:04
Original text:
Finally, the vision became spacious again, but she couldn't see Rin anymore. Emilia had to focus on Elise.
Corrected text:
Finally, her field of vision became spacious again, but she couldn't see Rin anymore. Emilia had to focus on Elise.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:21:57
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The kuudere girl seems to have received Elise's brain waves, or the guidance of the goddess. She nodded selfishly and the knuckles that were grabbing the scabbard turned white.
Corrected text:
The kuudere girl seems to have received Elise's inner thoughts, or the guidance of the goddess. She nodded self-centredly and the knuckles that were grabbing the scabbard turned white.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:03:51
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Since she got the rank of "hero", she had no time for herself. She had to respond to other people's requests and expectations every day. Only when she hid on the roof, behind the haystack, or in the tree hole, she would have a moment of peace.
Corrected text:
Since she has the class of "hero", she had no time for herself. She had to respond to other people's requests and expectations every day. Only when she hid on a roof, behind the haystack, or in the tree hole, she would have a moment of peace.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:45
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Finally, she came to a new country and a new city. Most of the students in the academy are aristocrats and would stay away from her because she was always with that "evil villain". That's why she could enjoy a period of peacefulness in her life.
Corrected text:
Finally, she came to a new country and a new city. Most of the students in the academy are aristocrats and would stay away from her because she was always with that "evil villain". That's why she could enjoy a period of peace in her life.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:22:08
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Finally, she came to a new country and a new city. Most of the students in the academy are aristocrats and would stay away from her because she was always with that "evil villain", so she could enjoy a period of peaceful life.
Corrected text:
Finally, she came to a new country and a new city. Most of the students in the academy are aristocrats and would stay away from her because she was always with that "evil villain". That's why she could enjoy a period of peacefulness in her life.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:07:26
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Finally, she came to a new country and a new city. Most of the students in the academy are aristocrats and would stay away from her because she was always with that "evil villain" so that she could enjoy a period of peaceful life.
Corrected text:
Finally, she came to a new country and a new city. Most of the students in the academy are aristocrats and would stay away from her because she was always with that "evil villain", so she could enjoy a period of peaceful life.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:22:15
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The moment she was surrounded just now seemed to send her back to that tiring but unforgettable past.
Corrected text:
The moment she was surrounded just then seemed to send her back to that tiring but unforgettable past.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:07:32
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The moment she was surrounded just now seemed to make her return to the tired but unforgettable past.
Corrected text:
The moment she was surrounded just now seemed to send her back to that tiring but unforgettable past.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:32:06
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The moment she was surrounded just now seemed to make her return to the tired but irresistible past.
Corrected text:
The moment she was surrounded just now seemed to make her return to the tired but unforgettable past.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:22:31
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Yuki was silent for a long time, and her dark red eyes were meditating.
Corrected text:
Yuki was silent for a long time, and her dark red eyes were contemplating.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:03:57
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Rin didn't know how she planned to teach him a lesson. Although he was a little afraid, he still pretended to be fearless and said, "I… my stupid sister, I have to do a task… I… I even gave you a potion last time!"
Corrected text:
Rin didn't know how she planned to teach him a lesson. Although he was a little afraid, he still pretended to be fearless and said, "I… my stupid sister, I have to do a task… I… I even gave you a potion last time!".
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:22:36
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Rin didn't know how she planned to teach him a lesson. Although he was a little afraid, he still pretended to be fearless and said, "I… my stupid sister, I have to do a task… I… I gave you a potion last time!"
Corrected text:
Rin didn't know how she planned to teach him a lesson. Although he was a little afraid, he still pretended to be fearless and said, "I… my stupid sister, I have to do a task… I… I even gave you a potion last time!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:11
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However, after a while, Yuki's fist and sword handle still didn't hit his body as he expected. Looking up at Yuki, she looked relaxed, and her cold eyes were even a little gentle.
Corrected text:
However, after a while, Yuki's fist or sword handle still didn't hit his body as he anticipated. Looking up at Yuki, she looked relaxed, and her cold eyes were even a little gentle.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:07:51
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However, after a while, Yuki's fist and sword handle didn't hit his body as he expected. Looking up at Yuki, she looked relaxed, and her cold eyes were even a little gentle.
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However, after a while, Yuki's fist and sword handle still didn't hit his body as he expected. Looking up at Yuki, she looked relaxed, and her cold eyes were even a little gentle.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:16
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Yuki's ears were a little red, but she still stretched out her hand calmly.
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Yuki's ears were a little red, nevertheless she still stretched out her hand calmly.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-12 08:23:22
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This was the first time she steeled herself to exercise her "sister's rights", and it was very successful!
Corrected text:
This was the first time she steeled herself to exercise her "sister's rights,” and it was very successful!
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:22:42
Original text:
This was the first time she nerved herself to exercise her "sister's rights", and it was very successful!
Corrected text:
This was the first time she steeled herself to exercise her "sister's rights", and it was very successful!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:22:57
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"Cough." Rin was a little shy, coughed softly, and his tone softened a lot. "You stupid swordmaster, did you eat any poisonous mushrooms? You… Will you still beat me?"
Corrected text:
"Cough." Rin was a little flustered, coughed softly, and his tone softened a lot. "You stupid swordmaster, did you eat any poisonous mushrooms? … Will you still beat me?"
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:07:59
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"Cough." Rin was a little shy, coughed softly, and his tone softened a lot. "You stupid swordmaster, did you eat any poisonous mushrooms? You… Do you still beat me?"
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"Cough." Rin was a little shy, coughed softly, and his tone softened a lot. "You stupid swordmaster, did you eat any poisonous mushrooms? You… Will you still beat me?"
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:08:14
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With that, she took out a book from her spatial ring and handed it to Rin.
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With that, she took out some books from her spatial ring and handed them to Rin.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:08:27
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This book was as thick as a dictionary. Rin couldn't hold it at all and quickly put it on the table.
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These books were as thick as a dictionary. Rin couldn't hold them at all and quickly put them on the table.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:23:03
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'Well, is this homework?'
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'What, is this homework?'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:23:10
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Rin glanced strangely at the titles of the books, and then his look became more confused.
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Rin glanced strangely at the titles of the books, and then his face became more confused.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:08:32
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Rin glanced strangely at the title of the book, and then his look became more confused.
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Rin glanced strangely at the titles of the books, and then his look became more confused.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:23:26
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Yuki's look remained unchanged, but her tone was indisputable, "In half a month, I'm gonna quiz you. Remember."
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Yuki's face remained unchanged, but her tone was firm, "In half a month, I'm going to quiz you, understand."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:23:36
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Rin screamed and was about to protest, but Yuki went out directly.
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Rin screamed and was about to protest, but Yuki already left.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:23:44
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Great, this is the first step to getting close to my brother!
Corrected text:
Wonderful, this is the first step of getting close to my brother!
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:44
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So far it seems to be very successful. Although little Rin's expression was a little awkward, he didn't prevent her from being close at all!
Corrected text:
So far it seems to be very successful. Although little Rin's expression was a little awkward, he didn't prevent her from getting close at all!
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:23:54
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Now it seems to be very successful. Although little Rin's expression was a little awkward, he didn't prevent her from being close at all!
Corrected text:
So far it seems to be very successful. Although little Rin's expression was a little awkward, he didn't prevent her from being close at all!
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:08:41
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Now it seems to be very successful. Although little Rin's expression was a little awkward, he didn't exclude her from being close at all!
Corrected text:
Now it seems to be very successful. Although little Rin's expression was a little awkward, he didn't prevent her from being close at all!
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Corrected by: Abhinav-Balasubramaniyan , 2022-10-22 10:37:05
Original text:
Hey, but my brother always attracts hatred everywhere. It's really worrying. Moreover, he is so cute and he doesn't realize that there are many bad girls outside. What if he is cheated?
Corrected text:
Hey, but my brother always attracts hatred everywhere. It's really worrying. Moreover, he is so cute and he doesn't realize that there are many bad girls outside. What if he gets cheated?
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:24:17
Original text:
Hey, but my brother always pulls hatred everywhere. It's really worrying. Moreover, he is so cute and he doesn't know that there are many bad girls outside. What if he is cheated?
Corrected text:
Hey, but my brother always attracts hatred everywhere. It's really worrying. Moreover, he is so cute and he doesn't realize that there are many bad girls outside. What if he is cheated?
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Corrected by: Abhinav-Balasubramaniyan , 2022-10-22 10:37:16
Original text:
No, as a sister, I should protect my brother.
Corrected text:
No, as a sister, I should protect my little brother.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-26 08:48:56
Original text:
It's a pity that she still has a mission and can't hide in the dark to protect her brother. She could only hope that the hero and her royal highness could care for little Rin for her.
Corrected text:
It's a pity that she still has a mission and can't hide in the dark to protect her brother. She could only hope that the hero and her royal highness would take care of little Rin for her.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:44
Original text:
Those books are the most basic books. I will supervise my brother's studies and let him increase the knowledge in mind!
Corrected text:
Those books are the most basic books. I will supervise my brother's studies and let him increase his knowledge!
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:25:41
Original text:
Those books are the most basic books. I will supervise my brother's studies and let him keep the knowledge in mind!
Corrected text:
Those books are the most basic books. I will supervise my brother's studies and let him increase the knowledge in mind!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:26:04
Original text:
"Ding, Congratulations, my dear master's ability to pull hatred remains at its proper level. You succeeded in aggravating the protagonist's disgust with you and were severely 'taught' a lesson by the heroine.
Corrected text:
"Ding, Congratulations, my dear master's ability to attract hatred remains at a sufficient level. You succeeded in aggravating the protagonist's disgust with you and were severely taught a lesson by the heroine."
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:49:10
Original text:
Unlock A New Villain Achievement: Strict Love (small).
Corrected text:
Unlocked Achievement: Strict Love (small).
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:49:42
Original text:
Get achievement award: infinite ink magic pen. With it, your sister doesn't have to worry about your studies anymore! "
Corrected text:
Achievement award: infinite ink magic pen. With it, your sister doesn't have to worry about your studies anymore! "
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:26:10
Original text:
Get achievement award: infinite ink magic pen. With it, your sister doesn't have to worry about your study anymore! "
Corrected text:
Get achievement award: infinite ink magic pen. With it, your sister doesn't have to worry about your studies anymore! "
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:20
Original text:
Rin listened to the sound of the system and felt very disheartened. For some reason, he always felt that this garbage system seemed to be smiling happily.
Corrected text:
Rin listened to the sound of the system and felt very disheartened. For some reason, he always felt that this garbage system seemed to be mocking him happily.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:32:21
Original text:
Rin listened to the sound of the system and felt very harsh. For some reason, he always felt that this garbage system seemed to be smiling happily.
Corrected text:
Rin listened to the sound of the system and felt very disheartened. For some reason, he always felt that this garbage system seemed to be smiling happily.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:09:13
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Looking at the thick pile of books on the table, Rin was very wronged.
Corrected text:
Looking at the thick pile of books on the table, Rin felt very wronged.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:22
Original text:
But now, he found out that he… he can't bear such tough love from his swordmaster sister!
Corrected text:
Although now, he found out that he… he can't bear such tough love from his swordmaster sister!
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:26:43
Original text:
But now, he found out that he… he can't bear such a strict love from his swordmaster sister!
Corrected text:
But now, he found out that he… he can't bear such tough love from his swordmaster sister!
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:09:25
Original text:
But now, he found that he… he can't bear such a strict love from his sword master sister!
Corrected text:
But now, he found out that he… he can't bear such a strict love from his swordmaster sister!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-16 14:24:35
Original text:
But now, he found that he… he can't bear such a strict love from his sward master sister!
Corrected text:
But now, he found that he… he can't bear such a strict love from his sword master sister!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:04:26
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Damn it! I will write this down for now. Sooner or later, I'll let my stupid sister do exercises for a couple of months in a row.
Corrected text:
Damn it! I will write this down for now. Sooner or later, I'll let my stupid sister do punishing exercises for a couple of months in a row.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:26:54
Original text:
Damn it! I've written this down. Sooner or later, I'll let my stupid sister do exercises for a month in a row.
Corrected text:
Damn it! I will write this down for now. Sooner or later, I'll let my stupid sister do exercises for a couple of months in a row.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 15:22:39
Original text:
However, hum, this time the poor swordmaster bought so many books. I'm afraid she has run out of money and will eat "dirt" for a long time.
Corrected text:
However, hmm, this time the poor swordmaster bought so many books. I'm afraid she has run out of money and will eat "dirt" for a long time.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:09:38
Original text:
However, hum, this time the poor sword master bought so many books. I'm afraid she has run out of money and will eat "dirt" for a long time.
Corrected text:
However, hum, this time the poor swordmaster bought so many books. I'm afraid she has run out of money and will eat "dirt" for a long time.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-28 17:42:44
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She thought that Yuki was indeed the most reassuring heroine. She not only wouldn't "reach her hand" to her brother, but also took the responsibility of educating and protecting her brother.
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She thought that Yuki was indeed the most reassuring heroine. She not only wouldn't "lay a hand" on her brother, but also took the responsibility of educating and protecting her brother.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 15:22:30
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Of course, it would be better if Yuki could drive away Elise, Emilia, and Suyu, the three shameless women.
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Of course, it would be better if Yuki could drive away Elise, Emilia, and Suyu, the three shameless heroines.
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