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Edited by: anonymous, crisiscore38, Henry, Dave-Hu, Quantum-Videos
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 08:54:22
Original text:
Chapter 37: I, the Master of the Hero, Beat You to Death
Corrected text:
Chapter 37: I the Master of the Hero, Will Beat You to Death
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 08:54:35
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"I don't care if you have registered as an adventurer before, but from today on, you must re-register."
Corrected text:
"I don't care if you had registered as an adventurer previously, but starting today, you must re-register."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 08:54:45
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Yuki stood in front of the students with a sword. Because of her strong aura, the people in the whole hall were afraid to breathe.
Corrected text:
Yuki stood in front of the students with a sword. Because of her formidable aura, the people in the hall were afraid to breathe.
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Corrected by: Dave-Hu , 2022-06-21 08:44:16
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Only the receptionist of the adventurers' guild could maintain a polite and composed smile. In contrast, the other person was a teenager standing in the front row, yawning from time to time.
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Only the receptionist of the adventurers' guild could maintain a polite and composed smile in front of a teenager standing in the front row while yawning from time to time.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:03:08
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Only the receptionist of the adventurers' guild could maintain a polite and composed smile, where as the other person was a teenager standing in the front row, yawning from time to time.
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Only the receptionist of the adventurers' guild could maintain a polite and composed smile. In contrast, the other person was a teenager standing in the front row, yawning from time to time.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-28 18:03:03
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Only the receptionist of the adventurers' guild could maintain a polite and composed smile, where as the other person was a teenager standing in the front row, yawning from time to time.
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Only the receptionist of the adventurers' guild could maintain a polite and composed smile. In contrast, the other person was a teenager standing in the front row, yawning from time to time.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:27:09
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Only the receptionist of the adventurers' guild could maintain a polite and composed smile, the only other person was a teenager standing in the front row, yawning from time to time.
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Only the receptionist of the adventurers' guild could maintain a polite and composed smile, where as the other person was a teenager standing in the front row, yawning from time to time.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 08:54:59
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Only the receptionist of the adventurers' guild could also maintain a polite and formulaic smile, and the other person was a teenager standing in the front row, yawning from time to time.
Corrected text:
Only the receptionist of the adventurers' guild could maintain a polite and composed smile, the only other person was a teenager standing in the front row, yawning from time to time.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 15:14:31
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"Your range of activities can only be in the periphery of the Elle forest. Once you go deep into it, you will bear the consequences, whether you are injured or dead."
Corrected text:
"Your range of activities can only be in the outer layer of the Elle forest. If you go too deep, you will bear serious consequences, whether you are injured or dead."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:38:57
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"In addition, the signal card given to you must be carried with you. In case of any accident, you must use it. The TA will arrive as soon as possible."
Corrected text:
"In addition, the signal card given to you must be carried with you. In the case of any accidents, you should use it. The TA will arrive as soon as possible."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:27:40
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"Finally, I would like to remind you that you need 20 adventure points each, not as a team. You must cooperate sincerely and work together. Ok, that's all I need to tell you. Now, everyone register according to the roll call."
Corrected text:
"Finally, I would like to remind you that you need 20 adventure points each, not including as a team. You must cooperate earnestly and work together. Ok, that's all I need to tell you. Now, everyone register according to the roll call."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:39:15
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"Finally, I would like to remind you that you need 20 adventure points each, not as a team. You must cooperate sincerely and work together. So, that's all I need to notice you. Now, everyone registers according to the roll call."
Corrected text:
"Finally, I would like to remind you that you need 20 adventure points each, not as a team. You must cooperate sincerely and work together. Ok, that's all I need to tell you. Now, everyone register according to the roll call."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:02:16
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"Finally, I would like to remind you that 20 adventure points are for everyone, not for a team. You must cooperate sincerely and work together. So, that's all I need to notice you. Now, everyone registers according to the roll call."
Corrected text:
"Finally, I would like to remind you that you need 20 adventure points each, not as a team. You must cooperate sincerely and work together. So, that's all I need to notice you. Now, everyone registers according to the roll call."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:39:51
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Yuki was actually reluctant to be a teacher because she had to teach her students and talk a lot. Every time, she had to prepare her speech in advance in her heart.
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Yuki was actually reluctant to be a teacher because she had to teach her students and talk a lot. Personally, every time she had to prepare what was needed to be said in advance.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:39:33
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Yuki was actually reluctant to be a teacher because she had to teach her students and talk a lot. Every time, she had to prepare her speech in advance in her heart.
Corrected text:
Yuki was actually reluctant to be a teacher because she had to teach her students and talk a lot. Personally, every time she had to prepare what was needed to be said in advance.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:02:28
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Yuki was actually reluctant to be a teacher because she had to teach her students and say too much. Every time, she had to prepare her speech in advance in her heart.
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Yuki was actually reluctant to be a teacher because she had to teach her students and talk a lot. Every time, she had to prepare her speech in advance in her heart.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:40:23
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But…
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Although …
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:02:36
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She glanced over Rin, who yawned from time to time. It was obvious that he didn't have a good rest last night.
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She glanced over at Rin, who yawned from time to time. It was obvious that he didn't have a good rest last night.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:27:52
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From another perspective, if she just needed to educate her brother, she'd be very happy.
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From another perspective, if she needs to educate her brother she'd be ecstatic.
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Corrected by: Quantum-Videos , 2022-06-21 08:44:40
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'My brother doesn't look energetic. I didn't come back last night. What happened to him?'
Corrected text:
'My brother doesn't look energetic. He didn't come back last night. What happened to him?'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:55:29
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The students registered in an orderly way, and the internship adventure teams were established one by one.
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The students registered in an orderly way, and the trainee adventurer teams were established one by one.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:28:10
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Then they excitedly searched for tasks around the taskbar. Everyone knows that a task that is easy and well rewarded will be quickly taken away.
Corrected text:
Then they excitedly searched for tasks around the quest board. Everyone knows that a task that is easy and well rewarded will be quickly taken away.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:02:52
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Then they excitedly searched for tasks around the taskbar. Everyone knows that a task that is easy and well rewarded is easy to be taken away.
Corrected text:
Then they excitedly searched for tasks around the taskbar. Everyone knows that a task that is easy and well rewarded will be quickly taken away.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:40:32
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"There, it's her! It's her! I asked about it yesterday!"
Corrected text:
"There, it's her! It's her! I asked about her yesterday!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:28:17
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Emilia had just registered and was still in a daze outside, silently waiting for Rin to choose a task. At the same time, she was surrounded by a turbulent crowd.
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Emilia had just registered and was still in a daze outside, silently waiting for Rin to choose a task. While waiting, she was surrounded by a turbulent crowd.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:40:43
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Emilia had just registered and was still in a daze outside, silently waiting for Rin to choose a task. At this time, she was surrounded by a turbulent crowd.
Corrected text:
Emilia had just registered and was still in a daze outside, silently waiting for Rin to choose a task. At the same time, she was surrounded by a turbulent crowd.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:28:00
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The civilians who surrounded her, without exception, looked at her with hope in their eyes.
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The civilians who surrounded her, without exception, looked at her with hope.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:42:03
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"Miss Hero, I'm a herdsman. I lost several sheeps. It seems that the goblins have taken them away… please help me, Miss Hero!"
Corrected text:
"Miss Hero, I'm a shepherd. I lost several sheeps. It seems that the goblins have taken them away… please help me, Miss Hero!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:02:58
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"Miss Hero, I'm a herdsman. I lost several sheep. It seems that the goblins had taken them away… please help me, Miss Hero!"
Corrected text:
"Miss Hero, I'm a herdsman. I lost several sheeps. It seems that the goblins have taken them away… please help me, Miss Hero!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:55:44
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So why does everyone believe that the hero will help everyone and you can ask her to do anything trivial for you?
Corrected text:
So why does everyone believe that the hero will help everyone and for them to ask her to do anything trivial?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:03:07
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So why does everyone believe that the hero will help everyone and can ask her to do anything trivial for you?
Corrected text:
So why does everyone believe that the hero will help everyone and you can ask her to do anything trivial for you?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:29:22
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Perhaps the former heroes were very warm-hearted, or they wanted to maintain the supreme glory of being the hero.
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Perhaps the former heroes were compassionate, or they wanted to maintain the supreme prestige of being a hero.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:05:39
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Perhaps the former heroes were very warm-hearted, or because they wanted to maintain the supreme glory of being the hero.
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Perhaps the former heroes were very warm-hearted, or they wanted to maintain the supreme glory of being the hero.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:29:41
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Think about the assassination of the previous hero hundreds of years ago.
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Think about the assassination of the previous hero occurring hundreds of years ago.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-31 13:14:42
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The guy was self-centered and had no empathy; whoever creates a bad reputation for a hero should be die!
Corrected text:
The guy was self-centered and had no empathy; whoever creates a bad reputation for a hero should be dead!
Corrected by: Dave-Hu , 2022-06-21 08:44:28
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The guy was self-centered and had no empathy; creating a bad reputation for a hero should be dead!
Corrected text:
The guy was self-centered and had no empathy; whoever creates a bad reputation for a hero should be die!
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:03:29
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The guy was self-centered and had no empathy, creating a bad reputation for a hero should be dead!
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The guy was self-centered and had no empathy; creating a bad reputation for a hero should be dead!
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:30:01
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The guy who is self-centered and has no empathy and brings a bad reputation to the hero shouldn't live!
Corrected text:
The guy was self-centred and had no empathy, creating a bad reputation for a hero should be dead!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:30:10
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Right, I can take this opportunity to finish my villain plot.
Corrected text:
Right, I can take this opportunity to finish my villainous plot.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:03:31
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His villain task this time was to play an arrogant evil nobleman, bully civilians, provoke the protagonist, and then be beaten by the upright swordmaster.
Corrected text:
His villain’s task this time was to play an arrogant evil nobleman, bully civilians, provoke the protagonist, and then be beaten by the upright swordmaster.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:42:13
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Hey, I hope Yuki will do it gently for the sake of the potions I gave her.
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Hey, I hope Yuki will do it carefully for the sake of the potions I gave her.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:03:57
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When people looked around, they saw a noble boy with a disdained look on his face coming here.
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When people looked around, they saw a noble boy with a disdainful look on his face coming here.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:05:51
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"Hey, why are you just looking? Come and get these dogs get out of my way!"
Corrected text:
"Hey, why are you just looking? Come and get these dogs out of my way!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 08:43:12
Original text:
"Hey, why are you just looking? Come and let these doggeries get out of my way!"
Corrected text:
"Hey, why are you just looking? Come and get these dogs get out of my way!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 08:43:25
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His Henchman No. 1 and Henchman No. 2 immediately left the taskbar, blocked in front of Rin, and scolded the civilians around.
Corrected text:
His Henchman No. 1 and Henchman No. 2 immediately left the task board, moved in front of Rin, and scolded the civilians around him.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:30:17
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Rin swaggered up to Emilia and said loudly, "Lowly insects, why are you surrounding this waste Hero?"
Corrected text:
Rin swaggered up to Emilia and said loudly, "Lowly insects, why are you surrounding this good for nothing Hero?"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:42:25
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Rin swaggered up to Emilia and said loudly, "Low insects, why are you surrounding this waste Hero?"
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Rin swaggered up to Emilia and said loudly, "Lowly insects, why are you surrounding this waste Hero?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:30:27
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When others heard him abusing Miss Hero so much, they were all pissed off and looked at him with anger.
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When others heard him insulting Miss Hero so much, they were all pissed off and looked at him with anger.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:30:50
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Although civilians have the habit of looking for the hero no matter how trivial their things are, actually, they respect the hero very much.
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Although civilians had the habit of looking for the hero no matter how trivial their things are, they actually respect the hero very much.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:04:06
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"What's the noise? Are you loud?"
Corrected text:
"What's the noise? Why are you so loud?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:30:57
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Rin shook his head, "A group of fools who don't know the etiquette at all. If you make any noise again, I will let the city guards throw you into prison!"
Corrected text:
Rin shook his head, "A group of fools who don't know etiquette at all. If you make any noise again, I will let the city guards throw you into prison!"
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:06:02
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Rin shook his head, "A group of fools who don't know the etiquette at all. If you make any noise again, I will let the city guard throw you into prison!"
Corrected text:
Rin shook his head, "A group of fools who don't know the etiquette at all. If you make any noise again, I will let the city guards throw you into prison!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-28 18:03:34
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"Don't think because you are a noble, you can insult and tease civilians! Don't forget who provides the wealth of your family!"
Corrected text:
"Don't think just because you are a noble, you can insult and mock civilians! Don't forget who generates the wealth for your family!"
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-25 09:06:12
Original text:
"Don't think because you are a noble, you can insult and tease the civilians! Don't forget who provides the wealth of your family!"
Corrected text:
"Don't think because you are a noble, you can insult and tease civilians! Don't forget who provides the wealth of your family!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:04:13
Original text:
"Don't think you are noble, so you can insult and tease the civilians! Don't forget who provides the wealth of your family!"
Corrected text:
"Don't think because you are a noble, you can insult and tease the civilians! Don't forget who provides the wealth of your family!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:04:19
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With that, he also walked up to Emilia and clapped his hands at the others, "Guys, he's just tarnishing the image of our academy. Don't be afraid of him, because I am here. I'll try my best to help you with your request."
Corrected text:
With that, he also walked up to Emilia and clapped his hands at the others, "Guys, he's just tarnishing the image of our academy. Don't be afraid of him, because I am here. I'll try my best to help you with your requests."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:04:25
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"Are you making me laugh?"
Corrected text:
"Are you trying to make me laugh?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:31:16
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Unconsciously, he had opened the magic book, and the magic burst out.
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Unconsciously, he had opened a magic book, sending out magic.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:31:22
Original text:
"This waste Hero is my teammate now. I'll kill anyone who wants to delay my task! I'm not afraid to tell you that the hero is my slave for some evil and horrible reason. She has to serve me for a duration of time! Do you dare to call for my slave?"
Corrected text:
"This good for nothing Hero is my teammate now. I'll kill anyone who wants to delay my task! I'm not afraid to tell you that the hero is my slave for some evil and horrible reason. She has to serve me for a duration of time! Do you dare to call for my slave?"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:56:05
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"This waste Hero is my teammate now. I'll kill anyone who wants to delay my task! I'm not afraid to tell you that the hero is my slave for some dark and horrible reason. She has to serve me during this period of time! Do you dare to call my slave?"
Corrected text:
"This waste Hero is my teammate now. I'll kill anyone who wants to delay my task! I'm not afraid to tell you that the hero is my slave for some evil and horrible reason. She has to serve me for a duration of time! Do you dare to call for my slave?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 08:41:50
Original text:
"This waste Hero is my teammate now. I'll kill anyone who wants to delay my task! I'm not afraid to tell you that the hero is my slave for some reason. She has to serve me during this period of time! Do you dare to call my slave?"
Corrected text:
"This waste Hero is my teammate now. I'll kill anyone who wants to delay my task! I'm not afraid to tell you that the hero is my slave for some dark and horrible reason. She has to serve me during this period of time! Do you dare to call my slave?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:56:34
Original text:
"Look, does the waste Hero retort to me? The contract is still in my hand, no one can deny it. If you don't accept it, come to me now. By the way, I'm the future Grand Duke. If you're not afraid of death, just come!"
Corrected text:
"Look, does the good for nothing Hero disobey me? The contract is still in my hand, no one can refuse it . If you don't accept it, come out now. By the way, I will be the future Grand Duke. If you're not afraid of death, come!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:04:33
Original text:
"Look, does the waste Hero retort me? The contract is still in my hand, no one can deny it. If you don't accept it, come to me now. By the way, I'm the future Grand Duke. If you're not afraid of death, just come!"
Corrected text:
"Look, does the waste Hero retort to me? The contract is still in my hand, no one can deny it. If you don't accept it, come to me now. By the way, I'm the future Grand Duke. If you're not afraid of death, just come!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:04:42
Original text:
The originally angry people immediately calmed down and looked at each other. The fear of nobles made them dare not resist at all.
Corrected text:
The originally angry people immediately calmed down and looked at each other. The fear of nobles made them not dare to resist at all.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:42:39
Original text:
Only Rayne was trembling with anger. It was obvious that Rin refreshed his impression of scum again.
Corrected text:
Only Rayne was trembling with anger. It was obvious that Rin renewed his impression of scum again.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:31:50
Original text:
"Didn't you have tasks before? What are you doing? Don't you go to register your tasks? Are you fooling me? You, you, and you, go to publish your task!"
Corrected text:
"Didn't you have tasks before? What are you doing? Don't you need to register your tasks? Are you fooling me? You, you, and you, go publish your task!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:31:56
Original text:
Being threatened by him, people again rushed to the taskbar.
Corrected text:
Being threatened by him, people again rushed to the quest board.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:32:02
Original text:
They originally planned to publish their tasks, but because they heard that the hero was also there, they rushed to please the hero rather than publish the tasks.
Corrected text:
They originally planned to publish their tasks, but because they heard that the hero was there, they rushed to please the hero rather than publish the tasks.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:32:13
Original text:
Rin dug his ears and tasked, "What a group of scum. It's wasting my time."
Corrected text:
Rin dug his ears and tsked, "What a group of scum. It's wasting my time."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:32:24
Original text:
"Fenix! How dare you look down on civilians! Also, what despicable means did you use to enslave Miss Hero? You… you scum! I challenge you to a duel!"
Corrected text:
"Fenix! How dare you look down on civilians! What despicable means did you use to enslave Miss Hero? You… you scum! I challenge you to a duel!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:56:40
Original text:
"Fenix! How dare you look down on civilians! And what despicable means did you use to enslave Miss Hero? You… you scum! I challenge you to a duel!"
Corrected text:
"Fenix! How dare you look down on civilians! Also, what despicable means did you use to enslave Miss Hero? You… you scum! I challenge you to a duel!"
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