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Edited by: anonymous, Fyro-Kaito, Henry, crisiscore38, VVLX, Austin-Kelley, Lea-Lin
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Corrected by: Austin-Kelley , 2022-07-22 08:08:07
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Rin sat at his desk with the universal magic beast Atlas of Elle Forest in front of him.
Corrected text:
Rin sat at his desk with the Universal Magic Beast Atlas of Elle Forest in front of him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-25 08:57:50
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Rin sat at his desk with a universal magic beast Atlas of Elle Forest in front of him.
Corrected text:
Rin sat at his desk with the universal magic beast Atlas of Elle Forest in front of him.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:00:48
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Rin sat at his desk with a universal magic beast Atlas of Elle forest in front of him.
Corrected text:
Rin sat at his desk with a universal magic beast Atlas of Elle Forest in front of him.
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Corrected by: VVLX , 2022-07-13 09:56:39
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Presently, he was a little absent-minded, and his eyebrows were creased from time to time.
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Presently, he was a little absent-minded, and his eyebrows creased from time to time.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 19:44:55
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But now, he was a little absent-minded, and his eyebrows were locked together from time to time.
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Presently, he was a little absent-minded, and his eyebrows were creased from time to time.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:00:51
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He was still wondering why the "Scarlet Leaf" appeared in the initial main task.
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He was still wondering why "Scarlet Leaf" appeared in the initial main task.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:58:22
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After all, it's ridiculous for a minor boss like her to appear in the "novice village".
Corrected text:
After all, it's ridiculous for a minor boss like her to appear in a "novice village".
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-23 20:27:03
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After all, it's ridiculous for such a minor boss to appear in the "novice village".
Corrected text:
After all, it's ridiculous for a minor boss like her to appear in the "novice village".
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:59:19
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And he himself, as a fire magician, is also very strong compared to his classmates.
Corrected text:
He himself, as a fire magician, is also very formidable compared to his classmates.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-10 08:31:08
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If the protagonist's team were only an average team, then the gap in combat power between their teams would be too large.
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If the protagonist's team was only an average team, then the gap in combat power between their teams would be too large.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:01:07
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If the protagonist's team were only an average team, the gap in combat power between their teams would be too large.
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If the protagonist's team were only an average team, then the gap in combat power between their teams would be too large.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:59:31
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Rin felt that Emilia and Elise would absolutely not help the protagonist, so in order to continue the plot, the will of the world gave his team another strong teammate.
Corrected text:
Rin felt that Emilia and Elise would absolutely not help the protagonist, so in order to continue the plot, the laws of the world gave his team another strong teammate.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:58:50
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Rin felt that Emilia and Elise were impossible to help the protagonist, so in order to continue the plot, the will of the world gave his team another strong teammate.
Corrected text:
Rin felt that Emilia and Elise would absolutely not help the protagonist, so in order to continue the plot, the will of the world gave his team another strong teammate.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:01:19
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Rin vaguely remembered that when Sha Ye first appeared in the novel, she easily defeated Yuki, so her level was at least Level 50 or 60.
Corrected text:
Rin vaguely remembered that when Sha Ye first appeared in the novel, she easily defeated Yuki, therefore, her level was at least around Level 50 or 60.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:58:57
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As one of the few demon hybrids that could survive in the history of the demon race, Sha Ye integrated the advantages between the two races.
Corrected text:
As one of the few demon hybrids that could survive in the history of the demon race, Sha Ye inherited the advantages of the two races.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 08:59:43
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As a succubus demon, she not only retained the camouflage and concealment talents but also the trait of charm in a succubus.
Corrected text:
As a succubus demon, she not only retained the camouflage and concealment talents, but also the trait of charm in a succubus.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:01:45
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As a succubus demon, she not only retained the camouflage and concealment talents but also the unusual charm of a succubus.
Corrected text:
As a succubus demon, she not only retained the camouflage and concealment talents but also the trait of charm in a succubus.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:59:06
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As a succubus demon, she not only retained the camouflage and concealment talent as well as the unusual charm of succubus.
Corrected text:
As a succubus demon, she not only retained the camouflage and concealment talents but also the unusual charm of a succubus.
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Corrected by: Fyro-Kaito , 2022-05-21 21:26:08
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At the same time, she inherited her human father's magic talent and was able to use fire magic. Like the protogonist, she mastered two classes.
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At the same time, she inherited her human father's magic talent and was able to use fire magic. Like the protagonist, she mastered two classes.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:59:23
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At present, even if Rin, Elise, and Emilia were combined together, they were impossible to defeat Sha Ye.
Corrected text:
At present, even if Rin, Elise, and Emilia were to work together, it was impossible for them to defeat Sha Ye.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:02:16
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Think about it carefully. The demon discovered by the protagonist this time was the current Demon King's subordinate. As Suyu, the previous Demon King's subordinate, it was not surprising to see her help the protagonist.
Corrected text:
Thinking about it carefully. The demon discovered by the protagonist at this time was the current Demon King's subordinate. As Suyu is the previous Demon King's subordinate, it was not surprising to see her help the protagonist.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:12:37
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Maybe she was also carrying a task given by Suyu.
Corrected text:
Maybe she was also following orders given by Suyu.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:59:30
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Maybe she also carried the task given by Suyu.
Corrected text:
Maybe she was also carrying a task given by Suyu.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:12:48
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For the moment, Rin could only give that kind of argument.
Corrected text:
At this time, Rin could only come up with that kind of reasoning.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-23 19:45:47
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For the moment, Rin could only give that kind of argument.
Corrected text:
For the moment, that was the best reason Rin could find.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:01:22
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For the moment, Rin could only give such a more argument.
Corrected text:
For the moment, Rin could only give that kind of argument.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:39:24
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If he doesn't casually provoke her, there should be no issue.
Corrected text:
As long as he doesn't casually provoke her, there shouldn't be any issues.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:00:39
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If he doesn't provoke her at ordinary times, there should be no issue.
Corrected text:
If he doesn't casually provoke her, there should be no issue.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:12:56
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If he doesn't provoke her at ordinary times, there should be no problem.
Corrected text:
If he doesn't provoke her at ordinary times, there should be no issue.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:38:34
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After all, Sha Ye is still hiding her identity and won't expose herself easily.
Corrected text:
After all, Sha Ye is currently hiding her identity and won't expose herself so easily.
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Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-23 19:46:09
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Rin rubbed his eyebrows, refocused his attention on the book and the map on one side, took out his pen, and carefully made various signs.
Corrected text:
Rin rubbed his eyebrows, refocused his attention on the book and the map on one side, took out his pen, and carefully wrote various signs.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:00:53
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Sigh. The silly elk and waste Hero don't look like people who can use their brains. He's the only "wise person" in the team.
Corrected text:
Sigh. The silly elk and waste Hero don't look like people who can use their brains. He's the only wise person in the team.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:13:05
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In order to let him join the main plot in time, the system had informed him of the final location in advance.
Corrected text:
In order to let him participate in the main plot in time, the system had informed him of the final location in advance.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-02 08:31:51
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Rin just needed to plan the route, mark the demons that may appear, and accept the task on the way at the adventure guild tomorrow.
Corrected text:
Rin just needed to plan the route, mark the demons that may appear, and accept the task on the way to the adventure guild tomorrow.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:01:07
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Rin just needed to make the route, mark the demons that may appear, and take the task on the way at the adventure guild tomorrow.
Corrected text:
Rin just needed to plan the route, mark the demons that may appear, and accept the task on the way at the adventure guild tomorrow.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:13:17
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Rin just needed to make the route, marked the demons that may appear, and take the task on the way at the adventure guild tomorrow.
Corrected text:
Rin just needed to make the route, mark the demons that may appear, and take the task on the way to the adventure guild tomorrow.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-23 19:46:41
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Rin just needed to make the route, marked the demons that may appear, and take the task on the way at the adventure guild tomorrow.
Corrected text:
Rin just needed to make the route, mark the demons that may appear, and take the task on the way at the adventure guild tomorrow.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:01:30
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Rin just needed to make the route, marked the demons that may appear, and take the task on the way in the adventure guild tomorrow.
Corrected text:
Rin just needed to make the route, marked the demons that may appear, and take the task on the way at the adventure guild tomorrow.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:01:18
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Planning well in advance could save him a lot of time. Also joining the mainline task in time, could help him earn adventure points. Perfect.
Corrected text:
Planning well in advance could save him a lot of time. Also joining the main plot in time, could help him earn adventure points. Perfect.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:13:31
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Planning well in advance could save him a lot of time. While joining the mainline task in time, he could also earn adventure points. Perfect.
Corrected text:
Planning well in advance could save him a lot of time. Also joining the mainline task in time, could help him earn adventure points. Perfect.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:14:01
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Rin was concentrating on recording when he heard a slight knock on the door. He knew that Christo was coming and put down his pen.
Corrected text:
Rin was concentrating on recording when he heard a subtle knock on the door. He knew that Christo was coming and put down his pen.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:01:57
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At this time, Christo was carefully standing at the door, looking left and right from time to time, for fear of being noticed. Even his knocking at the door was meek.
Corrected text:
At this time, Christo was carefully standing at the door, looking left and right from time to time, for the fear of being noticed. Even his knocking at the door was meek.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:13:53
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At this time, Christo was carefully standing at the door, looking left and right from time to time, for fear of being found. Even his knocking at the door was gentle.
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At this time, Christo was carefully standing at the door, looking left and right from time to time, for fear of noticed. Even his knocking at the door was meek.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:14:11
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Soon, the door was opened. Christo hesitated for a moment and braved himself to go in.
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Soon, the door was opened. Christo hesitated for a moment, but forced himself to go in.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:14:18
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He glanced around and didn't find Rin. He was so scared that he turned around and was about to run out.
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He glanced around and didn't find Rin. He was so frightened that he turned around and was about to escape.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:14:39
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However, Rin had come out from behind the door and successfully closed the door. He also locked it.
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However, Rin had come out from behind the door in time and succeeded in closing and locking the door.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:02:10
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Christo was in a panic, sat down on the ground, and almost cried out.
Corrected text:
Christo was in a panic, sat down on the ground, almost crying out.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:02:27
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For some reason, Rin would somehow find a trace of fun when bullying this guy.
Corrected text:
For some reason, Rin would somehow find it was slightly amusing when bullying this guy.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:01:37
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For some reason, Rin would somehow find a trace of fun by bullying this guy.
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For some reason, Rin would somehow find a trace of fun when bullying this guy.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:01:46
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He encircled his arm and mocked, "Stupid Christo, come here. What are you running for?"
Corrected text:
He crossed his arms and mocked, "Stupid Christo, come here. What are you running for?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:02:59
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Christo sniffed and tried not to cry, and subconsciously put his arm in front of his chest.
Corrected text:
Christo sniffed and tried not to cry, and subconsciously put his arms in front of his chest.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:15:14
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Christo sniffed and tried not to cry, but subconsciously put his arm in front of his chest.
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Christo sniffed and tried not to cry, and subconsciously put his arm in front of his chest.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:01:53
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Christo sucked his nose and tried not to cry, but subconsciously put his arm in front of his chest.
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Christo sniffed and tried not to cry, but subconsciously put his arm in front of his chest.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:15:21
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"Fen... Master Fenix, I... I didn't tell anyone. No one knows I'm coming."
Corrected text:
"Fen... Master Fenix, I... I didn't tell anyone. No one knows I came."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:15:31
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"Humph, I don't think that you have the courage. Get up."
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"Humph, I didn’t think that you had the courage. Get up."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:03:11
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Christo stood up and looked down at his toes.
Corrected text:
Christo stood up and looked down at his feet.
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-23 19:46:53
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Christo stood up and looked down at the toes of his feet.
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Christo stood up and looked down at his toes.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:15:39
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Looking at his hesitant look, Rin felt that it was time to use some force.
Corrected text:
Looking at his conflicted look, Rin felt that it was time to use some force.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:16:02
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So he reached out to hold Christo's forehead, lifted his head up, and leaned forward to show his oppression.
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So he reached out to grab Christo's forehead, lifted his head up, and leaned forward to show his intimidation.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:03:23
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With that, the tip of his nose shrugged. There was a smell of black tea on Christo's body.
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With this threat, the tip of his nose shivered. There was a smell of black tea on Christo's body.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:03:33
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Christo's eyes became watery, but he didn't dare to resist at all. He could only stammer what he knew.
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Christo's eyes became watery, but he didn't dare to resist at all. He could only stammer about what he knew.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:28:51
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Rayne, Level 7 Alchemist, can make strange things and high-quality potions.
Corrected text:
Rayne, Level 7 Alchemist, can make unusual objects and high-quality potions.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:29:00
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Victor, Level 9 Shield Warrior, has "Barrier" talent which can increase his defense.
Corrected text:
Victor, Level 9 Shield Warrior, has a "Barrier" talent which increases his defense.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:03:52
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As for Sha Ye, he thought this girl was dreadful, so he didn't dare to approach her at all. He only knew that she was a Level 9 Fire Magician.
Corrected text:
As for Sha Ye, he thought this girl was dreadful, so he doesn’t dare to approach her at all. He only knew that she was a Level 9 Fire Magician.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:29:09
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As for Sha Ye, he thought this girl was terrible, so he didn't dare to approach her at all. He only knew that she was a Level 9 Fire Magician.
Corrected text:
As for Sha Ye, he thought this girl was dreadful, so he didn't dare to approach her at all. He only knew that she was a Level 9 Fire Magician.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:29:27
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It is worth mentioning that Sha Ye was absent when they were grouping. Later, she didn't come with the school carriage but arrived in her own family's carriage a few hours in advance.
Corrected text:
It is worth mentioning that Sha Ye was absent when they were meeting up. Later, she didn't come in the school’s carriage but arrived in her own family's carriage a few hours in advance.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:29:43
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In Christo's eyes, Sha Ye and Rayne have a good relationship. She often asks Rayne questions about alchemy. Victor has fallen in love with Sha Ye at first sight, so he is very jealous of Rayne. The atmosphere between them is subtle.
Corrected text:
In Christo's eyes, Sha Ye and Rayne have a good relationship. She often asks Rayne questions about alchemy. Victor had fallen in love with Sha Ye at first sight, so he is very jealous of Rayne. The atmosphere between them is very delicate.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:02:02
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In Christo's eyes, Sha Ye and Rayne have a good relationship. She often asks Rayne questions about alchemy. Victor falls in love with Shaye at first sight, so he is very jealous of Rayne. The atmosphere between them is subtle.
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In Christo's eyes, Sha Ye and Rayne have a good relationship. She often asks Rayne questions about alchemy. Victor has fallen in love with Sha Ye at first sight, so he is very jealous of Rayne. The atmosphere between them is subtle.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:04:10
Original text:
"OK, seems like there's nothing more from you. By the way..."
Corrected text:
"OK, seems like you have nothing else to say. By the way..."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:29:51
Original text:
"OK, there's nothing more from you. By the way..."
Corrected text:
"OK, seems like there's nothing more from you. By the way..."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 11:02:08
Original text:
"OK, there's nothing for you. By the way..."
Corrected text:
"OK, there's nothing more from you. By the way..."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:30:50
Original text:
Rin leaned close to his forehead and poked away the bangs. Seeing that the last wound had recovered, he was relaxed.
Corrected text:
Rin leaned close to his face and moved away his fringe. Seeing that his wound from last time had recovered, he relaxed.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-25 09:04:24
Original text:
But Rin remembered that Christo always avoided him as if he was a ghost. He grinned, flashing his teeth, "I'm warning you, if I call you later, you must be ready, understand?!"
Corrected text:
But Rin remembered that Christo always avoided him as if he was a monster. He grinned, flashing his teeth, "I'm warning you, if I call you later, you must be ready, understand?!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:31:08
Original text:
But Rin remembered that Christo always avoided him as if he was a ghost. He grinned his teeth again, "I'm warning you, if I call you later, you must be on call, remember?!"
Corrected text:
But Rin remembered that Christo always avoided him as if he was a ghost. He grinned, flashing his teeth, "I'm warning you, if I call you later, you must be ready, understand?!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:31:31
Original text:
"Cry! Cry! Cry! Why are you acting like a woman all day? Did you think I will eat you or what? If you don't stop crying, I'll break your legs!"
Corrected text:
"Cry! Cry! Cry! Why are you acting like a sissy all the time? Do you think I will eat you or what? If you don't stop crying, I'll break your legs!"
Corrected by: crisiscore38 , 2022-05-23 19:47:28
Original text:
"Cry! Cry! Cry! Why are you acting like a woman all day? Did you think I will eat you or what? If you don't stop crying, I'll break your legs!"
Corrected text:
"Cry! Cry! Cry! Why are you acting like a woman all day? Do you think I will eat you or what? If you don't stop crying, I'll break your legs!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:17:12
Original text:
"Cry! Cry! Cry! What are you doing like a woman all day? Will I eat you or what? If you don't stop crying, I'll break your leg!"
Corrected text:
"Cry! Cry! Cry! Why are you acting like a woman all day? Did you think I will eat you or what? If you don't stop crying, I'll break your legs!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:16:31
Original text:
"Cry! Cry! Cry! What are you doing like a woman all day? Will I eat you or what? If you don't stop crying, I'll break your leg!"
Corrected text:
"Cry! Cry! Cry! Why are you acting like a woman all day? Did you think I will eat you or what? If you don't stop crying, I'll break your legs!"
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