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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-21 09:58:12
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Emilia was still in a daze. She suddenly found that they stopped, so she stopped and looked along Elise's sight.
Corrected text:
Emilia was still in a daze. She suddenly found that they stopped, so she stopped and followed Elise's line of sight.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-21 09:58:18
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There were only two possibilities for this situation. One was that the girl's level exceeded her too much. A typical example was Yuki.
Corrected text:
There were only two possibilities for this situation. One was that the girl's level exceeded hers too much. A typical example was Yuki.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:00:41
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The second was camouflage. Whether her character panel was hidden by a prop, her special talent, or some kind of magic, these were very rare abilities.
Corrected text:
The second was camouflage. Whether her character panel was hidden by a item, a special talent, or some kind of magic, these were very rare abilities.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:00:30
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Rin was suddenly blocked behind by the two girls. He also found the problem and looked at the purple-haired girl carefully, only to find that this girl looked very cute.
Corrected text:
Rin was suddenly obstructed behind by the two girls. He found what the problem was and looked at the purple-haired girl carefully, only to find that this girl looked very cute.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:00:07
Original text:
There were so many women in the novel that he couldn't match the girl with a specific character in the novel for a moment.
Corrected text:
There were so many girls in the novel that presently, he couldn't match the girl with a particular character he knew in the novel.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:55:43
Original text:
There were so many women in the novel that he couldn't match the girl with a certain role in the novel for a moment.
Corrected text:
There were so many women in the novel that he couldn't match the girl with a specific character in the novel for a moment.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:08:41
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"Rayne, I said before that we should have a good rest in the afternoon. Let's forget it. Sha Ye is just a delicate girl. She had to go to inquire about intelligence with you in the afternoon for such a long time. She didn't eat any food."
Corrected text:
"Rayne, I said before that we should have a good rest in the afternoon. Let's forget it. Sha Ye is just a delicate girl. She had to go to inquire about information with you in the afternoon for such a long time. She also didn't end up eating any food."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:55:54
Original text:
"Rayne, I said before that we should have a good rest in the afternoon. Let's forget it. Sha Ye is just a delicate girl. She has to go to inquire about intelligence with you in the afternoon for such a long time. She didn't eat any food."
Corrected text:
"Rayne, I said before that we should have a good rest in the afternoon. Let's forget it. Sha Ye is just a delicate girl. She had to go to inquire about intelligence with you in the afternoon for such a long time. She didn't eat any food."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-21 09:58:25
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The girl named Sha Ye looked very lively. At this time, she said discontentedly, "Victor, it's too much! We are all a group. I also want to get high marks. I can't hide behind you and leave everything to you because I'm a girl!"
Corrected text:
The girl named Sha Ye looked very lively. At this time, she said discontentedly, "Victor, it's too much! We are a group. I also want to get high marks. I can't hide behind you and leave everything to you because I'm a girl!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:50:36
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Compared to Victor, Christo was the biggest headache for Rayne. He was too timid. It seemed that speaking loudly can scare him to cry. Moreover, he was extremely introverted and self abased and couldn't keep pace with them at all.
Corrected text:
Compared to Victor, Christo was the biggest headache for Rayne. He was too timid. It seemed that speaking loudly can scare him to crying. Moreover, he was extremely introverted and self abased and couldn't keep pace with them at all.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-21 09:58:43
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Compared to Victor, Christo was the biggest headache for Rayne. He was too timid. It seemed that speaking louder can scare him to cry. Moreover, he was extremely introverted and self abased and couldn't keep pace with them at all.
Corrected text:
Compared to Victor, Christo was the biggest headache for Rayne. He was too timid. It seemed that speaking loudly can scare him to cry. Moreover, he was extremely introverted and self abased and couldn't keep pace with them at all.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:56:07
Original text:
Compared with Victor, Christo was the biggest headache for Rayne. He was too timid. It seemed that speaking louder can scare him to cry. Moreover, he was extremely introverted and self abased and couldn't keep pace with them at all.
Corrected text:
Compared to Victor, Christo was the biggest headache for Rayne. He was too timid. It seemed that speaking louder can scare him to cry. Moreover, he was extremely introverted and self abased and couldn't keep pace with them at all.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:15:26
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"For some reason the teacher arranged this guy for us. Isn't he just a cumbrance?"
Corrected text:
"For some reason the teacher arranged this guy for us. Isn't he just a hinderance?"
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:31:41
Original text:
Victor was impatient and couldn't help complaining, while Sha Ye glared at him, "Don't say that to little Christo!"
Corrected text:
Victor was impatient and couldn't help but to complain, while Sha Ye glared at him, "Don't say that to Christo!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-21 09:58:52
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Victor's tone suddenly softened, scratched his head and was about to say something when he suddenly noticed the three people standing at the door of the hotel.
Corrected text:
Victor's tone suddenly softened, he scratched his head and was about to say something when he suddenly noticed the three people standing at the door of the hotel.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-02 08:31:56
Original text:
"Sha Ye, look, it's Princess Elise and Lord Emilia!"
Corrected text:
"Sha Ye, look, it's Princess Elise and Lady Emilia!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 19:59:57
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After he pointed that out the others noticed the three. Although Rayne was very unhappy with Rin, he still showed a big smile and walked quickly towards the three, ready to say hello to the beautiful girls.
Corrected text:
After he pointed out the others and noticed the three, although Rayne was very unhappy with Rin, he still showed a big smile and walked quickly towards the three, and prepared to greet the beautiful girls.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-21 09:59:07
Original text:
Others were reminded by him and noticed the three. Although Rayne was very unhappy with Rin, he still showed a big smile and walked quickly towards the three, ready to say hello to the beautiful girls.
Corrected text:
After he pointed that out the others noticed the three. Although Rayne was very unhappy with Rin, he still showed a big smile and walked quickly towards the three, ready to say hello to the beautiful girls.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-09 17:14:53
Original text:
Elise didn't look away from Sha Ye and whispered to Rin, "Little Rin, be careful of that girl. I feel that there is something not normal with her."
Corrected text:
Elise didn't look away from Sha Ye and whispered to Rin, "Little Rin, be careful of that girl. I feel that there is something abnormal about her."
Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-09 17:14:51
Original text:
Elise didn't look away from Sha Ye and whispered to Rin, "Little Rin, be careful of that girl. I feel that there is something not normal with her."
Corrected text:
Elise didn't look away from Sha Ye and whispered to Rin, "Little Rin, be careful of that girl. I feel that there is something abnormal about her."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 19:59:31
Original text:
Elise didn't look away from Sha Ye and whispered to Rin, "Little Rin, be careful of that girl. I feel that there is something wrong with her."
Corrected text:
Elise didn't look away from Sha Ye and whispered to Rin, "Little Rin, be careful of that girl. I feel that there is something not normal with her."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-21 09:59:25
Original text:
Emilia also said, "She isn't as simple as her appearance."
Corrected text:
Emilia also said, "She isn't as simple as she appears to be."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:04:51
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It was definitely not a simple girl if she could make Elise and Emilia feel that there was something wrong.
Corrected text:
She was definitely not a simple girl if she could make Elise and Emilia feel that there was something wrong.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:56:18
Original text:
It was definitely not a simple girl who could make Elise and Emilia feel that there was something wrong.
Corrected text:
It was definitely not a simple girl if she could make Elise and Emilia feel that there was something wrong.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:06:02
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He thought of Suyu. This Demon King actually arranged several subordinates in the academy, all of whom were experts who were good at disguise.
Corrected text:
He thought of Suyu. This Demon King actually arranged several subordinates in the academy, all of whom were experts who were skilled at disguise.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:28:43
Original text:
Unless someone had Emilia's talent or a special prop, even the Dean can't directly judge the problem upon meeting them.
Corrected text:
Unless someone had Emilia's special talent or a specific item, even the Dean can't directly judge the problem upon meeting them.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-21 09:59:31
Original text:
Unless someone had Emilia's talent or a special prop, even the Dean can't directly judge the problem in person.
Corrected text:
Unless someone had Emilia's talent or a special prop, even the Dean can't directly judge the problem upon meeting them.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:28:28
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He straightened his face, ignored them, and directly pulled Elise and Emilia away.
Corrected text:
He composed his face, ignored them, and directly pulled Elise and Emilia away.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:57:03
Original text:
"Go."
Corrected text:
"Let's go."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 19:47:20
Original text:
Victor was furious, "Fenix, why are you so impolite? Don't you see we're saying hello to you?"
Corrected text:
Victor was furious, "Fenix, why are you so impolite? Don't you see we're just greeting you?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:28:12
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Only on this point, Rayne and Victor were on the same line, "This bad boy is like this… Sha Ye, don't stare at him all the time, otherwise, this guy may suddenly go crazy and look for troubles."
Corrected text:
Only on this point, Rayne and Victor were on the same page "This bad boy is like this… Sha Ye, don't stare at him all the time, otherwise, this guy may suddenly snap and look for trouble."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:05:06
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After walking away from them, Rin breathed a long sigh of relief. He happened to see that Christo was about to avoid him, so he hooked his fingers at Christo.
Corrected text:
After walking away from them, Rin breathed a long sigh of relief. He happened to see that Christo was about to avoid him, so he gestured his fingers at Christo.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-21 09:59:40
Original text:
After walking away from them, Rin breathed a long sigh of relief. It happened that he saw that Christo was about to avoid him, so he hooked his fingers at Christo.
Corrected text:
After walking away from them, Rin breathed a long sigh of relief. He happened to see that Christo was about to avoid him, so he hooked his fingers at Christo.
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Corrected by: Karma-Kinsmen , 2022-05-28 18:17:33
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After saying that, he immediately released his hand. Although Rin didn't exert himself, it must be uncomfortable to be grabbed by the hand. He didn't want Christo to cry suddenly and attract the attention of the others.
Corrected text:
After saying that, he immediately released his hand. Although Rin didn't exert himself, it must be uncomfortable to be grabbed by the hair. He didn't want Christo to cry suddenly and attract the attention of the others.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:47:43
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After saying that, he immediately released his hand. Although Rin didn't exert himself, it must be uncomfortable to be grabbed by the hair. He didn't want Christo to cry suddenly and attract the attention of the others.
Corrected text:
After saying that, he immediately released his hand. Although Rin didn't exert himself, it must be uncomfortable to be grabbed by the hand. He didn't want Christo to cry suddenly and attract the attention of the others.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-21 09:59:46
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After saying that, he immediately released his hand. Although Rin didn't exert himself, it must be uncomfortable to be grabbed by the hair. He didn't want Christo to cry suddenly and attract the attention of others.
Corrected text:
After saying that, he immediately released his hand. Although Rin didn't exert himself, it must be uncomfortable to be grabbed by the hair. He didn't want Christo to cry suddenly and attract the attention of the others.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 19:45:20
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Christo stared at him in a daze until Rin told him to go away. Then he turned and ran away as if being chased by an evil ghost.
Corrected text:
Christo stared at him in a daze until Rin told him to go away. Suddenly he turned and ran away as if being chased by an evil ghost.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:33:45
Original text:
Elise couldn't care about anything else and hurriedly asked, "Little Rin, what did you say to him just now?"
Corrected text:
Elise couldn't care about anything else and hurriedly asked, "Rin, what did you say to him just now?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:26:34
Original text:
"Nothing. I just scared him a little."
Corrected text:
"Nothing. I just intimidated him a little."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:26:40
Original text:
"Little Rin has a bad heart. You can't bully your classmates!"
Corrected text:
"Little Rin has a bad personality. You can't bully your classmates!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:26:49
Original text:
Emilia looked at the several people who had entered the hotel, asking impassively, "Why did you suddenly pull us away?"
Corrected text:
Emilia looked at the several people who had entered the hotel, asking impassively, "Why did you suddenly seperate us?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:58:03
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"Yeah, yeah! Little Rin, you won't happen to know that girl, right?"
Corrected text:
"Yeah, yeah! Little Rin, you don't happen to know that girl, right?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:27:19
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The silly elk puffed up her cheeks again, and even her ahoge hair smelled of vinegar.
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The silly elk puffed up her cheeks again, interestingly her ahoge hair smelled of vinegar.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 19:45:33
Original text:
In short, this girl named Sha Ye is a minor boss under Suyu, who was known as the "Scarlet Leaf".
Corrected text:
In short, this girl named Sha Ye is a minor boss under Suyu, who was known as "Scarlet Leaf".
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:27:32
Original text:
She doesn't have a name. Because her mother is a demon and her father is human, she has been rejected and humiliated by the demon race, and even has no right to get a name.
Corrected text:
She doesn't have a name. Because her mother is a demon and her father is human, she has been rejected and humiliated by the demon race, and even has no privilege to have a name.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 19:46:01
Original text:
Suyu gave her a code name called "Scarlet Leaf".
Corrected text:
Suyu gave her the code name called "Scarlet Leaf".
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 19:46:29
Original text:
The ability of Scarlet Leaf is very powerful and she is very crafty.
Corrected text:
The ability of Scarlet Leaf is very powerful and she is very cunning.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-21 09:59:51
Original text:
The ability of the Scarlet Leaf is very powerful and she is very crafty.
Corrected text:
The ability of Scarlet Leaf is very powerful and she is very crafty.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:35:48
Original text:
By the way, she is also one of the few women who had not been brought into the protagonist's harem, because she likes girls.
Corrected text:
By the way, she is also one of the few women who had not been brought into the protagonist's harem, because of her sexual orientation.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:27:43
Original text:
By the way, she is also one of the few women who have not been brought into the protagonist's harem, because she likes girls.
Corrected text:
By the way, she is also one of the few women who had not been brought into the protagonist's harem, because she likes girls.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:05:26
Original text:
As for her CP, well, it should be her sister, a pureblood demon.
Corrected text:
As for her companion, well it should be her sister, a pureblood demon.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 19:47:05
Original text:
Although they are in love, they have still been trying to kill each other for a long time.
Corrected text:
Although they are in love, they have been trying to kill each other for a long time.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:58:41
Original text:
Although they are in love, they are still trying to kill each other for a long time.
Corrected text:
Although they are in love, they have still been trying to kill each other for a long time.
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