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Edited by: Kastle, anonymous, Karma-Kinsmen, Dave-Hu, Cyan-Eversnow, Lea-Lin, sweety-boy, Bobbus Maximus
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Corrected by: Dave-Hu , 2022-06-21 08:43:55
Original text:
Of course, it's wasn't just his sister, the "evil god" who wanted to cry.
Corrected text:
Of course, it wasn't just his sister, the "evil god", who wanted to cry.
Corrected by: Dave-Hu , 2022-06-21 08:43:51
Original text:
Of course, it's wasn't just his sister, the "evil god" who wanted to cry.
Corrected text:
Of course, it wasn't just his sister, the "evil god" who wanted to cry.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:14:51
Original text:
Of course, it's not just the "evil god" who wanted to cry.
Corrected text:
Of course, it's wasn't just his sister, the "evil god" who wanted to cry.
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Corrected by: Dave-Hu , 2022-06-21 08:44:11
Original text:
Rin was now thinking about whether to beg the Demon King, and then see if there was any spiritual magic to erase this memory.
Corrected text:
Rin was now thinking about if he should go beg the Demon King to see whether there was any spiritual magic to erase this memory.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:53:46
Original text:
Rin was now thinking about whether to beg the Lord of the Demon King, and then see if there was any spiritual magic to erase this memory.
Corrected text:
Rin was now thinking about whether to beg the Demon King, and then see if there was any spiritual magic to erase this memory.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 02:59:25
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The main reason was that he was too embarrassed to see the two girls again, so he didn't go out.
Corrected text:
The main reason was because he was too embarrassed to see the two girls again, so he didn't go out.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:02:01
Original text:
"Dong Dong! Little Rin, we're going to have dinner!"
Corrected text:
"Knock Knock! Little Rin, we're going to have dinner!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-26 15:22:08
Original text:
Elise knocked and urged at the door. Rin quickly shouted, "Leave me alone, silly elk! Go to dinner yourself!"
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Elise knocked and urged at the door. Rin quickly shouted, "Leave me alone, silly elk! Go have dinner yourself!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:53:59
Original text:
Elise and Emilia passed through the crowd and sat beside an empty table. They were instantly called the focus of everyone.
Corrected text:
Elise and Emilia passed through the crowd and sat beside an empty table. They instantly became the focus of everyone.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:04:16
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One was a dignified and kind little angel, and the other was a beautiful hero.
Corrected text:
One was a elegant and kind angel, and the other was a beautiful hero.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:09:19
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What's more pleasant was that the villain didn't appear with them today. He used his power to enslave his fiancee and tit for tat with Miss Hero.
Corrected text:
What's even more better than that, was that the villain didn't appear with them today. He used his power to enslave his fiancee and tit for tat with the Hero.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:54:05
Original text:
What's more pleasant was that the villain didn't appear among them today. He used his power to enslave his fiancee and tit for tat with Miss Hero.
Corrected text:
What's more pleasant was that the villain didn't appear with them today. He used his power to enslave his fiancee and tit for tat with Miss Hero.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:11:52
Original text:
However, the atmosphere was a little subtle without the presence of the evil villain.
Corrected text:
However, the atmosphere was a little more silent without the presence of the evil villain.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:54:13
Original text:
Elise's smile was still so decent, but there was an unknowingly sense of alienation. Emilia, sitting opposite her, seemed to have a momentum of being Miss Hero.
Corrected text:
Elise's smile was still very decent, but there was an unknown sense of alienation. Emilia, sitting opposite her, seemed to have a momentum of being Miss Hero.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:54:27
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But her anger didn't last long. When she thought that she had taken a big advantage and had the identity of fiancee, she didn't need to be angry, so she returned to normal.
Corrected text:
But her anger didn't last long. When she thought that she had taken a big advantage and had the identity of his fiancee, she didn't need to be angry, so she returned to normal.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:54:49
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Everyone knew that the Saint Healer, the strongest supporter, must be the hero's teammate in the future. It is also what everyone wants to see that they can establish a deep friendship.
Corrected text:
Everyone knew that the Saint Healer, the strongest supporter, must be the hero's teammate in the future. Everyone also want to see them establish a deep friendship.
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Corrected by: Bobbus Maximus , 2022-09-21 11:58:38
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However, such peace didn't last long. The appearance of the evil villain made thr people around them sigh.
Corrected text:
However, such peace didn't last long. The appearance of the evil villain made the people around them sigh.
Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:12:48
Original text:
However, such peace didn't last long. The appearance of the evil villain made people around them sigh.
Corrected text:
However, such peace didn't last long. The appearance of the evil villain made thr people around them sigh.
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-11 08:35:22
Original text:
Rin grabbed his hair, looked around, locked his eyes on Elise and Emilia, ignored the hostile looks around him, and swaggered all the way to them.
Corrected text:
Rin grabbed his hair, looked around, locked his eyes on Elise and Emilia and swaggered all the way to them while ignoring the hostile looks around him
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:20:36
Original text:
"Little Rin! Here, here!"
Corrected text:
"Little Rin! Over here!"
Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:20:34
Original text:
"Little Rin! Here, here!"
Corrected text:
"Little Rin! Over here!"
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Corrected by: sweety-boy , 2022-09-02 14:31:17
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Because he was really too hungry, Rin finally decided to overcome his shame and come down to dinner honestly.
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Because he was really too hungry, Rin finally decided to overcome his shame and come down to dine honestly.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:21:51
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"All right."
Corrected text:
"Okay."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-20 08:28:19
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Looking at the ham pie, vegetable salad, roast quail, and mushroom soup that had been served, Rin stopped to keep asking.
Corrected text:
Looking at the ham pie, vegetable salad, roast quail, and mushroom soup that had been served, Rin stopped asking.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:55:04
Original text:
Looking at the Ham pie, vegetable salad, roast quail, and mushroom soup that had been served, Rin stopped to keep asking.
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Looking at the ham pie, vegetable salad, roast quail, and mushroom soup that had been served, Rin stopped to keep asking.
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Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-05-11 08:29:57
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"Lord Emilia, following up at this time will disturb my date with little Rin."
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"Hero Emilia, following us this time will disturb my date with little Rin."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:55:16
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Emilia looked as of she didn't seem to understand the meaning of the word, but she had no intention of leaving at all.
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Emilia looked as if she didn't understand the meaning of the word, but she had no intention of leaving at all.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:55:32
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Elise smiled and moved close to Rin, "It's a date between unmarried couples!"
Corrected text:
Elise smiled and moved close to Rin, "It's a date between an unmarried couple!"
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:22:47
Original text:
"Not at all!"
Corrected text:
"No it's not!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-11 08:30:12
Original text:
"Not al all!"
Corrected text:
"Not at all!"
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:24:03
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Rin reached out and grabbed Elise's ahoge hair and said fiercely, "Silly elk, don't talk nonsense and make people misunderstand! I said that I won't date a fool, okay!"
Corrected text:
Rin reached out and grabbed Elise's ahoge and said fiercely, "Dumb elk, don't speak nonsense and make people misunderstand! I said that I won't take a idiot on a date, okay!"
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Corrected by: Karma-Kinsmen , 2022-05-28 18:16:55
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"Hey, what?! If you want to date, I will find you a fungal demon to date. Anyway, you are all stupid brainless creatures!"
Corrected text:
"Hey, what?! If you want to date, I will find you a fungal demon to date. Anyway, you are both stupid brainless creatures!"
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:25:13
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"Little Rin, I will be sad!"
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"Little Rin, I'll be sad!"
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:29:01
Original text:
It was different from meeting someone with bad character. This was clearly the complete exclusion between the sources of their powers.
Corrected text:
It was different from meeting someone with a bad personality. This was clearly repulsion between the sources of their powers.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 03:26:45
Original text:
Elise was kind-hearted by nature and could suppress the influence of her Holy talent, and would not be hostile to a stranger for no reason.
Corrected text:
Elise was kind-hearted by nature and would suppress the influence of her Holy talent. She isn't the type to be hostile to a stranger for no reason.
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