Translated by: WuWang
Edited by: Kastle, anonymous, hao-farah, WuWang, Henry, Cyan-Eversnow, Lea-Lin, sweety-boy
Corrected by: sweety-boy , 2022-09-02 14:30:58
Original text:
Chapter 33: A World Where Only the Evil God Is Injured
Corrected text:
Chapter 33: A World Where Only the Evil God Is Hurt
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Corrected by: WuWang , 2022-05-18 19:02:26
Original text:
Oh, it's friendship… crap!
Corrected text:
Oh, it's friendship… not at all!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:52:04
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He suddenly got up the courage, reached out and grabbed Emilia's head, and made a mess of her soft hair.
Corrected text:
He suddenly found the courage, reached out and grabbed Emilia's head, and made a mess of her soft hair.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:52:11
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Not only that, but she also opened her mouth to his body that was not covered by his shirt, revealing the sharp teeth that reflected cold light.
Corrected text:
Not only that, but she also opened her mouth facing his body that was not covered by his shirt, revealing the sharp teeth that reflected cold light.
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Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-05-11 08:29:40
Original text:
"Only shXt (┖). Д。) ┐!”
Corrected text:
"Holy shXt (┖). Д。) ┐!”
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 02:49:43
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What? The system, don't tell me that I missed an achievement! I don't want it! This smelly cat's teeth are really too sharp! It hurts!
Corrected text:
What? System, don't tell me that I missed an achievement! I don't want it! This smelly cat's teeth are seriously too sharp! It hurts!
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Corrected by: sweety-boy , 2022-09-02 14:31:02
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Emilia made another anonymous cat cry, tilted her head for a moment, and decided to explain.
Corrected text:
Emilia made another unintelligible cat cry, tilted her head for a moment, and decided to explain.
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Corrected by: sweety-boy , 2022-09-02 14:31:05
Original text:
"Because, tsundere, you hid a blunt weapon and wanted to hit me with it. That's the reason why I bit you."
Corrected text:
"Because, tsundere, you hid a blunt weapon and wanted to hit me with it. That's why I bit you."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-23 08:59:03
Original text:
"Because, tsundere, you hide a blunt weapon and want to sneak into me. That's the reason why I bit you."
Corrected text:
"Because, tsundere, you hid a blunt weapon and wanted to hit me with it. That's the reason why I bit you."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-11 22:31:24
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Now Rin's brain was streaming like Elise's. He waved his hands in panic, "Get out of here quickly! I'm really angry!"
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Now Rin's brain was steaming like Elise's. He waved his hands in panic, "Get out of here quickly! I'm really angry!"
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-14 08:07:08
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Waste Hero, how dare you misunderstand me!
Corrected text:
You waste of a Hero, you dare mess with me!
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 02:52:29
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Even if you are yearning for friendship, why did you do that strange action!
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Even if you are yearning for friendship, why would you act strangely!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:51:19
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The more he thought about these two friendships, the heavier Rin felt in his heart, and he was incomparably resistant to his villain's tasks.
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The more he thought about these two friendships, the more distress Rin felt in his heart, as he was incomparably resistant to his villain's tasks.
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-11 08:29:52
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Even before his transmigration, be it the boys or the girls in the class, for some reason, they avoided him as if he was a snake or scorpion. Occasionally, there would be girls who got slightly closer to him, but before long, they either transferred or suddenly alienated him.
Corrected text:
Even before his transmigration, be it the boys or the girls in the class, for some reason, they avoided him as if he was a venomous snake. Occasionally, there would be girls who got slightly closer to him, but before long, they either transferred or suddenly alienated him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:52:17
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Even before his transmigration, no matter the boys or girls in the class, for some reason, avoided him as if he was a snake or scorpion. Occasionally, there would be girls who got slightly closer to him, but before long, they either transferred or suddenly alienated him.
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Even before his transmigration, be it the boys or the girls in the class, for some reason, they avoided him as if he was a snake or scorpion. Occasionally, there would be girls who got slightly closer to him, but before long, they either transferred or suddenly alienated him.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:52:24
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"Wait. Hey, the waste system, there should have been some villains' achievements just now, right?"
Corrected text:
"Hey, hold on garbage system, there should have been some villains' achievements just now, right?"
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 02:54:22
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"I… I hate it!!!!!!"
Corrected text:
"I-... I hate this!!!!!!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:52:36
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"This must be malicious! It must be some little bastard who did it on purpose. Don't let me find out the programmer!"
Corrected text:
"This must be malicious! It must be some little bastard who did it on purpose. Don't let me find out who the programmer is!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:52:35
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"Qiuqiu, doesn't that second-rate goddess agree to my application?"
Corrected text:
"Qiuqiu, didn't that second-rate goddess agree to my application?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:52:46
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But Qiuqiu didn't dare to say. She was afraid that if she couldn't stop Ling Wuyue, she would destroy other worlds to vent her anger.
Corrected text:
But Qiuqiu didn't dare to say it. She was afraid that if she couldn't stop Ling Wuyue, she would destroy other worlds to vent her anger.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:52:47
Original text:
"Yes, master, you should be calm for the sake of the little master! If you mess around and are punished by the main god, the little master will also be involved. As an ordinary person, he will not survive!"
Corrected text:
"Yes, master, you should be calm for the sake of the little master! If you mess around and become punished by the main god, the little master will also be involved. As an ordinary person, he will not survive!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-17 19:37:25
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Ling Wuyue couldn't stand it any longer. She jumped onto the bed and rolled around like a child, crying like a child.
Corrected text:
Ling Wuyue couldn't stand it any longer. She jumped onto the bed and rolled around, crying like a child.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 02:56:58
Original text:
"My brother is mine! My brother is mine! Woo woo, except Yuki, others are smelly women!"
Corrected text:
"My brother is mine! My brother is mine! Woo woo, except Yuki, all the others are smelly women!"
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 02:58:01
Original text:
Ling Wuyue was too sad. She bit the quilt and ground her teeth, and that appearance was indeed the same as Rin.
Corrected text:
Ling Wuyue was very upset. She bits the quilt and grounds her teeth, that appearance was indeed the same as Rin.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:52:56
Original text:
Ling Wuyue was too sad. She bit the quilt and ground her teeth, and that appearance was indeed the same just like Rin.
Corrected text:
Ling Wuyue was too sad. She bit the quilt and ground her teeth, and that appearance was indeed the same as Rin.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:52:54
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Ling Wuyue calmed down, transferred from the bed to the wide E-sports chair, hugged her knees, sneered, and meditated.
Corrected text:
Ling Wuyue calmed down, transferred from the bed to the wide E-sports chair, hugged her knees, sniffled and meditated.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:53:03
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Ling Wuyue seemed to find an outlet and showed a vicious smile, "Just write a story about a brother being locked up in the basement by his sister…"
Corrected text:
Ling Wuyue seemed to find an outlet and showed a vicious smile, "I'll just write a story about a brother being locked up in the basement by his sister…"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-14 08:06:46
Original text:
"Well, master, is it too cruel?"
Corrected text:
"Well, master, isn't it too cruel?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:53:22
Original text:
"Oh, they will still read it anyway. I remember a classmate who wrote a spider as the heroine of her novel last time. Those fools still shouted 'Waifu! waifu!' every day at the heroine's eight legs!"
Corrected text:
"Oh, they will still read it anyway. I remember a classmate who wrote a spider as the heroine of her novel last time. Those fools shouted 'Waifu! waifu!' every day at the heroine's eight legs!"
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-11 08:35:20
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"Sobbing, but I still want to cry!"
Corrected text:
*Sob* "but I still want to cry!"
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