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Edited by: hao-farah, anonymous, Henry, Kuroxie, Cyan-Eversnow, Irushia, Lea-Lin, Bobbus Maximus
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:53:31
Original text:
There was a scent near the top of her nose. Elise sniffed and smelled the soap and the original freshness of his body.
Corrected text:
There was a fragrance near the tip of her nose. Elise sniffed and smelled the scent of soap and the freshness of his body.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:14:43
Original text:
A little moisture came from the tip of her nose. Elise shrugged her nose and smelled the soap and the original freshness of the body.
Corrected text:
There was a scent near the top of her nose. Elise sniffed and smelled the soap and the original freshness of his body.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:53:49
Original text:
The face was a little cool when it was first pasted, but it was soon flushed by the heat on the skin.
Corrected text:
Her face was a little cool when it was first touching, but it was soon flushed from the heat of their skinship.
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Corrected by: Irushia , 2022-07-14 08:21:58
Original text:
Elise was a little disoriented; subconsciously rubbed Rin's arms, and whispered a silly laugh.
Corrected text:
Elise, who was a little disoriented; subconsciously rubbed Rin's arms, and whispered a silly laugh.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:54:04
Original text:
Elise was a little distracted, subconsciously rubbed in Rin's arms, and whispered a silly laugh.
Corrected text:
Elise was a little disoriented; subconsciously rubbed Rin's arms, and whispered a silly laugh.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:55:03
Original text:
Compared to the rapid heartbeat, what took most of her attention was the feeling of dizziness and softness. She didn't know how to describe it. Anyway, she liked it very much.
Corrected text:
Compared to her rapid heartbeat, what took most of her attention was the feeling of dizziness and softness. She didn't know how to describe it. Anyway, she liked it very much.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:50:26
Original text:
Compared with the rapid heartbeat, what made her care more was the feeling of dizziness and softness. She didn't know how to describe it. Anyway, she liked it very much.
Corrected text:
Compared to the rapid heartbeat, what took most of her attention was the feeling of dizziness and softness. She didn't know how to describe it. Anyway, she liked it very much.
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Corrected by: Irushia , 2022-07-14 08:22:12
Original text:
Rin's heart beat a little faster, because the silly elk's body was too close to him, and her head arched around in his arms like a pig.
Corrected text:
Rin's heartbeat a little faster, because the silly elk's body was too close to him, and her head arched around in his arms like a pig.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 02:32:53
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"No… No."
Corrected text:
"N-No."
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 02:33:37
Original text:
Elise protested quietly, but still stuck to Rin, and the ahoge hair on her head drooped happily.
Corrected text:
Elise protested quietly, but still stuck to Rin, the ahoge on her head drooped happily.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:50:30
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"Since… In that case, hurry… get up!"
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"Since… In that case, hurry… get away!"
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-11 08:29:23
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Feeling as if there were 10000 silly elks jumping around in his heart, Rin simply put his head away. He tried hard to straighten his face and said, "Your… laugh, laugh is disgusting!"
Corrected text:
Feeling as if there were 10000 silly elks jumping around in his heart, Rin simply put his head away. He tried hard to straighten his face and said, "Your… your laugh is disgusting!"
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Corrected by: Bobbus Maximus , 2023-04-29 01:14:29
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She was like a cat whose tail had been trampled on. She shivered all over. Her long light blue hair suddenly stood on end, and her two blue eyes became like a pair of cat's eyes.
Corrected text:
Like a cat whose tail had been trampled on, she shivered all over. Her long light blue hair suddenly stood on end, and her two blue eyes became sharp like a pair of cat's eyes.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-16 15:50:53
Original text:
She was like a cat whose tail had been trampled on. She shivered all over. Her long light blue hair suddenly became hairy, and her two blue eyes became like a pair of cat's eyes.
Corrected text:
She was like a cat whose tail had been trampled on. She shivered all over. Her long light blue hair suddenly stood on end, and her two blue eyes became like a pair of cat's eyes.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-16 00:35:39
Original text:
She was like a cat whose tail gad been trampled on. She shivered all over. Her long light blue hair suddenly became hairy, and her two blue eyes became like a pair of cat's eyes.
Corrected text:
She was like a cat whose tail had been trampled on. She shivered all over. Her long light blue hair suddenly became hairy, and her two blue eyes became like a pair of cat's eyes.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:50:34
Original text:
She was like a cat whose tail was trampled on. She shivered all over. Her long light blue hair suddenly became hairy, and her two blue eyes became like a pair of cat's eyes.
Corrected text:
She was like a cat whose tail gad been trampled on. She shivered all over. Her long light blue hair suddenly became hairy, and her two blue eyes became like a pair of cat's eyes.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:47:20
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"Leadership": this skill can let you have strong leadership in a team. When launched in battle, your teammates will listen to your command conditionally.
Corrected text:
"Leadership": this skill can let you have strong leadership in a team. When launched in battle, your teammates will listen to your command unconditionally.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:55:13
Original text:
"Leadership": this skill can let you have strong leadership in the team. When launched in battle, your teammates will listen to your command conditionally.
Corrected text:
"Leadership": this skill can let you have strong leadership in a team. When launched in battle, your teammates will listen to your command conditionally.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-08 15:41:59
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"There is a moth."
Corrected text:
"There was a moth."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:50:42
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While talking, her empty eyes finally condensed on Elise.
Corrected text:
While talking, her empty eyes finally concentrated on Elise.
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Corrected by: Bobbus Maximus , 2023-04-29 01:15:38
Original text:
Emilia! It's just a moth."
Corrected text:
"Emilia! It's just a moth."
Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 02:35:27
Original text:
"Lord Emilia! It's just a moth."
Corrected text:
Emilia! It's just a moth."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-16 15:48:48
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"I'm afraid it's a transformed demon."
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"I was afraid it was a transformed demon."
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-11 08:29:43
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Recalling the previous scene, he suddenly burst into shame, blushed, and shouted, "Go away! Get out! Don't even go to my door! Go, go, go!"
Corrected text:
Recalling the previous scene, he suddenly felt a burst of shame,he blushed and shouted, "Go away! Get out! Don't even go to my door! Go, go, go!"
Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-11 08:29:39
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Recalling the previous scene, he suddenly burst into shame, blushed, and shouted, "Go away! Get out! Don't even go to my door! Go, go, go!"
Corrected text:
Recalling the previous scene, he suddenly felt a burst of shame,he blushed and shouted, "Go away! Get out! Don't even go to my door! Go, go, go!"
Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-11 08:29:26
Original text:
Recalling the previous scene, he suddenly burst into shame, blushed, and shouted, "Go away! Get out! Don't even go to my door! Go, go, go!"
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Recalling the previous scene, he suddenly felt a burst of shame,he blushed and shouted, "Go away! Get out! Don't even go to my door! Go, go, go!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:50:58
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Emilia took back her sword, standing at the door for a moment. She held the door handle and tried to twist it. Sure enough, the door didn't lock, so she opened the door and went in.
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Emilia took back her sword, standing at the door for a moment. She held the door handle and tried to twist it. Sure enough, the door wasn't locked, so she opened the door and went in.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:51:04
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"Damn it! I should push her away!"
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"Damn it! I should have pushed her away!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:51:10
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"Why did she laugh so… disgusting! Damn! The waste Hero must have a good laugh at me!"
Corrected text:
"Why did she laugh so… disgusting! Damn! The waste Hero must be laughing at me!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:51:14
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But… To be honest, it seems that maybe… maybe, he is not really so annoying.
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But… To be honest, it seems that maybe… maybe, he is not really so annoyed.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:51:20
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Emilia stood in front of the bed and watched silently. Finally, she took off her kitten slippers, climbed to bed, and then sat on Rin very quickly.
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Emilia stood in front of the bed and watched silently. Finally, she took off her kitten slippers, climbed onto the bed, and then sat on Rin very quickly.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:51:27
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Feeling the weight on his body, Rin was startled and moved out the book on his face.
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Feeling the weight on his body, Rin was startled and moved away the book on his face.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-23 20:47:27
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He picked up the book and threatened, "You just want to force me to play more, right? Wasn't the last time enough? You are addicted to it, are you?"
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He picked up the book and threatened, "You just want to force me to play more, right? Wasn't the last time enough? You are addicted to it, aren't you?"
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 02:38:44
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Her posture was very similar to that of a young villain who was about to commit misconduct against a girl. Her moves were so smooth and skillful.
Corrected text:
Her posture was very similar to that of a young villain who was about to commit misconduct against a young girl. Her movements are smooth and skillful.
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Corrected by: Lea-Lin , 2022-08-23 02:37:54
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Rin grinned and glared, and his blood pressure began to rise again.
Corrected text:
Rin glared at Emilia, and his blood pressure began to rise again.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:51:33
Original text:
Emilia leaned down slightly and leaned close to him. Rin subconsciously hid back, put his hand on the bed, and looked at her.
Corrected text:
Emilia leaned down slightly and leaned close to him. Rin subconsciously leaned back, put his hand on the bed, and looked at her.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-11 08:28:34
Original text:
The kuudere girl stretched out a hand and grabbed a button on his skirt.
Corrected text:
The kuudere girl stretched out a hand and grabbed a button on his shirt.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-11 08:28:40
Original text:
"Can't I?"
Corrected text:
"Can I?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:51:47
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"? Wimp, are you saying human language? Do you understand what are you saying?"
Corrected text:
"? Wimp, are you talking human language? Do you understand what you are saying?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:51:52
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Then, while Rin was stunned, she imitated Elise's appearance and pasted her face to his to block her flushed face.
Corrected text:
Then, while Rin was stunned, she imitated Elise's appearance and pasted her face to his to hide her flushed face.
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-11 08:29:45
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Is it… Is it… Is it the legendary … "jealousy"?!
Corrected text:
Is.....this…Is this… the legendary … "jealousy"?!
Corrected by: Kuroxie , 2022-06-25 23:08:08
Original text:
Is it… Is it… Is it the legendary … "be jealous"?!
Corrected text:
Is it… Is it… Is it the legendary … "jealousy"?!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:52:00
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After rubbing comfortably on Rin's chest, Emilia added, "Friendship, I want it too."
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After rubbing herself comfortably against Rin's chest, Emilia added, "Friendship, I want it too."
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