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Corrected by: GrowArmyGt-Vo , 2022-07-14 21:43:11
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"Have a problem with my gift?"
Corrected text:
"Do you have a problem with my gift?"
Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-08 23:22:54
Original text:
"Don't you accept my gift?"
Corrected text:
"Have a problem with my gift?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:55:23
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"I see." Her mind was full of thoughts and she wanted to ask a lot of things, but in the end, she only replied that.
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"I see." Her mind was full of thoughts and she wanted to ask a lot of things, but in the end, she only replied with that.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:46:10
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Indeed, if he didn't care, who would know that the majestic swordmaster was actually very poor?
Corrected text:
Indeed, if he didn't care, how would he have known that the majestic swordmaster was actually very poor?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:55:33
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"Nonsense! How can I care about this girl! She likes strange crafts and has had an abnormal aesthetic outlook since childhood! Silly elk, you certainly don't know that the thing she gave you should be the most normal in her collection!"
Corrected text:
"Nonsense! How can I care about this girl! She likes strange crafts and has had an abnormal aesthetic outlook since childhood! Silly elk, you certainly don't know that the thing she gave you should be the most ordinary in her collection!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:46:16
Original text:
"Nonsense! How can I care about this girl! She likes strange crafts and has abnormal aesthetic outlook since childhood! Silly elk, you certainly don't know that the thing she gave you should be the most normal in her collection!"
Corrected text:
"Nonsense! How can I care about this girl! She likes strange crafts and has had an abnormal aesthetic outlook since childhood! Silly elk, you certainly don't know that the thing she gave you should be the most normal in her collection!"
Corrected by: Ryan-Bergeron , 2022-05-08 23:22:04
Original text:
"Nonsense! How can I care about this guy! She likes strange crafts and has abnormal aesthetic outlook since childhood! Silly elk, you certainly don't know that the thing she gave you should be the most normal in her collection!"
Corrected text:
"Nonsense! How can I care about this girl! She likes strange crafts and has abnormal aesthetic outlook since childhood! Silly elk, you certainly don't know that the thing she gave you should be the most normal in her collection!"
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Corrected by: Irushia , 2022-07-14 08:21:44
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"It's not true! How dare you stupid Princess touch me!"
Corrected text:
"It's not true! How dare you touch me, stupid Princess!"
Corrected by: Irushia , 2022-07-14 08:21:37
Original text:
"It's not true! How dare you stupid Princess touch me!"
Corrected text:
"It's not true! How dare you touch me, stupid Princess!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:55:49
Original text:
Rin shook off Elise's claws, reached out and grabbed her ahoge hair. He was going to continue to teach her a lesson, but his face was covered with a pair of cool little hands.
Corrected text:
Rin shook off Elise's hands, reached out and grabbed her ahoge hair. He was going to continue to teach her a lesson, but his face was covered with a pair of cool little hands.
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Corrected by: Irushia , 2022-07-14 08:21:51
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Yuki looked at the three people and wanted to laugh, but she didn't laugh in the end.
Corrected text:
Yuki looked at the three people and wanted to laugh, but she held herself back from doing so.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 00:10:17
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After waiting for the three little guys to calm down, she asked, "We are leaving tomorrow morning. Don't you have to go home and say goodbye?"
Corrected text:
After waiting for the three of them to calm down, she asked, "We are leaving tomorrow morning. Don't you have to go home and say goodbye?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-03 00:10:28
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Then she was reluctant to pull away from Rin, "Little Rin, go with me!"
Corrected text:
Then she was reluctant to pull away from Rin, "Little Rin, come with me!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:46:33
Original text:
Then she was reluctant to pull Rin: "Little Rin, go with me!"
Corrected text:
Then she was reluctant to pull away from Rin: "Little Rin, go with me!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:46:42
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Rin thought for a moment. He really didn't want to go back and spend the rest time with the Grand Duke Orlan.
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Rin thought for a moment. He really didn't want to go back and spend his rest time with the Grand Duke Orlan.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:47:26
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After that, they had separated. Elise went back to the palace, Yuki went back to the manor, and Rin and Emilia left together.
Corrected text:
After that, they separated. Elise went back to the palace, Yuki went back to the manor, and Rin and Emilia left together.
Corrected by: Ryan-Bergeron , 2022-05-08 23:22:14
Original text:
After that, the four people separated. Elise went back to the palace, Yuki went back to the manor, and Rin and Emilia left together.
Corrected text:
After that, they had separated. Elise went back to the palace, Yuki went back to the manor, and Rin and Emilia left together.
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Corrected by: Kuroxie , 2022-06-25 23:07:57
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Early the next morning, all the annual students gathered outside the school. At the same time, there was a long queue of carriages waiting.
Corrected text:
Early the next morning, all the first-year students gathered outside the school. At the same time, there was a long queue of carriages waiting.
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Corrected by: Ryan-Bergeron , 2022-05-08 23:22:23
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The school itself provided few carriages, most of which were sent by noble students' families.
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The school itself provided few carriages, but most of them were sent by the noble students' families.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:47:48
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As soon as he got on the bus, Emilia and Elise sat on his left and right. He was squeezed in the middle in an instant.
Corrected text:
As soon as he got on the carriage, Emilia and Elise sat on his left and right. He was squeezed in the middle in an instant.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-16 15:48:39
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"Hey, it's so crowded."
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"Hey, it's too crowded."
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Corrected by: Ryan-Bergeron , 2022-05-08 23:22:39
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Emilia remained unmoved and just said, "Today, God told me that sitting here and I will have good luck."
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Emilia remained unmoved and just said, "Today, God told me that by sitting here I will have a good fortune."
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Corrected by: Achmad-Tegar , 2022-05-30 21:38:14
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Originally, the box seat was narrow. Rin was squeezed between two fragrant and soft bodies. He was flustered and bored. At this time, he was even a little irritable.
Corrected text:
Originally, the box seat was narrow. Rin was squeezed between two fragrant and soft bodies. He was flustered and bored. At this time, he was even a little irritated.
Corrected by: Ryan-Bergeron , 2022-05-08 23:22:47
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Originally, the box was narrow. Rin was squeezed between two fragrant and soft bodies. He was flustered and bored. At this time, he was even a little irritable.
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Originally, the box seat was narrow. Rin was squeezed between two fragrant and soft bodies. He was flustered and bored. At this time, he was even a little irritable.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 21:38:10
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He knocked the two little guys' heads heavily and finally let them sit opposite, and the position became spacious.
Corrected text:
He knocked the two little girls' heads heavily and finally let them sit opposite, and the position became spacious.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 21:38:02
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He knocked the two little guys' heads heavily and finally let them sit opposite, and the position became spacious.
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He knocked the two little girls' heads heavily and finally let them sit opposite, and the position became spacious.
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Corrected by: Achmad-Tegar , 2022-05-30 21:38:30
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After all, he had been in the world for so long, but he had no chance to browse the city, let alone go outside of the capital.
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After all, he had been in the world for so long, but he hadn't had the chance to explore the city, let alone go outside of the capital.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:48:17
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It is expected to be a two-day journey, but the convoy was delayed due to various reasons, such as the physical discomfort of some weak noble students and poor Hotel conditions.
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It is expected to be a two-day journey, but the convoy was delayed due to various reasons, such as the physical discomfort of some weak noble students and poor hotel conditions.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:14:31
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Rin got out of the carriage with the two girls, and his legs were a little sour.
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Rin got out of the carriage with the two girls, and his legs were a little numb.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:48:22
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Without knowing it, Rin took a nice bath, changed his shirt and light pants, and planned to rest until the silly elk told him to eat in the evening.
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Without knowing it, Rin took a nice bath, changed his shirt and light pants, and planned to rest until the silly elk tells him to eat in the evening.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:48:27
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However, two minutes after getting dressed and not drying his head, there was a knock at the door.
Corrected text:
However, two minutes after getting dressed and not drying his head, there was a knock on the door.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-08 23:23:02
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At least, even the waiter tried to stay away from her.
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Even the waiter tried to stay away from her.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:48:39
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Rin immediately rolled up his eyes, "Fake swordmaster, you'd better take care of yourself first. If you have nothing to do, just go away and find something to do for yourself. I have to make up for sleep."
Corrected text:
Rin immediately rolled up his eyes, "Fake swordmaster, you'd better take care of yourself first. If you have nothing to do, just go away and find something to do for yourself. I have to make up for my sleep."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:49:17
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Yuki wanted to be more concerned about her brother, but she couldn't find what to say, so she had to nod and leave.
Corrected text:
Yuki wanted to show more concern for her brother, but she couldn't find what to say, so she had to nod and leave.
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Corrected by: Bobbus Maximus , 2022-09-22 10:00:46
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No sooner had she left than the door of the next room opened.
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No sooner had she left, the door of the next room opened.
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-11 08:29:21
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The ahoge hair above her head immediately began to turn around, and then Elise accidentally fell to the ground and jumped directly into Rin's arms.
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The ahoge hair above her head immediately began to turn around, and then Elise accidentally fell, crashing directly into Rin's arms.
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