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Edited by: anonymous, Supriyo-Pal, mondruppen, TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia, Karma-Kinsmen, Aedon-Sneddon, Henry, TheLonelyPerson, Game-Good, Cyan-Eversnow, Ian-Villareal, Jorge-Luis-Alvarado
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-02 14:11:57
Original text:
Chapter 2: The Kuudere Hero Has Seen Through Everything
Corrected text:
Chapter 2: The Kuudere Hero Has Seen Through Everything!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-28 14:00:12
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Sure enough, as Rin expected, a male voice came from the doorway.
Corrected text:
Sure enough, as Rin had expected, a male voice came from the doorway.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:41:30
Original text:
Sure enough, as Lin expected, a male voice came from the doorway.
Corrected text:
Sure enough, as Rin expected, a male voice came from the doorway.
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:55
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"First come, first served. Since this lady has chosen it, why did you take it away?"
Corrected text:
"First come, first served. Since this lady chose it first, why did you take it away?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-05-09 09:03:46
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He was Rayne, the protagonist of this novel, was an otaku who was reincarnated into this world, born into a small noble family.
Corrected text:
He was Rayne, the protagonist of this novel, and an otaku reincarnated into this world, born into a small noble family.
Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:12:49
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He was Rayne, the protagonist of this novel, was an otaku who was reincarnated into this world, born into a small noble family.
Corrected text:
He was Rayne, the protagonist of this novel, an otaku who was reincarnated into this world, and born into a small noble family.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-23 14:26:16
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He was Rayne, the protagonist of this novel, an otaku who was reincarnated into this world, born into a small noble family.
Corrected text:
He was Rayne, the protagonist of this novel, was an otaku who was reincarnated into this world, born into a small noble family.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:28:06
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He was Rayne, the protagonist of this novel, an otaku who was reincarnated into this world, was born in a small noble family.
Corrected text:
He was Rayne, the protagonist of this novel, an otaku who was reincarnated into this world, born into a small noble family.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:41:37
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According to the novel, his class was Alchemist, a very popular class. However, as the protagonist, he has a protagonist talent.
Corrected text:
According to the novel, his class was Alchemist, a very popular class. However, as the protagonist, he has a protagonist's talent.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:08:56
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100% synthesis success. No matter what he was synthesizing, he would always succeed.
Corrected text:
100% synthesis success rate. No matter what he was synthesizing, he would always succeed.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:41:52
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100% synthesis success. No matter what things he was going to synthesize, he could always get something.
Corrected text:
100% synthesis success. No matter what he was synthesizing, he would always succeed.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:10:14
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That is to say, even with two piles of Slime ooze, he could get Limelight from synthesizing. Rayne could even craft things that hadn't come from previously-existing formulas and recipes.
Corrected text:
That is to say, even with two piles of Slime ooze, he could get gold. Rayne could even craft without existing formulas and recipes.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:12:26
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That is to say, even with two piles of Slime slime, he could get Limelight from synthesizing. He could even make things that don't exist in the existing recipes.
Corrected text:
That is to say, even with two piles of Slime ooze, he could get Limelight from synthesizing. Rayne could even craft things that hadn't come from previously-existing formulas and recipes.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:12:36
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After that, his life was unbeatable.
Corrected text:
After that, he became unbeatable.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:12:49
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After his reincarnation, Rayne also changed his previous character.
Corrected text:
After his reincarnation, Rayne's personality had also changed.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:10:48
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In addition to being "gentle" and "confident", he also has other traits a light novel protagonist should have, such as "eloquence" and "being dense". Of course, he also possesses something else to have a big harem — "selflessness".
Corrected text:
In addition to being "gentle" and "confident", he also has other traits a light novel protagonist should have, such as "eloquence" and "being dense". Of course, he also possesses another requirement to have a big harem — "selflessness".
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-01 21:19:10
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In addition to being "gentle" and "confident", he also has other traits a light novel protagonist should have, such as "eloquence" and "being dense". Of course, he must also possess this to have a big harem — "selflessness".
Corrected text:
In addition to being "gentle" and "confident", he also has other traits a light novel protagonist should have, such as "eloquence" and "being dense". Of course, he also possesses something else to have a big harem — "selflessness".
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:14:01
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In addition to being "gentle" and "confident", he also has other characters a light novel protagonist should have, such as "eloquent" and "dumb in love". Of course, he also has the necessary character to have a big harem — "philanthropism".
Corrected text:
In addition to being "gentle" and "confident", he also has other traits a light novel protagonist should have, such as "eloquence" and "being dense". Of course, he must also possess this to have a big harem — "selflessness".
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-17 08:46:50
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The reason why Rin doesn't like Rayne was simple— he was too ordinary. These days, no one would remember such a common light novel protagonist.
Corrected text:
The reason why Rin didn't like Rayne was simple— he was too ordinary. These days, no one would remember such a common light novel protagonist.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:06:25
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The reason why Rin doesn't like Rayne was simple— he was too ordinary. No one would remember such a common light novel protagonist nowadays.
Corrected text:
The reason why Rin doesn't like Rayne was simple— he was too ordinary. These days, no one would remember such a common light novel protagonist.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:06:36
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If there were ten light novels, nine of them would have such a protagonist.
Corrected text:
If there were ten light novels, nine of them would have the same type of protagonist.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-21 21:01:19
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If there are ten light novels, nine of them would have such a protagonist.
Corrected text:
If there were ten light novels, nine of them would have such a protagonist.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:12:40
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Well, it's still not the time to quit the drama.
Corrected text:
Well, it's still not the time for the drama to end.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:11:46
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Rin raised his eyebrows, wrung his arms, and hummed coldly, "I have paid for it, so I'm the first. What's wrong with that?"
Corrected text:
Rin raised his eyebrows, folded his arms, and hummed coldly, "I paid for it, so I'm first. What's wrong with that?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:33:29
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Rin raised his eyebrows, ringed his arms, and hummed coldly, "I have paid for it, so I'm the first. What's wrong with that?"
Corrected text:
Rin raised his eyebrows, wrung his arms, and hummed coldly, "I have paid for it, so I'm the first. What's wrong with that?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-25 08:26:32
Original text:
Rayne frowned, "Why are you so being so unreasonable?"
Corrected text:
Rayne frowned, "Why are you being so unreasonable?"
Corrected by: TheLonelyPerson , 2022-06-21 08:45:20
Original text:
Rayne frowned, "You, why are you so unreasonable?"
Corrected text:
Rayne frowned, "Why are you so being so unreasonable?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:39:17
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"None of your business."
Corrected text:
"That’s none of your business."
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:42:24
Original text:
With a contemptuous gaze that seemed to be looking down on the protagonist as trash, Rin scanned up and down Rayne's body and moved his eyes to the small badge on Rayne's chest.
Corrected text:
With a contemptuous gaze that seemed to be looking down on the protagonist as trash, Rin scanned Rayne's body up and down, moving his eyes to the small badge on Rayne's chest.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:14:16
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With a contemptuous gaze that looked at trash, Rin scanned up and down Rayne's body and moved his eyes to the small badge on Rayne's chest.
Corrected text:
With a contemptuous gaze that seemed to be looking down on the protagonist as trash, Rin scanned up and down Rayne's body and moved his eyes to the small badge on Rayne's chest.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-04 20:48:29
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"You're just a baron's son, how dare you say this to me? Get away."
Corrected text:
"You're just a baron's son, how dare you say that to me? Move."
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:12:29
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This was their first meeting and they only had a small quarrel. It would not cause the conflict to be too serious.
Corrected text:
This was their first meeting and they only had a small quarrel. The conflict would not be too serious.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-25 08:26:35
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This was their first meeting and they only had a small quarrel. It would not cause the conflict too be too serious.
Corrected text:
This was their first meeting and they only had a small quarrel. It would not cause the conflict to be too serious.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:12:55
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This was their first meeting and they just had a quarrel. It would not intensify the conflict.
Corrected text:
This was their first meeting and they only had a small quarrel. It would not cause the conflict too be too serious.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:13:10
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Rin felt that this would be about enough. Anyway, after he left, Rayne would give Emilia a magic card, and then leave a trace of good feeling in her heart.
Corrected text:
Rin felt that this would be about enough. Anyway, after he left, Rayne would give Emilia a magic card, and then leave a trace of affection in her heart.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:14:30
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However, he remembered what the system said, the harder he pretended to be a villain, the higher the reward would be.
Corrected text:
However, he remembered what the system said, the more in tune he was as a villain, the greater the reward would be.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:14:38
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"That foolish girl, to tell you the truth, this thing tops 500 silver coins, and she didn't even haggle for it?"
Corrected text:
"That foolish girl, to tell you the truth, this thing tops out at 500 silver coins, and she didn't even haggle for it?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-10 18:49:38
Original text:
"That dumb cat, to tell you the truth, this thing tops 500 silver coins, and you didn't even haggle for it?"
Corrected text:
"That foolish girl, to tell you the truth, this thing tops 500 silver coins, and she didn't even haggle for it?"
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 21:09:32
Original text:
"That dumb cat, tell you the truth, this thing tops 500 silver coins, and you didn't even haggle for it?"
Corrected text:
"That dumb cat, to tell you the truth, this thing tops 500 silver coins, and you didn't even haggle for it?"
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:14:53
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"Did the goddess of creation only remember to give you a pretty face but forgot to give you even a bit of intelligence?
Corrected text:
"Did the goddess of creation only remember to give her a pretty face but forgot to give her even a bit of intelligence?
Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-06-30 19:24:19
Original text:
"Did the goddess of creation only remember to give you a pretty face but forget to give you a bit of intelligence?
Corrected text:
"Did the goddess of creation only remember to give you a pretty face but forgot to give you even a bit of intelligence?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-06 10:06:18
Original text:
"Did the goddess of creation only remember to give you a pretty face but forgot to give you a smart head?
Corrected text:
"Did the goddess of creation only remember to give you a pretty face but forget to give you a bit of intelligence?
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 21:13:24
Original text:
"Did the goddess of creation only remember to give you a pretty face but forget to give you a smart head?
Corrected text:
"Did the goddess of creation only remembered to give you a pretty face but forgot to give you a smart head?
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:15:09
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"I guess it's pretty fair."
Corrected text:
"I guess the heavens are fair."
Corrected by: Karma-Kinsmen , 2022-04-15 10:15:36
Original text:
"I Guess it's pretty fair."
Corrected text:
"I guess it's pretty fair."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-04 20:48:37
Original text:
"Hey, it's pretty fair."
Corrected text:
"I Guess it's pretty fair."
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Corrected by: Game-Good , 2022-06-22 08:52:54
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Uttering such impolite words, Rin lowered his head and walked out.
Corrected text:
Uttering the impolite words, Rin lowered his head and walked out.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-11 08:29:02
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Uttering such impolite words, Rin lower his head and walked out.
Corrected text:
Uttering such impolite words, Rin lowered his head and walked out.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:14:58
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Leaving such very bad, impolite words, Rin angled his head and walked out.
Corrected text:
Uttering such impolite words, Rin lower his head and walked out.
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Corrected by: Game-Good , 2022-06-22 08:52:49
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He was thinking that he was acting quite well, but did not know that behind him, Emilia had opened her "Observation Eye".
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He thought that he was acting quite well, but did not know that behind him, Emilia had opened her "Observation Eye".
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:15:41
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"Rank: Level 10."
Corrected text:
"Level: 10."
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:16:55
Original text:
"Talent: Phoenix (not awakened): improves fire element affinity, increases comprehension speed of fire elemental magic, immunity to level 1-10 fire damage, reduction of damage dealing with fire by 50% for level 11-15 fire magic, and damage reduction of 25% to level 16-20 fire magic."
Corrected text:
"Talent: Phoenix (unawakened): improves fire element affinity, increases comprehension speed of fire elemental magic, immunity to level 1-10 fire damage, damage reduction of 50% to level 11-15 fire magic, and damage reduction of 25% to level 16-20 fire magic."
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:15:40
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"Talent: Phoenix (not awakened), improve fire element affinity, increase fire magic study speed, immunity to level 1-10 fire damage, fire damage reduction of 50% to level 11-15 fire magic, fire damage reduction of 25% to level 16-20 fire magic."
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"Talent: Phoenix (not awakened): improves fire element affinity, increases comprehension speed of fire elemental magic, immunity to level 1-10 fire damage, reduction of damage dealing with fire by 50% for level 11-15 fire magic, and damage reduction of 25% to level 16-20 fire magic."
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:16:11
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"Features: tsundere, poisonous tongue, black-bellied, kind heart, extreme optimism."
Corrected text:
"Traits: Tsundere, Poisonous Tongue, Black-Bellied, Kind-hearted, Optimistic."
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:17:25
Original text:
"Well, sorry, I couldn't help you."
Corrected text:
"Well, I am sorry, I couldn't help you."
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 21:10:07
Original text:
"Well, sorry, I can't help you."
Corrected text:
"Well, sorry, I couldn't help you."
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:17:43
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Emilia retracted her Observant Eye.
Corrected text:
Emilia retracted her Observation Eye.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:39:25
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This was the first time she had seen that a person's personality traits could be so complex.
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This was the first time she had seen a person’s personality traits be so complex.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:13:16
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So amazing.
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Very interesting.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:18:23
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She trusted her Observation Eye. This talent has helped her through numerous disasters and has never been wrong.
Corrected text:
She trusted her "Observation Eye". This talent has helped her through numerous disasters and has never been wrong.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-17 08:46:53
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She trusts her Observation Eye. This talent has helped her through numerous disasters and has never been wrong.
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She trusted her Observation Eye. This talent has helped her through numerous disasters and has never been wrong.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:13:23
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She trusts her Observation Eye. This talent has helped her through numerous disasters and has never been fooled.
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She trusts her Observation Eye. This talent has helped her through numerous disasters and has never been wrong.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:39:27
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It should be that that boy didn't want to see her being scammed, so he deliberately purchased it before she bought it.
Corrected text:
It should be that the boy didn't want to see her being scammed, so he deliberately purchased it before she bought it.
Corrected by: Game-Good , 2022-06-22 08:52:59
Original text:
Well, it should be that that boy didn't want to see her being scammed, so he deliberately purchased it before she bought it.
Corrected text:
It should be that that boy didn't want to see her being scammed, so he deliberately purchased it before she bought it.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:13:38
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And he didn't want his kindness to be found out and pretended to be a villain. The person with the "tsundere" attribute is so twisted.
Corrected text:
And he didn't want his kindness to be found out and pretended to be a villain. A person with the "tsundere" attribute can be so twisted.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-12 15:49:31
Original text:
And he didn't want to be found of his kindness and pretended to be a villain. The person with the "tsundere" attribute is so twisted.
Corrected text:
And he didn't want his kindness to be found out and pretended to be a villain. The person with the "tsundere" attribute is so twisted.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-27 21:14:26
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But, it was quite amusing to look at him pretending to be a bad man.
Corrected text:
But, it was quite amusing to look at him acting as a bad man.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:13:44
Original text:
But, it was quite fun to look at him pretending to be a bad man.
Corrected text:
But, it was quite amusing to look at him pretending to be a bad man.
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-06-30 19:24:23
Original text:
Emilia slightly narrowed her eyes, standing in place and dazed, simply did not notice others.
Corrected text:
Emilia slightly narrowed her eyes, standing in place with a dazed expression not noticing others around her.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-27 21:14:28
Original text:
Rayne scratched his head in embarrassment. He had taken out a magic card to give her, but she kept ignoring him, so he had to stuff it back into his pocket.
Corrected text:
Rayne scratched his head in embarrassment. He took out a magic card to give her, but she kept ignoring him, so he had to stuff it back into his pocket.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:42:37
Original text:
Rayne scratched his head in embarrassment. He was ready to take out the magic card to her, but the girl kept ignoring him, so he had to stuff it back into his pocket.
Corrected text:
Rayne scratched his head in embarrassment. He had taken out a magic card to give her, but she kept ignoring him, so he had to stuff it back into his pocket.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:32:50
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'I feel so difficult to deal with her!'
Corrected text:
'It feels so difficult to deal with her!'
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:13:51
Original text:
'She ignored me. If I still gave her the magic card, that would be too weird, right? She should also be a student, so we still have opportunities to meet in the future. Oh, I don't want to leave any bad impression in her heart.'
Corrected text:
'She ignored me. If I still gave her the magic card, that would be too weird, right? She should also be a student, so we still have opportunities to meet in the future. Oh, I don't want to leave a bad impression in her mind.'
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:42:50
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'She ignored me. If I still gave her the magic card, that would be too weird, right? She should be also a student, we still have opportunities to meet in the future. Oh, I don't want to leave any bad impression in her heart.'
Corrected text:
'She ignored me. If I still gave her the magic card, that would be too weird, right? She should also be a student, so we still have opportunities to meet in the future. Oh, I don't want to leave any bad impression in her heart.'
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:19:28
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Rin looked at the cards and found that they were all mid-level magic card "Fire Fang", and didn't know what to do .
Corrected text:
Rin looked at the cards and found that they were all mid-level magic card "Fire Fang", and didn't know what to do with them.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-27 21:14:35
Original text:
Rin looked at a few and found that they were all mid-level magic card "Fire Fang", and scratched his head.
Corrected text:
Rin looked at the cards and found that they were all mid-level magic card "Fire Fang", and didn't know what to do
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-09 17:13:56
Original text:
Rin looked at a few and found that they were all mid-level magic card "Fire Teeth", and scratched his head.
Corrected text:
Rin looked at a few and found that they were all mid-level magic card "Fire Fang", and scratched his head.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:19:42
Original text:
Well, it will be very impressive if I use this pile of cards on the enemy.
Corrected text:
Well, it would still be very impressive if I used this pile of cards on the enemy.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-05 09:52:28
Original text:
Well, it will very impressive if I use this pile of cards on the enemy.
Corrected text:
Well, it will be very impressive if I use this pile of cards on the enemy.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:14:17
Original text:
Well, it must be very impressive if I smash this pile of cards to the enemy.
Corrected text:
Well, it will very impressive if I use these pile of cards on the enemy.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:19:58
Original text:
And now, it was time to enter the Royal Academy of Higher Magic and wait for the opening ceremony.
Corrected text:
For now, it was time to enter the Royal Academy of Higher Magic to wait for the opening ceremony.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:20:35
Original text:
"Ding, a small reminder, you're going to meet the third heroine, Elise. There was no detailed plot in the novel, it was just a simple sentence that mentioned it."
Corrected text:
Ding! System Reminder"You're going to meet the third heroine, Elise. There is no detailed plot in the novel, it was just a simple sentence that mentioned it."
Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-06-30 19:24:30
Original text:
"Ding, warm reminder, you're going to meet the third heroine, Elise. There was no detailed plot in the novel, it was just a simple sentence that mentioned it."
Corrected text:
"Ding, a small/slight reminder, you're going to meet the third heroine, Elise. There was no detailed plot in the novel, it was just a simple sentence that mentioned it."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 16:14:57
Original text:
"Elise will be in a sad mood. She will meet her fiancé and be severely taunted by him."
Corrected text:
"Elise will be in a bad mood. She will meet her fiancé and be severely taunted by him."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:14:25
Original text:
"My dear master, please try to play and improve this plot."
Corrected text:
"My dear master, please try to play along and improve this plot."
Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 14:20:25
Original text:
"My dear master, please try to play this plot in improv."
Corrected text:
"My dear master, please try to play and improve this plot."
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Corrected by: TheLonelyPerson , 2022-06-21 08:45:28
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Her childhood friend, whom she hadn't seen for two years, will taunt her just after meeting.
Corrected text:
Her childhood friend, whom she hadn't seen for two years, would be taunting her.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:14:44
Original text:
Her childhood friend, whom she hadn't seen for two years, taunted her just after meeting.
Corrected text:
Her childhood friend, whom she hadn't seen for two years, will taunt her just after meeting.
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Corrected by: TheLonelyPerson , 2022-06-21 08:45:33
Original text:
What a cruel fate she has to endure??
Corrected text:
Why did she have to endure such a cruel fate??
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:14:49
Original text:
What a heartless fate she has to endure??
Corrected text:
What a cruel fate she has to endure??
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-06 10:06:25
Original text:
Hey, how heartless.
Corrected text:
What a heartless fate she has to endure??
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 08:36:02
Original text:
Forgive me, girl, I have no choice.
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Forgive me girl, I have no choice.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-27 21:14:40
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The Royal Academy has a full boarding system and does not allow servants to accompany the students, so when he arrived at the door, all the attendants were dismissed.
Corrected text:
The Royal Academy has a full boarding system and does not allow servants to accompany the students, so when he arrived at the gate, all the servants were dismissed.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-27 21:14:38
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The Royal Academy has a full boarding system and does not allow servants to accompany the students, so when he arrived at the door, all the attendants were dismissed.
Corrected text:
The Royal Academy has a full boarding system and does not allow servants to accompany the students, so when he arrived at the gate, all the servants were dismissed.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:39:29
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The Royal Academy is a full boarding system and does not allow servants to accompany the students, so when he arrived at the door, the attendants were dismissed.
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The Royal Academy has a full boarding system and does not allow servants to accompany the students, so when he arrived at the door, all the attendants were dismissed.
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-06-30 19:24:33
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Now, all he has to do is go to the auditorium and wait for the opening ceremony an hour later.
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Now, all he has to do is go to the auditorium and wait for the opening ceremony that will be held an hour later.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:44:46
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Rin looked at the map marked on the roadside, still proudly tilting his head 25 degrees, and set off towards the auditorium.
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Rin looked at the map marked on the roadside, proudly tilting his head 25 degrees, and set off towards the auditorium.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-16 19:57:08
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The auditorium was in chaos, with many students already sitting and chatting. When they saw Rin enter, some of those who knew him showed obvious signs of fear.
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The auditorium was in chaos, with many students already sitting and chatting. When they saw Rin enter, some of those who knew him showed obvious signs of fear,
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-08 15:43:28
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There were also a very few flattering glances.
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There were also a few flattering glances.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-04 09:28:46
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A young girl with short pink hair was sitting in the middle row(middle what?) reading a book.
Corrected text:
A young girl with short pink hair was sitting in the middle row reading a book.
Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-06-30 19:24:36
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A young girl with short pink hair, was sitting in the middle, reading a book.
Corrected text:
A young girl with short pink hair was sitting in the middle row(middle what?) reading a book.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:14:57
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A young girl with short pink hair, who was sitting in the middle, was reading a book.
Corrected text:
A young girl with short pink hair, was sitting in the middle, reading a book.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:44:01
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A young girl with short pink hair, who was sitting in the middle, was looking at a book.
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A young girl with short pink hair, who was sitting in the middle, was reading a book.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-27 21:14:44
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Well, he remembered that the two Gioral sisters were both pink-haired.
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Then, he remembered that the two Gioral sisters have the same pink hair
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-26 08:36:14
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"Ding, my dear master, please start your performance."
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"Ding! my dear master, please start your performance."
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:44:08
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Just as he reached the long table, the young girl turned her head and saw him. She thought for a second and then she stood up and greeted him.
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Just as he reached the long table, the young girl turned her head and saw him. She thought for a second and then stood up to greet him.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:44:17
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Then, this dignified, elegant, and noble girl seemed to have tripped over the table leg and fall to the ground straightened up.
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She appeared dignified and elegant, but as she stood up, she tripped over the table leg and fell.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 08:22:08
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