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Edited by: Supriyo-Pal, mondruppen, anonymous, FlyingPirateCat-X, Aedon-Sneddon, Henry
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:15:13
Original text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and do not try to break away. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and do not try to break character. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:08:52
Original text:
"Ding, my dear master, please complete the villain plot honestly, do not try to break away, otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and do not try to break away. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:34:14
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The voice was lovely, but the words were incomparably horrible.
Corrected text:
The voice was lovely, but the words were harsh.
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:25:34
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Afterward, his handsome showed a lifeless expression.
Corrected text:
Afterward, his handsome face showed a lifeless expression.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:15:27
Original text:
He had transmigrated into a fictional novel world as a villain NPC.
Corrected text:
He had transmigrated into a fictional novel world as a villainous NPC.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-16 14:24:20
Original text:
He, had transmigrated into a fictional novel world as a villain NPC.
Corrected text:
He had transmigrated into a fictional novel world as a villain NPC.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-05 08:44:23
Original text:
He, transmigrated into a light novel world as a villain NPC.
Corrected text:
He, had transmigrated into a fictional novel world as a villain NPC.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:32:46
Original text:
What's more, this is a harem-typed light novel, where the male lead gets every girl's love and beats the shit out of the villain over and over again!
Corrected text:
What's more, this is a harem-type light novel, where the male lead gets every girl's love and beats the shit out of the villain over and over again!
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:25:45
Original text:
What's more, this is a harem-typed light novel, where the male lead got every girl's love and beat the villain over and over again!
Corrected text:
What's more, this is a harem-typed light novel, where the male lead gets every girl's love and beats the shit out of the villain over and over again!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-10 18:49:01
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Just now, he tried to jump off the carriage, but then he was viciously electrocuted.
Corrected text:
Just now, he tried to jump off the carriage, but he was viciously electrocuted.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:25:54
Original text:
Just now, he tried to jump off the carriage, and then he was viciously electrocuted.
Corrected text:
Just now, he tried to jump off the carriage, but then he was viciously electrocuted.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:15:33
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Was I picked up from the trash or a giveaway from a prepaid recharge?
Corrected text:
Was I picked up from trash or a giveaway from a prepaid recharge?
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:08:23
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In the end, how insane a sister she is? How can she bear to send her own brother to a light novel world to be a villain?
Corrected text:
In the end, how insane of a sister is she? How can she bear to send her own brother to a light novel world to be a villain?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:15:51
Original text:
If I knew my sister was not a human being, then how would I dare rate the book she wrote as trash and praise the villain in the book?
Corrected text:
If I knew my sister was not a human being, then how would I dare rate the book she wrote as garbage and praise the villain in the book?
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:28:33
Original text:
If I knew my sister was not a human being, then how dare I rate the book she wrote as trash and praise the villain in the book?
Corrected text:
If I knew my sister was not a human being, then how would I dare rate the book she wrote as trash and praise the villain in the book?
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:26:02
Original text:
If I knew my sister was not a human being, how dare I rate the book she wrote as trash and praise the villain in the book?
Corrected text:
If I knew my sister was not a human being, then how dare I rate the book she wrote as trash and praise the villain in the book?
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:26:13
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"I only knew that Lin Wuyue was a scum who couldn't take care of herself, but I didn't think that a scum like her, if she was really a human being, wouldn't live past the age of eighteen."
Corrected text:
"I only knew that Lin Wuyue was a scum who couldn't take care of herself, but I didn't think that a scum like her (if she was really a human being) wouldn't live past the age of eighteen."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:16:17
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Not for anything else.
Corrected text:
Not for anyone else.
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Corrected by: FlyingPirateCat-X , 2022-05-17 08:41:12
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When I go back, I will complain to mom about all the things you have done in the past few years, and all the r18 PC games you saved!
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When I get back, I'll be complaining to mom about all the things you've done in the last few years, and all the R-18 PC games you've saved!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:38:17
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Good, now it’s time reminiscence and try to remember the plot.
Corrected text:
Good, now it’s time to reflect and try to remember the plot.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:16:28
Original text:
Good, now time to get in the spirit and remember the plot.
Corrected text:
Good, now it’s time reminiscence and try to remember the plot.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-05 08:44:30
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Good, now get in the spirit and remember the plot.
Corrected text:
Good, now time to get in the spirit and remember the plot.
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:26:22
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This light novel is one of the trash novels that Lin Wuyue wrote and was criticized by himself.
Corrected text:
This light novel is one of the trash novels that Lin Wuyue wrote and he criticized it.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:16:34
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So he has a general impression of the plot.
Corrected text:
So he has a general idea of the plot.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-19 08:46:43
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However, after he replaced this character's identity, the name Gill had become Rin, and the appearance was also his original appearance.
Corrected text:
However, after he replaced this character's identity, the name Gur had become Rin, and the appearance was also his original appearance.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:26:32
Original text:
However, after he replaced his character's identity, the name Gill had become Rin, and the appearance was also his original appearance.
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However, after he replaced this character's identity, the name Gill had become Rin, and the appearance was also his original appearance.
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:26:41
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The names of the continents are quite strange, but Lin Wuyue, as an evil god, is also quite strange. You can't expect her to have a good taste of names.
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The names of the continents are quite strange, but Lin Wuyue, as an evil god, is also quite strange. You can't expect her to have a good taste for names.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:09:21
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The master of the Fenix family is a Grand Duke, and the family has an unmatched high identity amongst all the noble families.
Corrected text:
The Fenix family's patriarch is a Grand Duke, making the family hold an unshakeable status amongst the nobility.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:33:18
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He is the second son of the Fenix family, and has a marriage contract with the kingdom's second queen daughter, Elise Gioral.
Corrected text:
He is the second son of the Fenix family, and has a marriage contract with the kingdom's second princess, Elise Gioral.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:28:42
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Incidentally, Elise is the third heroine of the book, a gentle and kind girl.
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Incidentally, Elise is the third heroine of the book, a kind and gentle girl.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:10:37
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Then, she heard her fiancé's infamous stories.
Corrected text:
There, she heard infamous tales regarding her betrothed.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:38:56
Original text:
However, Elise was a kind and gentle girl. She held a fair opinion towards her childhood playmate and fiancé. Even if his character was truly bad, she would still be considerate and treat him fairly and was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil.
Corrected text:
However, Elise was a kind and gentle girl. She held a fair opinion towards her childhood playmate and fiancé. Even if his character was truly bad, she would still be considerate and treat him fairly. She was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:01:54
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However, Elise was a kind and gentle girl. She held a fair outlook towards her childhood playmate and fiancé. If his character was truly so bad, she would still treat him considerately and was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil.
Corrected text:
However, Elise was a kind and gentle girl. She held a fair opinion towards her childhood playmate and fiancé. Even if his character was truly bad, she would still be considerate and treat him fairly and was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:11:05
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But Elise was a kind girl. For her childhood playmate and fiancé, she had an expectation, and even if her fiancé's character was so bad, she still treated him kindly and was eager to save him from doing evil.
Corrected text:
However, Elise was a kind and gentle girl. She held a fair outlook towards her childhood playmate and fiancé. If his character was truly so bad, she would still treat him considerately and was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:16:44
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That was until Gur did a series of heartless things and hurt her, then she sadly left.
Corrected text:
That was until Gur did a series of heartless things and hurt her, only then she sadly left.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:28:49
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Until Gur did a series of heartless things and hurt her, then she sadly left.
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That was until Gur did a series of heartless things and hurt her, then she sadly left.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 08:45:10
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Immediately was the plot of his first appearance as a villain.
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This was where the villain had made his first appearance in the plot.
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Corrected by: FlyingPirateCat-X , 2022-05-17 08:41:31
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'What's it about?'
Corrected text:
'What's this about?'
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:26:55
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"Ding, warm reminder, after the carriage arrived at the commercial street, my dear master needs to go to the second magic card store and grab the magic card that the heroine wants to buy.
Corrected text:
"Ding, warm reminder, after the carriage arrives at the commercial street, my dear master needs to go to the second magic card store and grab the magic card that the heroine wants to buy.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:28:57
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"Then, you will have a conflict with the protagonist who happens to pass by. The protagonist will get acquainted with the heroine, and have a good feeling towards each other during that."
Corrected text:
"Then, you will have a conflict with the protagonist who happens to pass by. The protagonist will get acquainted with the heroine, and they will develop good feelings towards each other."
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:03
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"Then, you will have a conflict with the protagonist who happened to pass by. The protagonist will get acquainted with the heroine, and have a good feeling towards each other during that."
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"Then, you will have a conflict with the protagonist who happens to pass by. The protagonist will get acquainted with the heroine, and have a good feeling towards each other during that."
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:10
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The first female protagonist's class seems to be Hero, and when she first appeared, her level was 11.
Corrected text:
The first female heroine's class seems to be Hero, and when she first appeared, her level was 11.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 15:24:11
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And his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird (Phoenix). Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that were lower than his own level.
Corrected text:
In comparison, his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird (Phoenix). Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that were lower than his own level.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:37:26
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And his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird. Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that weren't higher than his own level.
Corrected text:
And his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird (Phoenix). Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that were lower than his own level.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:20
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And his own class was Fire Mage, level ten, but he has the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird. Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that weren't higher than his own level.
Corrected text:
And his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird. Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that weren't higher than his own level.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:03:14
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Rin looked around. This is a busy shopping street, and because today is the back-to-school day, so many students in school uniforms are shopping.
Corrected text:
Rin looked around. This is a busy shopping district, and because today is the back-to-school day, many students in school uniforms are shopping.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:03:24
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The students who knew Rin all backed away from him while warning their peers about his glorious history of bullying other students.
Corrected text:
The students who knew Rin all backed away from him while warning their peers about his infamous history of bullying other students.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:37:32
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The students who knew Rin all backed away from him while telling their peers about his glorious history of bullying other students.
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The students who knew Rin all backed away from him while warning their peers about his glorious history of bullying other students.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-11 22:30:43
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There is no other way, because the system had warned him that he must behave at least 60% similar to the original Gur Fenix, or he would fail the act.
Corrected text:
There is no other choice, because the system had warned him that he must behave at least 60% similar to the original Gur Fenix, or he would fail the act.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:26
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There is no way, because the system had warned him that he must behave at least 60% similar to the original Gur Fenix, or he would fail the act.
Corrected text:
There is no other way, because the system had warned him that he must behave at least 60% similar to the original Gur Fenix, or he would fail the act.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:03:30
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With an obvious arrogance, Rin walked to the second magic card store where the plot would begin.
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With an obvious arrogance, Rin walked to the second magic card store where the plot would start.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:37:41
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The other customers in the store were surreptitiously gawking at her.
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The other customers in the store were secretly peeking at her.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:38:01
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After she, Emilia, entered the school, her Hero identity would be exposed and then destined to be admired by millions of people, carrying the great mission of eradicating the demon king.
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After she, Emilia, entered the school, her Hero identity would be exposed and from then she was destined to be admired by millions of people, carrying the great mission of eradicating the demon king.
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:38
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As a Hero, she has more than a dozen natural passive skills, and seven growth-able skills.
Corrected text:
As a Hero, she has more than a dozen natural passive skills, and seven growth-type skills.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:38:15
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However, because she has a passive skill called "Elusive", so no one could understand her emotions from her face. At first glance, she appears to be an introverted, taciturn bibliophile.
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One of her passive skills, "Elusive", made it so no one could understand her emotions from her face. At first glance, she appears as an introverted, taciturn scholar.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:04:01
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Beside her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looking very shifty, quickly said: "One gold coin, no haggling."
Corrected text:
Beside her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looked very sly, quickly said: "One gold coin, no haggling."
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:38:38
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Besides her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looking very treacherous, quickly said, "One gold coin, no haggling."
Corrected text:
Beside her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looking very shifty, quickly said: "One gold coin, no haggling."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 10:17:35
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Besides her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looking very treacherous, quickly said, "Prohibition of a bargain, one gold coin."
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Besides her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looking very treacherous, quickly said, "One gold coin, no haggling."
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:39:31
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"Good."
Corrected text:
"Okay."
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:40:40
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Maybe she knew nothing about the price, or she simply didn't care about money, anyway, she just nodded, and was ready to take out money from her kitten purse.
Corrected text:
Perhaps she knew nothing about the price, or she simply didn't care about money. Regardless, she nodded, and reached to take the money from her kitten purse.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:40:50
Original text:
Rin walked up to her in a superior manner, then casually picked up the magic card she had placed on the store owner's desk.
Corrected text:
Rin arrogantly walked up to her, and casually picked up the magic card she had placed on the store owner's desk.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 16:07:04
Original text:
Rin walked up to her in a superior manner, then casually picked up the magic card she had placed on the cash register.
Corrected text:
Rin walked up to her in a superior manner, then casually picked up the magic card she had placed on the store owner's desk.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:41:09
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And the expressionless Hero girl's eyes also looked over. Her ice blue eyes looked a little dull.
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The expressionless Hero girl looked over. Her eyes were ice blue and looked a little dull.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:41:15
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Her skin was as white as jade, her appearance was pure, and her features were extremely outstanding. The most attractive character of her should be her special temperament.
Corrected text:
Her skin was as white as jade, her appearance was pure, and her features were extremely outstanding. However, the most attractive trait of hers was her special temperament.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:41:22
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Obviously, the expression on her face could be called "dull", but Rin always had a feeling that she was going to do something out of his expectation. This would be the effect of her passive skill called "Elusive".
Corrected text:
Obviously, the expression on her face could be called "dull", but Rin always had a feeling that she was going to do something out of his expectation. This would be the effect of her passive skill "Elusive".
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-06 10:05:59
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Obviously, the expression on her face could be called "dumb", but Rin always had a feeling that she was going to do something out of his expectation. This should be the effect of her passive skill called "Elusive".
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Obviously, the expression on her face could be called "dull", but Rin always had a feeling that she was going to do something out of his expectation. This would be the effect of her passive skill called "Elusive".
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:11:19
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But facing his sister every day, who had a pretty face but a "natural-disaster-like" mouth, Rin has basically immune to appearance.
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But facing his sister every day, who had a pretty face but a "natural-disaster-like" mouth, Rin has basically grown immune to beauty.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:11:32
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The attendant behind him pull out a gold coin, put it on the table, and Rin directly took the card and prepared to leave.
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The attendant behind him pulled out a gold coin, put it on the table, and Rin directly took the card and prepared to leave.
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:44
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"Ding! My dear master, you behaved very like a villain! A warm tip, the worse you behave in front of people, the higher the reward will be after the end of the plot."
Corrected text:
"Ding! My dear master, you behaved very much like a villain! A warm tip, the worse you behave in front of people, the higher the reward will be after the end of the plot."
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