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Edited by: Supriyo-Pal, mondruppen, anonymous, FlyingPirateCat-X, Aedon-Sneddon, Henry, Reader-1, Overlord-Loki, TheLonelyPerson, YISKA, Cyan-Eversnow, sweety-boy, Jorge-Luis-Alvarado
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-05-09 09:02:08
Original text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and don't try to break out of character. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected text:
Ding! "My dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and don't try to break out of character. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 06:59:30
Original text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray as the villain sincerely and don't try to break out of character. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and don't try to break out of character. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-23 14:26:13
Original text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and don't try to break out of character. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray as the villain sincerely and don't try to break out of character. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-28 14:00:16
Original text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and don't try to break character. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and don't try to break out of character. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:04
Original text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and do not try to break character. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and don't try to break character. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:15:13
Original text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and do not try to break away. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and do not try to break character. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:08:52
Original text:
"Ding, my dear master, please complete the villain plot honestly, do not try to break away, otherwise, you will be punished again~."
Corrected text:
"Ding, my dear master, please portray the villain sincerely and do not try to break away. Otherwise, you will be punished again~."
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-02 21:33:40
Original text:
The voice was lovely, but the words were harsh.
Corrected text:
Those harsh words were said by a lovely voice
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 20:34:14
Original text:
The voice was lovely, but the words were incomparably horrible.
Corrected text:
The voice was lovely, but the words were harsh.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:04
Original text:
Lin Rin sat frozen in the carriage, feeling like he was living in a dream.
Corrected text:
Lin Rin sat frozen in the carriage, feeling as if he was living in a dream.
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:25:34
Original text:
Afterward, his handsome showed a lifeless expression.
Corrected text:
Afterward, his handsome face showed a lifeless expression.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:15:27
Original text:
He had transmigrated into a fictional novel world as a villain NPC.
Corrected text:
He had transmigrated into a fictional novel world as a villainous NPC.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-16 14:24:20
Original text:
He, had transmigrated into a fictional novel world as a villain NPC.
Corrected text:
He had transmigrated into a fictional novel world as a villain NPC.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-05 08:44:23
Original text:
He, transmigrated into a light novel world as a villain NPC.
Corrected text:
He, had transmigrated into a fictional novel world as a villain NPC.
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Corrected by: YISKA , 2022-06-27 09:19:42
Original text:
Furthermore, it was a harem-type light novel, where the male lead gets every girl's love and beat the shit out of the villain over and over again!
Corrected text:
Furthermore, it was a harem-type light novel, where the male lead gets every girl's love and beats the shit out of the villain over and over again!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-27 09:19:09
Original text:
Furthermore, it was a harem-type light novel, where the male lead gets every girl's love and beat the shit out of the villain over and over again!
Corrected text:
Furthermore, it was a harem-type light novel, where the male lead gets every girl's love and beats the shit out of the villain over and over again!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-22 08:42:49
Original text:
What's more, this is a harem-type light novel, where the male lead gets every girl's love and beats the shit out of the villain over and over again!
Corrected text:
Furthermore, it was a harem-type light novel, where the male lead gets every girl's love and beat the shit out of the villain over and over again!
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:32:46
Original text:
What's more, this is a harem-typed light novel, where the male lead gets every girl's love and beats the shit out of the villain over and over again!
Corrected text:
What's more, this is a harem-type light novel, where the male lead gets every girl's love and beats the shit out of the villain over and over again!
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:25:45
Original text:
What's more, this is a harem-typed light novel, where the male lead got every girl's love and beat the villain over and over again!
Corrected text:
What's more, this is a harem-typed light novel, where the male lead gets every girl's love and beats the shit out of the villain over and over again!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-10 18:49:01
Original text:
Just now, he tried to jump off the carriage, but then he was viciously electrocuted.
Corrected text:
Just now, he tried to jump off the carriage, but he was viciously electrocuted.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:25:54
Original text:
Just now, he tried to jump off the carriage, and then he was viciously electrocuted.
Corrected text:
Just now, he tried to jump off the carriage, but then he was viciously electrocuted.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:04
Original text:
This also tells him that this is not a dream.
Corrected text:
This also reminded him that this is not a dream.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:04
Original text:
Was I picked up from trash or a giveaway from a prepaid recharge?
Corrected text:
Was I picked up from the trash or rather a giveaway from a prepaid recharge?
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:15:33
Original text:
Was I picked up from the trash or a giveaway from a prepaid recharge?
Corrected text:
Was I picked up from trash or a giveaway from a prepaid recharge?
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:08:23
Original text:
In the end, how insane a sister she is? How can she bear to send her own brother to a light novel world to be a villain?
Corrected text:
In the end, how insane of a sister is she? How can she bear to send her own brother to a light novel world to be a villain?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:15:51
Original text:
If I knew my sister was not a human being, then how would I dare rate the book she wrote as trash and praise the villain in the book?
Corrected text:
If I knew my sister was not a human being, then how would I dare rate the book she wrote as garbage and praise the villain in the book?
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:28:33
Original text:
If I knew my sister was not a human being, then how dare I rate the book she wrote as trash and praise the villain in the book?
Corrected text:
If I knew my sister was not a human being, then how would I dare rate the book she wrote as trash and praise the villain in the book?
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:26:02
Original text:
If I knew my sister was not a human being, how dare I rate the book she wrote as trash and praise the villain in the book?
Corrected text:
If I knew my sister was not a human being, then how dare I rate the book she wrote as trash and praise the villain in the book?
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:03
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"I only knew that Lin Wuyue was a scum who couldn't take care of herself, but I didn't think that a scum like her (if she was really a human being) wouldn't live past the age of eighteen."
Corrected text:
"I only knew that Lin Wuyue was a scum who couldn't take care of herself, but I didn't think that a scum like her (if she was really a human being) would live past the age of eighteen."
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:26:13
Original text:
"I only knew that Lin Wuyue was a scum who couldn't take care of herself, but I didn't think that a scum like her, if she was really a human being, wouldn't live past the age of eighteen."
Corrected text:
"I only knew that Lin Wuyue was a scum who couldn't take care of herself, but I didn't think that a scum like her (if she was really a human being) wouldn't live past the age of eighteen."
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:00:45
Original text:
If someone else's sister was a god, she would let her brother have a big harem in another world, right? How can she make her little brother come to be a cuckold who gets slapped in the face by the protagonist?
Corrected text:
If someone else's sister was a god, she would let her brother have a big harem in another world, right? How can she make her little brother be a cuckold who gets slapped in the face by the protagonist?
Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-02 21:33:44
Original text:
If someone else's sister is a god, she must let her brother have a big harem in another world, right? How can she make her little brother come to be a cuckold and be slapped in the face by the protagonist?
Corrected text:
If someone else's sister was a god, she would let her brother have a big harem in another world, right? How can she make her little brother come to be a cuckold who gets slapped in the face by the protagonist?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:16:17
Original text:
Not for anything else.
Corrected text:
Not for anyone else.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:03
Original text:
When I get back, I'll be complaining to mom about all the things you've done in the last few years, and all the R-18 PC games you've saved!
Corrected text:
When I get back, I'll be complaining to mom about all the things you've done in the last few years and all the R-18 PC games you've hidden!
Corrected by: FlyingPirateCat-X , 2022-05-17 08:41:12
Original text:
When I go back, I will complain to mom about all the things you have done in the past few years, and all the r18 PC games you saved!
Corrected text:
When I get back, I'll be complaining to mom about all the things you've done in the last few years, and all the R-18 PC games you've saved!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:38:17
Original text:
Good, now it’s time reminiscence and try to remember the plot.
Corrected text:
Good, now it’s time to reflect and try to remember the plot.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:16:28
Original text:
Good, now time to get in the spirit and remember the plot.
Corrected text:
Good, now it’s time reminiscence and try to remember the plot.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-05 08:44:30
Original text:
Good, now get in the spirit and remember the plot.
Corrected text:
Good, now time to get in the spirit and remember the plot.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:01:21
Original text:
This light novel is one of the trash novels that Lin Wuyue wrote which he criticized.
Corrected text:
This light novel is one of the trash novels that Lin Wuyue wrote and he criticized.
Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-02 21:33:50
Original text:
This light novel is one of the trash novels that Lin Wuyue wrote that he criticized.
Corrected text:
This light novel is one of the trash novels that Lin Wuyue wrote which he criticized.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:03
Original text:
This light novel is one of the trash novels that Lin Wuyue wrote and he criticized it.
Corrected text:
This light novel is one of the trash novels that Lin Wuyue wrote that he criticized.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:26:22
Original text:
This light novel is one of the trash novels that Lin Wuyue wrote and was criticized by himself.
Corrected text:
This light novel is one of the trash novels that Lin Wuyue wrote and he criticized it.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:16:34
Original text:
So he has a general impression of the plot.
Corrected text:
So he has a general idea of the plot.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-09 14:26:20
Original text:
His current character is called Gur Fenix, a villain who would become the evilest man on the entire continent in the future.
Corrected text:
His current character is called Gur Fenix, a villain who would become the most vile man on the entire continent in the future.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:03
Original text:
His current character is called, Gur Fenix, a villain who would become the biggest evil man on the entire continent in the future.
Corrected text:
His current character is called Gur Fenix, a villain who would become the evilest man on the entire continent in the future.
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2022-03-23 03:23:56
Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-02 21:33:53
Original text:
However, after he replaced this character's identity, the name Gur had become Rin, and the body's appearance became his original one.
Corrected text:
However, after he replaced this character's identity, the name Gur had become Rin, and the appearance of the character had become Rin's original appearance.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:04
Original text:
However, after he replaced this character's identity, the name Gur had become Rin, and the appearance was also his original appearance.
Corrected text:
However, after he replaced this character's identity, the name Gur had become Rin, and the body's appearance became his original one.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-19 08:46:43
Original text:
However, after he replaced this character's identity, the name Gill had become Rin, and the appearance was also his original appearance.
Corrected text:
However, after he replaced this character's identity, the name Gur had become Rin, and the appearance was also his original appearance.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:26:32
Original text:
However, after he replaced his character's identity, the name Gill had become Rin, and the appearance was also his original appearance.
Corrected text:
However, after he replaced this character's identity, the name Gill had become Rin, and the appearance was also his original appearance.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:04
Original text:
Two generations of his family are mixed breed.
Corrected text:
Two generations of his family are mixed blood.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:02:06
Original text:
The planet he is on has several continents. They are Rimkong, Autumnkong, White Album, Mangekyou, Koukaku, and many continents.
Corrected text:
The planet he is on has several continents. They are Rimkong, Autumnkong, White Album, Mangekyou, Koukaku, and many others.
Corrected by: sweety-boy , 2022-09-02 14:30:40
Original text:
The planet he is on has several continents. They are Rimkong, Autumnkong, White Album, Mangekyou, Koukaku, and many islands.
Corrected text:
The planet he is on has several continents. They are Rimkong, Autumnkong, White Album, Mangekyou, Koukaku, and many continents.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:02:19
Original text:
The names of the continents are quite strange, but Lin Wuyue, as an evil god, is also quite strange. You can't expect her to have a good taste for names.
Corrected text:
The names of the continents are quite strange, but Lin Wuyue, as an evil god, is also quite strange. You can't expect her to have good taste for names.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:26:41
Original text:
The names of the continents are quite strange, but Lin Wuyue, as an evil god, is also quite strange. You can't expect her to have a good taste of names.
Corrected text:
The names of the continents are quite strange, but Lin Wuyue, as an evil god, is also quite strange. You can't expect her to have a good taste for names.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:03:11
Original text:
And now he was on the Mangekyou continent, the Kingdom of Gioral.
Corrected text:
Right now he was on the Mangekyou continent, Gioral Kingdom.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:03:29
Original text:
The Fenix family's head is a Grand Duke, giving the family an unshakeable status amongst the nobility.
Corrected text:
The Fenix family's head is a Grand Duke, giving their family an unshakeable status amongst the nobility.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:38:58
Original text:
The Fenix family's patriarch is a Grand Duke, giving the family an unshakeable status amongst the nobility.
Corrected text:
The Fenix family's head is a Grand Duke, giving the family an unshakeable status amongst the nobility.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:38:55
Original text:
The Fenix family's patriarch is a Grand Duke, giving the family an unshakeable status amongst the nobility.
Corrected text:
The Fenix family's head is a Grand Duke, giving the family an unshakeable status amongst the nobility.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-01 09:47:06
Original text:
The Fenix family's patriarch is a Grand Duke, making the family hold an unshakeable status amongst the nobility.
Corrected text:
The Fenix family's patriarch is a Grand Duke, giving the family an unshakeable status amongst the nobility.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:09:21
Original text:
The master of the Fenix family is a Grand Duke, and the family has an unmatched high identity amongst all the noble families.
Corrected text:
The Fenix family's patriarch is a Grand Duke, making the family hold an unshakeable status amongst the nobility.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:03:51
Original text:
He is the second son of the Fenix family, and has a marriage contract with the kingdom's second princess, Elise Gioral.
Corrected text:
He as the second son of the Fenix family, has a marriage contract with the kingdom's second princess, Elise Gioral.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 02:33:18
Original text:
He is the second son of the Fenix family, and has a marriage contract with the kingdom's second queen daughter, Elise Gioral.
Corrected text:
He is the second son of the Fenix family, and has a marriage contract with the kingdom's second princess, Elise Gioral.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:28:42
Original text:
Incidentally, Elise is the third heroine of the book, a gentle and kind girl.
Corrected text:
Incidentally, Elise is the third heroine of the book, a kind and gentle girl.
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-02 21:33:58
Original text:
When they were young, the two were childhood friends, but as time passed, they were unable to spend time together. Two years ago, Elise followed her sister to the border, and she only returned before the start of the school year.
Corrected text:
They were good friends when they were young, but as time passed, they were unable to spend time together. Two years ago, Elise followed her sister to the border and she only returned before the start of the school year.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:04
Original text:
When they were young, the two were childhood friends, but as time went by, they didn't have much time together. Two years ago, Elise followed her sister to the border, and she only returned before the start of the school year.
Corrected text:
When they were young, the two were childhood friends, but as time passed, they were unable to spend time together. Two years ago, Elise followed her sister to the border, and she only returned before the start of the school year.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:04:25
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There, she heard infamous tales regarding her betrothed.
Corrected text:
There, she heard disturbing tales regarding her betrothed.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:10:37
Original text:
Then, she heard her fiancé's infamous stories.
Corrected text:
There, she heard infamous tales regarding her betrothed.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:04:41
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However, Elise, the kind and gentle girl that she was, held a fair opinion toward her childhood playmate and fiancé. Even if his character was truly vile, she would still be considerate and continue to treat him fairly. She was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil acts.
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However, Elise, the kind and gentle girl that she was, held a fair opinion toward her childhood playmate and fiancé. Even if his character was truly vile, she would still be considerate and continue to treat him fairly. She was more than willing to stop him from committing evil acts.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:06
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However, Elise was a kind and gentle girl. She held a fair opinion towards her childhood playmate and fiancé. Even if his character was truly bad, she would still be considerate and treat him fairly. She was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil.
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However, Elise, the kind and gentle girl that she was, held a fair opinion toward her childhood playmate and fiancé. Even if his character was truly vile, she would still be considerate and continue to treat him fairly. She was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil acts.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-27 08:38:56
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However, Elise was a kind and gentle girl. She held a fair opinion towards her childhood playmate and fiancé. Even if his character was truly bad, she would still be considerate and treat him fairly and was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil.
Corrected text:
However, Elise was a kind and gentle girl. She held a fair opinion towards her childhood playmate and fiancé. Even if his character was truly bad, she would still be considerate and treat him fairly. She was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:01:54
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However, Elise was a kind and gentle girl. She held a fair outlook towards her childhood playmate and fiancé. If his character was truly so bad, she would still treat him considerately and was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil.
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However, Elise was a kind and gentle girl. She held a fair opinion towards her childhood playmate and fiancé. Even if his character was truly bad, she would still be considerate and treat him fairly and was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:11:05
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But Elise was a kind girl. For her childhood playmate and fiancé, she had an expectation, and even if her fiancé's character was so bad, she still treated him kindly and was eager to save him from doing evil.
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However, Elise was a kind and gentle girl. She held a fair outlook towards her childhood playmate and fiancé. If his character was truly so bad, she would still treat him considerately and was more than willing to prevent him from committing evil.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:04:58
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That was until Gur did a series of heartless things that hurt her ,and only then did she she leave him.
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That was until Gur did a series of heartless things that hurt her, and only then did she leave him.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-23 14:26:14
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That was until Gur did a series of heartless things and hurt her, only then she sadly left.
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That was until Gur did a series of heartless things that hurt her ,and only then did she she leave him.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 09:16:44
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That was until Gur did a series of heartless things and hurt her, then she sadly left.
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That was until Gur did a series of heartless things and hurt her, only then she sadly left.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:28:49
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Until Gur did a series of heartless things and hurt her, then she sadly left.
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That was until Gur did a series of heartless things and hurt her, then she sadly left.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 08:45:10
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Immediately was the plot of his first appearance as a villain.
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This was where the villain had made his first appearance in the plot.
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Corrected by: FlyingPirateCat-X , 2022-05-17 08:41:31
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'What's it about?'
Corrected text:
'What's this about?'
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:06:48
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"Ding, oh I remember, after the carriage arrives at the commercial street, my dear master needs to go to the second hand magic card store and grab the magic card that the heroine wants to buy.
Corrected text:
Ding! System Reminder "After the carriage arrives at the commercial street, my dear master needs to go to the second hand magic card store and grab the magic card that the heroine wants to buy.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-12-09 22:58:32
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"Ding, kind reminder, after the carriage arrives at the commercial street, my dear master needs to go to the second hand magic card store and grab the magic card that the heroine wants to buy.
Corrected text:
"Ding, oh I remember, after the carriage arrives at the commercial street, my dear master needs to go to the second hand magic card store and grab the magic card that the heroine wants to buy.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-02 14:21:24
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"Ding, kind reminder, after the carriage arrives at the commercial street, my dear master needs to go to the second magic card store and grab the magic card that the heroine wants to buy.
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"Ding, kind reminder, after the carriage arrives at the commercial street, my dear master needs to go to the second hand magic card store and grab the magic card that the heroine wants to buy.
Corrected by: Overlord-Loki , 2022-06-07 14:57:47
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"Ding, warm reminder, after the carriage arrives at the commercial street, my dear master needs to go to the second magic card store and grab the magic card that the heroine wants to buy.
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"Ding, kind reminder, after the carriage arrives at the commercial street, my dear master needs to go to the second magic card store and grab the magic card that the heroine wants to buy.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:26:55
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"Ding, warm reminder, after the carriage arrived at the commercial street, my dear master needs to go to the second magic card store and grab the magic card that the heroine wants to buy.
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"Ding, warm reminder, after the carriage arrives at the commercial street, my dear master needs to go to the second magic card store and grab the magic card that the heroine wants to buy.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:06:59
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"Then, you will have a conflict with the protagonist who happens to pass by. The protagonist will get acquainted with the heroine, and they will develop good feelings towards each other."
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Then, you will have a conflict with the protagonist who happens to pass by. The protagonist will get acquainted with the heroine, and they will develop good feelings towards each other."
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:28:57
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"Then, you will have a conflict with the protagonist who happens to pass by. The protagonist will get acquainted with the heroine, and have a good feeling towards each other during that."
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"Then, you will have a conflict with the protagonist who happens to pass by. The protagonist will get acquainted with the heroine, and they will develop good feelings towards each other."
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:03
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"Then, you will have a conflict with the protagonist who happened to pass by. The protagonist will get acquainted with the heroine, and have a good feeling towards each other during that."
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"Then, you will have a conflict with the protagonist who happens to pass by. The protagonist will get acquainted with the heroine, and have a good feeling towards each other during that."
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:10
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The first female protagonist's class seems to be Hero, and when she first appeared, her level was 11.
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The first female heroine's class seems to be Hero, and when she first appeared, her level was 11.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:08:29
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In comparison, his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird (Phoenix). Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be affected by fire elements that were lower than his own level.
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In comparison, his own class was Fire Mage, at level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird (Phoenix).Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would show itself as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be affected by fire elements that were lower than his own level.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:07
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In comparison, his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird (Phoenix). Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that were lower than his own level.
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In comparison, his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird (Phoenix). Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be affected by fire elements that were lower than his own level.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-26 15:24:11
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And his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird (Phoenix). Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that were lower than his own level.
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In comparison, his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird (Phoenix). Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that were lower than his own level.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:37:26
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And his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird. Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that weren't higher than his own level.
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And his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird (Phoenix). Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that were lower than his own level.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:20
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And his own class was Fire Mage, level ten, but he has the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird. Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that weren't higher than his own level.
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And his own class was Fire Mage, level 10, but he had the Fenix family's bloodline talent, Immortal Bird. Before his bloodline talent awakened, it would be shown as a kind of flame affinity, and he wouldn't be hurt by fire elements that weren't higher than his own level.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:08:46
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After his talent awakened, it would become a super regenerative ability.
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After his talent awakened, it would become a super regeneration ability.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-02 14:21:26
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Otherwise, he wouldn't have been able to live for so long after doing so many bad things.
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Otherwise, he wouldn't have been able to live for so long after doing so many evil things.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:39:03
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Otherwise, he wouldn't have been living for so long after doing numerous bad things.
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Otherwise, he wouldn't have been able to live for so long after doing so many bad things.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:08
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Otherwise, he wouldn't be living so long after doing so many bad things.
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Otherwise, he wouldn't have been living for so long after doing numerous bad things.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:08
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Rin looked around. This is a busy shopping district, and because today is the back-to-school day, many students in school uniforms are shopping.
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Rin looked around. This is a busy shopping district, and because today is the first day of classes, numerous students in school uniforms were shopping.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:03:14
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Rin looked around. This is a busy shopping street, and because today is the back-to-school day, so many students in school uniforms are shopping.
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Rin looked around. This is a busy shopping district, and because today is the back-to-school day, many students in school uniforms are shopping.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:03:24
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The students who knew Rin all backed away from him while warning their peers about his glorious history of bullying other students.
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The students who knew Rin all backed away from him while warning their peers about his infamous history of bullying other students.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:37:32
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The students who knew Rin all backed away from him while telling their peers about his glorious history of bullying other students.
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The students who knew Rin all backed away from him while warning their peers about his glorious history of bullying other students.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:08
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There is no other choice, because the system had warned him that he must behave at least 60% similar to the original Gur Fenix, or he would fail the act.
Corrected text:
There was no other choice because the system had warned him that he must behave at least 60% similar to the original Gur Fenix, or he would fail the act.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-11 22:30:43
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There is no other way, because the system had warned him that he must behave at least 60% similar to the original Gur Fenix, or he would fail the act.
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There is no other choice, because the system had warned him that he must behave at least 60% similar to the original Gur Fenix, or he would fail the act.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:26
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There is no way, because the system had warned him that he must behave at least 60% similar to the original Gur Fenix, or he would fail the act.
Corrected text:
There is no other way, because the system had warned him that he must behave at least 60% similar to the original Gur Fenix, or he would fail the act.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:08
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With an obvious arrogance, Rin walked to the second magic card store where the plot would start.
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With apparent arrogance, Rin walked to the second magic card store where the plot would start.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:03:30
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With an obvious arrogance, Rin walked to the second magic card store where the plot would begin.
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With an obvious arrogance, Rin walked to the second magic card store where the plot would start.
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:37:41
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The other customers in the store were surreptitiously gawking at her.
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The other customers in the store were secretly peeking at her.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-29 08:39:07
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After she, Emilia, entered the school, her Hero identity would be exposed, and from then on, she was destined to be admired by millions of people, carrying the great mission of eradicating the demon king.
Corrected text:
After she, Emilia, enters the school, her Hero identity would be revealed, and from then on, she was destined to be admired by millions of people, carrying the great mission of eradicating the demon king.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:08
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After she, Emilia, entered the school, her Hero identity would be exposed and from then she was destined to be admired by millions of people, carrying the great mission of eradicating the demon king.
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After she, Emilia, entered the school, her Hero identity would be exposed, and from then on, she was destined to be admired by millions of people, carrying the great mission of eradicating the demon king.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:38:01
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After she, Emilia, entered the school, her Hero identity would be exposed and then destined to be admired by millions of people, carrying the great mission of eradicating the demon king.
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After she, Emilia, entered the school, her Hero identity would be exposed and from then she was destined to be admired by millions of people, carrying the great mission of eradicating the demon king.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:08
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As a Hero, she has more than a dozen natural passive skills, and seven growth-type skills.
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As a Hero, she has more than a dozen natural passive skills and several growth-type skills.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:38
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As a Hero, she has more than a dozen natural passive skills, and seven growth-able skills.
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As a Hero, she has more than a dozen natural passive skills, and seven growth-type skills.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:08
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One of her passive skills, "Elusive", made it so no one could understand her emotions from her face. At first glance, she appears as an introverted, taciturn scholar.
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One of her passive skills, "Elusive," made it so no one could understand her emotions from her face. At first glance, she appears as an introverted taciturn scholar.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:38:15
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However, because she has a passive skill called "Elusive", so no one could understand her emotions from her face. At first glance, she appears to be an introverted, taciturn bibliophile.
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One of her passive skills, "Elusive", made it so no one could understand her emotions from her face. At first glance, she appears as an introverted, taciturn scholar.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:09:59
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Beside her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looked very sly, quickly said, "One gold coin, no haggling."
Corrected text:
Beside her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looking very sly, quickly said, "One gold coin, no haggling."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-23 10:04:01
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Beside her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looking very shifty, quickly said: "One gold coin, no haggling."
Corrected text:
Beside her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looked very sly, quickly said: "One gold coin, no haggling."
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:38:38
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Besides her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looking very treacherous, quickly said, "One gold coin, no haggling."
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Beside her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looking very shifty, quickly said: "One gold coin, no haggling."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 10:17:35
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Besides her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looking very treacherous, quickly said, "Prohibition of a bargain, one gold coin."
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Besides her, the store owner, wearing glasses and looking very treacherous, quickly said, "One gold coin, no haggling."
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:39:31
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"Good."
Corrected text:
"Okay."
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Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:40:40
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Maybe she knew nothing about the price, or she simply didn't care about money, anyway, she just nodded, and was ready to take out money from her kitten purse.
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Perhaps she knew nothing about the price, or she simply didn't care about money. Regardless, she nodded, and reached to take the money from her kitten purse.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:08
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Rin arrogantly walked up to her, and casually picked up the magic card she had placed on the store owner's desk.
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Rin arrogantly walked up to her and casually picked up the magic card she had placed on the store owner's counter.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:40:50
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Rin walked up to her in a superior manner, then casually picked up the magic card she had placed on the store owner's desk.
Corrected text:
Rin arrogantly walked up to her, and casually picked up the magic card she had placed on the store owner's desk.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-17 16:07:04
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Rin walked up to her in a superior manner, then casually picked up the magic card she had placed on the cash register.
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Rin walked up to her in a superior manner, then casually picked up the magic card she had placed on the store owner's desk.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:08
Original text:
The expressionless Hero girl looked over. Her eyes were ice blue and looked a little dull.
Corrected text:
The expressionless Hero looked over. Her eyes were ice blue and looked dull.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:41:09
Original text:
And the expressionless Hero girl's eyes also looked over. Her ice blue eyes looked a little dull.
Corrected text:
The expressionless Hero girl looked over. Her eyes were ice blue and looked a little dull.
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:10:51
Original text:
Her skin was as white as jade, her appearance was as pure, and her features were exceptionally outstanding. However, the most attractive trait of hers was her special temperament.
Corrected text:
Her skin was as white as jade, her appearance was pure, and her features were exceptionally outstanding. However, her most attractive trait was her temperament.
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:08
Original text:
Her skin was as white as jade, her appearance was pure, and her features were extremely outstanding. However, the most attractive trait of hers was her special temperament.
Corrected text:
Her skin was as white as jade, her appearance was as pure, and her features were exceptionally outstanding. However, the most attractive trait of hers was her special temperament.
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:41:15
Original text:
Her skin was as white as jade, her appearance was pure, and her features were extremely outstanding. The most attractive character of her should be her special temperament.
Corrected text:
Her skin was as white as jade, her appearance was pure, and her features were extremely outstanding. However, the most attractive trait of hers was her special temperament.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-02 14:21:36
Original text:
Obviously, the expression on her face could be called "dull." But Rin always had a feeling that she was going to do something out of his expectation. This should be the effect of her passive skill, "Elusive."
Corrected text:
Obviously, the expression on her face could be called "dull." But Rin had a feeling that she was going to do something out of his expectation. This should be the effect of her passive skill, "Elusive."
Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:08
Original text:
Obviously, the expression on her face could be called "dull", but Rin always had a feeling that she was going to do something out of his expectation. This would be the effect of her passive skill "Elusive".
Corrected text:
Obviously, the expression on her face could be called "dull." But Rin always had a feeling that she was going to do something out of his expectation. This should be the effect of her passive skill, "Elusive."
Corrected by: Aedon-Sneddon , 2022-05-20 08:41:22
Original text:
Obviously, the expression on her face could be called "dull", but Rin always had a feeling that she was going to do something out of his expectation. This would be the effect of her passive skill called "Elusive".
Corrected text:
Obviously, the expression on her face could be called "dull", but Rin always had a feeling that she was going to do something out of his expectation. This would be the effect of her passive skill "Elusive".
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-06 10:05:59
Original text:
Obviously, the expression on her face could be called "dumb", but Rin always had a feeling that she was going to do something out of his expectation. This should be the effect of her passive skill called "Elusive".
Corrected text:
Obviously, the expression on her face could be called "dull", but Rin always had a feeling that she was going to do something out of his expectation. This would be the effect of her passive skill called "Elusive".
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:11:13
Original text:
With such a beautiful face, she did deserve to be the first heroine.
Corrected text:
With such a beautiful face, she deserves to be the first heroine.
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Corrected by: Cyan-Eversnow , 2022-07-02 21:34:01
Original text:
But facing his sister every day, who had a pretty face but a "natural-disaster-like" mouth, Rin has basically grown immune to beauty.
Corrected text:
But facing his sister every day, who had a pretty face but a sharp and venomous tongue, Rin has basically grown immune to beauty.
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:11:19
Original text:
But facing his sister every day, who had a pretty face but a "natural-disaster-like" mouth, Rin has basically immune to appearance.
Corrected text:
But facing his sister every day, who had a pretty face but a "natural-disaster-like" mouth, Rin has basically grown immune to beauty.
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Corrected by: Reader-1 , 2022-05-31 19:15:08
Original text:
He withdrew his gaze, looked at the mid-level magic card with the flaming fang pattern on it in his hand, and spoke directly.
Corrected text:
He withdrew his gaze, then looked at the mid-level magic card with the flaming fang pattern in his hand and spoke arrogantly.
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Corrected by: TheLonelyPerson , 2022-06-21 08:45:05
Original text:
"This one. I'll take it."
Corrected text:
"I'll take this one."
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 14:11:32
Original text:
The attendant behind him pull out a gold coin, put it on the table, and Rin directly took the card and prepared to leave.
Corrected text:
The attendant behind him pulled out a gold coin, put it on the table, and Rin directly took the card and prepared to leave.
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Corrected by: TheLonelyPerson , 2022-06-21 08:45:15
Original text:
"Ding! My dear master, you behaved very much like a villain! A useful tip, the worse you behave in front of people, the higher the reward will be after the end of the plot."
Corrected text:
"Ding! My dear master, you behaved very much like a villain! As a useful tip, the worse you behave in front of people, the higher the rewards will be after the end of the plot."
Corrected by: Overlord-Loki , 2022-06-07 14:57:51
Original text:
"Ding! My dear master, you behaved very much like a villain! A warm tip, the worse you behave in front of people, the higher the reward will be after the end of the plot."
Corrected text:
"Ding! My dear master, you behaved very much like a villain! A useful tip, the worse you behave in front of people, the higher the reward will be after the end of the plot."
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-22 14:27:44
Original text:
"Ding! My dear master, you behaved very like a villain! A warm tip, the worse you behave in front of people, the higher the reward will be after the end of the plot."
Corrected text:
"Ding! My dear master, you behaved very much like a villain! A warm tip, the worse you behave in front of people, the higher the reward will be after the end of the plot."
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Corrected by: Jorge-Luis-Alvarado , 2023-04-01 07:12:00
Original text:
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