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Edited by: mondruppen, anonymous, Tally-Dally, hao-farah, Henry, Khadijah-Amani, Thomas-Brockmeier
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-05 12:35:59
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Chapter 17: The Beautiful Girl does not Go to the Toilet. Thanks
Corrected text:
Chapter 17: Beautiful Girl does not Go to the Toilet. Thanks
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-07-21 08:46:47
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She followed Rin's eyes to Miss Hero who was still picking at the window and said after some thought, "Hero Emilia seems to be still busy, little Rin, let's not disturb her."
Corrected text:
She followed Rin's eyes to Miss Hero who was still peeking at the window and said after some thought, "Hero Emilia seems to be still busy, little Rin, let's not disturb her."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-01 21:20:36
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She followed Rin's eyes to Miss Hero who was still picking at the window and said after some thought, "Lord Emilia seems to be still busy, little Rin, let's not disturb her."
Corrected text:
She followed Rin's eyes to Miss Hero who was still picking at the window and said after some thought, "Lady Emilia seems to be still busy, little Rin, let's not disturb her."
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 15:01:57
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Well, how to say it, she is quite respect Miss Hero, after all, she is the country and also the world's hope.
Corrected text:
Well, how would you put it? She is quite a respectable Miss Hero. She is, after all, both the country's and the world's hope.
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Corrected by: Thomas-Brockmeier , 2023-05-10 09:18:04
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But even if she is the savior of the world, recently, Elise felt that she appeared in front of her and little Rin too often, so she felt a little troubled.
Corrected text:
But even if she is the savior of the world, recently, Elise felt that she appeared in front of little Rin and herself too often, so she felt a little troubled.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:12:41
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But even if she is the savior of the world, recently, Elise felt that she appeared in front of herself and little Rin too often, so she felt a little troubled.
Corrected text:
But even if she is the savior of the world, recently, Elise felt that she appeared in front of her and little Rin too often, so she felt a little troubled.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-01 21:20:42
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Although little Rin was very cute when he was provoked by Lord Hero, she still wanted to be alone with him.
Corrected text:
Although little Rin was very cute when he was provoked by Lady Hero, she still wanted to be alone with him.
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Corrected by: Thomas-Brockmeier , 2023-05-10 09:17:59
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Rin glared viciously at Elise, "So I said we need to leave before, but you still pull me and blah blah blah… talking without ending."
Corrected text:
Rin glared viciously at Elise, "So I said we need to leave before, but you still pull me and blah blah blah… started talking with no end."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 13:01:48
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Rin glared viciously at Elise, "So I said we need to leave before, but you still pull me and blah blah blah… talking without an end."
Corrected text:
Rin glared viciously at Elise, "So I said we need to leave before, but you still pull me and blah blah blah… talking without ending."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 13:01:59
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He instantly got a headache and even wanted to run away in a wretched point.
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He instantly got a headache and wanted to run away from the mischief heading to him.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 23:42:56
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Rin raised an eyebrow with a cold look on his face: "Something?"
Corrected text:
Rin raised an eyebrow with a cold look on his face: "What?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:12:50
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Emilia was silent for a long time. Her eyes stared at Rin, but because her eyes were too lifeless that Rin didn't understand what she wanted to express.
Corrected text:
Emilia was silent for a long time. Her eyes stared at Rin, but because her eyes were too lifeless Rin didn't understand what she wanted to express.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:41:01
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Her voice still has no ups and downs, but soft and light, really like a kitten in the roadside paper box.
Corrected text:
Her voice has no ups and downs, but is soft and light, like a kitten in a roadside paper box.
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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 15:02:07
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Rin admitted that at this moment, he was a little moved by her cute, and even his heart beat a little faster.
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Rin admitted that at this moment, he was a little moved by her cuteness, and even his heart beat a little faster.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-04 19:59:30
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"Oh, that fluffy, stupid, silly cat toy is cute, right? It's quite similar to you, so?"
Corrected text:
"Oh, that fluffy, stupid, silly cat toy is cute, right? It's quite similar to you, no?"
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 15:02:21
Original text:
"Oh, that fluffy, stupid, silly cat toy that has nothing but cute, right? It's quite similar to you, so what?"
Corrected text:
"Oh, that fluffy, stupid, silly cat toy is cute, right? It's quite similar to you, so?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-08-09 14:26:26
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"Little Rin, Lord Emilia is just imitating being a cat and saying hello to you."
Corrected text:
"Little Rin, Lady Emilia is just imitating being a cat and saying hello to you."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:41:21
Original text:
"Little Rin, Lord Emilia is just learning from the cats and saying hello to you."
Corrected text:
"Little Rin, Lord Emilia is just imitating being a cat and saying hello to you."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:41:08
Original text:
"Little Rin, Lord Emilia is just learning from the cats and saying hello to you."
Corrected text:
"Little Rin, Lord Emilia is just imitating being a cat and saying hello to you."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:41:31
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Rin scratched his head, thinking that her "meow" should be more than that.
Corrected text:
Rin scratched his head, thinking that her "meow" should mean more than that.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:12:58
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Rin scratched his head, thinking that what her "meow" should be more than that.
Corrected text:
Rin scratched his head, thinking that her "meow" should be more than that.
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Corrected by: Thomas-Brockmeier , 2023-05-10 09:18:01
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It can't be that she's going to let him buy it for her, can it? Because Miss Hero doesn't accept favors at will, and is in no position to do so.
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It can't be that she's intending to let him buy it for her, can it? Because Miss Hero doesn't accept favors at will, and is in no position to do so.
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Corrected by: Thomas-Brockmeier , 2023-05-10 09:18:05
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"Okay, okay, just say hello, I have a bunch of things to do today, bye, stupid cat."
Corrected text:
"Okay, okay, you've said hello. I have a bunch of things to do today. Bye, stupid cat."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:09:28
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"Okay, okay, just say hello, I have a bunch of things today, bye, stupid cat."
Corrected text:
"Okay, okay, just say hello, I have a bunch of things to do today, bye, stupid cat."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:41:40
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It was a toy made by combining alchemy and puppetry. The toy was only as big as a small kitten, lying on a plate, occasionally standing up and spinning around its own tail, or meowing a few times, among other different actions and looks.
Corrected text:
It was a toy made by combining alchemy and puppetry. The toy was only as big as a small kitten, lying on a plate, occasionally standing up and spinning around its own tail, or meowing a few times, among other different actions and expressions.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:13:08
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It was a toy made by combining alchemy and puppetry together. The toy was only as big as a small kitten, lying on a plate, occasionally standing up and spinning around its own tail, or meowing a few times, among other different actions and looks.
Corrected text:
It was a toy made by combining alchemy and puppetry. The toy was only as big as a small kitten, lying on a plate, occasionally standing up and spinning around its own tail, or meowing a few times, among other different actions and looks.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 21:13:36
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It is fluffy and also emits a dreamy glow, and the look is more anime than real cats.
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It is fluffy and also emits a dreamy glow, and the look is more animated than real cats.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:13:16
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If it's put on the table, cat lovers must very like it.
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If it's put on the table, cat lovers will certainly like it a lot.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:42:40
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Right! If I buy this toy, only allow that 'stupid cat' to watch it but don't let her touch it, she will definitively be very angry and anxious, then I can avenge myself this way!
Corrected text:
Right! If I buy this toy, I should only allow that 'stupid cat' to watch it but don't let her touch it, she will definitively be very angry and anxious, then I can avenge myself this way!
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:13:22
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Right! If I buy this toy, only allow that 'stupid cat' to watch it but don't let her touch it, she must be very angry and anxious, then I can avenge for myself this way!
Corrected text:
Right! If I buy this toy, only allow that 'stupid cat' to watch it but don't let her touch it, she will definitively be very angry and anxious, then I can avenge myself this way!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:13:29
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He was even mocked by the system. Damn, how could he know that Emilia doesn't need to go to the toilet!
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He was even mocked by the system. Damn, how could he have known that Emilia doesn't need to go to the toilet!
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-04 19:59:38
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Not only that, the Demon King also never goes to the toilet, the silly Elise has a purification BUFF, Yuki's undead bloodline will burn everything that enters the stomach… they also don't need to go to the toilet.
Corrected text:
Not only that, the Demon King also never goes to the toilet, the silly Elise has a purification BUFF, Yuki's undying bloodline will burn everything that enters the stomach… they also don't need to go to the toilet.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:42:48
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And he, an ordinary villain, the only way for him to reach this level is to practice his magic until it reaches the high level.
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And he, an ordinary villain, the only way for him to reach this level is to practice his magic until it reaches a high level.
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Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-04 19:59:44
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Even with twice the physical strength, Rin felt fatigued, thanks to Elise's recovery magic, he felt a little better.
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Even with twice the physical strength, Rin felt fatigued. Thanks to Elise's recovery magic, he felt a little better.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:13:35
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Rin took a look and found that about ten children dressed in orphanage clothes that were surrounding a field, and in the middle of the field, a boy and a girl were standing opposite each other.
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Rin took a look and found about ten children dressed in orphanage clothes that were surrounding a field, and in the middle of the field, a boy and a girl were standing opposite each other.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:42:57
Original text:
Two people stood across from each other and then threw the ball, the person who couldn't catch the ball would leave and let other children play with it. Meanwhile, the other children could only watch them play outside the field.
Corrected text:
Two people stood across from each other and then threw the ball, the person who couldn't catch the ball would leave and let another child play with it. Meanwhile, the other children could only watch them play outside the field.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:13:41
Original text:
Two people stood across from each other and then throw the ball, the person who couldn't catch the ball would leave and let other children play with it. Meanwhile, the other children could only watch them play outside the field.
Corrected text:
Two people stood across from each other and then threw the ball, the person who couldn't catch the ball would leave and let other children play with it. Meanwhile, the other children could only watch them play outside the field.
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Corrected by: Tally-Dally , 2022-04-18 14:31:13
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A boy mocked, "Big brother is taller than all of us, so he is still afraid to play with us!"
Corrected text:
A boy mocked, "Big brother is taller than all of us, and he is still afraid to play with us!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:13:52
Original text:
Humph, just a child's children's dare…
Corrected text:
Humph, just a child's dare…
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:43:07
Original text:
"You bad children, it seems that I need to teach you a lesson. Only the strong can be respected!"
Corrected text:
"You naughty children, it seems that I need to teach you a lesson. Only the strong can be respected!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-06-29 00:40:23
Original text:
"Big brother is good at trash talking! Hee hee, I will learned!"
Corrected text:
"Big brother is good at trash talking! Hee hee, I will learn!"
Corrected by: Khadijah-Amani , 2023-05-09 09:04:42
Original text:
"Big brother is good at trash talking! Hee hee, I learned!"
Corrected text:
"Big brother is good at trash talking! Hee hee, I will learned!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:43:33
Original text:
"Big brother is so good at trash talks! Hee hee, I learned!"
Corrected text:
"Big brother is good at trash talking! Hee hee, I learned!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:43:20
Original text:
"Big brother is so good at trash talks! Hee hee, I learned!"
Corrected text:
"Big brother is good at trash talking! Hee hee, I learned!"
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Corrected by: Thomas-Brockmeier , 2023-05-16 09:04:16
Original text:
"See the harshness of adults, kids, today I'll teach you how to play a game called dodgeball!"
Corrected text:
"See the harshness of adults, kids. Today, I'll teach you how to play a game called dodgeball!"
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:43:41
Original text:
"See the cruelty of adults, kids, today I'll teach you how to play a game called dodgeball!"
Corrected text:
"See the harshness of adults, kids, today I'll teach you how to play a game called dodgeball!"
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-23 21:39:34
Original text:
"See the cruelty of adults, kids, today I'll teach you a war called dodgeball!"
Corrected text:
"See the cruelty of adults, kids, today I'll teach you how to play a game called dodgeball!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:43:49
Original text:
Rin didn't know that while he was playing with the kids, a tall figure was just passing by holding a little girl.
Corrected text:
Rin didn't know that while he was playing with the kids, a tall figure was passing by, holding onto a little girl.
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