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Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 15:01:27
Original text:
Damn, a little brother is really kind of cute!
Corrected text:
Damn, her little brother is pretty endearing!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 08:34:20
Original text:
In the past ten years, she and Rin didn't often meet. The last meet was at last year's palace banquet. In her memory, this nominal brother was often hostile to her.
Corrected text:
In the past ten years, she and Rin didn't often meet. Their last meeting was at last year's palace banquet. In her memory, this nominal brother was often hostile to her.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 08:34:31
Original text:
Today, he completely exposed his cute side to her, even made her feel that her brother was too cute.
Corrected text:
Today, he completely exposed his cute side to her, even making her feel that her brother was cute.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:10:22
Original text:
Looked around, no one noticed her current ill-mannered embarrassment.
Corrected text:
She looked around, no one noticed her current ill-mannered embarrassment.
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Corrected by: senpaikazi , 2022-03-27 17:15:46
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She didn't want to be thrown away as scrap. It's better to practice the sword skill, "Family Ties" are too precious to her, she shouldn't ask for them.
Corrected text:
She didn't want to be thrown away as scrap. It's better to practice the sword skill, as "Family Ties" were too precious for her, she shouldn't ask for them.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:43:59
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"Good morning … what the hell! I want to sleep! Don't bother me early in the morning!"
Corrected text:
"Good morning … what the hell! I want to sleep! Don't bother me so early in the morning!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:44:16
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Truly speaking, he doesn't have many plots to play. After all, this is a novel world, the camera is focusing on the protagonist. Most of the time, the villain only lives in the narrator and background plate.
Corrected text:
Truly speaking, he doesn't have many plots to play. After all, this is a novel world, the camera is focusing on the protagonist. Most of the time, the villain only lives in the narrator and background plots.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:44:05
Original text:
Truly speaking, he doesn't have many plots to play. After all, this is a novel world, the camera is focusing on the protagonist. Most of the time, the villain only lives in the narrator and background plate.
Corrected text:
Truly speaking, he doesn't have many plots to play. After all, this is a novel world, the camera is focusing on the protagonist. Most of the time, the villain only lives in the narrator and background plots.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:44:21
Original text:
That waste Hero occupies his favorite fixed seat every day, and likes to come to his room at night. The stupid princess stick to him all day and night, which does not give the protagonist opportunity to increase their good feelings.
Corrected text:
That waste Hero occupies his favorite fixed seat every day, and likes to come to his room at night. The stupid princess stick to him all day and night, which does not give the protagonist an opportunity to increase their affection.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:10:30
Original text:
That waste Hero occupies his favorite fixed seat every day, and likes to come to his room at night. The stupid princess stick to him all day and night, which does not give the protagonist opportunity to increase good feelings.
Corrected text:
That waste Hero occupies his favorite fixed seat every day, and likes to come to his room at night. The stupid princess stick to him all day and night, which does not give the protagonist opportunity to increase their good feelings.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-01 21:20:00
Original text:
Hey, I'm already so fierce, why this princess just doesn't leave?
Corrected text:
Hey, I'm already so fierce, why doesn't this princess just leave?
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:44:33
Original text:
Although it feels quite good to have a silly, cute princess around. If she suddenly doesn't come out one day, even his heart will feel a little strange.
Corrected text:
Although it feels quite good to have a silly, cute princess around. If she suddenly doesn't show up one day, his heart will feel a little odd.
Corrected by: senpaikazi , 2022-03-27 17:15:24
Original text:
Although it feels quite good to have a silly, cute princess around. If she suddenly doesn't come out one day, his heart will even feel a little strange.
Corrected text:
Although it feels quite good to have a silly, cute princess around. If she suddenly doesn't come out one day, even his heart will feel a little strange.
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Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 21:26:06
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"Little Rin, little Rin, today we have a lot of tasks, quickly go to dinner with me!"
Corrected text:
"Little Rin, little Rin, today we have a lot of tasks, quickly go eat breakfast with me!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:44:49
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Elise puffed out her cheeks, shrinking her red neck like a little quail, suddenly seeing the person walking down the stairs, and hastily giving Rin a wink.
Corrected text:
Elise puffed out her cheeks, shrinking her red neck like a little quail, suddenly seeing the person walking down the stairs, and hastily gave Rin a wink.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 15:42:10
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Rin has also noticed the surrounding aura become gloomy, so let go of his hand, turn around with a stern look on his face and salute towards Duke Orlan who came down.
Corrected text:
Rin has also noticed the surrounding aura become gloomy, so he let go of her hair, and turned around with a stern look on his face and saluted towards Duke Orlan who came down.
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Corrected by: Irushia , 2022-07-13 09:56:29
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"Got it! If you don't let go, I'll pull your ahoge hair out."
Corrected text:
"I know that! now if you don't let go, I'll pull your ahoge hair out."
Corrected by: Irushia , 2022-07-13 09:56:27
Original text:
"Got it! If you don't let go, I'll pull your ahoge hair out."
Corrected text:
"I know that! now if you don't let go, I'll pull your ahoge hair out."
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:44:57
Original text:
"Got it! If you don't let go, I'll pull your ahoge hair off."
Corrected text:
"Got it! If you don't let go, I'll pull your ahoge hair out."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-10 18:49:09
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After his head recalled the identity of the other party, Yuki made a knightly salute.
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After her head recalled the identity of the other party, Yuki made a knightly salute.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 10:16:28
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"Your goodness, Your Highness, Elise the Queen's daughter."
Corrected text:
"Your Highness, Princess Elise"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:10:42
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Yuki looked a little lost in thought with a trace of envy flashed in her eyes. People like her couldn't play like a carefree girl.
Corrected text:
Yuki looked a little lost in thought with a trace of envy flashing in her eyes. People like her couldn't play like a carefree girl.
Corrected by: Kastle , 2022-03-26 18:07:46
Original text:
Yuki looked a little lost in thought with a trace of envy flashed in her eyes. People like she can't play like a carefree girl.
Corrected text:
Yuki looked a little lost in thought with a trace of envy flashed in her eyes. People like her couldn't play like a carefree girl.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:10:50
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Elise took her hand self-consciously, "It's been a long time since I've seen you the last time, Sister Yuki, stay with me for a while."
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Elise took her hand self-consciously, "It's been a long time since I've last seen you, Sister Yuki, stay with me for a while."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:45:55
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"I'm telling you, little Rin is so much fun at school, super cute!"
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"I'm telling you, little Rin is so much fun to be around at school, and super cute!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-01 21:20:10
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To be precise, the former was talking and laughing while the latter still had a serious and cold look on her face.
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To be precise, the fiancé was talking and laughing while the sister still had a serious and cold look on her face.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:12:26
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Rin habitually mocked, rubbed his chin, "I didn't find you, Yuki, can actually chat with a foolish elk, truly worthy of my stupid sister. Since that's the case, you guys can continue to talk about your childish topics, and I will go up to catch up on my sleep."
Corrected text:
Rin habitually mocked, rubbing his chin, "I didn't think you, Yuki, could actually chat with a foolish elk, truly worthy of my stupid sister. Since that's the case, you guys can continue to talk about your childish topics, and I will go up to catch up on my sleep."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:11:07
Original text:
Rin habitually mocked, rubbed his chin, "I didn't find you, Yuki, can actually chat with a foolish elk, truly worthy of my stupid sister. Since that's the case, you guys can continue to talk about your childish topics, and I will go up to catch up on my sleep."
Corrected text:
Rin habitually mocked, rubbing his chin, "I didn't think you, Yuki, could actually chat with a foolish elk, truly worthy of my stupid sister. Since that's the case, you guys can continue to talk about your childish topics, and I will go up to catch up on my sleep."
Corrected by: TheGrow-RobloxGrowtopia , 2022-03-23 21:33:42
Original text:
Rin habitually mocked, rubbed his chin, "I didn't find it, Yuki, actually you can chat with a foolish elk, worthy of being my stupid sister. Since so, you guys continue to talk about your childish topics, and I will go up to catch up on my sleep."
Corrected text:
Rin habitually mocked, rubbed his chin, "I didn't find it you, Yuki, can actually chat with a foolish elk, truly worthy of my stupid sister. Since that's the case, you guys can continue to talk about your childish topics, and I will go up to catch up on my sleep."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-27 16:14:38
Original text:
"What?" Rin was a little dumbfounded, but still tilted his head and denied it frantically, "In your dream, Elise, it's not a date! As a human, I can't date an idiot, it's just to fulfill my father's mission! So, don't you dare to get the wrong idea!"
Corrected text:
"What?" Rin was a little dumbfounded, but still tilted his head and denied it frantically, "In your dreams, Elise, it's not a date! I couldn't date an idiot, it's just to fulfill father's mission! So, don't you dare get the wrong idea!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 21:37:53
Original text:
"What?" Rin was a little dumbfounded, but still tilted his head and denied it frantically, "Don't dream, Elise, it's not a date! As a human, I don't date idiots, it's just to fulfill my father's mission! Don't you get the wrong idea!"
Corrected text:
"What?" Rin was a little dumbfounded, but still tilted his head and denied it frantically, "In your dream, Elise, it's not a date! As a human, I can’t date a idiot , it's just to fulfill my father's mission! So,don’t you dare to get the wrong idea!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:12:33
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On the other side, Rin also knew what they were going to do from Elise.
Corrected text:
On the other side, Rin also learned what they were going to do from Elise.
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Corrected by: GrowArmyGt-Vo , 2022-07-11 08:35:34
Original text:
The main purpose was to visit those children in the orphanage and bring the royal family's condolences, but before that, Elise wanted to go and buy some children's books and gifts for the children.
Corrected text:
The primary purpose was to visit those children in the orphanage and bring the royal family's condolences, but before that, Elise wanted to go and buy the children some books and toys.
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