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Corrected by: Thomas-Brockmeier , 2023-05-16 09:04:18
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Looking towards Rin, who was clearly full of impatience on his face, but playing happily with the children, her dark red eyes were somewhat lost in thought.
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Looking towards Rin, who was clearly full of impatience on his face, but still playing happily with the children, her dark red eyes were somewhat lost in thought.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:14:01
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The little girl whose hand was holding by her asked curiously.
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The little girl whose hand she was holding asked curiously.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:14:08
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After smashing another little kid off the field, Rin's gaze swept the group. Humph, it can't help to be bullied by the protagonist, but I still can still teach your group of brats a lesson!
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After smashing another little kid off the field, Rin's gaze swept the group. Humph, I can't help but be bullied by the protagonist, but I can still teach your group of brats a lesson!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:14:18
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According to the content in the novel, there is something that will happen between him and Yuki.
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According to the content of the novel, there is something that will happen between him and Yuki.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-04-21 15:42:17
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Then Gur would take this opportunity to kill his father and let Yuki take the blame, taking advantage of the opportunity to collect the remaining forces of his father and finally defected to the former demon king.
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Then Gur would take this opportunity to kill his father and let Yuki take the blame, taking advantage of the opportunity to collect the remaining forces of his father and finally defect to the former demon king.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:57:30
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Rin recalled the plot of the second heroine, the demon king's layout to regain the throne. Although he only remembered the plot roughly, it seems that it's still possible to operate it.
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Rin recalled the plot of the second heroine, the demon king's plan to regain the throne. Although he only remembered the plot roughly, it seems that it's still possible to execute it.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-01 21:20:45
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"Did little Rin have a good time?"
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"Did little Rin have a good time playing?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:14:25
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"You don't know many brats' asses I've kicked. Even if they are just mere children, I will teach them a lesson if they dare to mock me…"
Corrected text:
"You don't know how many brats' asses I've kicked. Even if they are just mere children, I will teach them a lesson if they dare to mock me…"
Corrected by: mondruppen , 2022-03-24 15:02:42
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"You don't know many brats I've kicked their asses. Even if they are just kids, I will teach them a lesson if they dare to mock me…"
Corrected text:
"You don't know many brats' asses I've kicked. Even if they are just mere children, I will teach them a lesson if they dare to mock me…"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:15:39
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"Oh, I almost forgot if you don't say. Accept the punishment, stupid villain!"
Corrected text:
"Oh, if you didn't tell me, I was about to forget it. Accept the punishment, stupid villain!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:15:48
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A current immediately surged into Rin's body. His whole body began to shiver, and he suddenly felt the whole body has been numb. He stumbled and flung Elise to the ground.
Corrected text:
A current immediately surged into Rin's body. His whole body began to shiver, and he suddenly felt his whole body has been numbed. He stumbled and flung Elise to the ground.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:58:28
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The duo fell heavily. Elise stared at him with her lake-colored eyes, her lips shivered, and she noticed Rin's palms were on her chest. Immediately a hot air rushed straight to her brain, and her red apple like face turned hot and scary.
Corrected text:
The duo fell heavily. Elise stared at him with her lake-colored eyes, her lips shivered, and she noticed Rin's palms were on her chest. Immediately a hot rush of air went to her brain, and her red apple like face turned flushed and disoriented.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:16:00
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The duo fell heavily. Elise stared her lake-colored eyes at him, her lips shivered, and she noticed Rin's palms were on her chest. Immediately a hot air rushed straight to the brain, and her red apple like face turned hot and scary.
Corrected text:
The duo fell heavily. Elise stared at him with her lake-colored eyes, her lips shivered, and she noticed Rin's palms were on her chest. Immediately a hot air rushed straight to her brain, and her red apple like face turned hot and scary.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:58:40
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However, that inexplicably weak current let her heart lost for a time, and she doesn't know what to do.
Corrected text:
However, that inexplicably weak current let her heart wander for a time, and she doesn't know what to do.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:16:08
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However, that inexplicably weak current let her heart lose for a time, and she doesn't know what to do.
Corrected text:
However, that inexplicably weak current let her heart lost for a time, and she doesn't know what to do.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:16:19
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Could it be that this is the strange current that will be generated between… lovers in the novel?!
Corrected text:
Could it be that this is the strange current that is generated between… lovers in novels?!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-23 23:43:03
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Oooh… so humiliating, I'm finished!
Corrected text:
Oooh… so embarrassing , I'm finished!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-30 21:14:18
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Elise didn't know that the current reason she felt that current feeling was just because Yuki was being punished, hence misunderstanding what happened since her heart did beat faster.
Corrected text:
Elise didn't know that the current reason she felt that current feeling was just because Rin was being punished, hence misunderstanding what happened since her heart did beat faster.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-25 08:57:39
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Elise didn't know that the current was just because some guy was accepting punishment, since her heart did beat faster.
Corrected text:
Elise didn't know that the current reason she felt that current feeling was just because yuki was bieng punished, hence misunderstanding what happened since her heart did beat faster.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:58:48
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Elise didn't know that the current was just because some guy was accepting punishment, but her heart did beat faster.
Corrected text:
Elise didn't know that the current was just because some guy was accepting punishment, since her heart did beat faster.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 12:59:00
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After the punishment time passed, Rin went limp and relieved. Fortunately, the punishment wasn't as severe as the first time.
Corrected text:
After the duration of the punishment passed, Rin went limp and relieved. Fortunately, the punishment wasn't as severe as the first time.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 13:00:04
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However, when he found his current situation, and the feel on his hand, Rin suddenly froze like a wooden chicken.
Corrected text:
However, when he realised his current situation, and the feeling on his hand, Rin suddenly froze like a wooden chicken.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:18:27
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However, when he found his current situation, and the touch on his hand, Rin suddenly froze like a wooden chicken.
Corrected text:
However, when he found his current situation, and the feel on his hand, Rin suddenly froze like a wooden chicken.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 13:00:12
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He can feel the powerful and violent sound of heartbeat, and both sides feel that this is their own heartbeat.
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He can feel the powerful and violent sound of a heartbeat, and both sides feel that this is their own heartbeat.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-08 15:44:21
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That strange emotion, sour, and shame overwhelmed Elise's heart. She doesn't know how to express her feelings.
Corrected text:
That strange emotion, a sour feeling, and shame overwhelmed Elise's heart. She didn’t know how to express her feelings.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 13:00:23
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That strange emotion, sour, and shame overwhelmed Elise's heart. She doesn't know how to express her feeling.
Corrected text:
That strange emotion, sour, and shame overwhelmed Elise's heart. She doesn't know how to express her feelings.
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Corrected by: Ian-Villareal , 2022-07-08 15:44:29
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She wants to reach out and hug him, but feels that is very frivolous; she wants to push Rin away, but she is reluctant to do it. Elise was disappointed at her own clumsiness, and big drops of tears rolled down her cheeks.
Corrected text:
She wanted to reach out and hug him, but felt that was very frivolous; she wanted to push Rin away, but she was reluctant to do so. Elise was disappointed at her own clumsiness, and big drops of tears couldn’t help rolling down her cheeks.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:18:44
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She wants to reach out and hug him, but feels that is very frivolous; she wants to push Rin away, but she is reluctant to do it. Elise was disappointed in her own clumsiness, and big drops of tears rolled down her cheeks.
Corrected text:
She wants to reach out and hug him, but feels that is very frivolous; she wants to push Rin away, but she is reluctant to do it. Elise was disappointed at her own clumsiness, and big drops of tears rolled down her cheeks.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-26 18:06:49
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She wants to reach out and hug him, but feels that is very frivolous; she wants to push Rin away, but she is reluctant to do it. Elise was disappointed in her own clumsy, and big drops of tears rolled down her cheeks.
Corrected text:
She wants to reach out and hug him, but feels that is very frivolous; she wants to push Rin away, but she is reluctant to do it. Elise was disappointed in her own clumsiness, and big drops of tears rolled down her cheeks.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 13:00:31
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"Ding, congratulations! My dear master, you actually have the courage to do this kind of heartless thing to a girl, making her feel so sad and disappointed.
Corrected text:
"Ding, congratulations! My dear master, you actually have the courage to do this kind of heartless thing to a girl, making her feel very sad and disappointed.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-22 08:45:07
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You get an inferior replenishment magic skill: you as the scum of the earth, when your magic is used up; can recover a small amount of magic power by touching girls.
Corrected text:
You received an inferior replenishment magic skill: As the scum of the earth, when your magic is used up, you can recover a small amount of magic power by touching girls.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 13:00:43
Original text:
You get an inferior replenishment magic skill: you, as the scum of the earth, when your magic is used up, can recover a small amount of magic power by touching girls.
Corrected text:
You get an inferior replenishment magic skill: you as the scum of the earth, when your magic is used up; can recover a small amount of magic power by touching girls.
Corrected by: hao-farah , 2022-05-04 19:59:57
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You get an inferior replenishment magic skill: as the scum of the earth, you, when your magic is used out, can recover a small amount of magic power by touching girls.
Corrected text:
You get an inferior replenishment magic skill: you, as the scum of the earth, when your magic is used up, can recover a small amount of magic power by touching girls.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-26 18:06:57
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he gritted his teeth, trying hard to move his eyes away from Elise's sad face.
Corrected text:
He gritted his teeth, trying hard to move his eyes away from Elise's sad face.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-25 21:10:19
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"Cry, cry, cry, you just know to cry. I did not mean to do it, and this is also the first time I encountered this situation! Don't let others see the joke, you fragile, disgrace woman!"
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"Cry, cry, cry, you just know to cry. I did not mean to do it, and this is also the first time I encountered this situation! You fragile, disgraceful woman!"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:19:08
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Sigh, if I knew it, I wouldn't go to play that dodgeball, then I will not be punished and will not have to face this scene.
Corrected text:
Sigh, if I knew it, I wouldn't have gone to play that dodgeball, then I would not have been punished and would not have to face this scene.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:19:19
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Taking a deep breath, he took out the red and white handkerchief, wiped haphazardly on Elise's face.
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Taking a deep breath, he took out a red and white handkerchief, wiped haphazardly Elise's face.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 13:00:53
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"You already look unintelligent, and now you look just like a stupid cat, you stupid princess, don't insult the royal majestic!"
Corrected text:
"You already look unintelligent, and now you look just like a stupid cat, you stupid princess, don't insult royal prestige!"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-26 18:07:06
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"You already look unintelligent, and now you look just like a stupid cat, you stupid princess, don't insult the royal majesty!"
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"You already look unintelligent, and now you look just like a stupid cat, you stupid princess, don't insult the royal majestic!"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 13:01:42
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Fortunately, Elise is a kind little angel and quickly forgave him, otherwise, he would now have been blown into crumbs if it was other heroines.
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Fortunately, Elise is a kind little angel and quickly forgave him, otherwise, he would now have been blown into smithereens if it was other heroines.
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