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Edited by: Supriyo-Pal, anonymous, Yozakura-_, Henry, YISKA
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-01 21:18:45
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In the midst of various backward breathing sounds, Rayne finally reacted.
Corrected text:
In the midst of various heavy breathing sounds, Rayne finally reacted.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-01 21:18:45
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He hurriedly stood up, wiped his mouth hard, looked around, and quickly analyzed who exactly was the culprit.
Corrected text:
He hurriedly stood up wiping his mouth hastily, looked around, and quickly analyzed who exactly was the culprit was.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-01 21:18:45
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Rin also did not expect that things would actually come to this point.
Corrected text:
Rin also did not expect that things would come to this point.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-01 21:18:45
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He looked at the protagonist, who was showing a sad expression on his face, and then looked at the man who was still on the ground, and suddenly realized that that man actually had pink hair as well.
Corrected text:
He looked at the protagonist who was showing a sad expression on his face, then looked at the other man who was still on the ground, and suddenly realized that the man coincidentally had pink hair.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 15:12:46
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He looked at the protagonist, who was showing a sad look on his face, and then looked at the man who was still on the ground, and suddenly realized that that man actually had pink hair as well.
Corrected text:
He looked at the protagonist, who was showing a sad expression on his face, and then looked at the man who was still on the ground, and suddenly realized that that man actually had pink hair as well.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 14:48:06
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He looked at the protagonist, who was showing a sad look on his face, and then looked at the man who was still on the ground, and suddenly realized that that man actually had pink hair as well.
Corrected text:
He looked at the protagonist, who was showing a sad expression on his face, and then looked at the man who was still on the ground, and suddenly realized that that man actually had pink hair as well.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-01 21:18:45
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He remembered a character and hooked his finger towards Elise in order to make sure it was correct.
Corrected text:
He remembered a character and proceeded to hook his finger towards Elise in order to make sure he was correct.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-02 08:39:27
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Elise, who was still behind him as a cheerleader, suddenly saw his gesture and ran towards him.
Corrected text:
Elise who was still behind him as a cheerleader, saw his gesture and ran towards him.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-02 08:39:27
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Finding that Rin was actually chatting with a girl and directly ignored him, Rayne felt that he must force Rin Fenix to apologize for his evil deeds.
Corrected text:
Rayne was irritated when Rin was casually chatting with a girl and directly ignored him. Rayne felt that he must force Rin Fenix to apologize for his evil deeds.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-27 17:07:42
Original text:
Finding that Rin was actually chatting with a girl and directly ignored himself, Rayne felt that he must force Rin Fenix apologize for his evil deeds.
Corrected text:
Finding that Rin was actually chatting with a girl and directly ignored him, Rayne felt that he must force Rin Fenix to apologize for his evil deeds.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-02 08:39:27
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"Fenix, you just mistakenly hurt a classmate and act like it's none of your business, is this what the son of a grand duke should do?"
Corrected text:
"Fenix, you mistakenly hurt a classmate and act like it's none of your business, is this what the son of a grand duke should do?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-02 08:39:27
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Rin froze and suddenly remembered that he now should have an opponent play with the protagonist.
Corrected text:
Rin froze and suddenly remembered how he should be the antagonist and play with the protagonist.
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Corrected by: YISKA , 2022-06-27 09:19:49
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So suddenly, he used the French style of showing disgust, which he once learned from his old world.
Corrected text:
So, he used the French style of showing disgust, which he once learned from his old world.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-02 08:39:27
Original text:
So suddenly, he used the French style of showing disgust, which he once learned from somewhere.
Corrected text:
So suddenly, he used the French style of showing disgust, which he once learned from his old world.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-03-29 21:49:40
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"What? Are you teaching me to do things? Low nobility, I heard correctly, right? May I ask you, Classmate Rayne, which part of your body has been hurt? It can't be that you bit your tongue while kissing, right? If so, you should ask Classmate Sherlock for an explanation, right?"
Corrected text:
"What? Did I hear that right? A baron telling me what to do? May I ask you, Classmate Rayne, which part of your body has been hurt? It can't be that you bit your tongue while kissing, right? If so, you should ask Classmate Sherlock for an explanation, right?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 15:00:03
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After saying that, even Rin himself felt that he was too much. As a villain, his mockery level has reached the maximum.
Corrected text:
After saying that, even Rin himself felt that he was too much. As a villain, his mockery level has reached the highest.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-02 08:39:26
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The surrounding people were desperately trying to hold back their smiles. Some people wanted to comfort Rayne, but did not know what to say.
Corrected text:
The surrounding people were desperately trying to hold back their laughter. Some people wanted to comfort Rayne, but did not know what to say.
Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-27 17:07:50
Original text:
The surrounding people were desperately trying to hold back their smiles. Some people wanted to comfort Rayne, but do not know what to say.
Corrected text:
The surrounding people were desperately trying to hold back their smiles. Some people wanted to comfort Rayne, but did not know what to say.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-02 08:39:27
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Rayne stared at the "smug" Rin with disgust and suddenly stepped forward and said seriously, "Classmate Fenix, you should learn how to respect people."
Corrected text:
Rayne stared at the "smug" Rin with disgust and suddenly stepped forward and said piercingly, "Classmate Fenix, you should learn how to respect people."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-02 08:39:27
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Rin secretly spat out his tongue, thinking that he had really been lectured, but it was not his fault, it was the fault of his sister and the world.
Corrected text:
Rin secretly spat out his tongue, thinking that he had really been wronged. It was not his fault, it was the fault of his sister and the world.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:21
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"Do you want me to apologize? That's impossible. If you want to teach me how to respect people, then come on, let's duel for it. Oh, I forgot you are an alchemist, I wonder how good an alchemist's combat power is?"
Corrected text:
"Do you want me to apologize? That's impossible. If you really want to teach me how to respect to people, then you'll have to make me by duelling me. Oh I forgot, you are an alchemist, I wonder how good an alchemist's combat power is?"
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:20
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Elise shook her head and said in a dignified and gracious manner, "Thank you, but I can cast a holy light shield on myself, you can't hurt me. And I can save the wounded in time once any of you are hurt."
Corrected text:
Elise shook her head and said in a dignified and gracious manner, "Thank you, but I can cast holy light shield magic on myself, therefore, you can't hurt me. Not to mention, I can save the wounded in time once any of you are hurt."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:20
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As Rin's fiancée, she could not interfere with what her fiancé was doing, but she would choose to stand behind Rin.
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As Rin's fiancée, she could not interfere with what her fiancé was doing, even so she would choose to stand behind Rin.
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Corrected by: Yozakura-_ , 2022-03-30 08:43:03
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How such a villain deserves such a good girl!
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How does a vile villain like him deserve such a good girl!
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:21
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Rin, on the contrary, didn't really care about it and didn't ask Elise to walk away.
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Rin on the contrary, didn't really care about what Rayne said and didn't ask Elise to walk away.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:21
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So, after scolding Christo who was still holding his head in fear, Rin and Rayne stood respectively at the two ends.
Corrected text:
Hence, after scolding Christo who was still holding his head in fear, Rin and Rayne stood respectively at the two ends.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-06-01 21:19:33
Original text:
So, after scolding Christo who was still turning his head away, Rin and Rayne stood respectively at the two ends.
Corrected text:
So, after scolding Christo who was still holding his head in fear, Rin and Rayne stood respectively at the two ends.
Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 15:00:12
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So, after scolding Christo who was still holding his head away, Rin and Rayne stood respectively at the two ends.
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So, after scolding Christo who was still turning his head away, Rin and Rayne stood respectively at the two ends.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 15:00:20
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She overtrained last night, missed dinner, and missed the evening snack later. Because she passed out from hunger last night, she also missed breakfast.
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She overtrained last night, missed dinner, and later missed her evening snack. Because she passed out from hunger last night, she also missed breakfast.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 15:00:35
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She was already a crippled Hero and only knew to meow.
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She was now a crippled Hero, who only knew how to meow.
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-06-05 21:48:22
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In a trance, she looked up, seeing a large chicken leg standing there, making a welcome gesture to her, so she floated over like a ghost.
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In a trance she looked up, seeing a large chicken leg standing there, making a welcome gesture to her, so she floated over like a ghost.
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-27 17:07:58
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Coincidentally, Sherlock just got up and saw someone falling from mid-air, subconsciously opened his hand and caught Rayne steadily in an arms-carry position.
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Coincidentally, Sherlock just got up and saw someone falling from mid-air, subconsciously opened his hand and caught Rayne steadily in an princess-carry position.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-15 10:53:52
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Until Rin saw Emilia, who had put away her sword and stared at him with a green light in her eyes, approaching towards himself, he was so scared that he took two steps back.
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Until Rin saw Emilia, who had put away her sword and stared at him with a green light in her eyes, approaching him, he was so scared that he took two steps back.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-31 19:13:51
Original text:
"Yikes!"
Corrected text:
"Kyyya!!"
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-27 17:08:05
Original text:
Elise was shocked and hurriedly covered the hem of her skirt and took a step back, so that Rin could see the sky.
Corrected text:
Elise was shocked and hurriedly covered the hem of her skirt and took a step back, so Rin could only see the sky.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-05-31 19:13:56
Original text:
Forced to endure the pain of being bitten, Rin still looked at Elise, who was so shameful that looked like she was going to cry out at any time. He tried his best to apologize.
Corrected text:
Forced to endure the pain of being bitten, Rin still looked at Elise, who looked to be in soo much shame that looked like she was going to cry out at any time. He tried his best to apologize.
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Corrected by: Supriyo-Pal , 2022-03-27 17:08:11
Original text:
"Replace the verification formula again."
Corrected text:
"Replacing the verification formula again."
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Corrected by: Henry , 2022-05-22 15:00:40
Original text:
"Ding, the process was interfered with by a strange power. The male protagonist's script failed, but congratulations, my dear master! You were still beaten hard by the heroine and bowing your head to apologize.
Corrected text:
"Ding, the process was interfered with by a strange power. The male protagonist's script failed, but congratulations, my dear master! You were still abused and beaten hard by the heroine, bowing your head in submission.
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