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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-02-01 07:46:17
Original text:
In the coast.
Corrected text:
On the coast.
Corrected by: Yatish-Reddy-Yanamala , 2023-02-01 04:02:23
Original text:
Coastal areas.
Corrected text:
On the coast.
Corrected by: Yatish-Reddy-Yanamala , 2023-02-01 04:02:20
Original text:
Coastal areas.
Corrected text:
In the coast.
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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-02-01 07:46:56
Original text:
Flying Fog was like a knife on this high mountain.
Corrected text:
Flying Fog was like a knife on these high mountains.
Corrected by: Yatish-Reddy-Yanamala , 2023-02-01 04:02:56
Original text:
Flying Fog was on this high mountain like a knife.
Corrected text:
Flying Fog was like a knife on this high mountain.
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Corrected by: Yatish-Reddy-Yanamala , 2023-02-01 04:03:13
Original text:
Beyond the mountains and rocks, leaving the sea reflecting the golden light behind, entering the endless sea of clouds, Bai Lian came to the top of the mountains.
Corrected text:
Beyond the mountains and rocks, leaving the sea reflecting the golden light behind, and entering the endless sea of clouds, Bai Lian came to the top of the mountains.
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Corrected by: Yatish-Reddy-Yanamala , 2023-02-01 04:04:03
Original text:
At this time, the jade rabbit jumped in front of an inconspicuous stone.
Corrected text:
The jade rabbit jumped in front of an inconspicuous stone.
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Corrected by: Yatish-Reddy-Yanamala , 2023-02-01 04:03:39
Original text:
After twisting the stone to a special position, a translucent golden light column rose to the sky.
Corrected text:
After moving the stone to a special position, a translucent golden light column rose to the sky.
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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-02-01 07:48:04
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A floating island floating on the sky appeared out of thin air, with stone steps winding down and finally staying in front of Bai Lian.
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An island floating in the sky appeared out of thin air, with stone steps winding down and finally ending in front of Bai Lian.
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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-02-01 07:48:14
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Two flower demons ran up excitedly.
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The two flower demons ran up excitedly.
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Corrected by: Yatish-Reddy-Yanamala , 2023-02-01 04:05:17
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Maybe it was because of the fear of returning to its hometown or other emotions. the jade rabbit walked to Bai Lian's feet, jumped up and firmly hung on Bai Lian's calf.
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Maybe it was because of the fear of returning to its hometown, the jade rabbit walked to Bai Lian's feet, jumped up, and firmly hung onto Bai Lian's calf.
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Corrected by: Yatish-Reddy-Yanamala , 2023-02-01 04:05:38
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She gently touched the jade rabbit's plush back and said in a gentle voice, "If your mother scolds you, I'll stand in front of you!"
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She gently touched the jade rabbit's plush back and said in a gentle voice, "If your mother scolds you, I'll stand in front for you!"
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Corrected by: kolv , 2023-05-07 11:55:13
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the jade rabbit wriggled uneasily.
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The jade rabbit wriggled uneasily.
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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-05-27 07:36:34
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Why did I suddenly have a wonderful feeling of meeting the lover's parents?
Corrected text:
Why do I suddenly feel like I'm meeting my lover's parents?
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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-05-27 07:36:52
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Something's wrong with her!
Corrected text:
Something's wrong with me!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-31 18:47:34
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Her level on Array was not high, but she could also see that Flying Fog was raised by an extremely complex magic array.
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Her skill with Arrays was not high, but she could see that Flying Fog had an extremely complex magic array.
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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-02-01 07:50:58
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The demons living on Flying Fog must be strong. She must be more careful.
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The demons living on Flying Fog must be strong. She would have to be more careful.
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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-02-01 07:51:35
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Bai Lian felt that she was walking on the red carpet.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian felt like she was walking on the red carpet.
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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-02-01 07:53:15
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She saw a flower as big as a buffalo standing beside the road, making a abnormal sound of wheezing, and viscous liquid like lubricating liquid flowed out of the flower stamens.
Corrected text:
She saw a flower as big as a buffalo standing beside the road, making an abnormal wheezing sound, and a viscous liquid like lubricating liquid flowed out of the flower's stamens.
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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-02-01 07:54:07
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She also saw a powerful tiger demon beside the road. It wore silver armor which protected its abdomen well.
Corrected text:
She also saw a powerful tiger demon beside the road. It wore silver armor, which especially protected it's abdomen.
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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-02-01 07:54:56
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Flying Fog was the Flying Fog of the Yaoguang Rabbit family, but Yaoguang Rabbits was not the only race living here.
Corrected text:
Flying Fog belonged to the Yaoguang Rabbit family, but they were not the only race living here.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-31 18:47:00
Original text:
Flying Fog was the Flying Fog of the Yaoguang Rabbit family, but Yaoguang Rabbit was not the only race living here.
Corrected text:
Flying Fog was the Flying Fog of the Yaoguang Rabbit family, but Yaoguang Rabbits was not the only race living here.
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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-02-01 07:55:52
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This kind Yaoguang Rabbit didn't commit evil after having strong strength. It pitied those weak demonic beasts and let them live together with it on Flying Fog.
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This kind Yaoguang Rabbit didn't commit evil after gaining its strength. It pitied those weak demonic beasts and let them live together with it on Flying Fog.
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Corrected by: kolv , 2023-05-07 11:56:12
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the jade rabbit seemed not to be aware of all this.
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The jade rabbit seemed not to be aware of all this.
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Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:57:54
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But even if it was as gorgeous as the Moon Palace, she was afraid it would be covered by the glory of the "Girl" sitting on the chair.
Corrected text:
But even if it was as gorgeous as the Moon Palace, she was afraid it would be covered by the glory of the "girl" sitting on the chair.
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Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:57:45
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The "Girl" dressed in a moon white robe was like a fairy walking out of the Moon Palace.
Corrected text:
The "girl" dressed in a moon white robe was like a fairy walking out of the Moon Palace.
Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-05-27 07:44:55
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The "Girl" dressed in the moon white robe was like a fairy walking out of the Moon Palace.
Corrected text:
The "Girl" dressed in a moon white robe was like a fairy walking out of the Moon Palace.
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Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-05-27 07:45:34
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The eyes were bright as if there were moonlight reflecting inside.
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Her eyes were bright as if they were reflecting moonlight inside.
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Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:57:34
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Who would have thought that such a beautiful "Girl" was already the mother of several rabbits?
Corrected text:
Who would have thought that such a beautiful "girl" was already the mother of several rabbits?
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Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:57:20
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"Great!" Before Bai Lian said hello, the "Girl" stood up angrily from the chair. "You finally remember that this is your home, hum?"
Corrected text:
"Great!" Before Bai Lian said hello, the "girl" stood up angrily from the chair. "You finally remember that this is your home, hum?"
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Corrected by: kolv , 2023-05-07 11:56:38
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the jade rabbit's ears moved, and it chirped at its mother discontentedly.
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The jade rabbit's ears moved, and it chirped at its mother discontentedly.
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Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:57:08
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Bai Lian quickly stepped forward and stopped the "War" that was about to explode.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian quickly stepped forward and stopped the "war" that was about to explode.
Corrected by: typ1730 , 2023-05-27 07:46:24
Original text:
Bai Lian quickly stepped forward and stopped a "War" that was about to explode.
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Bai Lian quickly stepped forward and stopped the "War" that was about to explode.
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Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:55:24
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At any rate, the jade rabbit's mother was also "King". Even if she was angry with the jade rabbit, as long as the jade rabbit took the lead in admitting her mistake, she would not lose her manners in front of Bai Lian, who was an outsider.
Corrected text:
At any rate, the jade rabbit's mother was also a leader. Even if she was angry with the jade rabbit, as long as the jade rabbit took the lead in admitting her mistake, she would not lose her manners in front of Bai Lian, who was an outsider.
Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:55:21
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At any rate, the jade rabbit's mother was also "King". Even if she was angry with the jade rabbit, as long as the jade rabbit took the lead in admitting her mistake, she would not lose her manners in front of Bai Lian, who was an outsider.
Corrected text:
At any rate, the jade rabbit's mother was also a leader. Even if she was angry with the jade rabbit, as long as the jade rabbit took the lead in admitting her mistake, she would not lose her manners in front of Bai Lian, who was an outsider.
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Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:56:48
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The "Young girl" turned her head aside.
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The "young girl" turned her head to the side.
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Corrected by: kolv , 2023-05-07 11:57:03
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the jade rabbit hesitated.
Corrected text:
The jade rabbit hesitated.
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Corrected by: Vedran-Jordanov , 2023-05-16 09:05:31
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However, after half a day of staring at Bai Lian, it still gave in.
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However, after a long moment of staring at Bai Lian, it still gave in.
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Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:56:21
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At that moment, Bai Lian saw the body of the "Girl" freeze.
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At that moment, Bai Lian saw the body of the "girl" freeze.
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Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:56:10
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Accidents always happened so suddenly. Bai Lian smiled.
Corrected text:
Accidents always happen so suddenly. Bai Lian smiled.
Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:56:10
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Accidents always happened so suddenly. Bai Lian smiled.
Corrected text:
Accidents always happen so suddenly. Bai Lian smiled.
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Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:58:13
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Then she saw the astonished look on the face of the "Girl". She pointed at the jade rabbit and her index finger trembled.
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Then she saw the astonished look on the face of the "girl". She pointed at the jade rabbit and her index finger trembled.
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Corrected by: kolv , 2023-05-07 11:57:23
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the jade rabbit nodded.
Corrected text:
The jade rabbit nodded.
Corrected by: kolv , 2023-05-07 11:57:22
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the jade rabbit nodded.
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The jade rabbit nodded.
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Corrected by: Nyanko-UwU , 2023-08-18 07:58:38
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the jade rabbit really said it!
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The jade rabbit really said it!
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