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Corrected by: Glariosa , 2022-09-06 10:55:53
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Bai Lian doesn't believe that the most dangerous place would be the safest place.
Corrected text:
Bai Lian didn't believe that the most dangerous place would be the safest place.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:11:59
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She planned to rent a room in an inn far away. Fortunately, this season is not the peak season for exploring relics, so she doesn't have to worry about whether the inn will be empty.
Corrected text:
She planned to rent a room in an inn far away. Fortunately, this was not the peak season to explore for relics, so she didn't have to worry whether the inn would be empty.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-03-01 08:37:59
Original text:
She plans to rent a room in the inn far away. Fortunately, this season is not the peak season for exploring relics, so she doesn't have to worry about whether the inn will be empty.
Corrected text:
She planned to rent a room in an inn far away. Fortunately, this season is not the peak season for exploring relics, so she doesn't have to worry about whether the inn will be empty.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:12:34
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Of course, she wouldn't go to the wild.
Corrected text:
Of course, she wouldn't go to the wilds.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:13:11
Original text:
Who knows if there is a demon beast hidden in the sand?
Corrected text:
Who knew if there was a demon beast hidden in the sand?
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:13:41
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And that kind of place has a wide view, so it is not suitable for hiding.
Corrected text:
And that kind of place had a wide view, so it was not suitable for hiding.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:15:27
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In the city, there are many cultivators. It's reasonable for me to cover up my identity with a magic trick in my spare time, isn't it?
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There are many cultivators in the city. It's reasonable for me to cover up my identity with a magic trick as a hobby, isn't it?
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:16:47
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They might be going to do bad things.
Corrected text:
They might be off to commit bad things.
Corrected by: Junaavicii , 2022-09-06 06:17:02
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There might be going to do bad things.
Corrected text:
They might be going to do bad things.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:17:56
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In the Sand Region, this is not unusual, so Bai Lian doesn't care too much.
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In the Sand Region, this was not unusual, so Bai Lian didn't care too much.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:18:33
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[Task 1: walk in with Su Youwei (Reward: a Spirit Herb - Ice Jade Vine)]
Corrected text:
[Task 1: Walk in with Su Youwei (Reward: a Spirit Herb - Ice Jade Vine)]
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:18:54
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[Task 2: go in alone (Reward: Cooking +1)]
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[Task 2: Go in alone (Reward: Cooking +1)]
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:19:43
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She didn't plan to bring Su Youwei into the inn. After all, the third Martial Sister is the daughter of the Su family. The innkeeper is very likely to know her.
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She didn't plan to bring Su Youwei into the inn. After all, the third Martial Sister was the daughter of the Su family. The innkeeper was very likely to recognize her.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:20:25
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It can also be seen from the task reward that as soon as Su Youwei shows up, the innkeeper will report to the Su family or Red Moon Sect.
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It could also be seen from the task reward that as soon as Su Youwei showed up, the innkeeper would report to the Su family or Red Moon Sect.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:21:17
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She doesn't quite understand why Bai Lian brought her to the inn. Because there is a bed inside? Is it more comfortable?
Corrected text:
She didn't quite understand why Bai Lian brought her to the inn. Because there was a bed inside? Was it more comfortable?
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:21:38
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Anyway, she can't feel comfortable.
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Anyway, she couldn't feel comfortable.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:22:17
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She only hopes that Bai Lian can bring the fifth elder and her aunt out as soon as possible.
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She only hoped that Bai Lian could bring the fifth elder and her aunt out as soon as possible.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:23:58
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A moment later, Bai Lian jumped out of the window of the hotel room and brought Su Youwei and the jade rabbit in.
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A moment later, Bai Lian jumped out of the window of the inn room and brought Su Youwei and the jade rabbit in.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-09 11:10:45
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take a shower?
Corrected text:
A bath?
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:25:16
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She really deserves to be the famous Martial Sister Bai Lian of the Qiongming peak. Unexpectedly, she is very particular about this aspect.
Corrected text:
She really deserved to be the famous Martial Sister Bai Lian of Qiongming Peak. Unexpectedly, she was very particular about this aspect.
Corrected by: Toffi-coffe , 2023-01-06 06:22:34
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It really deserves to be the famous Martial Sister Bai Lian of the Qiongming peak. Unexpectedly, she is very particular about this aspect.
Corrected text:
She really deserves to be the famous Martial Sister Bai Lian of the Qiongming peak. Unexpectedly, she is very particular about this aspect.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:26:47
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Bai Lian pointed to the bucket and said, "I thought you looked nervous and sweated a little. Take a bath to relax. Well, this dress can't be worn. It's too conspicuous. I'll change a new set of clothes for you."
Corrected text:
Bai Lian pointed to the bucket and said, "I thought you looked nervous and sweated a little. Take a bath to relax. Well, this dress can't be worn. It's too conspicuous. I'll prepare a new set of clothes for you."
Corrected by: 5798cool , 2022-09-15 15:43:00
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Bai Lian pointed to the bucket and said, "I think you looked nervous and sweated a little. Take a bath to relax. Well, this dress can't be worn. It's too conspicuous. I'll change a new set of clothes for you."
Corrected text:
Bai Lian pointed to the bucket and said, "I thought you looked nervous and sweated a little. Take a bath to relax. Well, this dress can't be worn. It's too conspicuous. I'll change a new set of clothes for you."
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:27:23
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"I'll be there when you're settled."
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"I'll go when you're settled."
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:28:46
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Su Youwei took off the hairpin on her head, and her snow-like white hair drifted and fell. Even the air seemed to be a little colder.
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Su Youwei took off the hairpin on her head, and her snow white hair drifted and fell. Even the air seemed to be a little colder.
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Corrected by: 5798cool , 2022-09-15 15:43:04
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"I put new clothes on the edge of the barrel. You can change them after you wash your body."
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"I put new clothes on the edge of the barrel. You can change into them after you wash your body."
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:29:35
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Su Youwei looked up. Somehow, Bai Lian had come to the window, turned her back to her, and held a jade slip in her hand.
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Su Youwei looked up. Somehow, Bai Lian had gone to the window, turned her back to her, and held a jade slip in her hand.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-09 11:10:48
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So she's not going to watch me shower?
Corrected text:
So she's not going to watch me bathe?
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:31:13
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Su Youwei was a little confused. After hesitating for a long time, she quickly took off her underclothes, gently moved her slender bare feet into the barrel, and then shrank down.
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Su Youwei was a little confused. After hesitating for a long time, she quickly took off her underclothes, gently moved her slender bare feet into the barrel, and then sank down.
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-11-23 14:26:35
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Su Youwei was a little confused. After hesitating for a long time, she quickly took off her intimate clothes, gently moved her slender bare feet into the barrel, and then shrank down.
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Su Youwei was a little confused. After hesitating for a long time, she quickly took off her underclothes, gently moved her slender bare feet into the barrel, and then shrank down.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:33:23
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At this time, the advantage of the petite figure is reflected. Unless you stand beside the barrel, you can't see her at all.
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At this time, the advantage of a petite figure reflected. Unless you stood beside the barrel, you couldn't see her at all.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:34:15
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With her strength, it's very easy to use a spell to clean the third Martial Sister's body. But if she deliberately let the third Martial Sister bathe in a barrel, maybe the system would publish new tasks and let her earn some skill points?
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With her strength, it was very easy to use a spell to clean the third Martial Sister's body. But if she deliberately let the third Martial Sister bathe in a barrel, maybe the system would publish new tasks and let her earn some skill points?
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:56:53
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What clearly appeared in front of her were only cold words. Why did she feel a little chill at the bottom of her heart? Was it because the night in the desert was cold?
Corrected text:
What clearly appeared in front of her were only cold words. Why did she feel a little chill at the bottom of her heart? Was it because of the cold desert night?
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Corrected by: 5798cool , 2022-09-15 15:43:08
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Bai Lian carefully replied: [I just arrived in Gray Wind Town today and haven't seen the third Martial Sister. I think her beauty should be inferior to you.]
Corrected text:
Bai Lian carefully replied: [I just arrived in Gray Wind Town today and haven't seen the third Martial Sister. I think her beauty should be inferior to yours.]
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:57:32
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She has not received any new messages for a long time.
Corrected text:
She did not received any new messages for a long time.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 04:58:24
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Xiao Jinse: [I'm not as good as you said! The Qiongming peak will be lively when the third Martial Sister comes.]
Corrected text:
Xiao Jinse: [I'm not as good as you said! Qiongming Peak will be lively when the third Martial Sister comes.]
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-09 11:10:55
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The conversation between Su Youwei and Xiao Jinse didn't end until she took a bath and put on the inferior magic tool "Green Lotus Clothes".
Corrected text:
The conversation between Bai Lian and Xiao Jinse didn't end until Su Youwei finished her bath and put on the inferior magic tool "Green Lotus Clothes".
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-09 11:10:51
Original text:
The conversation between Su Youwei and Xiao Jinse didn't end until she took a bath and put on the inferior magic tool "Green Lotus Clothes".
Corrected text:
The conversation between Bai Lian and Xiao Jinse didn't end until Su Youwei finished her bath and put on the inferior magic tool "Green Lotus Clothes".
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-06 10:57:09
Original text:
"Ah, sweating!?"
Corrected text:
"Ah, seriously!?"
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-06 10:57:06
Original text:
"Ah, sweating!?"
Corrected text:
"Ah, seriously!?"
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 05:00:00
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It's a pity that she only got 1 Hard Skill.
Corrected text:
It was a pity that she only got 1 Hard Skill.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 05:00:47
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She thought Bai Lian would do something when she was taking a bath, at least she would stare at her with eager eyes.
Corrected text:
She thought Bai Lian would do something when she was taking a bath, or at least stare at her with eager eyes.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 05:01:29
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As a result, Bai Lian sat by the window with a jade slip in her hands for almost a quarter of an hour, like a wooden puppet.
Corrected text:
In the end, Bai Lian sat by the window with a jade slip in her hands for almost a quarter of an hour, like a wooden puppet.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 05:02:36
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Did she think too much? In fact, is her body not attractive to Bai Lian at all?
Corrected text:
Did she think too much? Was her body, in fact, not attractive to Bai Lian at all?
Corrected by: anonymous , 2023-01-10 09:51:42
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Did she think too much? In fact, her body is not attractive to Bai Lian at all?
Corrected text:
Did she think too much? In fact, is her body not attractive to Bai Lian at all?
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 05:04:40
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The cloth of this new dress is much more than the one she wore before, and it is an inferior magic tool!
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The fabric of this new dress was much better than the one she wore before, and it is an inferior magic tool!
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 05:06:05
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Thinking about it, Su Youwei found that Bai Lian moved.
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As she was thinking this, Su Youwei noticed Bai Lian had moved.
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-09 11:10:58
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"Light, light."
Corrected text:
"G-gently..."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-09 11:11:00
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Without Ten Thousand Poison Pearl, she would have nothing.
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Without the Ten Thousand Poison Pearl, she would have nothing.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 05:13:51
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But after a long time, there was still nothing happened.
Corrected text:
But after a long time, still, nothing happened.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 05:14:48
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She secretly opened her eyes and found Bai Lian looking at herself with strange eyes.
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She secretly opened her eyes and found Bai Lian looking strangely at her.
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 05:15:29
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"No, No."
Corrected text:
"No, no."
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Corrected by: Diana-A. , 2024-02-26 05:18:42
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"Oh, that's good. I'm not good at medicine. I was afraid I would make things worse. Since it's all right, you can rest here, I'll pick up your relatives."
Corrected text:
"Oh, that's good. I'm not good at medicine. I'm afraid I would make it worse. Since it's all right, you can rest here, I'll pick up your relatives."
Corrected by: Alice-Hiess , 2023-01-15 07:03:38
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"Oh, that's good. I'm not good at medicine. I was afraid I would make things worst. Since it's all right, you can rest here. I'll pick up your relatives."
Corrected text:
"Oh, that's good. I'm not good at medicine. I was afraid I would make things worse. Since it's all right, you can rest here, I'll pick up your relatives."
Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-09 11:11:03
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"Oh, that's good. I'm not good at medicine. I'm afraid I'll treat you worse. Since it's all right, you can rest here. I'll pick up your relatives."
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"Oh, that's good. I'm not good at medicine. I was afraid I would make things worst. Since it's all right, you can rest here. I'll pick up your relatives."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-09 11:11:10
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Bai Lian said, "I am chatting with my second Martial Sister, that is, your second Elder Martial Sister."
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Bai Lian said, "I was chatting with my second Martial Sister, that is, your second Elder Martial Sister."
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-09-09 11:11:13
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Su Youwei pondered, and Bai Lian had left.
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Su Youwei pondered as Bai Lian left.
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