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Corrected by: 5798cool , 2022-10-15 11:55:46
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This is an action that she has dreamed for countless times but dare not take action!
Corrected text:
This is an action that she has dreamed of countless times but dare not do!
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Corrected by: premphiti18 , 2022-12-31 05:10:34
Original text:
Alas, I don't know how it feels. Will it be as smooth as milk?
Corrected text:
Alas, I don't know how it feels. Will it be as smooth as silk?
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-17 08:46:59
Original text:
Damn it! I just kick the third Martial Sister out!
Corrected text:
Damn it! I must kick the third Martial Sister out!
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-17 08:47:01
Original text:
An Lan standing outside the window was not in any better condition.
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An Lan, who was standing outside the window, was not in any better condition.
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Corrected by: QuadraticAmoeba , 2022-12-11 05:45:40
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The ancient tree outside the window was directly cut in two by her leaked spirit Qi.
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The ancient tree outside the window was directly cut in two just by the spirit Qi she leaked!
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Corrected by: QuadraticAmoeba , 2022-12-11 05:46:31
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Maybe the two younger Martial Sisters would fight on the spot, or the third younger Martial Sister held a grudge against it, and cut off her foot with a knife in the future!
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Maybe the two younger Martial Sisters would fight on the spot, or the third younger Martial Sister would hold a grudge against this, and cut off her foot with a knife in the future!
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Corrected by: QuadraticAmoeba , 2022-12-11 05:47:20
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Although the third Martial Sister made a big mistake, she didn't commit the crime to death!
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Although the third Martial Sister made a big mistake, she didn't commit a crime deserving death!
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Corrected by: QuadraticAmoeba , 2022-12-11 05:48:47
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The Dirt Free Sword dragged the cold spray, and sometimes there was a flash of lightning passing, which really had the charm of "Coming like thunder, stopping like the river and the sea".
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The Dirt Free Sword was followed by a cold spray, and sometimes there was a flash of lightning passing by, which really had the charm of "Coming like thunder, stopping like the river and the sea".
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-17 08:47:19
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To Bai Lian's surprise, An Lan didn't scold her, but asked casually, "Are you used to this new Dirt Free Sword?"
Corrected text:
To Bai Lian's surprise, An Lan didn't scold her, but asked casually, "Have you attuned to the new Dirt Free Sword?"
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Corrected by: anonymous , 2022-10-17 08:47:20
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Bai Lian replied, "Thank you, master. I'm used to it."
Corrected text:
Bai Lian replied, "Thank you, master. I've attuned it."
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She narrowed her eyes slightly and felt that the "Death" word on Bai Lian was gorgeous again.
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She narrowed her eyes slightly and felt that the "Death" aura on Bai Lian was more dense Tonight.
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